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"Blow up a sun" is about people reminding characters of their coolest accomplishments. Nobody reminds Taylor of golden morning deliberately, and nobody thinks she's cool for it. So I'm moving THAT example to Dark and Toubled Past, and also adding some tropes while I'm at it.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Taylor recalls being Khepri, and controlling ''everyone'' to save the world. This is extremely traumatic for her, [[spoiler:to the point where she actively tries to convince herself the memories are implanted and fake for years.]]
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* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun: Taylor recalls being Khepri, and controlling ''everyone'' to save the world. This is extremely traumatic for her, [[spoiler:to the point where she actively tries to convince herself the memories are implanted and fake for years.]]
* SnarkyNonHumanSidekick: In classic Star Wars tradition, Rugess the Bith winds up being this for Dennis.
* TheyreCalledPersonalIssuesForAReason: Taylor and Dennis, both having lived through Golden Morning, really don't want to talk about their experiences. Dennis decides to throw himself into his new life of being a slave liberator to cope. Taylor is a little more extreme, not even talking for years [[spoiler:while she tries to convince herself that Skitter and Khepri are implanted memories, not herself.]]
* TheyreCalledPersonalIssuesForAReason: Taylor and Dennis, both having lived through Golden Morning, really don't want to talk about their experiences. Dennis decides to throw himself into his new life of being a slave liberator to cope. Taylor is a little more extreme, not even talking for years [[spoiler:while she tries to convince herself that Skitter and Khepri are implanted memories, not herself.]]
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* WorthyOpponent: Upon meeting Alexandria, Palpatine recognizes her as the first real challenge to his plans, and finds himself smiling at the idea.
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* ReducedToRatburgers: Not literally, but when Glory Girl and Skitter are stranded in a strange forest far from civilisation, and there are no supermarkets available, they have to eat ''something'' to survive.
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* ReducedToRatburgers: Not literally, but when Downplayed. When Glory Girl and Skitter are stranded in a strange forest far from civilisation, and there are no supermarkets available, they have to eat ''something'' to survive.survive. Taylor opts to have her bugs hunt and kill a Minstyngar, which leaves Vicky more than a little disturbed.
---> Her question, or at least one of the many many many questions she had was answered before she could finish voicing the thought as the giant death beetles began to literally carve up the very dead… thing. Vicky wasn't sure what would make her sicker. The sounds, the sight, the smell or the fact that she was, in fact still hungry despite all of that.
---> Her question, or at least one of the many many many questions she had was answered before she could finish voicing the thought as the giant death beetles began to literally carve up the very dead… thing. Vicky wasn't sure what would make her sicker. The sounds, the sight, the smell or the fact that she was, in fact still hungry despite all of that.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Being a crossover, the Worm characters prove to be examples of this to various parties. Their powers are very different from what most people in the galaxy are prepared to encounter, including force-sensitives. This makes them very good at disrupting the established status quo of the galaxy.
** ''Especially'' Glory Girl's "flying brick" power.
** ''Especially'' Glory Girl's "flying brick" power.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Being a crossover, the Worm characters OutsideContextProblem: Parahumans prove to be examples of this to various parties. Their powers are very different from what most people in the galaxy are prepared to encounter, including force-sensitives. force-sensitives, and the jedi high council are unnerved by the shard's 'cold but not dark' force presence. This makes them very good at disrupting the established status quo of the galaxy.
** ''Especially''galaxy, especially with Alexandria and Glory Girl's "flying brick" power.Girl both being [[FlyingBrick Flying Bricks]].
** ''Especially''
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* OffTheRails: Sidious’ plan to turn Dooku to the Sith as in canon, leading to Dooku killing Master Yaddle is derailed by several Jedi Masters, Knights, and Padawans responding to Dooku’s call for help, including Anakin, Taylor, and Vicky, as well as the mercenaries Dooku hired. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, this leads to Sidious realizing that Dooku is a loose end, as he’s already revealed himself as Palpatine to Dooku to attempt to turn him only to fail. He fights Dooku for a while before the other Jedi Masters get to him to rescue him, killing him with Force Lightning using the station’s metal as a conduit just as they reach the battle.]]
