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* NoManShouldHaveThisPower: [[spoiler: How Twilight solves the problem of the tears. By destroying it in the process of stopping the Blight, the energy is distributed across the entire world, keeping any one being or country from using it for evil]].
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** BiggerBad: [[TheCorruption The]] [[EldritchAbomination host of the Blight]]. Sometimes referred to as 'Allfather'.

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** BiggerBad: [[TheCorruption The]] [[EldritchAbomination host of the Blight]]. Sometimes Blight]], sometimes referred to as 'Allfather'.



** Fight, it's ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin. No claws, no wings, no magic, just a down-and-dirty brawl.

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** Fight, it's Fight is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin. No claws, no wings, no magic, just a down-and-dirty brawl.
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This is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Redback+Spino Redback Spino]]. It can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/44105/the-tears-of-gaia here]].

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This is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Redback+Spino Redback Spino]]. It can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/44105/the-tears-of-gaia here]]. It has a audio book [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fRGKGf8sClk here]]
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** Two Diamon Dog commanders are named Ziggy and David, in refernc to David Bowie
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* {{Jerkass}}: Gellert the griffin.

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* {{Jerkass}}: Gellert the griffin. [[spoiler: At first, anyway.]]
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** Fight, it's ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.

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** Fight, it's ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin. No claws, no wings, no magic, just a down-and-dirty brawl.
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** The curse is eventually broken when [[spoiler: Tharos is defeated, but Fluttershy chooses to spare his life. He dies, permanently, by sacrificing himself to save the ponies from a Blight ambush.]]
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* PowerCrystal: The Tears of Gaia. According to the CreationMyth, it is a gem created by Gaia with her own shed tears and the powers of the six Alicorns are stored inside the Tears. The power found inside can be enough to ''[[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt wipe out most of the world''. Most nations and [[EldritchAbomination the Blight]] want it in their possession, the other nations for defence and [[BiggerBad the Blight]] to expand its influence faster.

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* PowerCrystal: The Tears of Gaia. According to the CreationMyth, it is a gem created by Gaia with her own shed tears and the powers of the six Alicorns are stored inside the Tears. The power found inside can be enough to ''[[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt wipe out most of the world''.world]]''. Most nations and [[EldritchAbomination the Blight]] want it in their possession, the other nations for defence and [[BiggerBad the Blight]] to expand its influence faster.
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* PowerCrystal: The Tears of Gaia. According to the CreationMyth, it is a gem created by Gaia with her own shed tears and the powers of the six Alicorns are stored inside the Tears. The power found inside can be enough to wipe out most of the world! Most nations and [[EldritchAbomination the Blight]] want it in their possession, the other nations for defence and [[BiggerBad the Blight]] to expand its influence faster.

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* PowerCrystal: The Tears of Gaia. According to the CreationMyth, it is a gem created by Gaia with her own shed tears and the powers of the six Alicorns are stored inside the Tears. The power found inside can be enough to ''[[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt wipe out most of the world! world''. Most nations and [[EldritchAbomination the Blight]] want it in their possession, the other nations for defence and [[BiggerBad the Blight]] to expand its influence faster.
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* PowerCrystal: The Tears of Gaia. According to the CreationMyth, it is a gem created by Gaia with her own shed tears and the powers of the dead Alicorns are stored inside the Tears. The power found inside can be enough to wipe out most of the world! Most nations and [[EldritchAbomination the Blight]] want it in their possession, the other nations for defence and [[BiggerBad the Blight]] to expand its influence faster.

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* PowerCrystal: The Tears of Gaia. According to the CreationMyth, it is a gem created by Gaia with her own shed tears and the powers of the dead six Alicorns are stored inside the Tears. The power found inside can be enough to wipe out most of the world! Most nations and [[EldritchAbomination the Blight]] want it in their possession, the other nations for defence and [[BiggerBad the Blight]] to expand its influence faster.
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** In the epilogue, [[spooiler: Rowanoak visits Ponyville, and in a moment when she is on her own, she delivers a final monologue to the readers that is very similar to The Stranger's final monologue in The Big Lebowski:]]

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** In the epilogue, [[spooiler: [[spoiler: Rowanoak visits Ponyville, and in a moment when she is on her own, she delivers a final monologue to the readers that is very similar to The Stranger's final monologue in The Big Lebowski:]]

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--> [[spoiler: "Sure am glad to see she's doin' alright after all this time," she said to you. "She and her friends went through quite a bit, and come out stronger and wiser than ever. Well, that about does it, wraps the whole thing up. Things seemed to work out pretty good fer Twilight an' her friends. Not to mention it made for a pretty decent tale, eh? Now I'm not sure she's aware of y'all out there, hearin' this story. But if she did, I'm sure she'd appreciate ye stickin' around as long as ye have. Takes alot of dedication to wanna stick by her, find out where she'd go next, what adventure she'd run into..."
Rowanoak paused a moment and chuckled. "Oh look at me, ramblin' on like the old coot I am. Heh, s'funny, when ye've bin goin' as long as I have, once ye got an attentive audience ye don't wanna stop talking. But I'll let y'all be on yer way now. I hope you've enjoyed yerselves. See you out on the trail."
Rowanoak then turned to Mrs Cake as she passed. "Say miss, be a dear and get me some more o' that good sarsaparilla..."]]

