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* [[spoiler:BigBrotherWorship]]: [[spoiler:According to Cheese's backstory, his little brother Tomato admired him so much, he wanted to show his friends just how cool he was. It backfired and only made Cheese even more withdrawn and stressed-out]].

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* [[spoiler:BigBrotherWorship]]: BigBrotherWorship: [[spoiler:According to Cheese's backstory, his little brother Tomato admired him so much, he wanted to show his friends just how cool he was. It backfired and only made Cheese even more withdrawn and stressed-out]].



* [[spoiler:EverythingsBetterWithRainbows]]: [[spoiler:A rainbow is what triggers Pinkamena's smile]].

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* [[spoiler:EverythingsBetterWithRainbows]]: EverythingsBetterWithRainbows: [[spoiler:A rainbow is what triggers Pinkamena's smile]].



* [[spoiler:FieryCoverup]]: [[spoiler:Cortland initially planned to do this with the letters he stole from Bluejinx. He ''does'' get to burn them... along with the boarding house/connected farm that Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous are in.]]
* [[spoiler:FirstKiss]]: [[spoiler:Cheese and Pinkamena have theirs at the carnival. Igneous catches them in the act]].

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* [[spoiler:FieryCoverup]]: FieryCoverup: [[spoiler:Cortland initially planned to do this with the letters he stole from Bluejinx. He ''does'' get to burn them... along with the boarding house/connected farm that Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous are in.]]
* [[spoiler:FirstKiss]]: FirstKiss: [[spoiler:Cheese and Pinkamena have theirs at the carnival. Igneous catches them in the act]].



* [[spoiler:GiveAwayTheBride]]: [[spoiler:The wedding is in the point of view of Igneous, who is so amazed at the entire thing he's lost in thought as he walks Pinkamena down the aisle and pretty much misses the vows. He talks with Pinkamena later on to tell her [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming how much he loves her and that he's proud to have her as a daughter]]]].

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* [[spoiler:GiveAwayTheBride]]: GiveAwayTheBride: [[spoiler:The wedding is in the point of view of Igneous, who is so amazed at the entire thing he's lost in thought as he walks Pinkamena down the aisle and pretty much misses the vows. He talks with Pinkamena later on to tell her [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming how much he loves her and that he's proud to have her as a daughter]]]].



* [[spoiler:HollywoodFire]]: [[spoiler:Played with. On the one hand, Pinkamena, Cheese, and Igneous can stand the heat pretty well, although they do get burned, and manage to get to an exit, albeit a locked one. On the other, they nearly die from inhaling smoke, and it whittles away Pinkamena's strength enough that she ''can't'' break out, and all three of them pass out. They were really lucky that Limestone heard Pinkamena's cries for help]].
* [[spoiler:HouseFire]]: [[spoiler:Cortland starts one to kill off Pinkamena, Cheese, and Igneous]].
* [[spoiler:IfICantHaveYou / MurderTheHypotenuse]]: [[spoiler:Motivations for the above trope]].

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* [[spoiler:HollywoodFire]]: HollywoodFire: [[spoiler:Played with. On the one hand, Pinkamena, Cheese, and Igneous can stand the heat pretty well, although they do get burned, and manage to get to an exit, albeit a locked one. On the other, they nearly die from inhaling smoke, and it whittles away Pinkamena's strength enough that she ''can't'' break out, and all three of them pass out. They were really lucky that Limestone heard Pinkamena's cries for help]].
* [[spoiler:HouseFire]]: HouseFire: [[spoiler:Cortland starts one to kill off Pinkamena, Cheese, and Igneous]].
* [[spoiler:IfICantHaveYou IfICantHaveYou / MurderTheHypotenuse]]: MurderTheHypotenuse: [[spoiler:Motivations for the above trope]].



* [[spoiler:KillItWithFire]]: [[spoiler:After being defeated in a fight, Cortland sets the connected farm on fire... with Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous inside]].

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* [[spoiler:KillItWithFire]]: KillItWithFire: [[spoiler:After being defeated in a fight, Cortland sets the connected farm on fire... with Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous inside]].



