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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Head wounds then to bleed heavily even if they aren't very deep or severe.
** Nico tries to yell at the Kane siblings and Anubis for kind of kidnapping him... and proptly passes out since he didn't eat anything (except possibly IV fluids) in four days and is still recovering from having his soul damaged. When he wakes up in few hours, he's still out of it, being both irritable and easily distracted.
** If you spend all your time prophesizing increasingly unlikely deaths and cataclysms, people will start to think you are insane. Actually ''seeing'' those disasters will turn you insane in short time.
** For all his power, Nico is still a 12-year-old. One good hit and he goes down.
** After his run-in with Aziza, Nico develops PTSD and is trigerred when Thalia unknowingly reminds him of the event.
** Despite what Hollywood tells people, sieges consist mostly of waiting and stressing, with brief periods of fighting every few hours.
** Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.
** Head wounds then to bleed heavily even if they aren't very deep or severe.
** Nico tries to yell at the Kane siblings and Anubis for kind of kidnapping him... and proptly passes out since he didn't eat anything (except possibly IV fluids) in four days and is still recovering from having his soul damaged. When he wakes up in few hours, he's still out of it, being both irritable and easily distracted.
** If you spend all your time prophesizing increasingly unlikely deaths and cataclysms, people will start to think you are insane. Actually ''seeing'' those disasters will turn you insane in short time.
** For all his power, Nico is still a 12-year-old. One good hit and he goes down.
** After his run-in with Aziza, Nico develops PTSD and is trigerred when Thalia unknowingly reminds him of the event.
** Despite what Hollywood tells people, sieges consist mostly of waiting and stressing, with brief periods of fighting every few hours.
** Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.
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* PowerIncontinence: What happened to Cassandra of Troy - hosting a goddess turned her oracle powers UpToEleven, attuned them to death and disaster, and made the visions impossible to ignore or stop.
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* PowerIncontinence: What happened to Cassandra of Troy - hosting a goddess turned her oracle powers UpToEleven, up to eleven, attuned them to death and disaster, and made the visions impossible to ignore or stop.
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* HeroicRROD: Nico tries to yell at the Kane siblings and Anubis for kind of kidnapping him... and proptly passes out since he didn't eat anything (except possibly IV fluids) in four days and is still recovering from having his soul damaged. When he wakes up in few hours, he's still out of it, being both irritable and easily distracted.
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* HeroicRROD: Nico tries While Nico's powers allow him to yell at the Kane siblings and Anubis for kind of kidnapping him... and proptly passes out since he didn't eat anything (except possibly IV fluids) in four days and is still recovering from having his soul damaged. When he wakes up in few hours, he's still out of it, being both irritable and easily distracted. shadow travel, doing so over great distanced wipes him out. Trying to do so repeatedly ends with him needing to be carried by Percy.
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** Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.
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** Gut Head wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a then to bleed heavily even if they aren't very deep or severe.
** Nico tries to yell at the Kane siblings and Anubis for kind of kidnapping him... and proptly passes out since he didn't eat anything (except possibly IV fluids) in four days and is still recovering from having his soul damaged. When he wakes up in fewhours.hours, he's still out of it, being both irritable and easily distracted.
** Nico tries to yell at the Kane siblings and Anubis for kind of kidnapping him... and proptly passes out since he didn't eat anything (except possibly IV fluids) in four days and is still recovering from having his soul damaged. When he wakes up in few
** For all his power, Nico is still a 12-year-old. One good hit and he goes down.
** After his run-in with Aziza, Nico develops PTSD and is trigerred when Thalia unknowingly reminds him of the event.
** Despite what Hollywood tells people, sieges consist mostly of waiting and stressing, with brief periods of fighting every few hours.
** Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.
** After his run-in with Aziza, Nico develops PTSD and is trigerred when Thalia unknowingly reminds him of the event.
** Despite what Hollywood tells people, sieges consist mostly of waiting and stressing, with brief periods of fighting every few hours.
** Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.
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* TraumaButton: After his run-in with Aziza, Nico develops PTSD and is trigerred when Thalia unknowingly reminds him of the event.
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* TraumaButton: After his run-in with Aziza, Nico develops PTSD and Aziza is trigerred when Thalia unknowingly reminds him of this to Nico, to the event.point he freezes at a mere mention of her name.
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* AgonizingStomachWound: [[spoiler:Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.]]
