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* ChickMagnet: Luso has got two girls who definitely likes him. They are Kanin and Maria.
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* PostKissCatatonia: [[spoiler: Luso]] had this after Maria kissed him on the cheek.
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* HappilyAdopted: Adelle, a Hume, is the adopted daughter of Sir Loin, a Seeq.
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* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice: Sir Loin pushed his daughter Adelle out of the way of a [[KillItWithFire Firaga]] spell, being the one who gets hit instead]].
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* PreMortemOneLiner:
-->[[spoiler: '''Dread Raven''']]: I'm going to turn you into ashes.
-->[[spoiler: '''Dread Raven''']]: I'm going to turn you into ashes.
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* AntiVillian: [[spoiler: Crow]], culminating in a HeelFaceTurn.
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* AntiVillian: AntiVillain: [[spoiler: Crow]], culminating in a HeelFaceTurn.
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* AntiVillian: [[spoiler: Crow]], culminating in a HeelFaceTurn.
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* ChoiceOfTwoWeapons: Cheney, as a hunter, uses both a bow and a hunting knife.
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* DualWielding: Luso does this sometimes.
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* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Sometimes played straight, sometimes averted/subverted.
** Played straight: [[spoiler: Crow]] took time out to explain how a certain spell was possible during a duel with Luso.
** Averted/subverted
-->'''Luso''': I still can't believe you blew up our wagon...
-->'''Adelle''': Well...I'd like to think of it more as...saving a life...
-->'''Sir Loin''': IF YOU GUYS DON'T MIND, WE COULD USE SOME HELP HERE!
** Played straight: [[spoiler: Crow]] took time out to explain how a certain spell was possible during a duel with Luso.
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-->'''Luso''': I still can't believe you blew up our wagon...
-->'''Adelle''': Well...I'd like to think of it more as...saving a life...
-->'''Sir Loin''': IF YOU GUYS DON'T MIND, WE COULD USE SOME HELP HERE!
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* ArmorIsUseless: Averted. They can be very useful.
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* BattleAura: Luso radiates this when preparing a Fighter ability.
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* BattleAura: Luso [[spoiler: Luso]] radiates this when preparing a Fighter ability.
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* StormingTheCastle: Clan Gully and their comrades had to attack [[spoiler: Khamja's base]] in Grazton to [[spoiler: save Baron Beltorey]] during the Grazton Arc.
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* StormingTheCastle: Clan Gully and their comrades had to attack [[spoiler: Khamja's base]] in Grazton to [[spoiler: save Baron Beltorey]] during the Grazton Arc.Arc.
* YouShallNotPass: Auggie says this to a Behemoth to protect [[spoiler: an unconscious Luso]]. He got interrupted by it's attack [[spoiler: but succeeds anyway]].
* YouShallNotPass: Auggie says this to a Behemoth to protect [[spoiler: an unconscious Luso]]. He got interrupted by it's attack [[spoiler: but succeeds anyway]].
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* SkeletonGovernment: Averted, just look at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/41/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 41]] where we see a huge gathering of nobles and/or politicians to discuss political matters, as well as an explanation of how the Jylland Defenders of the Peace operates in relation to the clans, explaining that all clans must register new members as well as keep a log of achievement and accomplishments.
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* SkeletonGovernment: Averted, just look at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/41/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 41]] where we see a huge gathering of nobles and/or politicians to discuss political matters, as well as an explanation of how the Jylland Defenders of the Peace operates in relation to the clans, explaining that all clans must register new members as well as keep a log of achievement and accomplishments.accomplishments.
* StormingTheCastle: Clan Gully and their comrades had to attack [[spoiler: Khamja's base]] in Grazton to [[spoiler: save Baron Beltorey]] during the Grazton Arc.
* StormingTheCastle: Clan Gully and their comrades had to attack [[spoiler: Khamja's base]] in Grazton to [[spoiler: save Baron Beltorey]] during the Grazton Arc.
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* GotVolunteered: Luso and Villi would unwittingly be roped in as dance partners for Kanin and Adelle when they het Cheney to teach them how to dance.
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* FantasticRankSystem: Khamja has one of these.
-->'''Barley''': Khamja combative forces are divided into five ranks based on skill, intelligence and power, kupo. We've got the grunts like the one you just took out, squad captains like me, platoon leaders, liutenants, and finally the division commanders.
-->'''Barley''': Khamja combative forces are divided into five ranks based on skill, intelligence and power, kupo. We've got the grunts like the one you just took out, squad captains like me, platoon leaders, liutenants, and finally the division commanders.
