Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Removed "Dead Fic". The author updated a new chapter on September 24, 2023.
Deleted line(s) 52 (click to see context) :
* DeadFic: Last updated in 2017.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Whip It Good has been disambiguated
Deleted line(s) 185 (click to see context) :
* WhipItGood: During the Battle of Tyran, the Overmind's human body is given a number of weapons, including two chainsword. He only needs one, so he takes the other's chain and remakes it into a whip.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Megalodon has been disambiguated.
Deleted line(s) 115 (click to see context) :
* {{Megalodon}}: A Zerg SeaMonster type. It's even called the Carcharlisk.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7080862/1/The-Swarm-of-War The Swarm of War]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' [=/=] ''VideoGame/{{Starcraft}}'' {{Crossover}} written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1272704/VexMaster VexMaster]]. It tells the story of James Malcolm Raynor, a nerd with knowledge of both universes killed by a car... and reincarnated as a Zerg Larva on the fallen Aiur. The guy morphs to a Drone... then a Hatchery... then a Hive Cluster... and just as he's ready to take over after Kerrigan's depowerment... the Xel'Naga artifact transports him elsewhere. From that moment, James is no more. There is a new Overmind. And that Overmind lands on a new planet. A planet just in the middle of a Warp Storm. Well, time to rebuild... and consume.
to:
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7080862/1/The-Swarm-of-War The Swarm of War]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' [=/=] ''VideoGame/{{Starcraft}}'' 40000}}''[=/=]''VideoGame/{{Starcraft}}'' {{Crossover}} written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1272704/VexMaster VexMaster]]. It tells the story of James Malcolm Raynor, a nerd with knowledge of both universes killed by a car... and reincarnated as a Zerg Larva on the fallen Aiur. The guy morphs to a Drone... then a Hatchery... then a Hive Cluster... and just as he's ready to take over after Kerrigan's depowerment... the Xel'Naga artifact transports him elsewhere. From that moment, James is no more. There is a new Overmind. And that Overmind lands on a new planet. A planet just in the middle of a Warp Storm. Well, time to rebuild... and consume.
Changed line(s) 7 (click to see context) from:
As of 2015, the story is in the process of being betaed, but is a very enjoyable one even without it.
to:
As of 2015, the story is in the process of being betaed, beta'd, but is a very enjoyable one even without it.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 19,20 (click to see context) from:
%%* BadassBoast:%%Quotes alone aren't acceptable context.
%%-->''We are the Zerg. We are the Swarm. We are the Devouring Ones. We are the God Killers. We are the Conquerors of Aiur and Destroyers of Tarsonis. We are the Unending Doom.''
%%-->''We are the Zerg. We are the Swarm. We are the Devouring Ones. We are the God Killers. We are the Conquerors of Aiur and Destroyers of Tarsonis. We are the Unending Doom.''
to:
%%-->''We
-->''We are the Zerg. We are the Swarm. We are the Devouring Ones. We are the God Killers. We are the Conquerors of Aiur and Destroyers of Tarsonis. We are the Unending Doom.''
Changed line(s) 22,25 (click to see context) from:
%%* BeehiveBarrier: Naturally, considering the Zerg shield technology comes from the Protoss.
%%* TheBattlestar: The larger Zerg [[LivingShip Living Ship]]s, like the Hive Ship.%%Are what?
%%* BewareMyStingerTail: Zerg Patriarchs have the beam firing type.
%%* BigDamnHeroes: In the final battle of arc 2.
%%* TheBattlestar: The larger Zerg [[LivingShip Living Ship]]s, like the Hive Ship.%%Are what?
%%* BewareMyStingerTail: Zerg Patriarchs have the beam firing type.
%%* BigDamnHeroes: In the final battle of arc 2.
to:
%%*
* TheBattlestar: The larger Zerg [[LivingShip Living Ship]]s, like the Hive
%%*
* BewareMyStingerTail: Zerg Patriarchs have
%%*
* BigDamnHeroes: In the final battle of arc
Changed line(s) 30,31 (click to see context) from:
%%* ABoyAndHisX: Alena and Tobi.
* BrainInAJar: Humans allowed to survive under the Swarm largely end up as these in the end.%%So far, it has not been specified how aware and of what they are.%%Confusing grammar.
* BrainInAJar: Humans allowed to survive under the Swarm largely end up as these in the end.%%So far, it has not been specified how aware and of what they are.%%Confusing grammar.
to:
* BrainInAJar: Humans allowed to survive under the Swarm largely end up as these in the
Changed line(s) 73 (click to see context) from:
%%* FromNobodyToNightmare: Starts as a nerd, ends up as... well, we'll see.%%ZCE, speculation.
to:
Changed line(s) 87,88 (click to see context) from:
%%* HumanSacrifice: Judanus. The Ruinous Powers pay him well.
%%* HumanPopsicle: The Space Marines from the original ship.
%%* HumanPopsicle: The Space Marines from the original ship.
to:
%%*
* HumanPopsicle: The Space Marines from the original
Changed line(s) 91 (click to see context) from:
%%* HumongousMecha: Bugklaw's Stompa.
to:
Changed line(s) 94 (click to see context) from:
%%* ICanRuleAlone: Judanus to Ga'huld.
to:
Changed line(s) 122 (click to see context) from:
%%* MookPromotion: The Spyling[=/=]Blood Master is the SixthRanger.
to:
Changed line(s) 178,179 (click to see context) from:
%%* UsedToBeASweetKid: Alena is... quite the horror by the end of the first arc.
%%* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Changelings.
%%* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Changelings.
to:
%%* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Changelings.
Deleted line(s) 188 (click to see context) :
%%* WifeHusbandry: James/Overmind and Alena turn out to be this.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Authority Equals Asskicking has been renamed.
Deleted line(s) 17 (click to see context) :
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Overmind makes powerful bodies for himself and his Champions. Also, Warboss Bugklaw gets bigger and stronger with each encounter, until he's six meters tall.
Added DiffLines:
* RankScalesWithAsskicking: The Overmind makes powerful bodies for himself and his Champions. Also, Warboss Bugklaw gets bigger and stronger with each encounter, until he's six meters tall.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,4 (click to see context) from:
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7080862/1/The-Swarm-of-War The Swarm of War]] is a ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' [=/=] ''VideoGame/{{Starcraft}}'' {{Crossover}} written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1272704/VexMaster VexMaster]]. It tells the story of James Malcolm Raynor, a nerd with knowledge of both universes killed by a car… and reincarnated as a Zerg Larva on the fallen Aiur. The guy morphs to a Drone… then a Hatchery… then a Hive Cluster… and just as he’s ready to take over after Kerrigan’s depowerment… the Xel’Naga artifact transports him elsewhere. From that moment, James is no more. There is a new Overmind. And that Overmind lands on a new planet. A planet just in the middle of a Warp Storm. Well, time to rebuild… and consume.
