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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Among the things the Reapers confiscate from turians in concentration camps are rifles, explosives, commications gear, heavy weapons, and... spine treatment gel.

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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Among the things the Reapers confiscate from turians in concentration camps are rifles, explosives, commications communications gear, heavy weapons, and... spine treatment gel.



* EasyLogistics: Averted. The fic goes into great detail on the logistics issues that arise when the galaxy's largest army is fighting, from shortages of medical supplies to shuttles to thermal clip.

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* EasyLogistics: Averted. The fic goes into great detail on the logistics issues that arise when the galaxy's largest army is fighting, from shortages of medical supplies to shuttles to thermal clip.clips.



** The fic begins with a discussion of OPERATION: [[AceCombat04ShatteredSkies WHISKEY CORRIDOR]], which is an ambitions plan that's essentially [[Film/ABridgeTooFar Operation Market Garden]] InSpace

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** The fic begins with a discussion of OPERATION: [[AceCombat04ShatteredSkies WHISKEY CORRIDOR]], which is an ambitions ambitious plan that's essentially [[Film/ABridgeTooFar Operation Market Garden]] InSpace
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Mistake on the mission go-code. Ayreen was broadcast to kick off FORWARD FLAME.


** The Go-code for SLENDER SCALPEL is "Ayreen", pronounced as "[[BlackHawkDown Irene]]."

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** The Go-code for SLENDER SCALPEL FORWARD FLAME is "Ayreen", pronounced as "[[BlackHawkDown Irene]]."
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->''"Only a military executive body that had been humiliated for weeks; that had tried every conventional, orthodox, and reasonable method available to them; that discovered the very existence of their civilization on the brink of collapse; that had found itself in the final straits of desperation; would pay any heed to an outlandish, costly, and questionable strategy being offered by a mercenary with no experience in planet-scale, joint-services operations."''

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->''"Only -->''"Only a military executive body that had been humiliated for weeks; that had tried every conventional, orthodox, and reasonable method available to them; that discovered the very existence of their civilization on the brink of collapse; that had found itself in the final straits of desperation; would pay any heed to an outlandish, costly, and questionable strategy being offered by a mercenary with no experience in planet-scale, joint-services operations."''

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-->''Do you believe in miracles?''

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->''"Only a military executive body that had been humiliated for weeks; that had tried every conventional, orthodox, and reasonable method available to them; that discovered the very existence of their civilization on the brink of collapse; that had found itself in the final straits of desperation; would pay any heed to an outlandish, costly, and questionable strategy being offered by a mercenary with no experience in planet-scale, joint-services operations."''
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** Apparently, hastatim squads are nicknamed as the "[[{{Tsukihime}} Burial Agency]]."

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** [[spoiler: Captain Ixius of the carrier ''example'' orders her bridge crew into escape pods, and gets as many of her crew off before she drives her dying ship into a Reaper.]]

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** [[spoiler: Captain Ixius of the carrier ''example'' ''Example'' orders her bridge crew into escape pods, and gets as many of her crew off before she drives her dying ship into a Reaper.]]


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** The Go-code for SLENDER SCALPEL is "Ayreen", pronounced as "[[BlackHawkDown Irene]]."
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Currently a work in progress [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-3-the-miracle-at-palaven.239502/ hosted here]] on Spacebattles, and the author has released the first chapter on [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9205200/1/ Fanfiction.net]].

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Currently a work in progress [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-3-the-miracle-at-palaven.239502/ hosted here]] on Spacebattles, and the author has released the first chapter started to release it on [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9205200/1/ Fanfiction.net]].
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* ConvectionSchmovection: A krogan commando misses a direct hit from a Thanix Cannon, but is still close enough that his armor and hump are burned off.

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* ConvectionSchmovection: ConvectionSchmonvection: Averted. A krogan commando misses a direct hit from a Thanix Cannon, but is still close enough that his armor and hump are burned off.

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-->''Do you believe in miracles?''



!!Tropes contained within this work include:

* AdaptationExpansion: The Codex entry is 3 paragraphs long. The current result is much longer.

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!!Tropes contained within this work Miracle include:

* AdaptationExpansion: The Codex entry is 3 paragraphs long. The current result is much longer.longer, at around sixty-five thousand words.



** [[spoiler: Captain Ixius of the carrier ''example'' orders her bridge crew into escape pods, and gets as many of her crew off before she drives her dying ship into a Reaper.]]



* RammingAlwaysWorks: It does when the Reaper ship is blinded and have its shields down, and it's taking a 3700 kiloton starship dropping in from orbit to the face.

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* RammingAlwaysWorks: It does when the Reaper ship is blinded and have has its shields down, and it's taking a 3700 kiloton starship dropping in from orbit to the face.



** A turian soldier gets his mandibles torn off, leading him to be called [[Halo2 Half-Jaw]].

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** A turian soldier gets his mandibles torn off, leading him to be called [[Halo2 [[Videogame/Halo2 Half-Jaw]].

