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* AdultsAreUseless: Davenports tried to help Andrea but because they are RichInDollarsPoorInSense they tried only their standard method: sue the thieves. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Thieves were completely unimpressed and decided that send Davenports a message:]] [[{{Fingore}} Andrea's ring finger]]. The only useful adult is Scratch, a ghost.
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* AdultsAreUseless: The Davenports tried to help Andrea but because they are RichInDollarsPoorInSense they tried only their standard method: sue the thieves. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Thieves The thieves were completely unimpressed and decided that send Davenports a message:]] [[{{Fingore}} Andrea's ring finger]]. The only useful adult is Scratch, a ghost.ghost.
* AgeAppropriateAngst: When confronted with the possibility that the kidnappers will kill him and he'll never see his family again, Darryl starts crying. Similarly Andrea is brought to tears when despite her best efforts, escape is cut off and she has to let the kidnappers mutilate her without protests so they won't hurt Darryl.
* AgeAppropriateAngst: When confronted with the possibility that the kidnappers will kill him and he'll never see his family again, Darryl starts crying. Similarly Andrea is brought to tears when despite her best efforts, escape is cut off and she has to let the kidnappers mutilate her without protests so they won't hurt Darryl.
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* BlatantLies: Andrea tried to convince Darryl that Davenport's has planned Andrea's fashion show for weeks and if he were one of her Fandreas, he would know that. Darryl tells her that he's one of them and it appeared only this morning. Than Andrea said it's because it's fresh sale. Darryl groaned in frustration, not buying a single word.
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* BlatantLies: Andrea tried to convince Darryl that Davenport's has planned Andrea's fashion show for weeks and if he were one of her Fandreas, he would know that. Darryl tells her that he's one of them and it appeared only this morning. Than Then Andrea said it's because it's fresh sale. Darryl groaned in frustration, not buying a single word.
*BoundAndGagged:BoundAndGagged: Andrea and Darryl spend most of the story this way, with wrists and ankles bound with duct tape and socks and duct tape used to gag them.
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* CharacterDevelopment:CharacterDevelopment: Andrea realizes that she's been awful to Molly for absolutely no reason and decides to start treating her with the same kindness Molly always showed her.
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* ChekhovsGun: Andrea's phone. She manages to hide it from kidnappers and it's later used to call help (Molly and Scratch).
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* ChekhovsGun: Andrea's phone. She manages to hide it from the kidnappers and it's later used to call help (Molly and Scratch).
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Darryl, Molly and Scratch weren't in the original plan and only because of that kidnappers failed.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Darryl tried to scare Andrea that he's hacking in Fandreas and make her look bad but Andrea tells that she'd just call her dad and he'd hire the best cybersecurity team money can buy before he get his phone back from Molly. Darryl even [[LampshadeHanging quoted this trope word for word in his thoughts]].
* DirtyCoward/ MilesGloriosus: The kidnappers were completely fearless against two kids they previously BoundAndGagged but [[BigDamnHeroes the second Scratch came and shown himself]] they acted even more pathetic than Andrea in her first meeting with Scratch: [[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl they screamed even higher than her]] and lose consciousness at the spot.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Darryl tried to scare Andrea that he's hacking in Fandreas and make her look bad but Andrea tells that she'd just call her dad and he'd hire the best cybersecurity team money can buy before he get his phone back from Molly. Darryl even [[LampshadeHanging quoted this trope word for word in his thoughts]].
* DirtyCoward/ MilesGloriosus: The kidnappers were completely fearless against two kids they previously BoundAndGagged but [[BigDamnHeroes the second Scratch came and shown himself]] they acted even more pathetic than Andrea in her first meeting with Scratch: [[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl they screamed even higher than her]] and lose consciousness at the spot.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Darryl, Molly and Scratch weren't in the original plan and only because of that the kidnappers failed.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Darryl tried to scare Andrea that he's hackingin into Fandreas and make her look bad but Andrea tells that she'd just call her dad and he'd hire the best cybersecurity team money can buy before he get his phone back from Molly. Darryl even [[LampshadeHanging quoted this trope word for word in his thoughts]].
