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* FantasticRacism: When Echo arrives at Wethoof to get medical treatment for an injured Daring, Ginger refuses to open the gates, even when Echo offers to wait outside, and deliberately left out the fact that Echo had an injured pony with him when she informed her superiors. Thankfully said superiors are much more open minded and promptly call her out on this.
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.The Ballad Of Echo The Diamond Dog to Fanfic.The Ballad Of Echo The Diamond Dog. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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* InterspeciesRomanceInterspeciesRomance: Disarray is the result of one between Discord and Celestia.
** Echo and Daring Do.
** Echo and Daring Do.
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* Flashback: Chapter 13 [[spoiler:of the death of Ginger Snaps mother]]
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* Flashback: {{Flashback}}: Chapter 13 [[spoiler:of the death of Ginger Snaps mother]]
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* OhMyGods: At one point, when utterly panicking, Echo calls upon "Jesus, God, Allah, Zeus, Odin, Vishnu, Buddha, Ra, [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Princess Luna]], and [[TheColbertReport Stephen Colbert]]." In one sentence. InThatOrder.
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* OhMyGods: At one point, when utterly panicking, Echo calls upon "Jesus, God, Allah, Zeus, Odin, Vishnu, Buddha, Ra, [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Princess Luna]], and [[TheColbertReport [[Series/TheColbertReport Stephen Colbert]]." In one sentence. InThatOrder.
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* ShoutOut: Anything Disarray does ever, though Echo, being from our world, gets in on it too.
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* ShoutOut: Anything Disarray [[spoiler:Disarray]] does ever, though Echo, being from our world, gets in on it too.
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Part of the Fanfic/{{The Chessgame Of The Gods}} series of My Little Pony fanfics. If fanfics, if not the orignal story in the collaberation. Though collaboration, although is self contained and does not cross over with any of the other fanfics like the others.
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* HeroicMime: Played straight within the first chapter of the story. Later subverted [[spoiler: when Echo gains the ability to write in the '''air''']]
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* HeroicMime: Played straight within the first chapter of the story. Later subverted [[spoiler: when Echo gains the ability to write in the '''air''']]'''air'''.]]
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* ShoutOut: Anything Disarray does ever. Though ever, though Echo, being from our world, gets in on it too.
* SugarBowl: [[SubvertedTropeEquesttria Equestria isn't.]]
* SugarBowl: [[SubvertedTrope
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* BreakingTheFourthWall:spoiler:[= Disarray, aka "The Almighty Referencer"]] loves doing this by throwing in popular references. Done to a much smaller extent by Echo, who is the only one of the group who gets said references.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall:spoiler:[= Disarray, BreakingTheFourthWall: [[spoiler:Disarray, aka "The Almighty Referencer"]] loves doing this by throwing in popular references. Done to a much smaller extent by Echo, who is the only one of the group who gets said references.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Victims of the river.
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* FieryRedhead: Ginger. Literally and ''and'' emotionally.
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X* DeconstructionFic: Of the MLP "Human In Equestria/Self Insert" subgenre. Instead of a pony, able to get along, he's a Diamond Dog, who are regarded about as well as... well, Orcs. Instead of things going his way, he's rendered mute within ''minutes'' of his arrival. Discord openly states that his presence there is guaranteed to cause chaos wherever he goes. He faces out-and-out racism because of his species. Darker elements of the show are explored.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: The author seems to think claws are bone. They are not. Claws are keratin, and [[spoiler:keratin is not hard to grow back at all. In fact, being equivalent to fingernails, claws grow all the time]].
* DeconstructionFic: Of the MLP "Human In Equestria/Self Insert" subgenre. Instead of a pony, able to get along, he's a Diamond Dog, who are regarded about as well as... well, Orcs. Instead of things going his way, he's rendered mute within ''minutes'' of his arrival. Discord openly states that his presence there is guaranteed to cause chaos wherever he goes. He faces out-and-out racism because of his species. Darker elements of the show are explored.
* DeconstructionFic: Of the MLP "Human In Equestria/Self Insert" subgenre. Instead of a pony, able to get along, he's a Diamond Dog, who are regarded about as well as... well, Orcs. Instead of things going his way, he's rendered mute within ''minutes'' of his arrival. Discord openly states that his presence there is guaranteed to cause chaos wherever he goes. He faces out-and-out racism because of his species. Darker elements of the show are explored.
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collaberation. Though is self contained and does not cross over with any of the other fanfics like the others.