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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Millicent's cat wasn't named in the books while this fic names him Archimedes.

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* AdaptationDeviation: As part of Dumbledore's reforms, Snape is required to teach Hogwarts NEWT students who score at least an E in their [=OWLs=] and becomes the school's unofficial Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher for fifth years and up.

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As part of Dumbledore's reforms, Snape is only required to teach Hogwarts NEWT students who score at least an E in their [=OWLs=] and becomes the school's unofficial Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher for fifth years and up.up.
** Instead of Dumbledore anonymously gifting Harry his father's invisibility cloak for his first Christmas at Hogwarts, Sirius gets the cloak back from the headmaster years prior and passes it on to Harry for his 11th birthday.



** Downplayed with Colin Creevey. He was never a jerk in canon, but he did often annoy Harry with his fanboy antics after starting school at Hogwarts. Here, [[spoiler:due to having met Harry at Remus's magical preschool]], he knows that Harry doesn't enjoy being treated like a celebrity and is thus much more respectful of Harry's privacy.
* AdaptationalSexuality: While in canon he was never mentioned to be considering even dating someone, here [[spoiler:Charlie Weasley]] is dating a woman from his workplace [[spoiler:and plans to marry her since [[ShotgunWedding she's pregnant]]]].

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** Downplayed with Colin Creevey. He was never a jerk in canon, but he did often annoy Harry with his fanboy antics after starting school at Hogwarts. Here, [[spoiler:due to having met Harry at Remus's magical preschool]], he Colin knows that Harry doesn't enjoy being treated like a celebrity and is thus much more respectful of Harry's his privacy.
* AdaptationalSexuality: While in canon canon, he was never mentioned to be considering even dating someone, here [[spoiler:Charlie Weasley]] is dating a woman from his workplace [[spoiler:and plans to marry her since [[ShotgunWedding she's pregnant]]]].
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* FemaleMisogynist: Downplayed with Molly, who believes a girl doesn't need to know how to fly a broom. Though she does relent as her daughter becomes interested in Quidditch.
* FeminineMotherTomboyishDaughter: A source of tension between Molly and Ginny, as while the latter is not devoid of feminine traits, the former tries too hard to make her only daughter have interests that are stereotypically girly. This ironically leaves Ginny ''less'' inclined towards those pursuits because she resents her mother trying to fit her into a mold she doesn't like, and drives her to rebel by secretly teaching herself how to fly on her brothers' old brooms and later playing Quidditch at Hogwarts.

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* FemaleMisogynist: Downplayed with Molly, who believes a girl doesn't need to know how to fly a broom. broom despite the existence of all-female Quidditch teams like the Hollyhead Harpies. Though she does relent as her daughter becomes interested in Quidditch.
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* FeminineMotherTomboyishDaughter: A source of tension between Molly and Ginny, as while the latter is not devoid of feminine traits, the former tries too hard to make her only daughter have interests that are impose stereotypically girly. girly interests on her only daughter. This ironically leaves makes Ginny ''less'' inclined towards those pursuits because she resents her mother trying to fit her into a mold she doesn't like, and drives her to rebel by secretly teaching herself how to fly on her brothers' old brooms and later playing Quidditch at Hogwarts.

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** [[spoiler:Walburga Black]] orders Kreacher to "get help" [[spoiler:when she experiences a heart attack]]. Since Kreacher is required to obey his masters' orders, he's forced to try and bring healers from St. Mungo's inside the house past all the wards meant to keep intruders out instead of just taking [[spoiler:Walburga]] to St. Mungo's. [[spoiler:By the time they finally reach her, it's too late for them to revive her.]]

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** [[spoiler:Walburga Black]] orders Kreacher to "get help" [[spoiler:when she experiences suffers a heart attack]]. Since Kreacher is required to obey his masters' orders, orders to the letter, he's forced to try and bring healers from St. Mungo's inside the house past all the wards meant to keep intruders out instead of just taking [[spoiler:Walburga]] to St. Mungo's. [[spoiler:By the time they finally reach her, it's too late for them to revive her.]]



** After [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy is arrested]], Voldemort edits out his words to make Draco think [[spoiler:his father got captured in the fight, instead of because Voldemort torturing him, taking his wand and leaving him to the Aurors]].

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** After [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy is arrested]], Voldemort edits out his words to make Draco think [[spoiler:his father got captured in the fight, instead of because Voldemort torturing him, taking his wand and leaving him to the Aurors]].



