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* HalfIdenticalTwins: Stayman and Idared.


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** Igneous has a sister that he hasn't seen for years [[spoiler:because she ran away because she was humiliated by a stallion she liked. It's part of the reason why Igneous is so protective of his daughters]].

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* FieryRedhead: Sugar Glider. She's whacked a couple ponies with a broom for bothering Cheese and whoever he's with.
* [[spoiler:FirstKiss]]: [[spoiler:Cheese and Pinkamena have theirs at the carnival. Igneous catches them in the act]].



** The most prominent one is after [[spoiler:their FirstKiss]]. Naturally, the moment is ruined seconds later.



* NeverMyFault: When Pinkamena rejects Cortland's advances, he blames Igneous for being too strict and Cheese for seducing her. He never seems to consider that he was coming on [[{{Understatement}} a little too strong]].

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* NeverMyFault: When Pinkamena rejects Cortland's advances, he blames Igneous for being too strict and Cheese for seducing her. He never seems to consider that he was coming on [[{{Understatement}} a little too strong]]. [[spoiler:He even goes so far as to plot to get Cheese fired and leave town, and after that happens, decides to make Igneous pay]].



** [[spoiler:He fires Cheese after catching him kissing Pinkamena, and the suggestiveness and criminal smell of the letter from "Tomato" (actually a forged letter from a gang member Cortland hired) made him even more wary of both Sandwich brothers]]. Pinkamena calls him out for overreacting.



** Cortland resents Igneous and Cheese for getting in the way of him winning over Pinkamena. [[spoiler:He plots to have Cheese fired (which ends up happening) and to make Igneous "pay".]]



* TheRunaway: Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].

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* TheRunaway: Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].family]].
** [[spoiler:Pinkamena, having had enough of her father's overprotectiveness and the idiots in Nickerlite. She follows the recently-fired Cheese]].



** Given that Cheese Sandwich is voiced by WeirdAlYankovic, there were bound to be a few references in the fic. Most notably is when Cheese sits out in the rain and sings about living in a "Rock Farm Paradise."
** There was a scene where after Pinkamena buys from a cabbage vendor, [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender the cart is destroyed by a bunch of foals]].

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** Given that Cheese Sandwich is voiced by WeirdAlYankovic, WeirdAlYankovic in the show, there were bound to be a few references in the fic. Most notably is when Cheese sits out in the rain and sings about living in a "Rock Farm Paradise."
** There was a scene where after Pinkamena buys from a cabbage vendor, [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender the cart is destroyed by a bunch of foals]]. It ends up becoming a bit of a running gag.
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* NoodleIncident: Cheese apparently gets himself into a lot of scrapes. He has mentioned nearly getting killed by a Santa Hooves in Canterlot, getting pelted by jellyfish, and had an encounter with vampire fruit bats. His adventures make for entertaining stories that he tells Marble and Limestone.


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* TheStoryteller: Cheese. He's willing to share stories of his crazy adventures, even if the Pies don't believe him.

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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: The tough-as-nails and stern Pinkamena, and the sweet and shy Cheese.

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* LoveTriangle: Cheese/Pinkamena/Cortland. The town roots for the latter, Bluejinx and the candy shop owners are on the side of the former, the Pies (especially Igneous) don't want either to happen, and the Apples are just trying to control their son.
* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: The tough-as-nails and stern Pinkamena, and the sweet and shy Cheese.



* TheRunaway: Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].

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* TheRunaway: Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].

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* BrokenBird: The Pies have always had more subtle use of their emotions--but after [[spoiler:both Granny Pie and Nana Pinkie died suddenly in the same night]], they just became gloomy and reclusive. It's especially notable with Pinkamena, who had been a [[CheerfulChild little ball of sunshine]] before the tragedy. And since she missed the Rainboom, they never completely moved on until Cheese came along.

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* BrokenBird: The Pies have always had more subtle use of their emotions--but after [[spoiler:both Granny Pie and Nana Pinkie died suddenly in the same night]], they just became gloomy and reclusive. It's especially notable with Pinkamena, who had been a [[CheerfulChild little ball of sunshine]] before the tragedy. And since she missed the Rainboom, they never completely moved on until Cheese came along.



