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* AdaptationalJerkass: In this storyline, Dooku disowned Komari and expelled her from the Order after she called him out for his actions on Galidraan. This is in contrast to the Legends continuity, where he disowned her when he realized she had an inappropriate attraction to him (inappropriate both because he was her Master and old enough to be her grandfather) and was trying to find her a new Master, when she left the Order of her own volition.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: In this storyline, Dooku disowned Komari Voss and expelled her from the Order after she called him out for his actions on Galidraan. This is in contrast to the Legends continuity, where he disowned her when he realized she had an inappropriate attraction to him (inappropriate both because he was her Master and old enough to be her grandfather) and was trying to find her a new Master, Master when she left the Order of her own volition.
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* AdaptationJerkass: In this storyline, Dooku disowned Komari and expelled her from the Order after she called him out for his actions on Galidraan. This is in contrast to the Legends continuity, where he disowned her when he realized she had an inappropriate attraction to him (inappropriate both because he was her Master and old enough to be her grandfather) and was trying to find her a new Master, when she left the Order of her own volition.

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* AdaptationJerkass: AdaptationalJerkass: In this storyline, Dooku disowned Komari and expelled her from the Order after she called him out for his actions on Galidraan. This is in contrast to the Legends continuity, where he disowned her when he realized she had an inappropriate attraction to him (inappropriate both because he was her Master and old enough to be her grandfather) and was trying to find her a new Master, when she left the Order of her own volition.
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* AdaptationJerkass: In this storyline, Dooku disowned Komari and expelled her from the Order after she called him out for his actions on Galidraan. This is in contrast to the Legends continuity, where he disowned her when he realized she had an inappropriate attraction to him (inappropriate both because he was her Master and old enough to be her grandfather) and was trying to find her a new Master, when she left the Order of her own volition.
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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38236537 Flicker...]]'': Ongoing.

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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38236537 Flicker...]]'': Flicker]]'': Ongoing.
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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38236537 From a Flicker...]]'': Ongoing.

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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38236537 From a Flicker...]]'': Ongoing.
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The series is known for its [[DoorStopper long length]], [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters large ensemble cast]], character focus, and attention to detail. Additionally, various minor characters from the [[Franchise/StarWarsExpandedUniverse canon EU]] and ''[[Franchise/StarWarsLegends Legends]]'' are fleshed out more and given expanded roles.

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The series is known for its [[DoorStopper long length]], [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters large ensemble cast]], cast, character focus, and attention to detail. Additionally, various minor characters from the [[Franchise/StarWarsExpandedUniverse canon EU]] and ''[[Franchise/StarWarsLegends Legends]]'' are fleshed out more and given expanded roles.



* SwitchingPOV: The point-of-view switches between Ben and Obi-Wan, as well as occasionally one of the [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters many]] side characters like Quinlan, Sian, Shmi, etc.

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* SwitchingPOV: The point-of-view switches between Ben and Obi-Wan, as well as occasionally one of the [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters many]] many side characters like Quinlan, Sian, Shmi, etc.

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* TheDeadHaveNames: Every Mandalorian who has seen combat has a Litany, a list of the names of every comrade-in-arms of theirs who fell in battle, which they memorise in rememberance and recite in full during certain spiritual rituals. Jango asks Ben about his Litany at one point during ''Sa Sarad'', and he sadly admits that there are simply too many names to even ''count'' much less recite, but he does his best to remember them all the same.



* TheDeadHaveNames: Every Mandalorian who has seen combat has a Litany, a list of the names of every comrade-in-arms of theirs who fell in battle, which they memorise in rememberance and recite in full during certain spiritual rituals. Jango asks Ben about his Litany at one point during ''Sa Sarad'', and he sadly admits that there are simply too many names to even ''count'' much less recite, but he does his best to remember them all the same.

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* TheManBehindTheMan: In Ben's BadFuture, Palpatine was the BigBad who took over the galaxy and eradicated the Jedi Order. In the fic proper, he is TheManBehindTheMan for many of the series' conflicts. On a more personal level, Ben sees Palpatine as the cataclysm for all his past failures and regrets. [[spoiler:Even though this version is a DiscOneFinalBoss who never evolves beyond his role as Plagueis' DragonInChief, his death still leaves an everlasting impact on the story, symbolizing the conclusion of Ben's character arc and signaling that nothing about the future is truly set in stone anymore.]]