* [[spoiler:PostKissCatatonia]]: [[spoiler:Cheese ends up walking back to the house in a daze after Pinkamena kisses him on the cheek. He even notes it felt like one moment he was outside and the next he was in his room.]]

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* [[spoiler:PostKissCatatonia]]: PostKissCatatonia: [[spoiler:Cheese ends up walking back to the house in a daze after Pinkamena kisses him on the cheek. He even notes it felt like one moment he was outside and the next he was in his room.]]



* [[spoiler:TheUnfavorite]]: [[spoiler:Cheese has referred to himself as the "nopony" of his family. Considering how his younger brother had surpassed him both socially and academically, it's not hard to see why he's so down about it]].

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* [[spoiler:TheUnfavorite]]: TheUnfavorite: [[spoiler:Cheese has referred to himself as the "nopony" of his family. Considering how his younger brother had surpassed him both socially and academically, it's not hard to see why he's so down about it]].



* [[spoiler:WeddingDay]]: [[spoiler:The epilogue is about Cheese and Pinkamena's wedding.]]

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* [[spoiler:WeddingDay]]: WeddingDay: [[spoiler:The epilogue is about Cheese and Pinkamena's wedding.]]
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Despite making it clear that he doesn't like him, Igneous rescues Cortland from a gang about to put TarAndFeathers on him. [[spoiler:Turns out it was just a ruse in order to get Igneous to injure himself while fighting off the thugs. Once Igneous pulled that leg muscle, he was kidnapped, stuck to a wall in a barn, and suffered from dehydration for hours until Pinkamena and Cheese found him. And then the fire started...]]
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* [[spoiler:GiveAwayTheBride]]: [[spoiler:The wedding is in the point of view of Igneous, who is so amazed at the entire thing he's lost in thought as he walks Pinkamena down the aisle and pretty much misses the vows. He talks with Pinkamena later on to tell her [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming how much he loves her and that he's proud to have her as a daughter]]]].


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* HappilyMarried: Igneous and Cloudy, though their serious demeanor had left some doubt in Cheese's mind.
** Lemon Drop and Sugar Glider.
** [[spoiler:Cheese and Pinkamena in the epilogue]].


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* TheyDo: [[spoiler:Cheese and Pinkamena get married at the end]].


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* [[spoiler:WeddingDay]]: [[spoiler:The epilogue is about Cheese and Pinkamena's wedding.]]
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* FreakOut: [[spoiler:In the climax, Pinkamena starts to break down as she's desperately trying to break out of the burning house she, Cheese, and an unconscious Igneous are in. It gets worse when Cheese collapses from the smoke, and she's reduced to a sobbing mess banging on the locked door and crying for help as she grows weaker and weaker. She passes out once her sisters break them out.]]


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* HeroicBSOD: PlayedForLaughs with Marble when [[spoiler:the house is overrun with mice]].
** PlayedForDrama with Pinkamena at a few points:
*** [[spoiler:When she's humiliated by the townsfolk [[ItMakesSenseInContext scaring her with a corrupted version of the Smile song]]]].
*** [[spoiler:When Cheese gets fired]].
*** [[spoiler:When she's trapped in a burning house, with both her father and Cheese unconscious beside her, and having wasted her energy in trying to break down the door in a FreakOut]].
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* VillainousBreakdown: Cortland, after Cheese gives him a ReasonYouSuckSpeech. [[spoiler:It's especially evident when after Pinkamena stops the fight between him and Cheese by ramming him into a wall. Once both of them leave, he spots matches on the floor]].
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* NotSoHarmless: The Pies merely think of Cortland as a nuisance that just won't take no for an answer. Makes sense, as the Pies are significantly stronger than he is (Pinkamena smacks him and it leaves a bruise). However, [[spoiler:he manages to get Cheese fired, successfully kidnaps Igneous, and nearly kills the two stallions and Pinkamena in a fire]].

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* DroppedGlasses: Cheese, a few times. The worst time so far was when Diamond Dogs popped in on the farm.

