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* YouShallNotPass: Auggie says this to a Behemoth to protect [[spoiler: an unconscious Luso]]. He got interrupted by it's attack [[spoiler: but succeeds anyway]].
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* YouShallNotPass: Auggie says this to a Behemoth to protect [[spoiler: an unconscious Luso]]. He got interrupted by it's attack [[spoiler: but succeeds anyway]].anyway]].
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* Link to CrowningMomentOfFunny page: Funny/TheTaintedGrimoire
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* Link to CrowningMomentOfFunny page: Funny/TheTaintedGrimoire{{Recap}} page : Recap/TheTaintedGrimoire
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* [[spoiler: BodyguardBetrayal: Raven is actually a member of Khamja. While he and Crow are protecting Maria, their true objective is separate and more sinister but the moment Maria got involved, Raven could have killed her without remorse if it wasn't for Adelle]].
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* [[spoiler: BodyguardBetrayal: Twice]].
** [[spoiler: Raven is actually a member of Khamja. While he and Crow are protecting Maria, their true objective is separate and more sinister but the moment Maria got involved, Raven could have killed her without remorse if it wasn't forAdelle]].Adelle]].
** [[spoiler: Fasullo is actually Ewen in disguise and the whole time he spent working as the leader of Baron Beltorey's guards was just so can take something the Baron had]].
** [[spoiler: Raven is actually a member of Khamja. While he and Crow are protecting Maria, their true objective is separate and more sinister but the moment Maria got involved, Raven could have killed her without remorse if it wasn't for
** [[spoiler: Fasullo is actually Ewen in disguise and the whole time he spent working as the leader of Baron Beltorey's guards was just so can take something the Baron had]].
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* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: Ensei.
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* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: Ensei.Ensei is this sometimes.
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* TheWatson: Luso and to a lesser extent, Hurdy, get things explained to them by other characters.
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* TheWatson: Luso and to a lesser extent, Hurdy, get things they don't know about explained to them by other characters.
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* AudienceSurrogate: Luso and, to a lesser extent, Hurdy, get things they don't know about explained to them by other characters.
* {{Exposition}}: When Luso asks for details about the world he is in, other characters will be happy to oblige, though sometimes, they have to first get over their shock at Luso not knowing what to them is common knowledge.
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* FishOutOfWater: Luso, just like the games. He has however been shown slowly adjusting under his training and [[AudienceSurrogate is learning new things about the world he is in]].
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* FishOutOfWater: Luso, just like the games. He has however been shown slowly adjusting under his training and [[AudienceSurrogate is learning new things about the world he is in]].in.
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* TheWatson: Luso and to a lesser extent, Hurdy, get things explained to them by other characters.
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* Link to YourMileageMayVary page: YMMV/TheTaintedGrimoire
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* BadassInDistress: Cid, who got captured by [[spoiler: Khamja]].
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* {{Backstory}}: Several were given.
** [[spoiler: Vaticus]] explains during a lull in his battle with [[spoiler: Luso and Adelle]] what his motivations are and how he became the person he is at present.
** We see bits and pieces of Sir Loin's life, including the development of his relationship with Adelle, during the chapter where [[spoiler: he died]].
** Cheney explains to Tweigel his history with [[spoiler: Freise]] before joining House Bowen and properly explains why he left House Bowen.
** [[spoiler: Vaticus]] explains during a lull in his battle with [[spoiler: Luso and Adelle]] what his motivations are and how he became the person he is at present.
** We see bits and pieces of Sir Loin's life, including the development of his relationship with Adelle, during the chapter where [[spoiler: he died]].
** Cheney explains to Tweigel his history with [[spoiler: Freise]] before joining House Bowen and properly explains why he left House Bowen.
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* [[spoiler: ChekhovMIA: Grant, who was initially mentioned as part of the backstory of Vaticus Finch, appears in the story proper later to provide Cid with a way to enter active clan duty again after getting a serious heart injury that WhiteMagic can't cure due to how it works in the story]].
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* FlatWhat: The reaction of the crowd at the Acqua Alta when they see Luso has entered the race with a chocobo. Bear in mind that the Acqua Alta is a water race.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Luso had a period of this due to being comepletly helpless and only being able to [[spoiler: watch Sir Loin burn to death]], despite being the one to [[spoiler: defeat Vaticus Finch]]. Thankfully, Judgemaster Cid was able to talk him out of it.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Luso had a period of this due to being comepletly comepletely helpless and only being able to [[spoiler: watch Sir Loin burn to death]], despite being the one to [[spoiler: defeat Vaticus Finch]]. Thankfully, Judgemaster Cid was able to talk him out of it.it by going over how flawed that line of thinking is.
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Luso, other members of Clan Gully have joked about it.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Luso had a period of this due to being comepletly helpless and only being able to [[spoiler: watch Sir Loin burn to death]], despite being the one to [[spoiler: defeat Vaticus Finch]]. Thankfully, Judgemaster Cid was able to talk him out of it.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: This story has '''362,356''' words and '''62 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: This story has '''362,356''' '''371,242''' words and '''62 '''63 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* GotVolunteered: Luso and Villi would unwittingly be roped in as dance partners for Kanin and Adelle when they het Cheney to teach them how to dance.
