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** The TimeSkip starts with Mary mentioning she wrote a ''VideoGame/JackJeanne'' fan fic, and later reveals she owns two pit bulls named [[Manga/TheCaseStudyOfVanitas Noe and Vanitas.]]



** [[spoiler: Irene is also unmentioned, leaving it unclear if she had died, left town trying to track down Dana again, or if she’s still in Pittsburg. The Summers appear to have no relationship or interest in one with her, considering what a {{Jerkass}} she is.]]

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** [[spoiler: Irene is also unmentioned, leaving it unclear if she had died, left town trying to track down Dana again, or if she’s still in Pittsburg.Pittsburgh. The Summers appear to have no relationship or interest in one with her, considering what a {{Jerkass}} she is.]]
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** [[spoiler: Since Dana had cut herself out of the Summers’ lives outside of child support checks, it’s unknown where she is now or what happened to her during the six-year time skip]].
** [[spoiler: Irene is also unmentioned, leaving it unclear if she had died, left town trying to track down Dana again, or if she’s still in Pittsburg. The Summers appear to have no relationship or interest in one with her, considering what a {{Jerkass}} she is.]]
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* CoolTeacher: Mr. Bryant, Mary's fourth-grade teacher, is a kind, friendly, supportive man who defends her when Dana gives her a hard time about her stimming and is quick to punish Greg for bullying her. He even calls out Greg's apathy in regards to Mary's disappearance, and although he also has to punish Mary's friend Caitlin for fighting with him, he's at the very least fair. He also volunteers with the search parties to help find Mary. He later helps Greg learn how his bad behavior comes off to others, causing Greg to reach a HeelRealization.

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* CoolTeacher: Mr. Bryant, Mary's fourth-grade teacher, is a kind, friendly, supportive man who defends her when Dana gives her a hard time about her stimming and is quick to punish Greg for bullying her. He even calls out Greg's apathy in regards to Mary's disappearance, and although he also has to punish Mary's friend Caitlin for fighting with him, he's at the very least fair. He also volunteers with the search parties to help find Mary. He later helps Greg learn how his bad behavior comes off to others, causing Greg to reach a HeelRealization. [[spoiler: After Mary returns, he offers to have some after-school sessions with her to help her catch up on her schoolwork with permission from Todd]].

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* LaserGuidedKarma: Chapter 21 reveals that Xander [[spoiler: got arrested for attempting to buy beer underage and assaulting a security guard.]]

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* LaserGuidedKarma: LaserGuidedKarma:
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Chapter 21 reveals that Xander [[spoiler: got arrested for attempting to buy beer underage and assaulting a security guard.]]]] Later on [[spoiler: after Nora’s body is found, he gets charged with negligent homicide for her death (as he did give her a gun and encourage her to run away), and he’s still in jail for that and his other crimes during the DistantFinale]].
** Dana [[spoiler: ends up alienating herself from her family and everybody else who would want to help her or have anything to do with her for her abuse of Mary and her refusal to even take responsibility for her actions or actually learn true facts about autism. This results in her leaving town with the misery she had built up for herself over the years and her former husband and ex-daughters much happier without her]].


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* MetaphoricallyTrue: [[spoiler: While Mary knows nobody would believe her about the Infinity Train, several aspects of the story she gave to the police (she ran away after finding out Dana wanted to sterilize her, she had met Nora and stayed with her for a while, that Nora had tried to kill Mary after finding out she was autistic, that Xander had given Nora a gun before she ran away) were true]].
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* CassandraTruth: {{Defied|Trope}}; [[spoiler: : Mary knows nobody would believe her about the Infinity Train, so she doesn’t even bother trying to tell anybody about it. Instead, she claims that after running away, she survived out in the woods, met Nora and lived in the hut the latter had created for a while, [[MetaphoricallyTrue and that Nora had tried to kill her after finding out that she was autistic]]. She also told the police what she knew about Nora’s neo-Nazi ideals and her ties with Xander, but didn’t tell them about her SpitefulSuicide as she thought her body would have remained stuck in the Infinity Train’s realm. The story does come under scrutiny between the lack of physical evidence that Mary was at the hut and nobody being able to figure out Nora’s cause of death after her body was returned to Earth. However, as there was no evidence ''disproving'' Mary’s testimony and since Nora’s memories gave Mary details about the hut that she would only have known if she had actually seen it, the police decide to just close the cases on Mary and Nora’s disappearances.]]