* DirtyCoward/ MilesGloriosus: The kidnappers were completely fearless against two kids they previously BoundAndGagged but [[BigDamnHeroes the second Scratch came andshown showed himself]] they acted even more pathetic than Andrea in her first meeting with Scratch: [[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl they screamed even higher than her]] and lose consciousness at the spot.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Darryl tried to scare Andrea that he's hacking
* DirtyCoward/ MilesGloriosus: The kidnappers were completely fearless against two kids they previously BoundAndGagged but [[BigDamnHeroes the second Scratch came and
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Kidnappers are very cheerful and polite. They're polite even when they decided to [[{{Fingore}} cut Andrea's finger]] and kill Darryl.
* {{Fingore}}: Kidnappers decided to send Andrea's severed finger to her parents when Davenports told kidnappers that [[RichInDollarsPoorInSense they sue them]]. Fortunately, [[BigDamnHeroes Scratch and Molly arrived just in time to save Andrea and Darryl]].
* {{Fingore}}: Kidnappers decided to send Andrea's severed finger to her parents when Davenports told kidnappers that [[RichInDollarsPoorInSense they sue them]]. Fortunately, [[BigDamnHeroes Scratch and Molly arrived just in time to save Andrea and Darryl]].
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Kidnappers The kidnappers are very cheerful and polite. They're polite even when they decided to [[{{Fingore}} cut Andrea's finger]] and kill Darryl.
* {{Fingore}}:Kidnappers The kidnappers decided to send Andrea's severed finger to her parents when the Davenports told the kidnappers that [[RichInDollarsPoorInSense they they'd sue them]]. Fortunately, [[BigDamnHeroes Scratch and Molly arrived just in time to save Andrea and Darryl]].
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** Darryl realized that his pranks and ComedicSociopathy is bad and it was only funny to '''him''' and felt bad for it and wanted to apologise to Molly got that. He also gets a better person at the end.
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** Darryl realized that his pranks and ComedicSociopathy is bad and it was only funny to '''him''' and felt bad for it and wanted to apologise to Molly got for that. He also gets a better person at the end.
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** Scratch again show that he's a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and it's revealed that he knows some medicine terms.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Kidnappers criticizes Andrea for thinking that she's better than everyone and for her ItsAllAboutMe mindset. They even worse in that regard and have no room to talk.
* HiddenHeartOfGold:
* {{Hypocrite}}: Kidnappers criticizes Andrea for thinking that she's better than everyone and for her ItsAllAboutMe mindset. They even worse in that regard and have no room to talk.
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** Scratch again show shows that he's a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and it's revealed that he knows some medicine terms.
*HiddenHeartOfGold:
HiddenHeartOfGold: Andrea proves that she has one when she confronts Darryl when he starts crying at the thought of never seeing his family again, agrees to cooperate with the kidnappers' demands if they'll let Darryl go with her when the ransom gets paid and publicly thanks both McGee siblings for their parts in her rescue, even sponsoring Molly's redone craft fair.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Kidnappers criticizes Andrea for thinking that she's better than everyone and for her ItsAllAboutMe mindset.They They're even worse in that regard and have no room to talk.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Kidnappers criticizes Andrea for thinking that she's better than everyone and for her ItsAllAboutMe mindset.
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* AdultFear: Your children is kidnapped for a ransom. Molly was horrified when she found out that they're kidnapped.
* AdultsAreUseless: Davenports tried to help Andrea but because they are RichInDollarsPoorInSense they tried only their standard method: sue the thieves. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Thieves were completely unimpressed and decided that send Davenports a message: [[{{Fingore}} Andrea's]]. The only useful adult is Scratch, a ghost.
* AdultsAreUseless: Davenports tried to help Andrea but because they are RichInDollarsPoorInSense they tried only their standard method: sue the thieves. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Thieves were completely unimpressed and decided that send Davenports a message: [[{{Fingore}} Andrea's]]. The only useful adult is Scratch, a ghost.
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* AdultFear: Your children child is kidnapped for a ransom.ransom, with a random bystander who doesn't even have the assurance that someone can pay for their safe return. Molly was horrified when she found out that they're kidnapped.
* AdultsAreUseless: Davenports tried to help Andrea but because they are RichInDollarsPoorInSense they tried only their standard method: sue the thieves. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Thieves were completely unimpressed and decided that send Davenports amessage: message:]] [[{{Fingore}} Andrea's]].Andrea's ring finger]]. The only useful adult is Scratch, a ghost.
* AdultsAreUseless: Davenports tried to help Andrea but because they are RichInDollarsPoorInSense they tried only their standard method: sue the thieves. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Thieves were completely unimpressed and decided that send Davenports a
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** Molly saved her brother (and Andrea) when she found out that hey're kidnapped.
