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* AmbitionIsEvil: Plenty of Death Eaters in both wars end up in the thrall of Voldemort because they see him as a chance for political advancement of themselves or their pet causes. Also, Mrs. Pankinson ends up serving a life sentence in Azkaban for a series of chilling crimes committed partially to try to impress Bellatrix Lestrange and be taken under her wing.
* AnachronicOrder: The chapters jump around between characters, and any one chapter may cover anything from a few days to most of a character's lifetime, while subsequent chapters may give a different character's view of an already-covered time period.
* AnachronicOrder: The chapters jump around between characters, and any one chapter may cover anything from a few days to most of a character's lifetime, while subsequent chapters may give a different character's view of an already-covered time period.
* CriticalStaffingShortage: The roles of Hogwart's deputy headmaster, head of House, and Transfigurations professor are normally filled by two or three different people, but [=McGonogall=] is given all three jobs (and the novice Snape is made head of Slytherin) due to fewer people wanting to teach at Hogwarts after the first war against Voldemort.
* FamilyThemeNaming: Petunia and Lily Evans' mother and grandfather also have flower names, causing Narcissa to point out to ''Pansy'' Pankinson that the Evans family could easily be a squib branch of her family, and that even if they aren't, imagining it's true might help her care less about blood purity.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to the hurried nature of their KangarooCourt incarceration, it’s years before Sirius finds out that the Longbottoms were tortured into insanity or Belalatrix finds out that Sirius is also a prisoner.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to the hurried nature of their KangarooCourt incarceration, it’s it's years before Sirius finds out that the Longbottoms were tortured into insanity or Belalatrix Bellatrix finds out that Sirius is also a prisoner. prisoner.
* LonelyTogether: In the first couple years after the war, Pansy reflects that after trying to turn Harry in before the Battle of Hogwarts, her only remaining friends are Goyle and Nott, who are both pariahs themselves for aiding the Death Eaters in torturing people.
* LonelyTogether: In the first couple years after the war, Pansy reflects that after trying to turn Harry in before the Battle of Hogwarts, her only remaining friends are Goyle and Nott, who are both pariahs themselves for aiding the Death Eaters in torturing people.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Cyrus Diggory believes not investigating Harry's claims that his name was placed in the Goblet of Fire (due to Fudge not wanting a scandal about the Tournament's security) was the worse mistake he ever made. An investigation might have saved his grandson's life.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Cyrus Diggory believes not investigating Harry's claims that his name was placed in the Goblet of Fire (due to Fudge not wanting a scandal about the Tournament's security) was the worse worst mistake he ever made. An investigation might have saved his grandson's life.
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* WhatTheHellHero: When Mad-Eye Moody tries to convince Sirius not to go to the Department of Mysteries, Sirius tells him to shut up, saying that Mad Eye owes him this after he and the rest of the Order let him rot in Azkaban without even giving him a chance to deny the allegations against him.
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* WhatTheHellHero: When Mad-Eye Moody tries to convince Sirius not to go to the Department of Mysteries, Sirius tells him to shut up, saying that Mad Eye owes him this after he and the rest of the Order let him rot in Azkaban without even giving him a chance to deny the allegations against him.him while he was in a rational state of mind.
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* PsychicAssistedSuicide: Regulus and Bellatrix kill [[spoiler:Alphard Black]] by using the Imperius curse to make him take a lethal amount of his drug stash.
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* GoKartingWithBowser: Junior Death Eater Regulus is on better terms with several of the Order of the Phoenix-affiliated kids than Harry ever was with Draco and his cronies. They occasionally chat together at mealtimes or while working on spells and are guarded but affable and trying to understand each other better. However, the tension is still there, such as when Regulus tells Gladys that she'd [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye better not put off any conversations she wants to have with her grandmother Dorcas Meadows]], due to Dorcas being on the Death Eaters' radar for her Order of the Phoenix work.
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* RapeByProxy: While trying to set a trap for the Prewett Brothers by using a family of their friends as bait, Avery uses the imperius curse to make the youngest hostage have sex with his mother. [[NiceJobFixingItVillain This sadistic distraction ruins the trap by making them miss Molly Weasley arriving with her brothers, who she manages to save, at least for then, along with shone of the hostages]].
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* RapeByProxy: While trying to set a trap for the Prewett Brothers by using a family of their friends as bait, Avery uses and Mulciber use the imperius Imperius curse to make the youngest hostage have sex with his mother. [[NiceJobFixingItVillain This sadistic distraction ruins the trap by making them miss Molly Weasley arriving with her brothers, who she manages to save, at least for then, along with shone of the hostages]].
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: The only Azakaban to treat Sirius well is a man named Gibbon, and it turns out this good treatment is because he is a Death Eater sympathizer who thinks Sirius really did betray the Order of the Phoenix.
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* DeadGuyJunior: Regulus is named after his deceased great-uncle on his father’s side of the family.
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* DeadGuyJunior: Regulus is named after his deceased great-uncle on his father’s side of the family.family, who the family greatly misses.
* EveryoneHasStandards: [=McGonagall=] mentions that, while Mad Eye Moody has some KnightTemplar aspects, he was appalled to learn that the Hogwarts staff assumed he would have ever cast the unforgivable curses instead of students as a learning experience like his imposter Crouch did.
* IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten: After Regulus captures one of Eliphias Doge's granddaughters during a mission, his fellow Death Eaters tell him to use the Imperius curse on the girl largely to observe if he has the resolve to. He makes an effort to, but her magic is too strong, and he doesn’t really want to anyway.
* ImprobableInfantSurvival: Eliphias Doge's six-year-old granddaughter Bryony is captured by Death Eaters, several of whom show some WouldHurtAChild indications, only to escape when seeing Kreacher causes her to call out for her own family house elf, who appears, grabs her, and disappparates them both to safety.
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* InspectorJavert: Downplayed but Cyrus Diggory, grandfather of Cedric Diggory, is not so quick to forgive Narcissa after the war and seizes a pretext to arrest her and douse with with veritaserum to try and find out any previously unknown crimes.
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* InspectorJavert: Downplayed but Cyrus Diggory, grandfather of Cedric Diggory, is not so quick to forgive Narcissa for abetting various Death Eater crimes after the war and seizes a pretext to arrest her and douse with with veritaserum to try and find out any previously unknown crimes.
* RapeByProxy: While trying to set a trap for the Prewett Brothers by using a family of their friends as bait, Avery uses the imperius curse to make the youngest hostage have sex with his mother. [[NiceJobFixingItVillain This sadistic distraction ruins the trap by making them miss Molly Weasley arriving with her brothers, who she manages to save, at least for then, along with shone of the hostages]].
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* ThatManIsDead: At times, Bellatrix is described this way due to her time in Azkaban.
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* ThatManIsDead: ThatManIsDead:
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** Regulus feels that Voldemort may have had some goodness or reason (or at least limited restraint) in him once, but he killed the person he used to be the moment he split his soul making a horcrux.
** At times, Bellatrix is described
** Regulus feels that Voldemort may have had some goodness or reason (or at least limited restraint) in him once, but he killed the person he used to be the moment he split his soul making a horcrux.
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* LongLostRelative: Here it's speculated that muggleborns are all descended form squibs who were abandoned by pureblood families, with it even being noted that Hermoine could be descended from a Black in this manner.
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* LongLostRelative: Here it's speculated that muggleborns are all descended form from squibs who were abandoned by pureblood families, with it even being noted that Hermoine could be descended from a Black in this manner.
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* AccidentalSuicide: Druella Black burns herself to death with magical fire that she summons in a desperate attempt to drive a swarm of dementors out of her house after they spend weeks hovering around to make Druella and her husband miserable (likely [[TheDogBitesBack at the instigation of their estranged daughter Bellatrix]]).
* AdaptationalVillainy: While Regulus and Narcissa get a SympatheticPOV, both are also involved in various deeds far blacker (albeit not without nuanced motives) than anything they did in canon, such as [[spoiler:killing Regulus's uncle Alphard and setting up the Prewett brothers to be ambushed and killed.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: While Regulus and Narcissa get a SympatheticPOV, both are also involved in various deeds far blacker (albeit not without nuanced motives) than anything they did in canon, such as [[spoiler:killing Regulus's uncle Alphard and setting up the Prewett brothers to be ambushed and killed.]]
* AlasPoorVillain: For all of their scores of nauseating pureblood supremacist and AbusiveParents moments, the last days of Walburga and Orion Black are surprisingly sad as they mourn Regulus, reflect on the broken status of their extended family, come to hate the Dark Arts, and even regain a little affection and longing for Sirius that they never manage to convey to their older son.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Black's, and nearly every other pureblood family.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Black's, Blacks, and nearly every other pureblood family.family are full of members who hate each other.
* DescentIntoAddiction: After losing her immediate family and falling out with most of the few peers who can tolerate her (pureblood supremacists whose support for Voldemort makes her furious after what happened to Regulus), Walburga Black spends the last years of her life constantly using the kinds of drugs she once disapproved of her brother Alphard selling. She is at her nastiest during the rare moments when she is sober, and substance abuse hastens her death by a number of years.
* ImpoverishedPatrician: Cyngus Black, one of the cruelest and proudest members of his BlueBlood family, ends up in this state after his wife burns their house down while trying to clear out dementors. Cyngus is forced to live off of his sister's begrudging charity. They don't get along well, and she kicks him out with instructions to ask his daughter Narcissa to let him move into Malfoy Manor. Narcissa's violent refusal briefly sends Cyngus back to his sister's house before he emigrates to South America and spends the rest of his days as a con artist who can't even afford a house to himself.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to the nature of their KangarooCourt incarceration, it’s years before Sirius finds out that the Longbottoms were tortured into insanity or Belalatrix finds out that Sirius is also a prisoner.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to the hurried nature of their KangarooCourt incarceration, it’s years before Sirius finds out that the Longbottoms were tortured into insanity or Belalatrix finds out that Sirius is also a prisoner.
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* DrivenToSuicide: After hearing of Regulus's death, [[spoiler: his father commits suicide, while reinstating Sirius as his heir as an act of defiance against Voldemort]].