* HeldGaze: Happens a couple of times with Pinkamena and Cheese.



* MasculineGirlFeminineGuy: The tough-as-nails and stern Pinkamena, and the sweet and shy Cheese.

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* MasculineGirlFeminineGuy: MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: The tough-as-nails and stern Pinkamena, and the sweet and shy Cheese. Cheese.



* TheRunaway: Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].

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* TheRunaway: Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].

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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler:Bluejinx recognizes Cheese as his friend Tomato's brother.]]

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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler:Bluejinx recognizes Cheese as his friend Tomato's brother.]] ]]
* MasculineGirlFeminineGuy: The tough-as-nails and stern Pinkamena, and the sweet and shy Cheese.



** [[spoiler:The reason Cheese ran away from home and suffers from low self-esteem; he was under stress due to a combination of teasing at school, high expectations from his mother, and everypony comparing him with his more popular and book smart younger brother. Said brother accidentally aggravated his social anxiety, and the final straw was when Cheese's accordion was broken]].

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** [[spoiler:The reason Cheese ran away from home and suffers from low self-esteem; he was under stress due to a combination of teasing at school, high expectations from his mother, and everypony comparing him with his more popular and book smart younger brother. Said brother accidentally aggravated his social anxiety, and the final straw was when Cheese's accordion was broken]]. broken]].
* TheRunaway: Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].

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* BadassFamily: Demonstrated early on with Cloudy, Marble, and Limestone fighting off Diamond Dogs. It's also mentioned that Igneous, Maud, and Pinkamena are the strongest members of the family.



* LongingLook: After a certain point in the fic, Pinkamena shoots these in Cheese's direction. Maud catches on to what those mean fairly quickly.

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* LongingLook: After a certain point in the fic, Pinkamena shoots these in Cheese's direction. Maud catches on to what those mean fairly quickly. quickly.
* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler:Bluejinx recognizes Cheese as his friend Tomato's brother.]]
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* BrokenBird: The Pies have always had more subtle use of their emotions--but after [[spoiler:both Granny Pie and Nana Pinkie died suddenly in the same night]], they just became gloomy and reclusive. It's especially notable with Pinkamena, who had been a [[CheerfulChild little ball of sunshine]] before the tragedy. And since she missed the Rainboom, they never completely moved on until Cheese came along.


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* DefrostingIceQueen: The Pie Sisters. Though [[EmotionlessGirl Maud]] is the least obvious.


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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Cheese is attracted to Pinkamena's eyes. [[spoiler:Especially when she smiles]].
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* ForWantOfANail: Pinkamena simply went inside before the Rainboom happened. Results in neither she nor Cheese Sandwich becoming party ponies.

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* GenkiGirl: Sugar Glider.



* NeverMyFault: When Pinkamena rejects Cortland's advances, he blames Igneous for being too strict and Cheese for seducing her. He never seems to consider that he was coming on [[{{Understatement}} a little too strong]].

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* NeverMyFault: When Pinkamena rejects Cortland's advances, he blames Igneous for being too strict and Cheese for seducing her. He never seems to consider that he was coming on [[{{Understatement}} a little too strong]].

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* BlindWithoutEm: Whenever Cheese drops his glasses, his vision's completely blurry.



* TheDrifter: Cheese, though his personality is far from the typical drifter.

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* TheDrifter: Cheese, though his personality is far from the typical drifter.drifter.
* DroppedGlasses: Cheese, a few times. The worst time so far was when Diamond Dogs popped in on the farm.



* NeverMyFault: When Pinkamena rejects Cortland's advances, he blames Igneous for being too strict and Cheese for seducing her. He never seems to consider that he was coming on a little too strong.

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* NeverMyFault: When Pinkamena rejects Cortland's advances, he blames Igneous for being too strict and Cheese for seducing her. He never seems to consider that he was coming on [[{{Understatement}} a little too strong. strong]].

