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* MonsterMash: The Ankh-Morpork City Air Watch is ''mainly'' composed of Witches with a passion for flight who ''mainly'' fly high-{{Magitek}}-enhanced broomsticks. They also boast [[{{Pegasus}} Pegasi]] and a Heavy Squadron of flying elephants. Associate members of the Air Watch include pilots who can fly without needing a broomstick -- a vampire and a banshee. The second, Syrrit-conflict, arc of the story concludes with [[spoiler: their getting unit mascots to take on parade -- a flying sheep and, inevitably, an air-capable K'holli dog]].

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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Count Semyon Romanoff, initially posted as a diplomat to Ankh-Morpork, takes advantage of his relative freedom to contact dissident groups intent on overthrowing Prince Heinrich of Zlobenia as the first step towards dissolving Zlobenia and rebuilding a new Rodinia. As Semyon is a Zlobenian, this might be called ''disloyal'. it is hinted that Vetinari has reminded Prince Heinrich that their interests coincide here - neither wants to see the current status quo dissolved. What might have been a brief courtesy visit from an Assassin becomes a posting to Syrrit.[[note]]in the middle of sub-Neffian Klatch, a backward remote semi-desert state, analagous with somewhere like UsefulNotes/BurkinaFaso or UsefulNotes/{{Mali}} on our world[[/note]] When the Pegasus Service runs into trouble ferrying him there, an international crisis begins.

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Count Semyon Romanoff, initially posted as a diplomat to Ankh-Morpork, takes advantage of his relative freedom to contact dissident groups intent on overthrowing Prince Heinrich of Zlobenia as the first step towards dissolving Zlobenia and rebuilding a new Rodinia. As Semyon is a Zlobenian, this might be called ''disloyal'. it is hinted that Vetinari has reminded Prince Heinrich that their interests coincide here - neither wants to see the current status quo dissolved. What might have been a brief courtesy visit from an Assassin becomes a posting to Syrrit.[[note]]in the middle of sub-Neffian Klatch, a backward remote semi-desert state, analagous with somewhere like UsefulNotes/BurkinaFaso or UsefulNotes/{{Mali}} on our world[[/note]] When the Pegasus Service runs into trouble ferrying him there, an international crisis begins.
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* TheNondescript: It is the fate of young trainee Witch Jane Smith to be this - although she's bright and capable and gets on with the job, she's also the anonymous one in the background behind the main characters, who everybody else struggles to remember afterwards. Even her ''name'' - Jane Smith - is as anonymous as you can possibly get. As the stories develop, it is just possible that this will turn out to be a sort of magic in itself and a Witch skill.
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* BadassTeacher: Yelena Garianova, a woman who discovered the essential truth that all roads lead to Ankh-Morpork, becomes, for part of her week, Watch Education Officer. The other half of her week is spent working at the Assassins' Guild School, who ''also'' want a teacher with her specific experience. Yelena, a Cossack from a far region that has ''difficult'' neighbours, soon makes it to Sergeant. She considers a week spent alternating between teaching Rodinian to student Assassins, and offering a general education to student Witches, is as satisfying and stimulating as the teaching profession can get. Watchmen seeking help with basic literacy issues also treat her with great respect.


* TheCaptain: Olga Romanoff.

