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* DoggedNiceGuy: Seth acts a lot like the pre-[[CharacterDerailment derailed]] Jacob without the burning hate of vampires, perfect for rounding out the [[VampireWerewolfLoveTriangle Vampire-Vampire-Werewolf love triangle]].
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* DoggedNiceGuy: Seth acts a lot like the pre-[[CharacterDerailment derailed]] Jacob without the burning hate of vampires, perfect for rounding out the [[VampireWerewolfLoveTriangle Vampire-Vampire-Werewolf love triangle]].
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome/ CrowningMomentOfFunny: When Bree [[spoiler: kicks Alec off the Lutheran Cathedral]], now THAT takes some sheer gall.
-->Bree: I was optimistic, though. If I could outrun a werewolf, I could outrun a fourteen year old bloodsucking anesthesiologist, right?
-->Bree: I was optimistic, though. If I could outrun a werewolf, I could outrun a fourteen year old bloodsucking anesthesiologist, right?
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* JerkassWoobie: Alec and Jane have a rather heavy TearJerker backstroy that makes you want to hug and cuddle them, [[ManipulativeBastard and then]] [[AgonyBeam you]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast meet them.]]
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Six chapters in, Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
** YourMilageMayVary on how malignant the romance is to the plot since the majority of reviews express [[UnderStatement some mild interest]] in the future of Alec and Bree's relationship.
** Also, watching Bree and Alec fight can be pretty entertaining in itself.
** YourMilageMayVary on how malignant the romance is to the plot since the majority of reviews express [[UnderStatement some mild interest]] in the future of Alec and Bree's relationship.
** Also, watching Bree and Alec fight can be pretty entertaining in itself.
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--> Alec: She was one of my kind, yes, but one of a kind as well…which was peculiar since threads of my cold, empirical logic saw nothing remarkable about her in the least. She was a girl – my age or near to – with the enchanting beauty typical of all female vampires but not to the same memorizing extent as Heidi. Nonetheless, there was some ethereal quality to the girl that I couldn't place anymore than I could ignore.
** Kind of justified, in that Alec was bored out of his skull at the opening of his side of the story, [[spoiler: and actively contemplated turning one of the humans he was going to eat, just so he would have someone else his own age to talk to.]] Plus, it seems like all ''Twilight'' vampires are vulnerable to the same romantic whims of fate.
--> Alec: She was one of my kind, yes, but one of a kind as well…which was peculiar since threads of my cold, empirical logic saw nothing remarkable about her in the least. She was a girl – my age or near to – with the enchanting beauty typical of all female vampires but not to the same memorizing extent as Heidi. Nonetheless, there was some ethereal quality to the girl that I couldn't place anymore than I could ignore.
** Kind of justified, in that Alec was bored out of his skull at the opening of his side of the story, [[spoiler: and actively contemplated turning one of the humans he was going to eat, just so he would have someone else his own age to talk to.]] Plus, it seems like all ''Twilight'' vampires are vulnerable to the same romantic whims of fate.
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* YourMileageMayVary: Quite a bit actually, most notably the alternative views of the Cullens Alec presents.
** Also Alec himself, depending on your view point he is either a VillainProtagonist, AntiHero, AntiVillain, HeroicSociopath, or some combination thereof. The Jury is still out.
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** Also Alec himself, depending on your view point he is either a VillainProtagonist, AntiHero, AntiVillain, HeroicSociopath, or some combination thereof. The Jury is still out.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6033591/1/The_Not_So_Short_Second_Life_of_Bree_Tanner The Not So Short Second Life of Bree Tanner]]'' and its companion, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6064960/1/Ashes_through_an_Hourglass Ashes through an Hourglass]]'' (''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/140248/Oy_Angelina Oy Angelina]]''), are the metaphorical jackpot for anyone looking for a [[AC:Good]] ''{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6033591/1/The_Not_So_Short_Second_Life_of_Bree_Tanner The Not So Short Second Life of Bree Tanner]]'' and its companion, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6064960/1/Ashes_through_an_Hourglass Ashes through an Hourglass]]'' (''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/140248/Oy_Angelina Oy Angelina]]''), are the metaphorical jackpot for anyone looking for a [[AC:Good]] ''{{Twilight}}'' ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Six chapters in, Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Six chapters in, Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''{{Twilight}}'' ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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* MyBelovedSmother: ''Esme'', dear lord. Granted, she generally keeps it down enough that it's more sweet and slightly humorous than stifling.