* OverarchingVillain: Just like his Canon and ''Legends'' counterparts, Palpatine serves as the overall antagonist of the series. In Ben's BadFuture, Palpatine was the BigBad who took over the galaxy and eradicated the Jedi Order. In the fic proper, he is TheManBehindTheMan for many of the series' conflicts. On a more personal level, Ben sees Palpatine as the cataclysm for all his past failures and regrets. [[spoiler:Even though this version is a DiscOneFinalBoss who never evolves beyond his role as Plagueis' DragonInChief, his death still leaves an everlasting impact on the story, symbolizing the conclusion of Ben's character arc and signaling that nothing about the future is truly set in stone anymore.]]
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* AdaptedOut: In both Canon and ''Legends'', Satine and Bo-Katan had a third unseen sibling who was the parent of Satine's nephew Korkie. Here, Satine and Bo-Katan are confirmed to be only siblings while [[spoiler:Korkie is Obi-Wan and Satine's child born out of a teen pregnancy.]]

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* AdaptedOut: In both Canon and ''Legends'', Satine and Bo-Katan had a third unseen sibling who was the parent of Satine's nephew Korkie. Here, Satine and Bo-Katan are confirmed to be only siblings while [[spoiler:Korkie is Obi-Wan and Satine's child born out of a teen pregnancy.pregnancy, and it's all but stated that in the original timeline, male Korkie was Ben's son.]]



* RelatedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: In Canon and ''Legends'', Korkie Kryze was Satine’s nephew. [[spoiler:Here, he’s her son born out of a TeenPregnancy caused by Obi-Wan.]]

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* RelatedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: In Canon and ''Legends'', Korkie Kryze was Satine’s nephew. nephew - though there was a lot of fan speculation otherwise. [[spoiler:Here, he’s in the original timeline, he was her son born out of a TeenPregnancy caused by Obi-Wan/Ben. In the changed timeline, Korkie is a girl... born out of a TeenPregnancy caused by Obi-Wan.]]



** In ''Stories Within a Story III'', the reader learns the name of [[spoiler:Obi-Wan and Satine's child]]: ''[[spoiler:Korkie.]]'' [[spoiler:Combined with Satine and Bo-Katan's other sibling being AdaptedOut, this carries the implication that the Korkie Kryze from canon wasn't Satine's nephew liked he claimed, but rather [[RelatedInTheAdaptation her and Obi-Wan's son.]]]]

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** In ''Stories Within a Story III'', the reader learns the name of [[spoiler:Obi-Wan and Satine's child]]: ''[[spoiler:Korkie.]]'' [[spoiler:Combined with Satine and Bo-Katan's other sibling being AdaptedOut, this carries the implication it is all but stated by Ben - who suspected it but did not think about it further - that the Korkie Kryze from canon wasn't Satine's nephew liked he claimed, but rather [[RelatedInTheAdaptation her and Obi-Wan's son.]]]]]] He reveals this, heartbroken, to Jango, who understandably suggests that they get ''phenomenally'' drunk.]]
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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38236537 From a Flicker...]]'': Ongoing.
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* AntiVillain: [[spoiler: Ben]] is technically a Sith Apprentice, and business-like enough in that capacity, providing chillingly accurate and clinical comment about the Sith grand plan. However, the really chilling part is how much he hasn't changed - he plainly hates it and is looking for a way out, whether via a conventional escape or a casket, to the point where he muses that Plagueis immediately moves [[spoiler: Komari]] on when it becomes clear that she's jealous. Plagueis has enough trouble preventing [[spoiler: Ben]] from killing himself without having to worry about assassination attempts too.


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* TheDragon: [[spoiler: Ben]] to Plagueis, eventually and extremely reluctantly, after ''many'' attempts at suicide (some entirely successful - not that this stops Plagueis).


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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumour: Plagueis' sense of humour runs towards the twisted - his servants at the facility where he's keeping Ben are almost exclusively Force-blind clones of Palpatine.


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* {{Necromancer}}: Part of what makes Plagueis so terrifying is his ability to not just kill people, but to forcibly bring them back, as [[spoiler: Ben]] finds out to his horror.

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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36823717 Ante]]'': Ongoing.

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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36823717 Ante]]'': Ongoing.Completed.
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38135164 In Memory]]'': Completed.
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* ClusterFBomb: Jango Fett is as proficient with these as he is with every other type of bomb (and weapon in general). Sometimes mixed with equivalent words in other languages.