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* TheCaptain: Olga Romanoff. Romanoff, who by slow and inevitable advancements unwillingly and reluctantly became Commanding Officer and "Squadron Leader" of the Air Watch.
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* SapientSteed: The Pegasi of the Air Watch, especially the very first two who were born of magic, are described as having rather more intelligence than the average wingless horse, and are capable of communicating in more abstract ways with their mistresses. Olga's Raduga Desh, for instance, knows to bow[[note]]To non-horsey people, this is ''kneeling''[[/note]] to enable somebody getting on to the pillion who has never before been on a horse of any kind in her life.
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* WizardingSchool: It is fast becoming a norm for girls with an aptitude for witchcraft to attend conventional schools first, or at least till around age thirteen or fourteen, before coming to Lancre to train as Witches. Miss Perspicacia Tick is a "consultant teacher" who advises on the practicalities of this with institutions such as the Quirm College for Girls, or the Convent School of Seven-Handed Sek. Olga Romanoff, a senior Witch in Ankh-Morpork, is known to be concerned that post-primary education for young Witches is scrappy and patchy, and wants her Air Watch cadets to be acceptably literate in things like science and technology as well as magic. She has therefore persuaded Sam Vimes to pay for a Watch Education Officer, a suitably experienced teacher who takes the Fledgelings several times a week to ensure they get some sort of classroom education.
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* RussianFashion: After long experience of flying at altitude in winter, seasonal flying kit for the Air Watch now involves things like the ''vatrik'', the padded winter overclothes, valenki felt overboots, a big comfortable shuba coat that can practically stand up on its own, and of course the ubiquitous ''ushanka'' fur hat with the pull-down ear flaps. Sam Vimes accepts this, noting the Watch badge is completely visible in the front crown of the ushanka and clearly identifies its wearer as a watchman.
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* The {{Courier}}: Ankh-Morpork's courier needs are served by the {{Pegasus}} Service, the marvellous winged horses which are nominally part of the City Air Watch. Each of those seventeen pilots, viewed as the élite of the Air Watch, is served by a Feegle Navigator who can get the pilot and her mount anywhere on the Disc within an hour. Lord Vetinari uses them to convey diplomatic bags, air mail, and his personal greetings to Governments around the Disc. As these pilots discover, the price of this sort of flight is that they also have to be Post Office Trained. Regulations demand this.
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* PolicePig: The Air Watch is made up of Witches with a passion for flight, who provide Sam Vimes with an aerial dimension. Aware of the derogatory nickname, the Air Witches have claimed NWordPrivileges for themselves and their unit badge depicts a pig in a pointy hat astride a broomstick. Of course, any civilian referring to Flying Pigs might still get a taster of Watch brutality.
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* InstantBirthJustAddLabour: These stories follow the Literature/{{Discworld}} canon closely by accepting midwifery is one of the biggest single reasons for Witches and takes up a lot of their time. Even - and possibly ''especially'' - the Air Watch accept they are Ankh-Morpork's flying emergency midwives, if the expectant mother can't get to the Lady Sybil, or if a midwife from the hospital cannot get to the mother in time, or if there are no civilian witches available at street level. Before the advent of Omnicon communicators, it was not unusual for a ground Watchman to run into the street and start to frantically signal upwards to attract the attention of an Air Watch patrol witch. These days, Omnicon communications mean an Air Witch can report back to base that she'll be tied up for an indefinite period, and Control can get a reserve flier up to cover the beat.
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* TragicIceCharacter: Hanna von Strafenburg is first introduced as an isolated, lonely, girl trapped by her nobility and desperately longing for a normal life. Things improve when she goes to Lancre to train as a witch. She discoers her magical affinity is with ice, snow and cold; she ''can'' throw a standard fireball if she has to, but her preferred magical weapon is the complete opposite: a short intense blast of extreme cold not much above absolute zero.

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* TragicIceCharacter: Hanna von Strafenburg is first introduced as an isolated, lonely, girl trapped by her nobility and desperately longing for a normal life. Things improve when she goes to Lancre to train as a witch. She discoers discovers her magical affinity is with ice, snow and cold; she ''can'' throw a standard fireball if she has to, but her preferred magical weapon is the complete opposite: a short intense blast of extreme cold not much above absolute zero.



* VestigialEmpire: As with the former Ankh-Morporkian Empire, the spread of old Rodinia, once an imperial rival, is now vastly diminished. The Four Duchies which are now part of Zlobenia are the respective seats of four brothers, the closest claimants to the dormant Tsarate. Blondograd, the former Imperial Capital on the River Musckovada [[note]]Canonical place: see ''The Compleat Discworld Atlas''[[/note]] is now just another city in Far Überwald and under the rule of Lady Margolotta. Wide-ranging Cossack tribes, spread as far as the Vortex Plains, the Vulga Steppes, the Great Moldavian Lake and Kazackstan, a land bordering on Klatch and Muntab. As with all other hopeful migrant groups, Ankh-Morpork itself now has a substantial ethnic community of Rodinians. Who look to Lady Olga Romanoff and her cousin Lady Natasha Romanoff as their social leaders.

