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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: After Obi-Wan unknowingly interferes with the Sith's plans by removing the Trade Federation's influence in Kalee and Corellia, Palpatine tries to assassinate him by sabotaging his lightsaber, causing it to explode in his hands. Obi-Wan only narrowly avoids death thanks to his lightsaber's beskar casing absorbing most of the blast.
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* GoMadFromTheRevelation: [[spoiler: Quinlan ends up Falling to the Dark Side after he touches Ben's old lightsaber and discovers everything about the future.]]
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* GoMadFromTheRevelation: [[spoiler: Quinlan ends up Falling to the Dark Side after he touches [[{{Psychometry}} touches]] Ben's old lightsaber and discovers everything about gets overwhelmed by Ben's memories from the future.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: In Legends, Komari Vosa falls to the Dark Side and becomes the leader of the Bando Gora following her banishment from the Temple. Thanks to Ben and Obi-Wan convincing Dooku to take her back as his Padawan, Komari doesn't Fall and ends up becoming an older sister figure for Sian.
* DeliriousMisidentification: [[spoiler: After getting stabbed by Pong Krell while trying to protect Quinlan, Ben hallucinates that he's fighting Grievous and is protecting Anakin. This causes Ben to use the Force to remove "Grievous's" limbs, nearly ripping off Krell's arms in the process.]]
** Because Ben lacks any record, many Jedi assume that he's a former Shadow. Since this is simpler than the truth, Ben [[SureLetsGoWithThat decides to go along with it.]]
* FakeDefector: [[spoiler: In ''Ripples'', the Shadows have Quinlan pretend to leave the Jedi Order in order to act as bait for the Sith.]]
* AFatherToHisMen: Ben was this to the clones in the 212th Battalion, even calling them ''vod'' (Mandalorian for brother). Pong Krell's attempt to get his men killed during the Umbara campaign causes Ben to develop a serious grudge against the Besalisk, which he carries over into the past.
* FakeDefector: [[spoiler: In ''Ripples'', the Shadows have Quinlan pretend to leave the Jedi Order in order to act as bait for the Sith.]]
* AFatherToHisMen: Ben was this to the clones in the 212th Battalion, even calling them ''vod'' (Mandalorian for brother). Pong Krell's attempt to get his men killed during the Umbara campaign causes Ben to develop a serious grudge against the Besalisk, which he carries over into the past.
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* {{Irony}}: In canon, Grievous was one of Obi-Wan's most dangerous and persistent enemies. Here, due to Obi-Wan's role in freeing Sheelal's people from the Yam'rii, the past Grievous ends up developing a deep respect for Obi-Wan to the point where he names several of his children after him.
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* {{Irony}}: In canon, Grievous was Due to Obi-Wan's role in ending the Kaleesh's war with the Yam'rii, Jai Sheelal develops a deep respect for him and even gives names his children after Obi-Wan. This is extremely ironic considering that Jai Sheelal is the past version of General Grievous, one of Obi-Wan's most dangerous and persistent enemies. Here, due to Obi-Wan's role in freeing Sheelal's people from and dangerous enemies during the Yam'rii, the past Grievous ends up developing a deep respect for Obi-Wan to the point where he names several of his children after him.Clone Wars.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Ben is this due to the losses he experienced in the Clone Wars. While he's fine for the most part, he is prone to having flashbacks, experiencing panic attacks, and suffers from nightmares where he relives the worst moments of the war.
* ShroudedInMyth: Due to Ben's status as TheSpook amongst the Jedi, rumors start going around that he is a former Shadow who slipped into the Dark Side.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Ben is this due to the losses he experienced has PTSD from his time in the Clone Wars. While he's fine for the most part, he is prone to having flashbacks, experiencing panic attacks, and suffers from nightmares where he relives the worst moments parts of the war.
* ShroudedInMyth: Due to Ben's status as TheSpook amongst the Jedi, there are various rumors which startgoing around that he is a former Shadow who slipped into the Dark Side.to surround him.
