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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/94034/the-rise-of-spike-the-dragon The Rise Of Spike The Dragon]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that has been [[MemeticMutation FEATURED SEVERAL TIMES]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet, and is written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/MasterBrony+Forever MasterBrony Forever]]. It was posted on the site in the spring of 2013, but hasn't been updated since 2015, with the author stating it to be on hiatus.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/94034/the-rise-of-spike-the-dragon The Rise Of Spike The Dragon]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that has been [[MemeticMutation FEATURED SEVERAL TIMES]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet, Platform/FimfictionDotNet, and is written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/MasterBrony+Forever MasterBrony Forever]]. It was posted on the site in the spring of 2013, 2013 but hasn't been updated since 2015, with the author stating it to be on hiatus.
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* TheAce: Spike, to the rest of his group. He's tough, intelligent (from years of reading books in the library), and is generally held in high-regard by the others as the one to look to for guidance.
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* TheAce: Spike, to the rest of his group. He's tough, intelligent (from years of reading books in the library), and is generally held in high-regard high regard by the others as the one to look to for guidance.
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* {{Expy}}: Glamour is basically a carbon copy of Rarity; from the personality, to appearance, and straight down to the way she speaks.
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* {{Expy}}: Glamour is basically a carbon copy of Rarity; from the her personality, to her appearance, and straight down to the way she speaks.
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* NeverMyFault: Celestia puts all the blame on Twilight for Spike's escape, but clearly forgets crucial points. Not only did she decided not to tell his story sooner, [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot which could have avoided the whole thing altogether]], but she also threatens Spike, which obviously gave him more reasons to flee.[[spoiler: It is later shown that it was Celestia's true persona Radiant Malevolence, who provoked the Scales Six into attacking Equestria and yet she never acknowledged her mistake.]]
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* NeverMyFault: Celestia puts all the blame on Twilight for Spike's escape, but clearly forgets crucial points. Not only did she decided decide not to tell his story sooner, [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot which could have avoided the whole thing altogether]], but she also threatens Spike, which obviously gave him more reasons to flee.[[spoiler: It is later shown that it was Celestia's true persona Radiant Malevolence, who provoked the Scales Six into attacking Equestria and yet she never acknowledged her mistake.]]
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** Twilight and her friends came to the Crystal Empire searching for help, but when the crystal ponies found out what happened to Spike, their hero that beat Sombra, the entire empire revolted and forced every equestrian to flee.
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** Twilight and her friends came to the Crystal Empire searching for help, but when the crystal ponies found out what happened to Spike, their hero that who beat Sombra, the entire empire revolted and forced every equestrian to flee.
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** He also has [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech a few choice words]] for the rest of the ponies, the CMC included (but not Applejack, curiously enough).
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** He also has [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech a few choice words]] for the rest of the ponies, the CMC included (but not Applejack, curiously enough).enough).
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: This whole thing probably may not have happened in the first place had Celestia had come clean about Spike's origins sooner rather than later, ''especially'' before the latter ran away.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: This whole thing probably may not have happened in the first place had Celestia had come clean about Spike's origins sooner, ''especially'' before the latter ran away.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: This whole thing probably may not have happened in the first place had Celestia had come clean about Spike's origins sooner, sooner rather than later, ''especially'' before the latter ran away.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: This whole thing probably may not have happened in the first place had Celestia had come clean about Spike's origins sooner, ''especially'' before the latter ran away.
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* NeverMyFault: Celestia puts all the blame on Twilight for Spike's escape, but clearly forgets crucial points. Not only did she decided not to tell his story sooner, which could have avoided the whole thing, but she also threatens Spike, which obviously gave him more reasons to flee.[[spoiler: It is later shown that it was Celestia's true persona Radiant Malevolence, who provoked the Scales Six into attacking Equestria and yet she never acknowledged her mistake.]]
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* NeverMyFault: Celestia puts all the blame on Twilight for Spike's escape, but clearly forgets crucial points. Not only did she decided not to tell his story sooner, [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot which could have avoided the whole thing, thing altogether]], but she also threatens Spike, which obviously gave him more reasons to flee.[[spoiler: It is later shown that it was Celestia's true persona Radiant Malevolence, who provoked the Scales Six into attacking Equestria and yet she never acknowledged her mistake.]]
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/94034/the-rise-of-spike-the-dragon The Rise Of Spike The Dragon]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that has been [[MemeticMutation FEATURED SEVERAL TIMES]] on FimfictionDotNet, and is written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/MasterBrony+Forever MasterBrony Forever]]. It was posted on the site in the spring of 2013, but hasn't been updated since 2015, with the author stating it to be on hiatus.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/94034/the-rise-of-spike-the-dragon The Rise Of Spike The Dragon]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that has been [[MemeticMutation FEATURED SEVERAL TIMES]] on FimfictionDotNet, Website/FimfictionDotNet, and is written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/MasterBrony+Forever MasterBrony Forever]]. It was posted on the site in the spring of 2013, but hasn't been updated since 2015, with the author stating it to be on hiatus.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/94034/the-rise-of-spike-the-dragon The Rise Of Spike The Dragon]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that has been [[MemeticMutation FEATURED SEVERAL TIMES]] on FimfictionDotNet, and is written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/MasterBrony+Forever MasterBrony Forever]]. It was posted on the site in the spring of 2013, and is still being regularly updated.
but hasn't been updated since 2015, with the author stating it to be on hiatus.