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* VestigialEmpire: As with the former Ankh-Morporkian Empire, the spread of old Rodinia, once an imperial rival, is now vastly diminished. The Four Duchies which are now part of Zlobenia are the respective seats of four brothers, the closest claimants to the dormant Tsarate. Blondograd, the former Imperial Capital on the River Musckovada [[note]]Canonical place: see ''The Compleat Discworld Atlas''[[/note]] is now just another city in Far Überwald and under the rule of Lady Margolotta. Wide-ranging Cossack tribes, tribes are spread as far as the Vortex Plains, the Vulga Steppes, the Great Moldavian Lake and Kazackstan, a land bordering on Klatch and Muntab. There are the two detached enclaves on the Disc, geographically most remote of all, where Rodinians are a majority: Nobinovgorod [[note]]where [[HalfWittedHillbilly people are strange]][[/note]] and Bloodibostock. As with all other hopeful migrant groups, Ankh-Morpork itself now has a substantial ethnic community of Rodinians. Who look to Lady Olga Romanoff and her cousin Lady Natasha Romanoff as their social leaders.
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* ComicallySmallDemand: Captain Olga Romanoff puts on an absolutely straight face when she suggests "a new dartboard" from Vetinari. [[note]] In context, she has led Ankh-Morpork's Air Watch in delivering a shattering defeat against the Klatchian Air Force and eliminating them as a threat.[[/note]]. Vetinari decodes what she ''really'' means, and all the participating Air Watch pilots receive a large cash bonus. Olga herself gets enough to buy a family home. While he also confers medals, he also commits the Air Watch to a celebratory parade to receive the Thanks Of The Grateful City - which means they have to spend weeks learning all about parade marching.
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* TheRadioDiesFirst: An Air Watch flight arriving in central Klatch comes under sustained attack from the Klatchian Air Force. To avert any possibility that the two pilots can get a distress signal home, the first Klatchian attack is a magic spell designed to destroy their communicators, and to leave them unable to call for help.
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* FatCamp: Air Watch commanding officer Captain Olga Romanoff had to ask Assassin advice when she took her first, reluctantly accepted, draft of recruit wizards, some of whom had settled into typical Wizard ways of eating even before graduating. An inferred detail is that there had to be a Fat Camp for some of her Wizards.[[note]]The Assassins have evolved strategies for dealing with promising but overweight new students, or else students who let themselves get fat. Suffuce it to say that you would not want to attend Assassins' School Special Measures classes. (their Fat Camp)[[/note]]

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* FatCamp: Air Watch commanding officer Captain Olga Romanoff had to ask Assassin advice when she took her first, reluctantly accepted, draft of recruit wizards, some of whom had settled into typical Wizard ways of eating even before graduating. An inferred detail is that there had to be a Fat Camp for some of her Wizards.[[note]]The Assassins have evolved strategies for dealing with promising but overweight new students, or else students who let themselves get fat. Suffuce Suffice it to say that you would not want to attend Assassins' School Special Measures classes. (their Fat Camp)[[/note]]



* Flapping Cheeks: To maximise aircrew numbers, the Air Watch will take any Ground Watch member with a head for heights up as aircrew. After all, only the pilot needs to be a magic user. The problem with taking Captain Angua von Überwald up as aircrew, pilots report, is that she gets over-excited, wants to lean out into the slipstream, and howl. Olga Romanoff speculates that this is something hardwired into the canine psyche, even for werewolves.

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* Flapping Cheeks: FlappingCheeks: To maximise aircrew numbers, the Air Watch will take any Ground Watch member with a head for heights up as aircrew. After all, only the pilot needs to be a magic user. The problem with taking Captain Angua von Überwald up as aircrew, pilots report, is that she she gets over-excited, wants to lean out into the slipstream, and howl. Olga Romanoff speculates that this is something hardwired into the canine psyche, even for werewolves.