* ShroudedInMyth: Due to Ben's status as TheSpook amongst the Jedi, there are various rumors which start
* SoreLoser: [[spoiler: After being constantly defeated by Ben in sparring matches, Master Krell snaps and tries to kill him while his guard is down.]]
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Master Tahl survives her doomed mission from Legends after Ben advises Yoda to have Qui-Gon accompany her.
** Ronderu Iig Kummar, Grievous' lover from Legends, is spared from her grisly death and eventually becomes Khagan of the Kaleesh alongside Jai Sheelal.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Master Tahl survives her doomed mission from Legends after Ben advises Yoda to have Qui-Gon accompany her.
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. They are available but Ben never got around to seeing one during the Clone Wars since he was deemed "too critical to the war effort to keep off the front lines". [[spoiler: When the Council learns of Ben's [[ShellShockedVeteran TSR]], they immediately assign him a Soul Healer (the Jedi's equivalent of a therapist).]]
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. They are available exist but Ben never got around to seeing one during the Clone Wars since he was deemed "too critical to the war effort to keep off the front lines". [[spoiler: When the Council learns of Ben's [[ShellShockedVeteran TSR]], they immediately assign him a Soul Healer (the Jedi's equivalent of a therapist).]]
* UnwantedRescue: [[spoiler: Not wanting Bo-Katan to end up as a terrorist, Jango Fett, with Ben and Obi-Wan's help, "rescues" her from the Death Watch.]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: It's revealed that in the original timeline, Qui-Gon's initial rejection of Obi-Wan as a padawan led to Obi-Wan developing deep insecurities to the point where he basically became a YesMan to the Jedi Council. Ben blames this aspect of his personality for alienating Anakin and resolves to prevent his past self from developing this trait.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: It's revealed that in the original timeline, Qui-Gon's initial rejection of Obi-Wan as a padawan led to Obi-Wan developing deep insecurities which led him to pretend to be "the perfect Jedi" in order to gain the point where he basically became a YesMan to Council's approval, at the Jedi Council.expense of his personal relationships. Ben blames this aspect of his personality for alienating Anakin and resolves to prevent his past self from developing this trait.
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* AbuseMistake: Following the mission on Tavorski, Obi-Wan is understandably traumatized from his experience with the [[ChildEater baby-eating]] Yam'rii. This eventually leads to him breaking down crying in front of his master. Unfortunately, due to the TrainingFromHell that Ben typically puts him through, all the other Jedi believe that Obi-Wan's breakdown was due to Ben's harsh training.
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* AbuseMistake: Following the mission on Tavorski, Obi-Wan is understandably traumatized from his experience with the [[ChildEater baby-eating]] Yam'rii.Yam'rii and suffers from severe nightmares. This eventually leads to him breaking down crying in front of his master. Unfortunately, due to the TrainingFromHell that Ben typically puts him through, all the other Jedi believe that Obi-Wan's breakdown was due to Ben's harsh training.training and emotional abuse.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Jax Pavan refuses to talk, hates loud noises and being in crowds, and generally shies away from everyone outside of a few individuals.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Jax Pavan refuses to talk, hates loud noises and being in crowds, and is an ElectiveMute who is generally shies away socially isolated from everyone outside of most people while latching onto and getting extremely attached towards a few individuals.
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: After Obi-Wan unknowingly interferes with the Sith's plans by taking away some of removing the Trade Federation's influence in Kalee and resources, Corellia, Palpatine tries to assassinate him by using the Force to make sabotaging his lightsaber explode. lightsaber, causing it to explode in his hands. Obi-Wan only narrowly avoids death thanks to the his lightsaber's beskar casing around his lightsaber.absorbing most of the blast.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: When Queen Breha notes the clear resemblance between Ben Naasade and Obi-Wan Kenobi, she comes to the conclusion that Ben is Obi-Wan's father. Likewise, when Healer Essja Chias discovers that Ben and Obi-Wan share the same DNA, he assumes the two to be long-lost siblings.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: When Queen Breha notes the clear resemblance between Ben Naasade and Obi-Wan Kenobi, she comes to the conclusion that Ben is Obi-Wan's father. father after seeing the clear resemblance between the two. Likewise, when Healer Essja Chias discovers that Ben and Obi-Wan share the same DNA, he assumes the two to be they are long-lost siblings.