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* Jekyll&Hyde: It is shown that Celestia is just a kind persona created by Radiant Malevolence, the one that truly beat Scales Six.
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* Jekyll&Hyde: JekyllandHyde: It is shown that Celestia is just a kind persona created by Radiant Malevolence, the one that truly beat Scales Six.
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* NeverMyFault: Celestia puts all the blame on Twilight for Spike's escape, but clearly forgets crucial points. Not only did she decided not to tell his story sooner, which could have avoided the whole thing, but she also threatens Spike, which obviously gave him more reasons to flee.[[spoiler: It is later shown that it was Celestia's true persona Radiant Malevolence, who provoked the Scales Six into attacking Equestria and yet she never aknowledged her mistake.]]
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* NeverMyFault: Celestia puts all the blame on Twilight for Spike's escape, but clearly forgets crucial points. Not only did she decided not to tell his story sooner, which could have avoided the whole thing, but she also threatens Spike, which obviously gave him more reasons to flee.[[spoiler: It is later shown that it was Celestia's true persona Radiant Malevolence, who provoked the Scales Six into attacking Equestria and yet she never aknowledged acknowledged her mistake.]]
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* Jekyll&Hyde: It is shown that Celestia is just a kind persona created by Radiant Malevolence, the one that truly beat Scales Six.
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* NeverMyFault: Celestia puts all the blame on Twilight for Spike's escape, but clearly forgets crucial points. Not only did she decided not to tell his story sooner, which could have avoided the whole thing, but she also threatens Spike, which obviously gave him more reasons to flee.[[spoiler: It is later shown that it was Celestia's true persona Radiant Malevolence, who provoked the Scales Six into attacking Equestria and yet she never aknowledged her mistake.]]
* NiceJobBreakingitHero:
**Celestia really should have told Spike's true story to Twilight many years ago. And threatening Spike to return didn´t help either.
**Twilight and her friends came to the Crystal Empire searching for help, but when the crystal ponies found out what happened to Spike, their hero that beat Sombra, the entire empire revolted and forced every equestrian to flee.
**[[spoiler: Radiant Malevolence, afraid of the dragons' power, sent dragon hunters to kill them. This triggered a war between dragons and Equestria.]]
* NiceJobBreakingitHero:
**Celestia really should have told Spike's true story to Twilight many years ago. And threatening Spike to return didn´t help either.
**Twilight and her friends came to the Crystal Empire searching for help, but when the crystal ponies found out what happened to Spike, their hero that beat Sombra, the entire empire revolted and forced every equestrian to flee.
**[[spoiler: Radiant Malevolence, afraid of the dragons' power, sent dragon hunters to kill them. This triggered a war between dragons and Equestria.]]
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* {{Badass}}: The story makes out Spike to be this.
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* DesignatedHero: Spike.
* DesignatedVillain: Celestia is this. The only reason she is considered "the bad guy" is pretty much only because they just ''say'' she is. It gets to the point where she starts believing in it herself.
* DesignatedVillain: Celestia is this. The only reason she is considered "the bad guy" is pretty much only because they just ''say'' she is. It gets to the point where she starts believing in it herself.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Celestia. The only thing she seems to care about is remaining in power, if only to ensure she can do what she feels is best for her ponies. She is painted as being the villain so much, [[HeelRealization she even starts to believe in this]] herself.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/94034/the-rise-of-spike-the-dragon The Rise Of Spike The Dragon]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that has been [[MemeticMutation FEATURED SEVERAL TIMES]] on FimfictionDotNet, and is written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/MasterBrony+Forever MasterBrony Forever]]. It was posted on the site in the spring of 2013, and is still being regularly updated.
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* AlternateUniverseFic
* TheAce: Spike, to the rest of his group. He's tough, intelligent (from years of reading books in the library), and is generally held in high-regard by the others as the one to look to for guidance.
* {{Badass}}: The story makes out Spike to be this.
* DarkerAndEdgier
* DesignatedHero: Spike.
* DesignatedVillain: Celestia is this. The only reason she is considered "the bad guy" is pretty much only because they just ''say'' she is. It gets to the point where she starts believing in it herself.
* {{Expy}}: Glamour is basically a carbon copy of Rarity; from the personality, to appearance, and straight down to the way she speaks.
** Most of the Scale Six appear to be expies of the Mane Six, for that matter. Scout bearing some similarities to Applejack in being the stronger one of the group (along with the [[OohMeAccentsSlipping suspiciously-inconsistent accent]]), for example.
