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* AstonishinglyAppropriateInterruption: Sierra is about to finish her story, saying it doesn't matter because...but before she finishes, Mirabel bursts in saying that Camilo won't wake up.
* NoodleIncident: Sierra describes an unclear event that made her starting carrying a hair tie everywhere she goes.
* NoodleIncident: Sierra describes an unclear event that made her starting carrying a hair tie everywhere she goes.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42983046/chapters/107996034 The Wrath of Avelina]]'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' fanfic penned by Creator/NoonboryKedabory, which began publication on November 10th, 2022 via Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. On December 16th, a sequel titled [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/43644843/chapters/109744824 When Hope Goes Against Vengeance]]'' was released.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42983046/chapters/107996034 The Wrath of Avelina]]'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' fanfic penned by Creator/NoonboryKedabory, which began publication on November 10th, 2022 via Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. On December 16th, a sequel titled [[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/43644843/chapters/109744824 When Hope Goes Against Vengeance]]'' was released.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42983046/chapters/107996034 The Wrath of Avelina]]'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' fanfic penned by Creator/NoonboryKedabory, which began publication on November 10th, 2022 via Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. On December 16th, a sequel titled [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/43644843/chapters/109744824 When Hope Goes Against Vengeance]]'' was released.
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* PainToTheAss: In the prologue, Pepa accidentally strikes herself in the butt with her own lightning.
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* TheStinger: In the end note of Chapter 3, JustForFun/StatlerAndWaldorf appear to make their thoughts known:
--> '''Waldorf''': Do you believe in illness curses?\\
'''Statler''': If I wanted to get sick from Miss Kedabory, I'd read [[OldShame her stuff from middle school!]]
--> '''Waldorf''': Do you believe in illness curses?\\
'''Statler''': If I wanted to get sick from Miss Kedabory, I'd read [[OldShame her stuff from middle school!]]
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* UnPerson: In Chapter 7, Avelina claims there are sixteen Madrigals. There are actually ''nine''teen; she purposefully left out Stefanie, Sierra, and Sabrina.[[note]]For those wanting a count, here's the list from oldest to youngest; 1. Alma, 2. Félix, 3. Julieta, 4. Pepa, 5. Bruno, 6. Agustín, 7. Mariano, 8. Isabela, 9. Dolores, 10. Luisa, 11. Stefanie, 12. Camilo, 13. Mirabel, 14. Sierra, 15. Sabrina, 16. Antonio, 17. Padma, 18. Benito, 19. Juana[[/note]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Avelina has no qualms with cursing Dolores' baby triplets.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Avelina has no qualms with cursing Dolores' baby triplets. However, she never gets to do it.
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* ShoutOut: When Stefanie designates Mirabel as "Queen Bee", she gives her [[Film/{{Heathers}} a red scrunchy]].
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* AndThisIsFor: "That's for cursing my husband."
* BroughtDownToNormal: [[spoiler:Avelina + Charging up a super curse + Lightning = Losing the curse.]]
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* DwindlingParty: More and more Madrigals become cursed as the story continues; first Julieta, then Isabela, then Camilo, then Bruno.
* {{Fainting}}: Julieta; the first curse victim, faints into Agustin's arms. Isabela followed suit when she gets cursed as well.
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* DwindlingParty: More and more Madrigals become cursed as the story continues; first Julieta, then Isabela, then Camilo, then Bruno.
Bruno, then Mariano, then Pepa, then Felix and Agustin, and finally Luisa and Stefanie.
* EngineeredPublicConfession: Casita gives Dolores a little miracle in the form of sound bubbles that she spreads all over town, letting everyone in the village know what Avelina did.
* EvenBadWomenLoveTheirMamas: And their papas; part of Avelina's rage towards the Madrigals is because she accidentally cursed her own parents.
* {{Fainting}}:Julieta; Julieta, the first curse victim, faints into Agustin's arms. Isabela followed suit when she gets cursed as well.well.
* FatalFlaw: Avelina's is selfishness. [[spoiler:Her desire for a Gift of her own led her to try and open one of the doors at Stefanie, Sierra, and Sabrina's ceremony, which instead led to her being given a curse.]]
* EngineeredPublicConfession: Casita gives Dolores a little miracle in the form of sound bubbles that she spreads all over town, letting everyone in the village know what Avelina did.
* EvenBadWomenLoveTheirMamas: And their papas; part of Avelina's rage towards the Madrigals is because she accidentally cursed her own parents.
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* FatalFlaw: Avelina's is selfishness. [[spoiler:Her desire for a Gift of her own led her to try and open one of the doors at Stefanie, Sierra, and Sabrina's ceremony, which instead led to her being given a curse.]]
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Two background kids from the movie are given the names Gabriela[[note]]"Maybe your Gift is being in denial"[[/note]] and Flavio[[note]]mint-green ruana[[/note]].
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Two Several background kids from the movie characters are given the names Gabriela[[note]]"Maybe names.
** Man covered in cacti waiting for one of Julieta's bunuelos = Javier Vivares
** "Maybe your Gift is being indenial"[[/note]] denial" kid = Gabriela Sanchez
** Kids trying to climb the stairs at Antonio's ceremony = Lorena andFlavio[[note]]mint-green ruana[[/note]].Braulio
* NeverMyFault: Avelina blames the Madrigals for her curse, even though she [[spoiler:brought it on herself for trying to take one of the Sisters' Gifts]].
** Man covered in cacti waiting for one of Julieta's bunuelos = Javier Vivares
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** Kids trying to climb the stairs at Antonio's ceremony = Lorena and
* NeverMyFault: Avelina blames the Madrigals for her curse, even though she [[spoiler:brought it on herself for trying to take one of the Sisters' Gifts]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Avelina has no qualms with cursing Dolores' baby triplets.