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* GotVolunteered: Luso and Villi would unwittingly be roped in as dance partners for Kanin and Adelle when they het get Cheney to teach them how to dance.
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** One time, Sasasha got interrupted when two members of the Targ Wood Police putting a hand each over her mouth.
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** One time, Sasasha got interrupted when two members of the Targ Wood Police putting put a hand each over her mouth.
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** At the climax of the St. Galleria arc, after Ensei was able to give [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] proof of [[spoiler: Vaticus' crimes]], [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] sent his [[spoiler: personal guard]] to assist The Heretics defeat the [[spoiler: Archbishop Guard]]. The back-up easily defeated those that went up against them, aweing many who saw them.
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** At the climax of the St. Galleria arc, after Ensei was able to give [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] proof of [[spoiler: Vaticus' crimes]], [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] sent his [[spoiler: personal guard]] to assist The Heretics defeat the [[spoiler: Archbishop Guard]]. The back-up easily defeated those that went up against them, aweing many them. Many who saw them.them were in awe.
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* [[spoiler: AWolfInSheepsClothing: Ewen went undercover using the false name Fasullo to spy on Baron Beltorey]].
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-->[[spoiler: '''Dread Raven''']]: I'm going to turn you into ashes.
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-->[[spoiler: '''Dread Raven''']]: [[KillItWithFire I'm going to turn you into ashes.ashes]].
* [[spoiler: RedemptionEqualsDeath: Barley's final act was to try and save Cid. Ewen had him killed for that]].
* [[spoiler: RedemptionEqualsDeath: Barley's final act was to try and save Cid. Ewen had him killed for that]].
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* VillainEpisode: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/60/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 60]] focuses on Khamja and Duelhorn ending with Duelhorn [[spoiler: declaring war on Khamja]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Luso]] after learning to draw his aura and the again after being given the ability to [[spoiler: channel Mist]].
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* TeamChef: Cheney.
* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Luso]] after learning to draw his aura andthe then again after being given the ability to [[spoiler: channel Mist]].
* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Luso]] after learning to draw his aura and
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* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Luso]] after learning to draw his aura and the again after being given the ability to [[spoiler: channel Mist]].
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* VillaiousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Vaticus]] had a brief one ''before'' being defeated. He became a GracefulLoser after being defeated.
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* VillaiousBreakdown: VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Vaticus]] had a brief one ''before'' being defeated. He became a GracefulLoser after being defeated.
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* GracefulLoser: After being defeated by [[spoiler: Luso]], [[spoiler: Vaticus]] gives him an important item and supported the accusations against him when Aquila held a city-wide conference.
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* TeamChef: Cheney is the one who is most often shown cooking for the rest of Clan Gully.
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* TeamChef: Cheney is the VillaiousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Vaticus]] had a brief one who is most often shown cooking for the rest of Clan Gully.''before'' being defeated. He became a GracefulLoser after being defeated.
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** At the climax of the St. Galleria arc, after Ensei was able to give [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] proof of [[spoiler: Vaticus' crimes]], [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] sent his [[spoiler: personal guard]] to assist The Heretics defeat [[spoiler: Archbishop Guard]]. The back-up easily defeated those that went up against them, aweing many who saw them.
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** At the climax of the St. Galleria arc, after Ensei was able to give [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] proof of [[spoiler: Vaticus' crimes]], [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] sent his [[spoiler: personal guard]] to assist The Heretics defeat the [[spoiler: Archbishop Guard]]. The back-up easily defeated those that went up against them, aweing many who saw them.
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* CurbStompBattle: Early in the story, there were several people who went up against Cid and Ensei, that were defeated in just one hit.
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* CurbStompBattle: Has happened and probably will happen again.
** Early in the story, there were several people who went up against Cid and Ensei, that were defeated in just onehit.hit.
** At the climax of the St. Galleria arc, after Ensei was able to give [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] proof of [[spoiler: Vaticus' crimes]], [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] sent his [[spoiler: personal guard]] to assist The Heretics defeat [[spoiler: Archbishop Guard]]. The back-up easily defeated those that went up against them, aweing many who saw them.
** When [[spoiler: Veis and Villi]] were introduced, [[spoiler: Veis]] defeated the leader of a group of would-be thieves easily.
** Early in the story, there were several people who went up against Cid and Ensei, that were defeated in just one
** At the climax of the St. Galleria arc, after Ensei was able to give [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] proof of [[spoiler: Vaticus' crimes]], [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid]] sent his [[spoiler: personal guard]] to assist The Heretics defeat [[spoiler: Archbishop Guard]]. The back-up easily defeated those that went up against them, aweing many who saw them.
** When [[spoiler: Veis and Villi]] were introduced, [[spoiler: Veis]] defeated the leader of a group of would-be thieves easily.
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* [[spoiler: BodyguardBetrayal: Raven is actually a member of Khamja. While he and Crow are protecting Maria, their true objective is separate and more sinister but the moment Maria got involved, Raven could have killed her without remorse if it wasn't for Adelle.Adelle]].
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* ExactWords: Ewen only promised to let [[spoiler: Clan Gully]] leave the ''building'' alive.
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* AmazonBrigade: Clan Falzen, who were introduced at the beginning of the St.Galleria arc.