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* DroppedGlasses: Cheese, a few times. The worst time so far was when Diamond Dogs popped in on the farm.farm.
** [[spoiler:He drops his glasses into a fire as he and Igneous save Pinkamena from falling into it. He has to latch onto Pinkamena's tail in order to get out of the burning house]].



** [[spoiler:Cheese's brother, Tomato Sandwich]]. So far, only two letters from him have been shown. His appearance was teased for a couple of chapters, [[spoiler:until Cheese's reply to his letter was dropped by the mailpony and stolen by Cortland]].

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** [[spoiler:Cheese's brother, Tomato Sandwich]]. So far, only two letters from him have been shown. His appearance was teased for a couple of chapters, [[spoiler:until Cheese's reply to his letter was dropped by the mailpony and stolen by Cortland]].Cortland. He finally appeared in Chapter 37, visiting Cheese in the hospital]].



* NeverMyFault: When Pinkamena rejects Cortland's advances, he blames Igneous for being too strict and Cheese for seducing her. He never seems to consider that he was coming on [[{{Understatement}} a little too strong]]. [[spoiler:He even goes so far as to plot to get Cheese fired and leave town, and after that happens, decides to make Igneous pay]].

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* NeverMyFault: When Pinkamena rejects Cortland's advances, he blames Igneous for being too strict and Cheese for seducing her. He never seems to consider that he was coming on [[{{Understatement}} a little too strong]]. [[spoiler:He even goes so far as to plot to get Cheese fired and leave town, and after that happens, decides to make kidnaps Igneous pay]].and plots to kill him]].


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** [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich--at least in this AU. He's actually quite TheComicallySerious GrumpyBear and DeadpanSnarker in the Main 'verse]].


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* RevengeByProxy: [[spoiler:Cortland's decided that driving Cheese out of Nickerlite wasn't revenge enough; one of the thugs suggest that perhaps his brother Tomato could suffer (or be murdered) in his place, and Cortland decides to go with it. Cheese overheard this and [[BerserkButton he was]] [[BigBrotherInstinct not happy]] to say the least]].


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* TickleTorture: Cheese does this to Riffraff and a few other thugs with his tail.
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The day when he met '''the rock farmer's daughters'''.

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The -->The day when he met '''the rock farmer's daughters'''.
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* TitleDrop: At the very end:
-->They broke the kiss and hugged. Cheese sighed and looked up at the sky, thankful for the day his life had changed.
The day when he met '''the rock farmer's daughters'''.


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* TheUnreveal: [[spoiler:Just who is the Element of Laughter in this universe?]]

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Also, the author has made it clear that another mare is the Element of Laughter in this universe; eternal night is not an issue in this fic.

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Also, [[WordOfGod the author has made it clear that another mare is the Element of Laughter in this universe; universe]]; eternal night is not an issue in this fic.


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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: From Purple Prose to the townsfolk:
--> "I don't think the question is 'What have the Pies done for us?', but rather 'What have we done for the Pies?' Think about it. Did any of you ever went out of your way to visit them and get to know them better? Did any of you try your hoof at doing some of the simple rock farming activities over there? Or were you all just too afraid of those 'rock-throwing barbarians' to even see if any of the rumors are true?"

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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: Cheese gives one to Cortland in the climax, especially the part where he points out that the latter's setting an awful example for his younger siblings.

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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: Cheese gives one to Cortland in the climax, especially the part where he points out that the latter's setting an awful example for his younger siblings.siblings.
** Haralson gives one to the townsfolk after he overhears [[spoiler:somepony pinning the blame for starting the fire on the Pies and/or Cheese--never mind that Igneous, Pinkamena, and Cheese nearly ''died'' in it and had to be hospitalized]]. Purple Prose joins him by asking [[ArmorPiercingQuestion what they did for the Pies besides gossip about them]].
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* [[spoiler:IfICantHaveYou/MurderTheHypotenuse]]: [[spoiler:Motivations for the above trope]].

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* [[spoiler:IfICantHaveYou/MurderTheHypotenuse]]: [[spoiler:IfICantHaveYou / MurderTheHypotenuse]]: [[spoiler:Motivations for the above trope]].
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** [[spoiler:Cheese's big brother instinct shows when he overhears Cortland and the gang he's with conspiring to invite Tomato to Nickerlite just to murder him in Cheese's place. When Cortland is pinned to the wall, Cheese says:]]
-->"Leave... my brother... out of this."


