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The story was taken off Fanfiction.net by the author due to some fandom drama, but remains on Fichub Archive and found on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn under the username [=SixtyThreeNineteen=]. As of December 2021, the story is being [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14004785/1/The-Good-Hunter reuploaded]] to Fanfiction.net by a different user with permission from the author.

On 1 Jul 2023, the story releases its 22nd chapter, putting an end to a 2-3-year hiatus.

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The story was taken off Fanfiction.net by the author due to some fandom drama, but remains on Fichub Archive and found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34230841/chapters/85166518 found]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn under the username [=SixtyThreeNineteen=]. As of December 2021, the story is being [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14004785/1/The-Good-Hunter reuploaded]] to Fanfiction.net by a different user with permission from the author.

On 1 Jul 2023, the story releases released its 22nd chapter, putting an end to a 2-3-year hiatus.
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--->'''Cyril:''' ''(upon discovering'' ''[[spoiler:Father Zacharias standing over Sierra and Emil's seemingly lifeless bodies)]]'' '''[[ThisIsUnforgivable "Curse the fiends...]]''' '''[[UnstoppableRage And their children too...]]''' '''[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge And their children, forever]]''' '''''[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge true...]]'''''

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--->'''Cyril:''' ''(upon discovering'' ''[[spoiler:Father Zacharias standing over Sierra and Emil's seemingly lifeless bodies)]]'' '''[[ThisIsUnforgivable "Curse Curse the fiends...]]''' '''[[UnstoppableRage And their children too...]]''' '''[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge And their children, forever]]''' '''''[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge true...]]'''''

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* PreAsskickingOneLiner: Cyril, right before his fight with Daria in Chapter 6, doubles as MeaningfulEcho.
-->'''Cyril:''' Tonight, Cyril Sutherland joins the Hunt. *fires SwordBeam to vaporise anything in its vicinity*

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* PreAsskickingOneLiner: PreAsskickingOneLiner:
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Cyril, right before his fight with Daria in Chapter 6, doubles as MeaningfulEcho.
-->'''Cyril:''' --->'''Cyril:''' Tonight, Cyril Sutherland joins the Hunt. *fires SwordBeam to vaporise anything in its vicinity*
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* AppealToForce: Sierra is being hassled by a local merchant son who believes himself a suitor to her, and asks Klaus for help upon realizing he's a mercenary of sorts in their first meeting. Klaus, upon meeting the son and his lackeys, knocks out the guards and threatens the son to back off on pain of death. Then that night, he sneaks into the son's family estate and does the same, letting his sudden, uninvited entry speak for itself on how the son will see no safety if he bothers Sierra again.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Nial Andersen, Lord of the City Guard in Sheffield. His fellow lords sneered at his concerns over fanatics of the Order as "warmongering" when he [[ProperlyParanoid had every right to fear that they were gathering]], as the attack on the Union Festival demonstrates. He's more concerned for the wellbeing of his citizens than anything else, and when stretched to his limit he's perfectly willing to pull in shady help, including a former highwayman and an off-putting, seemingly remorseless killer. When Ancalagon is grilling the noble council for their idiocy, Nial is rightfully terrified, but she puts good stock in his words and, in a backhanded way against the rest of the council, praises him for taking control of things in the chaos.
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** It's also {{deconstructed|trope}} - for a haunted, tired man like Cyril with blood and baggage aplenty on his hands, speaking this is almost akin to a TriggerPhrase for falling back into a more merciless, bestial mindset, which is not a good thing for anyone involved, especially himself. [[spoiler:It's not even the worst he can do. He has a ''second'' line for when he's well and truly angered, as Father Zacharias discovers in Chapter 14.]]
--->'''Cyril:''' ''(upon discovering'' ''[[spoiler:Father Zacharias standing over Sierra and Emil's seemingly lifeless bodies)]]'' '''[[ThisIsUnforgivable "Curse the fiends...]]''' '''[[UnstoppableRage And their children too...]]''' '''[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge And their children, forever]]''' '''''[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge true...]]'''''
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* {{Tragedy}}: This fanfic is labelled as such. It may not seem obvious at first glance, but if one considers [[{{Deuteragonist}} Ursula's]] actions in the story, it is clear that she is the TragicHero of the story. Ursula is a person of great status, as [[TheCaptain the Captain of the 4th Company]]. She makes the TragicMistake of going after [[HeroicNeutral the]] [[OneManArmy Hunter]], [[BullyingADragon despite knowing that he is entirely capable of defeating her effortlessly]]. Warnings from multiple parties notwithstanding, she still decides to participate in [[TheTeam a squad]] to pursue him due to her [[FatalFlaw Fatal Flaws]]. That is, her {{Pride}}, the urge to find a WorthyOpponent, her desperation to regain her [[HonourBeforeReason honour]] to make up for Druella's defeat, and her failure to look past the mentality of DoUntoOthersBeforeTheyDoUntoUs. While the fanfic is currently ongoing, [[spoiler:the SpaceBattles.com snippets shed light on her ultimate fate. Not only she alienates many of her comrades during her pursuit of the Hunter, she is [[UncertainDoom presumably hunted by him personally]] after the raid on Sasha's second orphanage.]]