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** [[spoiler:In ''Remembrance: Part II'', Ben admits that he intentionally drove Pong Krell to the Dark Side by exploiting Krell's fear of losing in their sparring matches. Ben's intent was to have Krell eventually lose his temper and expose his vulnerability to the Dark Side. This [[GoneHorriblyRight succeeded too well]], since Krell winds up going past the RageBreakingPoint and completely falls to the Dark Side in an effort to kill Ben. Part of the problem, it's noted, is that Ben was enjoying it a bit ''too'' much.]]
** After Ben is captured by the Death Watch, Jango has their underground base destroyed... only to then learn from a younger Pre Vizsla that the base he just blew up was where Ben was being imprisoned.

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** [[spoiler:In In ''Remembrance: Part II'', Ben admits that he [[spoiler:he intentionally drove Pong Krell to the Dark Side by exploiting Krell's fear of losing in their sparring matches. Ben's intent was to have Krell eventually lose his temper and expose his vulnerability to the Dark Side. This [[GoneHorriblyRight succeeded too well]], since Krell winds up going past the RageBreakingPoint and completely falls to the Dark Side in an effort to kill Ben. Part of the problem, it's noted, is that Ben was enjoying it a bit ''too'' much.]]
** After Ben is captured by the Death Watch, Jango has their underground base destroyed... only to then learn from a younger Pre Vizsla Vizla that the base he just blew up was where Ben was being imprisoned.imprisoned, and Ben is now trapped under deep rubble.


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* NoodleIncident: Satine apparently once gave Obi-Wan's padawans a hoverboard, and it didn't end well.
--> Granted, Satine couldn't have predicted what Anakin could ''do'' with half an afternoon and a few 'light modifications', but still.

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* LoopholeAbuse: This gets taken advantage of three times during Ben's open challenge for temporary custody of Obi-Wan.
** It was never stated that the fights had to be one-on-one. One bout has five knights unsuccessfully attempt to gang up on Ben, who finds it almost adorable -- as in, he takes one out almost immediately with his sabre, then beats the crap out of the rest with his bare hands.
** Since there was no rule saying that you had to fight with lightsabers, Ni Hiella defeats Ben by knocking him out with a sedative.
** Lastly, there was no written rule that the challenger needed to be a Jedi. Jango Fett becomes Obi-Wan's mentor after beating Ben in a street brawl.

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This gets taken advantage of three times during Ben's open challenge for temporary custody of Obi-Wan.
** *** It was never stated that the fights had to be one-on-one. One bout has five knights unsuccessfully attempt to gang up on Ben, who finds it almost adorable -- as in, he takes one out almost immediately with his sabre, then beats the crap out of the rest with his bare hands.
** *** Since there was no rule saying that you had to fight with lightsabers, Ni Hiella defeats Ben by knocking him out with a sedative.
** *** Lastly, there was no written rule that the challenger needed to be a Jedi. Jango Fett becomes Obi-Wan's mentor after beating Ben in a street brawl. brawl.
** Sian is surprised to see Quinlan at her door, but Obi-Wan assures her that he had permission to escort Quinlan back to his quarters.
---> '''Sian''': These aren’t his quarters.\\
'''Obi-Wan''': The route we intended to take was not specified.

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* HelpMistakenForAttack: [[spoiler:In ''Fever'', after Aayla gets infected with ''Temple's Bane'', Quinlan uses the Dark Side to purge the virus from her body. This creates a brief misunderstanding with the other Jedi, who hear Aayla's screaming and--sensing the Dark Side--assume Quinlan is attacking her.]]

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''Fever'', after [[spoiler:after Aayla gets infected with ''Temple's Bane'', Quinlan uses the Dark Side to purge the virus from her body. This creates a brief misunderstanding with the other Jedi, who hear Aayla's screaming and--sensing the Dark Side--assume Quinlan is attacking her.]]
** Obi-Wan uses emergency Nightsister healing on [[spoiler:Qui-Gon Jinn, but Jinn instinctively tries to resist having his body destroyed and remade, which contributes to it only partially working. He survives, but loses his ability to sense the Force.
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* ImaginationBasedSuperpower: Building "Force Structures" revolves around trusting and expecting the universe to be in the shape you want it to be. Obi-Wan generally teaches it by walking up a staircase that exists only in his own mind. Sian can casually stack items in front of her as if she's carrying a tray.
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* TrainingBoss: When signs of Darth Maul start turning up, Ben has a spar with Qui-Gon where he wields two lightsabers at once and uses a Vaapad style, the closest he can come to imitating Maul, so that Qui-Gon will be better prepared for such a fight.
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* ExactWords: Obi-Wan reads Sian's draft holonovel loosely based on his own life, and is mortified by it, as well as finding certain parts ridiculous, like Ben being his time-travelling great grandfather.
--> '''Ben''': Well, I promise I'm not your time-travelling great grandfather.
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** During her time as a slave, Shmi avoided Gradulla's cruelty by making herself invisible with the Force. This surprises a few Jedi Masters since the Force technique she used was considered difficult to learn and usually reserved for Jedi Shadows.

