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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Rebora… were you surprised?]]
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:A time-traveling, immortal Oda Nobunaga.]]
* BigGood: Haleena. [[DesignatedHero For a given value of "good"]].
* BigGood: Haleena. [[DesignatedHero For a given value of "good"]].
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* CreatorsCultureCarryover: The fic seems to constantly forget everyone is living in Japan. Apparently everyone in the fic listens to Western pop music more than they do Japanese music, photos of Western rooms are used to represent the interior of the very Japanese Citadel and English wordplays that don't make sense in Japanese show up; for instance Rebora's pet squirrel is named Lucky after it's said to ''haven been lucky to be alive'', which does ''not'' make sense translated into Japanese no matter which way you try to put it.
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* CreatorsCultureCarryover: The fic seems to constantly forget everyone is living in Japan. Apparently everyone in the fic listens to Western pop music more than they do Japanese music, photos of Western rooms are used to represent the interior of the very Japanese Citadel and English wordplays that don't make sense in Japanese show up; for instance Rebora's pet squirrel is named Lucky after it's said to ''haven ''have been lucky to be alive'', which does ''not'' make sense translated into Japanese no matter which way you try to put it.
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** [[spoiler: Also Rebora when she kills him for good. She gets better.]]
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* SailorEarth: Rebora.
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* SuperStrength: One of Rebora's [[SuperpowerLottery numerous]] superpowers.
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* WhiteMansBurden: See MightyWhitey above. Not only is Rebora with her obvious Western Europe imagery created to "bring victory" to the canon Japanese swords by ending the toudan/Revisionists conflict, the fic at one point effectively implies she is also meant to improve the swords' life ''period'', and the canon swords ''cannot truly be happy without her''.
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* WhiteMansBurden: See MightyWhitey above. Not only is Rebora with her obvious Western Europe imagery created to "bring victory" to the canon Japanese swords by ending the toudan/Revisionists conflict, the fic at one point effectively implies she is also meant to improve the swords' life ''period'', and the canon swords ''cannot truly be happy without her''.her''.
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* CreatorsCultureCarryover: The fic seems to constantly forget everyone is living in Japan. Apparently everyone in the fic listens to Western pop music more than they do Japanese music, photos of Western rooms are used to represent the interior of the very Japanese Citadel and English wordplays that don't make sense in Japanese show up; for instance Rebora's pet squirrel is named Lucky after it's said to ''haven been lucky to be alive'', which does ''not'' make sense translated into Japanese no matter which way you try to put it.
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* WeAllLiveInAmerica: The fic seems to constantly forget everyone is living in Japan. Apparently everyone in the fic listens to Western pop music more than they do Japanese music, photos of Western rooms are used to represent the interior of the very Japanese Citadel and English wordplays that don't make sense in Japanese show up; for instance Rebora's pet squirrel is named Lucky after it's said to ''haven been lucky to be alive'', which does ''not'' make sense translated into Japanese no matter which way you try to put it.
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* AluminumChristmasTrees: There really exists a Temple of Harmony in real life… in ''England''.
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… and by "bring decisive victory to the Citadel swords", we mean "turning them all into cardboard cutouts with no real role or personality aside from praising her and tending to her", and by "her fight alongside canon swords against evil", we mean "turning said fight and pretty much the entire [=TouRabu=] universe into squabbling over her above all else because of her ludicrous non-canonical powers". Poorly written with bad spelling, bad grammar, bad characterization, bad plot and CanonDefilement galore, the fic lands firmly into SoBadItsGood territory. Compare ''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' and ''Fanfic/TheArianaBlackSeries''.
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… and by "bring decisive victory to the Citadel swords", we mean "turning them all into cardboard cutouts with no real role or personality aside from praising her and tending to her", and by "her fight alongside canon swords against evil", we mean "turning said fight and pretty much the entire [=TouRabu=] universe into squabbling over her above all else because of her ludicrous non-canonical powers". Poorly written with bad spelling, bad grammar, bad characterization, bad plot and CanonDefilement and UnfortunateImplications galore, the fic lands firmly into SoBadItsGood territory. Compare ''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' and ''Fanfic/TheArianaBlackSeries''.
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… and by "bring decisive victory to the Citadel swords", we mean "turning them all into cardboard cutouts with no real role or personality aside from praising her and tending to her", and by "her fight alongside canon swords against evil", we mean "turning said fight and pretty much the entire [=TouRabu=] universe into squabbling over her above all else because of her ludicrous non-canonical powers". Poorly written with bad spelling, bad grammar, bad characterization, bad plot and CanonDefilement and UnfortunateImplications galore, the fic lands firmly into SoBadItsGood territory. Compare ''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' and ''Fanfic/TheArianaBlackSeries''.
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* AdaptationalWimp: All the canon swords – in the source material, they're the stars of the show and heroes in their own right, defeating enemies and saving the day. In this fic, their roles have been rendered redundant by Rebora's presence and her "power of choosing the fate of winning" and they pretty much serve no other purpose than being Rebora's friends.
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* AdaptationalWimp: All the canon swords – in the source material, they're the stars of the show and heroes in their own right, defeating enemies and saving the day. In this fic, their roles have been rendered redundant by Rebora's presence and her "power of choosing the fate of winning" and they pretty much serve no other purpose than being Rebora's friends. They still help Rebora out at some points, but usually are overshadowed by her.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Rebora won several jackpots. Not only can she retract her sword form, she is super strong, can cut portals in the air, wipe out a castle full of enemies without actually fighting them, delete people's memories and [[InstantExpert expertly play musical instruments without learning or practicing]].
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* SuperpowerLottery: Rebora won several jackpots. Not only can she retract her sword form, she is super strong, can cut portals in the air, wipe out a castle and, at her absolute peak, a city, full of enemies without actually fighting them, delete people's memories and [[InstantExpert expertly play musical instruments without learning or practicing]].
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* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler: Unlike Rebora, who gets an overly dramatic one, Nobunaga doesn't even get to say last words.]]
