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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26651/The-Conversion-Bureau%3A-Not-Alone The Conversion Bureau: Not Alone]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic. It is a different take on ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''.
The Equestrian landform appeared suddenly in the South Atlantic. While humanity extended welcome to the ponies, there were those who had doubts. These doubts proved founded once the ponies' imperialism came to light, leading humanity to gear up for war. There are those ponies who disagree with the Princesses' actions, though.
The Equestrian landform appeared suddenly in the South Atlantic. While humanity extended welcome to the ponies, there were those who had doubts. These doubts proved founded once the ponies' imperialism came to light, leading humanity to gear up for war. There are those ponies who disagree with the Princesses' actions, though.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26651/The-Conversion-Bureau%3A-Not-Alone The Conversion Bureau: Not Alone]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic. It is a different take on ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''.
''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''; while not strictly necessary, reading or at least having knowledge of TCB is '''strongly advised'''.
The Equestrian landform appeared suddenly in the South Atlantic. While humanity extended welcome to the ponies, there were those who had doubts. These doubts proved founded once the ponies' imperialism came to light, leading humanity to gear up for war.There At the same time, there are also those ponies who disagree with the Princesses' actions, though.
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The Equestrian landform appeared suddenly in the South Atlantic. While humanity extended welcome to the ponies, there were those who had doubts. These doubts proved founded once the ponies' imperialism came to light, leading humanity to gear up for war.
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* StylisticSuck: Some of the blog comments are poorly written.
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* HumansAreBastards: What Twilight Sparkle expresses in her interview with a reporter.
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* HumansAreBastards: HumansAreTheRealMonsters: What Twilight Sparkle expresses in her interview with a reporter.
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* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: The attitude of the pony apologists is that "our rulers are goddesses, they can do what they want."
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* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers: The attitude of the pony apologists is that "our rulers are goddesses, they can do what they want."
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** This creates numerous problems for Evening Star, who has to hide from the humans even as she tries to aid them.
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* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: The attitude of the pony apologists is that "our rulers are goddesses, they can do what they want."
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* {{Deconstruction}}: Of the Conversion Bureau. Humanity reacts appropiately to the ponies misanthropism, the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble are further examined, and we have human sympathizing ponies.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: Of the Conversion Bureau. Humanity reacts appropiately to the ponies ponies' misanthropism, the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble are further examined, and we have human sympathizing human-sympathizing ponies.
* {{Expy}}: Several elements of the story are borrowed from WorldWarTwo.
** The Equestrians For Humans are based on the [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_Rose White Rose]]. Hopefully they won't share the same fate.
** The Equestrians For Humans are based on the [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_Rose White Rose]]. Hopefully they won't share the same fate.
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** Several elements of the story are borrowed from WorldWarTwo
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* MisaimedFandom: Readers who defend the humans putting ponies into [[WorldWar2 internment camps.]] WordOfGod says this is supposed to be a WhatTheHellHero for humanity.
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* MisaimedFandom: Readers who defend the humans putting ponies into [[WorldWar2 internment camps.]] WordOfGod says this is supposed to be a WhatTheHellHero for humanity.
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** Several readers gave their own speeches in the comments section.
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** Several readers gave their own speeches in the comments section.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Andrew/Iceman, after Eddy's ponification.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: The ponies that follow Celestia. They accuse humanity of being greedy and selfish... and proceed to take humanity's lands away from them, cover the Earth in an expanding barrier that kills everyone, and deny entry into Equestria from unconverted humans. The ponies of Equestrians For Humans are all too happy to point it out to them.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: The ponies that follow Celestia. They accuse humanity of being greedy and selfish... and proceed to take humanity's lands away from them, cover the Earth in an expanding barrier that kills everyone, and deny entry into Equestria from unconverted humans. The ponies of Equestrians For Humans are all too happy to point it out to them.
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* NextSundayAD: Takes place in 2017/2018, with no significant differences from the present.
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* NextSundayAD: Takes place in 2017/2018, with no significant differences from the present.
* RousingSpeech: What U.S. diplomat Ellen Rowe gives after the United Nations General Assembly [[spoiler: declares war on Equestria]].
* RousingSpeech: What U.S. diplomat Ellen Rowe gives after the United Nations General Assembly [[spoiler: declares war on Equestria]].
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* EmergencyTransformation: Eddy chooses to be ponified because he has terminal lung cancer.
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* Hypocrite: {{Hypocrite}}: The ponies that follow Celestia. They accuse humanity of being greedy and selfish... and proceed to take humanity's lands away from them, cover the Earth in an expanding barrier that kills everyone, and deny entry into Equestria from unconverted humans. The ponies of Equestrians For Humans are all too happy to point it out to them.
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* Deconstruction: Of the Conversion Bureau. Humanity reacts appropiately to the ponies misanthropism, the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble are further examined, and we have human sympathizing ponies.
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* Deconstruction: {{Deconstruction}}: Of the Conversion Bureau. Humanity reacts appropiately to the ponies misanthropism, the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble are further examined, and we have human sympathizing ponies.
