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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]], and [[https://www.deviantart.com/willyfoureyes/gallery/72501523/the-ghost-of-ochs DeviantArt]]) is an ongoing ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.

The first chapter was posted on January 12, 2020, and a [[Characters/TheGhostOfOchs character sheet]] is currently in the works.

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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]], and [[https://www.deviantart.com/willyfoureyes/gallery/72501523/the-ghost-of-ochs DeviantArt]]) is an ongoing ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that Tropers/WillyFourEyes, first published on January 12, 2020.

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starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.

The first chapter was posted on January 12, 2020, and a [[Characters/TheGhostOfOchs character sheet]] is currently in the works.
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** Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]] was depicted in the game as a sadistic killer and a SmugSnake who was quickly killed off in her only major battle. In this story, Monica is a [[DecompositeCharacter separate character]] from [[spoiler:Kronya]], and is reasonably polite and good-hearted.

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** Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]] was depicted in the game as a sadistic killer and a SmugSnake who was [[FauxActionGirl quickly killed off in her only major battle.battle]]. In this story, Monica is a [[DecompositeCharacter separate character]] from [[spoiler:Kronya]], and is reasonably polite and good-hearted.



* FirstKiss: Monica and Constance share theirs in Chapter 14 after a private [[SpotOfTea tea party]].

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* FirstKiss: Monica and Constance share theirs after their first date in Chapter 14 after 14. Monica is so excited about it afterward that she has to remind herself to keep calm on her way back home to avoid arousing suspicion (especially since the town outside the monastery was still cleaning up from a private [[SpotOfTea tea party]].monster attack).

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* BlackCloak: Flayn and Monica both describe being attacked by mages wearing feature-concealing black robes, hinting at the existence of [[spoiler:"those who slither in the dark"]].



** Accidental on the author's part, but Monica decides against telling the merchant in Drachen Village "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's me, Monica]]", dismissing it as insufficient to prove her identity.
** A straighter example is the title of Chapter 2: "Maybe I'm a Ghost", which is taken from the song "Maybe I'm a Lion" from ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVIII''.

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** Accidental on The title of Chapter 2, "Maybe I'm a Ghost", is taken from the author's part, but song "Maybe I'm a Lion" from ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVIII''.
** In Chapter 8,
Monica decides against telling the a merchant in Drachen Village "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's me, Monica]]", dismissing it as insufficient to prove her identity.
** A straighter example is the title of Chapter 2: "Maybe I'm a Ghost", which is taken from the song "Maybe I'm a Lion" from ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVIII''.15, "Non-Fatal Three-Way", references Wrestling/{{WWE}}'s "Fatal 4-Way" matches.
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* EveryProperLadyShouldCurtsy: Monica does this the first time she meets each of the three lords. Ingrid also does this when she first meets Baron Ochs, and has to remind Leonie (a commoner who doesn't deal with nobles very often) to do the same.

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A [[Characters/TheGhostOfOchs character sheet]] is currently in the works.

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A The first chapter was posted on January 12, 2020, and a [[Characters/TheGhostOfOchs character sheet]] is currently in the works.



* WakingUpElsewhere: The story starts with Monica waking up in Garreg Mach's infirmary in an OnlyMostlyDead state.

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* WakingUpElsewhere: The story starts with Monica waking up in Garreg Mach's infirmary in an OnlyMostlyDead state.state.
* WhatIf: The story hinges on [[spoiler:Monica ''surviving'' her ordeal with "those who slither in the dark" and Kronya failing to use her as a means to sneak onto the monastery]].

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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]], and [[https://www.deviantart.com/willyfoureyes/gallery/72501523/the-ghost-of-ochs DeviantArt]]) is an ongoing (13 chapters as of April 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.

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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]], and [[https://www.deviantart.com/willyfoureyes/gallery/72501523/the-ghost-of-ochs DeviantArt]]) is an ongoing (13 chapters as of April 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.


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* FirstKiss: Monica and Constance share theirs in Chapter 14 after a private [[SpotOfTea tea party]].


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* IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow: A non-sexual (maybe) variant occurs when Edelgard is eating lunch with Claude and she's thinking far into the future about her plans when she becomes Emperor:
-->'''Edelgard:''' It's true that I have a lot on my mind, and that hasn't given me much time to socialize with others. As the future emperor, there is much I need to consider. Not just for today, but one, two, five...even ten years ahead. I'm sure you and Dimitri must have the same concerns.
-->'''Claude:''' Okay, you got me. I've been known to do a fair bit of strategizing myself. I'm probably not thinking as far ahead as you are, though.
-->'''Edelgard:''' 'Strategizing', you say? That's an interesting way of putting it.