The first story arc – the first 40 chapters – is about the Overmind taking over the planet. The second arc – finished in summer 2014 – is about the Swarm testing itself against future enemies on a remote planet, opposed by the Imperium, the Eldar, the Chaos, [[VideoGame/Warhammer40000SpaceMarine Captain Titus]]... and [[VideoGame/DawnOfWar Scout Sergeant Cyrus]].
The first story arc – the first 40 chapters – is about the Overmind taking over the planet. The second arc – finished in summer 2014 – is about the Swarm testing itself against future enemies on a remote planet, opposed by the Imperium, the Eldar, the Chaos, [[VideoGame/Warhammer40000SpaceMarine Captain Titus]]... and [[VideoGame/DawnOfWar Scout Sergeant Cyrus]].
to:
The first story arc
Deleted line(s) 8 (click to see context) :
Changed line(s) 14,15 (click to see context) from:
* ArchNemesis: Warboss Bugklaw. [[spoiler:Too bad he doesn’t survive into the second arc.]] Judanus seems to be shaping up to be one in the later chapters.
* AssholeVictim: Elegas, when confronted by Elric and accused of having… inappropriate feelings toward his sister, merely replies that she was only a half-sister… ''[[TooDumbToLive and then asks about her daughter]]''. Mind you, said daughter is [[{{Squick}} something like seven]].
* AssholeVictim: Elegas, when confronted by Elric and accused of having… inappropriate feelings toward his sister, merely replies that she was only a half-sister… ''[[TooDumbToLive and then asks about her daughter]]''. Mind you, said daughter is [[{{Squick}} something like seven]].
to:
* ArchNemesis: Warboss Bugklaw. [[spoiler:Too bad he doesn’t doesn't survive into the second arc.]] Judanus seems to be shaping up to be one in the later chapters.
* AssholeVictim: Elegas, when confronted by Elric and accused ofhaving… having... inappropriate feelings toward his sister, merely replies that she was only a half-sister… half-sister... ''[[TooDumbToLive and then asks about her daughter]]''. Mind you, said daughter is [[{{Squick}} something like seven]].
* AssholeVictim: Elegas, when confronted by Elric and accused of
Changed line(s) 17,18 (click to see context) from:
* AttackOfThe50FootWhatever: James’ first body was a Hive sized Ultralisk variant. Gets better later, when he starts making Zerg Titans and [[LivingShip Living Ship]]s up to ten kilometers long, with bigger stuff being planned.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Overmind makes powerful bodies for himself and his Champions. Also, Warboss Bugklaw gets bigger and stronger with each encounter, until he’s six meters tall.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Overmind makes powerful bodies for himself and his Champions. Also, Warboss Bugklaw gets bigger and stronger with each encounter, until he’s six meters tall.
to:
* AttackOfThe50FootWhatever: James’ James' first body was a Hive sized Ultralisk variant. Gets better later, when he starts making Zerg Titans and [[LivingShip Living Ship]]s up to ten kilometers long, with bigger stuff being planned.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Overmind makes powerful bodies for himself and his Champions. Also, Warboss Bugklaw gets bigger and stronger with each encounter, untilhe’s he's six meters tall.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Overmind makes powerful bodies for himself and his Champions. Also, Warboss Bugklaw gets bigger and stronger with each encounter, until
Changed line(s) 21,22 (click to see context) from:
* BadassBoast:
-->''We are the Zerg. We are the Swarm. We are the Devouring Ones. We are the God Killers. We are the Conquerors of Aiur and Destroyers of Tarsonis. We are the Unending Doom.''
-->''We are the Zerg. We are the Swarm. We are the Devouring Ones. We are the God Killers. We are the Conquerors of Aiur and Destroyers of Tarsonis. We are the Unending Doom.''
to:
-->''We
%%-->''We are the Zerg. We are the Swarm. We are the Devouring Ones. We are the God Killers. We are the Conquerors of Aiur and Destroyers of Tarsonis. We are the Unending Doom.''
Changed line(s) 24,27 (click to see context) from:
* BeehiveBarrier: Naturally, considering the Zerg shield technology comes from the Protoss.
* TheBattlestar: The larger Zerg [[LivingShip Living Ship]]s, like the Hive Ship.
* BewareMyStingerTail: Zerg Patriarchs have the beam firing type.
* BigDamnHeroes: In the final battle of arc 2.
* TheBattlestar: The larger Zerg [[LivingShip Living Ship]]s, like the Hive Ship.
* BewareMyStingerTail: Zerg Patriarchs have the beam firing type.
* BigDamnHeroes: In the final battle of arc 2.
to:
*
%%* BewareMyStingerTail: Zerg Patriarchs have the beam firing type.
Changed line(s) 29,30 (click to see context) from:
** When Zerg attack humans with acid and spores, the results are… not pretty. Roots growing through your body, acid melting off flesh...
** Chapter 23 describes a battlefield full of corpses... and then a severed head comes alive - a [[PuppeteerParasite Spyling]] still has enough life in him to try searching for another host. Of course, a few tentacles must be grown first to move around.
** Chapter 23 describes a battlefield full of corpses... and then a severed head comes alive - a [[PuppeteerParasite Spyling]] still has enough life in him to try searching for another host. Of course, a few tentacles must be grown first to move around.
to:
** When Zerg attack humans with acid and spores, the results are… are... not pretty. Roots growing through your body, acid melting off flesh...
** Chapter 23 describes a battlefield full of corpses... and then a severed head comes alive- -- a [[PuppeteerParasite Spyling]] still has enough life in him to try searching for another host. Of course, a few tentacles must be grown first to move around.
** Chapter 23 describes a battlefield full of corpses... and then a severed head comes alive
Changed line(s) 32,34 (click to see context) from:
* BrainInAJar: Humans allowed to survive under the Swarm largely end up as these in the end. So far, it has not been specified how aware and of what they are.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Elegas harbored rather… inappropriate feelings toward his sister.