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* AgonizingStomachWound: [[spoiler:Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.[[spoiler:Nico gets one while defending the Brooklyn House.]]
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* BlessedWithSuck: If you spend all your time prophesizing increasingly unlikely deaths and cataclysms, people will start to think you are insane. Actually ''seeing'' those disasters will turn you insane in short time.
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* CallingMeALogarithm: Inverted. Nico calls Thoth an "analogy". Thoth wonders if the boy even know what it means.
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* CallingMeALogarithm: CallingMeALogarithm:
** Inverted. Nico calls Thoth an "analogy". Thoth wonders if the boy even know what it means.
** Inverted. Nico calls Thoth an "analogy". Thoth wonders if the boy even know what it means.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Anubis and Bast snark at each other while battling demons in Duat.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: CasualDangerDialogue:
** Anubis and Bast snark at each other while battling demons in Duat.
** Anubis and Bast snark at each other while battling demons in Duat.
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* ContinuityNod: Demigods bring up the events of [[Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians Second Titan War]] at various points.
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* ContinuityNod: ContinuityNod:
** Demigods bring up the events of [[Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians Second Titan War]] at various points.
** Demigods bring up the events of [[Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians Second Titan War]] at various points.
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* CurbStompBattle: Nico and Sadie against a dozen of shabti [[spoiler:guarding their cell]].
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* CurbStompBattle: CurbStompBattle:
** Nico and Sadie against a dozen of shabti [[spoiler:guarding their cell]].
** Nico and Sadie against a dozen of shabti [[spoiler:guarding their cell]].
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: At one point Nico decides to wash his clothes in a bath and wear them as they dry. Sadie and Percy both point out that he could easily end up with pneumonia instead. Justified, since he's still recovering from his injuries and ''really'' out of it.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: DidntThinkThisThrough:
** At one point Nico decides to wash his clothes in a bath and wear them as they dry. Sadie and Percy both point out that he could easily end up with pneumonia instead. Justified, since he's still recovering from his injuries and ''really'' out of it.
** At one point Nico decides to wash his clothes in a bath and wear them as they dry. Sadie and Percy both point out that he could easily end up with pneumonia instead. Justified, since he's still recovering from his injuries and ''really'' out of it.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: When magicians meet Nico they think that he is a host to a death god.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: EntertaininglyWrong:
** When magicians meet Nico they think that he is a host to a death god.
** When magicians meet Nico they think that he is a host to a death god.
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* FantasticRacism: The House of Life ''hates'' demigods, calling them abominations, and the demigods happily repay the favor by considering the magicians as freaks.
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* FantasticRacism: FantasticRacism:
** The House of Life ''hates'' demigods, calling them abominations, and the demigods happily repay the favor by considering the magicians as freaks.
** The House of Life ''hates'' demigods, calling them abominations, and the demigods happily repay the favor by considering the magicians as freaks.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When the Kanes meet Nico, his powers let Sadie think he's hosting Anubis. She's not wrong, she was only a little bit too soon about it.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** When the Kanes meet Nico, his powers let Sadie think he's hosting Anubis. She's not wrong, she was only a little bit too soon about it.
** When the Kanes meet Nico, his powers let Sadie think he's hosting Anubis. She's not wrong, she was only a little bit too soon about it.
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* GodzillaThreshold: When he cannot contact Nico for a few days, Hades tries to outright connect to the boy's mind - something that is likely to cause migraines and nose bleeds in mortals.
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* GodzillaThreshold: GodzillaThreshold:
** When he cannot contact Nico for a few days, Hades tries to outright connect to the boy's mind - something that is likely to cause migraines and nose bleeds in mortals.
** When he cannot contact Nico for a few days, Hades tries to outright connect to the boy's mind - something that is likely to cause migraines and nose bleeds in mortals.
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* NoodleIncident: The last two times Greek and Egyptian societies interacted, it involved "some overzealous philosophers and a museum curator who thought he was the reincarnation of Cleopatra".
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* NoodleIncident: NoodleIncident:
** The last two times Greek and Egyptian societies interacted, it involved "some overzealous philosophers and a museum curator who thought he was the reincarnation of Cleopatra".
** The last two times Greek and Egyptian societies interacted, it involved "some overzealous philosophers and a museum curator who thought he was the reincarnation of Cleopatra".
