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** And of course most importantly, the suicide bombers who got those warp bombs into the Reapers as part of SLENDER SCALPEL.
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** After the Reaper War, one krogan soldier settles down and becomes a farmer. His memoir, [[HarvestMoon Harvest Tuchanka]], is later turned into a videogame.
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** A turian soldier gets his mandibles torn off, leading him to be called [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/Halo2 Half-Jaw]].

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->“I think HDI wants to blow up a Reaper from the inside.”

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->“I think HDI [Hierarchy Defense Intelligence] wants to blow up a Reaper from the inside.”
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''The Miracle at Palaven'', writen by Sudentor, is a Mass Effect fanfic that expands upon one of the Codex Entries: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Miracle at Palaven]], the first successful counterattack by turian and krogan forces.

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''The Miracle at Palaven'', writen by Sudentor, is a Mass Effect ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic that expands upon one of the Codex Entries: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Miracle at Palaven]], the first successful counterattack by turian and krogan forces.



* XMeetsY: ''MassEffect'' meets ''BlackHawkDown'' written in the style of ''BandOfBrothers''.

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* XMeetsY: ''MassEffect'' ''Franchise/MassEffect'' meets ''BlackHawkDown'' written in the style of ''BandOfBrothers''.
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** A turian soldier gets his mandibles torn off, leading him to be called [[Videogame/Halo2 Half-Jaw]].

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** A turian soldier gets his mandibles torn off, leading him to be called [[Videogame/Halo2 [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/Halo2 Half-Jaw]].

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* ComplexityAddiction: It's an accusation leveled towards Admiral Coronati, who prefers complex plans. This culminates in WHISKEY CORRIDOR, which required split-second timing and coordination by turian ships against Reapers. It didn't end well.



** As soon as Kal'Reegar's name is seen, the readers ''know'' what is going to happen to him. That doesn't make it any less painful, however. Or [[DyingMomentOfAwesome awesome]].

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** As soon as Kal'Reegar's name is seen, the readers ''know'' what is going to happen to him. That doesn't make it any less painful, [[TearJerker painful]], however. Or [[DyingMomentOfAwesome awesome]].
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* WeHaveReserves: Discussed. At the start of the story, it's mentioned that the turians were previously able to make good their losses with little effort, thanks to having millions of reservists. However, by the time WHISKEY CORRIDOR concludes, we learn that the Navy won't be getting reinforcements anytime soon. Captain Ixius figures it's either because High Command has lost faith in the Navy... or because the turians are running out of reserves. Or worse, ''both''.
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** In a meta sense, the fanfic itself is dedicated "for all the unsung heroes, fighting battles with wrenches, prayer, and medigel".
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** She finally ends up giving one years later when [[spoiler:a newly-constructed carrier is to be christened ''Example'']] in the WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue, although she tried to offload that duty onto Castellus (who talked her back into it).
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** Another tried to help brace a 1-ton krogan in full battle armor when he was using what was erroneously dubbed by them a "nuclear shotgun". She realises that anything that could knock a krogan on his back probably won't be

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** Another tried to help brace a 1-ton krogan in full battle armor when he was using what was erroneously dubbed by them a "nuclear shotgun". She realises that anything that could knock a krogan on his back probably won't be mitigated by a single turian.

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** Another tried to help brace a 1-ton krogan in full battle armor when he was using what was erroneously dubbed by them a "nuclear shotgun".

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** Another tried to help brace a 1-ton krogan in full battle armor when he was using what was erroneously dubbed by them a "nuclear shotgun". She realises that anything that could knock a krogan on his back probably won't be



* DrillSergeantNasty: The turian soldier above becomes this after the war. Ironically, one of his cadets is the krogan commando who saved his life, who had chewed him out ealier.



* OperationBlank: There are several operations referred to in the document: earlier, there is the Fifteen Minute Plan, OPERATION: IRON HAMMER, and OPERATION: WHISKEY CORRIDOR, an ambitions and failed Navy plan to secure logistics lines. The fic itself focuses on two major missions: OPERATION: FORWARD FLAME, the orbital drop of turian and krogan forces onto Palaven, and OPERATION: SLENDER SCALPEL, the plan to destroy Reapers from the inside with warp bombs and then hit them with everything the turians have.