* CallASmeerpARabbit: Zerglings are often called “Dog-things” by humans.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Elegas harbored rather… inappropriate feelings toward his sister.
* CallASmeerpARabbit: Zerglings are often called “Dog-things” by humans.
to:
%%* ABoyAndHisX: Alena and Tobi.
* BrainInAJar: Humans allowed to survive under the Swarm largely end up as these in the end. So %%So far, it has not been specified how aware and of what they are.
are.%%Confusing grammar.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Elegas harboredrather… rather... inappropriate feelings toward his sister.
* CallASmeerpARabbit: Zerglings are often called“Dog-things” "Dog-things" by humans.
* BrainInAJar: Humans allowed to survive under the Swarm largely end up as these in the end.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Elegas harbored
* CallASmeerpARabbit: Zerglings are often called
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
* CarryABigStick: Bugklaw’s mace during his first Waaagh. As befits his name, it was made from Roach claws.
to:
* CarryABigStick: Bugklaw’s Bugklaw's mace during his first Waaagh. As befits his name, it was made from Roach claws.
Changed line(s) 40 (click to see context) from:
** The village which called for help against the Orks is attacked due to Tobias being mistaken for a daemon.
to:
** The village which called calls for help against the Orks is attacked due to Tobias being mistaken for a daemon.
Changed line(s) 42 (click to see context) from:
** During a battle between the King’s Army and the Chaos, forces led by the Loyalist Space Marines attack and wipe out the Chaos. The commander of the Kings's forces thanks them for the help... and is immediately exterminated along with his army; due to the King refusing to recognize the Space Marines as his superiors, his kingdom had been branded as heretics.
to:
** During a battle between the King’s King's Army and the Chaos, forces led by the Loyalist Space Marines attack and wipe out the Chaos. Chaos forces. The commander of the Kings's King's forces thanks them for the help... and is immediately exterminated along with his army; due to the King refusing to recognize the Space Marines as his superiors, his kingdom had been branded as heretics.
Changed line(s) 44 (click to see context) from:
* CoolSword: Judanus’ sword, once it absorbs Ga’huld the daemon.
to:
* CoolSword: Judanus’ Judanus' sword, once it absorbs Ga’huld Ga'huld the daemon.
Changed line(s) 46 (click to see context) from:
* CrossoverRelatives: It is strongly implied that the Tyranids are the descendants of another [[{{VideoGame/Starcraft}} Zerg]] group which got sucked into TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 universe in the same incident, but into another time and place.
to:
* CrossoverRelatives: It is strongly implied that the Tyranids are the descendants of another [[{{VideoGame/Starcraft}} Zerg]] Zerg group which got sucked into TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 '' Warhammer 40,000'' universe in the same incident, but into another time and place.
Changed line(s) 53 (click to see context) from:
* DealWithTheDevil: Not counting the obvious examples for the Chaos Marines, there is Judanus' deal with Ahriman [[spoiler:to get him into Warp before he’s killed by the Swarm]].
to:
* DealWithTheDevil: Not counting the obvious examples for the Chaos Marines, there is Judanus' deal with Ahriman [[spoiler:to get him into Warp before he’s he's killed by the Swarm]].
Changed line(s) 62 (click to see context) from:
* EasyLogistics: Averted. There are a lot of issues with feeding an army a million strong, and the Ork invasion runs into significant problems once they find out their spores don’t grow in Creep.
to:
* EasyLogistics: Averted. There are a lot of issues with feeding an army a million strong, and the Ork invasion runs into significant problems once they find out their spores don’t don't grow in Creep.
Changed line(s) 65 (click to see context) from:
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Played with. Enough of James remains in the Overmind to care for Alena, but it later turns a good part of it is attraction to her psyker talent. It doesn’t tend to extend to other children, in any case (although quite a few ''are'' spared for PragmaticVillainy purposes). Chapter 64 has a Zerg Matriarch having... some strange sensations connected with an Imperial Guard commander, eventually appearing before him in a humanoid form for a talk. And then we are introduced to James and Alena's child...
to:
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Played with. Enough of James remains in the Overmind to care for Alena, but it later turns a good part of it is attraction to her psyker talent. It doesn’t doesn't tend to extend to other children, in any case (although quite a few ''are'' spared for PragmaticVillainy purposes). Chapter 64 has a Zerg Matriarch having... some strange sensations connected with an Imperial Guard commander, eventually appearing before him in a humanoid form for a talk. And then we are introduced to James and Alena's child...
Changed line(s) 68 (click to see context) from:
* FalseFlagOperation: In the second story arc, a Zerg force is lost in a minor Warp anomaly and lands on an Imperium world. Investigation reveals LaserGuidedAmnesia in the colony’s memories, which implies artificial causes with hints pointing toward [[spoiler:the Eldar and their psyker powers]]. However, Volran guesses correctly that the real culprit is [[spoiler:the Overmind, since only he could have done such a precise work]]. The next chapter reveals [[spoiler:it was an Eldar attack all right, but the Overmind attempted to erase the evidence for his own reasons.]]
to:
* FalseFlagOperation: In the second story arc, a Zerg force is lost in a minor Warp anomaly and lands on an Imperium world. Investigation reveals LaserGuidedAmnesia in the colony’s colony's memories, which implies artificial causes with hints pointing toward [[spoiler:the Eldar and their psyker powers]]. However, Volran guesses correctly that the real culprit is [[spoiler:the Overmind, since only he could have done such a precise work]]. The next chapter reveals [[spoiler:it was an Eldar attack all right, but the Overmind attempted to erase the evidence for his own reasons.]]
Changed line(s) 70 (click to see context) from:
* FatalFlaw: The remains of James’ human overconfidence cause quite a bit of trouble at first. Matriarch Asmodeus takes heavy casualties due to her reluctance to use proper recon, leading to her being replaced.
to:
* FatalFlaw: The remains of James’ James' human overconfidence cause quite a bit of trouble at first. Matriarch Asmodeus takes heavy casualties due to her reluctance to use proper recon, leading to her being replaced.
Changed line(s) 73,74 (click to see context) from:
* FlauntingYourFleets: Chapter 46 describes a fleet of tens of thousands of [[LivingShip Living Ship]]s at the start of the Zerg expansion, and that’s just the ones in the kilometer and above size category.
* FromNobodyToNightmare: Starts as a nerd, ends up as… well, we’ll see.