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--> [[spoiler: "Sure am glad to see she's doin' alright after all this time," she said to you. "She and her friends went through quite a bit, and come out stronger and wiser than ever. Well, that about does it, wraps the whole thing up. Things seemed to work out pretty good fer Twilight an' her friends. Not to mention it made for a pretty decent tale, eh? Now I'm not sure she's aware of y'all out there, hearin' this story. But if she did, I'm sure she'd appreciate ye stickin' around as long as ye have. Takes alot of dedication to wanna stick by her, find out where she'd go next, what adventure she'd run into..."
" Rowanoak paused a moment and chuckled. "Oh look at me, ramblin' on like the old coot I am. Heh, s'funny, when ye've bin goin' as long as I have, once ye got an attentive audience ye don't wanna stop talking. But I'll let y'all be on yer way now. I hope you've enjoyed yerselves. See you out on the trail."
" Rowanoak then turned to Mrs Cake as she passed. "Say miss, be a dear and get me some more o' that good sarsaparilla..."]]
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** The Diamond Dogs that Rarity encounters in the woods have a similar conversation to the three trolls in The Hobbit.

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** The Diamond Dogs that Rarity encounters in the woods have a similar conversation to the three trolls in The Hobbit.Hobbit.
** In the epilogue, [[spooiler: Rowanoak visits Ponyville, and in a moment when she is on her own, she delivers a final monologue to the readers that is very similar to The Stranger's final monologue in The Big Lebowski:]]
--> [[spoiler: "Sure am glad to see she's doin' alright after all this time," she said to you. "She and her friends went through quite a bit, and come out stronger and wiser than ever. Well, that about does it, wraps the whole thing up. Things seemed to work out pretty good fer Twilight an' her friends. Not to mention it made for a pretty decent tale, eh? Now I'm not sure she's aware of y'all out there, hearin' this story. But if she did, I'm sure she'd appreciate ye stickin' around as long as ye have. Takes alot of dedication to wanna stick by her, find out where she'd go next, what adventure she'd run into..."
Rowanoak paused a moment and chuckled. "Oh look at me, ramblin' on like the old coot I am. Heh, s'funny, when ye've bin goin' as long as I have, once ye got an attentive audience ye don't wanna stop talking. But I'll let y'all be on yer way now. I hope you've enjoyed yerselves. See you out on the trail."
Rowanoak then turned to Mrs Cake as she passed. "Say miss, be a dear and get me some more o' that good sarsaparilla..."]]
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** When [[spoiler: King Gideon discovers that his son Gordon is alive and in the midst of the battle between the Deerfolk and the Blight, there is only one thing he could possibly say:
--> "GORDON'S ALIVE?!"]]

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** When [[spoiler: King Gideon discovers that his son Gordon is alive and in the midst of the battle between the Deerfolk and the Blight, there is only one thing he could possibly say:
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--> [[spoiler: "GORDON'S ALIVE?!"]]
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** King Gideon is basically Prince Vultan as a griffon.
** Rowanoak seems to be based on the myterious mole Polleekin from the Redwall book, Martin the Warrior.



* ProudWarriorRaceGuys: The griffins. They are also better equipped for warfare than the more peaceful ponies of Equestria.

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* ProudWarriorRaceGuys: The griffins. They are also better equipped for warfare than the more peaceful ponies of Equestria.Equestria.
* ShoutOut: Oh so very many...
** The whole thing feels very much like a Tolkien high-fantasy story, complete with a group of friends led by an old wizard going on a journey, based around a mystical artefact, and ensuring a dark power that has been gone for centuries from getting it.
** Many of the characters are very clearly based on classic fantasy characters, see Expy up above...
** When [[spoiler: King Gideon discovers that his son Gordon is alive and in the midst of the battle between the Deerfolk and the Blight, there is only one thing he could possibly say:
--> "GORDON'S ALIVE?!"]]
** Gellert's Three Challenges are very clearly based on the Challenge of King Bucko Bigbones from the Redwall books.
** The Diamond Dogs that Rarity encounters in the woods have a similar conversation to the three trolls in The Hobbit.
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** There was one after our heroes took the Tears of Gaia coming out of the rip from the sky in a parallel dimension. All we find out is that it has a booming voice, tentacles, and the ponies mistook [[ThatsNoMoon one of its eyes for a planet in the sky above them]]. Yikes.