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* [[spoiler:IfICantHaveYou/MurderTheHypotenuse]]: [[spoiler:Motivations for the above trope]].


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* NotGoodWithRejection: We're looking at you, Cortland.


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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: Cheese gives one to Cortland in the climax, especially the part where he points out that the latter's setting an awful example for his younger siblings.
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* [[spoiler:FieryCoverup]]: [[spoiler:Cortland initially planned to do this with the letters he stole from Bluejinx. He ''does'' get to burn them... along with the boarding house/connected farm that Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous are in.]]


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* [[spoiler:HollywoodFire]]: [[spoiler:Played with. On the one hand, Pinkamena, Cheese, and Igneous can stand the heat pretty well, although they do get burned, and manage to get to an exit, albeit a locked one. On the other, they nearly die from inhaling smoke, and it whittles away Pinkamena's strength enough that she ''can't'' break out, and all three of them pass out. They were really lucky that Limestone heard Pinkamena's cries for help]].
* [[spoiler:HouseFire]]: [[spoiler:Cortland starts one to kill off Pinkamena, Cheese, and Igneous]].

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* [[spoiler:KillItWithFire]]: [[spoiler:After being defeated in a fight, Cortland sets the connected farm on fire... with Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous inside]].



* RailroadTracksOfDoom: Discussed; Cheese stops Pinkamena from going through a train tunnel because he's worried about a train coming and hitting them, and instead suggests to go around it. Pinkamena relents once she hears a train whistle.
** [[spoiler:This is how Cortland meets his end, getting his leg stuck in between railroad ties as he was running away after lighting the house that Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous are in on fire]].



** Cortland resents Igneous and Cheese for getting in the way of him winning over Pinkamena. [[spoiler:He plots to have Cheese fired (which ends up happening) and to make Igneous "pay".]]

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** Cortland resents Igneous and Cheese for getting in the way of him winning over Pinkamena. [[spoiler:He plots to have Cheese fired (which ends up happening) and to make later kidnaps Igneous "pay".and plots to kill him.]]

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* CerebusSyndrome: It started out rather lighthearted, with silly shenanigans happening at the rock farm as Cheese adjusts to life there and the Pies adjust to their new employee. And then it gets more serious as Cortland's obsession with Pinkamena, Cheese's family issues, Pinkamena's emotional repression, Igneous' paranoid concerns, and the refusal of the Nickerlite residents to stop the rumors are brought to light. The story even uses the TarAndFeathers trope and treats it as the painful and humiliating thing it is.

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* CerebusSyndrome: It started out rather lighthearted, with silly shenanigans happening at the rock farm as Cheese adjusts to life there and the Pies adjust to their new employee. And then it gets more serious as Cortland's obsession with Pinkamena, Cheese's family issues, Pinkamena's emotional repression, Igneous' paranoid concerns, and the refusal of the Nickerlite residents to stop the rumors are brought to light. The story even uses the TarAndFeathers trope and treats it as the painful and humiliating thing it is. is.
* CoolOldLady: Though she doesn't have much focus on her, Purple Prose is shown to be reasonable when her nephew Bluejinx tells her that [[spoiler:Cortland humiliated Pinkamena]].
** [[spoiler:Sedimentary Rock. A sweet and quirky mare who lives alone in a cabin in the woods, apparently providing refuge for lost hikers. She also volunteers to go back to Nickerlite with her niece Pinkamena to help straighten things out with Igneous, and is given more of an incentive to go when she learns he's missing]].



* DistressedDude: How Pinkamena meets Cheese, who was being bullied by gang members.
** It's also how Bluejinx is introduced, bullied by those same gang members.
** BadassInDistress: [[spoiler:Igneous Rock is kidnapped and held in a barn after losing a fight against those same gang members, thanks to a muscle tearing at the worst time]].



* DroppedGlasses: Cheese, a few times. The worst time so far was when Diamond Dogs popped in on the farm.