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* YouWouldntBelieveMeIfIToldYou: This is the reason why Ben keeps his knowledge of the Sith's return a secret from the other Jedi. Without proof to back up his claims, Ben knows that most of the Jedi would likely dismiss him as crazy.
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* YouWouldntBelieveMeIfIToldYou: This is the reason why Ben keeps his knowledge of the Sith's return a secret from any Jedi outside the High Council. After all, if the Council was hesitant to believe Ben even when presented with proof of time travel, then the other Jedi. Without proof to back up his claims, Ben knows that most of the Jedi would likely be almost certain to dismiss his claims and label him as crazy.
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* WeHaveBecomeComplacent: A thousand years of peace has left the Jedi Order at a mere fraction of its former glory. Knowing what's to come, Ben is working to undo this.
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* DreamWalker: Due to the bond between them, Obi-Wan frequently ends up sharing Ben's dreams. This becomes somewhat problematic when Ben has nightmares about the Clone Wars.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Ben is this due to the losses he experienced in the Clone Wars. While he's fine for the most part, he is prone to having flashbacks, experiencing panic attacks, and suffers from nightmares where he relives the worst moments of the war.
* ShroudedInMyth: Due to Ben's status as TheSpook amongst the Jedi, rumors start going around that he is a former Shadow who slipped into the Dark Side.
* ShroudedInMyth: Due to Ben's status as TheSpook amongst the Jedi, rumors start going around that he is a former Shadow who slipped into the Dark Side.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: [[spoiler: After Falling, Quinlan experiences violent impulses, the urge to lash out, and extreme mood swings. During his therapy session with Ni Hiella, Quinlan bemoans that he's not going to "get better" and will have to live with the Darkness for the rest of his life. It's all very reminiscent of a person struggling with a violent mental illness.]]
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: [[spoiler: After Falling, Quinlan experiences gets violent impulses, has the urge to lash out, out at others, and suffers from extreme mood swings. During his therapy session with Ni Hiella, Quinlan bemoans that he's not going to "get better" and will have to live with the Darkness darkness inside him for the rest of his life. It's This is all very reminiscent of a person struggling with a violent mental illness.]]
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* MasterSwordsman: Due to Ben's previous experience as a General in the Clone Wars, his skills in lightsaber combat outclasses most of the other Jedi who had grown up in peacetime.
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** [[spoiler: Master Fay figures out Ben's secret after sensing her future self's Force presence from Ben.]]
** [[spoiler: Sian Jeisel finds out the truth through sheer deductive reasoning.]]
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** [[spoiler: Master Fay figures finds out Ben's secret after sensing her future self's Force presence from Ben.]]
** [[spoiler: Sian Jeiselfinds figures out Ben is a future Obi-Wan by observing his interactions with Qui-Gon and the truth through sheer deductive reasoning.other Jedi.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: [[spoiler: Shmi becomes one towards Master Tholme, frequently arguing with him despite having feelings for him. This is later Justified, since Shmi was originally a slave, she was forced to be meek and not draw attention to herself in order to survive. The fact that she's willing to openly argue with Tholme means that she trusts him deeply and is willing to express her opinions with him.]]
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* TheConfidant: [[spoiler: Master Fay becomes this for Ben. She's one of the few who knows his secret and is the only one who Ben feels comfortable revealing all the trauma and pain he's suffered during the Clone Wars.