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* CassandraTruth: {{Defied|Trope}}; [[spoiler: : Mary knows nobody would believe her about the Infinity Train, so she doesn’t even bother trying to tell anybody about it. Instead, she claims that after running away, she survived out in the woods, met Nora and lived in the hut the latter had created for a while, [[MetaphoricallyTrue and that then Nora had tried to kill her after finding out that she was autistic]]. She also told the police what she knew about Nora’s neo-Nazi ideals and her ties with Xander, but didn’t tell them about her SpitefulSuicide as she thought her body would have remained stuck in the Infinity Train’s realm. The story does come under scrutiny between the lack of physical evidence that Mary was at the hut and nobody being able to figure out Nora’s cause of death after her body was returned to Earth. However, as there was no evidence ''disproving'' Mary’s testimony and since Nora’s memories gave Mary details about the hut that she would only have known if she had actually seen it, the police decide to just close the cases on Mary and Nora’s disappearances.]]
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* CassandraTruth: {{Defied|Trope}}; [[spoiler: Mary knows nobody would believe her about the Infinity Train, so she tells everybody that after running away, she was living out in the woods, met Nora and lived in the hut the latter had created, [[MetaphoricallyTrue and that Nora had tried to kill her after finding out that she was autistic]]. She also told the police what she knew about Nora’s neo-Nazi ideals and her ties with Xander, but didn’t tell them about her SpitefulSuicide as she thought her body would have remained stuck in the Infinity Train’s realm. The story does come under scrutiny between the lack of physical evidence that Mary was at the hut and nobody being able to figure out Nora’s cause of death after her body was returned to Earth. However, as there was no evidence otherwise and since Nora’s memories gave Mary details of the hut that she would known if she had actually seen it, the police accepted the explanation.]]

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* CassandraTruth: {{Defied|Trope}}; [[spoiler: : Mary knows nobody would believe her about the Infinity Train, so she tells everybody doesn’t even bother trying to tell anybody about it. Instead, she claims that after running away, she was living survived out in the woods, met Nora and lived in the hut the latter had created, created for a while, [[MetaphoricallyTrue and that Nora had tried to kill her after finding out that she was autistic]]. She also told the police what she knew about Nora’s neo-Nazi ideals and her ties with Xander, but didn’t tell them about her SpitefulSuicide as she thought her body would have remained stuck in the Infinity Train’s realm. The story does come under scrutiny between the lack of physical evidence that Mary was at the hut and nobody being able to figure out Nora’s cause of death after her body was returned to Earth. However, as there was no evidence otherwise ''disproving'' Mary’s testimony and since Nora’s memories gave Mary details of about the hut that she would only have known if she had actually seen it, the police accepted decide to just close the explanation.cases on Mary and Nora’s disappearances.]]
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** No matter what she does or what effect it has on those around her, Dana '''NEVER''' believes that she is the one in the wrong. She basically blames Mary for all the problems in her own life even when it couldn't have possibly been her fault or it's pretty blatantly her own. All her efforts to “cure” Mary aren’t helping? She insists it’s because everyone else is enabling her "bad habits". Causing a scene in a bookstore when she tries to stop Mary from stimming and actually hurting her, much to the horror of Todd, Reagan, and all of the other witnesses? She blames Mary and everybody else without hesitation and even rewrites things in her blog to make herself look like the one in the right. Mary runs away because of the abuse Dana heaped on her? She believes Mary must’ve actually been kidnapped by a predator and blames Todd and Reagan for making her “vulnerable”. Everybody else rightfully calls her out on her actions? She believes they’re “disrespecting” her and not appreciating all of her “hard work”. The cops interrogating her about her blog [[spoiler: and showing disgust at Dana wanting to forcibly sterilize Mary]]? Dana complains that they had no right to invade her privacy like that even though she shared her thoughts on a public blog and didn't even bother to hide anybody’s names.