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* {{Tragedy}}: This fanfic is labelled as such. It may not seem obvious at first glance, but if one considers [[{{Deuteragonist}} Ursula's]] actions in the story, it is clear that she is the TragicHero of the story. Ursula is a person of great status, as [[TheCaptain the Captain of the 4th Company]]. She makes the TragicMistake of going after [[HeroicNeutral the]] [[OneManArmy Hunter]], [[BullyingADragon despite knowing that he is entirely capable of defeating her effortlessly]]. Warnings from multiple parties notwithstanding, she still decides to participate in [[TheTeam a squad]] to pursue him due to her [[FatalFlaw Fatal Flaws]].{{Fatal Flaw}}s. That is, her {{Pride}}, the urge to find a WorthyOpponent, her desperation to regain her [[HonourBeforeReason honour]] to make up for Druella's defeat, and her failure to look past the mentality of DoUntoOthersBeforeTheyDoUntoUs. While the fanfic is currently ongoing, [[spoiler:the SpaceBattles.com Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom snippets shed light on her ultimate fate. Not only she alienates many of her comrades during her pursuit of the Hunter, she is [[UncertainDoom presumably hunted by him personally]] after the raid on Sasha's second orphanage.]]
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On 1 Jul 2023, the story releases its 22nd chapter, putting an end to a 2-3-year hiatus.
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* DontMakeMeDestroyYou: Chapter 5 has Cyril encountered by a clergyman, William Noscrim, who intends to recruit the Hunter in [[TheOrder the Order of the Chief God]]'s ranks. Cyril warns William not to waste his time, and that "someone is not coming back home in one piece" should he start a fight. The clergyman orders his daughter Wilmarina to remind the Hunter of his place, [[CurbStompBattle which ends up in vain]]. Cyril later gives William another warning: send anyone after him, these people die; send her daughter after him, his bloodline ends.

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* DontMakeMeDestroyYou: Chapter 5 has Cyril encountered by a clergyman, William Noscrim, who intends to recruit the Hunter in [[TheOrder the Order of the Chief God]]'s ranks. Cyril warns William not to waste his time, and that "someone is not coming back home in one piece" should he start a fight. The clergyman orders his daughter Wilmarina to remind the Hunter of his place, [[CurbStompBattle which ends up in vain]]. Cyril later gives William another warning: send anyone after him, these people die; send her his daughter after him, his bloodline ends.
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* ContraltoOfDanger: Ursula, Captain of the 4th Company is a BloodKnight who speaks in a silky contralto.
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* PistolWhipping: Occasionally done by the Good Hunter, should he be unable to reload fast enough. His SuperStrength means that this is pretty effective, as an unfortunate monster and an Order soldier can attest to, both of whom have their skulls cracked like an egg in Chapter 3 and 6 respectively. If it is possible for one to actually kill via this method in RealLife, they are not going to survive any time soon.

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* PistolWhipping: Occasionally done by the Good Hunter, should he be unable to reload fast enough. His SuperStrength means that this is pretty effective, as an unfortunate monster and an Order soldier can attest to, both of whom have their skulls cracked like an egg in Chapter 3 and 6 respectively. If it is possible for one to actually kill via this method in RealLife, they are not going to survive any time soon.
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** Chapter 16 and beyond (for now): Slaver Slayer Arc. Cyril, accepting his role as the hunter, is tasked with rooting out slavers within the federation of the Oberon League. Little did he know that the state of affairs has gone through an upheaval due to his presence, as the politicking between TheOrder, [[MonsterLord the Demon Lord]], and the Oberon League begins to unravel.