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* OffScreenMomentOfAwesome: Most of the events of ''Throne of Fire'' and ''Serpent's Shadow'' happen in background.
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* OffScreenMomentOfAwesome: OffScreenMomentOfAwesome:
** Most of the events of ''Throne of Fire'' and ''Serpent's Shadow'' happen in background.
** Most of the events of ''Throne of Fire'' and ''Serpent's Shadow'' happen in background.
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* OhCrap: Nico has lowkey one when he feels one of the campers dying during Capture the flag. [[spoiler:And a bigger one when another murder takes place.]]
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** Nico has lowkey one when he feels one of the campers dying during Capture the flag. [[spoiler:And a bigger one when another murder takes place.]]
** Nico has lowkey one when he feels one of the campers dying during Capture the flag. [[spoiler:And a bigger one when another murder takes place.]]
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* PapaWolf: Hades's reaction when confronted to the possibility of the House of Life kidnapping Nico is threatening war on the magicians if they refuse to give his son back in three days. He also recruited his two brothers to ensure the war would be a ''slaughter''.
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* PapaWolf: PapaWolf:
** Hades's reaction when confronted to the possibility of the House of Life kidnapping Nico is threatening war on the magicians if they refuse to give his son back in three days. He also recruited his two brothers to ensure the war would be a ''slaughter''.
** Hades's reaction when confronted to the possibility of the House of Life kidnapping Nico is threatening war on the magicians if they refuse to give his son back in three days. He also recruited his two brothers to ensure the war would be a ''slaughter''.
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* PlayingWithFire: In addition to canon characters, we have Aziza.
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* PlayingWithFire: PlayingWithFire:
** In addition to canon characters, we have Aziza.
** In addition to canon characters, we have Aziza.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Averted in Chapter 2 of ''The Death God Alliance''. Anubis outright reveals to the Kanes Nico's identity, his status as demigod and how they were [[BeyondTheImpossible somehow]] fused together, specifically so there aren't any misunderstandings.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: PoorCommunicationKills:
** Averted in Chapter 2 of ''The Death God Alliance''. Anubis outright reveals to the Kanes Nico's identity, his status as demigod and how they were [[BeyondTheImpossible somehow]] fused together, specifically so there aren't any misunderstandings.
** Averted in Chapter 2 of ''The Death God Alliance''. Anubis outright reveals to the Kanes Nico's identity, his status as demigod and how they were [[BeyondTheImpossible somehow]] fused together, specifically so there aren't any misunderstandings.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Literal example with Hakim and Aziza being stuck in 360th Nome for their failure to capture Nico and the Kanes.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: ReassignedToAntarctica:
** Literal example with Hakim and Aziza being stuck in 360th Nome for their failure to capture Nico and the Kanes.
** Literal example with Hakim and Aziza being stuck in 360th Nome for their failure to capture Nico and the Kanes.
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* RunningGag: Shadow travelling and accidentally ending up in China.
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* RunningGag: RunningGag:
** Shadow travelling and accidentally ending up in China.
** Shadow travelling and accidentally ending up in China.
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* SecretKeeper: Percy, Sadie, Carter, Bast and Thoth are this for Nico and Anubis.
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* SecretKeeper: SecretKeeper:
** Percy, Sadie, Carter, Bast and Thoth are this for Nico and Anubis.
** Percy, Sadie, Carter, Bast and Thoth are this for Nico and Anubis.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler:Chiron quickly figured out that Sadie and Carter were Egyptians. He just didn't see any reason to bring it up.]]
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* SecretSecretKeeper: SecretSecretKeeper:
** [[spoiler:Chiron quickly figured out that Sadie and Carter were Egyptians. He just didn't see any reason to bring it up.]]
** [[spoiler:Chiron quickly figured out that Sadie and Carter were Egyptians. He just didn't see any reason to bring it up.]]
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* ShoutOut: "If [Hades, Zeus, and Poseidon] weren't careful, they'd soon be wearing tights and carrying rapiers and translating [[Literature/TheThreeMusketeers "All for one, and one for all"]] into Greek to use as their motto."
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** "If [Hades, Zeus, and Poseidon] weren't careful, they'd soon be wearing tights and carrying rapiers and translating [[Literature/TheThreeMusketeers "All for one, and one for all"]] into Greek to use as their motto."
