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** Seemingly averted when she starts to express doubts in private, where, without the influence of her peers, she finally starts to understand ''why'' humanity isn't so keen on ponification. Sadly, come [[Fanfic/ConversionBureauConquerTheStars]], she's ''still'' in denial.
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* HumiliationConga: According to Dalek Ix's fanfic, TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars, the rest of Equestria didn't react too kindly to what Celestia did.
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*** Warwolf has also started a fan sequel, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/83196/the-shadow-of-ages The Shadow of Ages.]] The two sequels are entirely unrelated though both are set sometime after the end of the original. How long varies. Dalek IX's fic is at least a century or so after the original. Warwolf's...hasn't actually been defined in terms of timeline beyond the fact that it's sometime after Equestria jumped back to its own world.

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* BittersweetEnding: For both ends of the story.
** For Earth, the good news is that [[spoiler:Equestria retreats back to its home dimension and won't be bothering anyone else anytime soon, humanity survives, there is hope for peaceful coexistence with the ponies left on Earth, and it appears Celestia will get her comeuppance.]] The bad news is that [[spoiler: the PER and HLF are still out there and still a threat, many ponies are still being held in internment camps, South Africa is turning into a fascist hellhole, and many countries have begun spending massive amounts of money (at the expense of education and healthcare) on the military and building weapons in preparation for a war that will never come.]]
** For Equestria, [[spoiler:they escape with minimal casualties aside from the slaughtered Royal Guards and the ponies they left behind. On the flipside, the population is starting to fall into dissidence against the Princesses, and the zebra and gryphon kingdoms are... rather discontent at their actions. The story even ends in a letter that heavily {{foreshadow|ing}}s war against Equestria.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: For both ends of the story.
** For Earth, the
Earth. The good news is that [[spoiler:Equestria retreats back to its home dimension and won't be bothering anyone else anytime soon, humanity survives, there is hope for peaceful coexistence with the ponies left on Earth, and it appears Celestia will get her comeuppance.]] The bad news is that [[spoiler: the PER and HLF are still out there and still a threat, many ponies are still being held in internment camps, South Africa is turning into a fascist hellhole, and many countries have begun spending massive amounts of money (at the expense of education and healthcare) on the military and building weapons in preparation for a war that will never come.]]
** For Equestria, [[spoiler:they escape with minimal casualties aside from the slaughtered Royal Guards and the ponies they left behind. On the flipside, the population is starting to fall into dissidence against the Princesses, and the zebra and gryphon kingdoms are... rather discontent at their actions. The story even ends in a letter that heavily {{foreshadow|ing}}s war against Equestria.
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* DownerEnding: For Equestria. They [[spoiler:are able to make it back safely to their home dimension in one piece, but their military is utterly decimated, and in their hasty retreat, the princesses were forced to leave more than 3000 ponies behind to an uncertain future on Earth. Moreover, the population is revealed to be losing their faith in the princesses, and the gryphon and zebra nations are ''not'' happy to hear about what Celestia tried to do to the humans. The story ultimately closes with the Gryphon Queen writing a letter to Celestia that heavily hints they may even wage war against Equestria.]]



* GoshDangItToHeck: As shown with Thunderhead, the newfoals also lose their ability to swear.



* InferredHolocaust: This story examines the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble, such as human displacement, something many other TCB works ignore.

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* InferredHolocaust: This InUniverse - this story examines the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble, such as human displacement, displacement and loss of infrastructure, something many other TCB works ignore.



* NotSoDifferent: Ponies and humans. [[spoiler: The gryphons also recognise the great similarities humans have with them.]]

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* NotSoDifferent: Ponies and humans. [[spoiler: The gryphons also recognise recognize the great similarities humans have with them.]]



** However, he will write a bunch of side stories detailing a few things that happened during and after the war. Not really a sequel, but pretty close.

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** However, he will before deleting the story and swearing to never write anything for the TCB universe again, Starman Ghost did mention the possibility of writing a bunch of side stories detailing a few things that happened during and after the war. Not really a sequel, but pretty close.



* TotalitarianUtilitarian: Celestia Type 2. She seems to honestly think ponification would help humanity and doesn't understand that Humans don't want to give up being what makes them, them.