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* OffTheRails: The actions of the various parahumans incidentally derail Sidious’ plan to turn Dooku to the Sith as in canon, leading to Dooku killing Master Yaddle is derailed by several Jedi Masters, Knights, and Padawans responding to Dooku’s call for help, including Anakin, Taylor, and Vicky, as well as the mercenaries Dooku hired. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, this leads to Sidious realizing that Dooku is a loose end, as he’s already revealed himself as Palpatine to Dooku to attempt to turn him only to fail. He fights Dooku for a while before the other Jedi Masters get to him to rescue him, killing him with Force Lightning using the station’s metal as a conduit just as they reach the battle.]]
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* BroughtDownToBadass: played with during the space station. On the one hand Taylor has [[spoiler: learned to use the Force]]. On the other hand she's fighting on an airless space station which means no bugs.
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* BroughtDownToBadass: played with Downplayed during the battle on the space station. On the one hand Taylor has [[spoiler: learned to use the Force]]. On the other hand she's is fighting on an airless space station which means no bugs.bugs. On the other hand [[spoiler:she's learned to use the Force]].
* HeroicBSOD: Oh so ''very'' common. Taylor starts the story in one that lasts for ''years'', Vicky goes through a minor one when she's confronted with actual deaths in a Trandoshian slaver raid, Dennis has a major freakout when he realizes that his memories of [[ApocalypseHow Golden Morning]] are ''real'', which leads to him inciting one in Alexandria by highlighting how pointless all her actions were, [[spoiler:and three years later Taylor goes through ''another'' brief BSOD during her trial of spirit when she recognizes [[PersonalHorror she still has the potential to become]] [[EvilMeScaresMe Khepri]].]] The only parahuman who doesn't go through this at any point is Miss Militia.
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* GladiatorGames: Alexandria opts to join in a gladiator fight on Tatooine in order to get enough credits to leave. Her companions don’t exactly approve… especially after they befriend one of her victims.
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* BroughtDownToBadass: played with during the space station. On the one hand Taylor has [[spoiler: learned to use the Force]. On the other hand she's fighting on an airless space station which means no bugs.
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* BroughtDownToBadass: played with during the space station. On the one hand Taylor has [[spoiler: learned to use the Force].Force]]. On the other hand she's fighting on an airless space station which means no bugs.
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* BroughtDownToBadass: played with during the space station. On the one hand Taylor has [[spoiler: learned to use the Force]. On the other hand she's fighting on an airless space station which means no bugs.
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* FriendToAllChildren: Taylor and Vicky in entirely different ways but the same end result.
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** ''Especially'' Glory Girl's "flying brick" power.
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* ThrowingYourSwordAlwaysWorks: having Force telekinesis and a lightsaber helps a lot with making this a viable tactic.
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* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVsCynicism: Alexandria’s brutal realism vs Satine’s hopeful idealism lead to them clashing very often over what to do with Mandalore’s future, though they remain friends. On one hand, Satine is right that militarizing the Mandalorian people once again will lead to bad sentiments being dug up, possibly resulting in another war. However, at the same time, considering the coming Clone Wars, the Mandalorians REALLY need to get a stable defense. Alexandria herself is right in that militarizing the Mandalorians has allowed them to create a force of soldiers capable of rescuing many slaves and unfortunates from the more evil forces of the galaxy. At the same time, her rashness in militarizing Mandalore has caught the eye of Palpatine who sees a non-peaceful Mandalore as a threat to his plans, and also has jeopardized some of Mandalore’s relationships with other planets while strengthening others.
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* HeroWithBadPublicity: Taylor, as usual. The events of becoming Khepri and what she’d had to do to survive up till that point have left her mind constantly full of fear and hatred and sorrow because of everything she’s gone through. As such, many other Jedi in the temple are constantly thinking that her falling to the dark side is inevitable because of feeling her dark emotions in the force.
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* OffTheRails: Sidious’ plan to turn Dooku to the Sith as in canon, leading to Dooku killing Master Yaddle is derailed by several Jedi Masters, Knights, and Padawans responding to Dooku’s call for help, including Anakin, Taylor, and Vicky, as well as the mercenaries Dooku hired. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, this leads to Sidious realizing that Dooku is a loose end, as he’s already revealed himself as Palpatine to Dooku to attempt to turn him only to fail. He fights Dooku for a while before the other Jedi Masters get to him to rescue him, killing him with Force Lightning using the station’s metal as a conduit just as they reach the battle.]]