** "If [Hades, Zeus, and Poseidon] weren't careful, they'd soon be wearing tights and carrying rapiers and translating [[Literature/TheThreeMusketeers "All for one, and one for all"]] into Greek to use as their motto."
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* SitcomArchnemesis: Anubis and Bast are this to each other. They mostly keep it to petty namecalling and one-upping each other.
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* SitcomArchnemesis: SitcomArchnemesis:
** Anubis and Bast are this to each other. They mostly keep it to petty namecalling and one-upping each other.
** Anubis and Bast are this to each other. They mostly keep it to petty namecalling and one-upping each other.
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* SkewedPriorities: When they are attacked by the House of Life, Percy is annoyed that people are ignoring him... and then mentally kicks himself for focusing on unimportant stuff during a fight.
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* SkewedPriorities: SkewedPriorities:
** When they are attacked by the House of Life, Percy is annoyed that people are ignoring him... and then mentally kicks himself for focusing on unimportant stuff during a fight.
** When they are attacked by the House of Life, Percy is annoyed that people are ignoring him... and then mentally kicks himself for focusing on unimportant stuff during a fight.
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* SpitTake: Percy when he sees the Kanes at the Camp Half-Blood.
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* SpitTake: SpitTake:
** Percy when he sees the Kanes at the Camp Half-Blood.
** Percy when he sees the Kanes at the Camp Half-Blood.
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* SureLetsGoWithThat: When they find themselves at Camp Half-Blood, Sadie and Carter let everyone think they are demigods from unknown parentage, [[FantasticRacism as the Camp wouldn't take kindly to magicians]].
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* SureLetsGoWithThat: SureLetsGoWithThat:
** When they find themselves at Camp Half-Blood, Sadie and Carter let everyone think they are demigods from unknown parentage, [[FantasticRacism as the Camp wouldn't take kindly to magicians]].
** When they find themselves at Camp Half-Blood, Sadie and Carter let everyone think they are demigods from unknown parentage, [[FantasticRacism as the Camp wouldn't take kindly to magicians]].
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.
** If you spend all your time prophesizing increasingly unlikely deaths and cataclysms, people will start to think you are insane. Actually ''seeing'' those disasters will turn you insane in short time.
** Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.
** If you spend all your time prophesizing increasingly unlikely deaths and cataclysms, people will start to think you are insane. Actually ''seeing'' those disasters will turn you insane in short time.
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* TakeThat: Nico has very low opinion on both ''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}'' and ''[[Film/WrathOfTheTitans Clash of the Titans]]'' remake, mostly due to their portrayal of his father.
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* TakeThat: TakeThat:
** Nico has very low opinion on both ''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}'' and ''[[Film/WrathOfTheTitans Clash of the Titans]]'' remake, mostly due to their portrayal of his father.
** Nico has very low opinion on both ''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}'' and ''[[Film/WrathOfTheTitans Clash of the Titans]]'' remake, mostly due to their portrayal of his father.
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* ThisMeansWar: Hades reaction to disappearance of his son.
-->'''Hades:''' ''There will be blood!''
-->'''Hades:''' ''There will be blood!''
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* ThisMeansWar: ThisMeansWar:
** Hades reaction to disappearance of his son.
-->'''Hades:''' --->'''Hades:''' ''There will be blood!''
** Hades reaction to disappearance of his son.
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* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation[=/=]AdaptedOut: In this fanfic Hades has no divine or monstrous children, only his demigods. In most mythological portrayals he has several children by Persephone.
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* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation[=/=]AdaptedOut: In this fanfic Hades has no divine or monstrous children, only his demigods. In most some mythological portrayals he has several children by Persephone.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Nico hates monkeys and baboons.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes:
** Nico hates monkeys and baboons.
** Nico hates monkeys and baboons.
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* WorfHadTheFlu: Nico spends most of ''The Death God Alliance'' injured, exhausted, drugged up or sleep deprived and it shows. Once he gets some rest, he kicks ass.
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* WorfHadTheFlu: WorfHadTheFlu:
** Nico spends most of ''The Death God Alliance'' injured, exhausted, drugged up or sleep deprived and it shows. Once he gets some rest, he kicks ass.
** Nico spends most of ''The Death God Alliance'' injured, exhausted, drugged up or sleep deprived and it shows. Once he gets some rest, he kicks ass.