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** During her time as a slave, Shmi avoided Gradulla's some of Gardulla's cruelty by making herself invisible with the Force. This surprises a few Jedi Masters since the Force technique she used was considered difficult to learn and usually reserved for Jedi Shadows.
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* AccidentalMarriage: The planet Gatalenta is (in)famous for inadvertent weddings. Obi-Wan apparently got married ''twenty seven'' times as a result of a tea ceremony, taking three days to annul them all.
--> '''Master Adi''': I had the good foresight to forbid him from the bath-houses.
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* PowerOfHate: Shmi Skywalker is an unusually positive example of this. The abusive treatment she faced from her slavers made her hate them so much that she is determined to never be like them.

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* PowerOfHate: Shmi Skywalker is an unusually positive example of this. The abusive treatment she faced from her slavers made her hate them so much that she is determined to never be like them. Ben respects her achievement and strength, but doesn't think most Jedi should try to emulate it, as they're more likely to fall into aggression and revenge.
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* SapientEatSapient: The mission to intervene in the Kaleesh's genocide of the Yam'rii takes an abrupt turn when it's discovered that [[spoiler:the Yam'rii eat live Kaleesh eggs as a delicacy]]. And it's not the first time they've done something similar.

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** Jango ultimately defeats Tor Vizsla by facing him in a duel over leadership of Mandalore.

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** Jango Satine ultimately defeats persuades Tor Vizsla by facing him Vizla to face Jango Fett in a duel over leadership of Mandalore.


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* CombatByChampion: When Mandalore's civil war is at its height, it's abruptly resolved by Tor Vizla formally challenging Jango Fett for the title of ''Mand'alor'' -- the challenge in this case being single combat to the death. [[spoiler:Despite Vizla using Ben's lightsaber, Jango wins.]]
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* TheDeadHaveNames: Every Mandalorian who has seen combat has a Litany, a list of the names of every comrade-in-arms of theirs who fell in battle, which they memorise in rememberance and recite in full during certain spiritual rituals. Jango asks Ben about his Litany at one point during ''Sa Sarad'', and he sadly admits that there are simply too many names to even ''count'' much less recite, but he does his best to remember them all the same.
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* ICanLiveWithThat: Satine doesn't want to kill, but she recognises that Jango Fett is certain to kill Tor Vizla at the first opportunity, so she won't have to make a decision about Vizla, and she decides she can accept that.
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* MaleGaze: Obi-Wan was just studying how Sha'me Betoya was able to move so gracefully and silently without the Force, honest, but she makes him sweat regardless. (Though he suspects that she already knew it and was just amused.)
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* SoldierVsWarrior: This is the initial problem that Ben and Jango face while training their Mandalorian army in ''Sa Sarad'' -- the ''Mando'ade'' are peerless commandoes and work very well in small groups, but they're not very good at working together on an institutional level as a military. Ben takes steps to resolve this, including enforcing a limited mixing of units rather than just ordering them by clan (if nothing else, different clans specialise in different things), and recruiting the men and women who in his timeline trained the GAR.

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* SoldierVsWarrior: This is the initial problem that Ben and Jango face while training their Mandalorian army in ''Sa Sarad'' -- the ''Mando'ade'' are peerless commandoes and work very well in small groups, but they're not very good at working together on an institutional level as a military.military, whereas the Death Watch's brutal DrillSergeantNasty training has resulted in soldiers who work together. Ben takes steps to resolve this, including enforcing a limited mixing of units rather than just ordering them by clan (if nothing else, different clans specialise in different things), and recruiting the men and women who in his timeline trained the GAR.
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* ChildSoldiers: Defied by Ben, who point-blank refuses to train a fourteen-year-old, despite her being an adult in her culture. It brings him into conflict with Jango Fett, but they are able to compromise on a minimum age of sixteen.
--> '''Ben''': I am not training any more ''child soldiers''! I have done enough of that for a ''lifetime''.
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* ThatManIsDead: Ben calls himself "Naasade",[[note]]pronounced ''nah''-sah-day[[/note]] Mandalorian for "nobody", in reference to how his past is gone and he has effectively appeared out of nowhere in the new timeline. It's eventually confirmed that due to his influence, Obi-Wan will not grow up to be like him, so he really is cut off from his own history.

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