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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Taylor [[spoiler:finally taking down James Sr]] in chapters 83 to 85.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34116817/chapters/84878749 The Iron Giant]]'' is a ''Series/TedLasso'' fanfic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/ArdenDrifter/pseuds/ArdenDrifter ArdenDrifter]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34116817/chapters/84878749 The Iron Giant]]'' is a ''Series/TedLasso'' fanfic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/ArdenDrifter/pseuds/ArdenDrifter ArdenDrifter]].
org/users/Frithgeard/pseuds/Frithgeard Frithgeard]].
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* ShellShockedVeteran: James Tartt Sr. He was amoral and fundamentally dangerous even before he went to war, but after he lost an eye and suffered a brain injury on campaign in Yugoslavia, he became a whole new kind of unstable.
--> '''John:''' He’s caught in a blast in Kosovo, and it might be his own recklessness and it might be an assassination gone wrong, but the shrapnel destroys the cunning charmer I met, the one with a head full of schemes and the mission tucked close to his chest. Gone is his impulse control, his effort at sobriety, the mask that hides his narcissism.
--> '''John:''' He’s caught in a blast in Kosovo, and it might be his own recklessness and it might be an assassination gone wrong, but the shrapnel destroys the cunning charmer I met, the one with a head full of schemes and the mission tucked close to his chest. Gone is his impulse control, his effort at sobriety, the mask that hides his narcissism.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: James Tartt Sr. He was amoral and fundamentally dangerous even before he went to war, but after he lost an eye and suffered a brain injury on campaign in Yugoslavia, Kosovo, he became a whole new kind of unstable.
--> '''John:''' He’s caught in a blast in Kosovo, and it might be his own recklessness and it might be an assassination gone wrong, but the shrapnel destroys the cunning charmer I met, the one with a head full of schemes and the mission tucked close to his chest. Gone is his impulse control, his effort at sobriety, the mask that hides his narcissism.unstable.
--> '''John:''' He’s caught in a blast in Kosovo, and it might be his own recklessness and it might be an assassination gone wrong, but the shrapnel destroys the cunning charmer I met, the one with a head full of schemes and the mission tucked close to his chest. Gone is his impulse control, his effort at sobriety, the mask that hides his narcissism.
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* Polyamory: [[spoiler:Keeley, Roy and Jamie]] end up in a poly relationship.
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* Polyamory: [[spoiler:Keeley, {{Polyamory}}: Keeley, Roy and Jamie]] end up in a poly relationship.Jamie (eventually).
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-->'''Roy:''' ''[still looking lovinging at Keeley]'' Of ''course'' you're fucking invited, Jamie.
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-->'''Roy:''' ''[still looking lovinging adoringly at Keeley]'' Of ''course'' you're fucking invited, Jamie.
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* Polyamory: [[spoiler:Keeley, Roy and Jamie]] end up in a poly relationship.
-->'''Roy:''' ''[to Keeley]'' We could do it ''together''. You know, ''all'' of us. As a ''family''.
-->'''Jamie:''' Um, Coach?
-->'''Roy:''' ''[still looking lovinging at Keeley]'' Of ''course'' you're fucking invited, Jamie.
-->'''Richard:''' Excuse me, I am very confused. Did you just get invited to a threesome or a murder spree?
-->'''Roy:''' ''[to Keeley]'' We could do it ''together''. You know, ''all'' of us. As a ''family''.
-->'''Jamie:''' Um, Coach?
-->'''Roy:''' ''[still looking lovinging at Keeley]'' Of ''course'' you're fucking invited, Jamie.
-->'''Richard:''' Excuse me, I am very confused. Did you just get invited to a threesome or a murder spree?
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** Assume every mistake is deliberate.
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--> '''John:''' I’m telling you now, Jamie, that man was a horror even before the shrapnel destroyed whatever he had that could pass for a conscience.