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** No matter what she does or what effect it has on those around her, Dana '''NEVER''' believes that she is the one in the wrong. She basically blames Mary for all the problems in her own life even when it couldn't have possibly been her fault or it's pretty blatantly her own. All her efforts to “cure” Mary aren’t helping? She insists it’s because everyone else is enabling her "bad habits". Causing a scene in a bookstore when she tries to stop Mary from stimming and actually hurting her, much to the horror of Todd, Reagan, and all of the other witnesses? She blames Mary and everybody else without hesitation and even rewrites things in her blog to make herself look like the one in the right. Mary runs away because of the abuse Dana heaped on her? She believes Mary must’ve actually been kidnapped by a predator and blames Todd and Reagan for making her “vulnerable”. Everybody else rightfully calls her out on her actions? She believes they’re “disrespecting” her and not appreciating all of her “hard work”. The cops interrogating her about her blog [[spoiler: and showing disgust at Dana wanting to forcibly sterilize Mary]]? Dana complains that they had no right to invade her privacy like that even though she shared her thoughts on a public blog and didn't even bother to hide anybody’s names. [[spoiler: Even after her HeelRealization, she still refuses to own up to her actions directly, cutting off contact with her family except for child support checks in the mail and not deleting the blog or confessing that she lied about Mary's behavior]].

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* CassandraTruth: {{Defied|Trope}}; [[spoiler: Mary knows nobody would believe her about the Infinity Train, so she tells everybody that after running away, she was living out in the woods, met Nora and lived in the hut the latter had created, [[MetaphoricallyTrue and that Nora had tried to kill her after finding out that she was autistic]]. She also told the police what she knew about Nora’s neo-Nazi ideals and her ties with Xander, but didn’t tell them about her SpitefulSuicide as she thought her body would have remained stuck in the Infinity Train’s realm. The story does come under scrutiny between the lack of physical evidence that Mary was at the hut and nobody being able to figure out Nora’s cause of death after her body was returned to Earth. However, as there was no evidence otherwise and since Nora’s memories gave Mary details of the hut that she would known if she had actually seen it, the police accepted the explanation.]]



* NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler:Subverted in the final chapter, where Nora's corpse is found after her SpitefulSuicide on the Infinity Train, but her family will never know what really happened to her.]]

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* NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler:Subverted in the final chapter, where Nora's corpse is found returned to Earth after her SpitefulSuicide on the Infinity Train, Train and found by the police near the hut she had built, but her family will never know what really happened to her.]]

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* DistantFinale: [[spoiler: The second half of the final chapter takes place six year after the events of the story]].

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* DistantFinale: [[spoiler: The second half of the final chapter takes place six year years after the events of the story]].


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* NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler:Subverted in the final chapter, where Nora's corpse is found after her SpitefulSuicide on the Infinity Train, but her family will never know what really happened to her.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:On one hand, Mary successfully manages to get off the train and reunite with her family, with the TimeSkip revealing that she's doing well for herself in light of Dana's absence. On the other hand, the [=McDonalds=] lost their only daughter, will likely never know the truth behind her death and how it happened, and will have to find a way to cope with the fallout for the rest of their lives.]]
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* DistantFinale: [[spoiler: The second half of the final chapter takes place six year after the events of the story]].


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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: Mary is reunited with her father and sister, heals from her mother’s abuse with the help of therapy, and gains new friends and hangs onto her old ones throughout middle school and high school (including Greg and Julius). Furthermore, she’s pursuing her dreams as an author as a fifteen-year-old, writing fanfictions and having the short story about her adventures on the Infinity Train published in a short story anthology as part of her winning a contest. The latter earns her several fans from readers, who all sent her emails telling her how her story helped them feel seen and accepted, especially from the ones who are autistic themselves]].
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Can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30800123/chapters/76029440 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14073612/1/The-Sun-Will-Come-Up-And-The-Seasons-Will-Change FanFiction.net]].

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Can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30800123/chapters/76029440 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14073612/1/The-Sun-Will-Come-Up-And-The-Seasons-Will-Change FanFiction.net]]. The fic concluded on January 28th, 2024.
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** PerfectionIsImpossible, especially from children.

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** PerfectionIsImpossible, especially from children.children, and it’s cruel to force people to conform to your definition and standards of perfection.

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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Despite Nora's monstrous behavior and violent tendencies (trying to ''[[WouldHurtAChild kill]]'' Mary several times), Mary, Blanca, and Vic are all horrified when she allows herself to fall onto the train tracks and [[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath be crushed to death]] by the wheels. Part of the pain Mary feels comes from knowing that the [=McDonald=] family may never know what happened to Nora.]]



* DearJohnLetter: In the penultimate chapter [[spoiler: Dana decides to leave one for Todd, explaining that she’s leaving because she knows he, Reagan, and Mary will never forgive her for her actions and she’s moving somewhere secret where Irene or anybody from her old life will never find her, as well as seek the therapy she so desperately needs and discover who she truly is]].