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* DrivenToSuicide: After hearing of Regulus's death, [[spoiler: his father father]] commits suicide, while reinstating [[spoiler:reinstating Sirius as his heir heir]] as an act of defiance against Voldemort]].Voldemort.
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** Orion and Walburga Black. As Sirius puts it, they do things to him that would get them sent to Azkaban if they ever tried doing it to someone else's child.
** Cyngus and Druella Black put curses on Bellatrix in an effort to keep her from marrying without their permission and when Andromeda gives birth to Tonks, due to her own parents lack of example she has no idea about how to be a loving parent until she starts watching her husband and taking cues from him.
** As per canon, Tobias Snape is pretty nasty to his son.
** Cyngus and Druella Black put curses on Bellatrix in an effort to keep her from marrying without their permission and when Andromeda gives birth to Tonks, due to her own parents lack of example she has no idea about how to be a loving parent until she starts watching her husband and taking cues from him.
** As per canon, Tobias Snape is pretty nasty to his son.
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** Orion and Walburga Black.Black are emotionally and physically abusive. As Sirius puts it, they do things to him that would get them sent to Azkaban if they ever tried doing it to someone else's child.
** Cyngus and Druella Black put curses on Bellatrix in an effort to keep her from marrying without theirpermission and when permission. When Andromeda gives birth to Tonks, due to her own parents parents’ lack of example example, she has no idea about how to be a loving parent until she starts watching her husband and taking cues from him.
** As per canon, Tobias Snape is a mean drunk who is pretty nasty to his son.
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* AffectionateNickname: Sirius calls Harry "Prongslet."
* AnArmAndALeg: Regulus's right arm is cut off after he takes Voldemort's Horcrux [[spoiler: by Regulus himself, in order to get rid of the mark mark that could be used to track him, and to fake his death]].
* AnArmAndALeg: Regulus's right arm is cut off after he takes Voldemort's Horcrux [[spoiler: by Regulus himself, in order to get rid of the mark mark that could be used to track him, and to fake his death]].
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* AffectionateNickname: Sirius calls Harry (the son of his friend James/Prongs) "Prongslet."
* AnArmAndALeg:Regulus's Regulus cuts off his right arm is cut off after he takes Voldemort's Horcrux [[spoiler: by Regulus himself, [[spoiler: in order to get rid of the mark dark mark that could be used to track him, and to fake his death]].
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* TheConfidant: Snape serves this role to Regulus and Narcissa at various points in the story, doing this with a certain amount of loyalty and affection even after becoming a spy for the Order of the Phoenix.
* DeadGuyJunior: Regulus is named after the beloved late uncle of their father.
* DeadGuyJunior: Regulus is named after the beloved late uncle of their father.
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* TheConfidant: Snape serves this role to Regulus and Narcissa at At various points in the story, doing this Snape listens to Regulus and Narcissa’s problems and gives them advice with a certain amount of loyalty and affection even after becoming he becomes a spy for the Order of the Phoenix.
* DeadGuyJunior: Regulus is named after his deceased great-uncle on his father’s side of thebeloved late uncle of their father.family.
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** Sirius playing with a muggle neighbor and his dog causes, [[spoiler: his father to murder that neighbor]].
** When Narcissa overhears a classmate insinuate that she's promiscuous, she pretends to seduce him, leading him on with the promise of sex while deliberately sabotaging his friendships and academic performance for weeks before publicly rebuking and humiliating him.
* DrivenTOSuicide: After hearing of Regulus's death, [[spoiler: His father commits suicide, while reinstating Sirius as his heir as an act of defiance against Voldemort]].
** When Narcissa overhears a classmate insinuate that she's promiscuous, she pretends to seduce him, leading him on with the promise of sex while deliberately sabotaging his friendships and academic performance for weeks before publicly rebuking and humiliating him.
* DrivenTOSuicide: After hearing of Regulus's death, [[spoiler: His father commits suicide, while reinstating Sirius as his heir as an act of defiance against Voldemort]].
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** Sirius playing with a muggle Muggle neighbor and his dog causes, causes [[spoiler: his father to murder that neighbor]].
** When Narcissa overhears a classmate insinuate that she's promiscuous, she pretends to seduce him, leading him on with the promise of sex while deliberately sabotaging his friendships and academic performance for weeks before publicly rebuking and humiliatinghim.
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*DrivenTOSuicide: DrivenToSuicide: After hearing of Regulus's death, [[spoiler: His his father commits suicide, while reinstating Sirius as his heir as an act of defiance against Voldemort]].
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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Regulus uses a memory charm to make Kreacher believe he was killed by the inferno when really he escapes, cutting off his arm and leaving it outside the forbidden forrest to make death eaters find it and believe he was killed there, while journeying to Asia to live among muggles]].
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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Regulus uses a memory charm to make Kreacher believe he was killed by the inferno when really he escapes, cutting off his arm and leaving it outside the forbidden forrest to make death eaters Forbidden Forest so Death Eaters will find it and believe he was killed there, while journeying to Asia to live among muggles]].Muggles]].
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* LetThePastBurn: Snape burns down his mother's family's mansion after the war due to guilt about all the atrocities Death Eaters committed there.