* FromNobodyToNightmare: Starts as a nerd, ends up as… well, we’ll see.
to:
* FlauntingYourFleets: Chapter 46 describes a fleet of tens of thousands of [[LivingShip Living Ship]]s at the start of the Zerg expansion, and that’s that's just the ones in the kilometer and above size category.
* %%* FromNobodyToNightmare: Starts as a nerd, ends up as… as... well, we’ll we'll see.%%ZCE, speculation.
Changed line(s) 82 (click to see context) from:
** The Host’s attack against Bugklaw’s forces starts with him summoning a small army of Zerg and ''flinging'' them at the Ork tanks and Stompa.
to:
** The Host’s Host's attack against Bugklaw’s Bugklaw's forces starts with him summoning a small army of Zerg and ''flinging'' them at the Ork tanks and Stompa.
Changed line(s) 84,85 (click to see context) from:
* GunshipRescue: During the Imperium’s battle with the Zerg, a rampaging Ultralisk is destroyed by Valkyrie gunships. Then, a massive wave of enemies comes, too much for the gunships. All seems lost, but then [[spoiler:a KillSat network reactivates. Kind of a PyrrhicVictory though; the humans take enormous casualties themselves.]]
* [[ABoyAndHisX A Girl and her Zergling]]: Alena and Tobi.
* [[ABoyAndHisX A Girl and her Zergling]]: Alena and Tobi.
to:
* GunshipRescue: During the Imperium’s Imperium's battle with the Zerg, a rampaging Ultralisk is destroyed by Valkyrie gunships. Then, a massive wave of enemies comes, too much for the gunships. All seems lost, but then [[spoiler:a KillSat network reactivates. Kind of a PyrrhicVictory though; the humans take enormous casualties themselves.]]
* [[ABoyAndHisX A Girl and her Zergling]]: Alena and Tobi.]]
* [[ABoyAndHisX A Girl and her Zergling]]: Alena and Tobi.
Changed line(s) 88,91 (click to see context) from:
* HormoneAddledTeenager: The ''Overmind'' goes through such a stage a few months after arriving in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' universe. Doesn’t quite work the way it does for humans, but it’s enough for some confusion. Then Alena goes through the same… enough for them both to be confused.
* HumanSacrifice: Judanus, naturally. The Ruinous Powers pay him well.
* HumanPopsicle: The Space Marines from the original ship.
* HumansAreBastards: There is an off handed mention of James adding the “boundless cruelty of a human” to the Swarm.
* HumanSacrifice: Judanus, naturally. The Ruinous Powers pay him well.
* HumanPopsicle: The Space Marines from the original ship.
* HumansAreBastards: There is an off handed mention of James adding the “boundless cruelty of a human” to the Swarm.
to:
* HormoneAddledTeenager: The ''Overmind'' goes through such a stage a few months after arriving in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' universe. Doesn’t Doesn't quite work the way it does for humans, but it’s it's enough for some confusion. Then Alena goes through the same… same... enough for them both to be confused.
* %%* HumanSacrifice: Judanus, naturally.Judanus. The Ruinous Powers pay him well.
* %%* HumanPopsicle: The Space Marines from the original ship.
* HumansAreBastards: There is anoff handed offhanded mention of James adding the “boundless "boundless cruelty of a human” human" to the Swarm.
* HumansAreBastards: There is an
Changed line(s) 93 (click to see context) from:
* HumongousMecha: Bugklaw’s Stompa.
to:
Changed line(s) 96 (click to see context) from:
* ICanRuleAlone: Judanus to Ga’huld.
to:
Changed line(s) 103,105 (click to see context) from:
** The Swarm’s first attack against an Imperium fleet starts with dozens of asteroids (with shield disruption fields). One Cobra Class Destroyer makes a HeroicSacrifice, the rest survive, although not completely unscathed.
** Chapter 63 has the tables turned - a Chaos attack on a Zerg fleet starts with a bombardment by ''an entire shattered Emperor-class battleship''.
* KissOfDeath: The Blood Master exchanging his body for that of a Chaos Terminator. He even calls it “the kiss of your doom”. Not the slightest bit erotic, of course. Then there is a Krakenlisk’s attack, which involves grabbing an enemy ''starship'' and blasting it point blank with a BreathWeapon.
** Chapter 63 has the tables turned - a Chaos attack on a Zerg fleet starts with a bombardment by ''an entire shattered Emperor-class battleship''.
* KissOfDeath: The Blood Master exchanging his body for that of a Chaos Terminator. He even calls it “the kiss of your doom”. Not the slightest bit erotic, of course. Then there is a Krakenlisk’s attack, which involves grabbing an enemy ''starship'' and blasting it point blank with a BreathWeapon.
to:
** The Swarm’s Swarm's first attack against an Imperium fleet starts with dozens of asteroids (with shield disruption fields). One Cobra Class Destroyer makes a HeroicSacrifice, the rest survive, although not completely unscathed.
** Chapter 63 has the tables turned- -- a Chaos attack on a Zerg fleet starts with a bombardment by ''an entire shattered Emperor-class battleship''.
* KissOfDeath: The Blood Master exchanging his body for that of a Chaos Terminator. He even calls it“the "the kiss of your doom”.doom". Not the slightest bit erotic, of course. Then there is a Krakenlisk’s Krakenlisk's attack, which involves grabbing an enemy ''starship'' and blasting it point blank with a BreathWeapon.
** Chapter 63 has the tables turned
* KissOfDeath: The Blood Master exchanging his body for that of a Chaos Terminator. He even calls it
Changed line(s) 107 (click to see context) from:
* LastStand: Lord Hebaras against the Swarm. Eblas against Judanus’ forces.
to:
* LastStand: Lord Hebaras against the Swarm. Eblas against Judanus’ Judanus' forces.
Changed line(s) 109 (click to see context) from:
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: James accepts his reincarnation very quickly. Then he builds an empire within months. Then he gets to the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' universe… well, it’s technically not him anymore, but still, he develops a new plan quickly enough.
to:
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: James accepts his reincarnation very quickly. Then he builds an empire within months. Then he gets to the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' universe… ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' universe... well, it’s it's technically not him anymore, but still, he develops a new plan quickly enough.
Changed line(s) 112,113 (click to see context) from:
* LostColony: They are the descendants of a destroyed warship’s crew, at least the ruling class is. The planet was already settled by the time they arrived, and they took over.
* LoveIsInTheAir: The entire royal family and the court are destroyed by [[spoiler:Alena’s pheromones. And perhaps her psyker power as well.]]