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* AgonizingStomachWound: [[spoiler:Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.]]
* BlessedWithSuck: If you spend all your time prophesizing increasingly unlikely deaths and cataclysms, people will start to think you are insane. Actually ''seeing'' those disasters will turn you insane in short time.
* HeroicRROD: Nico tries to yell at the Kane siblings and Anubis for kind of kidnapping him... and proptly passes out since he didn't eat anything (except possibly IV fluids) in four days and is still recovering from having his soul damaged. When he wakes up in few hours, he's still out of it, being both irritable and easily distracted.
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* RealityEnsues: Head wounds then to bleed heavily even if they aren't very deep or severe.
** Nico tries to yell at the Kane siblings and Anubis for kind of kidnapping him... and proptly passes out since he didn't eat anything (except possibly IV fluids) in four days and is still recovering from having his soul damaged.
*** When he wakes up in few hours, he's still out of it, being both irritable and easily distracted.
** If you spend all your time prophesizing increasingly unlikely deaths and cataclysms, people will start to think you are insane. Actually ''seeing'' those disasters will turn you insane in short time.
** For all his power, Nico is still a 12-year-old. One good hit and he goes down.
** After his run-in with Aziza, Nico develops PTSD and is trigerred when Thalia unknowingly reminds him of the event.
** Despite what Hollywood tells people, sieges consist mostly of waiting and stressing, with brief periods of fighting every few hours.
** [[spoiler:Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.]]
** Nico tries to yell at the Kane siblings and Anubis for kind of kidnapping him... and proptly passes out since he didn't eat anything (except possibly IV fluids) in four days and is still recovering from having his soul damaged.
*** When he wakes up in few hours, he's still out of it, being both irritable and easily distracted.
** If you spend all your time prophesizing increasingly unlikely deaths and cataclysms, people will start to think you are insane. Actually ''seeing'' those disasters will turn you insane in short time.
** For all his power, Nico is still a 12-year-old. One good hit and he goes down.
** After his run-in with Aziza, Nico develops PTSD and is trigerred when Thalia unknowingly reminds him of the event.
** Despite what Hollywood tells people, sieges consist mostly of waiting and stressing, with brief periods of fighting every few hours.
** [[spoiler:Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.]]
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* TraumaButton: After his run-in with Aziza, Nico develops PTSD and is trigerred when Thalia unknowingly reminds him of the event.
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** While [[BigBrotherInstict Percy]] might not ''like'' hiding the truth of Nico's situation from Chiron or Annabeth, His UndyingLoyalty towards his younger cousin is uncontested and he ''will'' protect him and side with him at all cost. And if that means hiding information or openly siding with Nico against others, he will do so in a heartbeat.
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** While [[BigBrotherInstict [[BigBrotherInstinct Percy]] might not ''like'' hiding the truth of Nico's situation from Chiron or Annabeth, His UndyingLoyalty towards his younger cousin is uncontested and he ''will'' protect him and side with him at all cost. And if that means hiding information or openly siding with Nico against others, he will do so in a heartbeat.
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** While Percy might not ''like'' hiding the truth of Nico's situation from Chiron or Annabeth, His UndyingLoyalty towards his younger cousin is uncontested and he ''will'' protect him and side with him at all cost. And if that means hiding information or openly siding with Nico against others, he will do so in a heartbeat.
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** While Percy [[BigBrotherInstict Percy]] might not ''like'' hiding the truth of Nico's situation from Chiron or Annabeth, His UndyingLoyalty towards his younger cousin is uncontested and he ''will'' protect him and side with him at all cost. And if that means hiding information or openly siding with Nico against others, he will do so in a heartbeat.
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* ThisMeansWar: Hades reaction to dissappearance of his son.
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** While Percy might not ''like'' hiding the truth of Nico's situation from Chiron or Annabeth, His UndyingLoyalty towards his younger cousin is uncontested and he ''will'' protect him and side with him at all cost. And if that means hiding information or openly siding with Nico against others, he will do so in a heartbeat.
* ThisMeansWar: Hades reaction todissappearance disappearance of his son.
* ThisMeansWar: Hades reaction to
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* BerserkButton: Don't mention [[{{Disney/Hercules}} Disney's Hercules]] around Nico. He's not fond [[EverybodyHatesHades of it's portrayal of his dad]].