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** There was one after our heroes took the Tears of Gaia coming out of the rip from the sky in a parallel dimension. All we find out is that it has a booming voice, tentacles, and the ponies mistook [[ThatsNoMoon one of its eyes for a planet in the sky above them]].them. Oh, and it turns out it's a female as well.]]. Yikes.
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** [[spoiler]]: She then does it again in the epilogue, addressing the readers and thanking them for reading.]]

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** [[spoiler]]: [[spoiler: She then does it again in the epilogue, addressing the readers and thanking them for reading.]]

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** BiggerBad: [[TheCorruption The]] [[EldritchAbomination Blight]]. Sometimes referred to as 'Allfather'.

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** BiggerBad: [[TheCorruption The]] [[EldritchAbomination host of the Blight]]. Sometimes referred to as 'Allfather'.



** [[spoiler]]: She then does it again in the epilogue, addressing the readers and thanking them for reading.]]



* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:The Mane SIx manage to destroy the Blight, find a solution for the problem of the Tears, and save the world. Fluttershy also manages to get Yarrow to move in with her]].
* EldritchAbomination: The Draconequii in the CreationMyth in the first chapter have them as having mixed body parts from all races because they have no preferences to any race. [[TheCorruption The Blight made them more so, as well as driving them insane.]]

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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:The ponies go through being constantly hounded by the Blight, attacked by various different monsters on the journey, fighting a dragon, being kidnapped by the Blight, having to deal with a bigoted griffon commander, and even being swept up in a war, but in the end the Mane SIx Six manage to destroy the Blight, find a solution for the problem of the Tears, and save the world. Fluttershy also manages to get Yarrow to move in with her]].
* EldritchAbomination: The Draconequii Draconequi in the CreationMyth in the first chapter have them as having mixed body parts from all races because they have no preferences to any race. [[TheCorruption The Blight made them more so, as well as driving them insane.]]



* FantasticRacism: Gellert the griffin to the ponies.

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* FantasticRacism: Gellert the griffin to the ponies. [[spoiler: He does improve over time.]]



* GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy: [[spoiler:This is how Twilight defeats the Blight, she throws the Tears at it, causing it to explode and release the energy it had absorbed]].
--> '''Applejack:''' C'mon, best leave her to it. She's kinda gone native, Fluttershy has
* HumanoidAbomination: No humans, but the Blightlings (mortals corrupted by the Blight) are horribly rotted and disfigured versions of their former selves.

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* GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy: [[spoiler:This is how Twilight defeats the Blight, she throws the Tears at it, causing it to explode and release the energy it had absorbed]].
--> '''Applejack:''' C'mon, best leave her to it. She's kinda gone native, Fluttershy has
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* GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy: [[spoiler:This is how Twilight defeats the Blight, she throws the Tears at it, causing it to go into power-overload, exploding and releasing the energy it had absorbed]].
* HumanoidAbomination: No humans, but the Blightlings (mortals corrupted by the Blight) are horribly rotted and disfigured versions of their former selves. The Allfather itself is an even worse version of this.


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** [[spoiler: Of course, this being the MLP universe, where every creature has at least some sort of passive connection to magic (Pegasi using it to fly and control clouds, earth-ponies using it to tend their crops, etc), it makes sense that the energy would be so thinly distributed.]]


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**[[spoiler: So much power, in fact, that Twilight's ultimate solution to who should get all that power, is to destroy it, releasing its energy so that everyone in the world gets a bit of it.]]

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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:The Mane SIx manage to destroy the Blight, find a solution for the problem of the Tears, and save the world. Fluttershy also manages to get Yarrow to move in with her]].



* GoingToGiveItMoreEnergy: [[spoiler:This is how Twilight defeats the Blight, she throws the Tears at it, causing it to explode and release the energy it had absorbed]].



* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: Downplayed: [[spoiler:The destruction of the Tears frees the energy within, which the diffuses over the planet and slightly boosts the magic of all magical beings]].



--> “Let’s just say,” Twilight replied, “that it involved a flight spell, a pumpkin, and the fiercest flamingo you’ve ever seen.”