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* TotalitarianUtilitarian: Celestia is a Type 2. She seems to honestly think ponification would help humanity and solve all of humanity's problems but doesn't understand that Humans why the humans don't want to give up being what makes them, them.



* UnwittingPawn: Twilight, Shining, everypony that helped Celestia. Lampshaded when Shining tells Twilight that the war was inevitable; even though he doesn't know that it was Celestia who purposefully sent Equestria to Earth specifically to destroy the Human race.

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* UnwittingPawn: Twilight, Shining, everypony that helped Celestia. Lampshaded when Shining tells Twilight that the war was inevitable; even though he doesn't know that it was Celestia who purposefully sent Equestria to Earth specifically to destroy the Human human race.



** Celestia also notes that most of the troops fighting in South Africa are ''not'' humanity's finest soldiers, and were fighting out of their element, and with inferior equipment. If it had been a better fighting force, the price for the ponies might have been far steeper than it already was.

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** Celestia also notes that most of the troops fighting in South Africa are ''not'' humanity's finest soldiers, and being poorly trained rookies that were fighting out of their element, and with inferior equipment. If it had been a better trained and equipped fighting force, the price for the ponies might have been far steeper than it already was.
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* AuthorTract : Written (from word of god) to "set right" perceived issues with certain other TCB stories, certain story plot points are established by fiat and with a certain lack of substance and subtlety, don't necessarily make sense and you should definitely not try to [[FilibusterFreefall look behind the curtain]].

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* AuthorTract : Written (from word of god) to "set right" perceived issues with certain other pro-conversion TCB stories, certain story plot points are established by fiat and with a certain lack of substance and subtlety, don't necessarily make sense and you should definitely not try stories. Whether it works is left as an exercise to [[FilibusterFreefall look behind the curtain]].individual reader.
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All these points are already covered under Misaimed Fandom in the YMMV page. Don\'t shoot the author for the failures for some readers.


The story is presented through newscasts, postings and other formats in addition to standard prose and, whilst attempting to (in the words of the author) "address the balance" between the original and various spinoffs, manages to do a great job of portraying why [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HumansAreTheRealMonsters Humans are often the villains of such morality plays]].

* converted humans, even children, are openly and without much remorse ([[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WhatMeasureIsANonHuman even by former loved ones]]) dragged off by the stazi to [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/SarcasmMode Happy funtimes in the ghetto]] for the crime of being a pony.
* human characters (and even 'good' ponies) believe that, without fail, conversion causes death. This isn't delivered through introspection, but with all the subtlety of a [[AuthorTract freight train]].
* characters in the story regularly call to ''nuke 'em till they glow and shoot them in the dark''.
** This was [[WordOfGod intended to show grey and grey morality]] but the nuance went over the head of many readers, and the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/UsefulNotes/TheLawsAndCustomsOfWar obvious war crimes committed]] were generally applauded as a [[TakeThat take that]] to other, less human-centric fanfictions.

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The story is presented through newscasts, postings and other formats in addition to standard prose and, whilst attempting to (in the words of the author) "address the balance" between the original and various spinoffs, manages to do a great job of portraying why [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HumansAreTheRealMonsters Humans are often the villains of such morality plays]].

* converted humans, even children, are openly and without much remorse ([[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WhatMeasureIsANonHuman even by former loved ones]]) dragged off by the stazi to [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/SarcasmMode Happy funtimes in the ghetto]] for the crime of being a pony.
* human characters (and even 'good' ponies) believe that, without fail, conversion causes death. This isn't delivered through introspection, but with all the subtlety of a [[AuthorTract freight train]].
* characters in the story regularly call to ''nuke 'em till they glow and shoot them in the dark''.
** This was [[WordOfGod intended to show grey and grey morality]] but the nuance went over the head of many readers, and the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/UsefulNotes/TheLawsAndCustomsOfWar obvious war crimes committed]] were generally applauded as a [[TakeThat take that]] to other, less human-centric fanfictions.
prose.



* CreepySouvenir: In ''The Battle Of South Africa'', [[spoiler:the soldier Pieter]] hacks off a dead unicorn's horn as a trophy.

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* CreepySouvenir: In ''The Battle Of South Africa'', [[spoiler:the soldier Pieter]] hacks off a dead unicorn's horn as a trophy. This is NOT to be seen as a good thing.