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* TheConfidant: [[spoiler: Master Fay becomes this for Ben. She's one of the few who knows his secret and is the only one who Ben feels comfortable revealing all the trauma and pain he's suffered during the Clone Wars.]]
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: [[spoiler: After Falling, Quinlan experiences violent impulses, the urge to lash out, and extreme mood swings. During his therapy session with Ni Hiella, Quinlan bemoans that he's not going to "get better" and will have to live with the Darkness for the rest of his life. It's all very reminiscent of a person struggling with a violent mental illness.]]
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* GoMadFromTheRevelation: [[spoiler: Quinlain ends up Falling to the Dark Side after he touches Ben's old lightsaber and discovers everything about the future.]]
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* GoMadFromTheRevelation: [[spoiler: Quinlain Quinlan ends up Falling to the Dark Side after he touches Ben's old lightsaber and discovers everything about the future.]]
* HelpMistakenForAttack: [[spoiler: In ''Fever'', after Aayla gets infected with the Temple's Bane, Quinlan uses the Dark Side to purge the virus from her body. This creates a brief misunderstanding with the other Jedi, who hear Aayla's screaming and, sensing the Dark Side, assume Quinlan is attacking Aayla.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: [[spoiler: Quinlain Vos still ends up falling to the Dark Side. Here it happens even earlier than in canon when he touches Ben's old lightsaber and experiences his memories.]]
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** Following the events of the ''Remembrance'' trilogy, [[spoiler: Quinlain Vos discovers Ben's true identity after using his {{Psychometry}} on Ben's old lightsaber. After the Council discovers that Ben suffers from TSR (basically PTSD) they assign a Soul Healer to him. The Healer, Ylar Kala, is told the truth about Ben in order to properly give him therapy.]]
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** Following the events of the ''Remembrance'' trilogy, [[spoiler: Quinlain Quinlan Vos discovers Ben's true identity after using his {{Psychometry}} on Ben's old lightsaber. After the Council discovers that Ben suffers from TSR (basically PTSD) they assign a Soul Healer to him. The Healer, Ylar Kala, is told the truth about Ben in order to properly give him therapy.]]
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* GuiltFreeExterminationWar: The reptilian Kaleesh, under the leadership of Qymaen Jai Sheelal, are engaged in one against the insectoid Yam'rii. Though it's later revealed to be justified, as the Yam'rii had previously enslaved the Kaleesh and [[ChildEater saw Kaleesh eggs as a delicacy.]]
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* GuiltFreeExterminationWar: The reptilian Kaleesh, under the leadership of Qymaen Jai Sheelal, are engaged in one against the insectoid Yam'rii. Though it's later revealed to be justified, as the Yam'rii had previously enslaved the Kaleesh and [[ChildEater saw Kaleesh eggs as a delicacy.ate their eggs.]]
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* TheSpook: Ben Naasade is this to most of the other Jedi. Since he's a time-traveler, there is no previous record of his existence and to most Jedi, he seems to have come out of nowhere.
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* TheConfidant: [[spoiler: Master Fay becomes this for Ben. She's one of the few who knows his secret and is the only one who Ben feels comfortable revealing all the trauma and pain he's suffered during the Clone Wars.
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* ForWantOfANail: As a result of Ben's interference with the past, numerous events diverge from canon. This is actually the reason why Ben doesn't simply tell the Council everything that's to come. He realizes that with the changes he's already made, the future is no longer set in stone.
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* HeroWithBadPublicity: Ben becomes this amongst the other Jedi due to a combination of his MysteriousPast, his adoption of Mandalorian heritage, and his extremely demanding training that he puts Obi-Wan through.
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* {{Irony}}: In canon, Grievous is one of Obi-Wan's worst and most dangerous enemies. Here, because Obi-Wan helped Grievous' past self free his people from the Yam'rii, Grievous develops a deep respect for Obi-Wan to the point where he names several of his offspring after him.
