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** How Darth sees his kidnapping and treatment of Diamond Tiara, and how Diamond Tiara ends up seeing it due to an illusion cast by Twilight making her think no one loved her. It's actually averted. Filthy Rich and Silver Spoon spent weeks worrying about what happened to her, and the Crusaders themselves are the ones who help Diamond Tiara recover in the end. Rather than rejoice, the school was closed for weeks since ponies feared another kidnapping.
** The destruction of Cirrus and Hilltop. The communities were both run by crooked and incompetent officials. And they also allowed the horrible injustice that was done to the remedial class pegasi just to cover it up even after having saved their lives. After learning of how immoral and racist these communities were, not only will Twilight indict the terrible community leaders, but she denied sending Crown money to rebuild the towns.
*** As for Sundae Sprinkles, the corrupt corrections official put in charge of the remedial class' punishment, and who ruined their lives for being "worthless delinquents," Artful Dodger stops just short of killing him, leaving him crippled in addition to having to face his own criminal charges.
** The destruction of Cirrus and Hilltop. The communities were both run by crooked and incompetent officials. And they also allowed the horrible injustice that was done to the remedial class pegasi just to cover it up even after having saved their lives. After learning of how immoral and racist these communities were, not only will Twilight indict the terrible community leaders, but she denied sending Crown money to rebuild the towns.
*** As for Sundae Sprinkles, the corrupt corrections official put in charge of the remedial class' punishment, and who ruined their lives for being "worthless delinquents," Artful Dodger stops just short of killing him, leaving him crippled in addition to having to face his own criminal charges.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: How Darth sees his kidnapping and treatment of Diamond Tiara, and how Diamond Tiara ends up seeing it due to an illusion cast by Twilight making her think no one loved her. It's actually averted. Filthy Rich and Silver Spoon spent weeks worrying about what happened to her, and the Crusaders themselves are the ones who help Diamond Tiara recover in the end. Rather than rejoice, the school was closed for weeks since ponies feared another kidnapping.
** Vulcan's reaction to everything, actually.
** The destruction of Cirrus and Hilltop. The communities were both run by crooked and incompetent officials. And they also allowed the horrible injustice that was done to the remedial class pegasi just to cover it up even after having saved their lives. After learning of how immoral and racist these communities were, not only will Twilight indict the terrible community leaders, but she denied sending Crown money to rebuild the towns.
*** As for Sundae Sprinkles, the corrupt corrections official put in charge of the remedial class' punishment, and who ruined their lives for being "worthless delinquents," Artful Dodger stops just short of killing him, leaving him crippled in addition to having to face his own criminal charges.
** Vulcan's reaction to everything, actually.
** The destruction of Cirrus and Hilltop. The communities were both run by crooked and incompetent officials. And they also allowed the horrible injustice that was done to the remedial class pegasi just to cover it up even after having saved their lives. After learning of how immoral and racist these communities were, not only will Twilight indict the terrible community leaders, but she denied sending Crown money to rebuild the towns.
*** As for Sundae Sprinkles, the corrupt corrections official put in charge of the remedial class' punishment, and who ruined their lives for being "worthless delinquents," Artful Dodger stops just short of killing him, leaving him crippled in addition to having to face his own criminal charges.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5553836 The Rise of Darth Vulcan]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/RHJunior/works Reality]][[Creator/RalphHayesJr Check]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn (formerly on Website/FimfictionDotNet).
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5553836 The Rise of Darth Vulcan]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/RHJunior/works Reality]][[Creator/RalphHayesJr Check]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn Platform/ArchiveOfOurOwn (formerly on Website/FimfictionDotNet).
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A fic based on a premise of another, the story explores the consequences of power (and pointing out what the writer considers problems with the show and other fanworks). Now has a character page under severe construction and development.