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* LetThePastBurn: Snape burns down his mother's family's mansion after the war First Wizarding War due to guilt about all the atrocities the Death Eaters committed there.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to the nature of their KangarooCourt incarceration, its years before Sirius finds out that the Longbottom's were tortureed into insanity, or Belalatrix finds out that Sirius is also a prisoner.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to the nature of their KangarooCourt incarceration, its it’s years before Sirius finds out that the Longbottom's Longbottoms were tortureed tortured into insanity, insanity or Belalatrix finds out that Sirius is also a prisoner.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Cyrus Diggory refers to his as not investigating Harry's claims that his name was placed in the Goblet of Fire (due to Fudge not wanting a scandal about the tournament's security), which might have saved his grandson's life.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Cyrus Diggory refers to his as believes not investigating Harry's claims that his name was placed in the Goblet of Fire (due to Fudge not wanting a scandal about the tournament's security), which Tournament's security) was the worse mistake he ever made. An investigation might have saved his grandson's life.
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* SadisticChoice: Narcissa and Andromeda both want to visit Sirius and/or Bellatrix in Azkaban but have the future of their children hung over their head (explicit in Narcissa's case, ambiguously in Andromeda's) to make them drop the issue.
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* SadisticChoice: Narcissa and Andromeda both want to visit Sirius and/or Bellatrix in Azkaban Azkaban, but have the future futures of their children hung over their head (explicit heads (explicitly in Narcissa's case, ambiguously in Andromeda's) to make them drop the issue.
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* WhatTheHellHero: When Mad-Eye Moody tries to convince Sirius not to go the department of mysteries Sirius tells him to shut up, saying that Mad Eye owes him this after he and the rest of the order let him rot in Azakaban without even giving him a chance to deny the allegations.
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* WhatTheHellHero: When Mad-Eye Moody tries to convince Sirius not to go to the department Department of mysteries Mysteries, Sirius tells him to shut up, saying that Mad Eye owes him this after he and the rest of the order Order let him rot in Azakaban Azkaban without even giving him a chance to deny the allegations.allegations against him.
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* BadFuture: [[spoiler: Regulus]] feels a bit of this after remaining isolated from the wizarding community for twenty years and then reading all of the newspaper headlines about people who died across the two wars.
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* AdultFear: All over the place, given the dysfunction of the Black Family and the Death Eaters willingness to target children. An off-screen example comes from Narcissa stating that her husband only pawned off Tom Riddle's diary on Ginny Weasley because it had been trying to get Draco as its host first.
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A ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' story detailing the lives of the five Black cousins; Sirius, Regulus, Narcissa, Bellatrix and Andromeda. The story focuses on their troubled upbringing, interactions with each other, varying sense of family loyalty and roles during the two Wizarding Wars before, after and during the events of the novels.
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A ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' story by Creator/AnlaShok detailing the lives of the five Black cousins; Sirius, Regulus, Narcissa, Bellatrix and Andromeda. The story focuses on their troubled upbringing, interactions with each other, varying sense of family loyalty and roles during the two Wizarding Wars before, after and during the events of the novels.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Regulus]] after the war.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Regulus]] after the war.Regulus becomes deeply remorseful for his acts as a Death Eater and strives to stop Voldemort's plans and live a humble and virtuous life as atonement.
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* CondescendingCompassion /InnocentlyInsensitive: Muggle missionary Brother Allen (who isn't in on TheMasquerade) doesn't know any better than to refer to an orphan showing uncontrolled magical abilities as a "poor child", but the mere fact that he does so is a sign that she needs to be raised in the wizarding world, where people see her magic as a good thing.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Muggle missionary Brother Allen (who isn't in on TheMasquerade) doesn't know any better than to refer to an orphan showing uncontrolled magical abilities as a "poor child", but the mere fact that he does so is a sign that she needs to be raised in the wizarding world, where people see her magic as a good thing.
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* SiblingRivalry: Sirius and Regulus have it bad, (but not quite to the point of CainAndAbel depths) even before the Wizarding War. As an Author's Note puts it, Sirius is talented, and Regulus is loved and each brother feels the other has it better.
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* SiblingRivalry: Sirius and Regulus have it bad, (but not quite to the point of CainAndAbel depths) even before the Wizarding War. As an Author's Note WordOfGod puts it, Sirius is talented, and Regulus is loved and each brother feels the other has it better.
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* InspectorJavert: Downplayed but Cyrus Diggory, grandfather of Cedric Diggory, is not so quick to forgive Narcissa after the war and seizes a pretext to arrest her and douse with with veritaserum to try and find out any previously unknown crimes.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Cyrus Diggory refers to his as not investigating Harry's claims that his name was placed in the Goblet of Fire (due to Fudge not wanting a scandal about the tournament's security), which might have saved his grandson's life.
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* CondescendingCompassion: Muggle missionary Brother Allen (who isn't in on TheMasquerade) doesn't know any better than to refer to an orphan showing uncontrolled magical abilities as a "poor child", but the mere fact that he does so is a sign that she needs to be raised in the wizarding world, where people see her magic as a good thing.
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* CondescendingCompassion: CondescendingCompassion /InnocentlyInsensitive: Muggle missionary Brother Allen (who isn't in on TheMasquerade) doesn't know any better than to refer to an orphan showing uncontrolled magical abilities as a "poor child", but the mere fact that he does so is a sign that she needs to be raised in the wizarding world, where people see her magic as a good thing.