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* ConvectionSchmovection: A krogan commando misses a direct hit from a Thanix Cannon, but is still close enough that his armor and hump are burned off.
* CrazyEnoughToWork: The proposals for FORWARD FLAME and SLENDER SCALPEL are considered to be this by turian High Command. At this point, with all other saner and more conventional plans failing, they were desperate for ''anything'' that might work.



** Another tried to help brace a 1-ton krogan in full battle armor when he was using what was erroneously dubbed by them a "nuclear shotgun".

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** Another tried to help brace a 1-ton krogan in full battle armor when he was using what was erroneously dubbed by them a "nuclear shotgun".



* OperationBlank: There are several operations referred to in the document: earlier, OPERATION: WHISKEY CORRIDOR, an ambitions and failed Navy plan to secure logistics lines. The fic itself focuses on two major missions: OPERATION: FORWARD FLAME, the orbital drop of turian and krogan forces onto Palaven, and OPERATION: SLENDER SCALPEL, the plan to destroy Reapers from the inside with warp bombs and then hit them with everything the turians have.

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* NoodleIncident: A turian fireteam runs into an asari Justicar on Palaven. They have no idea what on Palaven she's there for, but are just happy she's around.
* OperationBlank: There are several operations referred to in the document: earlier, there is OPERATION: WHISKEY CORRIDOR, an ambitions and failed Navy plan to secure logistics lines. The fic itself focuses on two major missions: OPERATION: FORWARD FLAME, the orbital drop of turian and krogan forces onto Palaven, and OPERATION: SLENDER SCALPEL, the plan to destroy Reapers from the inside with warp bombs and then hit them with everything the turians have.
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* MoreDakka: The battle to retake Palaven basically starts this way. Because you can't have a battle with turians, krogan, and Reapers any other way.
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* RammingAlwaysWorks: It does when the Reaper ship is blinded and have its shields down, and it's taking a 3700 kiloton starship dropping in from orbit to the face.

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* TakingYouWithMe: Several mortally wounded soldiers use grenades on themselves and Reapers.

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* OperationBlank: There are several operations referred to in the document: earlier, OPERATION: WHISKEY CORRIDOR, an ambitions and failed Navy plan to secure logistics lines. The fic itself focuses on two major missions: OPERATION: FORWARD FLAME, the orbital drop of turian and krogan forces onto Palaven, and OPERATION: SLENDER SCALPEL, the plan to destroy Reapers from the inside with warp bombs and then hit them with everything the turians have.
* ShoutOut: A number throughout the series:
** The fic begins with a discussion of OPERATION: [[AceCombat04ShatteredSkies WHISKEY CORRIDOR]], which is an ambitions plan that's essentially [[Film/ABridgeTooFar Operation Market Garden]] InSpace
** A turian soldier gets his mandibles torn off, leading him to be called [[Halo2 Half-Jaw]].
* SteelEardrums: Averted; a number of soldiers go temporarily deaf as a result of firing their weapons nearly nonstop.
* TakingYouWithMe: Several mortally wounded soldiers use grenades on themselves and Reapers.Reapers, [[spoiler: including Kal'Reegar and Scrodius.]]


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** And of course, this is what the teams carrying warp bombs do.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Among the things the Reapers confiscate from turians in concentration camps are rifles, explosives, commications gear, heavy weapons, and... spine treatment gel.
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** [[spoiler: The carrier ''Example'', whose crew have been one of the focal viewpoints, is finally destroyed during the Miracle.]]


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** [[spoiler: Captain Ixius tops them all; when the carrier ''Example'' is crippled, she gets as many of her crew off as she can, and then points her dying ship at a Reaper and [[RammingAlwaysWorks rams into it at flank speed]].]]
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Currently a work in progress [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-3-the-miracle-at-palaven.239502/ hosted here]] on Spacebattles, though the author plans to release it on Fanfiction.net once it's completed.

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Currently a work in progress [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-3-the-miracle-at-palaven.239502/ hosted here]] on Spacebattles, though and the author plans to release it has released the first chapter on [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9205200/1/ Fanfiction.net once it's completed.
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* FireForgedFriends: A big part of the story. The turians and the krogan are [[EnemyMine ambivalent towards each other at best and very hostile at worst]] when they first get together. By the time bullets start flying, they've managed to become BackToBackBadass. Similarly, the quarians go from dirty vagrants to "the most glorious bosh'tets in the galaxy" in the eyes of teh turians.

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* FireForgedFriends: A big part of the story. The turians and the krogan are [[EnemyMine ambivalent towards each other at best and very hostile at worst]] when they first get together. By the time bullets start flying, they've managed to become BackToBackBadass. BackToBackBadasses. Similarly, the quarians go from dirty vagrants to "the most glorious bosh'tets in the galaxy" in the eyes of teh the turians.
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* FireForgedFriends: A big part of the story. The turians and the krogan are [[EnemyMine ambivalent towards each other at best and very hostile at worst]] when they first get together. By the time bullets start flying, they've managed to become BackToBackBadass. Similarly, the quarians go from dirty vagrants to "the most glorious bosh'tets in the galaxy" in the eyes of teh turians.
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** Taken UpToEleven with the conclusion of SLENDER SCALPEL: to allow their allies time to setup a warp bomb within a Reaper itself, several turian soldiers detonate another warp bomb just outside, obliterating themselves and the surrounding Reaper ground forces (though doing no damage to the well-shielded Reaper).