** [[spoiler:Harry's use of ''Protego Maxima'' to reflect the Basilisk's gaze back on itself creates a feedback loop as the Basilisk is transfixed by its own gaze, culminating in its eyes exploding despite the Basilisk surviving the "attack".]]

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** [[spoiler:Harry's use of ''Protego Maxima'' to reflect the Basilisk's gaze back on onto itself creates a feedback loop as the Basilisk is transfixed by its own gaze, culminating in its eyes exploding despite the Basilisk surviving the "attack".]]



* FemaleMisogynist: Downplayed with Molly, who believes a girl doesn't need to know how to fly a broom. Though she does relent as her daughter becomes interested in Quidditch.
* FeminineMotherTomboyishDaughter: A source of tension between Molly and Ginny, as while the latter is not devoid of feminine traits, the former tries too hard to make her only daughter have interests that are stereotypically girly. This ironically leaves Ginny ''less'' inclined towards those pursuits because she resents her mother trying to fit her into a mold she doesn't like, and drives her to rebel by secretly teaching herself how to fly on her brothers' old brooms and later playing Quidditch at Hogwarts.



* FixFic: Sirius decides not to go after Peter Pettigrew and instead to tell Dumbledore of the latter's betrayal, which triggers a series of far-ranging changes. The author also deconstructs and lampshades various plot points from canon to portray events more realistically, and IdiotBall moments tend to be averted as well.

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* FixFic: Sirius decides not to go after Peter Pettigrew and instead to tell inform Dumbledore of the latter's betrayal, which triggers a series of far-ranging changes. The author also deconstructs and lampshades various plot points from canon to portray events more realistically, and IdiotBall moments tend to be averted as well.



** Dumbledore talks to Myrtle and convinces her to change her attitude to stop driving people away. She also agrees to testify in court about the events surrounding her death, which end ups exonerating Hagrid and helping everyone realize that the monster in the Chamber of Secrets is a Basilisk years earlier than in canon.

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** Dumbledore talks to Myrtle and convinces her to change her attitude to stop driving people away. She also agrees to testify in court about the events surrounding her death, which end ups ends up exonerating Hagrid and helping everyone realize that the monster in the Chamber of Secrets is a Basilisk years earlier than in canon.



** Frank Bryce survives due to Voldemort hiding the Riddle House under a Fidelius Charm, preventing Frank from coming across the latter.

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** Frank Bryce survives due to Voldemort hiding the Riddle House under a Fidelius Charm, preventing Frank from coming across the latter.him.



** [[spoiler:Dumbledore shows the memories he collected on Voldemort's life with more people than just Harry. This not only provides with more people that know the truth, they are also capable of providing better suggestions about it, allows the group to find where two Horcruxes are (even if one of them is inaccessible right now) and destroy one of them, and gives Sirius and Kreacher closure for Regulus's disappearance.]]

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** [[spoiler:Dumbledore shows the memories he collected on Voldemort's life with more people than just Harry. This not only provides him with more people allies that know the truth, they are also capable of providing offering better suggestions about it, allows allowing the group to find where two Horcruxes are (even if one of them is inaccessible right now) and destroy one of them, and gives Sirius and Kreacher closure for Regulus's disappearance.]]



** Neither Mrs. Norris, Justin Finch-Fletchley, Nearly-Headless Nick, nor Penelope Clearwater are Petrified. [[spoiler:Sally-Anne Perks, Myrtle, Luna, and Pansy are instead Petrified in the latter three's place.]] Those who do get Petrified are also quickly cured thanks Sirius donating a large supply of Mandrake extract to the school, eliminating the school's need to grow their own Mandrakes.

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** Neither Mrs. Norris, Justin Finch-Fletchley, Nearly-Headless Nick, nor Penelope Clearwater are Petrified. [[spoiler:Sally-Anne Perks, Myrtle, Luna, and Pansy are instead Petrified in the latter three's place.]] Those who do get Petrified are also quickly cured thanks Sirius donating a large supply of Mandrake extract to the school, Hogwarts, eliminating the school's need to grow their own Mandrakes.



* SpoiledBrat: Dudley [[spoiler:before his close encounter with a Dementor]] is an obvious example, but Remus abandons a tutoring job because the girl shows no interest in improving and blames him for her trouble.