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--> “Let’s just say,” Twilight replied, “that it involved a flight spell, a pumpkin, and the fiercest flamingo you’ve you've ever seen.”
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* PowerCrystal: The Tears of Gaia. According to the CreationMyth, it is a gem created by Gaia with her own shed tears and the powers of the dead Alicorns are stored inside the Tears. The power found inside can be enough to wipe out most of the world! Most nations and [[EldritchAbomination the Blight]] want it in their possession, the other nations for defence and [[BiggerBad the Blight]] to expand its influence faster.

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* EvilTowerOfOminousness: On the middle of [[{{Mordor}} Burzkala's]] crater, there is a very tall black tower. Inside the very top of the tower is inhabited by [[TheCorruption the]] [[EldritchAbomination Blight]].



* Mordor: Burzkala. It is a blackened extinct volcano, heavily fortified and inhabited by the Blightlings devoid of any plant-life.

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* Mordor: {{Mordor}}: Burzkala. It is a blackened extinct volcano, heavily fortified and inhabited by the Blightlings devoid of any plant-life.
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* BlackSpeech: The Blight's language.


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* Mordor: Burzkala. It is a blackened extinct volcano, heavily fortified and inhabited by the Blightlings devoid of any plant-life.
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* GoingNative: Fluttershy is becoming this in Cervidas. Applejack suspected as much.
--> '''Applejack:''' C'mon, best leave her to it. She's kinda gone native, Fluttershy has
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* CombatByChampion: The 3 F's, created by Gellert to determine who's worthy for his respect. They are Flyt, Feast and Fight. Only the griffin king managed to beat him yet.

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* CombatByChampion: The 3 F's, created by Gellert to determine who's worthy for his respect. They are Flyt, Feast and Fight. Only the griffin king [[spoiler: and Rarity]] managed to beat him yet.
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* CombatByChampion: The 3 F's, created by Gellert to determine who's worthy for his respect. They are Flyt, Feast and Fight. Only the griffin king managed to beat him yet.
** Flyt involves an insult contest. You heard that right, the combatants just hurl insults towards each other until one of them loses his temper.
** Feast [[CaptainObvious involves feasting]]. The combatants have to eat without stopping until one stops.
** Fight, it's ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.

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* PhysicalGods: According to the CreationMyth, the Alicorns and the Draconequii are all this. But by the time the Blight had been imprisoned, the Draconequi had been turned into [[EldritchAbomination insane twisted monsters]], and all the Alicorns except Celestia and Luna left the world forever (And Gaia, though she was essentially dead, having become one with the earth itself)

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* PhysicalGods: According to the CreationMyth, the Alicorns and the Draconequii are all this. But by the time the Blight had been imprisoned, the Draconequi had been turned into [[EldritchAbomination insane twisted monsters]], and all the Alicorns except Celestia and Luna left the world forever (And Gaia, though she was essentially dead, having become one with the earth itself)itself).
* ProudWarriorRaceGuys: The griffins. They are also better equipped for warfare than the more peaceful ponies of Equestria.
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--->...But not before she paused briefly to turn back again and look at you:
--->“Don’t look to me for explanations, dear reader. Ye best get after those ponies, see what happens… They got plenty of troubles ahead… If’n only they knew.”

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--->...-->...But not before she paused briefly to turn back again and look at you:
--->“Don’t
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“Don’t
look to me for explanations, dear reader. Ye best get after those ponies, see what happens… They got plenty of troubles ahead… If’n only they knew.”



--> "Simultaneous spit-takes in 3...2...1..."

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* {{Expy}}: The author admits that the fanfic contains expies of many old high fantasy stories such as The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit and Redwall.

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* {{Expy}}: The author admits that the fanfic contains expies of many old high fantasy stories such as The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit Literature/TheLordOfTheRings, Literature/TheHobbit and Redwall.Literature/{{Redwall}}.
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“Don’t look to me for explanations, dear reader. Ye best get after those ponies, see what happens… They got plenty of troubles ahead… If’n only they knew.”

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“Don’t --->“Don’t look to me for explanations, dear reader. Ye best get after those ponies, see what happens… They got plenty of troubles ahead… If’n only they knew.”



* CultureClash: While staying in the griffon city, Twilight, Starswirl, Rarity and Pinkie Pie indulge in a delicious dinner from a nearby foodstall. Turns out the griffons are omnivorous, and the food was chicken and mushroom soup. As the fic puts it:

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* CultureClash: While staying in the griffon city, Twilight, Starswirl, Rarity and Pinkie Pie indulge in a delicious dinner from a nearby foodstall. Turns out the griffons are omnivorous, omnivores, and the food was chicken and mushroom soup. As the fic puts it:



** The Blight.

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** The Blight. Is it a disease? A hive mind? A spirit?

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