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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]], and [[https://www.deviantart.com/willyfoureyes/gallery/72501523/the-ghost-of-ochs DeviantArt]]) is an ongoing (12 chapters as of March 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.

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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]], and [[https://www.deviantart.com/willyfoureyes/gallery/72501523/the-ghost-of-ochs DeviantArt]]) is an ongoing (12 (13 chapters as of March April 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.


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* InitiationCeremony: When a student completes their certification exam, they are treated to a quiet and dignified ceremony in Rhea's audience chamber, with their professor, and sometimes also their peers, attending as witnesses. Monica receives one (and [[AndYourRewardIsClothes a cool new robe]]) when she gets promoted to Priest.
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* CombatMedic: When given a choice between the sword-focused Mercenary class or the healing-focused Priest class, Monica chooses to take the Priest exam, which doesn't make her as strong as she would have been if she became a Mercenary, but also wouldn't restrict her choice of weapons, allowing her to continue using her sword.



* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: When Byleth introduces herself to Monica, she states that everyone (except her father Jeralt) just calls her "Professor" out of habit, even though she isn't the only teacher in Garreg Mach.



* HeroesPreferSwords: Monica has some training in swords and lances, but she chooses to focus on her swordsmanship when asked about her preference because sword-fighting runs in her family.

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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]], and [[https://www.deviantart.com/willyfoureyes/gallery/72501523/the-ghost-of-ochs DeviantArt]]) is an ongoing (as of March 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.

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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]], and [[https://www.deviantart.com/willyfoureyes/gallery/72501523/the-ghost-of-ochs DeviantArt]]) is an ongoing (as (12 chapters as of March 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.
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A [[Characters/TheGhostOfOchs character sheet]] is currently in the works.
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* RealityEnsues: While the game allows Byleth to make Flayn participate in the Battle of the Eagle and Lion shortly after joining their house, Monica isn't granted the same courtesy in ''Ghost''. Missing out on almost ''one whole school year'' due to being kidnapped wouldn't give Monica much time to bond with her classmates or with her professor, and since Byleth knows next-to-nothing about her new student's abilities at first, she can't incorporate Monica into the game plan without ruining the Black Eagles' team chemistry and jeopardizing their chances at winning the big mock battle.
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* TitleDrop: The page quote comes from Chapter 2, when Monica learns that her father declared her LegallyDead but complains that it can't be so because Flayn healed her. Flayn, innocent and naïve as she is, takes the "ghost" statement [[LiteralMinded literally]] and tells Monica not to scare her like that.
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* ThatCloudLooksLike: In Chapter 6, Monica and Linhardt engage in a brief game of cloud-watching while on weeding duty.

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* ThatCloudLooksLike: In Chapter 6, Monica and Linhardt engage in a brief game of cloud-watching while on weeding duty.duty.
* WakingUpElsewhere: The story starts with Monica waking up in Garreg Mach's infirmary in an OnlyMostlyDead state.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Again, Monica and Baron Ochs. [[spoiler:In the game, Monica was the victim of the machinations of "those who slither in the dark", and Baron Ochs, originally thought to have died in the Dagda-Brigid war, appears in a post-Cindered Shadows DLC paralogue as a boss that has to be killed in order for Balthus to earn his Hero's Relic.]]

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Again, Monica and Baron Ochs. [[spoiler:In the game, Monica was the victim of the machinations of "those who slither in the dark", and Baron Ochs, originally thought to have died in the Dagda-Brigid war, Ochs appears in a post-Cindered Shadows DLC paralogue as a boss that has to be killed in order for Balthus to earn his Hero's Relic.]]
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* LegallyDead: Seteth informs Monica that Baron Ochs called off the search for her when he feared that he would never see her again. They attempt to write letters to the baron to reassure him that Monica is in safe hands.

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* LegallyDead: Seteth informs Monica that Baron Ochs called off the search for her when he feared that he would never see her again. They attempt to write letters to the baron to reassure him that Monica is in safe hands. The issue is eventually resolved by Monica (and a few friends) visiting the baron in person.

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* AdaptationalHeroism: Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]] was depicted in the game as a sadistic killer and a SmugSnake who was quickly killed off in her only major battle. In this story, Monica is a [[DecompositeCharacter separate character]] from [[spoiler:Kronya]], and is reasonably polite and good-hearted.
** The same goes for [[spoiler:Monica's father, who appears as the boss of Balthus and Hapi's paralogue in the game, and is killed after transforming into a Demonic Beast. No such transformation occurs in ''Ghost'', as he's simply happy to see his daughter again.]]