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** Molly saved her brother (and Andrea) when she found out that hey're kidnapped.they're kidnapped. Scratch had similar motivations for helping (along with not wanting Molly to get hurt during the rescue).
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* BlatantLies: Andrea tried to convince Darryl that Davenport's has planned Andrea's fashion show for weeks and if he were one of her Fandreas, he would know that. Darryl tells her that he's one of them and it appeared only this morning. Than Andrea said it's because it's fresh sale. Darryl groaned in frustration, don't buying a single word.
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* BlatantLies: Andrea tried to convince Darryl that Davenport's has planned Andrea's fashion show for weeks and if he were one of her Fandreas, he would know that. Darryl tells her that he's one of them and it appeared only this morning. Than Andrea said it's because it's fresh sale. Darryl groaned in frustration, don't not buying a single word.
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* ChekhovsGun: Andrea's phone. She manages to hide it from kidnappers and its later used to call help (Molly and Scratch).
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* ChekhovsGun: Andrea's phone. She manages to hide it from kidnappers and its it's later used to call help (Molly and Scratch).
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Darryl tried to scare Andrea that he'd hacking in Fandreas and make her look bad but Andrea tells that she'd just call her dad and he hire the best cybersecurity team money can buy before he get his phone back from Molly. Darryl even [[LampshadeHanging quoted this trope word for word in his thoughts]].
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Darryl tried to scare Andrea that he'd he's hacking in Fandreas and make her look bad but Andrea tells that she'd just call her dad and he he'd hire the best cybersecurity team money can buy before he get his phone back from Molly. Darryl even [[LampshadeHanging quoted this trope word for word in his thoughts]].
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Darryl and Andrea becomes friends after they were kidnapped.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Darryl and Andrea becomes friends after they were kidnapped. Molly also gets this trope because Andrea, wanting to pay both her and Darryl back for their help, personally sponsors a redo of her failed craft fair after publicly thanking her and Darryl for her rescue.
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* HateSink/ CompleteMonster:
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* HateSink/ CompleteMonster: The kidnappers, who have absolutely no problem kidnapping Andrea for ransom, blatantly telling Darryl the only reason they haven't killed him yet is because they haven't decided what they'd do with his corpse and repeatedly manhandling both kids.
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** Scratch again show that he's a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and it's revealed that he knows some medicine termins.
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** Scratch again show that he's a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and it's revealed that he knows some medicine termins.terms.
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* KnightOfCerebus:
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* KnightOfCerebus:KnightOfCerebus: The kidnappers fully intend to get money from the Davenports no matter what and only don't murder Darryl after he shows himself to be more trouble than he's worth to keep around because Andrea agrees to cooperate with whatever they tell her...and then go on with their plans to [[FingerInTheMail send her cut off finger to her father]] anyway.
* LovableAlphaBitch: Andrea transforms into one [[CharacterDevelopment after the kidnapping episode]].
* [[LowerDeckEpisode Lower-Deck Fic]]: The main focus of this story is Andrea and Darryl. Molly and Scratch were DemotedToExtra and other characters didn't appear at all.
* LovableAlphaBitch: Andrea transforms into one [[CharacterDevelopment after the kidnapping episode]].
* [[LowerDeckEpisode Lower-Deck Fic]]: The main focus of this story is Andrea and Darryl. Molly and Scratch were DemotedToExtra and other characters didn't appear at all.
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* {{Mundanger}}:
* NeverMyFault: Andrea blamed others ([[JerkassToOne especially Molly]]) for all of the times she was humillated (she even thinks Molly has something to do with her and Darryl's kidnapping and that it's all a part of her plan). She soon realises that kidnapping is real and, [[CharacterDevelopment as the story goes]], that all her misadventures is [[ItsAllMyFault all her and only her fault]].
* NeverMyFault: Andrea blamed others ([[JerkassToOne especially Molly]]) for all of the times she was humillated (she even thinks Molly has something to do with her and Darryl's kidnapping and that it's all a part of her plan). She soon realises that kidnapping is real and, [[CharacterDevelopment as the story goes]], that all her misadventures is [[ItsAllMyFault all her and only her fault]].
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* {{Mundanger}}:
{{Mundanger}}: A rich girl getting kidnapped for ransom and an accidental bystander of said kidnapping being manhandled and nearly killed or mutilated by the kidnappers is a ''very'' realistic scenario.