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* {{Irony}}: In canon, Grievous is was one of Obi-Wan's worst and most dangerous and persistent enemies. Here, because Obi-Wan helped Grievous' past self free his due to Obi-Wan's role in freeing Sheelal's people from the Yam'rii, the past Grievous develops ends up developing a deep respect for Obi-Wan to the point where he names several of his offspring children after him. him.
* SickEpisode: Played For Drama in ''Fever''. [[spoiler: Following their separation from the Senate, the entire Jedi Order gets crippled by a virus bioengineered by the Sith.]]
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. [[spoiler: When the Council learns of Ben's [[ShellShockedVeteran TSR]], they immediately assign him a Soul Healer (the Jedi's equivalent of a therapist).]]
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. They are available but Ben never got around to seeing one during the Clone Wars since he was deemed "too critical to the war effort to keep off the front lines". [[spoiler: When the Council learns of Ben's [[ShellShockedVeteran TSR]], they immediately assign him a Soul Healer (the Jedi's equivalent of a therapist).]]
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* GoMadFromTheRevelation: [[spoiler: Quinlain ends up Falling to the Dark Side after he touches Ben's old lightsaber and discovers everything about the future.]]
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* AncientConspiracy: This fic actually shows the full extent of the Sith's influence over the centuries. For example, the [[KryptoniteFactor Force-numbing material]] used to construct the Senate Dome is revealed to have been gradually put in place over a period of 700 years, with the combined efforts of numerous companies and groups.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: When Queen Breha notes the clear resemblance between Ben Naasade and Obi-Wan Kenobi, she assumes that Ben is Obi-Wan's father. Likewise, when Healer Essja Chias discovers that Ben and Obi-Wan share the same DNA, he assumes the two to be long-lost siblings.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: When Queen Breha notes the clear resemblance between Ben Naasade and Obi-Wan Kenobi, she assumes comes to the conclusion that Ben is Obi-Wan's father. Likewise, when Healer Essja Chias discovers that Ben and Obi-Wan share the same DNA, he assumes the two to be long-lost siblings.
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* TheWoobie: The series really hammers in what Ben Naasade has been through and what its been like for him. He's watched everyone he loves die. He was betrayed by clone troopers whom he had fought alongside for years. He blames himself for Anakin's fall to the Dark Side. Prior to the series, he was living a miserable life on Tatooine, where he was an outcast and unwanted by everyone outside of Beru.
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* TheSpook: Ben Naasade is this to most of the other Jedi. They have no idea where he came from or who trained him.
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* TheWoobie: The series really hammers in what Ben Naasade has been through and what its been like for him. He's watched everyone he loves die. He was betrayed by clone troopers whom he had fought alongside for years. He blames himself for Anakin's fall to the Dark Side. Prior to the series, he was living a miserable life on Tatooine, where he was an outcast and unwanted by everyone outside of Beru.
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* YouWouldntBelieveMeIfIToldYou: This is the reason why Ben keeps his knowledge of the Sith's return a secret from the other Jedi. Without proof to back up his claims, Ben knows that most of the Jedi would likely dismiss him as crazy.
* YouWouldntBelieveMeIfIToldYou: This is the reason why Ben keeps his knowledge of the Sith's return a secret from the other Jedi. Without proof to back up his claims, Ben knows that most of the Jedi would likely dismiss him as crazy.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: It's revealed that in the original timeline, Qui-Gon's initial rejection of Obi-Wan as a padawan led to Obi-Wan developing deep insecurities to the point where he basically became a YesMan to the Jedi Council. Ben blames this aspect of his personality for alienating Anakin and resolves to prevent his past self from developing this trait.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: It's revealed that in the original timeline, Qui-Gon's initial rejection of Obi-Wan as a padawan led to Obi-Wan developing deep insecurities to the point where he basically became a YesMan to the Jedi Council. Ben blames this aspect of his personality for alienating Anakin and resolves to prevent his past self from developing this trait.trait.