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* DroppedGlasses: Cheese, a few times. The worst time so far was when Diamond Dogs popped in on the farm.



** [[spoiler:Pinkamena, having had enough of her father's overprotectiveness and the idiots in Nickerlite. She follows the recently-fired Cheese]].

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** [[spoiler:Pinkamena, having had enough of her father's overprotectiveness and the idiots in Nickerlite. She follows the recently-fired Cheese]].Cheese. Both return when Maud informs them of Igneous' disappearance]].
** [[spoiler:Sedimentary Rock, after being humiliated by a colt she liked and feeling like her family's ashamed of her]].
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* CerebusSyndrome: It started out rather lighthearted, with silly shenanigans happening at the rock farm as Cheese adjusts to life there and the Pies adjust to their new employee. And then it gets more serious as Cortland's obsession with Pinkamena, Cheese's family issues, Pinkamena's emotional repression, Igneous' paranoid concerns, and the refusal of the Nickerlite residents to stop the rumors are brought to light. The story even uses the TarAndFeathers trope and treats it as the painful humiliation it is.

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* CerebusSyndrome: It started out rather lighthearted, with silly shenanigans happening at the rock farm as Cheese adjusts to life there and the Pies adjust to their new employee. And then it gets more serious as Cortland's obsession with Pinkamena, Cheese's family issues, Pinkamena's emotional repression, Igneous' paranoid concerns, and the refusal of the Nickerlite residents to stop the rumors are brought to light. The story even uses the TarAndFeathers trope and treats it as the painful humiliation and humiliating thing it is. is.

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* CallingTheOldManOut: Pinkamena calls out Igneous for being overprotective after [[spoiler:he fires Cheese]].

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* CallingTheOldManOut: Pinkamena calls out Igneous for being overprotective after [[spoiler:he fires Cheese]]. Cheese]].
* CerebusSyndrome: It started out rather lighthearted, with silly shenanigans happening at the rock farm as Cheese adjusts to life there and the Pies adjust to their new employee. And then it gets more serious as Cortland's obsession with Pinkamena, Cheese's family issues, Pinkamena's emotional repression, Igneous' paranoid concerns, and the refusal of the Nickerlite residents to stop the rumors are brought to light. The story even uses the TarAndFeathers trope and treats it as the painful humiliation it is.
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** Until Chapter [[spoiler:30]].

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** Igneous has a sister that he hasn't seen for years [[spoiler:because she ran away because she was humiliated by a stallion she liked. It's part of the reason why Igneous is so protective of his daughters]].

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** Igneous has a sister that he hasn't seen for years [[spoiler:because she ran away because she was humiliated by a stallion she liked. It's part of the reason why Igneous is so protective of his daughters]].daughters. Pinkamena and Cheese meet her in her cabin in the woods later on]].


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* ProducePelting: Cheese is a victim of this late in the fic, due to misconceptions about his character since [[spoiler:he went with the Pie sisters (sans Maud) without permission from their parents, and he ends up getting fired]]. The townsfolk end up switching to dirt clods and pebbles after a few minutes.

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* ActionDad: Igneous is later shown in a fight against thugs to save [[spoiler:Cortland]], and he was doing well until [[spoiler:he tore his muscle. And then he learns that it was just a ruse to make him more vulnerable]].
** PapaWolf: He outright threatened Cortland when the latter took his harassment of Pinkamena too far.



* CallingTheOldManOut: Pinkamena calls out Igneous for being overprotective after [[spoiler:he fires Cheese]].



** [[spoiler:He fires Cheese after catching him kissing Pinkamena, and the suggestiveness and criminal smell of the letter from "Tomato" (actually a forged letter from a gang member Cortland hired) made him even more wary of both Sandwich brothers]]. Pinkamena calls him out for overreacting.

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** [[spoiler:He fires Cheese after catching him kissing Pinkamena, and the suggestiveness and criminal smell of the letter from "Tomato" (actually a forged letter from a gang member Cortland hired) made him even more wary of both Sandwich brothers]]. Pinkamena [[CallingTheOldManOut calls him out out]] for overreacting.


