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* WalkingSpoiler: [[spoiler: Crow]] can get difficult to talk about without also mentioning significant plot events.
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* [[spoiler: EvilAllAlong: Vaticus Finch was not revealed as evil to the protagonists until later.]]
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* GracefulLoser: After being defeated by [[spoiler: Luso]], [[spoiler: Vaticus]] gives him an important item and supported the accusations against him when Aquila held a city-wide conference.
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* GracefulLoser: After being defeated by [[spoiler: Luso]], [[spoiler: Vaticus]] gives him an important item and supported the accusations against him when Aquila held a city-wide conference. conference.
* GuestStarPartyMember: Anna and Chita are temporarily tagging along with Clan Gully.
* GuestStarPartyMember: Anna and Chita are temporarily tagging along with Clan Gully.
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* LargeAndInCharge: Eden is a massive Bangaa. He is also the Lord of Camoa and a member of the Coronet.
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* EdibleThemeNaming: All named Seeq in the story are named after a type of meat.
** First, there is T-bone.
** Second, there is Ribs.
** Third, there is Sir Loin.
** First, there is T-bone.
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* EdibleThemeNaming: All named Seeq in the story are named after a type of meat.
** First, there is T-bone.
** Second, there is Ribs.
** Third, there is Sir Loin.
** First, there is T-bone.
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* TrueCompanions: Clan Gully is like this.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: This story has '''389,097''' words and '''66 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: This story has '''389,097''' '''391,774''' words and '''66 '''67 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* ShipTease: Chapter 40 teases Luso/Kanin in it's climax and conclusion.
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* FlexibleTourneyRules: During the Camoa Cup, Acidwire requested a single duel to decide the match between them and Clan Gully rather than the best of three that was supposed to happen. They got away with this because when they requested this, they made it sound like they were doing it out of consideration of the fact that Clan Gully has yet to recover properly from their last match when actually it was so they could make it easier for them to defeat Clan Gully.
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* FlexibleTourneyRules: During the Camoa Cup, Acidwire requested a single duel to decide the match between them and Clan Gully rather than the best of three that was supposed to happen. They got away with this because when they requested this, they made it sound seem like they were doing it out of consideration of the fact that Clan Gully has yet to recover properly from their last match few matches when actually it was so they could make it easier for them to defeat Clan Gully.Gully. [[spoiler: This backfired on them when Luso defeated their leader Suzuka]].
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* FlexibleTourneyRules: During the Camoa Cup, Acidwire requested a single duel to decide the match between them and Clan Gully rather than the best of three that was supposed to happen. They got away with this because when they requested this, they made it sound like they were doing it out of consideration of the fact that Clan Gully has yet to recover properly from their last match when actually it was so they could make it easier for them to defeat Clan Gully.
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* BeastlyBloodsports: The fate of many of the poached creatures during the Poaching Arc.
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* BeastlyBloodsports: The fate This is one of the fates in store for many of the poached creatures during the Poaching Arc.
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* BeastlyBloodsports: The fate of many of the poached creatures during the Poaching Arc.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: This story has '''386,192''' words and '''65 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* ContinuityNod: The Camoan native who cheered Luso and Cheney up in Chapter 63 turned out to be the father of the girl whom Luso, Cheney and Hurdy helped all the way back in Chapter 8.
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* LethalChef: Vili put poison in the meal she cooked for Luso, Crow, Hurdy, Kanin and Adelle when she mistakenly thought it was just seasoning.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Sasasha supports Luso/Kanin.
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->''"So with this, I bid you farewell for now. Goddnight, Grandpa. Goodnight, Frimelda, and..."''
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->''"So with this, I bid you farewell for now. Goddnight, Goodnight, Grandpa. Goodnight, Frimelda, and..."''
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* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: Ensei is this sometimes.
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* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: Ensei is this sometimes.sometimes, like when he eats so much food at public restaurants which usually earns stares from everyone else.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Ensei again.is said to be this by Sasasha. An example includes his reaction to learning Kanin is going on a date. It is exactly what you'd expect from someone labelled overprotective.
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* ChickMagnet: Luso has two girls who definitely likes him. They are Kanin and [[spoiler: Maria]].
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* ChickMagnet: Luso has two three girls who definitely likes him. They are Kanin Kanin, Anna and [[spoiler: Maria]].
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* {{Doorstopper}}: This story has '''379,413''' words and '''64 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: This story has '''379,413''' '''386,192''' words and '''64 '''65 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* ArmorIsUseless: Averted. They can be very useful.
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* ArmorIsUseless: Averted. They can be very useful. Specific instances:
** Luso wore the Flame Robe which made him immune to Fire-based attacks during Clan Gully's [[spoiler: attack on Khamja's base]].