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--> '''John:''' I’m telling you now, Jamie, that man was He’s caught in a horror even before blast in Kosovo, and it might be his own recklessness and it might be an assassination gone wrong, but the shrapnel destroyed whatever he had destroys the cunning charmer I met, the one with a head full of schemes and the mission tucked close to his chest. Gone is his impulse control, his effort at sobriety, the mask that could pass for a conscience.hides his narcissism.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: James Tartt Sr. He was amoral and fundamentally dangerous even before he went to war, but after he lost an eye and suffered a brain injury on campaign in Yugoslavia, he became a whole new kind of unstable.
--> '''John:''' I’m telling you now, Jamie, that man was a horror even before the shrapnel destroyed whatever he had that could pass for a conscience.
--> '''John:''' I’m telling you now, Jamie, that man was a horror even before the shrapnel destroyed whatever he had that could pass for a conscience.
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* DirtyCop: James Sr., Denbo Cullens, and [[spoiler:Taylor's rapist]].
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* TheUnFavourite: When he first meets Taylor, Jamie is ''very'' surprised that Taylor thinks James doesn't drink. Later, when he's dressing Taylor's wounds, he says that it's "actually not that bad", compared to what he used to get from James Sr. Both Roy and Taylor are horrified at what that implies.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Jamie, Taylor, [[spoiler:James Sr]]. They get over it.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Jamie, Taylor, [[spoiler:James Sr]].Jamie and Taylor. They get over it.
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* TrainingFromHell: [[spoiler:Jamie's time at the Academy.]]
--> '''Orrie:''' I thought he was going to kill you.
--> '''[[spoiler:Jamie:]]''' No, mate, you didn't. You fucking ''didn't''. You don't just stand around listening if you think someone's about to die.
--> '''Orrie:''' He wouldn't let you ''eat'', [[spoiler:Jamie]].
--> '''Orrie:''' I thought he was going to kill you.
--> '''[[spoiler:Jamie:]]''' No, mate, you didn't. You fucking ''didn't''. You don't just stand around listening if you think someone's about to die.
--> '''Orrie:''' He wouldn't let you ''eat'', [[spoiler:Jamie]].
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Jamie, Taylor, [[spoiler:James Sr]].
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* UnreliableNarrator: '''''Jamie.'''''
* WellDoneSonGuy: Jamie, Taylor, [[spoiler:James Sr]]. They get over it.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Jamie, Taylor, [[spoiler:James Sr]]. They get over it.
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* TheDitz: Deconstructed. Jamie's still got his malapropisms from canon, and has a very non-standard way of looking at his life and the world he inhabits, but it's obvious he's not as dumb as people think he is.
--> '''Taylor:''' I told them you weren’t dumb. Like you ''really'' ought to be evaluated for learning differences—and um, post-concussive syndrome, probably?—but you’re not ''stupid''. You keep up with me alright, even if you don’t always have all the words you need to say what you mean.
--> '''Taylor:''' I told them you weren’t dumb. Like you ''really'' ought to be evaluated for learning differences—and um, post-concussive syndrome, probably?—but you’re not ''stupid''. You keep up with me alright, even if you don’t always have all the words you need to say what you mean.
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* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:Martin Baeleigh]].
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Jamie, all the time.
-->'''Jamie:''' ''[after having seen Taylor's bare chest]'' Jesus Christ, mate. Nobody gives a ''toss'' about your fucking boy-tits, Taylor. It's like, cut the candy, lose some weight, I'll take you 'round the gym and show you me lifting routine.
-->'''Jamie:''' ''[after having seen Taylor's bare chest]'' Jesus Christ, mate. Nobody gives a ''toss'' about your fucking boy-tits, Taylor. It's like, cut the candy, lose some weight, I'll take you 'round the gym and show you me lifting routine.
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--> Football, he tells her. Fucking football.
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--> Football, he tells her.[hir]. Fucking football.
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-->“Every time you came to us for a patch-up. All those times. Jamie, those times.” Her eyes keep tracing the half-moon carved into his hip. “Kept telling me you got injured ''playing''—”
-->“Yeah,” Jamie mumbles. “I fucked up playing. I ''told'' you.”
-->He remembers those conversations. Dominance and submarines and stuff James Sr. would put him in the ground for fucking knowing about.