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* DearJohnLetter: In the penultimate chapter [[spoiler: Dana decides to leave one for Todd, explaining that she’s leaving because she knows he, Reagan, and Mary will never forgive her for her actions and she’s moving somewhere secret where neither Irene or nor anybody from her old life will never find her, as well as seek the therapy she so desperately needs and discover who she truly is]].



* DrJerk: Dr. Goldman, whom Dana had consulted, is the one who "confirmed" her fears of what Mary being autistic meant for her, insisting that she had to be controlled lest her "primal desires" take control of Dana's entire life. Chapter 9 makes it even worse when it's revealed he has recommended Mary be put on a sedative after a cursory examination and once hit and screamed at Mary when she tried to ask him for some water. According to Todd in Chapter 13, ''every single review'' of his practice has one-star ratings, demonstrating how harmful he is.

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* DrJerk: Dr. Goldman, whom Dana had consulted, is the one who "confirmed" her fears of what Mary being autistic meant for her, insisting that she had to be controlled lest her "primal desires" take control of Dana's entire life. Chapter 9 makes it even worse when it's revealed he has recommended Mary be put on a sedative after a cursory examination and once hit and screamed at Mary when she tried to ask him for some water. According to Todd in Chapter 13, ''every single review'' of his practice has one-star ratings, demonstrating how harmful he is. [[spoiler: Chapter 20 shows that [[LaserGuidedKarma he's been slapped with several malpractice suits, tried to go on the run, and ended up on the Infinity Train.]] The second he climbed out of the pod, he was held at gunpoint by Nora, who tried to rob him.]]

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* AxeCrazy: [[spoiler:Nora, by Chapter 22, has gone completely off the deep end, mistaking Mary for Julius and trying to kill her, blaming her for all of the problems in her life.]]



* HeelFaceDoorSlam: [[spoiler:When the two of them are dangling over the train tracks, Mary tries one last time to reach out to Nora. She refuses to take responsibility for any of her actions, claiming that she's "free" as she let's go of Mary's hand and falls to her death.]]



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: In Chapter 19, [[spoiler: Mary, Blanca, and Vic abandon Nora in the Haunted House Car after realizing how dangerous she truly is. Unfortunately they only get to the next car before a pissed-off Nora catches up with them]].

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** In Chapter 22, [[spoiler: Dana leaves the family, giving a non-apology in the form of a letter saying that she's never coming back. Part of it may be a HeelFaceTurn, and part of it may be Dana acknowledging that the family's issues are her fault but simply not wanting to try and fix them. Reagan and Todd are furious and heartbroken.]]

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* DrugsAreBad: Nora drinks, smokes cigarettes, and snorts cocaine ([[spoiler: Chapter 21 reveals that she threatened a talking castle to produce even more drugs for her when she ran out of her current drug supply)]]. Her drug use is used as another symptom of her downward spiral, and she spends Chapter 22 [[spoiler: hallucinating Mary as her brother Julius.]]

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* DrugsAreBad: Nora drinks, smokes cigarettes, and snorts cocaine ([[spoiler: Chapter ([[spoiler:Chapter 21 reveals that she threatened a talking castle castle—implied to be Morgan—to produce even more drugs for her when she ran out of her current drug supply)]]. Her drug use is used as another symptom of her downward spiral, and she spends Chapter 22 [[spoiler: hallucinating Mary as her brother Julius.]]



---> '''Mary''': “That stuff’s called alcohol. It’s a drink that messes with your brain and turns you angry and mean if you drink too much of it."

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* DaddysGirl: Mary and her father Todd share a strong father-daughter bond, and he makes it clear he accepts Mary for who she is. Same goes for Reagan.



* DeathOfAChild: [[spoiler: Nora lets herself be crushed under the train rather than return home, and it's this that indirectly leads to Mary's number dropping to zero.]] Notably, this is the only death in the entire story.

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* DeathOfAChild: [[spoiler: The seventeen-year-old Nora lets herself be crushed under the train rather than return home, and it's this that indirectly leads to Mary's number dropping to zero.home.]] Notably, this is the only death in the entire story.



* DaddysGirl: Mary and her father Todd share a strong father-daughter bond, and he makes it clear he accepts Mary for who she is. Same goes for Reagan.