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This story is a favorite among [[{{Shipping}} Cheese Pie]] fans. What started out as a simple "What if" concerning Pinkie's influence on Cheese has turned into a fascinating and fun story, building a world out of the rock farm, the frontier-town inspired Nickerlite, and the surrounding area. The way the Pies were written have them being sympathetic and likable, the OCs are interesting and don't overstay their welcome, and the blossoming romance between Cheese and Pinkamena is slow, but very sweet. It also touches on a possible expansion on Cheese's reasons for running away.

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This story is a favorite among [[{{Shipping}} Cheese Pie]] fans. What started out as a simple "What if" concerning Pinkie's influence on Cheese has turned into a fascinating and fun story, building a world out of the rock farm, the frontier-town inspired Nickerlite, and the surrounding area. The way the Pies were written have them being stern and humorless, yet sympathetic and likable, the OCs are interesting and don't overstay their welcome, and the blossoming romance between Cheese and Pinkamena is slow, but very sweet. It also touches on a possible expansion on Cheese's reasons for running away.


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* NeverMyFault: When Pinkamena rejects Cortland's advances, he blames Igneous for being too strict and Cheese for seducing her. He never seems to consider that he was coming on a little too strong.

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* CryIntoChest: Though she doesn't cry, [[spoiler:Pinkamena still hugs Cheese like she's about to, due to being humiliated in town by Cortland and a bunch of townsfolk pressuring her to smile for Cortland and accept him as a beau]].

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* CryIntoChest: Though she doesn't cry, [[spoiler:Pinkamena still hugs Cheese like she's about to, due to being humiliated in town by Cortland and a bunch of townsfolk pressuring her to smile for Cortland and accept him as a beau]]. beau]].
* DarkReprise: Though the fic's not a musical, it does heavily feature the Smile Song, presented as a song stuck in Pinkamena's head that she hums a couple of times. [[spoiler:The reprise comes when the townsfolk are pressuring her into a relationship with Cortland and telling her to "smile, smile, smile." Poor Pinkamena is greatly unnerved when she notices the chanting is similar to the song in her head]].



* SurroundedByIdiots: The Pies feel like this whenever they visit town.

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* SurroundedByIdiots: The Pies feel like this whenever they visit town.town.
* TriumphantReprise: [[spoiler:Pinkamena belts out the Smile Song (with reworked lyrics due to the AU setting), when her spirits keep getting lifted due to finally being able to smile, and she's sure her family's not far behind]].
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* ForcefulKiss: [[spoiler:Cortland plants one on Pinkamena when she's cowed by the crowd chanting a corrupted version of the Smile Song (ItMakesSenseInContext). Naturally, she gives him a good, hard smack across the face]].


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* InnocentlyInsensitive: [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich, Cheese's younger brother. It was a factor in Cheese leaving]].


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* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Cortland is ''terrifyingly'' possessive of Pinkamena, and is willing to get rid of Cheese over it]].
** [[spoiler:The reason Cheese ran away from home and suffers from low self-esteem; he was under stress due to a combination of teasing at school, high expectations from his mother, and everypony comparing him with his more popular and book smart younger brother. Said brother accidentally aggravated his social anxiety, and the final straw was when Cheese's accordion was broken]].
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* TheDrifter: Cheese, though his personality is far from the typical drifter.

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* TheDrifter: Cheese, though his personality is far from the typical drifter.



* [[spoiler:EverthingsBetterWithRainbows]]: [[spoiler:A rainbow is what triggers Pinkamena's smile]].

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* [[spoiler:EverthingsBetterWithRainbows]]: [[spoiler:EverythingsBetterWithRainbows]]: [[spoiler:A rainbow is what triggers Pinkamena's smile]].



* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Cheese has to say this about ''all'' the Pie sisters.

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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Cheese has to say this about ''all'' the Pie sisters.



* WalkingTheEarth: Due to having never been inspired to be a party pony, this is Cheese's special talent.

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* WalkingTheEarth: Due to having never been inspired to be a party pony, this is Cheese's special talent. [[spoiler:He avoids going home because he's certain that his family would be ashamed of him]].

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-->'''Igneous:''' (dead serious) Yep.