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* FatCamp: Air Watch commanding officer Captain Olga Romanoff had to ask Assassin advice when she took her first, reluctantly accepted, draft of recruit wizards, some of whom had settled into typical Wizard ways of eating even before graduating. An inferred detail is that there had to be a Fat Camp for some of her Wizards.

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* FatCamp: Air Watch commanding officer Captain Olga Romanoff had to ask Assassin advice when she took her first, reluctantly accepted, draft of recruit wizards, some of whom had settled into typical Wizard ways of eating even before graduating. An inferred detail is that there had to be a Fat Camp for some of her Wizards. [[note]]The Assassins have evolved strategies for dealing with promising but overweight new students, or else students who let themselves get fat. Suffuce it to say that you would not want to attend Assassins' School Special Measures classes. (their Fat Camp)[[/note]]


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* Flapping Cheeks: To maximise aircrew numbers, the Air Watch will take any Ground Watch member with a head for heights up as aircrew. After all, only the pilot needs to be a magic user. The problem with taking Captain Angua von Überwald up as aircrew, pilots report, is that she gets over-excited, wants to lean out into the slipstream, and howl. Olga Romanoff speculates that this is something hardwired into the canine psyche, even for werewolves.
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** Captain Olga Romanoff, aware she is running what is at most a MildlyMilitary operation involving quirky, independently-minded and above all ''exceptional'' people with Talents and Abilities, is careful to make necessary discipline into something which is flexible and intelligently applied rather than by-the-manual tough. Readers have likened her to Colonel Maxima in ''Webcomic/GrrlPower'', a woman in charge of superheroines. WordOfGod is that there is truth in this.
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* NoseArt: Each Pegasus pilot is allowed to personalise her mount. not with anything painted or tattooed onto the animal itself, as this would be cruel. The large flat-fronted forward panniers carried ahead of the saddle, however, can be personalised on their outer faces with artwork specific to the pilot, and all the pilots of the Pegasus Service elect to carry their own distinctions here, subject to Olga Romanoff's approval.
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[[caption-width-right:350:The proposed interceptor/fighter broom code-named the P-51. Illustration identified as by [[https://joncameronli.com/portfolio John Cameron]].]]

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* OldSoldier: In a youth-oriented Service where (if she wasn't there), the average age of a pilot would be around eighteen or nineteen, Nadezhda Popova stands out. She's forty-three. The oldest pilot in the Service, she has transferred from fast single-seat fighter brooms to command the [[GiantFlyer Heavy Squadron]]. The rest of the Air Watch calls her "Mother Hen" and treats her with great respect.

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* OldSoldier: In a youth-oriented Service where (if she wasn't there), the average age of a pilot would be around eighteen or nineteen, Nadezhda Popova stands out. She's forty-three. The oldest pilot in the Service, she has transferred from fast single-seat fighter brooms to command the [[GiantFlyer Heavy Squadron]]. The rest of the Air Watch calls her "Mother Hen" "[[TeamMom Mother Hen]]" and treats her with great respect.
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* FatCamp: Air Watch commanding officer Captain Olga Romanoff had to ask Assassin advice when she took her first, reluctantly accepted, draft of recruit wizards, some of whom had settled into typical Wizard ways of eating even before graduating. An inferred detail is that there had to be a Fat Camp for some of her Wizards.
--> "Let me get this straight. I want no excess weight on my air vehicles.''
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** The little matter of Irena's Pegasus. RuleOfFunny suggested to the author that two majestic flying horses should be named after characters from ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePony''. Olga's mount duly became ''Raduga Desh'' - Rainbow Dash. [[DidNotDoTheBloodyResearch slapdash research]] suggested "Cupcakes" as a suitable pony name. The author, not being greatly into MPL-FIM, shrugged and thought "that'll do". Reader feedback suuggested this was not ''quite'' the most appropriate choice. After discovering the true nature of "[[NightmareFuel Cupcakes]]", Pessimal agreed. Irena's Pegasus is now ''Pryaniki'', which is apparently a generic word for small sweet cakes served with Russian tea. This may change again: a Russian-speaking reader suggested ''Vatruschka'', another sort of Russian tea cake.