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The story itself can be found here ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13381295/1/The-Choices-That-Make-Us The Choices That Make Us]]''
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The story itself can be found here ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13381295/1/The-Choices-That-Make-Us The Choices That Make Us]]''
Us]]''. There is also a companion piece, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13424659/1/Defiant-Until-the-End Defiant Until the End]]'' about the three times James and Lily Potter defied Voldemort.
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** Cyngus and Druella Black put curses on Bellatrix in an effort to keep her from marrying without their permission and when Andromeda gives brith to Tonks, due to her own parents lack of example she has no idea about how to be a loving parent until she starts watching her husband and taking cues from him.
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** Cyngus and Druella Black put curses on Bellatrix in an effort to keep her from marrying without their permission and when Andromeda gives brith birth to Tonks, due to her own parents lack of example she has no idea about how to be a loving parent until she starts watching her husband and taking cues from him.
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* CondescendingCompassion: Muggle missionary Brother Allen (who isn't in on TheMasquerade) doesn't know any better than to refer to an orphan showing uncontrolled magical abilities as a "poor child", but the mere fact that he does so is a sign that she needs to be raised in the wizarding world.
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* CondescendingCompassion: Muggle missionary Brother Allen (who isn't in on TheMasquerade) doesn't know any better than to refer to an orphan showing uncontrolled magical abilities as a "poor child", but the mere fact that he does so is a sign that she needs to be raised in the wizarding world.world, where people see her magic as a good thing.
* DeathByAdaptation: Lavender Brown and Ernie Macmillan are mentioned as casualties of the Battle of Hogwarts when Lavender's fate was [[UncertainDoom less clear]] in the books and there was nothing to indicate Ernie had died.
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** When Sirius playing with a muggle neighbor and his dog causes, [[spoiler: his father to murder that neighbor]].
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* DrivenTOSuicide: After hearing of Regulus's death [[spoiler: His father commits suicide, while reinstating Sirius as his heir as an act of defiance against Voldemort]].
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* HellholePrison: Azkaban is portrayed at it's worst in the story, through the first person perspectives of Sirius and Bellatrix.
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* HellholePrison: Azkaban is portrayed at it's its worst in the story, through the first person perspectives of Sirius and Bellatrix.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Sirius experiences a moment of this after his friends call him out for nearly tricking Snape into confronting a werewolf, causing Sirius to admit that he's inherited more negative qualities from his parents then he admits. and needs to break free of them.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Sirius experiences a moment of this after his friends call him out for nearly tricking Snape into confronting a werewolf, causing Sirius to admit that he's inherited more negative qualities from his parents then he admits. he's admitted before, and needs to break free of them.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Andromeda encourages Bellatrix to spend more time with Voldemort, before realizing what kind of man he is, due to feeling it would do her good to know and respect a half-blood.
* ParentalSubstitute: The Potter's care for Sirius after he runs away from home, so much that when an Azakaban guard tells him that his mother died he initially thinks this means Mrs. Potter.
* ParentalSubstitute: The Potter's care for Sirius after he runs away from home, so much that when an Azakaban guard tells him that his mother died he initially thinks this means Mrs. Potter.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Andromeda encourages Bellatrix to spend more time with Voldemort, before realizing what kind of man he is, due to feeling it would do her sister good to know and respect a half-blood.
* ParentalSubstitute: The Potter's care for Sirius after he runs away from home, so much that when an Azakaban guard tellshim Sirius that his mother died he initially thinks this means Mrs. Potter.
* ParentalSubstitute: The Potter's care for Sirius after he runs away from home, so much that when an Azakaban guard tells
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* TheScapegoat: Rita Skeeter, who is sent to Azakaban for six years after the war, is presented as being this for the rest of the Daily Prophet, who were rotten and complacent a long time before she came along and had to write some nasty stuff for a job.
* SiblingRivalry: Sirius and Regulus have it bad, (but not quite to the point of CainAndAbel depths) even before the Wizarding War. As an Author's Note puts it, Sirius is talented, and Regulus is loved.
* SiblingRivalry: Sirius and Regulus have it bad, (but not quite to the point of CainAndAbel depths) even before the Wizarding War. As an Author's Note puts it, Sirius is talented, and Regulus is loved.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: Snape and his mother trick his abusive father into blundering into a lethal magical trap at Voldemort's urgings, which is followed by Mrs. Snape then killing her own abusive father and brother.
* TheScapegoat: Rita Skeeter, who is sent to Azakaban for six years after the war, is presented as being this for the rest of the Daily Prophet, who were rotten and complacent a long time before she came along andhad to made her write some nasty stuff for a to even get the job.
* SiblingRivalry: Sirius and Regulus have it bad, (but not quite to the point of CainAndAbel depths) even before the Wizarding War. As an Author's Note puts it, Sirius is talented, and Regulus isloved.loved and each brother feels the other has it better.