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* SpoiledBrat: Dudley [[spoiler:before his close encounter with a Dementor]] is an and Draco are obvious example, examples, but Remus abandons a tutoring job because the girl shows no interest in improving and blames him for her trouble.



** [[spoiler:After Pettigrew tries to disguise his attack on Harry as a failed robbery attempt, Dumbledore and Sirius can easily tell that the facts don't fit, because the thief would have had ample time to take Harry's and Ginny's pouches, but only sliced Harry's pouch.]]

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** [[spoiler:After Pettigrew tries to disguise his attack on Harry as a failed robbery attempt, Dumbledore and Sirius can easily tell that the facts don't fit, because the thief would have had ample time to take both Harry's and Ginny's pouches, but only sliced Harry's pouch.]]



* SureLetsGoWithThat: [[spoiler:After becoming the Head of the House of Black after Walburga's death]], Sirius remarks that he doesn't really need a house-elf. Kreacher immediately assumes this means Sirius intends to free him, prompting Kreacher to throw away his pride and grovel in hopes of avoiding the dishonor. However, Sirius really just planned on giving Kreacher to Narcissa, a "proper" pure-blood whom Kreacher had actually wanted to go serve. Nevertheless, Sirius decides to pretend as if Kreacher's promise of loyalty convinced him to change his mind and let Kreacher continue serving the House of Black. [[spoiler:This ultimately leads to Kreacher becoming genuinely loyal to Sirius, as well as Sirius growing much more appreciative of Kreacher.]]

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* SureLetsGoWithThat: [[spoiler:After becoming the Head of the House of Black after Walburga's death]], Sirius remarks that he doesn't really need a house-elf. Kreacher immediately assumes this means Sirius intends to free him, prompting Kreacher him to throw away his pride and grovel in hopes of avoiding the dishonor. However, Sirius really just planned on giving Kreacher to Narcissa, a "proper" pure-blood whom Kreacher had actually wanted to go serve. Nevertheless, Sirius decides to pretend as if Kreacher's promise of loyalty convinced him to change his mind and let Kreacher continue serving the House of Black. [[spoiler:This ultimately leads to Kreacher becoming genuinely loyal to Sirius, as well as Sirius growing much more appreciative of Kreacher.]]
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* EroticDream: More like an Erotic Daydream, happening in the aftermath of the Six taking nude pictures of Draco and Pancy, where [[ShowerScene a showering Luna]] imagines herself naked and Neville taking a picture of her.

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* EroticDream: More like an Erotic Daydream, happening in the aftermath of the Six taking nude pictures of Draco and Pancy, Pansy, where [[ShowerScene a showering Luna]] imagines herself naked and a clothed Neville taking a picture of her.
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** [[spoiler:During the broomstick lesson at the magical preschool, Luna's broom overshoots and smacks her in the nose, much like Ron's did in the film version of the first book.]]

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* EroticDream: More like an Erotic Daydream, happening in the aftermath of the Six taking nude pictures of Draco and Pancy, where [[ShowerScene a showering Luna]] imagines herself naked and Neville taking a picture of her.



* ShowerScene: One during Year Four, where the Gryffindor girls are seen reacting to Luna spacing out.[[note]](She's having an [[EroticDream erotic daydream]] involving her and Neville.)[[/note]]

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* ShowerScene: One during Year Four, where the Gryffindor girls are seen reacting to Luna spacing out.[[note]](She's [[note]](She was having an [[EroticDream erotic daydream]] involving her and Neville.)[[/note]]
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* ShowerScene: One during Year Four, where the Gryffindor girls are seen reacting to Luna spacing out.[[note]](She's having an [[EroticDream erotic daydream]] involving her and Neville.)[[/note]]
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** [[spoiler:MI-X reveals its existence to the Chosen Six and their families in order to recruit them to prepare for the moment they must start working.]]

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** [[spoiler:MI-X reveals its existence to the Chosen Six and their families in order to recruit them to prepare for the moment they must start working.working together.]]

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* TheirFirstTime: Hermione decides to make this her present to Ron for his seventeenth birthday.

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Hermione decides to make this her present to Ron for his seventeenth birthday.birthday.
** The other members of the Six have theirs in the aftermath of the attack on Hogsmeade at the end of Year Six, as well as [[spoiler:Dudley and Millicent in an unused bedroom]].