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** The little matter of Irena's Pegasus. RuleOfFunny suggested to the author that two majestic flying horses should be named after characters from ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePony''. Olga's mount duly became ''Raduga Desh'' - Rainbow Dash. [[DidNotDoTheBloodyResearch slapdash research]] suggested "Cupcakes" as a suitable pony name. The author, not being greatly into MPL-FIM, MLP-FIM, shrugged and thought "that'll do". Reader feedback suuggested this was not ''quite'' the most appropriate choice. After discovering the true nature of "[[NightmareFuel Cupcakes]]", Pessimal agreed. Irena's Pegasus is now ''Pryaniki'', which is apparently a generic word for small sweet cakes served with Russian tea. This may change again: a Russian-speaking reader suggested ''Vatruschka'', another sort of Russian tea cake.



** If a soundtrack is ever devised, Music/{{Sabaton}}'s ''Night Witches'' and the Music/BlueOysterCult's ''[=ME262=]'' will be in there. Both songs are referenced, as are Russian anthems by such as Music/OtavaYo.

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** If a soundtrack is ever devised, Music/{{Sabaton}}'s ''Night Witches'' ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jcemHIqmkYI Night Witches]]'' and the Music/BlueOysterCult's ''[=ME262=]'' ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vI-z64G3tvU ME262=]]'' will be in there. Both songs are referenced, as are Russian anthems by such as Music/OtavaYo.
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* DeskJockey: Olga, firstly when she is wounded in action and is absolutely barred from flying by her medical advisor. To her annoyance, both her subordinate Lieutenants (Irena and Nadezhda) see this is enforced. When she is cleared to fly again, Vetinari takes a hand and contrives a situation where ''everybody'' who is senior to her in the City Watch goes on leave. This obliges her to stay grounded as Acting Watch Commander, where she gets to fly Sam Vimes' desk for a fortnight.
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* HaggisIsHorrible: This tale has expanded on the canonical idea of the Klatchian Sheep's Eye - basically, a disgusting foodstuff deliberately offered to a visitor, with a totally straight face, in the expectation that it cannot be refused out of politeness. The locals then gain a moment of mirth at the expense of the hapless visitor. He argues ''every'' Discworld country does this to naive visitors. In ''Fanfic/ThePriceOfFlight'', a novice pilot sent to the Discworld's "Scandinavia" gets the learning opportunity to politely decline ''hakarl'' in [[UsefulNotes/{{Iceland}} Island]], ''lutefisk'' in [[UsefulNotes/{{Denmark}} the Skaggeraks]], and ''surstrommong'' in [[UsefulNotes/{{Sweden}} Hubsvensska]]. She then gets offered ''salmiakki'' and ''mammi'' in [[UsefulNotes/{{Finland}} Swommi]].
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** The one [[UsefulNotes/SouthAfrica Rimwards Howondalandian]] pilot in the Air Watch is affectionately nick-named ''Series/DieLieweHecksie'' by family members. (One who is even called Livinia).

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** The one [[UsefulNotes/SouthAfrica Rimwards Howondalandian]] pilot in the Air Watch is affectionately nick-named ''Series/DieLieweHecksie'' by family members. (One who is even called Livinia).
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* WitchClassic: Olga absolutely insists all members of her command also put in time, once or twice a month, working as normal everyday Steading witches, to keep their basic nuts-and-bolts Witch skills sharp and most importantly, so that they do not forget they ''are'' Witches. The Watch Steading covers all of Ankh-Morpork and is there as a service to Watchmen or their family members who need to consult a Witch about, well, the usual range of things. The girls take it in turns on a rota basis and the Watch Steading, housed in a basement at Pseudopolis Yard next to Igor's laboratory, offers constant cover for this purpose.

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