* DeconstructionFic: Of the Conversion Bureau. Humanity reacts appropriately to the ponies' misanthropy, the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble are further examined, and we have human-sympathizing ponies.
** Likewise, we have extreme motivations on both sides of the conflict (humans are often [[HumansAreBastards evil]] though not always [[ForTheEvulz for the sake of evil]] neither are they entirely saintly, nor are the ponies a race of {{Purity Sue}}s or genocidal monsters) (except for [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Glurge the ones we're not supposed to like]], of course), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.

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* DeconstructionFic: Of the Conversion Bureau.''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''. Humanity reacts appropriately to the ponies' misanthropy, the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble are further examined, and we have human-sympathizing ponies.
** Likewise, we have extreme reasonable motivations on both sides of the conflict (humans are often [[HumansAreBastards evil]] though not always neither evil [[ForTheEvulz for the sake of evil]] neither are they or entirely saintly, nor are the ponies a race of {{Purity Sue}}s or genocidal monsters) (except for [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Glurge the ones we're not supposed to like]], of course), monsters), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.

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* human characters (and even 'good' ponies) believe that, without fail, conversion causes death. This isn't delivered through introspection, but with all the subtlety of a [[AuthorFiat freight train]].

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* human characters (and even 'good' ponies) believe that, without fail, conversion causes death. This isn't delivered through introspection, but with all the subtlety of a [[AuthorFiat [[AuthorTract freight train]].



* AuthorTract : Written (from word of god) to "set right" perceived issues with certain other TCB stories, certain story plot points are established by fiat and with a certain lack of substance and subtlety, don't necessarily make sense and you should definitely not try to [[FilibusterFreefall look behind the curtain]].



** Likewise, we have realistic motivations on both sides of the conflict (humans are not [[HumansAreBastards evil]] [[ForTheEvulz for the sake of evil]] or entirely saintly, nor are the ponies a race of {{Purity Sue}}s or genocidal monsters), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.

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** Likewise, we have realistic extreme motivations on both sides of the conflict (humans are not often [[HumansAreBastards evil]] though not always [[ForTheEvulz for the sake of evil]] or neither are they entirely saintly, nor are the ponies a race of {{Purity Sue}}s or genocidal monsters), monsters) (except for [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Glurge the ones we're not supposed to like]], of course), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.

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Adding more information regarding this story being - by word of the author - intended to \'address the balance\' of TCB fics back towards pro patria humanity.


''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/re-upload-tcb-not-alone.248433/ The Conversion Bureau: Not Alone]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic. It is a different take on ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''; while not strictly necessary, reading or at least having knowledge of TCB is '''strongly advised'''.

The Equestrian landform appeared suddenly in the South Atlantic. While humanity extended welcome to the ponies, there were those who had doubts. These doubts proved founded once the ponies' imperialism came to light, leading humanity to gear up for war. At the same time, there are also those ponies who disagree with the Princesses' actions.

Presented through newscasts, postings and other formats in addition to standard prose.

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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/re-upload-tcb-not-alone.248433/ The Conversion Bureau: Not Alone]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic. It is a different sometimes heavy-handed new take on ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''; while not strictly necessary, reading or at least having knowledge of TCB is '''strongly advised'''.

The Similar to mainline TCB, the Equestrian landform appeared appears suddenly in the South Atlantic. While humanity extended welcome to the ponies, there were those who had doubts. These doubts proved founded once the ponies' imperialism came to light, leading humanity to gear up for war. At the same time, there are also those ponies who disagree with the Princesses' actions.

Presented The story is presented through newscasts, postings and other formats in addition to standard prose.
prose and, whilst attempting to (in the words of the author) "address the balance" between the original and various spinoffs, manages to do a great job of portraying why [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HumansAreTheRealMonsters Humans are often the villains of such morality plays]].