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-->'''Igneous:''' (dead serious) Yep.Yep.
* CryIntoChest: Though she doesn't cry, [[spoiler:Pinkamena still hugs Cheese like she's about to, due to being humiliated in town by Cortland and a bunch of townsfolk pressuring her to smile for Cortland and accept him as a beau]].



* DogsAreDumb: Well, Diamond Dogs, anyway. The biggest one ribbits [[spoiler:and was tricked by Cheese into running headfirst into a boulder]].

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* DogsAreDumb: Well, Diamond Dogs, anyway. The biggest one ribbits [[spoiler:and was tricked by Cheese into running headfirst into a boulder]]. boulder]].
* TheDrifter: Cheese, though his personality is far from the typical drifter.



* [[spoiler:EverthingsBetterWithRainbows]]: [[spoiler:A rainbow is what triggers Pinkamena's smile]].



* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Cheese has to say this about ''all'' the Pie sisters.

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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Cheese has to say this about ''all'' the Pie sisters.


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* WalkingTheEarth: Due to having never been inspired to be a party pony, this is Cheese's special talent.

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* AmazonChaser: Cortland. He even admits that years of working on the rock farm have made Pinkamena shapely. He shows no interest in any of her sisters, however, probably due to them being gray and Pinkamena being, well, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin pink]].



* LongingLook: After a certain point in the fic, Pinkamena shoots these in Cheese's direction. Maud catches on to what those mean fairly quickly.



* SharedFamilyQuirks: Igneous and Pinkamena guzzle water in the same way.

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* SharedFamilyQuirks: Igneous and Pinkamena guzzle water in the same way. way.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Cheese has to say this about ''all'' the Pie sisters.


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* IgnoredEpiphany: [[spoiler:After talking with his father, Cortland appears to be set up to swallow his pride and face the consequences of spreading lies about a nonexistent relationship between him and Pinkamena... only to decide that it's all Cheese's fault and plot to get rid of him]].

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* IgnoredEpiphany: [[spoiler:After talking with his father, Cortland appears to be set up to swallow his pride and face the consequences of spreading lies about a nonexistent relationship between him and Pinkamena... only to decide that it's all Cheese's fault and plot to get rid of him]].



* PanickyExpectantFather: Lemon Drop is pretty calm when we first meet him, but as the birth of him and his wife's first foal draws near, he starts getting a little unhinged. [[spoiler:Gets worse when Sugar goes into labor while on a visit to the Pies, and Maud has to keep him calm]].

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* PanickyExpectantFather: Lemon Drop is pretty calm when we first meet him, but as the birth of him his and his wife's first foal draws near, he starts getting a little unhinged. [[spoiler:Gets worse when Sugar goes into labor while on a visit to the Pies, and Maud has to keep him calm]].calm]].
* [[spoiler:PostKissCatatonia]]: [[spoiler:Cheese ends up walking back to the house in a daze after Pinkamena kisses him on the cheek. He even notes it felt like one moment he was outside and the next he was in his room.]]

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* [[spoiler:BigBrotherWorship]]: [[spoiler:According to Cheese's backstory, his little brother Tomato admired him so much, he wanted to show his friends just how cool he was. It backfired and only made Cheese even more withdrawn and stressed-out]].

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* [[spoiler:BigBrotherWorship]]: [[spoiler:According to Cheese's backstory, his little brother Tomato admired him so much, he wanted to show his friends just how cool he was. It backfired and only made Cheese even more withdrawn and stressed-out]].stressed-out]].
* BluntYes: This exchange between Igneous and Haralson:
-->'''Igneous:''' A rock farmer's strength comes in handy for those situations.
-->'''Haralson:''' (jokingly) And for threatenin' any suitors of yer daughters?
-->'''Igneous:''' (dead serious) Yep.



* GreenEyedMonster: [[spoiler:Cortland suspects Cheese of "stealing his mare (Pinkamena)", and starts plotting a way to get rid of him]].