* NeverMyFault: Andrea blamed others ([[JerkassToOne especially Molly]]) for all of the times she washumillated hamulated (she even thinks Molly has something to do with her and Darryl's kidnapping and that it's all a part of her plan). She soon realises that the kidnapping is real and, [[CharacterDevelopment as the story goes]], that all her misadventures is [[ItsAllMyFault all her and only her fault]].
* NeverMyFault: Andrea blamed others ([[JerkassToOne especially Molly]]) for all of the times she was
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero:
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero:NiceJobBreakingItHero: Andrea's parents treat the kidnappers' demands like a business rivalry and threaten to sue. The unimpressed kidnappers decide to show them the true nature of the situation via FingerInTheMail.
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* NoNameGiven: Muggers doesn't even being adressed and just muggers.
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* NoNameGiven: Muggers doesn't don't even being adressed get addressed by name and remain just muggers.
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* LovableAlphaBitch: Andrea transforms into one [[CharacterDevelopment after the kidnapping episode]].
* [[LowerDeckEpisode Lower-Deck Fic]]: The main focus of this story is Andrea and Darryl. Molly and Scratch were DemotedToExtra and other characters didn't appear at all.
* PragmaticVillainy: The only reason the kidnappers didn't kill Darryl immediately is because they [[DidntSeeThatComing didn't expect him in theirs plan]] and because of that they didn't think up a place to hide his body, also they thinks he can be useful and because [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking killing him is too messy]]. Also every time they [[FauxAffablyEvil tried to politely asked them to cooperate]] is to get money easier and faster.
* RealismInducedHorror:
* RichInDollarsPoorInSense:
* ShipTease:
* [[LowerDeckEpisode Lower-Deck Fic]]: The main focus of this story is Andrea and Darryl. Molly and Scratch were DemotedToExtra and other characters didn't appear at all.
* PragmaticVillainy: The only reason the kidnappers didn't kill Darryl immediately is because they [[DidntSeeThatComing didn't expect him in theirs plan]] and because of that they didn't think up a place to hide his body, also they thinks he can be useful and because [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking killing him is too messy]]. Also every time they [[FauxAffablyEvil tried to politely asked them to cooperate]] is to get money easier and faster.
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* RichInDollarsPoorInSense:
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* [[LowerDeckEpisode Lower-Deck Fic]]: The main focus of this story is Andrea and Darryl. Molly and Scratch were DemotedToExtra and other characters didn't appear at all.
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* WouldHitAGirl:
WouldHitAGirl: The kidnappers have no issue manhandling Andrea and fully intended to cut off her finger.
*WouldHurtAChild:WouldHurtAChild: The kidnappers have no issue with threatening and manhandling both Andrea and Darryl and make it abundantly clear that the only reason they didn't initially [[JustEatGilligan just shoot Darryl and be done with him]] is because they needed to figure out what they'd do with the body and once he proves more trouble than he's worth, only Andrea's pleading stays their guns.
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* HiddenDepths:
** Molly can make clothes and very good too!
** Andrea has a HiddenHeartOfGold and actually jealous to Darryl and Molly because they even more free than her.
** Scratch again show that he's a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and it's revealed that he knows some medicine termins.
** Molly can make clothes and very good too!
** Andrea has a HiddenHeartOfGold and actually jealous to Darryl and Molly because they even more free than her.
** Scratch again show that he's a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and it's revealed that he knows some medicine termins.
* HypocriticalHeartwarming: Scratch is the only one who can scares Andrea and give her PTSD.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Molly's reputation would be destroyed and Molly and Darryl wouldn't be friend with Andrea if not for kidnappers.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Molly's reputation would be destroyed and Molly and Darryl wouldn't be friend with Andrea if not for kidnappers. Plus, Scratch scared a few more people at their expense as bonus.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Scratch and Molly appeared JustInTime before Andrea [[{{Fingore}} lost her finger]] and Darryl suffocated to death.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Scratch and Molly appeared JustInTime before Andrea [[{{Fingore}} lost her finger]] and Darryl suffocated to death.finger]].
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* ChekhovsGun: Andrea's phone. She manages to hide it from kidnappers and its later used to call help (Molly and Scratch).
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Kidnappers blames Andre for thinking that she's better than everyone and for her ItsAllAboutMe mindset. They even worse in that regard and have no room to talk.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Kidnappers blames Andre criticizes Andrea for thinking that she's better than everyone and for her ItsAllAboutMe mindset. They even worse in that regard and have no room to talk.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The only reason the kidnappers didn't kill Darryl immediately is because they [[DidntSeeThatComing didn't expect him in theirs plan]] and because of that they didn't think up a place to hide his body, also they thinks he can be useful and because [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking killing him is too messy]].