* converted humans, even children, are openly and without much remorse ([[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WhatMeasureIsANonHuman even by former loved ones]]) dragged off by the stazi to [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/SarcasmMode Happy funtimes in the ghetto]] for the crime of being a pony.
* human characters (and even 'good' ponies) believe that, without fail, conversion causes death. This isn't delivered through introspection, but with all the subtlety of a [[AuthorFiat freight train]].
* characters in the story regularly call to ''nuke 'em till they glow and shoot them in the dark''.
** This was [[WordOfGod intended to show grey and grey morality]] but the nuance went over the head of many readers, and the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/UsefulNotes/TheLawsAndCustomsOfWar obvious war crimes committed]] were generally applauded as a [[TakeThat take that]] to other, less human-centric fanfictions.
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A second fan sequel has been posted to fimfiction.net by another fimfiction author called Warwolf, with Starman's permission, as of February 11, 2013 called ''The Shadow of Ages'', and is also a crossover with another Conversion Bureau fanfic called ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/33423/the-conversion-bureau-the-warriors-way The Conversion Bureau: The Warrior's Way]]'', itself a sequel to Warwolf's story ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/21810/the-shogun-six The Shogun Six]]''. ''The Shadow of Ages'' can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/83196/the-shadow-of-ages here]].
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As of January 31, 2013, Starman Ghost decided to delete the story from FimFiction.net, declaring that he refused to write in the Conversion Bureau setting anymore. However, readers uploaded the story (with his permission) to other places, including the Spacebattles link above.

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As of January 31, 2013, Starman Ghost decided to delete the story from FimFiction.net, declaring that he refused to write in the Conversion Bureau setting anymore.anymore, to the shock of his readers, who did their level best to convince him otherwise. However, readers uploaded the story (with his permission) to other places, including the Spacebattles link above.
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As of January 31, 2013, Starman Ghost decided to delete the story from FimFiction.net, declaring that he refused to write in the Conversion Bureau setting anymore. However, readers uploaded the story (with his permission) to other places, including the Spacebattles link above.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26651/The-Conversion-Bureau%3A-Not-Alone The Conversion Bureau: Not Alone]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic. It is a different take on ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''; while not strictly necessary, reading or at least having knowledge of TCB is '''strongly advised'''.

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26651/The-Conversion-Bureau%3A-Not-Alone ''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/re-upload-tcb-not-alone.248433/ The Conversion Bureau: Not Alone]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic. It is a different take on ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''; while not strictly necessary, reading or at least having knowledge of TCB is '''strongly advised'''.
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** Likewise, we have realistic motivations on both sides of the conflict (humans are not [[HumansAreBastards evil]] [[ForTheEvulz for the sake of evil]] or entirely saintly, nor are the ponies a race of [[PuritySue Purity Sues]] or genocidal monsters), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.

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** Likewise, we have realistic motivations on both sides of the conflict (humans are not [[HumansAreBastards evil]] [[ForTheEvulz for the sake of evil]] or entirely saintly, nor are the ponies a race of [[PuritySue Purity Sues]] {{Purity Sue}}s or genocidal monsters), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.
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* ColbertBump: This story managed to set up Anti-TCB stories that weren't as heavy-handed as the actual TCB stories, as well as other humans in equestria stories that have GreyAndGreyMorality once it appeared on Spacebattles.
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** Likewise, we have realistic motivations on both sides of the conflict (humans are not [[HumansAreBastards evil]] [[ForTheEvulz for the sake of evil]], nor are the ponies a race of [[PuritySue Purity Sues]]), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.

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** Likewise, we have realistic motivations on both sides of the conflict (humans are not [[HumansAreBastards evil]] [[ForTheEvulz for the sake of evil]], evil]] or entirely saintly, nor are the ponies a race of [[PuritySue Purity Sues]]), Sues]] or genocidal monsters), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.
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According to WordOfGod, Dalek IX, author of the fanfictions ''FanFic/AHero'' and ''FanFic/FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', is writing the official sequel to ''Not Alone'', called ''[[FanFic/TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars Conquer The Stars]]''. That story takes place 200 years later on a colony ship that has rediscovered the Equestrian Barrier... in an entirely different star system. Much of the original's open ending is expanded upon, both on Earth and in Equestria.

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According to WordOfGod, Dalek IX, author of the fanfictions ''FanFic/AHero'' and ''FanFic/FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', is writing the official a fan sequel to ''Not Alone'', called ''[[FanFic/TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars Conquer The Stars]]''. That story takes place 200 years later on a colony ship that has rediscovered the Equestrian Barrier... in an entirely different star system. Much of the original's open ending is expanded upon, both on Earth and in Equestria.

