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The Grinning Snake is a fic by [=F91=] that is a crossover between ''Anime/MyHime'' and ''Anime/HellGirl'', taking place after the main story of the former. Konoka Kokuto, the daughter of one of the men killed in Shizuru's attack on District 1's headquarters, hears her father identify his killer with his dying breath. She sets out to bring Shizuru to justice, but when all else fails, her only remaining option requires her to pay the ultimate price.
The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5103188/1/The-Grinning-Snake here]], and as a one-shot, is completed.
The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5103188/1/The-Grinning-Snake here]], and as a one-shot, is completed.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5103188/1/The-Grinning-Snake The Grinning Snake Snake]]'' is a fic by [=F91=] that is a crossover between one-shot ''Anime/MyHime'' and ''Anime/HellGirl'', ''Anime/HellGirl'' crossover fic by [=F91=], taking place after the main story of the former. Konoka Kokuto, the daughter of one of the men killed in Shizuru's attack on District 1's headquarters, hears her father identify his killer with his dying breath. She sets out to bring Shizuru to justice, but when all else fails, her only remaining option requires her to pay the ultimate price.
The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5103188/1/The-Grinning-Snake here]], and as a one-shot, is completed.
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The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5103188/1/The-Grinning-Snake here]], and as a one-shot, is completed.
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The Grinning Snake is a fic by [=F91=] that is a crossover between ''Anime/MaiHime'' and ''Anime/HellGirl'', taking place after the main story of the former. Konoka Kokuto, the daughter of one of the men killed in Shizuru's attack on District 1's headquarters, hears her father identify his killer with his dying breath. She sets out to bring Shizuru to justice, but when all else fails, her only remaining option requires her to pay the ultimate price.
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The Grinning Snake is a fic by [=F91=] that is a crossover between ''Anime/MaiHime'' ''Anime/MyHime'' and ''Anime/HellGirl'', taking place after the main story of the former. Konoka Kokuto, the daughter of one of the men killed in Shizuru's attack on District 1's headquarters, hears her father identify his killer with his dying breath. She sets out to bring Shizuru to justice, but when all else fails, her only remaining option requires her to pay the ultimate price.
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* HopeSpot: Konoka finding evidence of Shizuru's wrongdoing seems like it might give her a way to bring her to justice without having to make a contract, but no one believes it.
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* TheNameIsBondJamesBond: How Konoka introduces herself to Shizuru.
-->'''Shizuru''': Now, what would you like to discuss, Miss...\\
'''Konoka''': Koukuto. Konoka Koukuto.\\
'''Shizuru''': Miss Koukuto.
-->'''Shizuru''': Now, what would you like to discuss, Miss...\\
'''Konoka''': Koukuto. Konoka Koukuto.\\
'''Shizuru''': Miss Koukuto.
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* OhCrap: Shizuru has a somewhat understated example when Konoka mentions District 1, with her eyes opening wide as she hears about it.
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* ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: Konoka's father used her name as his password. although Konoka tries several other ones first. The moment when she realizes her guess is correct is both SugarWiki/{{heartwarming|moments}} and [[TearJerker tear-jerking]].
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* ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: Konoka's father used her name as his password. although Konoka tries several other ones first. The moment when she realizes her guess is correct is both SugarWiki/{{heartwarming|moments}} and [[TearJerker tear-jerking]].
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* ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: Konoka's father used her name as his password. although Konoka tries several other ones first. The moment when she realizes her guess is correct is both [[HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]] and [[TearJerker tear-jerking]].
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* ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: Konoka's father used her name as his password. although Konoka tries several other ones first. The moment when she realizes her guess is correct is both [[HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]] SugarWiki/{{heartwarming|moments}} and [[TearJerker tear-jerking]].
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The Grinning Snake is a fic by [=F91=] that is a crossover between ''Anime/MaiHime'' and ''Anime/HellGirl'', taking place after the main story of the former. Konoka Kokuto, the daughter of one of the men killed in Shizuru's attack on District 1's headquarters, hears her father identify his killer with his dying breath. She sets out to bring Shizuru to justice, but finds that when all her options fail, she only has one left.