* HollywoodHealing: Despite some wounds being described as bleeding profusely, [[OnlyAFleshWound most of the time it's rarely serious]] or life-threatening in any way.
* IdiotBall: Celestia seems fond of carrying this around with her.
** She allowed several of the dragon eggs (minus Spike’s) to go missing and possibly be stolen, simply because she [[FailedASpotCheck “lost track of them”]].
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Spike explains to the other dragons that [[InformedAbility they are capable of using magic]] beyond simply using their fire, and can utilize it the same way that other unicorns can.
* LawfulStupid: When Celestia and her guards are giving chase to Spike and his group, they are stopped at the Equestrian border. Since they believe to have no jurisdiction past that point, she won’t step even one foot over the line, not even to continue chasing a fugitive. And since the country they escaped to is essentially a wasteland, it’s doubtful that anyone would notice them entering anyway.
* OohMeAccentsSlipping: Despite speaking clear and concise English for the most part, Scout randomly slips into a southern-esque drawl at one point, then loses it immediately afterward.
* OriginalCharacter: Each member of the "Scale Six" besides Spike is one of these.
* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: From Spike’s perspective, the others have been mistreating him and treating him like dirt. The narration seems to share that very perspective. Even the world itself is geared towards vindicating Spike and vilifying the others that he believes wronged him, with Luna and Discord even abandoning Celestia in favor of Spike instead.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Frequently occur.
** Spike gives one of these to Twilight before leaving, in the story's first chapter.
* TookALevelInBadass: Spike, assuming his position as the leader of the Scale Six after years of hiding away from pony society.
* RonTheDeathEater: Celestia. The only thing she seems to care about is remaining in power, if only to ensure she can do what she feels is best for her ponies. She is painted as being the villain so much, [[HeelRealization she even starts to believe in this]] herself.
* WhatTheHellHero: The story begins with Spike delivering one of these to Twilight.
** He also has [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech a few choice words]] for the rest of the ponies, the CMC included (but not Applejack, curiously enough).
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* AlternateUniverseFic
* TheAce: Spike, to the rest of his group. He's tough, intelligent (from years of reading books in the library), and is generally held in high-regard by the others as the one to look to for guidance.
* {{Badass}}: The story makes out Spike to be this.
* DarkerAndEdgier
* DesignatedHero: Spike.
* DesignatedVillain: Celestia is this. The only reason she is considered "the bad guy" is pretty much only because they just ''say'' she is. It gets to the point where she starts believing in it herself.
* {{Expy}}: Glamour is basically a carbon copy of Rarity; from the personality, to appearance, and straight down to the way she speaks.
** Most of the Scale Six appear to be expies of the Mane Six, for that matter. Scout bearing some similarities to Applejack in being the stronger one of the group (along with the [[OohMeAccentsSlipping suspiciously-inconsistent accent]]), for example.
* HollywoodHealing: Despite some wounds being described as bleeding profusely, [[OnlyAFleshWound most of the time it's rarely serious]] or life-threatening in any way.
* IdiotBall: Celestia seems fond of carrying this around with her.
** She allowed several of the dragon eggs (minus Spike’s) to go missing and possibly be stolen, simply because she [[FailedASpotCheck “lost track of them”]].
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Spike explains to the other dragons that [[InformedAbility they are capable of using magic]] beyond simply using their fire, and can utilize it the same way that other unicorns can.
* LawfulStupid: When Celestia and her guards are giving chase to Spike and his group, they are stopped at the Equestrian border. Since they believe to have no jurisdiction past that point, she won’t step even one foot over the line, not even to continue chasing a fugitive. And since the country they escaped to is essentially a wasteland, it’s doubtful that anyone would notice them entering anyway.
* OohMeAccentsSlipping: Despite speaking clear and concise English for the most part, Scout randomly slips into a southern-esque drawl at one point, then loses it immediately afterward.
* OriginalCharacter: Each member of the "Scale Six" besides Spike is one of these.
* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: From Spike’s perspective, the others have been mistreating him and treating him like dirt. The narration seems to share that very perspective. Even the world itself is geared towards vindicating Spike and vilifying the others that he believes wronged him, with Luna and Discord even abandoning Celestia in favor of Spike instead.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Frequently occur.
** Spike gives one of these to Twilight before leaving, in the story's first chapter.
* TookALevelInBadass: Spike, assuming his position as the leader of the Scale Six after years of hiding away from pony society.
* RonTheDeathEater: Celestia. The only thing she seems to care about is remaining in power, if only to ensure she can do what she feels is best for her ponies. She is painted as being the villain so much, [[HeelRealization she even starts to believe in this]] herself.
* WhatTheHellHero: The story begins with Spike delivering one of these to Twilight.
** He also has [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech a few choice words]] for the rest of the ponies, the CMC included (but not Applejack, curiously enough).
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