* TheWoobie: The series really hammers in what Ben Naasade has been through and what its been like for him. He's watched everyone he loves die. He was betrayed by clone troopers whom he had fought alongside for years. He blames himself for Anakin's fall to the Dark Side. Prior to the series, he was living a miserable life on Tatooine, where he was an outcast and unwanted by everyone outside of Beru.
* TheWoobie: The series really hammers in what Ben Naasade has been through and what its been like for him. He's watched everyone he loves die. He was betrayed by clone troopers whom he had fought alongside for years. He blames himself for Anakin's fall to the Dark Side. Prior to the series, he was living a miserable life on Tatooine, where he was an outcast and unwanted by everyone outside of Beru.
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* AbuseMistake: Following the mission on Kaleesh, Obi-Wan is understandably traumatized from his experience with the [[ChildEater baby-eating]] Yam'rii. This eventually leads to him breaking down crying in front of his master. Unfortunately, due to the TrainingFromHell that Ben typically puts him through, all the other Jedi believe that Obi-Wan's breakdown was due to Ben's harsh training.
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* AbuseMistake: Following the mission on Kaleesh, Tavorski, Obi-Wan is understandably traumatized from his experience with the [[ChildEater baby-eating]] Yam'rii. This eventually leads to him breaking down crying in front of his master. Unfortunately, due to the TrainingFromHell that Ben typically puts him through, all the other Jedi believe that Obi-Wan's breakdown was due to Ben's harsh training.
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* GuiltFreeExterminationWar: The reptilian Kaleesh, under the leadership of Qymaen Jai Sheelal are engaged in one against the insectoid Yam'rii. Though it's later revealed to be justified, as the Yam'rii had previously enslaved the Kaleesh and [[ChildEater saw Kaleesh eggs as a delicacy.]]
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* DisabilityImmunity: [[spoiler: When the Sith unleash a virus that targets the hosts' DNA upon the Jedi Temple, Ben's already damaged DNA and RNA protects him from being infected.]]
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Jax Pavan refuses to talk, hates loud noises and being in crowds, and generally shies away from everyone outside of a few individuals.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: While Shmi is a compassionate and kind-hearted individual, her upbringing as a slave means that anytime she's in a fight, her life-or-death survival instincts end up kicking in. During her first spar with a Jedi Knight, Shaak Ti had to put a stop to the fight because Shmi kept going for killing blows.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: While Shmi is a compassionate and kind-hearted individual, her upbringing as a slave means that anytime she's in a fight, her life-or-death survival instincts end up kicking in. During her first spar with a Jedi Knight, Shaak Ti had to put a stop to the fight because Shmi kept going for killing blows.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: When Breha sees Ben and Obi-Wan's resemblance, she assumes that Ben is Obi-Wan's father. Mace even notes how people could easily come to that conclusion.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: When Queen Breha sees notes the clear resemblance between Ben Naasade and Obi-Wan's resemblance, Obi-Wan Kenobi, she assumes that Ben is Obi-Wan's father. Mace even notes how people could easily come to Likewise, when Healer Essja Chias discovers that conclusion.Ben and Obi-Wan share the same DNA, he assumes the two to be long-lost siblings.
* MasterSwordsman: Due to Ben's previous experience as a General in the Clone Wars, his skills in lightsaber combat outclasses most of the other Jedi who had grown up in peacetime.
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* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: After learning that Ben suffers from PTSD and following an incident where Ben had an episode and [[DeliriousMisidentification mistook Pong Krell for General Grievous]], the Council immediately suspends him from duty, ban him from any fieldwork, and assign him to a therapist that he has to see regularly.]]
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* RealityEnsues: RealityEnsues:
** [[spoiler: After learning that Ben suffers from PTSD and following an incident where Ben had an episodeand in which he [[DeliriousMisidentification mistook Pong Krell for General Grievous]], the Council immediately suspends him from duty, ban bans him from holding any fieldwork, weapons, and assign assigns him to a therapist that he has to see regularly.]]
