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The Lost Woods has been split between a video game level of the same name and Enchanted Forest. Cutting non-examples, zero-context potholes and ZCEs.
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%%* TheLostWoods: Forsaken Woodland.
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''The Dragon's Mantle'' is a VideoGame/FreedomPlanet fanfiction written by author [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2104398/Slightly-Dazed-Bystander Slightly Dazed Bystander]].
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''The Dragon's Mantle'' is a VideoGame/FreedomPlanet ''VideoGame/FreedomPlanet'' fanfiction written by author [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2104398/Slightly-Dazed-Bystander Slightly Dazed Bystander]].
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* AllForNothing: In Chapter 10, [[spoiler: Carol and Torque reflect that their adventure over the past few chapters to get Red Petals for Milla, which nearly tore their team apart, turned out to be for nothing. They never acquired the petals and Milla ended up getting them from another source.]]
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* AllForNothing: AllForNothing:
** In Chapter 10, [[spoiler: Carol and Torque reflect that their adventure over the past few chapters to get Red Petals for Milla, which nearly tore their team apart, turned out to be for nothing. They never acquired the petals and Milla ended up getting them from another source.]]
** In Chapter 10, [[spoiler: Carol and Torque reflect that their adventure over the past few chapters to get Red Petals for Milla, which nearly tore their team apart, turned out to be for nothing. They never acquired the petals and Milla ended up getting them from another source.]]
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* TheLostWoods: Forsaken Woodland.
* RunawayHideaway: The Red Scarves, as it would appear.
* RunawayHideaway: The Red Scarves, as it would appear.
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* WasntThatFun: In Chapter 10, after Torque flips Carol onto her back, she exclaims, "That. Was. ''Awesome!'' Do it again!"
* WhenTreesAttack: The creatures that the heroes have to fight in Forsaken Woodland.
* WhenTreesAttack: The creatures that the heroes have to fight in Forsaken Woodland.
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* WasntThatFun: In Chapter 10, after Torque flips Carol onto her back, she exclaims, exclaims "That. Was. ''Awesome!'' Do it again!"
* WhenTreesAttack: The creatures that the heroes have to fight in ForsakenWoodland.Woodland.
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* WhenTreesAttack: The creatures that the heroes have to fight in Forsaken
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* SlowPacedBeginning: The story spends the first half of its chapters on a single arc which barely involves one of the central characters at all, and it doesn't get into the conflict promised by the summary until Chapter 12.
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* SlowPacedBeginning: SlippySlideyIceWorld: The story spends the first half of its chapters on a single arc which barely involves one of the central North.
* SnowMeansDeath: Several charactersat all, very nearly freeze to death, and it doesn't get into the conflict promised by the summary until there's lots of imagery of bodies and spacecrafts being half-covered in snow.
* TakeMyHand: Carol and Neera have one of these in Chapter12.15, albeit it's a spear instead of a hand.
* SnowMeansDeath: Several characters
* TakeMyHand: Carol and Neera have one of these in Chapter
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* SadisticChoice: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:Lilac reveals that after the fight against Brevon, she had to choose between saving Carol or the Kingdom Stone. She chose Carol, and the whole of Avalice is going to suffer for it.]]
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* SadisticChoice: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:Lilac reveals that after the fight against Brevon, she had to choose between saving Carol or the Kingdom Stone. She chose Carol, and the whole of Avalice is going to suffer for it.]] [[spoiler:Supposedly.]]
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* {{Flashback}}: Carol has several throughout the story, both to the events of the game and to times long before that.
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* HomeOfMonsters: Avalice, as it would appear, is home to Treeants, Chimeras, and all kinds of terrifying monstrosities.
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* RunawayHideaway: The Red Scarves, as it would appear.
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* AlternateTimeline: Specifically, a timeline where the Kingdom Stone is actually destroyed instead of transforming.
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* AlternateTimeline: Specifically, a timeline where the Kingdom Stone is actually destroyed instead of transforming.things go much, much worse after Brevon's defeat.
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** In Chapter 12, [[spoiler:Carol reflects on this again as she discovers that the Kingdom Stone hadn't actually been destroyed.]]
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Lilac and Carol, who have been best friends since childhood, live(d) in the woods together, and consider the other the most precious thing in their world.
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* SlowPacedBeginning: The story spends the first half of its chapters on a single arc which barely involves one of the central characters at all, and it doesn't get into the conflict promised by the summary until Chapter 12.
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* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler:Lilac reveals in Chapter 9 that after the fight against Brevon, she had to choose between saving Carol or the Kingdom Stone. She chose Carol, and the whole of Avalice is going to suffer for it.]]
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* SadisticChoice: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:Lilac reveals in Chapter 9 that after the fight against Brevon, she had to choose between saving Carol or the Kingdom Stone. She chose Carol, and the whole of Avalice is going to suffer for it.]]
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As of now, there are 27 chapters in total, and over 100,000 words. However, the author has stated that, due to real life issues, the story may never be completed.
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As of now, there are 27 chapters in total, total and over 100,000 words. However, the author has stated that, due to real life issues, the story may never be completed.