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* BerserkButton: Don't mention [[{{Disney/Hercules}} [[{{WesternAnimation/Hercules}} Disney's Hercules]] around Nico. He's not fond [[EverybodyHatesHades of it's portrayal of his dad]].
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* TakeThat: Nico has very low opinion on both ''Disney/{{Hercules}}'' and ''[[Film/WrathOfTheTitans Clash of the Titans]]'' remake, mostly due to their portrayal of his father.
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* TakeThat: Nico has very low opinion on both ''Disney/{{Hercules}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}'' and ''[[Film/WrathOfTheTitans Clash of the Titans]]'' remake, mostly due to their portrayal of his father.
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* CrypticConversation: [[spoiler:Setne has one with Percy and Leo, hinting at his knowledge about what happened with Nico and how to solve the problem.]]
* DitzyGenius: Leo is brilliant but ''very'' easily distracted.
** Leo asks if Nico has any stone jewelry. [[spoiler:Guess where his soul was stuck.]]
** [[spoiler:Setne hints that they will need someone with power over riches to help Nico. Now, who we know with powerset like that?]]
** [[spoiler:Setne hints that they will need someone with power over riches to help Nico. Now, who we know with powerset like that?]]
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*** Piper becomes a Councilor for Cabin 10, while Leo tames Festus.
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*** Piper becomes a Councilor for Cabin 10, while Leo tames Festus.Festus and is Councilor for Cabin 9.
** Setne escaped from the Duat and is trying to manipulate people for his own ends. [[spoiler:Specifically, Leo.]]
** Chapter 1 of ''Children of the Underworld'': [[spoiler:Jason, Thalia and Annabeth learn everything that happened with Nico, plus all sides learn about the Kanes and Egyptian society.]]
** Chapter 2 of ''Children of the Underworld'': [[spoiler:Leo learns about Nico getting hurt by the PowerLimiter machine. Later, Percy learns from Setne that Leo accidentally killed his mother.]]
** Chapter 2 of ''Children of the Underworld'': [[spoiler:Leo learns about Nico getting hurt by the PowerLimiter machine. Later, Percy learns from Setne that Leo accidentally killed his mother.]]
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** Leo becomes quiet and withdrawn after [[spoiler:running into Setne]].
** [[spoiler:Setne]] warns the group that communication will be the key to solving their current problem.
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* SecretKeeper: Percy, Sadie, Carter and Thoth are this for Nico and Anubis.
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* SecretKeeper: Percy, Sadie, Carter Carter, Bast and Thoth are this for Nico and Anubis. Anubis.
** [[spoiler:Later joined by Zia, Annabeth, Thalia and Jason.]]
** [[spoiler:Later joined by Zia, Annabeth, Thalia and Jason.]]
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* ChekhovsBoomerang: Nico's blood destroying magic is established early on, then used several times over the series.
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* ChekhovsBoomerang: ChekhovsBoomerang:
** Nico's blood destroying magic is established early on, then used several times over theseries.series.
** The fact that he keeps fireworks in his Duat locker.
* ChekhovsGun: Heavily implied with Sadie's gift from Nico: [[spoiler:two vials of water from River Lethe]].
** Nico's blood destroying magic is established early on, then used several times over the
** The fact that he keeps fireworks in his Duat locker.
* ChekhovsGun: Heavily implied with Sadie's gift from Nico: [[spoiler:two vials of water from River Lethe]].
** The 21st Nome vs. the House of Life after Ra comes back. The fight is over in matters of minutes.
** Chapter 17 of ''Nico's Quest'': the trainees also learn about the Camp (off-screen), Percy finds out Zia was a host, Zia confirms that Nico is hosting Anubis, and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Nico learns that Anubis kissed Sadie]].
* LuminescentBlush: Nico, which is given considering his pale complexion.
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** In later chapters of ''Nico's Quest'' Zia wonders why she feels protective towards some kid she's never seen before. Eventually, she reallises that's because Nico is Anubis' host and those are Nephtys' feelings.
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** In later chapters of ''Nico's Quest'' Quest'', Zia wonders why she feels protective towards some kid she's never seen before. Eventually, she reallises realises that's because Nico is Anubis' host and those are Nephtys' feelings.
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** Presumably, that one magician with a penguin trauma spent some time stationed there.
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** Presumably, Pressumably that one magician with a penguin trauma spent some time stationed there.