* TheScapegoat: Rita Skeeter, who is sent to Azakaban for six years after the war, is presented as being this for the rest of the Daily Prophet, who were rotten and complacent a long time before she came along and
* SiblingRivalry: Sirius and Regulus have it bad, (but not quite to the point of CainAndAbel depths) even before the Wizarding War. As an Author's Note puts it, Sirius is talented, and Regulus is
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Regulus, Bellatrix, Dany Parkinson and Draco are all a lot more adorable as kids before getting blood purity into their heads.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: Regulus's friendships at Hogwarts suffer due to his falling in with the Death Eaters and refusing to listen any time someone tries to get it through his head his insane their philosophy is.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: Regulus's friendships at Hogwarts suffer due to his falling in with the Death Eaters and refusing to listen any time someone tries to get it through his head his insane their philosophy is.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Regulus, Bellatrix, Dany Pansy Parkinson and Draco are all a lot more adorable as kids before getting blood purity into their heads.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: Regulus's friendships at Hogwarts suffer due to his falling in with the Death Eaters and refusing to listen any time someone tries to get it through his headhis how insane their philosophy is.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: Regulus's friendships at Hogwarts suffer due to his falling in with the Death Eaters and refusing to listen any time someone tries to get it through his head
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* LongLostRelative: Here it's speculated that muggleborns are all descended form squibs who were abandoned by pureblood families, with it even being noted that Hermoine could be descended from a Black in this manner.
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** Cyngus and Druella Black put curses on Bellatrix in a n effort to keep her from marrying without their permission and when Andromeda gives brith to Tonks, due to her own parents lack of example she has no idea about how to be a loving parent until she starts watching her husband and taking cues from him.
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** Cyngus and Druella Black put curses on Bellatrix in a n an effort to keep her from marrying without their permission and when Andromeda gives brith to Tonks, due to her own parents lack of example she has no idea about how to be a loving parent until she starts watching her husband and taking cues from him.
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* AdultFear: All over the place, given the dysfunction of the Black Family and the Death Eaters willingness to target children. An off-screen example comes from Narcissa stating that her husband only pawned off Tom Riddle's diary on Ginny Weasley because it had been trying to get Draco as its hot first.
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* AdultFear: All over the place, given the dysfunction of the Black Family and the Death Eaters willingness to target children. An off-screen example comes from Narcissa stating that her husband only pawned off Tom Riddle's diary on Ginny Weasley because it had been trying to get Draco as its hot host first.
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* DeadGuyJunior: Regulus is named after the beloved later brother of their father.
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* DeadGuyJunior: Regulus is named after the beloved later brother late uncle of their father.
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* {{Nepotism}}: Just about every important job at the Daily Prophet has been in the hands of a single family (or alternated between a handful of families) for the past four generations or more.
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* TheScapegoat: Rita Skeeter, who is sent to Azakaban for six years after the war, is presented as being this for the rest of the Daily Prophet, who were rotten and complacent a long time before she came along and had to write some nasty stuff for a job.
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The story itself can be found here ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13381295/1/The-Choices-That-Make-Us]]''
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The story itself can be found here ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13381295/1/The-Choices-That-Make-Us]]''
net/s/13381295/1/The-Choices-That-Make-Us The Choices That Make Us]]''
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A ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' story detailing the lives of the five Black cousins; Sirius, Regulus, Narcissa, Bellatrix and Andromeda. The story focuses on their troubled upbringing, interactions with each other, varying sense of family loyalty and roles during the two Wizarding Wars before, after and during the events of the novels.
!! Tropes
* AbusiveParent:
** Orion and Walburga Black. As Sirius puts it, they do things to him that would get them sent to Azkaban if they ever tried doing it to someone else's child.
** Cyngus and Druella Black put curses on Bellatrix in a n effort to keep her from marrying without their permission and when Andromeda gives brith to Tonks, due to her own parents lack of example she has no idea about how to be a loving parent until she starts watching her husband and taking cues from him.
** As per canon, Tobias Snape is pretty nasty to his son.
** Snape's mother was cursed and stripped of her magic by her father for refusing an arranged marriage.
* AffectionateNickname: Sirius calls Harry "Prongslet."
* AnArmAndALeg: Regulus's right arm is cut off after he takes Voldemort's Horcrux [[spoiler: by Regulus himself, in order to get rid of the mark mark that could be used to track him, and to fake his death]].
* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Regulus]] after the war.
* BadFuture: [[spoiler: Regulus]] feels a bit of this after remaining isolated from the wizarding community for twenty years and then reading all of the newspaper headlines about people who died across the two wars.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Black's, and nearly every other pureblood family.
* CondescendingCompassion: Muggle missionary Brother Allen (who isn't in on TheMasquerade) doesn't know any better than to refer to an orphan showing uncontrolled magical abilities as a "poor child", but the mere fact that he does so is a sign that she needs to be raised in the wizarding world.
* TheConfidant: Snape serves this role to Regulus and Narcissa at various points in the story, doing this with a certain amount of loyalty and affection even after becoming a spy for the Order of the Phoenix.
* DeadGuyJunior: Regulus is named after the beloved later brother of their father.
* DisproportionateRetribution:
** When Sirius playing with a muggle neighbor and his dog causes, [[spoiler: his father to murder that neighbor]].
** When Narcissa overhears a classmate insinuate that she's promiscuous, she pretends to seduce him, leading him on with the promise of sex while deliberately sabotaging his friendships and academic performance for weeks before publicly rebuking and humiliating him.
