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Chekhov’s Gun does not apply. Rewrote Fix Fic to be less biased
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* Chekhov's Gun: Aliana hides her Sith identity from Rey until it is inevitably revealed a few chapters down the road.
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* FixFic: For those who were unhappy with the Sequel Trilogy, or just really hated Kylo Ren.
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* FixFic: For those who were unhappy with the Sequel Trilogy, or just really hated Kylo Ren.Trilogy and the direction it took with the story and characters.
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The example given wasn't an acceptable break from Canon, and the fic was stated to be a fix it fic by the author.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Aliana starts interfering in the story almost immediately, such as providing Rey with extra food in exchange for a minor repair job and rescuing both Poe and Finn from the desert (albeit separately).
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adding some tropes
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*ALessonLearnedTooWell: Rey absorbed Aliana's philosophy a bit to well, leading to her getting captured by the ennemy.
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* Chekhov's Gun: Aliana hides her Sith identity from Rey until it is inevitably revealed a few chapters down the road.
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* EasilyForgiven: Rey forgave Aliana for lying to her simply because she was, to quote the text: [[spoiler: "Aliana was just too beautiful to maintain any kind of anger toward while in her proximity."]]
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*UnpleasantParentReveal: Rey learning about her parents count as this.
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This trope is about violence.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Aliana is actually highly respected by First Order Stormtroopers after humiliating Kylo Ren. They've nicknamed her "Amorosa from Human Resources" despite her not actually being a member of the First Order in any capacity.
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* IdiotBall: Rey and Aliana have plenty of opportunities to kill Kylo Ren across the story. Why they don't do it, it's never explained. Not only this senseless sparing comes to bite them in the rear many times, but they also talk multiple times about how they ''need'' to kill him.
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* IdiotBall: Rey and Aliana have plenty of opportunities to kill Kylo Ren across the story. Why they don't do it, it's never explained. Not only does this senseless sparing comes come to bite them in the rear many times, but they also talk multiple times about how they ''need'' to kill him.
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