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* AdaptationalUpbringingChange: In [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros canon]], it's implied that Vivian was raised by Beldam, who was a complete BigSisterBully to her which left her a ShrinkingViolet SociallyAwkwardHero. This fanfic, on the other hand, had her get adopted by Admiral Bobbery early in her childhood and, due to him both giving her more support growing up as well as her different environment, leads to her being a flirty, HotBlooded DeadpanSnarker as well as on the heroes' side on the get go rather than having to pull a HeelFaceTurn.
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* InterspeciesAdoption: Bobbery, a bob-omb, has adopted Vivian, who is a LivingShadow.
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* MythologyGag:
** After the heroes defeat Gloomtail, Goombella notes that at least he wasn't a skeleton, alluding to Bonetail, who doesn't appear in this story.
** After watching Beldam insult Doopliss, Vivian internally notes that had she remained with the Shadow Sirens, she likely would have the group's ButtMonkey, which is exactly the role she played in canon and the reason she would ditch them in canon.
** After the heroes defeat Gloomtail, Goombella notes that at least he wasn't a skeleton, alluding to Bonetail, who doesn't appear in this story.
** After watching Beldam insult Doopliss, Vivian internally notes that had she remained with the Shadow Sirens, she likely would have the group's ButtMonkey, which is exactly the role she played in canon and the reason she would ditch them in canon.
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Can also be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/48734014/chapters/122934817 here]].
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The night was the same as most nights at that point had been for Admiral Bobbery. Drowning his sorrows as he thought about his lost love. But on that fateful night, everything when he came across an abandoned merchant's wagon, carrying a badly injured and sick shadow girl. She needed someone and so did he.
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The night was the same as most nights at that point had been for Admiral Bobbery. Drowning his sorrows as he thought about his lost love. But on that fateful night, everything changed when he came across an abandoned merchant's wagon, carrying a badly injured and sick shadow girl. She needed someone and so did he.