** Vili once had to battle a Bangaa Defender who was almost completely covered in armor, forcing her to come up with a creative way to defeat him as the armor made most of her attacks ineffective.
** Luso wore the Flame Robe which made him immune to Fire-based attacks during Clan Gully's [[spoiler: attack on Khamja's base]].
** Vili once had to battle a Bangaa Defender who was almost completely covered in armor, forcing her to come up with a creative way to defeat him as the armor made most of her attacks ineffective.
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* DeathGlare: Adelle gave one to Hurdy when he was about to mention something that contradicted her claims.
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->''"But there's one thing I do know. Today, I have to part with my carefree childhood because there's nothing bt hard work ahead."''
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->''"But there's one thing I do know. Today, I have to part with my carefree childhood because there's nothing bt but hard work ahead."''
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* HypocriticalHumour: Ensei once commented on Adelle's {{Greed}}, right before going to the buffet to steal the next day's dinner.
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* MrViceGuy: Ensei with {{Greed}} as his flaw.
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* MrViceGuy: Ensei with {{Greed}} as his flaw. Same with Adelle.
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* ThemeNaming: All named Seeq in the story are named after a type of meat.
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* ThemeNaming: All named Seeq in the story are named after a type of meat.
** First, there is T-bone.
** Second, there is Ribs.
** Third, there is Sir Loin.
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** Second, there is Ribs.
** Third, there is Sir Loin.
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** Cama Leonte. Camaleonte is Italian for chameleon. His success at blending into the [[spoiler: Archbishop guard]] reflects the animal's ability to blend into its surroundings.
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* MeaningfulName: Many
** Cheney's middle name, Difronte, is Italian for opposite, since his two jobs virtually contrast the other in function and purpose. The actual Italian term for opposite is 'di fronte', but the two separate words was combined into one to create the name.
** Kanin's middle name, Leporidae, comes from the Classification Family for Rabbits. [[spoiler: She's a Feol Viera]].
** Crockett, his name is derived from the crook of a shepherd's cane. His ability to control and herd Baknamy are reminiscent to that of a shepherd controlling a flock of sheep.
** Cheney's middle name, Difronte, is Italian for opposite, since his two jobs virtually contrast the other in function and purpose. The actual Italian term for opposite is 'di fronte', but the two separate words was combined into one to create the name.
** Kanin's middle name, Leporidae, comes from the Classification Family for Rabbits. [[spoiler: She's a Feol Viera]].
** Crockett, his name is derived from the crook of a shepherd's cane. His ability to control and herd Baknamy are reminiscent to that of a shepherd controlling a flock of sheep.
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** Khamja has one of these.
** Khamja has one of these.
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** So does the Jylland Defenders of the Peace. At the top is the Judgemaster, next are the Judges. Somewhere below them are the Officers, Captains and Judgemaster Personnel Guard.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/1/The_Tainted_Grimoire Can be read here]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1231132/cuttingmoon57 cuttingmoon57]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/1/The_Tainted_Grimoire Can be read here]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1231132/cuttingmoon57 cuttingmoon57]]
cuttingmoon57]]. First chapter was posted on 13th June 2008.
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!! Links to sub-pages
* Awesome/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the awesome entry.
* Funny/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the funny entry.
* Heartwarming/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the heartwarming entry.
* Quotes/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the quotes entry.
* Recap/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the recap entry.
* YMMV/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the your mileage may vary entry.
* Awesome/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the awesome entry.
* Funny/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the funny entry.
* Heartwarming/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the heartwarming entry.
* Quotes/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the quotes entry.
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* Awesome/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the awesome entry.
* Funny/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the funny entry.
* Heartwarming/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the heartwarming entry.
* Quotes/TheTaintedGrimoire, the link to the quotes entry.
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* {{Flashback}}: Several:
** Vaticus when explaining his {{Backstory}}.
** Sir Loin has flashbacked to his and Adelle's history together, and his history from before that.
** Bowen had a flashback to his memories of his wife.
** Vaticus when explaining his {{Backstory}}.
** Sir Loin has flashbacked to his and Adelle's history together, and his history from before that.
** Bowen had a flashback to his memories of his wife.
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* MrViceGuy: Ensei with {{Greed}} as his flaw.
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* FishOutOfWater: Luso, just like the games. He has however been shown slowly adjusting under his training and is learning new things about the world he is in.
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* FishOutOfWater: Luso, just like the games.getting taken from one world and being placed in another one tends to have that effect. He has however been shown slowly adjusting under his training and is learning new things about the world he is in.