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** Chapter 16 and beyond (for now): Slaver Slayer Arc. Cyril, accepting his role as the hunter, is tasked with rooting out slavers within the federation of the Oberon League. [[LittleDidIKnow Little did he know know]] that the state of affairs has gone through an upheaval due to his presence, as the politicking between TheOrder, [[MonsterLord the Demon Lord]], and the Oberon League begins to unravel.
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* GratuitousNinja: The kunoichi (aka. female ninja). Out of the 223 types of [[MonsterGirl mamono]], which normally include fantasy or mythical races, there are ninja types, apparently. In particular, the very first chapter has Murasaki Natsume, a {{succubus}} ninja, showing up at the Hunter's abode. Alas, her training as a ninja is not enough to prepare herself for the Hunter's ferocious assault.

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* GratuitousNinja: The kunoichi (aka. female ninja). Out of the 223 types of [[MonsterGirl mamono]], which normally include fantasy or mythical races, there are ninja types, apparently. In particular, the very first chapter has Murasaki Natsume, a {{succubus}} [[SuccubiAndIncubi succubus]] ninja, showing up at the Hunter's abode. Alas, her training as a ninja is not enough to prepare herself for the Hunter's ferocious assault.
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* GratuitousNinja: The kunoichi (aka. female ninja). Out of the 223 types of [[MonsterGirl mamono]], which normally include fantasy or mythical races, there are ninja types, apparently. In particular, the very first chapter has Murasaki Natsume, a [[HornyDevil succubus]] ninja, showing up at the Hunter's abode. Alas, her training as a ninja is not enough to prepare herself for the Hunter's ferocious assault.

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* GratuitousNinja: The kunoichi (aka. female ninja). Out of the 223 types of [[MonsterGirl mamono]], which normally include fantasy or mythical races, there are ninja types, apparently. In particular, the very first chapter has Murasaki Natsume, a [[HornyDevil succubus]] {{succubus}} ninja, showing up at the Hunter's abode. Alas, her training as a ninja is not enough to prepare herself for the Hunter's ferocious assault.



** In terms of inhabitants, aside from your typical StandardFantasyRaces like humans, elves, and dwarves, a whopping ''[[FantasyKitchenSink 223]]'' types of [[MonsterGirl mamono]] exist. Despite their variations, they generally have the desire to seek human males for [[InterspeciesRomance companionship and reproduction]]. However, due to the current Monster Lord's power, the mamono have developed a strong, lustful desire for mating with said humans, with or without their consent. The [[HornyDevil succubus family]], in particular, can [[TheCorruption transform]] non-mamono males and females into incubi and succubi respectively, again, with or without their consent.

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** In terms of inhabitants, aside from your typical StandardFantasyRaces like humans, elves, and dwarves, a whopping ''[[FantasyKitchenSink 223]]'' types of [[MonsterGirl mamono]] exist. Despite their variations, they generally have the desire to seek human males for [[InterspeciesRomance companionship and reproduction]]. However, due to the current Monster Lord's power, the mamono have developed a strong, lustful desire for mating with said humans, with or without their consent. The [[HornyDevil succubus family]], family, in particular, can [[TheCorruption transform]] non-mamono males and females into incubi and succubi respectively, again, with or without their consent.
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* SerratedBladeOfPain: It goes without saying that the [[MixAndMatchWeapon Saw Cleaver]] is pretty much synonymous with Cyril Sutherland. To hammer it home, he notably uses a [[HeroesPreferSwords steel sword]] rather than his [[WeaponOfChoice signature weapon]] during his time as [[SecretIdentity Klaus Tennstedt]].