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In ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-weaving-force-worm-sw-pseudo-post-gm.1058679/#post-88894155/1/The-Weaving-Force The Weaving Force]]'' by Tropers/{{Ld1449}}, [[Literature/{{Worm}} Hannah]] recalls the night dispatch relayed that Armsmaster captured Lung.
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So begins ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-weaving-force-worm-sw-pseudo-post-gm.1058679/#post-88894155/1/The-Weaving-Force The Weaving Force]]'' by Tropers/{{Ld1449}}. Scattered across the stars, the superheroes deal with the wounds of their past as they explore their strange new world. All the while, sinister figures continue their dark machinations…
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* OutsideContextProblem: Being a crossover, the Worm characters prove to be examples of this to various parties. Their powers are very different from what most people in the galaxy are prepared to encounter, including force-sensitives. This makes them very good at disrupting the established status quo of the galaxy.
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*HiddenDepths: Senator Taa surprisingly enough when he gives his support to end slavery in the galaxy as according to Alexandria: "Taa himself, believe it or not, is actually rather well meaning... He’s just incredibly stupid.”
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* BonsaiForest: Severely inverted. Glory Girl notes that the trees where she and Skitter have ended up are far taller than they should be.
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* EnchantedForest: Like in canon, Kashyyyk is portrayed as one of the darker variants of this. Vicky initially assumes she's been shrunk by some parahuman power, and only realizes the truth after Skitter summons some very alien bugs.
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* BonsaiForest: Severely inverted. Glory Girl notes that the trees where she and Skitter have ended up are far taller than they should be.
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* BonsaiForest: Severely inverted. Glory Girl notes that EvilMeScaresMe: Taylor remembers becoming Khepri during Gold Morning, and the trees where she and Skitter have ended up are far taller than they should be.trauma shapes her for [[{{TimeSkip}} years afterwards]].
* MookHorrorShow: Taylor, already a TerrorHero in canon, is shown in action from the perspective of a hapless [[{{Mooks}} Mook]]. [[{{Deconstruction}} Deconstructed]] - confronting her memories of [[{{EvilMeScaresMe}} Khepri]] sends her into a HeroicBSOD.
* MookHorrorShow: Taylor, already a TerrorHero in canon, is shown in action from the perspective of a hapless [[{{Mooks}} Mook]]. [[{{Deconstruction}} Deconstructed]] - confronting her memories of [[{{EvilMeScaresMe}} Khepri]] sends her into a HeroicBSOD.
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Spoilering things related to the premise of the fic is counterproductive. If it happens in the first few chapters, there's no reason to spoiler it. Also adding a few tropes.
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* BigCreepyCrawlies: When [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] ends up in a bizarrely huge forest with [[spoiler:Skitter]], there are lots and lots of enormous bugs around. [[{{Understatement}} This does not make her happy]].
* DumbStruck: [[spoiler:Taylor]] is so traumatised by her previous experiences that she can't (or won't) talk. Partially subverted in that she [[spoiler:has her bugs do it for her]] in a creepy chorus.
* BonsaiForest: Severely inverted. [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] notes that the trees where she and [[spoiler:Skitter]] have ended up are far taller than they should be.
* ReclaimedByNature: The place [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] finds herself in apparently used to be a city before a truly ''massive'' forest grew up in the middle of it.
* ReducedToRatburgers: Not literally, but when [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] and [[spoiler:Skitter]] are stranded in a strange forest far from civilisation, and there are no supermarkets available, they have to eat ''something'' to survive.
* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun: [[spoiler:Taylor]] recalls being Khepri, and controlling ''everyone'' to save the world. This is somewhat traumatic for her.
* DumbStruck: [[spoiler:Taylor]] is so traumatised by her previous experiences that she can't (or won't) talk. Partially subverted in that she [[spoiler:has her bugs do it for her]] in a creepy chorus.
* BonsaiForest: Severely inverted. [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] notes that the trees where she and [[spoiler:Skitter]] have ended up are far taller than they should be.
* ReclaimedByNature: The place [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] finds herself in apparently used to be a city before a truly ''massive'' forest grew up in the middle of it.
* ReducedToRatburgers: Not literally, but when [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] and [[spoiler:Skitter]] are stranded in a strange forest far from civilisation, and there are no supermarkets available, they have to eat ''something'' to survive.
* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun: [[spoiler:Taylor]] recalls being Khepri, and controlling ''everyone'' to save the world. This is somewhat traumatic for her.