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* OperationBlank: There are several operations referred to in the document: earlier, there is the Fifteen Minute Plan, OPERATION: IRON HAMMER, and OPERATION: WHISKEY CORRIDOR, an ambitions and failed Navy plan to secure logistics lines.lines to the Trebia mass relay. The fic itself focuses on two major missions: OPERATION: FORWARD FLAME, the orbital drop of turian and krogan forces onto Palaven, and OPERATION: SLENDER SCALPEL, the plan to destroy Reapers from the inside with warp bombs and then hit them with everything the turians have.


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* RousingSpeech: The crew of the ''Example'' eagerly await one from Captain Ixius as FORWARD FLAME launches. She declines, due to a dislike for public speaking, to their great disappointment.
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Currently a work in progress [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-3-the-miracle-at-palaven.239502/ hosted here]] on Spacebattles, and the author has started to release it on [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9205200/1/ Fanfiction.net]].

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Currently a work in progress Complete as of April 2013, and the full story and discussion [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-3-the-miracle-at-palaven.239502/ hosted can be found here]] on Spacebattles, and the author has started to release it Spacebattles. It is also hosted on [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9205200/1/ Fanfiction.net]].
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* BrickJoke: Early in Chapter 12, one wounded turian soldier evacuated by the Bosh'tet Express jokes to her buddy that she'll be lounging on a beach on Rannoch with a fruit drink and cute quarian girls fawning all over her. In the WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue, said turian ends up marrying a quarian wife, and gets interviewed in-universe at her beach villa, where she serves fruit drinks as refreshments.

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* CallToAgriculture: One krogan commando leader retires to become a farmer after the Reaper War ends.



** The Reapers' ability to ignore logistical issues is what makes them so difficult to combat, as Reapers don't need as much logistics support as a conventional military force.



* ForegoneConclusion: As with BandOfBrothers or BlackHawkDown, anyone mentioned in the interviews by name is going to survive the Miracle.
** As soon as Kal'Reegar's name is seen, the readers ''know'' what is going to happen to him. That doesn't make it any less painful, however. Or awesome.

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* ForegoneConclusion: As with BandOfBrothers or BlackHawkDown, anyone mentioned in the interviews by name as having being interviewed in person (e.g. Optimi, Trinity) is going to survive the Miracle.
** As soon as Kal'Reegar's name is seen, the readers ''know'' what is going to happen to him. That doesn't make it any less painful, however. Or awesome.[[DyingMomentOfAwesome awesome]].



* OperationBlank: There are several operations referred to in the document: earlier, there is OPERATION: WHISKEY CORRIDOR, an ambitions and failed Navy plan to secure logistics lines. The fic itself focuses on two major missions: OPERATION: FORWARD FLAME, the orbital drop of turian and krogan forces onto Palaven, and OPERATION: SLENDER SCALPEL, the plan to destroy Reapers from the inside with warp bombs and then hit them with everything the turians have.

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* OperationBlank: There are several operations referred to in the document: earlier, there is the Fifteen Minute Plan, OPERATION: IRON HAMMER, and OPERATION: WHISKEY CORRIDOR, an ambitions and failed Navy plan to secure logistics lines. The fic itself focuses on two major missions: OPERATION: FORWARD FLAME, the orbital drop of turian and krogan forces onto Palaven, and OPERATION: SLENDER SCALPEL, the plan to destroy Reapers from the inside with warp bombs and then hit them with everything the turians have.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: A large number of Miracle survivors end up like this.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Despite being ordered to keep the true objective of SLENDER SCALPEL from the krogan commando, Demetrius Risithi tells them anyways to make sure the krogan know the stakes. [[spoiler:He ends up being arrested, court-martialed, and found guilty, and although he was acquitted in the end, he never receives formal recognition of his major role in the Miracle at Palaven until years after he died.]]

