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** Norbert(a) the Norwegian Ridgeback dies before even hatching when Harry uses a freezing charm on her egg to kill the embryo, as Harry's last death was indirectly caused by her burning Hagrid's hut down and he didn't have anywhere to send a dragon.
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** Norbert(a) the Norwegian Ridgeback dies before even hatching when Harry uses a freezing charm on her egg to kill the embryo, as Harry's last death was indirectly caused by her burning Hagrid's hut down and he didn't doesn't have anywhere to send a dragon.
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* DeathIsCheap: For Harry, yes. However for everyone else no- Adrian Pucey is killed by troll and when later Harry attacks Quirrel in a blind rage and killed, he only goes back to after the troll is dead.
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* DeathIsCheap: For Harry, yes. However for everyone else no- Adrian Pucey is killed by troll and when later The deaths of people who aren't Harry attacks Quirrel in a blind rage can be undone if he dies and killed, is reset to before they die. However, this works best if Harry also dies as part of the same event; if he only goes back to dies significantly after the troll is dead.other people do, he tends to get reset to a point after their passing and can't change anything.
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* ExactWords: Successfully casting a Summoning Charm requires that the caster actually knows what the object they're trying to Summon is and refers to it as such; attempting to Summon a misidentified item won't work. This saves Harry's life when Voldemort tries Summoning him in Animagus form, but fails because he thinks Harry is a ferret when he's actually a mongoose.
-->Voldemort pointed his wand and said "Accio ferret."\\
Harry would have grinned if his current form was physically able. He wasn't a ferret, he was a mongoose. He suspected that Voldemort had never been a to ''(sic)'' zoo in his life.
-->Voldemort pointed his wand and said "Accio ferret."\\
Harry would have grinned if his current form was physically able. He wasn't a ferret, he was a mongoose. He suspected that Voldemort had never been a to ''(sic)'' zoo in his life.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite the multitude of changes created by Harry's paranoia about being killed, he still frees Dobby by tricking Lucius Malfoy into giving the house-elf a sock using the same method he did in canon.
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* SlashedThroat: In the first chapter, this how Voldemort kills Harry.
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* TimeTravel: How Harry's self-resurrection works. The amount of time that he goes back also increases with each death, resulting in Harry being mentally older
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* TimeTravel: How Harry's self-resurrection works. The amount of time that he goes back also increases with each death, resulting in Harry being mentally olderolder.
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* VillainBall: Subverted with Voldemort, who puts a bounty on Harry and thus avoided the OnlyICanKillHim stance in canon. The bounty forces Harry to develop various disguises, both magical and mundane, to go unnoticed.
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* UnfortunateNames: Upon meeting Neville Longbottom for the first time, Harry immediately thinks that unless other Wizarding surnames are similarly bizarre, Neville's surname likely makes him a bully magnet.
-->''With a name like Longbottom, Harry suspected that (Neville) had to have been bullied, unless other wizard names were just as outlandish.''
* VillainBall: Subverted with Voldemort, who puts a bounty on Harry and thusavoided avoids the OnlyICanKillHim stance in canon. The bounty forces Harry to develop various disguises, both magical and mundane, to go unnoticed.
-->''With a name like Longbottom, Harry suspected that (Neville) had to have been bullied, unless other wizard names were just as outlandish.''
* VillainBall: Subverted with Voldemort, who puts a bounty on Harry and thus
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** During Harry's first run through fourth year, the Hungarian Horntail in the Triwizard Tournament suffocates on peanut butter Harry places in its mouth and curses to keep duplicating as long as it's in contact with the dragon.
** The second run through fourth year sees a dragon get loose and eat Viktor Krum.
** The second run through fourth year sees a dragon get loose and eat Viktor Krum.
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** During Harry's first run through fourth year, the Hungarian Horntail in the Triwizard Tournament suffocates on peanut butter that Harry places cursed to duplicate in its mouth and curses to keep duplicating quantity as long as it's in contact with the dragon.
** The second run through fourth year sees a dragon get loose during the First Task and eat Viktor Krum.
** The second run through fourth year sees a dragon get loose during the First Task and eat Viktor Krum.
* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation:
** Colin Creevey dies roughly two months into his first year at Hogwarts when the Basilisk is implied to have eaten him, leaving nothing behind save for a large pool of blood and his camera. In canon, he's killed when he sneaks into the Battle of Hogwarts in his sixth year.