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* SerratedBladeOfPain: It goes without saying that the [[MixAndMatchWeapon Saw Cleaver]] is pretty much synonymous with Cyril Sutherland. To hammer it home, he notably uses a [[HeroesPreferSwords steel sword]] rather than his [[WeaponOfChoice [[WeaponSpecialization signature weapon]] during his time as [[SecretIdentity Klaus Tennstedt]].
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* BalanceOfPower: A three-power example. [[TheOrder The Order of the Chief God]] and the Demon Lord's realm (the extremists, in particular) are two major powers locked in conflict for an unknown period of time (assumed to be very long). The former routinely organises crusades against monster kind, while the latter converts foreign territory to its own, like Lescatie. Though the two powers are seemingly equal, the latter has the advantage in the long run, due to the monsters' seduction powers, as well as the Order showing signs of decline. The third faction, the Oberon League, is a gathering of neutral city-states outside the influences of the previous two powers. The League, a steadily rising power in its own right, keeps them balanced against each other (e.g. being trade partners with the Order, allowing monsters to settle in their territory peacefully, etc.). What's more, the League has the ear of [[HeroicNeutral the Moon Scented Hunter]], providing the faction an even larger advantage. The balance comes into play as [[MonsterLord Lilith]] analyses the current state of affairs: she couldn't exploit the situation where the Order is losing influence because that would force more people into the arms of the League, and her plan for human-monster unification would be hindered should her realm ally with the League. By the time period [[spoiler:where the Wild Hunt is established, it is heavily implied that the three powers are locked in a [[UsefulNotes/ThreeKingdomsShuWeiWu "Three Kingdoms"]] stalemate.]]


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* DramaticGunCock: Natsume, unprepared for the Hunter's assault, flees from his abode. It looks like she has lost him, but then...
-->''Click.''[[note]]A gun cock is heard, revealing the Hunter to be right behind her, pointing a pistol at the back of her head.[[/note]]


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* HighPressureBlood: In Chapter 6, Cyril [[OffWithHisHead beheads]] a {{mook}}. Blood sprays through the air, covering and paralysing nearby men and [[CuteMonsterGirl monster women]] alike.
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*** The Chief God has been raising human [[TheChosenOne heroes]], in hopes that they can strike down the Monster Lord. The [[https://monstergirlencyclopedia.fandom.com/wiki/Chief_God wiki]] reveals that the Chief God opts for this indirect method as a result of being gravely wounded after trying to destroy the Demon Lord and her husband in battle.

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*** The Chief God has been raising human [[TheChosenOne heroes]], in hopes that they can strike down the Monster Lord. The [[https://monstergirlencyclopedia.fandom.com/wiki/Chief_God miraheze.org/wiki/Chief_God wiki]] reveals [[AllThereInTheManual reveals]] that the Chief God opts for this indirect method as a result of being gravely wounded after trying to destroy the Demon Lord and her husband in battle.



* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: {{Downplayed}} for Lilith, First of her name, [[MonsterLord Overlord of All Monsters]] and the Grand Mistress of Royal Makai. She's a VisionaryVillain, neither incompetent or mindlessly evil, who wishes to bring forth a FreeLoveFuture for both human and monster-kind, showing that she does have a large-scale policy in mind. Said policy comes with serious problems: consent is not an option; humans may find themselves monsterized against their will; and humans will eventually be outbred by monsters, hence be driven to extinction. As revealed in the backstory for MGE, this would also drive Monster-kind into extinction, due to the fact that Mamono are a OneGenderRace who need human men to breed. It should be noted that the Demon Lord is trying to find an answer to the extinction issue by figuring out how to produce male offspring from human-monster relations, instead of just more female mamono.

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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: {{Downplayed}} for Lilith, First of her name, [[MonsterLord Overlord of All Monsters]] and the Grand Mistress of Royal Makai. She's a VisionaryVillain, neither incompetent or mindlessly evil, who wishes to bring forth a FreeLoveFuture for both human and monster-kind, showing that she does have a large-scale policy in mind. Said policy comes with serious problems: consent is not an option; humans may find themselves monsterized against their will; and humans will eventually be outbred by monsters, hence be driven to extinction. [[AllThereInTheManual As revealed in the backstory for MGE, MGE]], this would also drive Monster-kind into extinction, due to the fact that Mamono are a OneGenderRace who need human men to breed. It should be noted that the Demon Lord is trying to find an answer to the extinction issue by figuring out how to produce male offspring from human-monster relations, instead of just more female mamono.



* StandardJapaneseFantasySetting: The MGE 'verse. Further details of the world building of the MGE 'verse can be found in the wiki [[https://monstergirlencyclopedia.miraheze.org/wiki/Monster_Girls here]].