* LoveIsInTheAir: The entire royal family and the court are destroyed by [[spoiler:Alena’s pheromones. And perhaps her psyker power as well.]]
to:
* LostColony: They are the descendants of a destroyed warship’s warship's crew, at least the ruling class is. The planet was already settled by the time they arrived, and they took over.
* LoveIsInTheAir: The entire royal family and the court are destroyed by[[spoiler:Alena’s [[spoiler:Alena's pheromones. And perhaps her psyker power as well.]]
* LoveIsInTheAir: The entire royal family and the court are destroyed by
Changed line(s) 116,118 (click to see context) from:
* MeaningfulRename: After Char, the name “James” isn’t used often, except in some private concersations. There is only the new Overmind. After the first arc, the planet upon which it occurred is named New Char, although it is unclear whether it had a name earlier.
* {{Megalodon}}: A Zerg SeaMonster type. It’s even called the Carcharlisk.
* MeleeATrois: Five sides in the first arc. 1)The King’s Army. 2) The Space Marines and Duke Verin’s forces. 3) Judanus with his Chaos Marines and cultists. 4) Bugklaw with his Orks. 5) The Swarm. The second ark has the Swarm, the Imperium Inquisition, Chaos, Eldar, and [[spoiler:Vegin, although it turns out he is actually with the Chaos.]] In one of the intermission chapters, the Swarm manipulates the Orks, Imperium and Eldar into that, with Dark Eldar and Chaos joining in later.
* {{Megalodon}}: A Zerg SeaMonster type. It’s even called the Carcharlisk.
* MeleeATrois: Five sides in the first arc. 1)The King’s Army. 2) The Space Marines and Duke Verin’s forces. 3) Judanus with his Chaos Marines and cultists. 4) Bugklaw with his Orks. 5) The Swarm. The second ark has the Swarm, the Imperium Inquisition, Chaos, Eldar, and [[spoiler:Vegin, although it turns out he is actually with the Chaos.]] In one of the intermission chapters, the Swarm manipulates the Orks, Imperium and Eldar into that, with Dark Eldar and Chaos joining in later.
to:
* MeaningfulRename: After Char, the name “James” isn’t "James" isn't used often, except in some private concersations.conversations. There is only the new Overmind. After the first arc, the planet upon which it occurred is named New Char, although it is unclear whether it had a name earlier.
* {{Megalodon}}: A Zerg SeaMonster type.It’s It's even called the Carcharlisk.
* MeleeATrois: Five sides in the first arc.1)The King’s 1) The King's Army. 2) The Space Marines and Duke Verin’s Verin's forces. 3) Judanus with his Chaos Marines and cultists. 4) Bugklaw with his Orks. 5) The Swarm. The second ark has the Swarm, the Imperium Inquisition, Chaos, Eldar, and [[spoiler:Vegin, although it turns out he is actually with the Chaos.]] In one of the intermission chapters, the Swarm manipulates the Orks, Imperium and Eldar into that, with Dark Eldar and Chaos joining in later.
* {{Megalodon}}: A Zerg SeaMonster type.
* MeleeATrois: Five sides in the first arc.
Changed line(s) 124,127 (click to see context) from:
* MookPromotion: The Spyling[=/=]Blood Master is now the SixthRanger.
* MultipurposeTongue Alena can use hers as a [[CombatTentacles Combat Tentacle]].
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: The first Host and its bodyguards all have four arms. And that’s not counting all the CombatTentacles and Kerrigan style wings.
* MundaneUtility: The Ultralisks’ SharpenedToASingleAtom Kaiser Blades turn out to be very useful for cutting down trees.
* MultipurposeTongue Alena can use hers as a [[CombatTentacles Combat Tentacle]].
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: The first Host and its bodyguards all have four arms. And that’s not counting all the CombatTentacles and Kerrigan style wings.
* MundaneUtility: The Ultralisks’ SharpenedToASingleAtom Kaiser Blades turn out to be very useful for cutting down trees.
to:
*
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: The first Host and its bodyguards all have four arms. And
* MundaneUtility: The
Changed line(s) 133 (click to see context) from:
* NoSell: Theq’aras shoots the Blood Master with a full volley from a Meltagun. The guy gets knocked back a few meters… and then thanks the Chaos Terminator for the experience – now the Swarm knows what a point blank Meltagun blast is like.
to:
* NoSell: Theq’aras Theq'aras shoots the Blood Master with a full volley from a Meltagun. The guy gets knocked back a few meters… meters... and then thanks the Chaos Terminator for the experience – -- now the Swarm knows what a point blank Meltagun blast is like.
Changed line(s) 139,145 (click to see context) from:
* PhlebotinumOverload: The Overmind’s first bite of the Warp Storm is enough to send him into a coma. After that, he’s careful not to bite off more than he can chew.
* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Alena’s mind grows from 5 to 16 in a matter of months. Then, an adult looking Zerg/human body is made for her.
* PowerCreepPowerSeep: When the Imperium encounters the Zerg for the first time, they are much easier to dispatch than one would expect from the earlier chapters. [[spoiler:That’s because it’s a LostColony which lacks some of the upgrades]].
* [[PowerCrystal Power Crystal]]s: The Khaydarin Crystals serve as that. Also, [[spoiler:at the end of the first arc, the temporary success of the human forces is because Alena ordered to put small amethysts in all weapons, with her and the Spylings regularly charging them up with psionic energy.]]
* PragmaticVillainy: A lot of children are spared – because they can grow up to become powerful psykers, or, failing that, workers producing advanced equipment.
* PuppeteerParasite: The Spylings are capable of consuming a human brain and then taking over from inside the empty skull – with all of the target’s memories, of course.
* PyrrhicVictory:
* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Alena’s mind grows from 5 to 16 in a matter of months. Then, an adult looking Zerg/human body is made for her.
* PowerCreepPowerSeep: When the Imperium encounters the Zerg for the first time, they are much easier to dispatch than one would expect from the earlier chapters. [[spoiler:That’s because it’s a LostColony which lacks some of the upgrades]].
* [[PowerCrystal Power Crystal]]s: The Khaydarin Crystals serve as that. Also, [[spoiler:at the end of the first arc, the temporary success of the human forces is because Alena ordered to put small amethysts in all weapons, with her and the Spylings regularly charging them up with psionic energy.]]
* PragmaticVillainy: A lot of children are spared – because they can grow up to become powerful psykers, or, failing that, workers producing advanced equipment.