-->“''What'' were you playing, Jamie?” {{ZeeJay}} asks. The colour's gone from her skin but she's not shaking anymore. Not really looking at him, either. Like her eyes are still open but she's not looking at anything at all.
-->It's like... Jamie gets it that not everyone's into sport and all—but doesn't she know him at all?
-->Football, he tells her. Fucking football.
-->“Yeah,” Jamie mumbles. “I fucked up playing. I ''told'' you.”
-->He remembers those conversations. Dominance and submarines and stuff James Sr. would put him in the ground for fucking knowing about.
-->“''What'' were you playing, Jamie?” {{ZeeJay}} asks. The colour's gone from her skin but she's not shaking anymore. Not really looking at him, either. Like her eyes are still open but she's not looking at anything at all.
-->It's like... Jamie gets it that not everyone's into sport and all—but doesn't she know him at all?
-->Football, he tells her. Fucking football.
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-->“Yeah,” Jamie mumbles. “I fucked up playing. I ''told'' you.”
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--> Football, he tells her. Fucking football.
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--> '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' Jamie, all those times you came to us for a patch-up. All those times. Those times. Kept telling me you got injured ''playing''-
--> '''Jamie:''' Yeah, I fucked up playing. I told you.
--> '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' ''What'' were you playing, Jamie?
--> Football, he tells [hir]. Fucking football.
--> '''Jamie:''' Yeah, I fucked up playing. I told you.
--> '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' ''What'' were you playing, Jamie?
--> Football, he tells [hir]. Fucking football.
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--> '''Jamie:''' Yeah, I
-->“Yeah,” Jamie mumbles. “I fucked up playing. I
--> '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' ''What''
-->He remembers those conversations. Dominance and submarines and stuff James Sr. would put him in the ground for fucking knowing about.
-->“''What'' were you playing,
--> Football,
-->It's like... Jamie gets it that not everyone's into sport and all—but doesn't she know him at all?
-->Football, he tells
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* OddFriendship: On paper, {{ZeeJay}} and Jamie don't make sense. [[spoiler:Until you find out that xe basically raised him.]]
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* OddFriendship: On paper, {{ZeeJay}} and Jamie don't make sense. [[spoiler:Until you find out that xe xie basically raised him.]]
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--> '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' Jamie, all those times you came to us for a patch-up. All those times. Those times. Kept telling me you got injured ''playing''-
--> '''Jamie:''' Yeah, I fucked up playing. I told you.
--> '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' ''What'' were you playing, Jamie?
--> Football, he tells [hir]. Fucking football.
--> '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' Jamie, all those times you came to us for a patch-up. All those times. Those times. Kept telling me you got injured ''playing''-
--> '''Jamie:''' Yeah, I fucked up playing. I told you.
--> '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' ''What'' were you playing, Jamie?
--> Football, he tells [hir]. Fucking football.
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** Taylor turns a collection of Mars Bars and half a bottle of adderall into a six-week course of Clozapine in the space of a single afternoon in a public library, via a very complex barter system.
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** Taylor turns a collection of Mars Bars and half a bottle of adderall into a six-week course of Clozapine in the space of a single afternoon in at a public library, via a very complex barter system.
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** '''Jamie:''' The fuck is it now, Colin?
--->'''Colin:''' ''[after having run back and forth for an entire chapter]'' Coach says I need the exercise.
--->'''Colin:''' ''[after having run back and forth for an entire chapter]'' Coach says I need the exercise.
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** '''Jamie:''' The fuck is it now, Colin?
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--->'''Colin:'''
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---> '''Taylor:''' ''[to Jamie]'' Why were you getting beauty treatments at thirteen?
** '''James Sr.:''' In me whole entire life, I’ve only ever heard one story worth shedding tears over. Ask me how me father died. ''[How?]'' He never did.
** '''James Sr.:''' In me whole entire life, I’ve only ever heard one story worth shedding tears over. Ask me how me father died. ''[How?]'' He never did.
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** '''Jamie:''' The fuck is it now, Colin?
--->'''Colin:''' ''[after having run back and forth for an entire chapter]'' Coach says I need the exercise.