* VillainRevealsTheSecret: [[spoiler:In chapter 77, to break Harry during their fight, Voldemort reveals that Snape was the Death Eater spy who alerted him to the original prophecy and when he realized it would put the woman he secretly loved, Harry's mother Lilly, in the Dark Lord's crosshairs, defected to Dumbledore, who covered up his crime.]]

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* VillainRevealsTheSecret: [[spoiler:In chapter 77, to break Harry during their fight, Voldemort reveals that Snape was the Death Eater spy who alerted him to the original prophecy and when he realized it would put the woman he secretly loved, Harry's mother Lilly, Lily, in the Dark Lord's crosshairs, defected to Dumbledore, who covered up his crime.]]

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* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: It's less the fact that Hermione is that smart than her attitude about it, which causes her social isolation at primary school. Worse, she is completely oblivious she's actually doing it.

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* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: It's less the fact that Hermione is that smart than her [[InsufferableGenius attitude about it, it]], which causes her social isolation at primary school. Worse, she is completely oblivious she's actually doing it.



* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens every time Umbridge tries to teach after opposition to her tyranny ramps up, to the point teaching soons becomes impossible as dozens of students barf everywhere, generating a nauseating odor. In one of the last classes she tries to hold, Luna goes as far as pretending to ask her something so that she can approach and vomit on Umbridge's shoes.

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* VillainRevealsTheSecret: [[spoiler:In chapter 77, to break Harry during their fight, Voldemort reveals that Snape was the Death Eater spy who alerted him to the original prophecy and when he realized it would put the woman he secretly loved, Harry's mother Lilly, in the Dark Lord's crosshairs, defected to Dumbledore, who covered up his crime.]]
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens every time Umbridge tries to teach after opposition to her tyranny ramps up, to the point teaching soons soon becomes impossible as dozens of students barf everywhere, generating a nauseating odor. In one of the last classes she tries to hold, Luna goes as far as pretending to ask her something so that she can approach and vomit on Umbridge's shoes.
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** WordOfGod is that the reason that Romilda Vane did not attempt the love potion on Harry like in canon, is that she was smart enough to know that doing so [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend would end very badly for her.]]
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty:
** After using the Imperious defense and his wealth to avoid arrest after Voldemort's first defeat, as well as getting away with the Basilisk Crisis in year 2, Lucius Malfoy is dragged before Voldemort and crucio'd by him after the Quidditch World Cup finale before year 4. He is then betrayed by Voldemort during the Battle at the Ministry at the climax of year 5, and captured and imprisoned by the Aurors.
** Theodore Nott's father, after paying his way out of all the charges against him as a Death Eater, and numerous attempts to bully his son into joining the Death Eaters, is captured during the battle of Hogsmeade and disowned by his son.

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** Voldemort tells Harry [[spoiler:that Snape was the one that told him the Prophecy]].



* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: The end of Harry's sixth year is marked by [[spoiler:the destruction of Hogsmeade]].



* RageBreakingPoint: [[spoiler:Sirius]] explodes in rage when he learns that [[spoiler:Snape was the one that told Voldemort the Prophecy, which led to James's and Lily's deaths]].



* SecretTestOfCharacter: When Amelia Bones visits Prime Minister John Major to update him into what's going on in magical Britain, the latter keeps the fact that he already knows everything secret to see if she's serious in her commitment to improve the situation. Fortunately, she passes it - although she notes that this may bring more trouble to her if it's revealed.

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* SecretTestOfCharacter: SecretTestOfCharacter:
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When Amelia Bones visits Prime Minister John Major to update him into what's going on in magical Britain, the latter keeps the fact that he already knows everything secret to see if she's serious in her commitment to improve the situation. Fortunately, she passes it - although she notes that this may bring more trouble to her if it's revealed.revealed.
** In a villainous version of this, [[spoiler:Voldemort forcing Draco and Pansy to do everything they did was one for ''Snape'' in order to test his loyalty]].



** Pretty much everyone calls out Dumbledore for [[spoiler:covering Snape's role in James and Lily Potter's deaths]].



** [[spoiler:Umbridge hires Skeeter to find dirt on Sirius Black. When Skeeter brings the information, she promptly betrays her by forcing her to hand it over, having an Obliviator erase her memories of both her deal and the work she did and then having her sent to Azkaban.]]

