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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7681912/1/The-Beast-That-I-Am The Beast That I Am]]'' by [=OrionPax09=] features Shinobu accidentally exposed to one of Kaolla's experiments. Experiments that just happen to involve gamma radiation. And it isn't long before the other girls of the Hinata discover that they ''really'' don't like Shinobu when she's angry. But Keitaro might wind up learning to love it...
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7681912/1/The-Beast-That-I-Am The Beast That I Am]]'' by [=OrionPax09=] is a ''Manga/LoveHina'' and ''ComicBook/SheHulk'' crossover fic. It features Shinobu accidentally exposed to one of Kaolla's experiments. Experiments that just happen to involve gamma radiation. And it isn't long before the other girls of the Hinata discover that they ''really'' don't like Shinobu when she's angry. But Keitaro might wind up learning to love it...
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-->'''Haruka:''' ''"Please'' tell me this is your idea of a joke..."
-->'''Keitaro:''' [[ApologizesALot "Um...sorry..."]]
-->'''Haruka:'''[[INeedAFreakingDrink "I need a damn drink..."]]
-->'''Keitaro:''' [[ApologizesALot "Um...sorry..."]]
-->'''Haruka:'''[[INeedAFreakingDrink "I need a damn drink..."]]
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-->'''Haruka:''' ''"Please'' tell me this is your idea of a joke..."
-->'''Keitaro:'''"\\
'''Keitaro:''' [[ApologizesALot "Um...sorry..."]]\\
'''Haruka:'''[[INeedAFreakingDrink "I need a damn drink..."]]
-->'''Haruka:'''[[INeedAFreakingDrink "I need a damn drink..."]]----
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'''Keitaro:''' [[ApologizesALot "Um...sorry..."]]\\
'''Haruka:'''[[INeedAFreakingDrink "I need a damn drink..."]]
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* ATwinkleInTheSky: At the start of the story, Naru punches Keitaro so hard that he quickly becomes one of these.
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* NoSympathy: Naru's response to Kaolla taking everyone's take-out dinner is to send Keitaro out for more, completely ignoring how exhausted he is.
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* NeverMyFault: Naru complains about Keitaro taking off while Kaolla's new attack Mecha-Tama are unveiled, completely ignoring the fact that he only took off because she punched him out of the inn.
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* FirstNameBasis: Kaolla is constantly referred to by her first name, even though she is rarely (if ever) addressed as such in canon.
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* StoppingTheBlameGame: Haruka shuts down any and all attempts by Naru to blame Keitaro for everything.
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* GenreBlindness: For some reason, after [[CurbStompBattle being easily defeated by Jade]] and then [[WhatTheHellHero called out by Haruka]], Naru believes that they just have to wait for Haruka to calm down, and they can just go back to business as usual at the Hinata Inn.
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** Following Naru's Waterloo, blaming everything on Keitaro has become one for Haruka.
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-->'''Karuka:'''[[INeedAFreakingDrink "I need a damn drink...""]]
-->'''Karuka:'''[[INeedAFreakingDrink "I need a damn drink...
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** Naru does it again in the third chapter, when she barges into Keitaro's room and sees him with his shirt open, then proceeds to punch him out of the inn, even though he has every right to be half-dressed in his own room, and SHE was the one who entered without knocking.
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** Naru does it again in the third chapter, when she barges into Keitaro's room and sees him with his shirt open, then proceeds to punch him out of the inn, even though he has every right to be half-dressed in his own room, and SHE was the one who entered without knocking.knocking.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Haruka does not take it well upon being told that Shinobu is Jade.
-->'''Haruka:'''"Please'' tell me this is your idea of a joke..."
-->'''Keitaro:''' [[ApologizesALot "Um...sorry..."
-->'''Karuka:'''[[INeedAFreakingDrink "I need a damn drink..."
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Haruka does not take it well upon being told that Shinobu is Jade.
-->'''Haruka:'''"Please'' tell me this is your idea of a joke..."
