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* ManBitesMan: Sophia, accidentally subjected to MarshmallowHell by Taylor, and fearful of suffocation, resorts to biting her to try and get her off.
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* NothingButSkinAndBones: Victor after trying to steal Taylor's skills, though all the tests say that he ''should'' be healthier than ever.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Emma's behavior after learning that Taylor has powers now is so unusual for her that not only is Sophia concerned for her mental state, but even Taylor, after ''everything'' Emma did to her, is seriously worried.
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* StepfordSmiler: Emma has serious vibes of this after Taylor is revealed as a cape.
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** Emma later gave Taylor a taste of this trope. Taylor, due to being much taller than Emma, escaped simply by standing up.
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** It's worth noting that this is due to standard Tinkertech operating in ways that are scientifically impossible due to operating on black box components. Once Taylor fully awakens her Industry domain, she's supposed to be able to rebuild Tinkertech without said black boxes.
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* BoobsOfSteel: Due to her godhood-induced growth spurt, Taylor now sports a rack large enough to smother a teenager with. She's also a goddess that can easily tank pretty much anything that hits her and rip steel like it was paper.
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* BoobsOfSteel: Due to her godhood-induced growth spurt, Taylor now sports a rack large enough to [[MarshmallowHell smother a teenager with.somebody with]]. She's also a goddess that can easily tank pretty much anything that hits her and rip steel like it was paper.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Victor tries to use his power to "steal" skills from Taylor. He ends up in a coma.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: When the PRT tries to analyze Taylor's golden blood with a tinkertech system, it produces things that it shouldn't have been able to do, like a ''copper plate''.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: When the PRT tries to analyze Taylor's golden blood with a tinkertech system, it produces things that it shouldn't have been able to do, like an ''engraved copper plate''.
* BoobsOfSteel: Due to her godhood-induced growth spurt, Taylor now sports a''copper plate''.rack large enough to smother a teenager with. She's also a goddess that can easily tank pretty much anything that hits her and rip steel like it was paper.
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* DoorStopper: Some of the chapters are behemoths. Chapter 11 is a gargantuan 15,000 words, with Grounders saying it actually wasn't as long as she wanted it to be. And Chapter 12 is 19,000 words.
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* DoorStopper: Some of the chapters are behemoths. Chapter 11 is a gargantuan 15,000 words, with Grounders saying it actually wasn't as long as she wanted it to be. And Chapter 12 is 19,000 words, and Chapter 13 hit 24,000 words.
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* LimitedWardrobe: Due to her physical changes, most of Taylor's clothes weren't able to be worn by her anymore, leaving her with few options. At one point, she had to go to the PRT in her pajamas because she had no other options.
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* LimitedWardrobe: Due to her physical changes, most of Taylor's clothes weren't able to be worn by her anymore, leaving her with few options. At one point, she had has to go to the PRT in her pajamas because she had has no other options.
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* MarshmallowHell: Taylor accidentally gives one to Sophia Hess. The latter bites the former.
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* {{Gotterdammerung}}: The Old Gods died fighting off the Apocalypse. It is also indicated that the Entities took advantage of this to make their own move.
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* {{Gotterdammerung}}: The Old Gods died fighting off the Apocalypse. It is also indicated that the Entities either took advantage of this to make their own move.move and/or it was caused by them or another of their species.
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* HotGod: Taylor is now ''very'' attractive, though it takes a while for her to notice. It's hinted that at least part of it is Inari's gifted Fertility domain.
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* HotGod: Taylor is now ''very'' attractive, though it takes a while for her to notice.notice, in part because the change took place more gradually than her ears and tails. It's hinted that at least part of it is Inari's gifted Fertility domain.
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* SuperPowerLottery: Taylor's a FlyingBrick, is the strongest hydrokinetic before Leviathan, has electricity and suddenly looks like a supermodel and those are just the powers the public is aware of. And as a goddess, her powers will only grow with time.