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* StandardJapaneseFantasySetting: The MGE 'verse. [[AllThereInTheManual Further details of the world building of the MGE 'verse 'verse]] can be found in the wiki [[https://monstergirlencyclopedia.miraheze.org/wiki/Monster_Girls here]].
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: {{Downplayed}} for Lillith, First of her name, [[MonsterLord Overlord of All Monsters]] and the Grand Mistress of Royal Makai. She's a VisionaryVillain, neither incompetent or mindlessly evil, who wishes to bring forth a FreeLoveFuture for both human and monster-kind, showing that she does have a large-scale policy in mind. Said policy comes with serious problems: consent is not an option; humans may find themselves monsterized against their will; and humans will eventually be outbred by monsters, hence be driven to extinction.

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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: {{Downplayed}} for Lillith, Lilith, First of her name, [[MonsterLord Overlord of All Monsters]] and the Grand Mistress of Royal Makai. She's a VisionaryVillain, neither incompetent or mindlessly evil, who wishes to bring forth a FreeLoveFuture for both human and monster-kind, showing that she does have a large-scale policy in mind. Said policy comes with serious problems: consent is not an option; humans may find themselves monsterized against their will; and humans will eventually be outbred by monsters, hence be driven to extinction. As revealed in the backstory for MGE, this would also drive Monster-kind into extinction, due to the fact that Mamono are a OneGenderRace who need human men to breed. It should be noted that the Demon Lord is trying to find an answer to the extinction issue by figuring out how to produce male offspring from human-monster relations, instead of just more female mamono.
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'''Cyril:''' You talk too much. *slashes her in the midriff*

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'''Cyril:''' You talk too much. *slashes ''*slashes her in the midriff*midriff*''

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* BloodSplatteredWarrior:
** Cyril is covered in dried blood after he slaughtered his way through Lescatie to escape the city.
** Both Cyril and Talbot were covered in the blood of marauders as the two put a halt to the slaver raid in the village of Glaspire.



* DodgeTheBullet: Druella dodges a shot from the Hunter's flintlock pistol by flapping her wings twice to jink to the side.



* PrecisionFStrike: During the council meeting in Sheffield, one of the lords objects to Nial's claim that Ludendorf Trade Company is involved in the attack on the Union Festival. In response, Ancalagon threatens to [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impale him on a spire]], ending off with "'''shut the fuck up and sit down'''".

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* PrecisionFStrike: During the council meeting in Sheffield, one of the lords objects to Nial's claim that Ludendorf Trade Company is involved in the attack on the Union Festival. In response, Ancalagon threatens to [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impale him on a spire]], ending off with "'''shut the fuck up and sit down'''". This is the only time she dropped an F-bomb.


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* SuperToughness: Wilmarina notes that all Heroes blessed by the Chief God, herself included, can shrug off most injuries. {{Downplayed}} in practice, for she is no match for Cyril and his [[PowerFist clod of iron]], but she doesn't get a concussion after receiving a blow to the back of her head -- her skull would've been caved in (plus the nasty stuff that happens to the brain) if she were a normal person.
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* PunchedAcrossTheRoom: One of the nobles who are harassing Sasha Fullmoon's orphanage in Chapter 2 is struck on the head from Cyril's punch. He is then sent flying via a second punch. Does the victim come out unharmed? [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome No, he later ends up in a coma]].

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* PunchedAcrossTheRoom: One of the nobles who are harassing Sasha Fullmoon's orphanage in Chapter 2 is struck on the head from Cyril's punch. He is then sent flying via a second punch. Does the victim come out unharmed? [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome No, he later ends up in a coma]].coma.
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* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: Poor Cyril. Finds a shelter in Lescatie? The city later finds itself under assault by monster armies, so he has to [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere GTFO]]. Finds a home in Sheffield? With some acquaintances and a couple friends? It is attacked by [[TheFundamentalist Order zealots]] during a FictionalHoliday (though not outright destroyed), [[spoiler:one friend is injured but decides to leave for family business, and the other is in a catatonic state]]. Then he takes up the call.


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* StatuesqueStunner:
** Ancalagon's human form resembles a woman almost reaching nine feet tall, and she is undoubtedly a beauty, as per Nial's P.O.V..
** The Doll is this according to Sierra[[spoiler: and the Wandering Scholar]]'s narrations. The former notes that the workshop steward has a "towering yet graceful form". As for the latter, not only she is the tallest woman he's ever seen, the Doll is described as "a beauty in all meanings of the word, but utterly unapproachable".

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