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*** Revealed at the end that Celestia personally transported Equestria to Earth to purposefully assimilate them.

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*** Revealed at the end that Celestia personally transported Equestria to Earth to purposefully assimilate them.



* HanlonsRazor: [[spoiler:When we finally get to see Celestia's side of the story, she appears genuinely ignorant about why humanity is rejecting her overtures, instead of a deliberately genocidal tyrant.]]

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* HanlonsRazor: [[spoiler:When we finally get to see Celestia's side of the story, she appears she's genuinely ignorant about clueless as to why humanity is rejecting her overtures, instead of being a deliberately genocidal tyrant.]]



*** After Twilight thinks about the effects of the potion, and what they would do to Shining if it could heal him, she finally realizes the ''real'' reason Humanity went to war.

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*** After Twilight thinks about the effects of the potion, and what they would do to Shining if it could heal him, she finally realizes the ''real'' reason Humanity humanity went to war.



* HumblePie: Rainbow Dash wanted to go out and fight with the Royal Guard, thinking it would be easy to buck every soldier she found. Then, when she sees them after they come back from South Africa mauled, she gets to eat the Humble Pie.

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* HumblePie: Rainbow Dash wanted to go out and fight with the Royal Guard, thinking it would be easy to buck every soldier she found. Then, when after she sees them after they come back from South Africa mauled, horribly injured and mutilated, she gets to eat the Humble Pie.a fat slice of this.



* TitleDrop: During the US President's speech after the war is wrapped up.
-->'''President John [=McCormick=]:''' We know now that we are not alone in the universe.



* WeHaveReserves: One of the main reasons, coupled with HumansAreWarriors and the already steep cost in lives of Royal Guardsmen, why Celestia fled: Even if they had ten times the number of Guards they had, the humans still have a pool of about seven billion potential recruits, and could drown them in numbers alone.

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* WeHaveReserves: One of the main reasons, coupled with HumansAreWarriors and ZergRush, and the already steep cost in the lives of the Royal Guardsmen, Guards, why Celestia fled: Even if they had ten times the number of Guards they had, the humans still have a pool of about seven billion potential recruits, and could drown them in numbers alone.

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** Likewise, we have realistic motivations on both sides of the conflict (neither the humans are [[HumansAreBastards evil for the sake of evil]], nor are ponies [[PuritySue Purity Sues]]), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.
** Even the ponies suspect something's wrong with the conversion bureaus when they realize there's [[StepfordSmiler something off]] with the newfoals.

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** Likewise, we have realistic motivations on both sides of the conflict (neither the humans (humans are not [[HumansAreBastards evil evil]] [[ForTheEvulz for the sake of evil]], nor are the ponies a race of [[PuritySue Purity Sues]]), as well as consequences that leave neither side much better off.
** Even the ponies suspect something's wrong with the conversion bureaus when they realize there's [[StepfordSmiler something seriously off]] with the newfoals.



** Later, also the [[spoiler: entire Battle of South Africa and the Battle for the South Atlantic end up as these. With all their newly gained territory reconquered by humanity, Equestria ends up under siege, but at an all in all surprisingly steep price]].

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** Later, also the [[spoiler: entire Battle of South Africa and the Battle for the South Atlantic end up as these. With all their newly gained territory reconquered by humanity, Equestria ends up under siege, but at an all in all surprisingly steep price]]. price]].
** The whole aftermath of the war for humanity in general - [[spoiler: Equestria has retreated and won't be bothering anyone else, but the troubles are far from over, as South Africa is turning into a facist state and several countries start spending enormous amounts of money (at the cost of healthcare, education and enviromental protection) beefing up their militaries and preparing for a war that will never come.]]



* [[ScaryDogmaticAliens Scary Dogmatic Ponies]]: ala TheFundamentalist type. Instantly Celestia looks at human culture, deems it barbaric, and creates the ponification potion to '[[YouWillBeAssimilated convert]]' Humanity into 'better' forms. When Humans start rejecting the potion, Celestia tries to eliminate Humanity with her barrier.