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* ''The (Not So) Short Second Life of Bree Tanner'' was nominated for [[AC: Bloody Newborn (Best Characterization of a Newborn Vampire)]] (Lost to ''Taste of Innocence'' by Nolebucgrl)
* ''Ashes Through an Hourglass'' was nominated for [[AC: Evil Always Wins...Because Good Is Dumb (Best Volturi/Nomad)]] (Lost to ''Fallen Princess'' by Bforqueen)
* ''Ashes Through an Hourglass'' was nominated for [[AC: Evil Always Wins...Because Good Is Dumb (Best Volturi/Nomad)]] (Lost to ''Fallen Princess'' by Bforqueen)
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* ''The (Not So) Short Second Life of Bree Tanner'' was nominated for [[AC: Bloody Newborn (Best Characterization of a Newborn Vampire)]] Vampire)]]
** (Lost to ''Taste of Innocence'' by Nolebucgrl)
* ''Ashes Through an Hourglass'' was nominated for [[AC: Evil Always Wins...Because Good Is Dumb (BestVolturi/Nomad)]] Volturi/Nomad)]]
** (Lost to ''Fallen Princess'' by Bforqueen)
** (Lost to ''Taste of Innocence'' by Nolebucgrl)
* ''Ashes Through an Hourglass'' was nominated for [[AC: Evil Always Wins...Because Good Is Dumb (Best
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As of February 12th, 2011 both fics have received nominations in The Vampies''[[http://twificpics.com/vampawards/ The Vampies]]''; a site devoted to showcasing quality fanfics based on the recommendations and votes of fans.
* ''The (Not So) Short Second Life of Bree Tanner'' has been nominated for [[AC: Bloody Newborn (Best Characterization of a Newborn Vampire)]]
* ''Ashes Through an Hourglass'' has been nominated for [[AC: Evil Always Wins...Because Good Is Dumb (Best Volturi/Nomad)]]
Voting is open until March 6th, 2011 for those interested in supporting either fic.
* ''The (Not So) Short Second Life of Bree Tanner'' has been nominated for [[AC: Bloody Newborn (Best Characterization of a Newborn Vampire)]]
* ''Ashes Through an Hourglass'' has been nominated for [[AC: Evil Always Wins...Because Good Is Dumb (Best Volturi/Nomad)]]
Voting is open until March 6th, 2011 for those interested in supporting either fic.
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* ''The (Not So) Short Second Life of Bree Tanner''
* ''Ashes Through an Hourglass''
Voting is open until March 6th, 2011 for those interested in supporting either fic.
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So far the story is still young, but with a combined total of [[HolyShitQuotient 300 watchers receiving alerts for each installment]] and over 600 positive reviews [[BeyondTheImpossible within 5 months]] of starting ''The Not So Short Second Life of Bree Tanner'' and its companion, ''Ashes through an Hourglass'' are developing a strong following in ''Twilight'' fandom.
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As of February 12th, 2011 both fics have received nominations in The Vampies''[[http://twificpics.com/vampawards/ The Vampies]]''; a site devoted to showcasing quality fanfics based on the recommendations and votes of fans.
* ''The (Not So) Short Second Life of Bree Tanner'' has been nominated for [[AC: Bloody Newborn (Best Characterization of a Newborn Vampire)]]
* ''Ashes Through an Hourglass'' has been nominated for [[AC: Evil Always Wins...Because Good Is Dumb (Best Volturi/Nomad)]]
Voting is open until March 6th, 2011 for those interested in supporting either fic.
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Fire up the Giga Flux Capacitor, because we got ourselves a winner.
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Fire up the [[BackToTheFuture Giga Flux Capacitor, Capacitor]], because we got ourselves a winner.
winner!
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* CoDragons: Alec and Jane's role within the Volturi.
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* NobleDemon: Alec has one of the scariest reputations amongst vampires yet he can be down-right-decent to people like Corin, Bree, Jane [[spoiler:and the driver Santiago hires for him]] without fully discarding his more devious qualities.
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* {{Twincest}}: Jane is strongly implied to want this, to Alec's eternal dismay.
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** Alec wants to save Bree from the Cullens' emotional manipulation . . . [[spoiler: by sending her friend to Volterra to use as leverage. Despite his claims of not being a hypocrite, unlike those damn Cullens, one has to wonder if he's really thought this through . . .]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Alec is shocked and offended by the suggestion that he might have [[spoiler: molested Bree while she was incapacitated by his gift.]]
--> [[spoiler: Bree: Okay, I'm sorry I implied that. Just because you're a remorseless killer, a stalker and a kidnapper doesn't mean you're also a sex offender.]]
--> [[spoiler: Bree: Okay, I'm sorry I implied that. Just because you're a remorseless killer, a stalker and a kidnapper doesn't mean you're also a sex offender.]]
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** Also, watching Bree and Alec fight can be pretty entertaining in itself.
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So far the story is still young, but with a combined total of [[HolyShitQuotient 300 watchers receiving alerts for each installment]] and over 500 600 positive reviews [[BeyondTheImpossible within 3 5 months]] of starting ''The Not So Short Second Life of Bree Tanner'' and its companion, ''Ashes through an Hourglass'' are developing a strong following in ''Twilight'' fandom.
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** Also Alec himself, depending on your view point he is either a VillainProtagonist, Anit Hero, Anti Villian, HeroicSociopath, or some combination thereof. The Jury is still out.