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** Taken UpToEleven with the conclusion of SLENDER SCALPEL: to [[spoiler:to allow their allies time to setup a warp bomb within a Reaper itself, several turian soldiers detonate another warp bomb just outside, obliterating themselves and the surrounding Reaper ground forces (though doing no damage to the well-shielded Reaper).]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Often, epitomized by Kal'Reegar's LastStand.

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* HeroicSacrifice: Often, [[spoiler: epitomized by Kal'Reegar's LastStand.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Often, epitomized by Kal'Reegar's LastStand.


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** Taken UpToEleven with the conclusion of SLENDER SCALPEL: to allow their allies time to setup a warp bomb within a Reaper itself, several turian soldiers detonate another warp bomb just outside, obliterating themselves and the surrounding Reaper ground forces (though doing no damage to the well-shielded Reaper).
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** Another tried to help brace a 1-ton krogan in full battle armor when he was using what was erroneously dubbed by them a "nuclear shotgun".
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* DamnYouMuscleMemory: One turian soldier, a former hastatim, announces herself and orders occupants of the buildings to come out quietly and surrender, before beginning room clearing. Against ''Cannibals and Marauders''. She's chagrined at the old habit.
* DivingSave: A krogan commando does this to get a turian soldier out of the area of effect of a Thanix cannon blast.
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* HollywoodTactics: Played with. The battle on the ground is compared to human war movies, undoubtedly a jab at this trope. However, it is pointed out that the Hierarchy is fighting an enemy with a completely alien doctrine, with very few air or fire support options or even available armor, and the footsoldiers are caught in narrow urban environments. Most soldiers express discomfort at being forced to fight outside traditional and proven military tactics.
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First off, Subverted Hard is considered Word Cruft. Secondly, that\'s Not A Subversion. At no point are we led to believe that logistics are easy in this.


* EasyLogistics: Subverted hard. The fic goes into great detail on the logistics issues that arise when the galaxy's largest army is fighting, from shortages of medical supplies to shuttles to thermal clip.

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* EasyLogistics: Subverted hard.Averted. The fic goes into great detail on the logistics issues that arise when the galaxy's largest army is fighting, from shortages of medical supplies to shuttles to thermal clip.
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* EasyLogistics: Subverted hard. The fic goes into great detail on the logistics issues that arise when the galaxy's largest army is fighting, from shortages of medical supplies to shuttles to thermal clip.
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Removing YMMV


* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Plenty. One of the first ones is when a krogan officer beats down a rebellious soldier and spaces him.
** The Bosh'tet Express.
** [[spoiler: Kal'Reegar's last stand]].



* Tearjerker: Kal'Reegar's LastStand.

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** As soon as Kal'Reegar's name is seen, the readers ''know'' what is going to happen to him. That doesn't make it any less awesome, however.

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** As soon as Kal'Reegar's name is seen, the readers ''know'' what is going to happen to him. That doesn't make it any less awesome, however.painful, however. Or awesome.


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“What was that all about?”
“I think HDI wants to blow up a Reaper from the inside.”

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“What ->“What was that all about?”
“I ->“I think HDI wants to blow up a Reaper from the inside.
-->--Turian Resistance members, on Palaven.

''The Miracle at Palaven'', writen by Sudentor, is a Mass Effect fanfic that expands upon one of the Codex Entries: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Miracle at Palaven]], the first successful counterattack by turian and krogan forces.

[[AdaptationExpansion Greatly expanding]] upon the short Codex entry, this is a story of the courage, determination and sacrifice required to make a Miracle happen.

Currently a work in progress [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-3-the-miracle-at-palaven.239502/ hosted here]] on Spacebattles, though the author plans to release it on Fanfiction.net once it's completed.

!!Tropes contained within this work include:

* AdaptationExpansion: The Codex entry is 3 paragraphs long. The current result is much longer.
* AnyoneCanDie: It's to be expected, given the nature of the work. Nobody is safe, not even [[FanNickname turian!Ronald Speirs]].
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Plenty. One of the first ones is when a krogan officer beats down a rebellious soldier and spaces him.
** The Bosh'tet Express.
** [[spoiler: Kal'Reegar's last stand]].
* ForegoneConclusion: As with BandOfBrothers or BlackHawkDown, anyone mentioned in the interviews by name is going to survive the Miracle.
** As soon as Kal'Reegar's name is seen, the readers ''know'' what is going to happen to him. That doesn't make it any less awesome, however.
* FramingDevice: The work is presented as two chapters of a turian text entitled "''Of Steel and Talons: The Battle of Palaven''".
* TakingYouWithMe: Several mortally wounded soldiers use grenades on themselves and Reapers.
* XMeetsY: ''MassEffect'' meets ''BlackHawkDown'' written in the style of ''BandOfBrothers''.
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“What was that all about?”
“I think HDI wants to blow up a Reaper from the inside.”

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