** [[spoiler: After learning that Ben suffers from PTSD and following an incident where Ben had an episode
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* TricksterMentor: Ben creates a resurgence in battle prowess among the Jedi by challenging various Masters and Knights to a spar and beating them while holding back just enough in order to give off the appearance that he was only slightly better. This leads to many Jedi training harder in hopes of defeating him.
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* HeroWithBadPublicity: Ben becomes this amongst the other Jedi due to a combination of his MysteriousPast, his adoption of Mandalorian heritage, and his extremely demanding training that he puts Obi-Wan through.
* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: After learning that Ben suffers from PTSD and following an incident where Ben had an episode and [[DeliriousMisidentification mistook Pong Krell for General Grievous]], the Council immediately suspends him from duty, ban him from any fieldwork, and assign him to a therapist that he has to see regularly.]]
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* TheSpook: Ben Naasade is this to most of the other Jedi. From their perspective, he came out of nowhere and was given the rank of Master by the Jedi Council despite having no record in the Jedi Archives.
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* TheSpook: Ben Naasade is this to most of the other Jedi. From their perspective, They have no idea where he came out of nowhere and was given from or who trained him.
* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. [[spoiler: When therank Council learns of Master by Ben's [[ShellShockedVeteran TSR]], they immediately assign him a Soul Healer (the Jedi's equivalent of a therapist).]]
* WellDoneSonGuy: It's revealed that in the original timeline, Qui-Gon's initial rejection of Obi-Wan as a padawan led to Obi-Wan developing deep insecurities to the point where he basically became a YesMan to the JediCouncil despite having no record in the Jedi Archives.Council. Ben blames this aspect of his personality for alienating Anakin and resolves to prevent his past self from developing this trait.
* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. [[spoiler: When the
* WellDoneSonGuy: It's revealed that in the original timeline, Qui-Gon's initial rejection of Obi-Wan as a padawan led to Obi-Wan developing deep insecurities to the point where he basically became a YesMan to the Jedi
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** Because Ben and Obi-Wan help Qymaen Jai Sheelal (General Grievous' past self) liberate his people, Sheelal never develops a hatred for the Jedi nor experiences the tragedy that would transform him into Grievous.
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* {{Irony}}: In canon, Grievous is one of Obi-Wan's worst and most dangerous enemies. Here, because Obi-Wan helped Grievous' past self free his people from the Yam'rii, Grievous develops a deep respect for Obi-Wan to the point where he names several of his offspring after him.
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* SecretKeeper: Initially, only the Jedi High Council knows the truth about Ben. However, over the course of the series, several individuals also discover that Ben is from the future.
** Following the events of the ''Remembrance'' trilogy, [[spoiler: Quinlain Vos discovers Ben's true identity after using his {{Psychometry}} on Ben's old lightsaber. After the Council discovers that Ben suffers from TSR (basically PTSD) they assign a Soul Healer to him. The Healer, Ylar Kala, is told the truth about Ben in order to properly give him therapy.]]
** [[spoiler: Master Fay figures out Ben's secret after sensing her future self's Force presence from Ben.]]
** [[spoiler: Sian Jeisel finds out the truth through sheer deductive reasoning.]]
** Following the events of the ''Remembrance'' trilogy, [[spoiler: Quinlain Vos discovers Ben's true identity after using his {{Psychometry}} on Ben's old lightsaber. After the Council discovers that Ben suffers from TSR (basically PTSD) they assign a Soul Healer to him. The Healer, Ylar Kala, is told the truth about Ben in order to properly give him therapy.]]
** [[spoiler: Master Fay figures out Ben's secret after sensing her future self's Force presence from Ben.]]
** [[spoiler: Sian Jeisel finds out the truth through sheer deductive reasoning.]]
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''The Desert Storm'' is a series of ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfics by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Blue_Sunshine/pseuds/Blue_Sunshine Blue_Sunshine]]. Starting four years after ''Film/RevengeOfTheSith'', the series follows Obi-Wan, now going by Ben, living in exile on Tatooine when he is caught by a fierce desert storm. Through unknown means, Ben suddenly finds himself thirty years into the past and decides to SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong.