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* Hypocrite: The ponies that follow Celestia. They accuse humanity of being greedy and selfish... and proceed to take humanity's lands away from them, cover the Earth in an expanding barrier that kills everyone, and deny entry into Equestria from unconverted humans. The ponies of Equestrians For Humans are all to happy to point it out to them.
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* Hypocrite: The ponies that follow Celestia. They accuse humanity of being greedy and selfish... and proceed to take humanity's lands away from them, cover the Earth in an expanding barrier that kills everyone, and deny entry into Equestria from unconverted humans. The ponies of Equestrians For Humans are all to too happy to point it out to them.
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* AssInAmbassador: Twilight Sparkle ends up offending ''the entire human race'' and [[spoiler:sparking a war between Earth and Equestria]].
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* AssInAmbassador: Twilight Sparkle ends up offending ''the ''[[UpToEleven the entire human race'' race]]'' and [[spoiler:sparking a war between Earth and Equestria]].
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** One poster made by Equestrians For Humans asks why ponies can't be friends with humans, if they already are with gryphons and dragons.
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** One poster made by Equestrians For Humans asks why ponies can't be friends with humans, if they already are with gryphons and dragons.
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* AliensAreBastards: Subverted. While ponies like Twilight Sparkle ''definitely'' qualify, there's also ones like [[MeaningfulName Ice Breaker]] and Lyra, who do not agree with what Celestia is doing.
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* Deconstruction: Of the Conversion Bureau. Humanity reacts appropiately to the ponies misanthropism, the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble are further examined, and we have human sympathizing ponies.
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-->''"We've seen what your greed and corruption have done to your world. How could we possibly let you into Equestria?"''
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* NotHimself: Played [[TearJerker painfully straight]] with Eddy, now Thunderhead.
-->''"He's a pleasant smiling zombie with wings."''
** One poster made by Equestrians For Humans asks why ponies can't be friends with humans, if they already are with gryphons and dragons.
-->''"He's a pleasant smiling zombie with wings."''
** One poster made by Equestrians For Humans asks why ponies can't be friends with humans, if they already are with gryphons and dragons.
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* PhysicalGod: Celestia and Luna.
** JerkassGod: Although we haven't heard Luna's stance on the subject, Celestia has said that she stands by [[AssInAmbassador Twilight Sparkle's]] words.
** JerkassGod: Although we haven't heard Luna's stance on the subject, Celestia has said that she stands by [[AssInAmbassador Twilight Sparkle's]] words.
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* NextSundayAD: Takes place in 2017/2018, with no significant differences from the present.
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* AssInAmbassador: Twilight Sparkle ends up offending ''the entire human race'' and [[spoiler:sparking a war between Earth and Equestria]].
* FantasticRacism: Twilight Sparkle is ''very'' biased against humans.
* FantasticRacism: Twilight Sparkle is ''very'' biased against humans.
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* MoralMyopia: Bon Bon brings up how they don't owe humans anything, saying that they're "weird". Zecora reminds her that the ponies once said the same of herself too.
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* RousingSpeech: What U.S. diplomat Ellen Rowe gives after the United Nations General Assembly [[spoiler: declares war on Equestria]].
** Several readers gave their own speeches in the comments section.
* RousingSpeech: What U.S. diplomat Ellen Rowe gives after the United Nations General Assembly [[spoiler: declares war on Equestria]].
** Several readers gave their own speeches in the comments section.
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** The slogan of the Equestrians For Humans is [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/V "Friendship is universal."]]
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** One of the bloggers is named [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/NESGodzillaCreepypasta "StillTheBest1973."]]
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* ShoutOut: One of the bloggers is named [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/NESGodzillaCreepypasta "StillTheBest1973."]]
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**One of the bloggers is named [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/NESGodzillaCreepypasta "StillTheBest1973."]]
**The slogan of the Equestrians For Humans is [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/V "Friendship is universal."]]
**One of the bloggers is named [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/NESGodzillaCreepypasta "StillTheBest1973."]]
**The slogan of the Equestrians For Humans is [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/V "Friendship is universal."]]
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* HumansAreBastards: What Twilight Sparkle expresses in her interview with a reporter.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26651/The-Conversion-Bureau%3A-Not-Alone The Conversion Bureau: Not Alone]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic. It is a different take on ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau''.
The Equestrian landform appeared suddenly in the South Atlantic. While humanity extended welcome to the ponies, there were those who had doubts. These doubts proved founded once the ponies' imperialism came to light, leading humanity to gear up for war. There are those ponies who disagree with the Princesses' actions, though.
Presented through newscasts, postings and other formats in addition to standard prose.
!This fanfic contains examples of:
* FictionalDocument
* InferredHolocaust: This story examines the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble, such as human displacement, something many other TCB works ignore.
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The Equestrian landform appeared suddenly in the South Atlantic. While humanity extended welcome to the ponies, there were those who had doubts. These doubts proved founded once the ponies' imperialism came to light, leading humanity to gear up for war. There are those ponies who disagree with the Princesses' actions, though.
Presented through newscasts, postings and other formats in addition to standard prose.
!This fanfic contains examples of:
* FictionalDocument
* InferredHolocaust: This story examines the effects of the expanding Equestrian bubble, such as human displacement, something many other TCB works ignore.
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