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* GreenEyedMonster: [[spoiler:Cortland suspects Cheese of "stealing his mare (Pinkamena)", and starts plotting a way to get rid of him]].
* IgnoredEpiphany: [[spoiler:After talking with his father, Cortland appears to be set up to swallow his pride and face the consequences of spreading lies about a nonexistent relationship between him and Pinkamena... only to decide that it's all Cheese's fault and plot to get rid of
him]].



* SugarAndIcePersonality: The Pies. They come off as forbidding to outsiders (in Igneous' case, especially when it comes to stallions), but after Cheese is hired, they slowly warm up to him, and repeatedly show that they truly care for one another.



* SugarAndIcePersonality: The Pies. They come off as forbidding to outsiders (in Igneous' case, especially when it comes to stallions), but after Cheese is hired, they slowly warm up to him, and repeatedly show that they truly care for one another.

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* SugarAndIcePersonality: SurroundedByIdiots: The Pies. They come off as forbidding to outsiders (in Igneous' case, especially when it comes to stallions), but after Cheese is hired, Pies feel like this whenever they slowly warm up to him, and repeatedly show that they truly care for one another.visit town.

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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: Inverted, then played straight. Pinkamena scares off stallions catcalling Maud, followed by Maud shooing an unwelcome Cortland away by raising her voice.

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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: Inverted, then played straight. Pinkamena scares off stallions catcalling Maud, followed by Maud shooing an unwelcome Cortland away from Pinkamena by raising her voice. voice.
* [[spoiler:BigBrotherWorship]]: [[spoiler:According to Cheese's backstory, his little brother Tomato admired him so much, he wanted to show his friends just how cool he was. It backfired and only made Cheese even more withdrawn and stressed-out]].



* DogsAreDumb: Well, Diamond Dogs, anyway. The biggest one ribbits [[spoiler:and was tricked by Cheese into running headfirst into a boulder]].



* GreenEyedMonster: [[spoiler:Cortland suspects Cheese of "stealing his mare (Pinkamena)", and starts plotting a way to get rid of him]].
* LikeBrotherAndSister: Cheese's relationship with the Pie sisters; he keeps repeating this sentiment to folks who suspect him to be romancing at least one of the mares. He's not, since he promised Igneous he wouldn't do so; however, he's still clearly falling in love with Pinkamena.



* PrecociousCrush: Idared clearly has one on Cheese.

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* PrecociousCrush: Idared clearly has one on Cheese.Cheese.
* TheResenter: [[spoiler:Cheese holds resentment over being overlooked by nearly everypony in favor of his younger brother]].
* SharedFamilyQuirks: Igneous and Pinkamena guzzle water in the same way.



** Given that Cheese Sandwich is voiced by WeirdAlYankovic, there were bound to be a few references in the fic.

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** Given that Cheese Sandwich is voiced by WeirdAlYankovic, there were bound to be a few references in the fic. Most notably is when Cheese sits out in the rain and sings about living in a "Rock Farm Paradise."



* SuperStrength: The entire Pie family.



* SuperStrength: The entire Pie family.

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* SuperStrength: The entire Pie family.[[spoiler:TheUnfavorite]]: [[spoiler:Cheese has referred to himself as the "nopony" of his family. Considering how his younger brother had surpassed him both socially and academically, it's not hard to see why he's so down about it]].
* WhenSheSmiles: [[spoiler:Cheese is in awe when he sees Pinkamena smile for the first time.]]

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* EekAMouse: [[spoiler:...a whole army of them, actually. And they were revealed when Marble opened a cupboard and they poured onto her head]]. Could you blame her for curling up on the table in a small HeroicBSOD?



* MaternityCrisis: [[spoiler:Sugar Glider goes into labor while visiting the Pies. Good thing the Pies are not the type to panic (though apparently Sugar's husband Lemon Drop is).]]



* NonSequiturThud: Doubles as s ShoutOut:

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* NonSequiturThud: Cheese wakes up to the sound of Igneous cursing, stumbles out of bed, and hits his head on the floor. Doubles as s ShoutOut:a ShoutOut.