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* AdaptationalHeroism: AdaptationalHeroism:
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Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]] was depicted in the game as a sadistic killer and a SmugSnake who was quickly killed off in her only major battle. In this story, Monica is a [[DecompositeCharacter separate character]] from [[spoiler:Kronya]], and is reasonably polite and good-hearted.
good-hearted.
** The same goes for [[spoiler:Monica's father, Baron Ochs, who appears as the boss of Balthus and Hapi's paralogue in the game, and is [[spoiler:is killed after transforming into a Demonic Beast. No such transformation occurs Beast in a manner mirroring Miklan's death]]. He's still initially distraught over his missing daughter in ''Ghost'', as he's simply happy but he doesn't [[spoiler:resort to see his daughter again.]]smuggling or shady black-market deals to save her]].



* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: When Byleth introduces herself to Monica, she states that everyone (except her father Jeralt) just calls her "Professor" out of habit, even though she isn't the only teacher in Garreg Mach

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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: When Byleth introduces herself to Monica, she states that everyone (except her father Jeralt) just calls her "Professor" out of habit, even though she isn't the only teacher in Garreg MachMach.

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* ShoutOut: Accidental on the author's part, but Monica decides against telling the merchant in Drachen Village "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's me, Monica]]", dismissing it as insufficient to prove her identity.

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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
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Accidental on the author's part, but Monica decides against telling the merchant in Drachen Village "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's me, Monica]]", dismissing it as insufficient to prove her identity.identity.
** A straighter example is the title of Chapter 2: "Maybe I'm a Ghost", which is taken from the song "Maybe I'm a Lion" from ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVIII''.
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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]]) is an ongoing (as of February 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.

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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]] and Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]]) net]], and [[https://www.deviantart.com/willyfoureyes/gallery/72501523/the-ghost-of-ochs DeviantArt]]) is an ongoing (as of February March 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.
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* TryToFitThatOnABusinessCard: Downplayed in that Monica only does this once to identify herself to a merchant in her temporary home village of Drachen (due to being presumed dead after her kidnapping): [[AC:Monica von Ochs, Daughter of Baron Nicolaus the First, Student at the Garreg Mach Officers Academy, and Liberator of Trade Routes]]. To everyone else, she simply addresses herself with her family name, and nothing more.

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* TryToFitThatOnABusinessCard: Downplayed PlayedForLaughs in that Monica only does wishes she ''had'' a business card as proof of her identity, but resorts to this once to identify when identifying herself to a merchant in her temporary home village of Drachen (due to being presumed dead after her kidnapping): Village: [[AC:Monica von Ochs, Daughter of Baron Nicolaus the First, Student at the Garreg Mach Officers Academy, and Liberator of Trade Routes]]. To everyone else, she simply addresses herself with her family name, and nothing more.
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* TryToFitTHATOnABusinessCard: Downplayed in that Monica only does this once to identify herself to a merchant in her temporary home village of Drachen (due to being presumed dead after her kidnapping): [[AC:Monica von Ochs, Daughter of Baron Nicolaus the First, Student at the Garreg Mach Officers Academy, and Liberator of Trade Routes]]. To everyone else, she simply addresses herself with her family name, and nothing more.

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* TryToFitTHATOnABusinessCard: TryToFitThatOnABusinessCard: Downplayed in that Monica only does this once to identify herself to a merchant in her temporary home village of Drachen (due to being presumed dead after her kidnapping): [[AC:Monica von Ochs, Daughter of Baron Nicolaus the First, Student at the Garreg Mach Officers Academy, and Liberator of Trade Routes]]. To everyone else, she simply addresses herself with her family name, and nothing more.

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* TryToFitTHATOnABusinessCard: Downplayed in that Monica only does this once to identify herself to a merchant in her temporary home village of Drachen (due to being presumed dead after her kidnapping): [[AC:Monica von Ochs, Daughter of Baron Nicolaus the First, Student at the Garreg Mach Officers Academy, and Liberator of Trade Routes]].
To everyone else, she simply addresses herself with her family name, and nothing more.

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* TryToFitTHATOnABusinessCard: Downplayed in that Monica only does this once to identify herself to a merchant in her temporary home village of Drachen (due to being presumed dead after her kidnapping): [[AC:Monica von Ochs, Daughter of Baron Nicolaus the First, Student at the Garreg Mach Officers Academy, and Liberator of Trade Routes]]. \n To everyone else, she simply addresses herself with her family name, and nothing more.