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** Nico and Felix swap some information while fighting enemy magicians.
* FunnyBackgroundEvent: During Chapter 16 of ''Nico's Quest'' one of enemy magicians is having a penguin-induced FreakOut while Nico and the trainees fight the rest of invaders.
** Presumably, that one magician with a penguin trauma spent some time stationed there.
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** The House of Life needs to tire out and overpower the defenders before they run out of comabatants;
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** The House of Life needs to tire out and overpower the defenders before they run out of comabatants; combatants;
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** That one magician with a penguin phobia.
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* DeusExMachina: Discussed. [[spoiler:Ra's blessing is about the only thing that could possibly save Nico's life but the group has no idea if the Kanes were even able to resurrect the god or if the boy will last that long.]]
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** [[spoiler:Percy tries (and fails) to contact Apollo Cabin for help when Nico is fatally wounded, despite wanting to keep the pantheons separate.]]
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* IdenticalStranger: Nico and Anubis have very similar appearance, both in looks and clothing preferences. [[spoiler:Hades]] even notes that they could be mistaken for brothers.
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* IdenticalStranger: Nico and Anubis have very similar appearance, both in looks and clothing preferences. [[spoiler:Hades]] Several people even notes note that they could be mistaken for brothers.
* RapidFireNo: Anubis when [[spoiler:Nico is fatally injured]].
** [[spoiler:Gut wounds are messy business that ''will'' kill you within a few hours.]]
** Anubis calling Nico an optimist.
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** Zia during ''Nico's Quest'' is barely freed from an enchanted sleep and still recovering while defending Brooklyn House.
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** Zia during ''Nico's Quest'' is barely freed from an enchanted sleep and still recovering while defending Brooklyn House. Similarly, Nico is rather sleep deprived and low on food after his trip through Duat.
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* ChekhovsGunman: The magicians trying to break through the east wall of Brooklyn House during the siege are mentioned several times.
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* ChekhovsGunman: The magicians trying to break through the east wall of Brooklyn House during the siege are mentioned several times.times [[spoiler:before they actually succeed in Chapter 13]].
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*** Chapter 11: [[spoiler:Sadie and Piper have walked away with the murderer.]]
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*** Chapter 11: [[spoiler:Sadie and Piper have just walked away with the murderer.]]
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*** Chapter 7: The siege begins. Siege of Brooklyn House begins.
*** Chapter 13: [[spoiler:Nico is fatally injured by an enemy magician.]]
*** Chapter 13: [[spoiler:Nico is fatally injured by an enemy magician.]]
* DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:The magicians who broke through the east wall certainly didn't expect to run into a group of fresh-as-daisy opponents and a demigod.]]
* ForScience: Thoth has shades of this. He openly gushes over Anubis possessing Nico - which should be impossible - and maintains all knowledge is good to learn. [[spoiler:He also gives LSD to a twelve-years-old boy to see if it would help his inhabitant problem.]]
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* ForScience: Thoth has shades of this. He openly gushes over Anubis possessing Nico - which should be impossible - and maintains all knowledge is good to learn. [[spoiler:He also gives LSD to a twelve-years-old boy to see if it would help his inhabitant problem.]]
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* DramaticIrony: In Chapter 13 of ''Nico's Quest'', Zia considers various reasons for her strange protectiveness toward Nico - and outright dismisses him hosting Anubis as one since everyone knows demigods cannot become hosts to Egyptian gods.
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* [[YoureNotMyFather You Are Not My Mother]]: Nico towards Zia. Justified, since her status as former host of Nephtys makes her overprotective towards the boy and often compromises her judgement when he is concerned.
** Though, in her defence, she tries to suppress those impulses.
** Though, in her defence, she tries to suppress those impulses.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Jason and the Romans show up in the second chapter of ''Crazy Feelings'', though they aren't properly introduced.
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* ShownTheirWork: In the first chapter of ''Crazy Feelings'', the heroes are in a middle of heist at an unnamed museum. One of the reviewers recognized it as Detroid Institute of Art and points out that the Greek [=/=]Roman collection really is displayed on the specified floor.
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* [[ActionFilmQuietDramaScene Action Fanfic, Quiet Drama Scene]]: Several in ''Nico's Quest'' as the people wait for another attack on Brooklyn House.