* PanickyExpectantFather: Lemon Drop is pretty calm when we first meet him, but as the birth of him and his wife's first foal draws near, he starts getting a little unhinged. [[spoiler:Gets worse when Sugar goes into labor while on a visit to the Pies, and Maud has to keep him calm]].



** The character of Cortland is suspiciously like [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast Gaston]].

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** The character of Cortland is suspiciously like [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast Gaston]].Gaston]], if only in the pursuit of the female lead.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Cheese.
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: Inverted, then played straight. Pinkamena scares off stallions catcalling Maud, followed by Maud shooing an unwelcome Cortland away by raising her voice.


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* ExtremeDoormat: Pinkamena calls Haralson this, as Cortland had [[spoiler:shown no sign of leaving her alone and the townsfolk keep on whispering about him and Pinkamena being a thing when they're not]].


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* NonSequiturThud: Doubles as s ShoutOut:
-->'''Cheese:''' Squid hat is going to the hardware store...
-->'''Pinkamena:''' No, you're not.
-->'''Cheese:''' But I don't know what I'm singing!


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* PrecociousCrush: Idared clearly has one on Cheese.
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This story is a favorite among CheesePie fans. What started out as a simple "What if" concerning Pinkie's influence on Cheese has turned into a fascinating and fun story, building a world out of the rock farm, the frontier-town inspired Nickerlite, and the surrounding area. The way the Pies were written have them being sympathetic and likable, the OCs are interesting and don't overstay their welcome, and the blossoming romance between Cheese and Pinkamena is slow, but very sweet. It also touches on a possible expansion on Cheese's reasons for running away.

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This story is a favorite among CheesePie [[{{Shipping}} Cheese Pie]] fans. What started out as a simple "What if" concerning Pinkie's influence on Cheese has turned into a fascinating and fun story, building a world out of the rock farm, the frontier-town inspired Nickerlite, and the surrounding area. The way the Pies were written have them being sympathetic and likable, the OCs are interesting and don't overstay their welcome, and the blossoming romance between Cheese and Pinkamena is slow, but very sweet. It also touches on a possible expansion on Cheese's reasons for running away.

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* DeadpanSnarker: Pinkamena, which is a huge contrast to main 'verse Pinkie Pie.
** Limestone. Her snarks are usually directed at Marble.
* FarmersDaughter: Four of them.
* NiceGuy: Cheese. He remains very sweet and polite when interacting with most ponies. The times he doesn't act very nice tend to be a bit startling.
** Bluejinx, which makes it a little jarring to the Pies when Cheese starts acting coldly toward him.
** Haralson. He sincerely wants to be friends with Igneous, though it's difficult when his son's behavior is taken into account.



* SugarAndIcePersonality: The Pies. They come off as forbidding to outsiders (in Igneous' case, especially when it comes to stallions), but after Cheese is hired, they slowly warm up to him.
* SuperStrength: The entire Pie family.

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* SugarAndIcePersonality: The Pies. They come off as forbidding to outsiders (in Igneous' case, especially when it comes to stallions), but after Cheese is hired, they slowly warm up to him.
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* SuperStrength: The entire Pie family.

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* OverprotectiveDad: Igneous Rock. While his daughters can handle themselves in a fight, he's very wary of stallions seducing them. He only hires Cheese after he determines that the younger stallion is harmless and uninterested in pursuing a relationship with any of the girls, and even then Igneous still worries about a possible romance.



** [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender There was a scene where after Pinkamena buys from a cabbage vendor, the cart is destroyed by a bunch of foals]].
** The character of Cortland is suspiciously like [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast Gaston]].

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** [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender There was a scene where after Pinkamena buys from a cabbage vendor, [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender the cart is destroyed by a bunch of foals]].
** The character of Cortland is suspiciously like [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast Gaston]].Gaston]].
* SugarAndIcePersonality: The Pies. They come off as forbidding to outsiders (in Igneous' case, especially when it comes to stallions), but after Cheese is hired, they slowly warm up to him.
* SuperStrength: The entire Pie family.

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Also, the author has made it clear that another mare is the Element of Laughter in this universe; eternal night is not an issue in this fic.

