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[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/2914689/1/ The Stranger I Knew]] is a ''VideoGame/CaveStory'' fanfic that starts off in the endgame. As such, it contains '''spoilers''' for the original game.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Date's first act upon gaining control of Quote's body is to [[spoiler:kill Misery for disobedience]].
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Date's first act upon gaining control of Quote's body is to [[spoiler:kill Misery for disobedience]].disobedience]].
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* ForcedToWatch: Quote, who is trapped in his own mind, is made to witness Date use his body to kill Misery, Sue, and later Santa, and try to rape and kill Curly.
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* ForcedToWatch: Quote, who is trapped in his own mind, is made to witness Date use his body to kill Misery, [[spoiler:Misery, Sue, and later Santa, Santa]], and try to rape and kill Curly.
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* ThouShallNotKill: The name of the first chapter, and references the First Law of Robotics, which
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* ThouShallNotKill: The name of the first chapter, and references the First Law of Robotics, whichwhich Quote is unaware of but Curly is all too familiar with (and restricted by).
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* GoodParents: Momorin is shown to be a loving mother throughout, as she worries about Kazuma me can somehow tell when something bad has happened to Sue (though [[spoiler:she is unaware of [[CruelAndUnusualDeath what exactly happened]]]]):
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* GoodParents: Momorin is shown to be a loving mother throughout, as she worries about Kazuma me and can somehow tell when something bad has happened to Sue (though [[spoiler:she is unaware of [[CruelAndUnusualDeath what exactly happened]]]]):
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Date is given an extra motivation for his desire to TakeOverTheWorld and brutally subjugate all humans beneath his heel- he was made fun of in the past and called a nerdy geek, so he [[TheyCalledMeMad desires revenge on them]].
* FightingFromTheInside: Quote in chapter 4 starts resisting Date and trying to stop him from killing Curly.
* FightingFromTheInside: Quote in chapter 4 starts resisting Date and trying to stop him from killing Curly.
* GoodParents: Momorin is shown to be a loving mother throughout, as she worries about Kazuma me can somehow tell when something bad has happened to Sue (though [[spoiler:she is unaware of [[CruelAndUnusualDeath what exactly happened]]]]):
-->"My mothers intuition is acting up like crazy, Itoh. I'm afraid something terrible might have happened to Sue. It's only a feeling I have, but I've learnt to trust my feelings a lot over the years."
-->"My mothers intuition is acting up like crazy, Itoh. I'm afraid something terrible might have happened to Sue. It's only a feeling I have, but I've learnt to trust my feelings a lot over the years."
* MustHaveCaffeine: Itoh is noted to love coffee and is introduced brewing a batch.
-->Itoh looked up from the very weakly brewed coffee that he had made over the fire. His supplies were running pitifully low and this thin drink was the best that he could manage. Even though he was now a mimiga, his love for coffee had not dwindled.
-->Itoh looked up from the very weakly brewed coffee that he had made over the fire. His supplies were running pitifully low and this thin drink was the best that he could manage. Even though he was now a mimiga, his love for coffee had not dwindled.
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* ThreeLawsCompliant: A major source of conflict, as in this fic, the robots are programmed with this. Quote is unfamiliar with the laws, so he has no problem killing the human Date, but Curly does, so she has a harder time. [[spoiler:She is able to [[LoopholeAbuse get around it]] by destroying Date while he is a jewel possessing a robot body, and thus not technically human.]]
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* ThouShallNotKill: The name of the first chapter, and references the First Law of Robotics, which
* ThreeLawsCompliant: A major source of conflict, as in this fic, the robots are programmed with this. Quote is unfamiliar with thelaws, laws due to either his programming or his amnesia, so he has no problem killing the human Date, but Curly does, so she has a harder time. [[spoiler:She is able to [[LoopholeAbuse get around it]] by destroying Date while he is a jewel possessing a robot body, and thus not technically human.]]]]
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Date's first act upon gaining control of Quote's body is to [[spoiler:kill Misery for disobedience]].
* ThreeLawsCompliant: A major source of conflict, as in this fic, the robots are programmed with this. Quote is unfamiliar with the
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Date's first act upon gaining control of Quote's body is to [[spoiler:kill Misery for disobedience]].
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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: [[spoiler:Misery and Sue]] meet their end this way, [[spoiler:the former by being split in half by the Polar Spur and the latter by Date/[[DemonicPossession Quote]] physically ripping her in half]].
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[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/2914689/1/ The Stranger I Knew]] is a VideoGame/CaveStory fanfic. Taking place just before the FinalBoss battle against the Undead Core, the story goes off in a new direction as [[BigBad Dr. Fuyuhiko Date]], who’s human body was killed, possesses Quote instead. As the robot boy is forced to become a prisoner of his own mind, Curly Brace ventures off to save her beloved.
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[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/2914689/1/ The Stranger I Knew]] is a VideoGame/CaveStory fanfic. ''VideoGame/CaveStory'' fanfic that starts off in the endgame. As such, it contains '''spoilers''' for the original game.