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* ChekhovsGunman: The magicians trying to break through the east wall of Brooklyn House during the siege are mentioned several times.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Type 2 for [[spoiler:Kwai during his fight with Brooklyn House]].
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* DishingOutDirt: Nico has some skills in earth magic as a child of Hades.
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* ElementalRockPaperScissors: Shows up several times.
** Nico's shadow magic won't work if there is too much light like, say, from fires burning down a room.
** Zia has problems with Kwai because his water spells keep dousing her fires. But Alyssa and Nico can just throw enough dirt at him.
* ElementalShapeshifter: [[spoiler:Kwai can turn into a blob of water to make himself invulnerable.]]
** Nico's shadow magic won't work if there is too much light like, say, from fires burning down a room.
** Zia has problems with Kwai because his water spells keep dousing her fires. But Alyssa and Nico can just throw enough dirt at him.
* ElementalShapeshifter: [[spoiler:Kwai can turn into a blob of water to make himself invulnerable.]]
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Platonic example. Everyone at Brooklyn House notices that something weird is going on with Nico and Zia.
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** Despite what Hollywood tells people, sieges consist mostly of waiting and stressing, with brief periods of fighting every few hours.
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* ATruceWhileWeGawk: The Romans defending and storming the fort during war games stop to stare at Jason and his friends cosplaying the King's death scene from ''King of Sparta'' movie.
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* ATruceWhileWeGawk: The During ''Greeking Out'' the Romans defending and storming the fort during war games stop to stare at Jason and his friends cosplaying the King's death scene from ''King of Sparta'' movie.
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* UnwantedAssistance: Yes, Nico is a kid. No, he doesn't need any help or, gods forbid, a babysitter. Though, it's mostly Zia and [[spoiler:Jason]].
* VictoryByEndurance: What the entire siege of Brooklyn House boils down to, with a side order of MyDefenceNeedNotProtectMeForever.
* VictoryByEndurance: What the entire siege of Brooklyn House boils down to, with a side order of MyDefenceNeedNotProtectMeForever.
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* UnwantedAssistance: Yes, Nico is a kid. No, he doesn't need any help or, gods forbid, a babysitter. Though, it's mostly Zia and [[spoiler:Jason]].[[spoiler:Jason]] who are the worst offenders.
* VictoryByEndurance: What the entire siege of Brooklyn House boils down to, with a side order ofMyDefenceNeedNotProtectMeForever.MyDefenceNeedNotProtectMeForever:
** The House of Life needs to tire out and overpower the defenders before they run out of comabatants;
** The trainees need to hold on until the dawn when the Kanes will return with [[BigGood Ra]].
* VictoryByEndurance: What the entire siege of Brooklyn House boils down to, with a side order of
** The House of Life needs to tire out and overpower the defenders before they run out of comabatants;
** The trainees need to hold on until the dawn when the Kanes will return with [[BigGood Ra]].
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** Basically, Percy and Bast's reaction to Kwan's Kwai's boasts.
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* CompositeCharacter: Kind of. The author has mixed up Kwaan and Sarah Jacobi, with their crimes and specialties being given to each other.
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* CompositeCharacter: Kind of. The author has mixed up Kwaan Kwai and Sarah Jacobi, with their crimes and specialties being given to each other.
** Percy vs. Kwai. The magician doesn't even make it to the mansion before being defeated.
** Kwai decides to insult the person who just overpowered his magic and dumped him into river. He has enough time to realise his mistake before Percy retaliates.
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* PreAsskickingOneLiner: "What's that? I can't hear you over the sound of that whirlpool sucking you under!"
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-->"What's that? I can't hear you over the sound of that whirlpool sucking you under!"
-->"What's that? I can't hear you over the sound of that whirlpool sucking you under!"
** Sadie made the entire Brooklyn House watch ''[[Film/TheMummyTrilogy the Mummy]]''.
--->'''Bast:''' Hey Beni! It looks to me like you're on the wrong side of the river!
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* TooDumbToLive: A magician who was just dumped into the river by Percy decides to make comments about [[BerserkButton Percy's mom and barnyard animals]]. Guess how it ended.
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** Harming Nico is this to Zia, mostly due to Nepthys and Anubis' influence.
** Don't insult Percy's mother where he can hear you. Just '''don't'''.
** Don't insult Percy's mother where he can hear you. Just '''don't'''.
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