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* TarAndFeathers: ''Not'' PlayedForLaughs. [[spoiler:Cortland]] was threatened with this, and begs Igneous to help him. Despite not liking him, Igneous goes ahead and fights off the thugs until [[spoiler:he pulls a muscle. It was then Cortland revealed it was a ruse to make him more vulnerable]]. Even worse, Igneous has some of the tar spread on his back.
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** [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich, if his letters are anything to go by ([[AllThereInTheManual and]] [[StraightMan in]] [[SugarAndIcePersonality contrast]] [[SiblingYinYang to]] [[StepfordSnarker his]] [[GrumpyBear main]] [[TheComicallySerious universe]] [[SourOutsideSadInside counterpart]]).]]
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** [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich, if his letters are anything to go by ([[AllThereInTheManual and]] [[in StraightMan]] [[SugarAndIcePersonality contrast]] [[SiblingYinYang to]] [[StepfordSnarker his]] [[GrumpyBear main]] [[TheComicallySerious universe]] [[SourOutsideSadInside counterpart]]).]]

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** [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich, if his letters are anything to go by ([[AllThereInTheManual and]] [[in StraightMan]] [[ SugarAndIcePersonality contrast]] [[SiblingYinYang to]] [[StepfordSnarker his]] [[GrumpyBear main]] [[TheComicallySerious universe]] [[SourOutsideSadInside counterpart]]).]]

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** [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich, if his letters are anything to go by ([[AllThereInTheManual and]] [[in StraightMan]] [[contrast SugarAndIcePersonality]] [[SiblingYinYang to]] [[StepfordSnarker his]] [[GrumpyBear main]] [[TheComicallySerious universe]] [[SourOutsideSadInside counterpart]]).]]

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** [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich, if his letters are anything to go by (and in contrast to his [[AllThereInTheManual main universe counterpart]]).]]

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** [[spoiler:Cheese's brother, Tomato Sandwich]]. So far, only two letters from him have been shown. His appearance was teased for a couple of chapters, [[until Cheese's reply to his letter was dropped by the mailpony and stolen by Cortland]].

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** [[spoiler:Cheese's brother, Tomato Sandwich]]. So far, only two letters from him have been shown. His appearance was teased for a couple of chapters, [[until [[spoiler:until Cheese's reply to his letter was dropped by the mailpony and stolen by Cortland]].

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* AllThereInTheManual: [[spoiler:On FIMfiction, the author has a few additional stories that feature Tomato Sandwich (Cheese's younger brother), as well as an ask blog for him. The information provided tells readers that Main 'Verse "Tommy" is a [[GrumpyBear grumpy]] DeadpanSnarker who also works as [[TheComicallySerious a Comically Serious]] {{Foil}} to Cheese. They have a fierce SiblingRivalry in the main universe, which was touched upon in another story called "Brother Bothers".]]


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* AllThereInTheManual: [[spoiler:On FIMfiction, the author has a few additional stories that feature Tomato Sandwich (Cheese's younger brother), as well as an ask blog for him. The information provided tells readers that Main 'Verse "Tommy" is a [[GrumpyBear grumpy]] DeadpanSnarker who also works as [[TheComicallySerious a Comically Serious]] {{Foil}} to Cheese. They have a fierce SiblingRivalry in the main universe, which was touched upon in another story called "Brother Bothers".]]



* [[spoiler:Cheese's brother, Tomato Sandwich]]. So far, only two letters from him have been shown. His appearance was teased for a couple of chapters, [[until Cheese's reply was dropped by the mailpony and stolen by Cortland]].

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* ** [[spoiler:Cheese's brother, Tomato Sandwich]]. So far, only two letters from him have been shown. His appearance was teased for a couple of chapters, [[until Cheese's reply to his letter was dropped by the mailpony and stolen by Cortland]].
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* ActionGirl: All the Pie mares.
** ActionMom: Cloudy Quartz really shined in the fight against the Diamond Dogs.


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* CrazyJealousGuy: Cortland.


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** Cloudy Quartz


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* TheGhost: Granny Pie and Nana Pinkie. They died before the story began.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Limestone and Marble.

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