* DrivenTOSuicide: After hearing of Regulus's death [[spoiler: His father commits suicide, while reinstating Sirius as his heir as an act of defiance against Voldemort]].
* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler: Andromeda and Narcissa use magic to scatter Bellatrix's ashes into space after the war]].
* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Regulus uses a memory charm to make Kreacher believe he was killed by the inferno when really he escapes, cutting off his arm and leaving it outside the forbidden forrest to make death eaters find it and believe he was killed there, while journeying to Asia to live among muggles]].
* ForegoneConclusion: Anyone whose read the books, or even the characters wiki pages, has a good idea of the basics about what's going to happen with the five cousins, with the suspense coming from filling in the gaps, and establishing their relationships with each other. [[spoiler: Although Regulus faking his death is meant to be a WhamEpisode]].
* {{Forgiveness}}: [[spoiler: Andromeda and Narcissa]] eventually mend fences after the war.
* GoodIsNotSoft: Sirius is the most willing of the Order of the Pheonix to use violence against Death Eaters.
* HeelRealization: Like in canon, Regulus gets this after spending enough time with Voldemort.
* HellholePrison: Azkaban is portrayed at it's worst in the story, through the first person perspectives of Sirius and Bellatrix.
* HisNameIs: The story shows Sirius being stunned by Aurors right as he's halfway through trying to tell them that Wormtail is still there as a rat.
* LawOfInverseFertility: The first time that [[spoiler: Regulus]] ever has sex, with a girl who was believed to be sterile, he gets her pregnant.
* LetThePastBurn: Snape burns down his mother's family's mansion after the war due to guilt about all the atrocities Death Eaters committed there.
* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Snape's feelings towards Lilly get this treatment when Narcissa speaks with him about it at the end of the war.
--> '''Narcissa:''' I 'm sorry about Lily.
--> '''Snape:''' Thank you for saying that, but please never bring it up again.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to the nature of their KangarooCourt incarceration, its years before Sirius finds out that the Longbottom's were tortureed into insanity, or Belalatrix finds out that Sirius is also a prisoner.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Sirius experiences a moment of this after his friends call him out for nearly tricking Snape into confronting a werewolf, causing Sirius to admit that he's inherited more negative qualities from his parents then he admits. and needs to break free of them.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Andromeda encourages Bellatrix to spend more time with Voldemort, before realizing what kind of man he is, due to feeling it would do her good to know and respect a half-blood.
* ParentalSubstitute: The Potter's care for Sirius after he runs away from home, so much that when an Azakaban guard tells him that his mother died he initially thinks this means Mrs. Potter.
* SadisticChoice: Narcissa and Andromeda both want to visit Sirius and/or Bellatrix in Azkaban but have the future of their children hung over their head (explicit in Narcissa's case, ambiguously in Andromeda's) to make them drop the issue.
* SanitySlippage: Bellatrix has her issues before going into Azakaban, but is far worse afterwards. Her husband Rodolphus is also unrecognizable afterwards, having lost his sense of self during that long confinement (which is part of why he and Bellatrix are so distant after escaping from Azkaban).
* SiblingRivalry: Sirius and Regulus have it bad, (but not quite to the point of CainAndAbel depths) even before the Wizarding War. As an Author's Note puts it, Sirius is talented, and Regulus is loved.
* ThatManIsDead: At times, Bellatrix is described this way due to her time in Azkaban.
* ThickerThanWater: Bellatrix always holds back going against Sirus and Andromeda during the first wizarding war because of this, and it inspires Regulus to go visit Andromeda after finding out about the horcruxes.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: Regulus, Bellatrix and Draco are all a lot more adorable as kids before getting blood purity into their heads.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: Regulus's friendships at Hogwarts suffer due to his falling in with the Death Eaters and refusing to listen any time someone tries to get it through his head his insane their philosophy is.
* WhatTheHellHero: When Mad-Eye Moody tries to convince Sirius not to go the department of mysteries Sirius tells him to shut up, saying that Mad Eye owes him this after he and the rest of the order let him rot in Azakaban without even giving him a chance to deny the allegations.
* WouldHurtAChild: Voldemort and his people.
!! Tropes
* AbusiveParent:
** Orion and Walburga Black. As Sirius puts it, they do things to him that would get them sent to Azkaban if they ever tried doing it to someone else's child.
** Cyngus and Druella Black put curses on Bellatrix in a n effort to keep her from marrying without their permission and when Andromeda gives brith to Tonks, due to her own parents lack of example she has no idea about how to be a loving parent until she starts watching her husband and taking cues from him.
** As per canon, Tobias Snape is pretty nasty to his son.
** Snape's mother was cursed and stripped of her magic by her father for refusing an arranged marriage.
* AffectionateNickname: Sirius calls Harry "Prongslet."
* AnArmAndALeg: Regulus's right arm is cut off after he takes Voldemort's Horcrux [[spoiler: by Regulus himself, in order to get rid of the mark mark that could be used to track him, and to fake his death]].
* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Regulus]] after the war.