* PuppeteerParasite: The Spylings are capable of consuming a human brain and then taking over from inside the empty skull – with all of the target’s memories, of course.
* PyrrhicVictory:
to:
* PhlebotinumOverload: The Overmind’s Overmind's first bite of the Warp Storm is enough to send him into a coma. After that, he’s he's careful not to bite off more than he can chew.
* PlotRelevantAgeUp:Alena’s Alena's mind grows from 5 to 16 in a matter of months. Then, an adult looking Zerg/human body is made for her.
* PowerCreepPowerSeep: When the Imperium encounters the Zerg for the first time, they are much easier to dispatch than one would expect from the earlier chapters.[[spoiler:That’s [[spoiler:That's because it’s it's a LostColony which lacks some of the upgrades]].
* [[PowerCrystal Power Crystal]]s: The Khaydarin Crystals serve as that. Also,[[spoiler:at at the end of the first arc, the [[spoiler:the temporary success of the human forces is because Alena ordered to put small amethysts in all weapons, with her and the Spylings regularly charging them up with psionic energy.]]
energy]].
* PragmaticVillainy: A lot of children are spared– -- because they can grow up to become powerful psykers, or, failing that, workers producing advanced equipment.
* PuppeteerParasite: The Spylings are capable of consuming a human brain and then taking over from inside the empty skull– -- with all of the target’s target's memories, of course.
*PyrrhicVictory: PyrrhicVictory:
* PlotRelevantAgeUp:
* PowerCreepPowerSeep: When the Imperium encounters the Zerg for the first time, they are much easier to dispatch than one would expect from the earlier chapters.
* [[PowerCrystal Power Crystal]]s: The Khaydarin Crystals serve as that. Also,
* PragmaticVillainy: A lot of children are spared
* PuppeteerParasite: The Spylings are capable of consuming a human brain and then taking over from inside the empty skull
*
Changed line(s) 150 (click to see context) from:
* RemovableTurretGun: Titus sees a heavy bolter during his mission to retake the facility. Unlike the usual examples, however, he has a cyborg Huscarl carry it – the weapons he carries already are heavy enough.
to:
* RemovableTurretGun: Titus sees a heavy bolter during his mission to retake the facility. Unlike the usual examples, however, he has a cyborg Huscarl carry it – -- the weapons he carries already are heavy enough.
Changed line(s) 153 (click to see context) from:
* RousingSpeech: Armanus gives the DoNotGoGentle type after it’s discovered most of his brothers have been corrupted or killed by Chaos.
to:
* RousingSpeech: Armanus gives the DoNotGoGentle type after it’s it's discovered most of his brothers have been corrupted or killed by Chaos.
Changed line(s) 156,157 (click to see context) from:
* SerialEscalation: Starts with a few hundred humans, a few hundred Orks, and the Overmind with a few dozen Zerglings… Ends up with human armies a million strong, hundreds of Chaos Space Marines, hundreds of Daemons. hundreds of thousands of Chaos Cultists, millions of Orks, and tens of millions of Zerg (with all kinds of advanced tech brought out). And all of that is ''before'' the expansion to other planets starts…
* SignificantAnagram: Sergeant Lori [[spoiler:Anela]]? And with an immediate commander named Jon [[spoiler:‘Mac’ Ronyar]] at that?
* SignificantAnagram: Sergeant Lori [[spoiler:Anela]]? And with an immediate commander named Jon [[spoiler:‘Mac’ Ronyar]] at that?
to:
* SerialEscalation: Starts with a few hundred humans, a few hundred Orks, and the Overmind with a few dozen Zerglings… Zerglings... Ends up with human armies a million strong, hundreds of Chaos Space Marines, hundreds of Daemons. hundreds of thousands of Chaos Cultists, millions of Orks, and tens of millions of Zerg (with all kinds of advanced tech brought out). And all of that is ''before'' the expansion to other planets starts…
starts...
* SignificantAnagram: Sergeant Lori [[spoiler:Anela]]? And with an immediate commander named Jon[[spoiler:‘Mac’ [[spoiler:"Mac" Ronyar]] at that?
* SignificantAnagram: Sergeant Lori [[spoiler:Anela]]? And with an immediate commander named Jon
Changed line(s) 164 (click to see context) from:
* TastesLikeChicken: The Overmind compares the taste of daemon essences to human food… although chicken isn’t on the list.
to:
* TastesLikeChicken: The Overmind compares the taste of daemon essences to human food… food... although chicken isn’t on the list.
Changed line(s) 167 (click to see context) from:
* TeleportSpam: Bugklaw does this at the end of the first arc… after using ''a lot of teleporters'' for a surprise invasion.
to:
* TeleportSpam: Bugklaw does this at the end of the first arc… arc... after using ''a lot of teleporters'' for a surprise invasion.
Changed line(s) 170 (click to see context) from:
* ThoseWereOnlyTheirScouts: In the first arc, the Zerg had most of their units burrow and hibernate, with little outside indication about the real size of their army. The Orks turn out to have an army millions strong on a remote archipelago. In the second arc, the Imperium has its first encounter with the Zerg… a rather degraded LostColony…
to:
* ThoseWereOnlyTheirScouts: In the first arc, the Zerg had most of their units burrow and hibernate, with little outside indication about the real size of their army. The Orks turn out to have an army millions strong on a remote archipelago. In the second arc, the Imperium has its first encounter with the Zerg… Zerg... a rather degraded LostColony…LostColony...
Changed line(s) 172,173 (click to see context) from:
* TimeSkip: After the end of the first arc, the Overmind rules the planet, but cannot expand beyond until he consumes enough of the Warp Storm to clear the way. It takes decades, but of course there isn’t much to tell about.
* TookALevelInBadass: The new Swarm, the new units, Warboss Bugklaw…
* TookALevelInBadass: The new Swarm, the new units, Warboss Bugklaw…
to:
* TimeSkip: After the end of the first arc, the Overmind rules the planet, but cannot expand beyond until he consumes enough of the Warp Storm to clear the way. It takes decades, but of course there isn’t isn't much to tell about.
* TookALevelInBadass: The new Swarm, the new units, WarbossBugklaw…Bugklaw...
* TookALevelInBadass: The new Swarm, the new units, Warboss
Changed line(s) 178,181 (click to see context) from:
* UpgradeArtifact: Judanus’ transformed Power Sword grants him spellcasting abilities thanks to the daemon trapped inside.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: Alena is… quite the horror by the end of the first arc.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Changelings.