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* EvilVersusEvil: In [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/60/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 60 Head To Horn]] [[spoiler: Duelhorn declares war on Khamja]].
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* EvilVersusEvil: In [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/60/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 60 Head To Horn]] 60]] [[spoiler: Duelhorn declares war on Khamja]].Khamja]].
* ExtraExtraReadAllAboutIt: There is one in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/59/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 59]].
* ExtraExtraReadAllAboutIt: There is one in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/59/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 59]].
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-->'''Commander Kain: Yeah. Yeah, that's good. That's ''really good''. I've been looking forward to a war like this for years. You better bring it to us you hear? Don't you back out. You better show me a good time. I'll be waiting for it.
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-->'''Commander Kain: Kain''': Yeah. Yeah, that's good. That's ''really good''. I've been looking forward to a war like this for years. You better bring it to us you hear? Don't you back out. You better show me a good time. I'll be waiting for it.
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* [[spoiler: KilledOfForReal: Sir Loin and Barley for example]].
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* [[spoiler: KilledOfForReal: KilledOffForReal: Sir Loin and Barley for example]].
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Summary:The Grimoire of the Rift, a powerful magic tome. Luso Clemens, an average, fourteen year old boy. It asked him but one question. "One is fated to fill these barren pages. Know ye his name?" His answer would be the catalyst that changed his life forever.
The Tainted Grimoire is an AU fic where we still follow the adventures of Luso, there is still a book which records his journey and he still joins Clan Gully, '''BUT''', in this story, his older sister is Frimelda, that paladin that joins you in the game and there are many original characters and cameos from other works. The world of this story is also far more fleshed out than one in the game.
The Tainted Grimoire is an AU fic where we still follow the adventures of Luso, there is still a book which records his journey and he still joins Clan Gully, '''BUT''', in this story, his older sister is Frimelda, that paladin that joins you in the game and there are many original characters and cameos from other works. The world of this story is also far more fleshed out than one in the game.
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Description: The Tainted Grimoire is an AU fic where we still follow the adventures of Luso, there is still a book which records his journey and he still joins Clan Gully, '''BUT''', in this story, his older sister is Frimelda, that paladin that joins you in the game and there are many original characters and cameos from other works. The world of this story is also far more fleshed out than one in the game.
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* MuggingTheMonster: The Yellow Wings learned the hard way that Cid and Ensei are way out of their league.
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* FantasticRacism: There is some of this.
-->'''Cid''': Though it is not as widespread as in the past, there are still those out there who believe in racial hiearchy. Humeism is one of these. It seems they picked up on the Archadian's sense of Hume superiorty.
-->'''Cid''': Though it is not as widespread as in the past, there are still those out there who believe in racial hiearchy. Humeism is one of these. It seems they picked up on the Archadian's sense of Hume superiorty.
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* CutenessProximity: When Kanin and Maria see Auggie's pet dreamhare, they squel saying that it's cute, shocking Luso who had never seen them like that before.
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* BloodKnight: Commander Kain who debuts in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/60/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 53]], is this
-->'''Commander Kain: Yeah. Yeah, that's good. That's ''really good''. I've been looking forward to a war like this for years. You better bring it to us you hear? Don't you back out. You better show me a good time. I'll be waiting for it.
-->'''Commander Kain: Yeah. Yeah, that's good. That's ''really good''. I've been looking forward to a war like this for years. You better bring it to us you hear? Don't you back out. You better show me a good time. I'll be waiting for it.
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* [[spoiler: KilledOfForReal: Sir Loin and Barley so far.]]for example]].
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* HeroicBSOD: Adelle suffered from this after [[spoiler: her dad Sir Loin died]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Adelle suffered from this after [[spoiler: her dad Sir Loin died]]died]].
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* HalfHumanHybrid: The result of the InterspeciesRomance mentioned below. [[spoiler: Kanin is one of the Feol Viera mentioned below]].
* HeroicBSOD: Adelle suffered from this after [[spoiler: her dad Sir Loin died]]
* InterspeciesRomance: This has happened in-story, between Humes and Viera, and the resulting offspring are called Feol Viera with an [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/40/The_Tainted_Grimoire in-universe explanation]].
* HeroicBSOD: Adelle suffered from this after [[spoiler: her dad Sir Loin died]]
* InterspeciesRomance: This has happened in-story, between Humes and Viera, and the resulting offspring are called Feol Viera with an [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/40/The_Tainted_Grimoire in-universe explanation]].
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The Tainted Grimoire is an AU fic where we still follow the adventures of Luso, there is still a book which records his journey and he still joins Clan Gully, '''BUT''', in this story, his older sister is Frimelda, that paladin that joins you in the game and there are many original characters and cameos from other works.