The fic got ambiguous reception. What was later revealed by WordOfGod to be signs of the protagonist's cruelty and stupidity was often interpreted as clever pragmatism and deconstruction, causing some frustration in the author and other readers. Given that cynicism is running wild these days, not all that surprising. As of Jan. 2018, the possibility of alternative interpretation remains, though later chapters may change it.
The fic got ambiguous reception. What was later revealed by WordOfGod to be signs of the protagonist's cruelty and stupidity was often interpreted as clever pragmatism and deconstruction, causing some frustration in the author and other readers. Given that cynicism is running wild these days, not all that surprising. As of Jan. 2018, the possibility of alternative interpretation remains, though later chapters may change it.
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A fic based on a premise of another, the story explores the consequences of power (and pointing out what the writer considers problems with the show and other fanworks). Now has a character page under severe construction and development.
fanworks).
The fic got ambiguous reception. What was later revealed by WordOfGod to be signs of the protagonist's cruelty and stupidity was often interpreted as clever pragmatism and deconstruction, causing some frustration in the author and other readers. Given that cynicism is running wild these days, not all that surprising. As of Jan. 2018, the possibility of alternative interpretation remains, though later chapters may change it.
The fic got ambiguous reception. What was later revealed by WordOfGod to be signs of the protagonist's cruelty and stupidity was often interpreted as clever pragmatism and deconstruction, causing some frustration in the author and other readers.
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* BenevolentBoss: See BecauseYouWereNiceToMe entry above.
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* BigBad: Ted/Darth Vulcan currently serves this role to the ponies.
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* TheCavalry: [[spoiler: Celestia, Luna, the Royal Guard, and the Mane Six.]]
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* TheDreaded: Vulcan becomes this in Equestria.
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* DressingAsTheEnemy: The changelings, naturally.
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* EvilSorcerer: Darth Vulcan. Gaining the [[ArtifactOfDoom Alicorn Amulet]] certainly helped.
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* DropTheHammer: Leo's weapon of choice.
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* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Ted, who wanted to [[spoiler: get revenge on Luna for using dream-magic to spy on him and discourage similar actions in the future]], took a pill he knew would give him dreams similar to a bad narcotic trip and would call up every dirty thing the Internet has ever produced. [[spoiler: Luna]] was subjected to an entire night of NauseaFuel and couldn't even eat her favourite flavour of ice-cream because of an infamous meme drilled into her skull.
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* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Ted, who wanted to [[spoiler: get revenge on Luna for using dream-magic to spy on him and to discourage similar actions in the future]], took a pill he knew would give him dreams similar to a bad narcotic trip and would call up every dirty thing the Internet has ever produced. [[spoiler: Luna]] was subjected to an entire night of NauseaFuel and couldn't even eat her favourite flavour of ice-cream because of an infamous meme drilled into her skull.
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* {{Acrofatic}}: Leo looks quite overweight, but has the strength and speed to go toe-to-toe with an enraged manticore.
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* {{Acrofatic}}: In an effort to counter Ted, [=AKA=] Darth Vulcan, Princess Celestia and the Mane Six summon Leo, a Scociety for Creative Anacronism larper who specializes in mock medievil era combat (padded plate armor and wooden swords) and roll playing games. Leo looks quite overweight, but has the strength and speed to go toe-to-toe with an enraged manticore.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5553836 The Rise of Darth Vulcan]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/RHJunior/works Reality]][[Creator/RalphHayesJr Check]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn (formerly Website/FimfictionDotNet).
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5553836 The Rise of Darth Vulcan]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/RHJunior/works Reality]][[Creator/RalphHayesJr Check]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn (formerly on Website/FimfictionDotNet).
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: A twisted variation occurs when Crysalis loses her fight to Vulcan. This display of power turns her on....
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* UnskilledButStrong: Vulcan, at least before he starts studying magic. Diamond Tiara is rather surprised that he doesn't know basic lessons she learned long ago, yet he's too powerful for the Mane Six to take on.