** While it's undone, one timeline ends when Dumbledore triggers the curse on Gaunt's ring two years early. Unlike in canon, there isn't enough time to reach Snape and have him delay the curse's effects until they can execute a MercyKillArrangement, and Dumbledore succumbs to the curse.
** Colin Creevey dies roughly two months into his first year at Hogwarts when the Basilisk is implied to have eaten him, leaving nothing behind save for a large pool of blood and his camera. In canon, he's killed when he sneaks into the Battle of Hogwarts in his sixth year.
** While it's undone, one timeline ends when Dumbledore triggers the curse on Gaunt's ring two years early. Unlike in canon, there isn't enough time to reach Snape and have him delay the curse's effects until they can execute a MercyKillArrangement, and Dumbledore succumbs to the curse.
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--> '''Harry''': This entire school is DeathTrap, even wihout Voldemort. It's next to a forest filled with giant, man-eating spiders, werewolves and a host of other monsters. There's a tree on the grounds that will beat you to death if you get too close to it. The stairs move from under you so [[NoOSHACompliance you can go falling to your death]]. Potions class is like a class where you make bombs without a clear idea of what you are doing.
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--> '''Harry''': This entire school is a DeathTrap, even wihout without Voldemort. It's next to a forest filled with giant, man-eating spiders, werewolves and a host of other monsters. There's a tree on the grounds that will beat you to death if you get too close to it. The stairs move from under you so [[NoOSHACompliance you can go falling to your death]]. Potions class is like a class where you make bombs without a clear idea of what you are doing.
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* TheManyDeathsOfYou: Harry dies around a dozen times over the course of seven years, with each instance setting him back various lengths of time.
** Harry dies three times before even setting foot in Hogwarts: he has his throat slit by a Voldemort-possessed Quirrell, gets stabbed by someone claiming to act for the benefit of the dark lord, and is shoved off the Hogwarts Express by another student while the train is in motion.
** Harry's deaths in first year include getting smashed by a troll's club, being cursed into oblivion when he tries to attack Quirrel during class, and having his torso blown open by a Death Eater who got hired as a replacement groundskeeper.
** Harry only has one death each in second and third year, but they respectably involve seeing the killer gaze of the Basilisk and being caught in a crowd crush after the Dementors attack the student body during a Quidditch game.
** In fourth year, Harry dies from deliberately creating an explosion with sodium and potassium and accidentally getting decapitated by a spell used to protect Voldemort's ring Horcrux.
** Harry dies three times before even setting foot in Hogwarts: he has his throat slit by a Voldemort-possessed Quirrell, gets stabbed by someone claiming to act for the benefit of the dark lord, and is shoved off the Hogwarts Express by another student while the train is in motion.
** Harry's deaths in first year include getting smashed by a troll's club, being cursed into oblivion when he tries to attack Quirrel during class, and having his torso blown open by a Death Eater who got hired as a replacement groundskeeper.
** Harry only has one death each in second and third year, but they respectably involve seeing the killer gaze of the Basilisk and being caught in a crowd crush after the Dementors attack the student body during a Quidditch game.
** In fourth year, Harry dies from deliberately creating an explosion with sodium and potassium and accidentally getting decapitated by a spell used to protect Voldemort's ring Horcrux.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12388283/1/The-many-Deaths-of-Harry-Potter The many Deaths of Harry Potter]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' AlternateUniverse {{Fanfic}} in which Harry has ResurrectiveImmortality powers and Voldemort lacks VillainBall.
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It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10093553/chapters/22482785 here]] on Archive of our Own and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12388283/1/The-many-Deaths-of-Harry-Potter
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* ButterflyOfDoom: PlayedWith. Hagrid is fired for illegally kepping a dragon, and a Death Eater is hired to replace him. [[DeathIsCheap You know the rest]].
** Played straight when Voldemort is brought back to life. Harry transfigures soil into sodium and potassium and sets it on fire, killing himself and Voldemort in the process. But when he resets at the end of the Quidditch World Cup attacks, the timeline diverges. Harry is no longer selected as champion for the Triwizard Tournament and Krum is eaten alive by the dragon.
* ChekhovsGun: In first year, Harry gains Peruvian darkness from the Weasleys twins, and in the second year he uses it to infiltrate the crowd students during the [[LateArrivalSpoiler Basilisk attack]] on Mrs. Norris, avoiding thus becoming the main suspect.