** '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' I've been looking after Jamie here since he was a ''biscuit'' older than you are now.
---> '''Taylor:''' ''[to Jamie]'' Why were you getting beauty treatments at thirteen?
** '''James Sr.:''' In me whole entire life, I’ve only ever heard one story worth shedding tears over. Ask me how me father died. ''[How?]'' He never did.
** '''Jamie:''' The fuck is it now, Colin?
--->'''Colin:''' ''[after having run back and forth for an entire chapter]'' Coach says I need the exercise.
** '''{{ZeeJay}}:''' I've been looking after Jamie here since he was a ''biscuit'' older than you are now.
---> '''Taylor:''' ''[to Jamie]'' Why were you getting beauty treatments at thirteen?
** '''James Sr.:''' In me whole entire life, I’ve only ever heard one story worth shedding tears over. Ask me how me father died. ''[How?]'' He never did.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: [[spoiler:Edwin Gearhart]] died alone and in incredible pain.
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** Jamie's mother is revealed to have been a teenager when she had him [[spoiler:after being taken advantage of and raped by the much older James Sr.]] who ran with him to keep him safe, and spent her life working dead-end jobs only to end up [[spoiler:in a coma she's not expected to ever wake up from]].
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Taylor is a great kid. He can also be absolutely terrifying when he wants to be.
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** Taylor turns a collection of Mars Bars and half a bottle of adderall into a six-week course of Clozapine in the space of a single afternoon in a public library, via a very complex barter system.
** Father Lindsay's main concern, after being trapped inside the Dogtrack after a football riot, is explaining to his mother that he's relapsed into his Candy Crush addiction again.
** Taylor turns a collection of Mars Bars and half a bottle of adderall into a six-week course of Clozapine in the space of a single afternoon in a public library, via a very complex barter system.
** Father Lindsay's main concern, after being trapped inside the Dogtrack after a football riot, is explaining to his mother that he's relapsed into his Candy Crush addiction again.
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* MissingMom: Jamie's mother, [[spoiler:who is in a coma]].
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* MissingMom: Jamie's mother, [[spoiler:who is in a coma]].coma after a stroke]].
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** Jamie's mother is revealed to have been a teenager when she had him [[spoiler:after being taken advantage of and raped by the much older James Sr.]] who nevertheless ran with him to keep him safe as a toddler.
** Keeley's supremely normal parents, John and Flora, turn out to have been [[spoiler:placed in Witness Protection for the past few decades]] and as such are very different people to how they present themselves to the wider world and their daughter.
** Keeley's supremely normal parents, John and Flora, turn out to have been [[spoiler:placed in Witness Protection for the past few decades]] and as such are very different people to how they present themselves to the wider world and their daughter.
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** Jamie's mother is revealed to have been a teenager when she had him [[spoiler:after being taken advantage of and raped by the much older James Sr.]] who nevertheless ran with him to keep him safe as safe, and spent her life working dead-end jobs only to end up [[spoiler:in a toddler.
coma she's not expected to ever wake up from]].
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** Keeley's supremely normal parents, John and Flora, turn out to have been
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** Dani spending a whole day scoring goals with Jamie, when Jamie's on the verge of a breakdown.
** Taylor and AFC Richmond smuggling Colin's dog into see him at [[spoiler:the hospital ward where he's being monitored]].
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** Dani spending a whole day scoring goals with Jamie, Jamie when Jamie's on the verge of a breakdown.
breakdown, because he knew he needed a friend.
** Taylor and AFC Richmond smuggling Colin's doginto in to see him at on [[spoiler:the hospital ward where he's being monitored]].ward]].
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Jamie and [[spoiler:Mikey.]] Both of them thought the other hated them for something that happened back at the Academy, but [[spoiler:Jamie still considers Mikey to have been the best friend he ever had, and Mikey watches all of Jamie's matches a decade after they last spoke]].
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Jamie and [[spoiler:Mikey.]] Both of them thought the other hated them for something that happened back at the Academy, but [[spoiler:Jamie still considers Mikey to have been the best friend he ever had, and Mikey watches all of Jamie's matches a decade after they last spoke]].