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* ShoutOut: Accidental on the author's part, but Monica decides against telling the merchant in Drachen Village "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's me, Monica]]", dismissing it as insufficient to prove her identity. She instead addresses herself as "[[TryToFitTHATOnABusinessCard Monica von Ochs, Daughter of Baron Nicolaus the First, student at the Garreg Mach Officers Academy, and liberator of trade routes]]".

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* ShoutOut: Accidental on the author's part, but Monica decides against telling the merchant in Drachen Village "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's me, Monica]]", dismissing it as insufficient to prove her identity. She instead addresses identity.
* TryToFitTHATOnABusinessCard: Downplayed in that Monica only does this once to identify
herself as "[[TryToFitTHATOnABusinessCard Monica to a merchant in her temporary home village of Drachen (due to being presumed dead after her kidnapping): [[AC:Monica von Ochs, Daughter of Baron Nicolaus the First, student Student at the Garreg Mach Officers Academy, and liberator Liberator of trade routes]]".Trade Routes]].
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* ShoutOut: Accidental on the author's part, but Monica decides against telling the merchant in Drachen Village "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's me, Monica]]", dismissing it as insufficient to prove her identity. She instead addresses herself as "[[TryToFitTHATOnABusinessCard Monica von Ochs, Daughter of Baron Nicolaus the First, student at the Garreg Mach Officers Academy, and liberator of trade routes]]".
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* TheRival: Monica and Baron Ochs have a personal rivalry with House Gerth. The baron dislikes Duke Gerth for his delayed response to aid House Ochs in the Dagda and Brigid war, and then constantly bugging him about not rebuilding fast enough. Monica and Candace (one of the duke's daughters) were rivals at the Officers Academy, with the former blaming the latter for an embarrassing loss in their only Battle of the Eagle and Lion.
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* BigDamnReunion: After spending almost a year in captivity and not getting a response to the letters she sent out after her return, Monica decides to pay Baron Ochs a personal visit when she hears of a group of bandits terrorizing the Fódlan's Fangs area. When she drops by his workshop after defeating the bandits, the baron is beside himself with joy when he learns that his daughter is still alive, and he treats her, Edelgard, Ingrid, and Leonie to dinner as a show of gratitude for helping reunite them.


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* TheRival: Monica and Baron Ochs have a personal rivalry with House Gerth. The baron dislikes Duke Gerth for his delayed response to aid House Ochs in the Dagda and Brigid war, and then constantly bugging him about not rebuilding fast enough. Monica and Candace (one of the duke's daughters) were rivals at the Officers Academy, with the former blaming the latter for an embarrassing loss in their only Battle of the Eagle and Lion.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: Somehow, Monica's party is able to get from Garreg Mach to Fódlan's Fangs in less than two days. This is {{hand wave}}d by the caravan driver telling her that he's behind schedule and needs to move quickly to get to their destination.

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: In the game, both Monica and her father are believed to be dead. [[spoiler:Monica was killed by "those who slither in the dark", and Baron Ochs was killed in the war against Brigid and Dagda.]] ''Ghost'' keeps both of them alive, with Monica as the protagonist and the baron believing her to be dead after her sudden disappearance.

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** The same goes for [[spoiler:Monica's father, who appears as the boss of Balthus and Hapi's paralogue in the game, and is killed after transforming into a Demonic Beast. No such transformation occurs in ''Ghost'', as he's simply happy to see his daughter again.]]
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Baron Ochs is only referred to by his title in-game. ''Ghost'' gives him the name "Nicolaus".
* SparedByTheAdaptation: In the game, both Again, Monica and her father are believed to be dead. [[spoiler:Monica Baron Ochs. [[spoiler:In the game, Monica was killed by the victim of the machinations of "those who slither in the dark", and Baron Ochs was Ochs, originally thought to have died in the Dagda-Brigid war, appears in a post-Cindered Shadows DLC paralogue as a boss that has to be killed in the war against Brigid and Dagda.]] ''Ghost'' keeps both of them alive, with Monica as the protagonist and the baron believing her order for Balthus to be dead after her sudden disappearance.
earn his Hero's Relic.]]



* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: When Byleth introduces herself to Monica, she states that everyone (except her father Jeralt) just calls her "Professor" out of habit, even though she isn't the only teacher in Garreg Mach.