-->'''Keitaro:''' [[ApologizesALot "Um...sorry..."
-->'''Karuka:'''[[INeedAFreakingDrink "I need a damn drink..."
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Jade tears into [[UnprovokedPervertPayback why the Hinata Harpies beat up Keitaro]] while she's in the process of fighting them.
-->'''Jade:''' "Defend yourselves?! That's a laugh, [[PrecisionFStrike bitch]]! 'Keitaro's looking at me! He's being a pervert! Keitaro's talking to some young girl! He's being perverted! Keitaro's doing absolutely nothing! He must be ''thinking'' something perverted!' It must be really convenient, being able to label every man a pervert just so you have a reason to beat them up! Makes you sound like you're actually a victim when all you are is a sadistic bully who gets off on treating people like dirt, all because you ''can!''"
-->'''Jade:''' "Defend yourselves?! That's a laugh, [[PrecisionFStrike bitch]]! 'Keitaro's looking at me! He's being a pervert! Keitaro's talking to some young girl! He's being perverted! Keitaro's doing absolutely nothing! He must be ''thinking'' something perverted!' It must be really convenient, being able to label every man a pervert just so you have a reason to beat them up! Makes you sound like you're actually a victim when all you are is a sadistic bully who gets off on treating people like dirt, all because you ''can!''"
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* ShoutOut: Officer Gai had this to say about the Hinata Inn when driving Haruka up to it in chapter 7.
-->'''Gai:''' [[Film/ANewHope "You will never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy. We must be cautious."]]
-->'''Gai:''' [[Film/ANewHope "You will never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy. We must be cautious."]]
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* NeutralNoLonger: Haruka's default attitude to the usual Hinata Inn antics was to wait for Keitaro to finally put his foot down. But when Shinobu wound up getting hurt because of said antics, she decided it was time to lay down the law so that didn't happen again.
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* NoSell: Jade easily shrugs off every attack the Hinata Harpies unleash on her.
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* IveComeTooFar: One of Keitaro’s biggest problems is that he can't even consider changing the status quo by say evicting the troublesome tenants or applying to a different school, because he feels that doing so would invalidate the years of effort he's already invested. It doesn't occur to him that the status quo is him getting beaten for any slight mistake, including others (the story starts with Naru entering PervertRevengeMode because she walked in on him changing in his own room), and that since Shinobu can now become ComicBook/SheHulk, things ''will'' change regardless of what he wants.
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* IveComeTooFar: One of Keitaro’s biggest problems is that he can't even consider changing the status quo by say evicting the troublesome tenants or applying to a different school, because he feels that doing so would invalidate the years of effort he's already invested. It doesn't occur to him that the status quo is him getting beaten for any slight mistake, including others (the story starts with Naru entering PervertRevengeMode because she walked in on him changing while he was making repairs in his own room), the onsen), and that since Shinobu can now become ComicBook/SheHulk, things ''will'' change regardless of what he wants.
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* UnprovokedPervertPayback: Naru barges into Keitaro's room and sees him with his shirt open. She proceeds to punch him out of the inn, even though he has every right to be half-dressed in his own room, and SHE was the one who entered without knocking.
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* UnprovokedPervertPayback: UnprovokedPervertPayback:
** In the first chapter, a towel-clad Naru enters the hot springs to see Keitaro in there. Even though Keitaro is A) clearly doing repair work and B) unaware of her presence until she makes a sound, she gives him a MegatonPunch.
** Naru does it again in the third chapter, when she barges into Keitaro's room and sees him with his shirtopen. She open, then proceeds to punch him out of the inn, even though he has every right to be half-dressed in his own room, and SHE was the one who entered without knocking.
** In the first chapter, a towel-clad Naru enters the hot springs to see Keitaro in there. Even though Keitaro is A) clearly doing repair work and B) unaware of her presence until she makes a sound, she gives him a MegatonPunch.