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* SuperPowerLottery: Taylor's a FlyingBrick, is the strongest hydrokinetic before behind Leviathan, has electricity and suddenly looks like a supermodel and those are just the powers the public is aware of. And as a goddess, her powers will only grow with time.
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* DoorStopper: Some of the chapters are behemoths. Chapter 11 is a gargantuan 15,000 words, with Grounders saying it actually wasn't as long as she wanted it to be. And Chapter 12 is 19,000 words.
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* ForWantOfANail: The story begins with Taylor ascending and eventually joining the Wards during early summer 2010, six months before the canon locker incident.
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* NotMeThisTime: WordOfGod is that the locker incident at the beginning was ''not'' caused by Emma, Sophia and Madison. Taylor does hear them laughing after she gets locked, but she doesn't know if they helped with it or were there by chance.
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* HotGod: Taylor is now ''very'' attractive.attractive, though it takes a while for her to notice. It's hinted that at least part of it is Inari's gifted Fertility domain.
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: The ways a specific domain manifests in a god depends on both their own perceptions and perceived limitations, and those of others. For example, one of Inari's earliest domains was Foxes, and since Japan views foxes as tricksters, she gained shapeshifting abilities, but with Taylor, what can be presumed to be the popularity of anime and manga, and the usual portrayal of kitsune in said anime, causes her to have, apparently permanently, [[LittleBitBeastly fox ears and nine tails]].
** [[spoiler:Victoria gets ears and a single tail from a power interaction between Amy and Taylor]].
* NighInvulnerability: Taylor is launched two blocks by a tinker tech canon into the side of a car. The car comes out worse for wear than she does.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatHotness: Taylor's ascent into divinity came with a dramatic boost to her looks. People question why a trigger event also give you a makeover. Inari passing down her Ferti
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatHotness: Taylor's ascent into divinity came with a dramatic boost to her looks. People question why a trigger event also give gives you a makeover. Inari passing down her FertiFertility domain to her probably helped a lot there.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: When the PRT tries to analyze Taylor's golden blood with a tinkertech system, it produces things that it shouldn't have been able to do, like a ''copper plate''.
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* LoyalPhlebotinum: A [[ProngsOfPoseidon trident]] washes up in a dead {{Megalodon}} by the docks, and anyone who tries to touch it gets shocked. Given that it reacts to Taylor when she gets close to it, and the fox symbols on it, it's presumably trying to keep others from using it.
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* {{Megalodon}}: A dead one shows up with a [[ProngsOfPoseidon trident]] embedded in it, presumably for Taylor's use.
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* ProngsOfPoseidon: A dead {{Megalodon}} washes up on the shore by the Docks with one of these, apparently made for Taylor by the Cyclopes if the symbols on it are any indication, shocking anyone who tries to grab it.
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* ScienceCannotComprehendPhlebotinum: Or at least, ''super''-science can't. Tinker-tech scanners, if they don't immediately break upon trying to scan Taylor, produce results that they should be physically incapable of making, and don't make sense besides, like copper plates from a machine attempting to analyze Taylor's golden blood. Panacea spacing out when touching her, [[spoiler:as well as Victoria after her transformation]], implies that Thinker powers don't work on her either because the Shards lock up trying to process divinity.
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* WalkingTechbane: Taylor, as a result of Inari's gifted Industry domain, has a technology domain. Unfortunately, it doesn't react well with a lot of Tinkertech, scanners in particular tend to stop working when used on her, and while an attempt to analyze her blood doesn't break the machines outright, it produces meaningless results that it should have been physically incapable of producing. Even some non-scanning devices feel "wrong" to her.
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* AdultFear: Danny's reason for being interested in Taylor joining the Wards. She can't hide that she's no longer a normal human and he fears the gangs going after her as a result if she doesn't have the protection of being a Ward.
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* BequeathedPower: Taylor was given the domains of several deities upon her ascension. Among them were Inari's domains of Agriculture, Fertility, Industry, and Foxes.