** Played straight when Voldemort is brought back to life. Harry transfigures soil into sodium and potassium and sets it on fire, killing himself and Voldemort in the process. But when he resets at the end of the Quidditch World Cup attacks, the timeline diverges. Harry is no longer selected as champion for the Triwizard Tournament and Krum is eaten alive by the dragon.
* ChekhovsGun: In first year, Harry gains Peruvian darkness from the Weasleys twins, and in the second year he uses it to infiltrate the crowd students during the [[LateArrivalSpoiler Basilisk attack]] on Mrs. Norris, avoiding thus becoming the main suspect.
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* ButterflyOfDoom: PlayedWith. ButterflyOfDoom:
** Hagrid is fired for illegallykepping keeping a dragon, and a Death Eater is hired to replace him. [[DeathIsCheap You know Harry ends up dying and gets reset to before the rest]].
firing after the Forbidden Forest detention goes south thanks to the replacement's actions.
**Played straight Harry's first run-through of Voldemort's resurrection ends when Voldemort is brought back to life. Harry transfigures soil into sodium and potassium and sets it on fire, killing himself and Voldemort in the process. But when he resets at the end of The timeline then diverges after Harry is reset to the Quidditch World Cup attacks, the timeline diverges. attacks; Harry is no longer selected as champion for the Triwizard Tournament and Viktor Krum is eaten alive by the a dragon.
* ChekhovsGun: In first year, Harrygains buys some Peruvian instant darkness powder from the Weasleys twins, and Weasley twins. He uses it in the second year he uses it to infiltrate the crowd of students during that shows up in the [[LateArrivalSpoiler aftermath of the Basilisk attack]] attack on Mrs. Norris, thus avoiding thus becoming the main suspect.
** Hagrid is fired for illegally
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* ChekhovsGun: In first year, Harry
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* {{Cult}}: Petunia and Vernon make Harry think that the Wizarding world is ruled by one.
* TheCynic: Harry.
* TheCynic: Harry.
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* DeathByAdaptation:
** Norbert(a) the Norwegian Ridgeback dies before even hatching when Harry uses a freezing charm on her egg to kill the embryo, as Harry's last death was indirectly caused by her burning Hagrid's hut down and he didn't have anywhere to send a dragon.
** During Harry's first run through fourth year, the Hungarian Horntail in the Triwizard Tournament suffocates on peanut butter Harry places in its mouth and curses to keep duplicating as long as it's in contact with the dragon.
** The second run through fourth year sees a dragon get loose and eat Viktor Krum.
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* MythologyGag: During the Opening Feast after the sorting, Harry wonders that if wizards have trolls in their toilets or snakes in the drains if Hogwarts, with a forbidden forest and mysterious danger in the third, is considered the safest place in the wizarding world.
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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
** During the Opening Feast after the sorting, Harry wonders that if wizards have trolls in their toilets or snakes in the drains if Hogwarts, with a forbidden forest and mysterious danger in the third, is considered the safest place in the wizardingworld.world.
** Draco Malfoy's Patronus takes the form of a ferret, referencing how he was Transfigured into one during fourth year in canon.
** During the Opening Feast after the sorting, Harry wonders that if wizards have trolls in their toilets or snakes in the drains if Hogwarts, with a forbidden forest and mysterious danger in the third, is considered the safest place in the wizarding
** Draco Malfoy's Patronus takes the form of a ferret, referencing how he was Transfigured into one during fourth year in canon.
* PaedoHunt: A major contributing factor to Sirius being declared innocent is that many of the jurors are disgusted by Peter Pettigrew sleeping in the same bed with several adolescent Weasleys (albeit not actually in the sexual sense of the word and while in rat form).
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* PragmaticVillainy: Voldemort. The Killing Curse will backfire if cast on Harry? Cut his throat with a knife.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Voldemort. The PragmaticVillainy:
** Having learned the hard way that attempting to use the Killing Curse on Harry will only make it backfireif cast on Harry? Cut him, Voldemort directs his followers to cut Harry's throat with a knife.
** Having learned the hard way that attempting to use the Killing Curse on Harry will only make it backfire
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* StuffBlowingUp: Harry kills himself and Voldemort in the graveyard by transfiguring the soil into sodium and potassium. But the trope is PlayedForDrama as it off a ButterflyOfDoom.