Taking place just before the FinalBoss battle against the Undead Core, the story goes off in a new direction as [[BigBad Dr. Fuyuhiko Date]],who’s who's human body was killed, possesses Quote instead. As the robot boy is forced to become a prisoner of his own mind, Curly Brace ventures off to save her beloved.
Taking place just before the FinalBoss battle against the Undead Core, the story goes off in a new direction as [[BigBad Dr. Fuyuhiko Date]],
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Misery, Sue, Santa, and Quote and Curly themselves]] all die in this fic, whereas in the original game they all live in each ending.
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* JustAMachine: Date considers Quote and Curly to be mere robots who are beneath him.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: As if Date was not already enough of a monster in canon, here he commits AttemptedRape on Curly Brace.
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* SecondLawMyAss: Quote, being unfamiliar with the three laws, is able to disobey Date and kill his body with no problem. Curly doesn't have it so easy due to knowing the laws, but [[LoopholeAbuse finds a way around it]].
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* SecondLawMyAss: Quote, being unfamiliar with the three laws, is able to kill Date's body with no problem. Curly doesn't have it so easy due to knowing the laws, but [[LoopholeAbuse finds a way around it]].
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* SecondLawMyAss: Quote, being unfamiliar with the three laws, is able to disobey Date and kill Date's his body with no problem. Curly doesn't have it so easy due to knowing the laws, but [[LoopholeAbuse finds a way around it]].
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* ForcedToWatch: Quote, who is trapped in his own mind, is made to witness Date use his body to kill Misery, Sue, and later Santa, and try to rape and kill Curly.
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* SoleSurvivor: Koron is the only one of Curly's adopted mimingas to still be alive- the rest either gave in to the [[PsychoSerum red flowers]] or died for their disobedience.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Minor example; Dr. Date was already pure evil in canon, but the fic makes him an [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil attempted rapist]] as well.
* AttemptedRape: Date, in Quote's body, tries to assault [[RobotGirl Curly Brace]], going as far as to grope her breasts and talk about how much he will enjoy violating her.
* AttemptedRape: Date, in Quote's body, tries to assault [[RobotGirl Curly Brace]], going as far as to grope her breasts and talk about how much he will enjoy violating her.
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* DemonicPossession: The premise of the fic is that Date does this to Quote, slamming his SoulJar into Quote and overriding all his commands.
* MindRape: Date's DemonicPossession of Quote, in which he overrides Quote's mental computer system. The process is described as horrifically painful. He later takes joy in psychologically tormenting Quote.
* SecondLawMyAss: Quote, being unfamiliar with the three laws, is able to kill Date's body with no problem. Curly doesn't have it so easy due to knowing the laws, but [[LoopholeAbuse finds a way around it]].
* MindRape: Date's DemonicPossession of Quote, in which he overrides Quote's mental computer system. The process is described as horrifically painful. He later takes joy in psychologically tormenting Quote.
* SecondLawMyAss: Quote, being unfamiliar with the three laws, is able to kill Date's body with no problem. Curly doesn't have it so easy due to knowing the laws, but [[LoopholeAbuse finds a way around it]].
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Several sections of the fic give focus to characters other than Quote, most notably Curly Brace, but also Kazuma, Itoh, and even [[BigBad Dr. Date himself]].
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[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/2914689/1/ The Stranger I Knew]] is a VideoGame/CaveStory fanfic. Taking place just before the FinalBoss battle against the Undead Core, the story goes off in a new direction as [[BigBad Dr. Fuyuhiko Date]], who’s human body was killed, possesses Quote instead. As the robot boy is forced to become a prisoner of his own mind, Curly Brace ventures off to save her beloved.
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!This fanfic contains examples of:
* BigBad: Dr. Fuyuhiko Date, as in the original game, is the antagonist plotting to TakeOverTheWorld. This time, he possesses [[TheHero Quote]] and aims to use him to kill Curly Brace.
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Curly succeeds in killing Date, but as a result, Quote is going to die. Misery, Sue, and Santa are also dead as well. Curly decides to be TogetherInDeath with Quote, remaining on the collapsing island.]]
* ThreeLawsCompliant: A major source of conflict, as in this fic, the robots are programmed with this. Quote is unfamiliar with the laws, so he has no problem killing the human Date, but Curly does, so she has a harder time. [[spoiler:She is able to [[LoopholeAbuse get around it]] by destroying Date while he is a jewel possessing a robot body, and thus not technically human.]]
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!This fanfic contains examples of:
* BigBad: Dr. Fuyuhiko Date, as in the original game, is the antagonist plotting to TakeOverTheWorld. This time, he possesses [[TheHero Quote]] and aims to use him to kill Curly Brace.
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Curly succeeds in killing Date, but as a result, Quote is going to die. Misery, Sue, and Santa are also dead as well. Curly decides to be TogetherInDeath with Quote, remaining on the collapsing island.]]
* ThreeLawsCompliant: A major source of conflict, as in this fic, the robots are programmed with this. Quote is unfamiliar with the laws, so he has no problem killing the human Date, but Curly does, so she has a harder time. [[spoiler:She is able to [[LoopholeAbuse get around it]] by destroying Date while he is a jewel possessing a robot body, and thus not technically human.]]