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* BequeathedPower: Taylor was given some of the domains of several deities upon her ascension. Among them were Inari's when she became a god, specifically her domains of Agriculture, Fertility, Industry, and Foxes.
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* FigureItOutYourself: Somehow, it became the norm that the previous generation of gods would only leave cryptic messages for the next generation, stuff like telling them to "follow their heart" and stuff. Normally this isn't a problem because there's usually a century or two between major threats so they have time to figure this out, but the threat of the Entities is sufficient enough that Inari set things up that she'd be able to advise Taylor instead.
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* FigureItOutYourself: Somehow, it became the norm that the previous generation of gods would only leave cryptic messages for the next generation, stuff like telling them to "follow their heart" and stuff.the like. Normally this isn't a problem because there's usually a century or two between major threats so they have time to figure this out, but the threat of the Entities is sufficient enough that Inari set things up that she'd be able to advise Taylor instead.
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* SuperPowerLottery: Taylor's a FlyingBrick, is the strongest hydrokinetic before Leviathan. Has electricity and suddenly looks like a supermodel and those are just the powers the public is aware of. And as a goddess, her powers will only grow with time.
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* SuperPowerLottery: Taylor's a FlyingBrick, is the strongest hydrokinetic before Leviathan. Has Leviathan, has electricity and suddenly looks like a supermodel and those are just the powers the public is aware of. And as a goddess, her powers will only grow with time.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatHotness: Taylor's ascent into divinity came with a dramatic boost to her looks. People question when does a trigger event also give you a makeover.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatHotness: Taylor's ascent into divinity came with a dramatic boost to her looks. People question when does why a trigger event also give you a makeover.makeover. Inari passing down her Ferti
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* AlienBlood: As a goddess, Taylor has golden Ichor in place of blood now. [[spoiler:When Panacea has a power reaction trying to read her, Victoria ends up getting blood with an odd golden tinge as well.]]
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* OutsideContextProblem: Taylor's powers are divine in origin, not because she triggered and as such lacks a lot of the typical markers for a parahuman. Everybody else just marks this down as the same kind of delusion Myradin has about his power who just happened to be the strongest grab bag on record.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Taylor's powers are divine in origin, not because she triggered and as such lacks a lot of the typical markers for a parahuman. Everybody else just marks this down as the same kind of delusion Myradin Myrddin has about his power who just happened to be the strongest grab bag on record.
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* SuperPowerLottery: She's flight short of being a FlyingBrick, is the strongest hydrokinetic before Leviathan. Has electricity and suddenly looks like a supermodel and those are just the powers the public is aware of.
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* SuperPowerLottery: She's flight short of being Taylor's a FlyingBrick, is the strongest hydrokinetic before Leviathan. Has electricity and suddenly looks like a supermodel and those are just the powers the public is aware of. And as a goddess, her powers will only grow with time.
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* BequeathedPower: Taylor was given the domains of several deities upon her ascension. Among them were Inari's domains of Agriculture, Fertility, Industry, and Foxes.
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* HistoryRepeats: Every so often the [[{{Gotterdammerung}} gods die fighting some extradimensional beings or other threats]], with new gods rising later from mortals. In fact, the generation of gods before Taylor's may have actually broken a record with how long they managed to last.
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* ShockAndAwe: One of Taylor's domains gives her power over lightning.
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* TakenForGranite: On the way to the tree where the peach that granted her her powers was, Inari guided Taylor through a battlefield where everything had been turned to stone.
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* TailSlap: Hookwolf gets smacked with this.
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* HumanFurnitureIsAPainInTheTail: It's mentioned at one point that Taylor is sitting sideways in her chair because of her tails.
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* LimitedWardrobe: Due to her physical changes, most of Taylor's clothes weren't able to be worn by her anymore, leaving her with few options. At one point, she had to go to the PRT in her pajamas because she had no other options.
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In which, several months before the horrific Canon Locker Event, Taylor is locked in her locker and has an unusual experience in which she is told she is the first of the New Gods.