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* PragmaticVillainy: The only reason the kidnappers didn't kill Darryl immediately is because they [[DidntSeeThatComing didn't expect him in theirs plan]] and because of that they didn't think up a place to hide his body, also they thinks he can be useful and because [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking killing him is too messy]]. Also every time they [[FauxAffablyEvil tried to politely asked them to cooperate]] is to get money easier and faster.
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* TheUnfettered: Muggers do everything to get money. For example, they decided to sent [[{{Fingore}} Andrea's severed finger]] as a message and wanted to suffocate Darryl.
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* TheUnfettered: Muggers Kidnappers do everything to get money. For example, they decided to sent [[{{Fingore}} Andrea's severed finger]] as a message and wanted to suffocate Darryl.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The only reason the kidnappers didn't kill Darryl immediately is because they [[DidntSeeThatComing didn't expect him in his plan]] those they didn't have the place to hide a body and because [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking killing him is too messy]].
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* PragmaticVillainy: The only reason the kidnappers didn't kill Darryl immediately is because they [[DidntSeeThatComing didn't expect him in his theirs plan]] those and because of that they didn't have the didn't think up a place to hide a body his body, also they thinks he can be useful and because [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking killing him is too messy]].
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** Darryl puts all fault on Andrea for their kidnapping. He soon realizes he's as guilty as she is.
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** Darryl realises that his pranks are mean and tries to become better.
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* HeelRealisation:
** Andrea realised that she is a bad person and becomes a better person.
** Darryl realized that his pranks and ComedicSociopathy is bad and it was only funny to '''him''' and felt bad for it and wanted to apologise to Molly got that. He also gets a better person at the end.
** Andrea realised that she is a bad person and becomes a better person.
** Darryl realized that his pranks and ComedicSociopathy is bad and it was only funny to '''him''' and felt bad for it and wanted to apologise to Molly got that. He also gets a better person at the end.
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* MoralMyopia: {{Subverted|Trope}} with Darryl who realized that his ComedicSociopathy was funny only for him after he was BoundAndGagged.
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* NoodleIncident: Darryl once taped Molly to a chair a couple years before the story, and it took her almost a hour to get out, though she hadn't been tied up nearly as tightly as he was BoundAndGagged at the moment.
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* {{Fingore}}:{{Fingore}}: Kidnappers decided to send Andrea's severed finger to her parents when Davenports told kidnappers that [[RichInDollarsPoorInSense they sue them]]. Fortunately, [[BigDamnHeroes Scratch and Molly arrived just in time to save Andrea and Darryl]].
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* DidntThinkThisThrough:DidntThinkThisThrough: Darryl tried to scare Andrea that he'd hacking in Fandreas and make her look bad but Andrea tells that she'd just call her dad and he hire the best cybersecurity team money can buy before he get his phone back from Molly. Darryl even [[LampshadeHanging quoted this trope word for word in his thoughts]].
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Darryl, Molly and Scratch weren't in the original plan and only because of that kidnappers failed.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The only reason the kidnappers didn't kill Darryl is because they didn't expect
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* PragmaticVillainy: The only reason the kidnappers didn't kill Darryl immediately is because they [[DidntSeeThatComing didn't expect him in his plan]] those they didn't expecthave the place to hide a body and because [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking killing him is too messy]].
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** Andrea wouldn't wish something like being kidnapped and BoundAndGagged on anyone, even before her CharacterDevelopment.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Kidnappers blames Andre for thinking that she's better than everyone and for her ItsAllAboutMe mindset. They even worse in that regard and have no room to talk.
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* FlippingTheBird: Darryl tried to do it to Andrea but [[SubvertedTrope failed]] because he was BoundAndGagged.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: As much as Darryl hated Andrea, he didn't want her to get hurt and vice versa.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Darryl and Andrea couldn't do anything against two adult men who are way stronger than they are.
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* NeverMyFault: Andrea blamed others ([[JerkassToOne especially Molly]]) for all of the times she was humillated (she even thinks Molly has something to do with her and Darryl's kidnapping and that it's all a part of her plan). She soon realises that kidnapping is real and, [[CharacterDevelopment as the story goes]], that all her misadventures is [[ItsAllMyFault all her and only her fault]].