The series can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1311746 Archive Of Our Own]].
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
* AbuseMistake: Following the mission on Kaleesh, Obi-Wan is understandably traumatized from his experience with the [[ChildEater baby-eating]] Yam'rii. This eventually leads to him breaking down crying in front of his master. Unfortunately, due to the TrainingFromHell that Ben typically puts him through, all the other Jedi believe that Obi-Wan's breakdown was due to Ben's harsh training.
* CassandraTruth: Even when presented with proof that Ben is an older Obi-Wan from the future, the Jedi Council is still unwilling to believe his claim that the Sith have returned.
* EntertaininglyWrong: When Breha sees Ben and Obi-Wan's resemblance, she assumes that Ben is Obi-Wan's father. Mace even notes how people could easily come to that conclusion.
* ForWantOfANail: As a result of Ben's interference with the past, numerous events diverge from canon. This is actually the reason why Ben doesn't simply tell the Council everything that's to come. He realizes that with the changes he's already made, the future is no longer set in stone.
** Ben freeing Shmi and Anakin from Gardulla the Hutt and taking them both to the Jedi Temple, eventually results in Shmi becoming Shaak Ti's padawan.
** Ben deciding to take his younger self as a padawan leads to Sian Jeisel becoming Qui-Gon's padawan instead.
* InSpiteOfANail: [[spoiler: Quinlain Vos still ends up falling to the Dark Side. Here it happens even earlier, after he touches Ben's old lightsaber and sees all of Ben's memories.]]
* MeaningfulRename: After traveling into the past, Ben gives himself the last name Naasade, which in the Mandalorian language means "no one".
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: This has become Ben's SeriesGoal.
* TheSpook: Ben Naasade is this to most of the other Jedi. From their perspective, he came out of nowhere and was given the rank of Master by the Jedi Council despite having no record in the Jedi Archives.
The series can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1311746 Archive Of Our Own]].
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
* AbuseMistake: Following the mission on Kaleesh, Obi-Wan is understandably traumatized from his experience with the [[ChildEater baby-eating]] Yam'rii. This eventually leads to him breaking down crying in front of his master. Unfortunately, due to the TrainingFromHell that Ben typically puts him through, all the other Jedi believe that Obi-Wan's breakdown was due to Ben's harsh training.
* CassandraTruth: Even when presented with proof that Ben is an older Obi-Wan from the future, the Jedi Council is still unwilling to believe his claim that the Sith have returned.
* EntertaininglyWrong: When Breha sees Ben and Obi-Wan's resemblance, she assumes that Ben is Obi-Wan's father. Mace even notes how people could easily come to that conclusion.
* ForWantOfANail: As a result of Ben's interference with the past, numerous events diverge from canon. This is actually the reason why Ben doesn't simply tell the Council everything that's to come. He realizes that with the changes he's already made, the future is no longer set in stone.
** Ben freeing Shmi and Anakin from Gardulla the Hutt and taking them both to the Jedi Temple, eventually results in Shmi becoming Shaak Ti's padawan.
** Ben deciding to take his younger self as a padawan leads to Sian Jeisel becoming Qui-Gon's padawan instead.
* InSpiteOfANail: [[spoiler: Quinlain Vos still ends up falling to the Dark Side. Here it happens even earlier, after he touches Ben's old lightsaber and sees all of Ben's memories.]]
* MeaningfulRename: After traveling into the past, Ben gives himself the last name Naasade, which in the Mandalorian language means "no one".
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: This has become Ben's SeriesGoal.
* TheSpook: Ben Naasade is this to most of the other Jedi. From their perspective, he came out of nowhere and was given the rank of Master by the Jedi Council despite having no record in the Jedi Archives.