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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: When Byleth introduces herself to Monica, she states that everyone (except her father Jeralt) just calls her "Professor" out of habit, even though she isn't the only teacher in Garreg Mach.Mach

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: In the game, both Monica and her father are believed to be dead. [[spoiler:Monica was killed by "those who slither in the dark", and Baron Ochs was killed in a war against Brigid and Dagda.]] ''Ghost'' keeps both of them alive, with Monica as the protagonist and the baron believing her to be dead after her sudden disappearance.

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: In the game, both Monica and her father are believed to be dead. [[spoiler:Monica was killed by "those who slither in the dark", and Baron Ochs was killed in a the war against Brigid and Dagda.]] ''Ghost'' keeps both of them alive, with Monica as the protagonist and the baron believing her to be dead after her sudden disappearance.


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* DoYouWantToHaggle: Constance bargains with Anna to reduce her markup on a rare magic tome from 20% to 10%.
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* HealingHands: Basic healing magic works like this, although Linhardt advises against direct contact with an injury victim's wounds.



* {{Pun}}: The Ochs family motto is "Be strong, be stubborn." That is, "strong/stubborn as an ox/Ochs".

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* {{Pun}}: The Ochs family motto is "Be strong, be stubborn." That is, "strong/stubborn as an ox/Ochs".ox/Ochs".
* ThatCloudLooksLike: In Chapter 6, Monica and Linhardt engage in a brief game of cloud-watching while on weeding duty.
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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]]) is an ongoing (as of February 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of House Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.

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''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]]) is an ongoing (as of February 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of the Imperial House of Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.
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->''"...if I'm [[LegallyDead not 'legally alive']], but I'm still [[OnlyMostlyDead 'technically alive']], does that make me some kind of...[[TitleDrop ghost]]?"''
-->-- '''Monica von Ochs''', to Flayn

''The Ghost of Ochs'' (available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22210498/chapters/53029414 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13476313/1/The-Ghost-of-Ochs FanFiction.net]]) is an ongoing (as of February 2020) ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Tropers/WillyFourEyes that starts sometime after Chapter 6: Rumors of a Reaper, when Flayn is rescued from the Death Knight and the Flame Emperor's army. During the rescue mission, a second hostage is recovered - a former Officers Academy student named Monica, daughter of the baron of House Ochs. Unlike the Monica who appears in the game [[spoiler:(who is presumably [[KillAndReplace killed and replaced]] by Kronya of "those who slither in the dark" and her identity and appearance used to infiltrate Garreg Mach Monastery)]], the Monica who appears in ''Ghost'' is the real one, and is revived by Flayn after they are both brought back to safety. The story is told from Monica's perspective as she attempts to reintegrate with the school to finish her education, figure out why she was kidnapped, and become strong enough so that she (and others) never have to deal with similar horrors again.

!! AdaptationDeviation tropes related to this story:
* AdaptationalHeroism: Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]] was depicted in the game as a sadistic killer and a SmugSnake who was quickly killed off in her only major battle. In this story, Monica is a [[DecompositeCharacter separate character]] from [[spoiler:Kronya]], and is reasonably polite and good-hearted.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: In the game, both Monica and her father are believed to be dead. [[spoiler:Monica was killed by "those who slither in the dark", and Baron Ochs was killed in a war against Brigid and Dagda.]] ''Ghost'' keeps both of them alive, with Monica as the protagonist and the baron believing her to be dead after her sudden disappearance.

!! Other tropes:
* ByTheHair: Monica asks Flayn to re-braid her hair [[DefiedTrope specifically to avoid having this happen to her]].
* CombatMedic: When given a choice between the sword-focused Mercenary class or the healing-focused Priest class, Monica chooses to take the Priest exam, which doesn't make her as strong as she would have been if she became a Mercenary, but also wouldn't restrict her choice of weapons, allowing her to continue using her sword.
* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Flayn uses a combination of CPR and HealingHands to revive Monica. When a nurse attempts to do a follow-up exam, Monica doesn't show any ill side effects from Flayn's healing other than a severe coughing fit after she wakes up.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: When Byleth introduces herself to Monica, she states that everyone (except her father Jeralt) just calls her "Professor" out of habit, even though she isn't the only teacher in Garreg Mach.
* HeroesPreferSwords: Monica has some training in swords and lances, but she chooses to focus on her swordsmanship when asked about her preference because sword-fighting runs in her family.
* LegallyDead: Seteth informs Monica that Baron Ochs called off the search for her when he feared that he would never see her again. They attempt to write letters to the baron to reassure him that Monica is in safe hands.
* {{Pun}}: The Ochs family motto is "Be strong, be stubborn." That is, "strong/stubborn as an ox/Ochs".

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