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The Tainted Grimoire is an AU fic where we still follow the adventures of Luso, there is still a book which records his journey and he still joins Clan Gully, '''BUT''', in this story, his older sister is Frimelda, that paladin that joins you in the game and there are many original characters and cameos from other works.
works. The world of this story is also far more fleshed out than one in the game.
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The Tainted Grimoire is an AU fic where we still follow the adventures of Luso, there is still a book which records his journey and he still joins Clan Gully, '''BUT''', in this fic, his older sister is Frimelda, that paladin that joins you in the game and there are many original characters and cameos from other works.
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The Tainted Grimoire is an AU fic where we still follow the adventures of Luso, there is still a book which records his journey and he still joins Clan Gully, '''BUT''', in this fic, story, his older sister is Frimelda, that paladin that joins you in the game and there are many original characters and cameos from other works.
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** [[spoiler: JustifiedTrope: Our heroes had to disrupt that wedding for the good of the whole of St. Galleria]]
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** [[spoiler: JustifiedTrope: Our heroes had to disrupt that wedding for the good of the whole of St. Galleria]]Galleria]].
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* EvilVersusEvil: In [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/60/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 60 Head To Horn]] [[spoiler: Duelhorn declares war on Khamja]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: There is a lot of these in the fic
* {{Foreshadowing}}: There is a lot of these in the fic
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* EvilVersusEvil: In [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/60/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 60 Head To Horn]] [[spoiler: Duelhorn declares war on Khamja]]
Khamja]].
* {{Foreshadowing}}: There is a lot of these in theficstory.
* [[spoiler: KilledOfForReal: Sir Loin and Barley so far.]]
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* [[spoiler: KilledOfForReal: Sir Loin and Barley so far.]]
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* ConcertClimax: The climax of the St. Galleria arc takes place at a major wedding.
** [[spoiler: JustifiedTrope: Our heroes had to disrupt that wedding for the good of the whole of St. Galleria]]
* ConvenientlyTimedAttackFromBehind: During the climax of the St. Galleria arc, Auggie is saved from three members of the Archbishop Guard like this.
** [[spoiler: JustifiedTrope: Our heroes had to disrupt that wedding for the good of the whole of St. Galleria]]
* ConvenientlyTimedAttackFromBehind: During the climax of the St. Galleria arc, Auggie is saved from three members of the Archbishop Guard like this.
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* CurbStompBattle: Early in the story, there were several people who went up against Cid and Ensei, that were defeated in just one hit.
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* Doorstopper: This story has '''349,451''' words and '''60 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* Doorstopper: {{Doorstopper}}: This story has '''349,451''' words and '''60 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* Doorstopper: This story has '''349,451''' words and '''60 chapters''', and is '''no where near finishing yet'''.
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* BadAss: Several characters are this, be they good or evil, for example Judgemaster Cid Randell, aka the strongest man in Jylland, Illua who showed '''some''' of her power in the '''first chapter''' and Ensei Rou, who defeated 120 mages, '''without taking any damage'''.
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* BadAss: Several characters are this, be they good or evil, for example [[spoiler: Judgemaster Cid Randell, aka the strongest man in Jylland, Jylland]], Illua who showed '''some''' of her power in the '''first chapter''' and Ensei Rou, who defeated 120 mages, '''without taking any damage'''.
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* BadAss: Several characters are this, be they good or evil, for example Judgemaster Cid Randell, aka the strongest man in Jylland, Illua who showed '''some''' of her power in the '''first chapter''' and Ensei Rou, who defeated 120 mages, '''without taking any damage'''.
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* DanceBattler: Penelo is still this.
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* DanceBattler: Penelo is still this.this.
* EvilVersusEvil: In [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/60/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 60 Head To Horn]] [[spoiler: Duelhorn declares war on Khamja]]
* SkeletonGovernment: Averted, just look at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/41/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 41]] where we see a huge gathering of nobles and/or politicians to discuss political matters, as well as an explanation of how the Jylland Defenders of the Peace operates in relation to the clans, explaining that all clans must register new members as well as keep a log of achievement and accomplishments.
* EvilVersusEvil: In [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/60/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 60 Head To Horn]] [[spoiler: Duelhorn declares war on Khamja]]
* SkeletonGovernment: Averted, just look at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4318613/41/The_Tainted_Grimoire Chapter 41]] where we see a huge gathering of nobles and/or politicians to discuss political matters, as well as an explanation of how the Jylland Defenders of the Peace operates in relation to the clans, explaining that all clans must register new members as well as keep a log of achievement and accomplishments.