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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Despite being ordered to keep the true objective of SLENDER SCALPEL from the krogan commando, commandos, Demetrius Risithi tells them anyways to make sure the krogan know the stakes. [[spoiler:He ends up being arrested, court-martialed, and found guilty, and although he was acquitted in the end, he never receives formal recognition of his major role in the Miracle at Palaven until years after he died.]]
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Despite being ordered to keep the true objective of SLENDER SCALPEL from the krogan commando, Demetrius Risithi tells them anyways to make sure the krogan know the stakes. [[spoiler:He ends up being arrested, court-martialed, and found guilty, and although he was acquitted in the end, he never receives formal recognition of his major role in the Miracle at Palaven until years after he died.]]
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* ElitesAreMoreGlamarous: Discussed in-universe; the general public only remembers the turian special forces, krogan commandos, and resistance, and are unaware of the roles played by the Navy and the Bosh'tet Express, and support staff.

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* ElitesAreMoreGlamarous: ElitesAreMoreGlamorous: Discussed in-universe; the general public only remembers the turian special forces, krogan commandos, and resistance, and are unaware of the roles played by the Navy and the Bosh'tet Express, and support staff.
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* ElitesAreMoreGlamarous: Discussed in-universe; many people remember the turian troops, Blackwatch and krogan commandos, and are unaware of the roles played by the Navy and the Bosh'tet Express.

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* ElitesAreMoreGlamarous: Discussed in-universe; many people remember the general public only remembers the turian troops, Blackwatch and special forces, krogan commandos, and resistance, and are unaware of the roles played by the Navy and the Bosh'tet Express.Express, and support staff.

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** [[spoiler: Commander Ravakian, one of of the Blackwatch viewpoint characters, survives the Miracle, but dies two days later.]]

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** [[spoiler: Commander Ravakian, one of of the Blackwatch viewpoint characters, survives the Miracle, but dies two days later.before the war ends.]]


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* ElitesAreMoreGlamarous: Discussed in-universe; many people remember the turian troops, Blackwatch and krogan commandos, and are unaware of the roles played by the Navy and the Bosh'tet Express.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Invoked by many of the krogan who survived the Miracle.
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* BittersweetEnding: The Miracle succeeds, but at a heavy price, and many survivors still carry unhealed wounds, both physical, mental and emotional.


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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: There are many characters in the story, though this is compensated for by the [[AnyoneCanDie heavy casualties suffered]] during the Miracle.
* MilitaryMaverick: Demetrius Risithi, a Blue Suns mercenary chosen by Primarch Adrien Victus as a special consultant, who planned [[CrazyEnoughToWork FORWARD FLAME and SLENDER SCALPEL]], and told the krogan commandos the true purpose of SLENDER SCALPEL, [[ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight despite being ordered to keep them in the dark.]] [[spoiler: It doesn't end well for him; turians do ''not'' like [[MilitaryMaverick mavericks]].]]
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** [[spoiler: Captain Ixius of the carrier ''Example'' orders her bridge crew into escape pods, and gets as many of her crew off before she drives her dying ship into a Reaper.]]

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** [[spoiler: Captain Ixius of the carrier ''Example'' orders her bridge crew into escape pods, and gets as many of her crew off before she drives her dying ship into a Reaper. [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]], however, in that she manages to make a last-second evacuation, as revealed in the WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue.]]
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** [[spoiler: Commander Ravakian, one of of the Blackwatch viewpoint characters, survives the Miracle, but dies two days later.]]
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* CurbStombCushion: The Battle Of Palaven itself, but the Miracle was the highlight.

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* CurbStombCushion: CurbStompCushion: The Battle Of Palaven itself, but the Miracle was the highlight.
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* CurbStombCushion: The Battle Of Palaven itself, but the Miracle was the highlight.
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** [[spoiler: Captain Ixius tops them all; when the carrier ''Example'' is crippled, she gets as many of her crew off as she can, and then points her dying ship at a Reaper and [[RammingAlwaysWorks rams into it at flank speed]].]]

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** [[spoiler: Captain Ixius tops them all; when the carrier ''Example'' is crippled, she gets as many of her crew off as she can, and then points her dying ship at a Reaper and [[RammingAlwaysWorks rams into it at flank speed]].]] [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Or not.]]]]
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* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: [[spoiler: Turns out Captain Ixius survived her TakingYouWithMe moment.]]
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: In the style of ''Series/BandOfBrothers'', ''The Miracle at Palaven'' closes with one, showing the fates of the survivors.

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