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The Grinning Snake is a fic by [=F91=] that is a crossover between ''Anime/MaiHime'' and ''Anime/HellGirl'', taking place after the main story of the former. Konoka Kokuto, the daughter of one of the men killed in Shizuru's attack on District 1's headquarters, hears her father identify his killer with his dying breath. She sets out to bring Shizuru to justice, but finds that when all else fails, her options fail, she only has one left.
remaining option requires her to pay the ultimate price.
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* KarmaHoudini: The trope is referred to by name in the author's notes, and is ultimately averted by Konoka using the contract.
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* GilliganCut: When Konoka decides to go to the police to report Shizuru, the narration says "[[TemptingFate Surely, justice wouldn't fail her]]," and the next scene begins with "Justice had failed her."
* KarmaHoudini: The trope is referred to by name in the author's notes, when the author complains about how Shizuru got off too easily, andis for Shizuru, it's ultimately averted by Konoka using the contract.
* KarmaHoudini: The trope is referred to by name in the author's notes, when the author complains about how Shizuru got off too easily, and
* ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: Konoka's father used her name as his password. although Konoka tries several other ones first. The moment when she realizes her guess is correct is both [[HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]] and [[TearJerker tear-jerking]].
* RevengeBeforeReason: Zig-zagged. On the one hand, Konoka ultimately decides to condemn Shizuru to hell, even knowing that means she'll go there, too. On the other hand, Konoka only does so after exhausting all other options that she can think of.
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* ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: Konoka's father used her name as his password. although Konoka tries several other ones first. The moment when she realizes her guess is correct is both [[HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]] and [[TearJerker tear-jerking]].
* RevengeBeforeReason: Zig-zagged. On the one hand, Konoka ultimately decides to condemn Shizuru to hell, even knowing that means she'll go there, too. On the other hand, Konoka only does so after exhausting all other options that she can think of.
* RevengeBeforeReason: Zig-zagged. On the one hand, Konoka ultimately decides to condemn Shizuru to hell, even knowing that means she'll go there, too. On the other hand, Konoka only does so after exhausting all other options that she can think of.
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* ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: TrashOfTheTitans: Konoka's father used only cleaned his office once a month, leaving her name as with quite a mess to get through after his password. although death.
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Shizuru's status as a idol among Fuuka Academy endures even after the Carnival, and [[LampshadeHanging Konokatries several other ones first. The moment when she realizes her guess is correct is both [[HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]] and [[TearJerker tear-jerking]].
* RevengeBeforeReason: Zig-zagged. Onfinds it a bit surprising that someone like Shizuru could be the one hand, Konoka ultimately decides to condemn Shizuru to hell, even knowing that means she'll go there, too. On the other hand, Konoka only does so after exhausting all other options that she can think of.responsible]].
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Shizuru's status as a idol among Fuuka Academy endures even after the Carnival, and [[LampshadeHanging Konoka
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The Grinning Snake is a fic by [=F91=] that is a crossover between ''Anime/MaiHime'' and ''Anime/HellGirl'', taking place after the main story of the former. Konoka Kokuto, the daughter of one of the men killed in Shizuru's attack on District 1's headquarters, hears her father identify his killer with his dying breath. She sets out to bring Shizuru to justice, but finds that when all her options fail, she only has one left.
The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5103188/1/The-Grinning-Snake here]], and as a one-shot, is completed.
!This fic contains examples of:
*AlliterativeName: '''Ko'''noka '''Ko'''kuto, the main character.
*BittersweetEnding[=/=]DownerEnding: Depending on your perspective. If you believe that Shizuru got what she deserved, then it's the former, as Konoka's also going to hell. If you believe that any use of Ai's contract is tragic, then it's the latter. If you believe that Shizuru doesn't deserve this, it's ''definitely'' the latter.
*DaddysGirl: Konoka was quite close to her father.
*DraggedOffToHell: Shizuru's ultimate fate, in which she suffers all manner of painful indignities, combined with insincere apologies.
*DramaticIrony: Konoka doesn't understand why Shizuru would turn on District 1, which ostensibly shares the Himes' goal of dealing with the threat of Orphans. She doesn't realize that District 1 serves [[BigBad The Obsidian Lord]].
*FauxAffablyEvil: Shizuru exhibits some traits of this, being outwardly polite to Konoka, but being largely unrepentant about killing the First District, and showing a certain level of condescension toward Konoka when she protests.
*ForegoneConclusion: Since the story is based off ''Anime/HellGirl'', it's essentially a given that Konoka will go through with sending Shizuru, along with herself, to Hell.