* WaveMotionGun: The Lance cannon serves as one in the first arc. Two have appeared, and each was a BIG trouble.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: Alena is… quite the horror by the end of the first arc.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Changelings.
* WaveMotionGun: The Lance cannon serves as one in the first arc. Two have appeared, and each was a BIG trouble.
to:
* UpgradeArtifact: Judanus’ Judanus' transformed Power Sword grants him spellcasting abilities thanks to the daemon trapped inside.
* %%* UsedToBeASweetKid: Alena is… is... quite the horror by the end of the first arc.
* %%* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Changelings.
* WaveMotionGun: The Lance cannon serves as one in the first arc. Two have appeared, and each was aBIG ''big'' trouble.
* WaveMotionGun: The Lance cannon serves as one in the first arc. Two have appeared, and each was a
Changed line(s) 184,185 (click to see context) from:
* WeHaveReserves: The Overmind is perfectly willing to sacrifice hundreds of thousands of creatures to delay Bugklaw’s Stompa for a single day. Later, at the end of Arc 2, Volran assaults an impregnable fortress... by sending creatures at it until the Imperium RagnarokProof weapons break down from constant firing.
* WeWillMeetAgain: the Daemon Prince Nar’heskor screams it at the Zerg when he is forced to flee a battle. [[spoiler:doesn't happen; Judanus pulls a {{Starscream}} about ten seconds later.]]
* WeWillMeetAgain: the Daemon Prince Nar’heskor screams it at the Zerg when he is forced to flee a battle. [[spoiler:doesn't happen; Judanus pulls a {{Starscream}} about ten seconds later.]]
to:
* WeHaveReserves: The Overmind is perfectly willing to sacrifice hundreds of thousands of creatures to delay Bugklaw’s Bugklaw's Stompa for a single day. Later, at the end of Arc 2, Volran assaults an impregnable fortress... by sending creatures at it until the Imperium RagnarokProof weapons break down from constant firing.
* WeWillMeetAgain: the Daemon PrinceNar’heskor Nar'heskor screams it at the Zerg when he is forced to flee a battle. [[spoiler:doesn't happen; Judanus pulls a {{Starscream}} about ten seconds later.]]
* WeWillMeetAgain: the Daemon Prince
Changed line(s) 189,190 (click to see context) from:
* WifeHusbandry: James/Overmind and Alena turn out to be this.
* WorfEffect: The Overmind’s first mental battle is against [[http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Ahzek_Ahriman Ahzek Ahriman]]. That’s a ten thousand years old Badass with knowledge and power only surpassed by the Greater Daemons and Primarchs… and he’s completely [[CurbStomp Curb Stomp]]ed. At the end of arc 2, a hastily prepared Overmind Host takes out (barely) an Avatar of Khaine. Volran seems to suffer from the trope as well - as the Champion most inclined toward direct combat and brute strength, he was killed twice already.
* WorfEffect: The Overmind’s first mental battle is against [[http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Ahzek_Ahriman Ahzek Ahriman]]. That’s a ten thousand years old Badass with knowledge and power only surpassed by the Greater Daemons and Primarchs… and he’s completely [[CurbStomp Curb Stomp]]ed. At the end of arc 2, a hastily prepared Overmind Host takes out (barely) an Avatar of Khaine. Volran seems to suffer from the trope as well - as the Champion most inclined toward direct combat and brute strength, he was killed twice already.
to:
* WorfEffect: The
Changed line(s) 193 (click to see context) from:
* YearInsideHourOutside: The planet upon which the first arc occurs is trapped inside a Warp Storm. Inside, over five centuries have passed. Outside, it’s a single century at the most. [[spoiler:For an orbiting abandoned starship in the Storm itself – ten hours.]]
to:
* YearInsideHourOutside: The planet upon which the first arc occurs is trapped inside a Warp Storm. Inside, over five centuries have passed. Outside, it’s it's a single century at the most. [[spoiler:For an orbiting abandoned starship in the Storm itself – -- ten hours.]]
Changed line(s) 195,196 (click to see context) from:
* YouAreInCommandNow: In chapter 45, after the battle is finished, Lieutenant Worak realizes he’s the only officer alive in his regiment. Naturally, he then reports to Captain Titus.
* YouMonster: Elegas’ final words to Elric. Elric’s reply is “Well, I am a monster now, Elegas”.
* YouMonster: Elegas’ final words to Elric. Elric’s reply is “Well, I am a monster now, Elegas”.
to:
* YouAreInCommandNow: In chapter 45, after the battle is finished, Lieutenant Worak realizes he’s he's the only officer alive in his regiment. Naturally, he then reports to Captain Titus.
* YouMonster:Elegas’ Elegas' final words to Elric. Elric’s Elric's reply is “Well, "Well, I am a monster now, Elegas”.Elegas".
* YouMonster:
Changed line(s) 198,199 (click to see context) from:
* YouShallNotPass: The Imperium’s attitude toward the Zerg in the second arc.
* ZergRush: [[TheBigGuy Volran]] actually has it as a tactic – a psionically reinforced stampede of a million Zerg isn’t easy to stop.
* ZergRush: [[TheBigGuy Volran]] actually has it as a tactic – a psionically reinforced stampede of a million Zerg isn’t easy to stop.
to:
* YouShallNotPass: The Imperium’s Imperium's attitude toward the Zerg in the second arc.
* ZergRush: [[TheBigGuy Volran]] actually has it as a tactic– -- a psionically reinforced stampede of a million Zerg isn’t easy to stop.stop.
----
* ZergRush: [[TheBigGuy Volran]] actually has it as a tactic
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
Deleted line(s) 179 (click to see context) :
* UpToEleven: After the Overmind’s upgrades Leviathan is a kilometer long and wide with massive firepower. Then, he introduces the Hive Ship which can ''give birth'' to these, three at a time.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* CrossoverRelatives: It is strongly implied that the Tyranids are the descendants of another [[{{VideoGame/Starcraft}} Zerg]] group which got sucked into TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 universe in the same incident, but into another time and place.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 46 (click to see context) from:
* CurbStompBattle: The first Warboss against the Ultralisk, then the Kingdom forces against the Chaos. Alena and the Host deliver these to… well, whatever they have encountered in the first arc. An Avatar of Khaine turned out to be much more of a problem.
to:
* CurbStompBattle: The first Warboss against the Ultralisk, then the Kingdom forces against the Chaos. Alena and the Host deliver these to… to... well, whatever they have encountered in the first arc. An Avatar of Khaine turned out to be much more of a problem.
