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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5798113/chapters/13363663 The Party Incident and Other Embarrassing Anecdotes]]'' (also known as ''The Party Incident'', or TPI) is an VideoGame/{{Undertale}} fanfic written by [[http://poubelle-squelette.tumblr.com/ Poubelle Squelette]] about a woman (often referred to as [[SecondPersonNarration Reader]]) who meets Sans. As the title implies, Reader has many, ''many'' embarrassing moments thereafter, involving anime, fake dating, crushes, Mettaton, and much more.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5798113/chapters/13363663 The Party Incident and Other Embarrassing Anecdotes]]'' (also known as ''The Party Incident'', or TPI) is an VideoGame/{{Undertale}} ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}'' fanfic written by [[http://poubelle-squelette.tumblr.com/ Poubelle Squelette]] about a woman (often referred to as [[SecondPersonNarration Reader]]) who meets Sans. As the title implies, Reader has many, ''many'' embarrassing moments thereafter, involving anime, fake dating, crushes, Mettaton, and much more.
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*EmotionallyTongueTied: Papyrus claims Sans to be this during his training with Reader.
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* UnfortunateItemSwap: For Christmas, Reader gives Sans his present, declaring that she spent a lot of time picking it out and they think he's really going to like it. Unfortunately, she was part of a Secret Santa exchange, and accidentally gave Sans [[spoiler: a bright pink dildo meant as a gag gift for [[TheFriendNobodyLikes Wyatt]]]].
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* UnfortunateItemSwap: For Christmas, Reader gives Sans his present, declaring that she spent a lot of time picking it out and they think he's really going to like it. Unfortunately, she was part of a Secret Santa exchange, and accidentally gave Sans [[spoiler: a bright pink dildo meant as a gag gift for her friend [[TheFriendNobodyLikes Wyatt]]]].
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* UnfortunateItemSwap: For Christmas, Reader gives Sans his present, declaring that she spent a lot of time picking it out and they think he's really going to like it. Unfortunately, she was part of a Secret Santa exchange, and accidentally gave Sans [[spoiler: a bright pink dildo meant as a gag gift for [[TheFriendNobodyLikes Wyatt]]]].
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->'''Sans:''' so how do you know papyrus?
->'''Reader:''' Oh, I'm, um, I'm dating his brother! But enough about me, how do you know Papyrus?
->'''Sans:''' oh, you didn't know? i'm the brother.
-->--First chapter summary
''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5798113/chapters/13363663 The Party Incident and Other Embarrassing Anecdotes]]'' (also known as ''The Party Incident'', or TPI) is an VideoGame/{{Undertale}} fanfic written by [[http://poubelle-squelette.tumblr.com/ Poubelle Squelette]] about a woman (often referred to as [[SecondPersonNarration Reader]]) who meets Sans. As the title implies, Reader has many, ''many'' embarrassing moments thereafter, involving anime, fake dating, crushes, Mettaton, and much more.
Has a [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6121756/chapters/14031025 companion fic]] that features extras, including various chapters written from Sans's point of view.
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!! ''The Party Incident and Other Embarrassing Anecdotes'' contains examples of:
* ActuallyIAmHim: Sans waits until after he's introduced Reader to Papyrus as his girlfriend to tell her that he's the boyfriend she lied about dating.
* ButHeSoundsHandsome: While Reader is lying about dating "Papyrus's brother," she says she's not ashamed of dating a monster. Sans replies "good, cuz he’s a pretty swell guy."
* CringeComedy: The title does not include the phrase "other embarrassing incidents" for nothing.
* DidIJustSayThatOutLoud: Immediately after the realization mentioned in DistractedByTheSexy, she wonders "How does a skeleton have sex?"
* DiggingYourselfDeeper: Reader frequently responds to embarrassment with "word vomit."
* DistractedByTheSexy: Reader catches Sans staring as she eats a popsicle, and wonders about his odd reaction before realizing that "a dude skeleton was still a dude, right?"
* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Reader has a severe case of foot-in-mouth disease.
* NewJobAsThePlotDemands: Sans has been an art model, a nice cream vendor, a clerk at a grocery store, a bouncer at a strip club, and a mall Santa.
* SecondPersonNarration
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->'''Reader:''' Oh, I'm, um, I'm dating his brother! But enough about me, how do you know Papyrus?
->'''Sans:''' oh, you didn't know? i'm the brother.
-->--First chapter summary
''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5798113/chapters/13363663 The Party Incident and Other Embarrassing Anecdotes]]'' (also known as ''The Party Incident'', or TPI) is an VideoGame/{{Undertale}} fanfic written by [[http://poubelle-squelette.tumblr.com/ Poubelle Squelette]] about a woman (often referred to as [[SecondPersonNarration Reader]]) who meets Sans. As the title implies, Reader has many, ''many'' embarrassing moments thereafter, involving anime, fake dating, crushes, Mettaton, and much more.
Has a [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6121756/chapters/14031025 companion fic]] that features extras, including various chapters written from Sans's point of view.
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!! ''The Party Incident and Other Embarrassing Anecdotes'' contains examples of:
* ActuallyIAmHim: Sans waits until after he's introduced Reader to Papyrus as his girlfriend to tell her that he's the boyfriend she lied about dating.
* ButHeSoundsHandsome: While Reader is lying about dating "Papyrus's brother," she says she's not ashamed of dating a monster. Sans replies "good, cuz he’s a pretty swell guy."
* CringeComedy: The title does not include the phrase "other embarrassing incidents" for nothing.
* DidIJustSayThatOutLoud: Immediately after the realization mentioned in DistractedByTheSexy, she wonders "How does a skeleton have sex?"
* DiggingYourselfDeeper: Reader frequently responds to embarrassment with "word vomit."
* DistractedByTheSexy: Reader catches Sans staring as she eats a popsicle, and wonders about his odd reaction before realizing that "a dude skeleton was still a dude, right?"
* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Reader has a severe case of foot-in-mouth disease.
* NewJobAsThePlotDemands: Sans has been an art model, a nice cream vendor, a clerk at a grocery store, a bouncer at a strip club, and a mall Santa.
* SecondPersonNarration
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