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Also, the author has made it clear that another mare is the Element of Laughter in this universe; eternal night is not an issue in this fic.fic.

!!This Fan Fiction contains examples of:

* ShoutOut:
** Given that Cheese Sandwich is voiced by WeirdAlYankovic, there were bound to be a few references in the fic.
** [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender There was a scene where after Pinkamena buys from a cabbage vendor, the cart is destroyed by a bunch of foals]].
** The character of Cortland is suspiciously like [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast Gaston]].
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One day, Cheese stumbles into the small town of Nickerlite, and ends up taking a job on the rock farm across the railroad and beyond the hills. There, he works alongside Pinkamena, her sisters Maud, Marble, and Limestone, and her parents Igneous Rock and Cloudy Quartz. As he and the Pies get to know each other and deal with obstacles together, Cheese finds himself growing attached to the Pie sisters, especially to Pinkamena, whose tough exterior hides a much softer interior. And Pinkamena finds herself increasingly interested about Cheese and his origins, since in all his tales, there was never a mention of his family.

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One day, Cheese stumbles into the small town of Nickerlite, and ends up taking a job on the rock farm across the railroad and beyond the hills. There, he works alongside Pinkamena, her sisters Maud, Marble, and Limestone, and her parents Igneous Rock and Cloudy Quartz. As he and the Pies get to know each other and deal with obstacles and mishaps together, Cheese finds himself growing attached to the Pie sisters, especially to Pinkamena, whose tough exterior hides a much softer interior. And Pinkamena finds herself increasingly interested about Cheese and his origins, since in all his tales, there was never a mention of his family.


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This story is a favorite among CheesePie fans. What started out as a simple "What if" concerning Pinkie's influence on Cheese has turned into a fascinating and fun story, building a world out of the rock farm, the frontier-town inspired Nickerlite, and the surrounding area. The way the Pies were written have them being sympathetic and likable, the OCs are interesting and don't overstay their welcome, and the blossoming romance between Cheese and Pinkamena is slow, but very sweet. It also touches on a possible expansion on Cheese's reasons for running away.

Also, the author has made it clear that another mare is the Element of Laughter in this universe; eternal night is not an issue in this fic.

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One day, Cheese stumbles into the small town of Nickerlite, and ends up taking a job on the rock farm across the railroad and beyond the hills. There, he works alongside Pinkamena, her sisters Maud, Marble, and Limestone, and her parents Igneous Rock and Cloudy Quartz. As he and the Pies get to know each other,

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One day, Cheese stumbles into the small town of Nickerlite, and ends up taking a job on the rock farm across the railroad and beyond the hills. There, he works alongside Pinkamena, her sisters Maud, Marble, and Limestone, and her parents Igneous Rock and Cloudy Quartz. As he and the Pies get to know each other,
other and deal with obstacles together, Cheese finds himself growing attached to the Pie sisters, especially to Pinkamena, whose tough exterior hides a much softer interior. And Pinkamena finds herself increasingly interested about Cheese and his origins, since in all his tales, there was never a mention of his family.

Meanwhile, most of the Nickerlite residents keep coming up with ridiculous speculations about the Pies, much to the family's annoyance. And it isn't long before Cheese ends up being a part of the mess.

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An Alternate Universe [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/180008/the-rock-farmers-daughters fan fiction]] by Sketcha-Holic.

We all know what would happen to Pinkie Pie had she never witnessed the Sonic Rainboom: she'd grow up on the rock farm, living a tedious life of hauling and breaking rocks with her family to make a living. She never became the Element of Laughter or a party pony, instead becoming a sober and serious mare that hasn't cracked a smile since she was small.

And because she never was a party pony and hadn't left the rock farm, the party in Ponyville that inspired Cheese Sandwich never happened. So, Cheese is simply a shy and awkward drifter, working odd jobs here and there.

One day, Cheese stumbles into the small town of Nickerlite, and ends up taking a job on the rock farm across the railroad and beyond the hills. There, he works alongside Pinkamena, her sisters Maud, Marble, and Limestone, and her parents Igneous Rock and Cloudy Quartz. As he and the Pies get to know each other,

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