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** [[spoiler:Umbridge [[spoiler: Umbridge hires Skeeter to find dirt on Sirius Black. When Skeeter brings the information, she promptly betrays her by forcing her to hand it over, having an Obliviator erase her memories of both her deal and the work she did and then having her sent to Azkaban.]]
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** When Peter Pettigrew reveals he sold out James, Lily, and Harry to Voldemort because he resented the rest of the Marauders for looking down on him and never treating him as an equal, Sirius admits that they were all wrong to treat him like that but points out that still doesn't excuse Peter's betrayal of the Potters and being an accessory for murder.
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** Daphne Greengrass is a very obscure character within canon, getting only a brief mention during the OWLs exam during 5th year. Here, like with many fanfics featuring the character, her role is increased where she is friends with Millicent and [[spoiler:Dudley]].

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** Daphne Greengrass is a very obscure character within canon, getting only a brief mention during the OWLs OWL exam during 5th year. Here, like with many fanfics featuring the character, her role is increased where she is friends with Millicent and [[spoiler:Dudley]].
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** Daphne Greengrass is a very obscure character within canon, getting only a brief mention. Here, like with many fanfics featuring the character, her role is increased where she is friends with Millicent and [[spoiler:Dudley]].

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** Daphne Greengrass is a very obscure character within canon, getting only a brief mention.mention during the OWLs exam during 5th year. Here, like with many fanfics featuring the character, her role is increased where she is friends with Millicent and [[spoiler:Dudley]].
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** Played straight when another team recalls a situation where a muggle-born girl was killed by her own mother with a cleaver just a couple of days after receiving her Hogwarts letter.

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** Played straight when another team of Obliviators sent to the Dursleys somberly recalls a situation where a muggle-born girl was [[OffingTheOffspring killed by her own mother mother]] with a cleaver just a couple of days after receiving her Hogwarts letter.
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** Ludo is shown facing more consequences for his unethical behavior and incompetence, such as getting called out for trying to collect sports bets from underage children and being in hot water with the Ministry over not reporting Bertha Jorkins's disappearance. He's eventually arrested and is outed as having abused his position to commit massive fraud, which never happened in canon. [[spoiler:He is killed when Voldemort attacks the prison to free his followers and sets the Dementors on the rest of the prisoners.]]

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** Ludo Bagman is shown facing more consequences for his unethical behavior and incompetence, such as getting called out for trying to collect sports bets from underage children and being in hot water with the Ministry over not reporting Bertha Jorkins's disappearance. He's eventually arrested and is outed as having abused his position to commit massive fraud, which never happened in canon. [[spoiler:He is killed when Voldemort attacks the prison to free his followers and sets the Dementors on the rest of the prisoners.]]
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** Romilda Vane receives a month of detention for the love potion incident.
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* BaitAndSwitch: During the school year, Draco and Pansy have been [[spoiler:using the Vanishing Cabinet]], giving the feeling that they plan to do something similar to what happens in canon. Instead, [[spoiler:the Death Eaters only send one person in to create an illusion of Hogwarts burning to distract the people defending Hogsmeade, allowing the former to attack the town almost unopposed]].

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* BaitAndSwitch: During the school year, Draco and Pansy have been [[spoiler:using the Vanishing Cabinet]], giving the feeling that they plan to do something similar to what happens in canon. Instead, [[spoiler:the Death Eaters only send one person in to create an illusion of Hogwarts burning to distract the people defending Hogsmeade, allowing the former them to attack the town almost unopposed]].



** Zigzagged for Fenrir Greyback. It's brought up that one of his followers lost two fingers and spent a week recovering from his injuries because he approached Greyback while the latter was venting out his anger. On the other hand, when one member of Greyback's pack questions his recent tactics of organizing multiple random attacks, Greyback replies "No questions are stupid" and explains that his goal was to draw attention away from his main target. Moreover, when discussing his plans for [[spoiler:an attack on Hogwarts]], he's upfront about how most of them will die, gives everyone a chance to back out, and feels genuine pride when none of them do. [[spoiler:Ultimately {{Subverted| Trope}} once he eventually gloats about the tightening of laws against werewolves furthering their radicalization, as well as him having no care for the cost.]]
** Even Voldemort can be this on occasion; he at least tolerates Barty Crouch, Jr questioning his plans, acknowledging the young man as one of his most loyal and intelligent followers.