Changed line(s) 52 (click to see context) from:
* DealWithTheDevil: Not counting the obvious examples for the Chaos Marines, there is Judanus’ deal with Ahriman [[spoiler:to get him into Warp before he’s killed by the Swarm]].
to:
* DealWithTheDevil: Not counting the obvious examples for the Chaos Marines, there is Judanus’ Judanus' deal with Ahriman [[spoiler:to get him into Warp before he’s killed by the Swarm]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Removing Five Man Band misuse, dewicking Everythings Squishier With Cephalopods per TRS: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=1550399011005143700
Deleted line(s) 65 (click to see context) :
* EverythingsSquishierWithCephalopods: The Krakenlisk.
Deleted line(s) 73,77 (click to see context) :
* FiveManBand: Seems to shape up for this, but Hargen and Elric are yet to express their traits enough to be sure.
** The Overmind: TheLeader.
** Alena: TheLancer[=/=]TheChick (although the last quality is only seen when inside the virtual reality).
** Volran: TheBigGuy – and apparently smarter than can be expected.
** Blood Master: TheSixthRanger.
** The Overmind: TheLeader.
** Alena: TheLancer[=/=]TheChick (although the last quality is only seen when inside the virtual reality).
** Volran: TheBigGuy – and apparently smarter than can be expected.
** Blood Master: TheSixthRanger.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Green Eyes — no longer a trope
Deleted line(s) 86 (click to see context) :
* GreenEyes: Alena, at least before she joins the Swarm.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 135 (click to see context) from:
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The Swarm's command creatures have names like [[Literature/TheBible Lucifer]], [[VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft Anub'arak]], [[Franchise/StarWars Maul]] and [[Literature/LordOfTheRings Shelob]].
to:
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The Swarm's command creatures have names like [[Literature/TheBible Lucifer]], [[VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft Anub'arak]], [[Franchise/StarWars Maul]] and [[Literature/LordOfTheRings [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Shelob]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Has nothing to do with familiarity with in-univeres fiction.
Changed line(s) 98 (click to see context) from:
* HumansAreSpecial: The new Overmind is certainly much more creative than the first one. And GenreSavvy enough about the trope.
to:
* HumansAreSpecial: The new Overmind is certainly much more creative than the first one. And GenreSavvy savvy enough about the trope.
Changed line(s) 180 (click to see context) from:
* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: The Overmind is GenreSavvy enough not to try absorbing Chaos Space Marines, despite the usefulness of the Gene-seeds for his plans.
to:
* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: The Overmind is GenreSavvy issavvy enough not to try absorbing Chaos Space Marines, despite the usefulness of the Gene-seeds for his plans.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:The Overmind didn't expect its mere presence to purge Guilliman's slumbering form of the Chaos corruption in his wound, allowing for the possibility of an early revival.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 159 (click to see context) from:
* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler:Chapter 86 ends with the Overmind presenting one to Calgar: Either stop the Zerg from taking Guilliman or kill the Swarmlord while its weak and save Macragge from the Tyranids.]]
to:
* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler:Chapter 86 ends with the Overmind presenting one to Calgar: Either either stop the Zerg from taking Guilliman or kill the Swarmlord while its weak and save it's weak, saving Macragge and the Ultramarines from the Tyranids.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 140 (click to see context) from:
* OffTheRails: The Overmind has decided to use its position in the timeline to change certain aspects. [[spoiler:Most interestingly, knowing of the first Tyranid advances has allowed it to manipulate certain events so the Imperium is better prepared against Hive Fleet Behemoth in order to eventually change the timeline. It appears to be successful, forcing Marneus Calgar to choose between allowing the Zerg Overmind to consume his Primarch or destroying the Tyranid Hive Fleet entirely, saving Macragge and the Ultramarines.]]
to:
* OffTheRails: The Overmind has decided to use its position in the timeline to change certain aspects. [[spoiler:Most interestingly, knowing of the first Tyranid advances has allowed it to manipulate certain events so the Imperium is better prepared against Hive Fleet Behemoth in order to eventually change the timeline. It appears to be successful, forcing Marneus Calgar to choose between allowing the Zerg Overmind to consume his Primarch or destroying the Tyranid Hive Fleet entirely, saving Macragge and the Ultramarines.his Chapter.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 140 (click to see context) from:
* OffTheRails: The Overmind has decided to use its position in the timeline to change certain aspects. [[spoiler:Most interestingly, knowing of the first Tyranid advances has allowed it to manipulate certain events so the Imperium is better prepared against Hive Fleet Behemoth in order to eventually change the timeline to ensure Macragge falls to the Zerg. While certain details had to be fine-tuned, the first part has been completed with Marneus Calgar's victory over the Tyranids in Prandium.]]
to:
* OffTheRails: The Overmind has decided to use its position in the timeline to change certain aspects. [[spoiler:Most interestingly, knowing of the first Tyranid advances has allowed it to manipulate certain events so the Imperium is better prepared against Hive Fleet Behemoth in order to eventually change the timeline timeline. It appears to ensure be successful, forcing Marneus Calgar to choose between allowing the Zerg Overmind to consume his Primarch or destroying the Tyranid Hive Fleet entirely, saving Macragge falls to and the Zerg. While certain details had to be fine-tuned, the first part has been completed with Marneus Calgar's victory over the Tyranids in Prandium.Ultramarines.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 140 (click to see context) from:
* OffTheRails: The Overmind has decided to use its position in the timeline to change certain aspects. [[spoiler:Most interestingly, knowing of the first Tyranid advances has allowed it to manipulate certain events so the Imperium is better prepared against Hive Fleet Behemoth in order to eventually change the timeline to ensure Macragge falls to the Zerg. While certain details had to be fine-tuned, the first part has been completed with Marneus Calgar's victory over the Hive Tyrant.]]
to:
* OffTheRails: The Overmind has decided to use its position in the timeline to change certain aspects. [[spoiler:Most interestingly, knowing of the first Tyranid advances has allowed it to manipulate certain events so the Imperium is better prepared against Hive Fleet Behemoth in order to eventually change the timeline to ensure Macragge falls to the Zerg. While certain details had to be fine-tuned, the first part has been completed with Marneus Calgar's victory over the Hive Tyrant.Tyranids in Prandium.]]