* BadFuture: [[spoiler: Regulus]] feels a bit of this after remaining isolated from the wizarding community for twenty years and then reading all of the newspaper headlines about people who died across the two wars.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Black's, and nearly every other pureblood family.
* CondescendingCompassion: Muggle missionary Brother Allen (who isn't in on TheMasquerade) doesn't know any better than to refer to an orphan showing uncontrolled magical abilities as a "poor child", but the mere fact that he does so is a sign that she needs to be raised in the wizarding world.
* TheConfidant: Snape serves this role to Regulus and Narcissa at various points in the story, doing this with a certain amount of loyalty and affection even after becoming a spy for the Order of the Phoenix.
* DeadGuyJunior: Regulus is named after the beloved later brother of their father.
* DisproportionateRetribution:
** When Sirius playing with a muggle neighbor and his dog causes, [[spoiler: his father to murder that neighbor]].
** When Narcissa overhears a classmate insinuate that she's promiscuous, she pretends to seduce him, leading him on with the promise of sex while deliberately sabotaging his friendships and academic performance for weeks before publicly rebuking and humiliating him.
* DrivenTOSuicide: After hearing of Regulus's death [[spoiler: His father commits suicide, while reinstating Sirius as his heir as an act of defiance against Voldemort]].
* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler: Andromeda and Narcissa use magic to scatter Bellatrix's ashes into space after the war]].
* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Regulus uses a memory charm to make Kreacher believe he was killed by the inferno when really he escapes, cutting off his arm and leaving it outside the forbidden forrest to make death eaters find it and believe he was killed there, while journeying to Asia to live among muggles]].
* ForegoneConclusion: Anyone whose read the books, or even the characters wiki pages, has a good idea of the basics about what's going to happen with the five cousins, with the suspense coming from filling in the gaps, and establishing their relationships with each other. [[spoiler: Although Regulus faking his death is meant to be a WhamEpisode]].
* {{Forgiveness}}: [[spoiler: Andromeda and Narcissa]] eventually mend fences after the war.
* GoodIsNotSoft: Sirius is the most willing of the Order of the Pheonix to use violence against Death Eaters.
* HeelRealization: Like in canon, Regulus gets this after spending enough time with Voldemort.
* HellholePrison: Azkaban is portrayed at it's worst in the story, through the first person perspectives of Sirius and Bellatrix.
* HisNameIs: The story shows Sirius being stunned by Aurors right as he's halfway through trying to tell them that Wormtail is still there as a rat.
* LawOfInverseFertility: The first time that [[spoiler: Regulus]] ever has sex, with a girl who was believed to be sterile, he gets her pregnant.
* LetThePastBurn: Snape burns down his mother's family's mansion after the war due to guilt about all the atrocities Death Eaters committed there.
* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Snape's feelings towards Lilly get this treatment when Narcissa speaks with him about it at the end of the war.
--> '''Narcissa:''' I 'm sorry about Lily.
--> '''Snape:''' Thank you for saying that, but please never bring it up again.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Due to the nature of their KangarooCourt incarceration, its years before Sirius finds out that the Longbottom's were tortureed into insanity, or Belalatrix finds out that Sirius is also a prisoner.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Sirius experiences a moment of this after his friends call him out for nearly tricking Snape into confronting a werewolf, causing Sirius to admit that he's inherited more negative qualities from his parents then he admits. and needs to break free of them.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Andromeda encourages Bellatrix to spend more time with Voldemort, before realizing what kind of man he is, due to feeling it would do her good to know and respect a half-blood.
* ParentalSubstitute: The Potter's care for Sirius after he runs away from home, so much that when an Azakaban guard tells him that his mother died he initially thinks this means Mrs. Potter.
* SadisticChoice: Narcissa and Andromeda both want to visit Sirius and/or Bellatrix in Azkaban but have the future of their children hung over their head (explicit in Narcissa's case, ambiguously in Andromeda's) to make them drop the issue.
* SanitySlippage: Bellatrix has her issues before going into Azakaban, but is far worse afterwards. Her husband Rodolphus is also unrecognizable afterwards, having lost his sense of self during that long confinement (which is part of why he and Bellatrix are so distant after escaping from Azkaban).
* SiblingRivalry: Sirius and Regulus have it bad, (but not quite to the point of CainAndAbel depths) even before the Wizarding War. As an Author's Note puts it, Sirius is talented, and Regulus is loved.
* ThatManIsDead: At times, Bellatrix is described this way due to her time in Azkaban.
* ThickerThanWater: Bellatrix always holds back going against Sirus and Andromeda during the first wizarding war because of this, and it inspires Regulus to go visit Andromeda after finding out about the horcruxes.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: Regulus, Bellatrix and Draco are all a lot more adorable as kids before getting blood purity into their heads.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: Regulus's friendships at Hogwarts suffer due to his falling in with the Death Eaters and refusing to listen any time someone tries to get it through his head his insane their philosophy is.
* WhatTheHellHero: When Mad-Eye Moody tries to convince Sirius not to go the department of mysteries Sirius tells him to shut up, saying that Mad Eye owes him this after he and the rest of the order let him rot in Azakaban without even giving him a chance to deny the allegations.
* WouldHurtAChild: Voldemort and his people.