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* {{Jerkass}}: All three kidnappers are massive ones who [[KickTheDog insult Andrea and Darryl]] just for [[ForTheEvulz the sake of it]].
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* {{Jerkass}}: All three kidnappers are massive ones who ones. They [[KickTheDog insult Andrea and Darryl]] just for [[ForTheEvulz the sake of it]].
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* {{Jerkass}}:
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* {{Jerkass}}:{{Jerkass}}: All three kidnappers are massive ones who [[KickTheDog insult Andrea and Darryl]] just for [[ForTheEvulz the sake of it]].
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* {{Irony}}: Andrea and Darryl were BoundAndGagged with Davenport's branded socks and tape. Kidnappers even mocks Andrea '''Davenport''', singing her commercial song “If their whining gets you all out of sorts, gag those brats with Davenport's!”
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* {{Irony}}: Andrea and Darryl were BoundAndGagged with Davenport's branded socks and tape. Kidnappers even mocks Andrea '''Davenport''', singing her commercial song “If their whining gets you all out of sorts, gag those brats with Davenport's!”
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* CanonForeigner: The three muggers were created personally for this story.
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* CanonForeigner: The three muggers kidnappers were created personally for this story.
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* DirtyCoward/ MilesGloriosus: The kidnappers were completely fearless against two kids they previously BoundAndGagged but [[BigDamnHeroes the second Scratch came and shown himself]] they acted even more pathetic than Andrea in her first meeting with Scratch: [[ScreamLikeALittleGirl they screamed even higher than her]] and lose consciousness at the spot.
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* DirtyCoward/ MilesGloriosus: The kidnappers were completely fearless against two kids they previously BoundAndGagged but [[BigDamnHeroes the second Scratch came and shown himself]] they acted even more pathetic than Andrea in her first meeting with Scratch: [[ScreamLikeALittleGirl [[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl they screamed even higher than her]] and lose consciousness at the spot.
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* DirtyCoward/ MilesGloriosus: The muggers were acting complete
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* DirtyCoward/ MilesGloriosus: The muggers kidnappers were acting completecompletely fearless against two kids they previously BoundAndGagged but [[BigDamnHeroes the second Scratch came and shown himself]] they acted even more pathetic than Andrea in her first meeting with Scratch: [[ScreamLikeALittleGirl they screamed even higher than her]] and lose consciousness at the spot.
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* EvilerThanThou: Muggers quickly shows Andrea that they're worse than her.
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* EvilerThanThou: Muggers Kidnappers quickly shows Andrea that they're worse than her.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Kidnappers, attempts at mutilation and killing, etc.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Darryl and Andrea becomes friends after they were kidnapped.
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* {{Irony}}: Andrea and Darryl were BoundAndGagged with Davenport's branded socks and tape.
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* {{Irony}}: Andrea and Darryl were BoundAndGagged with Davenport's branded socks and tape. Kidnappers even mocks Andrea '''Davenport''', singing her commercial song “If their whining gets you all out of sorts, gag those brats with Davenport's!”
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* {{Irony}}: Andrea and Darryl were BoundAndGagged with Davenport's branded socks and tape.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Scratch and Molly appeared AtTheNickOfTime before Andrea [[{{Fingore}} lost her finger]] and Darryl suffocated to death.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Scratch and Molly appeared AtTheNickOfTime JustInTime before Andrea [[{{Fingore}} lost her finger]] and Darryl suffocated to death.
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* CanonForeigner: The three muggers were created for this story.
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* CanonForeigner: The three muggers were created personally for this story.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Scratch and Molly appeared AtThenickOfTime before Andrea [[{{Fingore}} lost her finger]] and Darryl suffocated to death.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Scratch and Molly appeared AtThenickOfTime AtTheNickOfTime before Andrea [[{{Fingore}} lost her finger]] and Darryl suffocated to death.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Scratch and Molly appeared AtThenickOfTime before Andrea [[{{Fingore}} lost her finger]] and Darryl suffocated to death.
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* FauxAffablyEvil:
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* FauxAffablyEvil:FauxAffablyEvil: Kidnappers are very cheerful and polite. They're polite even when they decided to [[{{Fingore}} cut Andrea's finger]] and kill Darryl.
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* FirstFriend: Darryl and Molly becomes Andrea's first '''true''' friends. Even more: TrueCompanions.
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* TrueCompanions: Darryl, Molly and Andrea becomes this to each other at the end of story.