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* StuffBlowingUp: StuffBlowingUp:
** Harry kills himself and Voldemort in the graveyard by transfiguring the soil into sodium and potassium. But the trope is PlayedForDrama as it sets off a ButterflyOfDoom.
** Harry kills himself and Voldemort in the graveyard by transfiguring the soil into sodium and potassium. But the trope is PlayedForDrama as it sets off a ButterflyOfDoom.
* TeacherStudentRomance: Lockhart is fired at the end of Harry's second year after word gets out that he's in a sexual relationship with a fifth year girl, which leads to an investigation that brings the extent of his other lies to light.
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* TyrantTakesTheHelm: [[spoiler:Dolores Umbridge]] becomes the Minister of Magic after Scrimeour is killed in an explosion.
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* TyrantTakesTheHelm: [[spoiler:Dolores Umbridge]] becomes the Minister of Magic after Scrimeour is killed in in an explosion.
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* WorthIt: Harry's opinion after throwing StingingHex three times at a bully's face.
* YankTheDogsChain: Harry strikes a friendship with Colin Creevey, who was sorted Slytherin here, but he disappears in the first few attacks by the Basilisk. Worse that when he later dies he does travels back in time enough to save him.
* YankTheDogsChain: Harry strikes a friendship with Colin Creevey, who was sorted Slytherin here, but he disappears in the first few attacks by the Basilisk. Worse that when he later dies he does travels back in time enough to save him.
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* WorthIt: Harry's opinion after throwing StingingHex a Stinging Hex three times at a bully's face.
* YankTheDogsChain: Harry strikes up a friendship with Colin Creevey, who was sorted Slytherin here, but he disappears inthe first few attacks by the Basilisk. a Basilisk attack and is never seen again. Worse that when he later dies he does travels back in time enough yet, Harry is unable to save him.him because his next revival places him nearly a month after Colin's death.
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* YankTheDogsChain: Harry strikes up a friendship with Colin Creevey, who was sorted Slytherin here, but he disappears in
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* NoOSHACompliance: Hogwart's moving stairs.
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* NoOSHACompliance: Hogwart's moving stairs.stairs, from which Harry is thrown out from in a failed attempted murder. Also in second year, Harry fears briefly that he might have killed someone when using the instant darkness powder.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Gilderoy Lockhart does not end up mind wiped, though he's still fire due to having a sexual relationship with a student.
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* TeachMeHowToFight: Knowing he's outmatched, Harry makes a bargain with Oliver Wood and Adrian Pucey to teach him how to fight.
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* TeachMeHowToFight: Knowing he's outmatched, Harry makes a bargain with Oliver Wood and Adrian Pucey to teach him how to fight. When the timeline resets, the ButterflyOfDoom results in only Adrian becoming his teacher.
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* TimeTravel: How Harry's self-resurrection works.
* TyrantTakesTheHelm: Dolores Umbridge [[OhCrap becomes the Minister of Magic]] after Scrimeour is killed in an explosion.
* TyrantTakesTheHelm: Dolores Umbridge [[OhCrap becomes the Minister of Magic]] after Scrimeour is killed in an explosion.
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* TimeTravel: How Harry's self-resurrection works.
works. The amount of time that he goes back also increases with each death, resulting in Harry being mentally older
* TyrantTakesTheHelm:Dolores Umbridge [[OhCrap [[spoiler:Dolores Umbridge]] becomes the Minister of Magic]] Magic after Scrimeour is killed in an explosion.
* TyrantTakesTheHelm:
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* ContinuitySnarl: On the early it's made clear that Harry knows what a Dementor is because he decided to look up any magical creatures that could hurt him, but later on his third year he needs Remus to tell him what they are.
** It's mentioned that Hagrid made Harry and others students go into the Forbidden Forest to look for unicorns except in the fic that didn't happen. Instead it was an AlternateTimeline where Harry did not get detention and thus not gone into the Forbidden Forest;
** It's mentioned that Hagrid made Harry and others students go into the Forbidden Forest to look for unicorns except in the fic that didn't happen. Instead it was an AlternateTimeline where Harry did not get detention and thus not gone into the Forbidden Forest;
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* VillainBall: Subverted with Voldemort.
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* VillainBall: Subverted with Voldemort.Voldemort, who puts a bounty on Harry and thus avoided the OnlyICanKillHim stance in canon. The bounty forces Harry to develop various disguises, both magical and mundane, to go unnoticed.