** Naru does it again in the third chapter, when she barges into Keitaro's room and sees him with his shirt
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: After being hospitalized, Naru attempts to justify her attack on Keitaro by recalling how she came across him kneeling over a heavily-bandaged Shinobu and assumed that he attacked her, only to stop mid-sentence when a confused Kaolla asks ''why'' Shinobu was covered in bandages if she had only just been attacked.
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* EnemyWithin: Jade is disgusted with Shinobu's meekness and will demand she be allowed to takeover, declaring Shinobu to weak to do what has to be done.
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* EnemyWithin: Jade is disgusted with Shinobu's meekness and will demand she be allowed to takeover, declaring Shinobu to too weak to do what has to be done.
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* AboveTheInfluence: Jade is ''very'' interested in becoming intimate with Keitaro, but her refuses to do so before Shinobu is ready.
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* AboveTheInfluence: Jade is ''very'' interested in becoming intimate with Keitaro, but her he refuses to do so before Shinobu is ready.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Shinobu not only goes to investigate a potentially dangerous situation in Keitaro’s place, but gains a [[HulkingOut Hulk]] persona and proceeds to destroy the girls who did this to them.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Shinobu not only goes to investigate a potentially dangerous situation in Keitaro’s place, but gains a [[HulkingOut Hulk]] persona and proceeds to destroy the girls who did this to them.them.
* UnprovokedPervertPayback: Naru barges into Keitaro's room and sees him with his shirt open. She proceeds to punch him out of the inn, even though he has every right to be half-dressed in his own room, and SHE was the one who entered without knocking.
* UnprovokedPervertPayback: Naru barges into Keitaro's room and sees him with his shirt open. She proceeds to punch him out of the inn, even though he has every right to be half-dressed in his own room, and SHE was the one who entered without knocking.
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* AboveTheInfluence: Jade is ''very'' interested in becoming intimate with Keitaro, but her refuses to do so before Shinobu is ready.
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Jade's punishments for Koalla, Motoko and Naru the first time she appears all qualify. Motoko has her sword broken and is left in the [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes turtle]] exhibit at the local zoo. Koalla is strapped to a crane's electromagnet at the scrapyard, forcing her to see a bunch of scrapped machines. Naru is stripped naked and tied up with telephone wires above an intersection.
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* DoesNotLikeMen: Even more than Motoko, Naru '''hates''' men, including refusing to let several police officers untie her from where Jade left her, accusing all of them of being filthy perverts.
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* EnemyWithin: Jade is disgusted with Shinobu's meekness and will demand she be allowed to takeover, declaring Shinobu to weak to do what has to be done.
* GameChanger: Shinobu's alter-ego [[Comicbook/SheHulk Jade]] completely changes the status quo. Not only does Keitaro now have someone both willing and ''very'' able to protect him from the actions of the other tenants at Hinata Inn, but Haruka makes it clear that Keitaro either has to stop being an ExtremeDoormat and put the girls in their place or evict them. While Keitaro worries about [[SunkCostFallacy negating all the work he's done so far]], Haruka explains that if he doesn't change with the status quo, things will only escalate and likely result in Jade maiming and/or killing one of the others in her rage.
* GameChanger: Shinobu's alter-ego [[Comicbook/SheHulk Jade]] completely changes the status quo. Not only does Keitaro now have someone both willing and ''very'' able to protect him from the actions of the other tenants at Hinata Inn, but Haruka makes it clear that Keitaro either has to stop being an ExtremeDoormat and put the girls in their place or evict them. While Keitaro worries about [[SunkCostFallacy negating all the work he's done so far]], Haruka explains that if he doesn't change with the status quo, things will only escalate and likely result in Jade maiming and/or killing one of the others in her rage.
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* NewAbilityAddiction: Haruka lampshades the likelihood that Shinobu will continue transforming any time she gets upset simply because she can.