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* [[ScaryDogmaticAliens Scary Dogmatic Ponies]]: ala TheFundamentalist type. Instantly Celestia looks at human culture, deems it barbaric, and creates the ponification potion to '[[YouWillBeAssimilated convert]]' Humanity into 'better' forms. When Humans start rejecting the potion, Celestia tries to eliminate Humanity humanity with her barrier. barrier.



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler: Once Celestia realizes that Equestria is going to lose the war, she decides to retreat to another dimension.]]

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler: Once Celestia realizes that Equestria is going to lose the war, she decides to retreat back to another their home dimension.]]



** Dalek IX has begun work on a fan sequel, found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ here]]. It now has [[TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars its own tropes page.]]

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** Dalek IX has begun work on a fan sequel, found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ here]]. It now has [[TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars [[Fanfic/TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars its own tropes page.]]

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Dalek IX, author of the fanfictions ''FanFic/AHero'' and ''FanFic/FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', has begun work on a fan sequel, titled "[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ The Conversion Bureau: Conquer The Stars,]]" that takes place 200 years later on a colony ship that has rediscovered the Equestrian Barrier... in an entirely different star system. Now with an [[FanFic/TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars in-progress trope page.]]

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According to WordOfGod, Dalek IX, author of the fanfictions ''FanFic/AHero'' and ''FanFic/FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', has begun work on a fan sequel, titled "[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ The Conversion Bureau: is writing the official sequel to ''Not Alone'', called ''[[FanFic/TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars Conquer The Stars,]]" that Stars]]''. That story takes place 200 years later on a colony ship that has rediscovered the Equestrian Barrier... in an entirely different star system. Now with an [[FanFic/TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars in-progress trope page.]]
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**Even the ponies suspect something's wrong with the conversion bureaus when they realize there's [[StepfordSmiler something off]] with the newfoals.

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** Dalek IX has begun work on a fan sequel, found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ here]].

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** Dalek IX has begun work on a fan sequel, found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ here]]. It now has [[TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars its own tropes page.]]


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* WeHaveReserves: One of the main reasons, coupled with HumansAreWarriors and the already steep cost in lives of Royal Guardsmen, why Celestia fled: Even if they had ten times the number of Guards they had, the humans still have a pool of about seven billion potential recruits, and could drown them in numbers alone.
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** Celestia also laments that it takes a long time to get ponies trained up to the level the Royal Guard deployed to South Africa was. It takes humans only a few weeks to get other humans trained enough to kill those guards.


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** Celestia also notes that most of the troops fighting in South Africa are ''not'' humanity's finest soldiers, and were fighting out of their element, and with inferior equipment. If it had been a better fighting force, the price for the ponies might have been far steeper than it already was.
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* ExtremeDoormat: The Newfoals. While they can feel annoyed, sad, or frightened, they are almost completely incapable of feeling anger and don't ever assert or stand up for themselves.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26651/The-Conversion-Bureau%3A-Not-Alone The Conversion Bureau: Not Alone]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic. It is a different take on ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''; while not strictly necessary, reading or at least having knowledge of TCB is '''strongly advised'''.

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26651/The-Conversion-Bureau%3A-Not-Alone The Conversion Bureau: Not Alone]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic. It is a different take on ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''; while not strictly necessary, reading or at least having knowledge of TCB is '''strongly advised'''.
advised'''.



Dalek IX, author of the fanfictions ''FanFic/AHero'' and ''FanFic/FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', has begun work on a fan sequel, titled "[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ The Conversion Bureau: Conquer The Stars,]]" that takes place 200 years later on a colony ship that has rediscovered the Equestrian Barrier... in an entirely different star system.

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Dalek IX, author of the fanfictions ''FanFic/AHero'' and ''FanFic/FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', has begun work on a fan sequel, titled "[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ The Conversion Bureau: Conquer The Stars,]]" that takes place 200 years later on a colony ship that has rediscovered the Equestrian Barrier... in an entirely different star system.
system. Now with an [[FanFic/TheConversionBureauConquerTheStars in-progress trope page.]]
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Dalek IX, author of the fanfictions ''AHero'' and ''FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', has begun work on a fan sequel, titled "[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ The Conversion Bureau: Conquer The Stars,]]" that takes place 200 years later on a colony ship that has rediscovered the Equestrian Barrier... in an entirely different star system.