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** Zigzagged for Fenrir Greyback. It's brought up that one of his followers lost two fingers and spent a week recovering from his injuries because he approached Greyback while the latter was venting out his anger. On the other hand, when one member of Greyback's pack questions his recent tactics of organizing multiple random attacks, Greyback replies replies, "No questions are stupid" and explains that his goal was to draw attention away from his main target. Moreover, when discussing his plans for [[spoiler:an attack on Hogwarts]], he's upfront about how most of them will die, gives everyone a chance to back out, and feels genuine pride when none of them do. [[spoiler:Ultimately {{Subverted| Trope}} once he eventually gloats about the tightening of laws against werewolves furthering their radicalization, as well as him having no care for the cost.]]
** Even Voldemort can be this on occasion; he at least tolerates Barty Crouch, Jr Jr. questioning his plans, acknowledging the young man as one of his most loyal and intelligent followers.



* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: Averted. When the Six tell Draco and Pansy that the price for their naked photos to stay hidden is to cut off contact with Skeeter and Draco screams that it is blackmail, Harry bluntly replies that yes, it is.

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* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: Averted. When the Six tell Draco and Pansy that the price for their naked photos to stay hidden is to cut off contact with Skeeter and Draco screams that it is blackmail, Harry [[BluntYes bluntly replies that yes, it is.is]].



* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:Harry has one when Voldemort tells him that Snape was the one that revealed the contents of the original prophecy to him.]]

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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:Harry has one when Voldemort tells him that Snape was the one that who revealed the contents of the original prophecy to him.]]
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* HeroicBSOC: [[spoiler:Harry has one when Voldemort tells him that Snape was the one that revealed the contents of the original prophecy to him.]]

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* HeroicBSOC: HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:Harry has one when Voldemort tells him that Snape was the one that revealed the contents of the original prophecy to him.]]
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* BaitAndSwitch: During the school year, Draco and Pansy have been [[spoiler:fixing the Vanishing Cabinet]], giving the feeling that they plan to do something similar to what happens in canon. Instead, [[spoiler:the Death Eaters only send one person in to create an illusion of Hogwarts burning to distract the people defending Hogsmeade, allowing the former to attack the town almost unopposed]].

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* BaitAndSwitch: During the school year, Draco and Pansy have been [[spoiler:fixing [[spoiler:using the Vanishing Cabinet]], giving the feeling that they plan to do something similar to what happens in canon. Instead, [[spoiler:the Death Eaters only send one person in to create an illusion of Hogwarts burning to distract the people defending Hogsmeade, allowing the former to attack the town almost unopposed]].

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** The Griffyndor Quidditch team immediately reports to Madam Hooch that one of the Bludgers has been tampered with, with it being implied that they know they can simply replace the rogue Bludger without having to forfeit. Madam Hooch in turn quickly notices the Bludger isn't acting like it should and tries to stop the game.

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** The Griffyndor Gryffindor Quidditch team immediately reports to Madam Hooch that one of the Bludgers has been tampered with, with it being implied that they know they can simply replace the rogue Bludger without having to forfeit. Madam Hooch in turn quickly notices the Bludger isn't acting like it should and tries to stop the game.


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* HonoraryUncle: Harry refers to both Sirius and Remus as such throughout the fix due to their active involvement in his life and upbringing.

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* HonoraryUncle: Harry refers to both Sirius and Remus as such throughout the fix fic due to their active involvement in his life and upbringing.
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''The Chosen Six'' is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/626090/Tribun Tribun]]. It's written in the author's usual style of deconstructing and lampshading plot points of the original, while at the same time creating a believable alternate universe.

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''The Chosen Six'' is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/626090/Tribun Tribun]].{{Creator/Tribun}}. It's written in the author's usual style of deconstructing and lampshading plot points of the original, while at the same time creating a believable alternate universe.
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** Dudley and his faithful gang of Piers, Dennis, Malcolm, and Gordon of course are canon examples and also appear here, and it's shown what "Harry Hunting" involves - and worse. [[spoiler:Once Dudley wises up, the gang continues on without him, with Piers becoming the leader. Eventually, all four end up in juvenile hall.]]

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** Dudley and his faithful gang of Piers, Dennis, Malcolm, and Gordon of course are canon examples and also appear here, and it's shown what "Harry Hunting" involves - and worse. [[spoiler:Once Dudley wises up, the gang continues on without him, with Piers becoming the leader. Eventually, all four end up in juvenile hall.hall, as well as Piers being expelled from Smeltings, and Gordon's family disowning him.]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Harry refers to his guardians Thomas and Veronica Evans as Uncle Tom (not to be confused with a certain Dark Lord) and Aunt Verni, respectively.

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