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* OnlySaneMan: Haruka is the only one to realize the status quo seriously has to change. Naru, Koalla, Motoko, and Kitsune are their canon selves, Keitaro is too spineless to think of standing up to anyone despite knowing the consequences, and Shinobu is too tempted to turn back into Jade so she has the power and confidence to do the things she's always dreamed of.
* OpenMouthInsertFoot: While discussing Su's desire to up the security at the Hinata Inn (to stop the [[Comicbook/SheHulk Ogre]] if she shows up again), Keitaro tries to dissuade Kitsune by pointing out that eventually Su will turn all of that security on him.
-->'''Kitsune:''' But it ain't a big deal when bad stuff happens to ''you''! It's me and the other girls ''I'm'' worried about!\\
'''Keitaro:''' Wait... what did you just say Kitsune?\\
'''Kitsune:''' I said it's me and the other girls I'm worried about! It don't matter when bad stuff happens to -! Well, what I mean was that...well, you're indestructible. You and I both know that!\\
'''Keitaro:''' Uh... yeah.
* RealityEnsues: Not only are the city inhabitants aware of the girls of the Hinata Inn and their antics, but the police very much want Keitaro to keep a tighter leash on them to keep them from running around, breaking several laws. Also, after Shinobu's rampage as "a large green ogre", the Hinata Inn is declared a crime scene and the residents can't enter large parts of it until the investigation is over.
* OpenMouthInsertFoot: While discussing Su's desire to up the security at the Hinata Inn (to stop the [[Comicbook/SheHulk Ogre]] if she shows up again), Keitaro tries to dissuade Kitsune by pointing out that eventually Su will turn all of that security on him.
-->'''Kitsune:''' But it ain't a big deal when bad stuff happens to ''you''! It's me and the other girls ''I'm'' worried about!\\
'''Keitaro:''' Wait... what did you just say Kitsune?\\
'''Kitsune:''' I said it's me and the other girls I'm worried about! It don't matter when bad stuff happens to -! Well, what I mean was that...well, you're indestructible. You and I both know that!\\
'''Keitaro:''' Uh... yeah.
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* ShapeshiftingExcludesClothing: Transforming into Jade generally destroys whatever Shinobu was wearing at the time, leaving her scraps of clothing at best.
* StatuesqueStunner: Jade is considerably over six feet tall and drop dead gorgeous.
* StatuesqueStunner: Jade is considerably over six feet tall and drop dead gorgeous.
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* DeconstructionCrossover: Not only is the tenants’ behavior PlayedForDrama, but Shinobu’s [[HulkingOut new power]] is played up as something potentially dangerous instead of completely good.
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* OlderAlterEgo: Jade serves as this to Shinobu.
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* ClusterFBomb: Jade just cannot stop calling everyone (except Keitaro) “bitches.”
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Haruka actually cares about Keitaro, and is ''pissed'' when she sees the full extent of what trouble the tenants have caused to him, Shinobu, and the city in general. She also helps Shinobu keep her [[HulkingOut secret]] for fear that the military might do something to her.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7681912/1/The-Beast-That-I-Am The Beast That I Am]]'' by OrionPax09 features Shinobu accidentally exposed to one of Kaolla's experiments. Experiments that just happen to involve gamma radiation. And it isn't long before the other girls of the Hinata discover that they ''really'' don't like Shinobu when she's angry. But Keitaro might wind up learning to love it...
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7681912/1/The-Beast-That-I-Am The Beast That I Am]]'' by OrionPax09 [=OrionPax09=] features Shinobu accidentally exposed to one of Kaolla's experiments. Experiments that just happen to involve gamma radiation. And it isn't long before the other girls of the Hinata discover that they ''really'' don't like Shinobu when she's angry. But Keitaro might wind up learning to love it...
* BigBadDuumvirate: Naru, Kaolla, and Motoko play this role as Keitaro’s tormentors and the ones responsible for Shinobu’s [[SuperpoweredEvilSide unstable state]].