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* BigCreepyCrawlies: When [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] Glory Girl ends up in a bizarrely huge forest with [[spoiler:Skitter]], Skitter, there are lots and lots of enormous bugs around. [[{{Understatement}} This does not make her happy]].
* CoolOldGuy: Yoda, of course, even more so than he is in canon. To a lesser extent, Plo Koon also qualifies, [[spoiler:seeing as he takes Taylor and Victoria as his padawans.]]
** Count Dooku surprisingly counts as well, since the truth of Qui-gon's death is not withheld from him, leading him to step in to teach Obi-wan and Anakin lightsaber combat personally.
* DumbStruck:[[spoiler:Taylor]] Taylor is so traumatised traumatized by her previous experiences that she can't (or won't) talk. Partially subverted in that she [[spoiler:has has her bugs do it for her]] her in a creepy chorus.
* BonsaiForest: Severely inverted.[[spoiler:Glory Girl]] Glory Girl notes that the trees where she and [[spoiler:Skitter]] Skitter have ended up are far taller than they should be.
* ReclaimedByNature: The place[[spoiler:Glory Girl]] Glory Girl finds herself in apparently used to be a city before a truly ''massive'' forest grew up in the middle of it.
* ReducedToRatburgers: Not literally, but when[[spoiler:Glory Girl]] Glory Girl and [[spoiler:Skitter]] Skitter are stranded in a strange forest far from civilisation, and there are no supermarkets available, they have to eat ''something'' to survive.
* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun:[[spoiler:Taylor]] Taylor recalls being Khepri, and controlling ''everyone'' to save the world. This is somewhat extremely traumatic for her.her, [[spoiler:to the point where she actively tries to convince herself the memories are implanted and fake for years.]]
* CoolOldGuy: Yoda, of course, even more so than he is in canon. To a lesser extent, Plo Koon also qualifies, [[spoiler:seeing as he takes Taylor and Victoria as his padawans.]]
** Count Dooku surprisingly counts as well, since the truth of Qui-gon's death is not withheld from him, leading him to step in to teach Obi-wan and Anakin lightsaber combat personally.
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* DumbStruck: [[spoiler:Taylor]] is so traumatised by her previous experiences that she can't (or won't) talk. Partially subverted in that she [[spoiler:has her bugs do it for her]] in a creepy chorus.
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* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun: [[spoiler:Taylor]] recalls being Khepri, and controlling ''everyone'' to save the world. This is somewhat traumatic for her.
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* ReclaimedByNature: The forest [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] finds herself in apparently used to be a city before a truly ''massive'' forest grew up in the middle of it.
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* BigCreepyCrawlies: When [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] ends up in a bizarrely huge forest with [[spoiler:Skitter]], there are lots and lots of enormous bugs around. This does not make her happy.
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* BigCreepyCrawlies: When [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] ends up in a bizarrely huge forest with [[spoiler:Skitter]], there are lots and lots of enormous bugs around. [[{{Understatement}} This does not make her happy.happy]].
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* ReducedToRatburgers: Not literally, but when [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] and [[spoiler:Skitter]] are stranded in a strange forest, far from civilisation, and the only living creatures around are bugs, they have to eat ''something'' to survive.
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* ReclaimedByNature: The forest [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] finds herself in apparently used to be a city before a truly 'massive' forest grew up in the middle of it.
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* BigCreepyCrawlies: When [[spoiler:Glory Girl]] ends up in a bizarrely huge forest with [[spoiler:Skitter]], there are lots and lots of enormous bugs around. This does not make her happy.
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In ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-weaving-force-worm-sw-pseudo-post-gm.1058679/#post-88894155/1/The-Weaving-Force The Weaving Force]]'' by Tropers/{{Ld1449}}, [[Literature/{{Worm}} Hannah]] recalls the night dispatch relayed that Armsmaster captured Lung.
Victoria Dallon woke after saving her sister at the Bank from the Undersiders.
Rebecca can still feel the spiders weaving webs in her lungs.
Dennis sees the golden light devouring the world.
Taylor... Taylor remembers.
She remembers Khepri. The Endbringer she once became.
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Victoria Dallon woke after saving her sister at the Bank from the Undersiders.
Rebecca can still feel the spiders weaving webs in her lungs.
Dennis sees the golden light devouring the world.
Taylor... Taylor remembers.
She remembers Khepri. The Endbringer she once became.
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