* {{Doublethink}}: Thanks to Dr. Goldman's influence, Dana simultaneously infantilizes Mary, like trying to force her to choose a book intended for children much younger than her, and believes that Mary's autism means that she's a born manipulator always trying to get her way. One of the ABA doctors in the flashback Mary's tape shows even sums it up by asking another "How can you possibly claim a four-year-old with absolutely no concept of manipulation is manipulating you?”.
* DrugsAreBad: Nora drinks, smokes cigarettes, and at one point snorts cocaine [[({{Hammerspace}} all of which she was inexplicably able to carry in her backpack for a long time with no effect on either herself or the drugs themselves).]] Her drug use is used as another symptom of her downward spiral, though despite being depicted as an AddledAddict, she shows no sign of actual addiction apart from [[spoiler: suddenly hallucinating Mary as her brother Julius.]]

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* {{Doublethink}}: Thanks to Dr. Goldman's influence, Dana simultaneously infantilizes Mary, like trying to force her to choose a book intended for children much younger than her, and believes that Mary's autism means that she's a born manipulator always trying to get her way. One of the ABA doctors doctors, who is clearly having second thoughts about ABA, in the flashback Mary's tape shows even sums it up by asking another Dr. Goldman "How can you possibly claim a four-year-old with absolutely no concept of manipulation is manipulating you?”.
* DrugsAreBad: Nora drinks, smokes cigarettes, and at one point snorts cocaine [[({{Hammerspace}} all of which ([[spoiler: Chapter 21 reveals that she was inexplicably able threatened a talking castle to carry in her backpack for a long time with no effect on either herself or the produce even more drugs themselves).]] for her when she ran out of her current drug supply)]]. Her drug use is used as another symptom of her downward spiral, though despite being depicted as an AddledAddict, and she shows no sign of actual addiction apart from spends Chapter 22 [[spoiler: suddenly hallucinating Mary as her brother Julius.]]
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* DeathOfAChild: [[spoiler: Nora lets herself be crushed under the train rather than return home, and it's this that indirectly leads to Mary's number dropping to zero.]] Notably, this is the only death in the entire story.



* DrugsAreBad: Nora drinks, smokes cigarettes, and at one point snorts cocaine [[({{Hammerspace}} all of which she was inexplicably able to carry in her backpack for a long time with no effect on either herself or the drugs themselves).]] Her drug use is used as another symptom of her downward spiral, though despite being depicted as an AddledAddict, she shows no sign of actual addiction apart from [spoiler: suddenly hallucinating Mary as her brother Julius.]]

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* DrugsAreBad: Nora drinks, smokes cigarettes, and at one point snorts cocaine [[({{Hammerspace}} all of which she was inexplicably able to carry in her backpack for a long time with no effect on either herself or the drugs themselves).]] Her drug use is used as another symptom of her downward spiral, though despite being depicted as an AddledAddict, she shows no sign of actual addiction apart from [spoiler: [[spoiler: suddenly hallucinating Mary as her brother Julius.]] ]]
** Mary even comments that she's seen many anti-drug [[PublicServiceAnnouncement PSAs]] and watches movies that feature "alcoholic fathers who beat [their children] and wives."
---> '''Mary''': “That stuff’s called alcohol. It’s a drink that messes with your brain and turns you angry and mean if you drink too much of it."
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* ArtisticLicenseLaw: Nora’s mother tells her they can’t leave her brother Julius home alone for the afternoon, telling her “It’s against the law to leave a child under twelve in the house all by themselves, even for a short amount of time.” In reality, only three states have an official minimum age requirement to be home alone, and the requirement is treated as more of a suggestion. Furthermore, it isn’t the act of simply leaving a minor home alone that’s illegal, but leaving them alone ''extensively,'' such as for several days at once.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: [[spoiler: Because of Nora’s SpitefulSuicide in the penultimate chapter, Brooke and Harley end up losing their daughter without having a body to bury or even knowing the full details about what exactly happened, which is one of the reasons why Mary cries about Nora’s death]].

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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: [[spoiler: Because of Nora’s SpitefulSuicide in the penultimate chapter, Brooke and Harley end up losing their daughter without having a body to bury or even knowing the full details about being able to know what exactly happened, which happened since Mary knows nobody would believe her about the Infinity Train unless they experienced it themselves. This is one of the reasons why Mary cries about Nora’s death]].

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* RageBreakingPoint: In Chapter 11, Todd is digging through the kitchen cupboards for a snack when he suddenly finds Dana’s “Cure Autism Now” mug. As he stares at it, he reflects on all the abuse Dana forced Mary through in the name of trying to “cure” her autism and how unnecessary it all was, making him angrier and angrier. Todd then throws the mug against the wall (destroying it in the process) and vows to finally confront Dana on everything she’s done to Mary the next time he sees her in person.