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Dalek IX, author of the fanfictions ''AHero'' ''FanFic/AHero'' and ''FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', ''FanFic/FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', has begun work on a fan sequel, titled "[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ The Conversion Bureau: Conquer The Stars,]]" that takes place 200 years later on a colony ship that has rediscovered the Equestrian Barrier... in an entirely different star system.
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Dalek IX, author of the fanfictions ''AHero'' and ''FriendsOfASolarEmpire'', has begun work on a fan sequel, titled "[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ The Conversion Bureau: Conquer The Stars,]]" that takes place 200 years later on a colony ship that has rediscovered the Equestrian Barrier... in an entirely different star system.


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** Dalek IX has begun work on a fan sequel, found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mlp-fim-the-conversion-bureau-conquer-the-stars.237773/ here]].
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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Celestia. She destroys human cities, displacing thousands, and essentially tries to exterminate humans in the process. When she realizes she's going to lose, she takes Equestria and runs away, rather than surrender herself to the humans to save her ponies.]] That said, [[spoiler:she's fully aware this means she's abandoning all the ponies who were captured/aren't currently in Equestria, and that about the only thing keeping her from breaking down is the fact she needs to be strong for the survivors]].\\

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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Celestia. At first it seems [[spoiler:Celestia is this. She destroys destroyed several human cities, displacing thousands, left thousands of people homeless, was directly responsible for the war that cost the lives of several humans and ponies, and essentially tries tried to exterminate humans the human race in the process. When she realizes she's going to lose, lose said war, she takes Equestria and runs away, rather than surrender herself to the humans to save her ponies.]] That said, [[spoiler:she's fully aware this means she's abandoning all the ponies who were captured/aren't currently in Equestria, and that about the only thing keeping her from breaking down is the fact she needs to be strong for the survivors]].\\



Ultimately subverted in the last chapter, [[spoiler: when the ponies of Equestria begin questioning her actions and start to lose faith in her, and the gryphons identify her as a threat.]] Granted, she'll probably avoid Karma for a while, but not forever.

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Ultimately subverted in the last chapter, [[spoiler: when where the combination of losing the war, missing their friends and family members they had to leave behind on earth, and the odd behaviors of the newfoals causes the ponies of Equestria to begin questioning her actions and start to lose faith in her, and the gryphons gryphon and zebra kingdoms identify her as a threat.]] Granted, she'll probably avoid Karma for a while, but not forever.



* NotSoDifferent: Ponies and humans. [[spoiler: Griffons also recognise the great similarities humans have with them.]]

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* NotSoDifferent: Ponies and humans. [[spoiler: Griffons The gryphons also recognise the great similarities humans have with them.]]
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* MoreDakka: [[spoiler: The barrier's bombardment involves absurd amounts of this.]]
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* TheMagicVersusTechnologyWar: Ponies' magic vs. humans' technology.

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* BittersweetEnding: The good news is that [[spoiler:Equestria retreats back to its home dimension and won't be bothering anyone else anytime soon, humanity survives, there is hope for peaceful coexistence with the ponies left on Earth, and it appears Celestia will get her comeuppance.]] The bad news is that [[spoiler: the PER and HLF are still out there and still a threat, many ponies are still being held in internment camps, South Africa is turning into a fascist hellhole, and many countries have begun spending massive amounts of money (at the expense of education and healthcare) on the military and building weapons in preparation for a war that will never come.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: The For both ends of the story.
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good news is that [[spoiler:Equestria retreats back to its home dimension and won't be bothering anyone else anytime soon, humanity survives, there is hope for peaceful coexistence with the ponies left on Earth, and it appears Celestia will get her comeuppance.]] The bad news is that [[spoiler: the PER and HLF are still out there and still a threat, many ponies are still being held in internment camps, South Africa is turning into a fascist hellhole, and many countries have begun spending massive amounts of money (at the expense of education and healthcare) on the military and building weapons in preparation for a war that will never come.]]
** For Equestria, [[spoiler:they escape with minimal casualties aside from the slaughtered Royal Guards and the ponies they left behind. On the flipside, the population is starting to fall into dissidence against the Princesses, and the zebra and gryphon kingdoms are... rather discontent at their actions. The story even ends in a letter that heavily {{foreshadow|ing}}s war against Equestria.
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