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* MeaningfulName: Sra. Pezmuerto's fish is named Decimita, or "little Decima". The name "Decima" means "ten", implying this is the tenth fish Pezmuerto is on.
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* AffectionateNickname: Bruno refers to Stefanie as "mariposa".
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** Some characters refer to Julieta as "Juli"."Juli", and to Stefanie as "Estefanía".
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* NightmareSequence: Chapter 5 begins with Sierra having a nightmare where Casita crumbles, all her family is dead, and Avelina comes to curse her.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42983046/chapters/107996034 The Wrath of Avelina]]'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' fanfic penned by Creator/NoonboryKedabory, which began publication on November 10th, 2022 via Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
It tells of the Madrigal family suddenly being targeting by an angry young woman with a strange curse.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: After Avelina curses Camilo, she steps on his foot on purpose while fleeing.
* AntagonistTitle: Avelina is the antagonist of ''The Wrath of Avelina''.
* BigBad: While ''Encanto'' didn't have one, this fic does in the form of Avelina, who is putting curses on the Madrigals.
* ChoreCharacterExploration: Stefanie opens up a bit to Alma about missing her mother while cooking breakfast.
* DeathGlare:
** Avelina gives Mirabel one while she is bringing an ailing Isabela home.
** Dante gives Avelina one when she acts rude to him.
* DwindlingParty: More and more Madrigals become cursed as the story continues; first Julieta, then Isabela, then Camilo, then Bruno.
* {{Fainting}}: Julieta; the first curse victim, faints into Agustin's arms. Isabela followed suit when she gets cursed as well.
* GreenEyedMonster: The first chapter notes Avelina's extreme jealousy of the Madrigals, and she later mentions wishing she had Isabela's Gift.
* InSeriesNickname:
** Avelina is usually referred to by other characters as "Lina".
** Some characters refer to Julieta as "Juli".
* LettingHerHairDown: In Chapter 4, Alma wears her hair down instead of in her usual PrimAndProperBun to appear more approachable and calm.
* MoodWhiplash: In Chapter 2, Isabela joyously celebrates creating a rare plant with Mirabel...then suddenly faints into her arms, having been cursed.
* NamedInTheAdaptation: Two background kids from the movie are given the names Gabriela[[note]]"Maybe your Gift is being in denial"[[/note]] and Flavio[[note]]mint-green ruana[[/note]].
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: "You. Are going. Down."
* SilenceOfSadness: Avelina's parents note that she's been very quiet and gloomy since the most recent Gift ceremony.
* StepfordSmiler: Avelina forces smiles to pretend she likes the Madrigals.
* TemptingFate: Alma tells Antonio that Avelina cannot hurt them while they are at Casita. Immediately after she says this, Bruno gets cursed while still at Casita.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: When Bruno's vision reveals to the Madrigals that Avelina is behind the curses, Agustin notes that he used to watch her playing when Luisa was a child, and is shocked she would do such a thing.
* VisualPun: Bruno says the thought that some''one'' is behind the illnesses is eating him up like a rat nibbling his ear. Luisa then points out that Queso the rat is literally nibbling on his ear.
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It tells of the Madrigal family suddenly being targeting by an angry young woman with a strange curse.
!!Tropes:
* AgonyOfTheFeet: After Avelina curses Camilo, she steps on his foot on purpose while fleeing.
* AntagonistTitle: Avelina is the antagonist of ''The Wrath of Avelina''.
* BigBad: While ''Encanto'' didn't have one, this fic does in the form of Avelina, who is putting curses on the Madrigals.
* ChoreCharacterExploration: Stefanie opens up a bit to Alma about missing her mother while cooking breakfast.
* DeathGlare:
** Avelina gives Mirabel one while she is bringing an ailing Isabela home.
** Dante gives Avelina one when she acts rude to him.
* DwindlingParty: More and more Madrigals become cursed as the story continues; first Julieta, then Isabela, then Camilo, then Bruno.
* {{Fainting}}: Julieta; the first curse victim, faints into Agustin's arms. Isabela followed suit when she gets cursed as well.
* GreenEyedMonster: The first chapter notes Avelina's extreme jealousy of the Madrigals, and she later mentions wishing she had Isabela's Gift.
* InSeriesNickname:
** Avelina is usually referred to by other characters as "Lina".
** Some characters refer to Julieta as "Juli".
* LettingHerHairDown: In Chapter 4, Alma wears her hair down instead of in her usual PrimAndProperBun to appear more approachable and calm.
* MoodWhiplash: In Chapter 2, Isabela joyously celebrates creating a rare plant with Mirabel...then suddenly faints into her arms, having been cursed.
* NamedInTheAdaptation: Two background kids from the movie are given the names Gabriela[[note]]"Maybe your Gift is being in denial"[[/note]] and Flavio[[note]]mint-green ruana[[/note]].
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: "You. Are going. Down."
* SilenceOfSadness: Avelina's parents note that she's been very quiet and gloomy since the most recent Gift ceremony.
* StepfordSmiler: Avelina forces smiles to pretend she likes the Madrigals.
* TemptingFate: Alma tells Antonio that Avelina cannot hurt them while they are at Casita. Immediately after she says this, Bruno gets cursed while still at Casita.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: When Bruno's vision reveals to the Madrigals that Avelina is behind the curses, Agustin notes that he used to watch her playing when Luisa was a child, and is shocked she would do such a thing.
* VisualPun: Bruno says the thought that some''one'' is behind the illnesses is eating him up like a rat nibbling his ear. Luisa then points out that Queso the rat is literally nibbling on his ear.
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