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* AbusiveParents: While Todd is [[GoodParents a very good father]] to Mary, Dana is a complete and total nightmare, emotionally and even physically abusing Mary whenever she displays any signs of her autism and badgering her to act more “normal”. It extends even further than that, with her trying to “fix” Mary by sending her to various programs meant to fix or cure her and her claiming that "[[NeverMyFault Mary ruins everything]]" on her blog.

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While Todd is [[GoodParents a very good father]] to Mary, Dana is a complete and total nightmare, emotionally and even physically abusing Mary whenever she displays any signs of her autism and badgering her to act more “normal”. It extends even further than that, with her trying to “fix” Mary by sending her to various programs meant to fix or cure her and her claiming that "[[NeverMyFault Mary ruins everything]]" on her blog.



* BrutalHonesty: Vic tends to do this a lot. For example, he tells Mary that she doesn't know for sure that Todd and Reagan know about Dana's blog unless she asks them about it and that she's jumping the gun with her assuming that her father and her sister also hate her.

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* FieryRedhead: Downplayed with Edith and Lianna. The former only lets her temper get the better of her when Dana makes one snide comment too many about how she raised Lianna, in which she reacts by slapping Dana across the face and calling her out for how she treated Mary.

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* ForWantOfANail: The reason why Todd found out about the ABA “therapy” Dana forced Mary to endure for three years was a combination of Dana leaving the ABA business card with the building’s address, a five-year-old Mary forgetting her lunchbox at home, and Todd driving over to drop it off and witnessing three doctors pinning Mary down like a criminal.



* HeelRealization: Through having a talk with his teacher, Greg comes to realize that his mocking of Mary’s possible fate was extremely hurtful and promises his teacher to be better in the future and apologize to Mary once she’s found.

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* DirtyCoward: [[spoiler: In Chapter 22, Mary and Vic find Nora robbing Dr. Goldman, who had recently ended up on the Train, at gunpoint. When Mary and Vic save him by temporarily trapping the passenger pod onto Nora (and Mary holding back her anger and spite in order to save Blanca once she recognizes Dr. Goldman), he doesn’t stay to help fight Nora despite Mary clearly being younger than the violent teenager, instead choosing to flee to a safer car]].

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* DirtyCoward: [[spoiler: In Chapter 22, Mary and Vic find Nora robbing Dr. Goldman, who had recently ended up on the Train, at gunpoint. When Mary and Vic save him by temporarily trapping the Nora in a passenger pod onto Nora (and Mary holding back her anger and spite in order to save Blanca once she recognizes Dr. Goldman), he doesn’t stay to help fight Nora despite Mary clearly being younger than the violent teenager, instead choosing to flee to a safer car]].


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* EpiphanicPrison: At the end of chapter 22, Mary comes to accept that she shouldn't hold herself responsible for the actions of those who have chosen to hurt her and that she does have value as a person. It's this realization that makes her number drop to zero, resulting in the train generating a portal to her home.

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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: While Dana already wouldn't accept Mary being autistic, her blog shows how deep her revulsion of Mary goes [[spoiler: to the point where she wants to get Mary forcibly sterilized]]. Both Todd and Reagan are hit with a full dose of horror and disgust once they see what Dana really thinks of Mary. Edith and Mr. Bryant also take the blog’s existence as evidence that Dana is a much worse mother than either of them had thought.

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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: WhatYouAreInTheDark:
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While Dana already wouldn't accept Mary being autistic, her blog shows how deep her revulsion of Mary goes [[spoiler: to the point where she wants to get Mary forcibly sterilized]]. Both Todd and Reagan are hit with a full dose of horror and disgust once they see what Dana really thinks of Mary. Edith and Mr. Bryant also take the blog’s existence as evidence that Dana is a much worse mother than either of them had thought. thought.
** In chapter 22, Mary and Vic rescue a new train passenger from Nora, but Mary recognizes the passenger—[[spoiler: Dr. Goldman]]—upon seeing his name tag. As soon as she realizes who he is, she is overcome with anger over all that he did to her when she was young, even coming up with a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech in her head and seriously tempted to rip him a new one. By all means, she had every right to be angry at him, because he not only convinced her mother to believe all the negative stereotypes about autism in an attempt to cure her, he terrorized her during [=ABA=] for three years straight, giving her a heaping helping of psychological trauma. But Mary manages to keep her anger in check, knowing that rescuing Blanca is the more pressing issue at the moment, even allowing him to escape by directing him to go to a safe train car.
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* GreaterNeedThanMine: [[spoiler: After Mary’s exit forms, she gives Mimi to Blanca as a parting gift so the stuffed rabbit can comfort other kid passengers that come through the Sweets car, just like how Mimi gave her comfort throughout the years]].
* {{Hallucinations}}: [[spoiler: In Chapter 22 Nora, who had spent a few hours drinking and doing cocaine, hallucinates Mary as her younger brother Julius. Mary plays along with it during their confrontation in the house-sized pumpkin]].