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* SeaMonster: While on the water Vulcan briefly encounters the Draco, a constellation monster like the Ursas that takes the form of a serpent travelling the oceans.
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* SpiderSwarm: Artful Dodger punishes a stallion for molesting Eiderdown with a dose of Nightmare Mist. The stallion's worst fear is a horde of spiders crawling all over him.
** Dodger later saves the tooth breezies from a real spider swarm, earning their loyalty.
** Dodger later saves the tooth breezies from a real spider swarm, earning their loyalty.
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* SpiderSwarm: Artful Dodger punishes a stallion for molesting Eiderdown with a dose of Nightmare Mist. The stallion's worst fear is a horde of spiders crawling all over him. \n** Dodger later saves the tooth breezies from a real spider swarm, earning their loyalty.
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** For all the contempt he has on bronies and cosplayers who go to conventions, Ted/Darth Vulcan is very much a closet geek who is into real time strategy games and plays old school NES games (even if not quite by choice due to his allegedly cheapskate parents) and admits to being a cosplayer himself in his own mind/first person narrative, with the weak justification that he only dresses in costume for Halloween because it's "socially acceptable". The moniker of Darth Vulcan was inspired by the scene in the original ''Film/BackToTheFuture'' where Marty freaks out the 1955 version of his dad by putting on his radiation suit and claims to be [[ShoutOut "Darth Vader from the Planet Vulcan"]] in his attempt to set history straight again and get his parents together to secure his future. It goes well into hypocrite levels when some of Ted's narrative hints at being at a ''Dungeons and Dragons'' player, a geekdom sub-group who have suffered from even worse criticism, prejudice AND persecution than bronies due to lies perpetrated by MoralGuardians about players of the game being devil worshipers years ago IRL.
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** For all the contempt he has on bronies and cosplayers who go to conventions, Ted/Darth Vulcan is very much a closet geek who is into real time strategy games and plays old school NES games (even if not quite by choice due to his allegedly cheapskate parents) and admits to being a cosplayer himself in his own mind/first person narrative, with the weak justification that he only dresses in costume for Halloween because it's "socially acceptable". The moniker of Darth Vulcan was inspired by the scene in the original ''Film/BackToTheFuture'' ''Film/BackToTheFuture1'' where Marty freaks out the 1955 version of his dad by putting on his radiation suit and claims to be [[ShoutOut "Darth Vader from the Planet Vulcan"]] in his attempt to set history straight again and get his parents together to secure his future. It goes well into hypocrite levels when some of Ted's narrative hints at being at a ''Dungeons and Dragons'' player, a geekdom sub-group who have suffered from even worse criticism, prejudice AND persecution than bronies due to lies perpetrated by MoralGuardians about players of the game being devil worshipers years ago IRL.
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* XanatosGambit: Celestia's summoning of a Champion to deal with Vulcan -- either it works directly, or at least buys the Princesses and Mane Six time to find another way to defeat him.
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** Celestia's summoning of a Champion to deal with Vulcan -- either it works directly, or at least buys the Princesses and Mane Six time to find another way to defeathim.him.
** Also, Celestia sending Leo to engage Darth Vulcan at the Cauldron. She had equipped, trained, and supported Leo as best she could and thought he had a decent chance of taking down Darth Vulcan, but she simultaneously used his attack as a diversion to cover her forces establishing base camps in the Everfree.
** Celestia's summoning of a Champion to deal with Vulcan -- either it works directly, or at least buys the Princesses and Mane Six time to find another way to defeat
** Also, Celestia sending Leo to engage Darth Vulcan at the Cauldron. She had equipped, trained, and supported Leo as best she could and thought he had a decent chance of taking down Darth Vulcan, but she simultaneously used his attack as a diversion to cover her forces establishing base camps in the Everfree.
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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Rainbow Dash is a little touchy about anypony bringing up that she provoked Darth Vulcan by [[LeeroyJenkins assaulting him]] when he walked into Ponyville and demanded to know where he could find Twilight.
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