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** Also Alec himself, depending on your view point he is either a VillainProtagonist, Anit Hero, Anti Villian, AntiHero, AntiVillain, HeroicSociopath, or some combination thereof. The Jury is still out.
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** Also Alec himseld, depending on your view point he is either a VillainProtagonist, Anit Hero, Anti Villian, HeroicSociopath, or some combination thereof. The Jury is still out.
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** Also Alec himseld, himself, depending on your view point he is either a VillainProtagonist, Anit Hero, Anti Villian, HeroicSociopath, or some combination thereof. The Jury is still out.
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* YourMileageMayVary: Quite a bit actually, most notably the alternative views of the Cullens Alec presents.
** Also Alec himseld, depending on your view point he is either a VillainProtagonist, Anit Hero, Anti Villian, HeroicSociopath, or some combination thereof. The Jury is still out.
** Also Alec himseld, depending on your view point he is either a VillainProtagonist, Anit Hero, Anti Villian, HeroicSociopath, or some combination thereof. The Jury is still out.
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* WickedCultured: The Volturi are famous and respected for this by other vampires, even the Cullens.
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** YourMilageMayVary on how malignant the romance is to the plot since the majority of reviews express [[UnderStatement some mild interest]] in the future of Alec and Bree's relationship.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Then six chapters in Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Then six Six chapters in in, Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Then six chapters in Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Then again, given that this is ''{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Then six chapters in Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Then again, Of course, given that this is ''{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Then six chapters in Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]].
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Then six chapters in Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Then again, given that this is ''{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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* AbductionIsLove: Alec paralyzing and abducting Bree from her hotel room to "have a conversation" with her.
* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Then six chapters in Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]].
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* HannibalLecture: On multiple occasions Alec deconstructs the Cullens' value of human life and their desire to imitate it in ways that make them appear far less noble and benign than portrayed in the book series.
** During a phone conversation with [[spoiler: Alice Cullen]], Alec offers a disturbingly alternate view of the Cullen family that depicts them as a [[spoiler: cult pretending to be a family who's love and acceptance is entirely dependent on their members' obedience to their diet and human-friendly philosophies]]. He also accuses the Cullens of [[spoiler: forcing their views onto Bree - an impressionable, newborn vampire - and pressuring her to conform to their lifestyle to the point of (unintentionally) physically and emotionally abusing her]].
*** Possibly the most horrifying observation Alec makes of the Cullens is that [[spoiler: their inaction against the growing newborn army during the events of ''Eclipse'' and singular desire to protect Bella Swan resulted in hundreds, if not thousands, of innocent humans (such as Bree herself) dying to build and sustain Victoria's newborn army, all so Bella could have a few extra months as a human being]]. Which certainly makes the Cullens sound like a bunch of selfish hypocrites when it comes to their criticism of other vampires lacking respect for human life.
** Ironically, Alec's motivation for saying all this seems to be [[spoiler: a genuine desire to alleviate Bree's physical and emotional anguish as well as bolster her self-esteem and independence as a vampire]]. Something the Cullens are, arguably, not doing despite their professed love.
** During a phone conversation with [[spoiler: Alice Cullen]], Alec offers a disturbingly alternate view of the Cullen family that depicts them as a [[spoiler: cult pretending to be a family who's love and acceptance is entirely dependent on their members' obedience to their diet and human-friendly philosophies]]. He also accuses the Cullens of [[spoiler: forcing their views onto Bree - an impressionable, newborn vampire - and pressuring her to conform to their lifestyle to the point of (unintentionally) physically and emotionally abusing her]].
*** Possibly the most horrifying observation Alec makes of the Cullens is that [[spoiler: their inaction against the growing newborn army during the events of ''Eclipse'' and singular desire to protect Bella Swan resulted in hundreds, if not thousands, of innocent humans (such as Bree herself) dying to build and sustain Victoria's newborn army, all so Bella could have a few extra months as a human being]]. Which certainly makes the Cullens sound like a bunch of selfish hypocrites when it comes to their criticism of other vampires lacking respect for human life.
** Ironically, Alec's motivation for saying all this seems to be [[spoiler: a genuine desire to alleviate Bree's physical and emotional anguish as well as bolster her self-esteem and independence as a vampire]]. Something the Cullens are, arguably, not doing despite their professed love.
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* BoringButPractical: Bree's vampire power is to be able to sense intentions and to be believed when she telling the truth or certain truths. Not flashy, but useful.
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So far the story is still young, but with a combined total of [[HolyShitQuotient 300 watchers receiving alerts for each installment]] and over 300 500 positive reviews [[BeyondTheImpossible within 2 3 months]] of starting ''The Not So Short Second Life of Bree Tanner'' and its companion, ''Ashes through an Hourglass'' are developing a strong following in ''Twilight'' fandom.
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* Tsundere: Bree qualifies as a Type B since, generally, she's an affable, well-meaning girl when Alec isn't provoking a violent outburst.
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