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* GreaterNeedThanMine: [[spoiler: After Mary’s exit portal forms, she gives Mimi to Blanca as a parting gift so the stuffed rabbit can comfort other kid passengers that come through the Sweets car, just like how Mimi gave her comfort throughout the years]].
* {{Hallucinations}}: [[spoiler: In Chapter 22 Nora, who had spent a few hours prior drinking and doing cocaine, hallucinates Mary as her younger brother Julius. Mary plays along with it during their confrontation in the house-sized pumpkin]].

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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Nora’s method of SpitefulSuicide is to allow herself to fall underneath the Infinity Train’s wheels and let her body be destroyed]].



** When the police is interrogating Dana about her abuse of Mary, the detective leading Mary’s missing persons case asks Dana if it’s possible Mary saw the blog. He deliberately leaves out that Mary contacting Reagan about it is the reason why the police know about it in the first place, leaving Dana to believe Mary still doesn’t know about it.

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** When the police is interrogating Dana about her abuse of Mary, the detective leading Mary’s missing persons case asks Dana if it’s possible Mary saw the blog. He deliberately leaves out that Mary (or most likely somebody using her phone) contacting Reagan about it is the reason why the police know about it in the first place, leaving Dana to believe Mary still doesn’t know about it.



* DirtyCoward: [[spoiler: In Chapter 22, Mary and Vic find Nora robbing Dr. Goldman, who had recently ended up on the Train, at gunpoint. When Mary and Vic save him by temporarily trapping the passenger pod onto Nora (and Mary holding back her anger and spite in order to save Blanca once she recognizes Dr. Goldman), he doesn’t stay to help fight Nora despite Mary clearly being younger than the violent teenager, instead choosing to flee to a safer car]].



* GreaterNeedThanMine: [[spoiler: After Mary’s exit forms, she gives Mimi to Blanca as a parting gift so the stuffed rabbit can comfort other kid passengers that come through the Sweets car just like how Mimi gave her comfort throughout the years]].

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* GreaterNeedThanMine: [[spoiler: After Mary’s exit forms, she gives Mimi to Blanca as a parting gift so the stuffed rabbit can comfort other kid passengers that come through the Sweets car car, just like how Mimi gave her comfort throughout the years]].
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* SpitefulSuicide: [[spoiler: Nora, in a drug-infused haze, chooses to not let Mary (who she’s hallucinating as Julius) and Blanca save her when she falls over the edge of the train, instead pepper-spraying Blanca so she can fall under the train’s wheels and be destroyed]].

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* SpitefulSuicide: [[spoiler: Nora, in a drug-infused haze, chooses to not let Mary (who she’s hallucinating as Julius) and Blanca save her when she falls over the edge of the train, instead pepper-spraying Blanca so she can fall under the train’s wheels and be destroyed]].destroyed rather than go to jail or become her brother's "slave"]].
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** Your children deserve all of the care and support in the world, especially if they have special needs that need to be reasonably accommodated.

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** Your children deserve all of the care and support in the world, especially if they have special needs that need to be reasonably accommodated.accommodated in order for them to be successful in life.



* CallBack: In chapter 2, when Mary watches the video in her passenger transportation pod, One-One says this line, "Specifically you're more likely to fall off the train and die alone." In chapter 22, [[spoiler:that's exactly what happens to Nora, with Mary even remembering it as she mourns her death.]]

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* CallBack: In chapter 2, when Mary watches the video in her passenger transportation pod, One-One says this line, "Specifically "Statistically, you're more likely to fall off the train and die alone." In chapter 22, [[spoiler:that's exactly what happens to Nora, with Mary even remembering it as she mourns her death.]]

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