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* AlternateTimeline: The events of the source material remain the same, up until the epilogue, which the story cuts out and replaces with entirely new events.
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* AlternateTimeline: The events of Specifically, a timeline where the source material remain Kingdom Stone is actually destroyed instead of transforming.
* AllForNothing: In Chapter 10, [[spoiler: Carol and Torque reflect that their adventure over thesame, up until the epilogue, past few chapters to get Red Petals for Milla, which nearly tore their team apart, turned out to be for nothing. They never acquired the story cuts out petals and replaces with entirely new events.Milla ended up getting them from another source.]]
* AllForNothing: In Chapter 10, [[spoiler: Carol and Torque reflect that their adventure over the
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* WasntThatFun: In Chapter 10, after Torque flips Carol onto her back, she exclaims, "That. Was. ''Awesome!'' Do it again!"
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* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler:Lilac reveals in Chapter 9 that after the fight against Brevon, she had to choose between saving Carol or the Kingdom Stone. She chose Carol, and the whole of Avalice is going to suffer for it.]]
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: Almost every single chapter ends on one.
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* WhenTreesAttack: The creature that Torque and Gong fight in the forest in Chapter 4.
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* WhenTreesAttack: The creature creatures that Torque and Gong the heroes have to fight in the forest in Chapter 4.Forsaken Woodland.
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* TheLostForest: Forsaken Woodland.
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* TheLostForest: LoadingScreen: Many chapters start or end with a take on one of these, featuring character select options, stage loading data, Game Overs, and [[HintSystem Player Tips]]. Interestingly, they don't resemble much of anything in Freedom Planet proper.
* TheLostWoods: Forsaken Woodland.
* TheLostWoods: Forsaken Woodland.
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Immediately after the battle against Brevon, Team Lilac is trying to recover, but everybody's injuries and the sense of dread hanging over everybody doesn't make it easy. Their troubles only grow when Lilac disappears, leaving Carol to pick up where she left off.
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Immediately after the battle fight against Brevon, Team Lilac is trying to recover, but everybody's the injuries from the battle and the sense of dread hanging over everybody doesn't make it easy. Their troubles only grow when Lilac disappears, leaving Carol to pick up where she left off.
off. Now the biggest problem is that the world seems to be against Carol, and she doesn't know if she can truly carry this responsibility.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The story has almost entirely dropped the lighthearted fun and humor of the source material, choosing instead to place darker and more realistic focus on the grim aftermath of the game's events.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The story has almost entirely dropped the lighthearted fun and humor of the source material, choosing instead to place darker and more realistic grimmer focus on the grim aftermath of the game's events.events.
* TheLostForest: Forsaken Woodland.
* WhenTreesAttack: The creature that Torque and Gong fight in the forest in Chapter 4.
* TheLostForest: Forsaken Woodland.
* WhenTreesAttack: The creature that Torque and Gong fight in the forest in Chapter 4.
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''The Dragon's Mantle'' is a VideoGame/FreedomPlanet fanfiction written by author [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2104398/Slightly-Dazed-Bystander Slightly Dazed Bystander]].
Immediately after the battle against Brevon, Team Lilac is trying to recover, but everybody's injuries and the sense of dread hanging over everybody doesn't make it easy. Their troubles only grow when Lilac disappears, leaving Carol to pick up where she left off.
As of now, there are 27 chapters in total, and over 100,000 words. However, the author has stated that, due to real life issues, the story may never be completed.
It can be read on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11730879/1/The-Dragon-s-Mantle FanFiction]].
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* AbortedArc: If the story is truly never to be continued, then there are many plot threads that will be left hanging.
* AfterActionHealingDrama: The conflict of the first chapter deals with the team having to address Lilac's WoundThatWillNotHeal from her battle with Brevon.
* AlternateTimeline: The events of the source material remain the same, up until the epilogue, which the story cuts out and replaces with entirely new events.
* BloodierAndGorier: Lilac's injury in Chapter 1 is only the beginning.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The story has almost entirely dropped the lighthearted fun and humor of the source material, choosing instead to place darker and more realistic focus on the grim aftermath of the game's events.
Immediately after the battle against Brevon, Team Lilac is trying to recover, but everybody's injuries and the sense of dread hanging over everybody doesn't make it easy. Their troubles only grow when Lilac disappears, leaving Carol to pick up where she left off.
As of now, there are 27 chapters in total, and over 100,000 words. However, the author has stated that, due to real life issues, the story may never be completed.
It can be read on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11730879/1/The-Dragon-s-Mantle FanFiction]].
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!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AbortedArc: If the story is truly never to be continued, then there are many plot threads that will be left hanging.
* AfterActionHealingDrama: The conflict of the first chapter deals with the team having to address Lilac's WoundThatWillNotHeal from her battle with Brevon.
* AlternateTimeline: The events of the source material remain the same, up until the epilogue, which the story cuts out and replaces with entirely new events.
* BloodierAndGorier: Lilac's injury in Chapter 1 is only the beginning.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The story has almost entirely dropped the lighthearted fun and humor of the source material, choosing instead to place darker and more realistic focus on the grim aftermath of the game's events.