*KarmaHoudini: The trope is referred to by name in the author's notes, and is ultimately averted by Konoka using the contract.
*KarmicDeath: Shizuru being DraggedOffToHell by the daughter of a man she killed, with the experience itself showing her that not everything can be fixed with an apology.
*MadnessMantra: Shizuru's repeating "It was all for Natsuki" as she's DraggedOffToHell.
*PoliceAreUseless: Konoka goes to them first, but gets no help from them, leaving her two choices- confront Shizuru and get her to turn herself in, or send her to Hell.
*PrecisionFStrike: Enraged by Shizuru's lack of remorse for what she's done, Konoka screams, "DON'T FUCK WITH ME!"
*RevengeFic: Against Shizuru for her killing the First District members.
*SeeYouInHell: Konoka says this to Shizuru when sealing her contract, making this a literal example.
*ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: Konoka's father used her name as his password. although Konoka tries several other ones first. The moment when she realizes her guess is correct is both [[HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]] and [[TearJerker tear-jerking]].
* RevengeBeforeReason: Zig-zagged. On the one hand, Konoka ultimately decides to condemn Shizuru to hell, even knowing that means she'll go there, too. On the other hand, Konoka only does so after exhausting all other options that she can think of.
*WeWillNotUsePhotoshopInTheFuture: Averted. Even though Konoka's video of Shizuru using her Element and Child to destroy the District 1 Headquarters is genuine, the police officer who sees it laughs at her and says that it has great special effect.
The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5103188/1/The-Grinning-Snake here]], and as a one-shot, is completed.
!This fic contains examples of:
*AlliterativeName: '''Ko'''noka '''Ko'''kuto, the main character.
*BittersweetEnding[=/=]DownerEnding: Depending on your perspective. If you believe that Shizuru got what she deserved, then it's the former, as Konoka's also going to hell. If you believe that any use of Ai's contract is tragic, then it's the latter. If you believe that Shizuru doesn't deserve this, it's ''definitely'' the latter.
*DaddysGirl: Konoka was quite close to her father.
*DraggedOffToHell: Shizuru's ultimate fate, in which she suffers all manner of painful indignities, combined with insincere apologies.
*DramaticIrony: Konoka doesn't understand why Shizuru would turn on District 1, which ostensibly shares the Himes' goal of dealing with the threat of Orphans. She doesn't realize that District 1 serves [[BigBad The Obsidian Lord]].
*FauxAffablyEvil: Shizuru exhibits some traits of this, being outwardly polite to Konoka, but being largely unrepentant about killing the First District, and showing a certain level of condescension toward Konoka when she protests.
*ForegoneConclusion: Since the story is based off ''Anime/HellGirl'', it's essentially a given that Konoka will go through with sending Shizuru, along with herself, to Hell.
*KarmaHoudini: The trope is referred to by name in the author's notes, and is ultimately averted by Konoka using the contract.
*KarmicDeath: Shizuru being DraggedOffToHell by the daughter of a man she killed, with the experience itself showing her that not everything can be fixed with an apology.
*MadnessMantra: Shizuru's repeating "It was all for Natsuki" as she's DraggedOffToHell.
*PoliceAreUseless: Konoka goes to them first, but gets no help from them, leaving her two choices- confront Shizuru and get her to turn herself in, or send her to Hell.
*PrecisionFStrike: Enraged by Shizuru's lack of remorse for what she's done, Konoka screams, "DON'T FUCK WITH ME!"
*RevengeFic: Against Shizuru for her killing the First District members.
*SeeYouInHell: Konoka says this to Shizuru when sealing her contract, making this a literal example.
*ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: Konoka's father used her name as his password. although Konoka tries several other ones first. The moment when she realizes her guess is correct is both [[HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]] and [[TearJerker tear-jerking]].
* RevengeBeforeReason: Zig-zagged. On the one hand, Konoka ultimately decides to condemn Shizuru to hell, even knowing that means she'll go there, too. On the other hand, Konoka only does so after exhausting all other options that she can think of.
*WeWillNotUsePhotoshopInTheFuture: Averted. Even though Konoka's video of Shizuru using her Element and Child to destroy the District 1 Headquarters is genuine, the police officer who sees it laughs at her and says that it has great special effect.