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* IAmNotPretty: Taylor really isn't used to being conventionally attractive, let alone as beautiful as she is now. Other people have to keep reminding her that 'yes', that girl in the mirror is her.
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* VulnerableCivilians: Which is part of what prompts Taylor is join in a gang fight the day before she is supposed to debut.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Taylor's powers are divine in origin, not because she triggered and as such lacks a lot of the typical markers for a parahuman. Everybody else just marks this down as the same kind of delusion Myradin has about his power who just happened to be the strongest grab bag on record.
* NighInvulnerability: Taylor is launched two blocks by a tinker tech canon into the side of a car. The car comes out worse for wear than she does.
* SuperPowerLottery: Shes flight short of being a FlyingBrick, is the strongest hydrokinetic before Leviathan. Has electricity and suddenly looks like a supermodel and those are just the powers the public is aware of.
* VulnerableCivilians:Which This is part of what prompts Taylor is to join in a gang fight the day before she is supposed to debut.debut.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatHotness: Taylor's ascent into divinity came with a dramatic boost to her looks. People question when does a trigger event also give you a makeover.
* NighInvulnerability: Taylor is launched two blocks by a tinker tech canon into the side of a car. The car comes out worse for wear than she does.
* SuperPowerLottery: Shes flight short of being a FlyingBrick, is the strongest hydrokinetic before Leviathan. Has electricity and suddenly looks like a supermodel and those are just the powers the public is aware of.
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''The Taste of Peaches'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Grounders10 that can be found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13332873/1/The-Taste-of-Peaches Fanfiction.Net]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-taste-of-peaches-worm-au.766264/ SpaceBattles]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/the-taste-of-peaches-worm-au.56049/ Sufficient Velocity]].
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''The Taste of Peaches'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Grounders10 [=Grounders10=] that can be found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13332873/1/The-Taste-of-Peaches Fanfiction.Net]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-taste-of-peaches-worm-au.766264/ SpaceBattles]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/the-taste-of-peaches-worm-au.56049/ Sufficient Velocity]].
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''The Taste of Peaches'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Grounders10 that can be found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13332873/1/The-Taste-of-Peaches Fanfiction.Net]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-taste-of-peaches-worm-au.766264/ SpaceBattles]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/the-taste-of-peaches-worm-au.56049/ Sufficient Velocity]].
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* ''Gotterdammerung'': The Old Gods died fighting off the Apocalypse. It is also indicated that the Entities took advantage of this to make their own move.
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*HotGod: Taylor is now ''very'' attractive.
*HotGod: Taylor is now ''very'' attractive.
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->''On the last day of school before summer break Taylor Hebert's life changed forever when she was locked in her own locker. When the door opened again, it wasn't to her school. Blessed with new powers and new possibilities Taylor hopes to become a hero... If she can convince her talking pet fox to stop telling everyone she's a god.''
In which, several months before the horrific Canon Locker Event, Taylor is locked in her locker and has an unusual experience in which she is told she is the first of the New Gods.
Understandably, this changes her life a bit.
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*DivineAssistance: Inari rigged things so she could advise the new Gods and mentors Taylor.
*Gotterdammerung: The Old GOds died fighting off the Apocalypse. It is also indicated that the Entities took advantage of this to make their own move.
*VulnerableCivilians: Which is part of what prompts Taylor is join in a gang fight the day before she is supposed to debut.
In which, several months before the horrific Canon Locker Event, Taylor is locked in her locker and has an unusual experience in which she is told she is the first of the New Gods.
Understandably, this changes her life a bit.
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!!''The Taste Of Peaches'' provides examples of:
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*DivineAssistance: Inari rigged things so she could advise the new Gods and mentors Taylor.
*Gotterdammerung: The Old GOds died fighting off the Apocalypse. It is also indicated that the Entities took advantage of this to make their own move.
*VulnerableCivilians: Which is part of what prompts Taylor is join in a gang fight the day before she is supposed to debut.