* TheDogBitesBack: When Shinobu becomes Jade, she gives a ''[[CurbStompBattle brutal]]'' beat-down to the people who have been abusing Keitaro while she watched.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Jade subjects the Hinata Harpies to a brutal beat down and total humiliation after they push her too far.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Jade subjects the Hinata Harpies to a brutal beat down and total humiliation after they push her too far.far.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Jade is played like this, though not exactly evil.
* TookALevelInBadass: Shinobu not only goes to investigate a potentially dangerous situation in Keitaro’s place, but gains a [[HulkingOut Hulk]] persona and proceeds to destroy the girls who did this to them.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Jade is played like this, though not exactly evil.
* TookALevelInBadass: Shinobu not only goes to investigate a potentially dangerous situation in Keitaro’s place, but gains a [[HulkingOut Hulk]] persona and proceeds to destroy the girls who did this to them.
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* HulkingOut: Thanks to Shinobu being doused in gamma-goo in Kaolla's lab, she winds up doing this every time she's angry, hurt, or stressed.
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* DeconstructionCrossover: Not only is the tenants’ behavior PlayedForDrama, but Shinobu’s [[HulkingOut new power]] is played up as something potentially dangerous instead of completely good.
* HulkingOut: Thanks to Shinobu being doused in gamma-goo in Kaolla's lab, she winds up doing this every time she's angry, hurt, orstressed.stressed.
* IveComeTooFar: One of Keitaro’s biggest problems is that he can't even consider changing the status quo by say evicting the troublesome tenants or applying to a different school, because he feels that doing so would invalidate the years of effort he's already invested. It doesn't occur to him that the status quo is him getting beaten for any slight mistake, including others (the story starts with Naru entering PervertRevengeMode because she walked in on him changing in his own room), and that since Shinobu can now become ComicBook/SheHulk, things ''will'' change regardless of what he wants.
* LaserGuidedKarma: Jade subjects the Hinata Harpies to a brutal beat down and total humiliation after they push her too far.
* HulkingOut: Thanks to Shinobu being doused in gamma-goo in Kaolla's lab, she winds up doing this every time she's angry, hurt, or
* IveComeTooFar: One of Keitaro’s biggest problems is that he can't even consider changing the status quo by say evicting the troublesome tenants or applying to a different school, because he feels that doing so would invalidate the years of effort he's already invested. It doesn't occur to him that the status quo is him getting beaten for any slight mistake, including others (the story starts with Naru entering PervertRevengeMode because she walked in on him changing in his own room), and that since Shinobu can now become ComicBook/SheHulk, things ''will'' change regardless of what he wants.
* LaserGuidedKarma: Jade subjects the Hinata Harpies to a brutal beat down and total humiliation after they push her too far.
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* HulkingOut:HulkingOut: Thanks to Shinobu being doused in gamma-goo in Kaolla's lab, she winds up doing this every time she's angry, hurt, or stressed.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7681912/1/The-Beast-That-I-Am The Beast That I Am]]'' by OrionPax09 features Shinobu accidentally exposed to one of Kaolla's experiments. Experiments that just happen to involve gamma radiation. And it isn't long before the other girls of the Hinata discover that they ''really'' don't like Shinobu when she's angry. But Keitaro might wind up learning to love it...
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!!This ''Manga/LoveHina'' FanFic contains examples of:
* AmazonianBeauty: Shinobu becomes one as a result of Kaolla's experiments.
* CurbStompBattle: Naru, Kaolla, and Motoko versus one very angry gamma-mutated girl. The Hinata Harpies never even knew what hit them.
* HulkingOut:
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!!This ''Manga/LoveHina'' FanFic contains examples of:
* AmazonianBeauty: Shinobu becomes one as a result of Kaolla's experiments.
* CurbStompBattle: Naru, Kaolla, and Motoko versus one very angry gamma-mutated girl. The Hinata Harpies never even knew what hit them.
* HulkingOut:
