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It Got Worse de-wicking.
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* [[ArtEvolution Writing Evolution]]: For a few short paragraphs, the fic suddenly improves in quality...just long enough to kill Spike before [[ItGotWorse getting even worse than before.]]
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* [[ArtEvolution Writing Evolution]]: For a few short paragraphs, the fic suddenly improves in quality...just long enough to kill Spike before [[ItGotWorse getting even worse than before.]]
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da Namespace, yeah
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The fic can be read [[http://argembarger.deviantart.com/#/d45xim7 here]]. There are also a few dramatic readings on YouTube, if you are so inclined, with the equivalent of the Gmod version as part of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46OVd8nBDRk Rainbow Dash Presents]].
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The fic can be read [[http://argembarger.deviantart.com/#/d45xim7 here]]. There are also a few dramatic readings on YouTube, Website/{{Youtube}}, if you are so inclined, with the equivalent of the Gmod version as part of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46OVd8nBDRk Rainbow Dash Presents]].
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* AWizardDidIt: Literally so when Big Mac and Twilight were turned back to ponies by [[IncrediblyLamePun Merriam Webster]].
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-->''they started to have spider sex and it felt rely wieird for twilight but twilight nevr even had normal regualr pony sex so spider sex was the weirdest most strage thing ever. it was like a crunchy potato chip bag full of chips got throwed into an chainlink fence and i dont know wer this metaphor goesing. amynore.''
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-->''they started to have spider sex and it felt rely wieird for twilight but twilight nevr even had normal regualr pony sex so spider sex was the weirdest most strage thing ever. it was like a crunchy potato chip bag full of chips got throwed into an chainlink fence and [[LampshadeHanging i dont know wer this metaphor goesing. amynore.'']]''
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* AscendedExtra: Pinkie's sister. It's never specified whether it's Inky or Blinky.
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* OCStandIn: Pinkie Pie's unnamed sister.
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* TrollFic: Eeyup. Trollestia greatly endorsed this as a "GODLIKE FANFICTION EXPERIENCE".
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* TrollFic: Eeyup. Trollestia [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-spiderses.html greatly endorsed this this]] as a "GODLIKE FANFICTION EXPERIENCE".
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* {{Pluralses}}{{Pluralses}}: The title.
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* BackFromTheDead: The baby spiders bring Spike back to life by [[ArtisticLicenseBiology putting his vital fluids back into his body]]
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* [[ArtEvolution Writing Evolution]]: For a few short paragraphs, the fic suddenly improves in quality...just long enough to kill Spike before [[ItGotWorse getting even worse than before.]]]]
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* AngstWhatAngst: Just about everyone's reaction to, well, everything that happens.
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Dull Surprise is a facial expression/drawing trope
* AngstWhatAngst: Just about everyone's reaction to, well, everything that happens.
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* DullSurprise: Just about everyone's reaction to, well, everything that happens.
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The fic can be read [[http://argembarger.deviantart.com/#/d45xim7 here]]. There are also a few dramatic readings on YouTube, if you are so inclined.
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The fic can be read [[http://argembarger.deviantart.com/#/d45xim7 here]]. There are also a few dramatic readings on YouTube, if you are so inclined.
inclined, with the equivalent of the Gmod version as part of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46OVd8nBDRk Rainbow Dash Presents]].
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Now stretch that one paragraph across a few pages, misspell almost every word, use no grammar whatsoever, and voila! You have ''The Spiderses,'' the ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[TrollFic answer to]] ''MyImmortal'' and ''HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences.''
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Now stretch that one paragraph across a few pages, misspell almost every word, use no grammar whatsoever, and voila! You have ''The Spiderses,'' the ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[TrollFic answer to]] ''MyImmortal'' and ''HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences.''
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* AuthorAvatar/SelfInsert: Argembarger suddenly appears as an alicorn for absolutely no reason, just so Twilight can try and have "pony sex" with him. He blows her off and leaves in the same paragraph he's introduced.
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* AuthorAvatar/SelfInsert: AuthorAvatar / SelfInsert: Argembarger suddenly appears as an alicorn for absolutely no reason, just so Twilight can try and have "pony sex" with him. He blows her off and leaves in the same paragraph he's introduced.
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* AuthorAvatar: The author himself shows up at the end!
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* AuthorAvatar: The author himself shows up at AuthorAvatar/SelfInsert: Argembarger suddenly appears as an alicorn for absolutely no reason, just so Twilight can try and have "pony sex" with him. He blows her off and leaves in the end!same paragraph he's introduced.
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* SelfInsert: Argembarger suddenly appears as an alicorn for absolutely no reason, just so Twilight can try and have "pony sex" with him. He blows her off and leaves in the same paragraph he's introduced.
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* CoitusEnsuesAuthorAvatar: The author himself shows up at the end!
* BalefulPolymorph: Twilight Sparkle and Big Macintosh, obviously.
* CoitusEnsues: Big Macintosh's reaction to possibly being stuck in spider form? LET'S HAVE SEX!
* BalefulPolymorph: Twilight Sparkle and Big Macintosh, obviously.
* CoitusEnsues: Big Macintosh's reaction to possibly being stuck in spider form? LET'S HAVE SEX!
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* RememberTheNewGuy: The AuthorAvatar is presented as Twilight Sparkle's "bestest friend in the world."
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* SwitchingPOV: The narration randomly shifts from third-person to Twilight Sparkle's first-person.
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* WordSaladTitle: The chapter titles.
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* AnimalTalk: Averted. Spiders can understand pony speech, but not the other way around. Pinkie Pie's sister is an exception.
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* WaveOfBabies: The spider babies after they hatch.
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Reverted my own edit of \"So Bad It\'s Good\", as Stylistic Suck was already on there.
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* SoBadItsGood: The horrible writing and absurd situations can cause some people to go into hysterics. {{YourMileageMayVary}}.
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* SoBadItsGood: The horrible writing and absurd situations can cause some people to go into hysterics. {{YourMileageMayVary}}.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatinRougeAnglesOfSatin: To the point where it's almost illegible.
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* PurpleProse: The below-mentioned [[ArtEvolution Writing Evolution]].
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* {{Metaphorgotten}}:
-->''they started to have spider sex and it felt rely wieird for twilight but twilight nevr even had normal regualr pony sex so spider sex was the weirdest most strage thing ever. it was like a crunchy potato chip bag full of chips got throwed into an chainlink fence and i dont know wer this metaphor goesing. amynore.''
-->''they started to have spider sex and it felt rely wieird for twilight but twilight nevr even had normal regualr pony sex so spider sex was the weirdest most strage thing ever. it was like a crunchy potato chip bag full of chips got throwed into an chainlink fence and i dont know wer this metaphor goesing. amynore.''
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* MemeticMutation: "Why is everything bigger and eight?" has shown up more than once in the fandom vernacular, as well as "OK Magic, happen!"
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* MemeticMutation: "Why is everything bigger and eight?" has shown up more than once in the fandom vernacular, as well as "OK Magic, happen!"
