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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: The reaction of the initial group of ponies who find out about the show in chapter one... And then chapter 30, discussing clopfics, comes to light. [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgement May all those who read]] look at AuthorFilibuster.

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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: The reaction of the initial group of ponies who find out about the show in chapter one... And then chapter 30, discussing clopfics, comes to light. [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgement May all those who read]] read look at AuthorFilibuster.
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* BrainBleach: Chapter 30 [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] this with a disc labeled as this. It contains pictures of cute fluffy bunnies and TastesLikeDiabetes.

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* BrainBleach: Chapter 30 [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] this with a disc labeled as this. It contains pictures of cute fluffy bunnies and TastesLikeDiabetes.bunnies.

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* TallPoppySyndrome: Art accuses the Mane Six of suffering this in chapter 10.
--> '''Art:''' "Trixie has her own problems, but I swear you lot seem to have a terminal case of Tall Poppy Syndrome."

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* TallPoppySyndrome: Art accuses the Mane Six of suffering references this trope by name in chapter 10.
--> '''Art:''' "Trixie has her own problems, but I swear you lot seem
Chapter 10 when discussing Applejack, Rainbow, and Rarity's treatment of Trixie in "Boast Busters" while convincing them to have a terminal case of Tall Poppy Syndrome." reconcile with her.
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* BadassMustache: Dusty Tomes, the director of the museum in Canterlot is described as having an epic mustache.
-->'''Art, on Dusty Tomes and his mustache:''' a white on grey earth pony in a formal jacket and tie with a cutie mark of two greek pillars and what had to be the most epic mustache in Equestria. I exaggerate not; he had a huge, swooping handlebar mustache of snowy white, waxed and groomed to perfection, that covered almost his entire face. It surely entered rooms before him to announce his presence. His snowy eyebrows were only barely second-place in their epicness, a pair of eaglet's wings, vying for dominance on his somber brow.



* BigOlEyebrows: See Badass Mustache, above.

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* LabcoatOfScienceAndMedicine: Just before the second draconequus attack, a press conference happens, featuring Professor Cosmic Constant. The professor is described as wearing a white labcoat, and his looks seem to channel Albert Einstein.
* LamePun: Chapter 22 features the Ponyville Library getting an expansion. Mayor Mare supplies a pun about a library (built inside a tree) and branches.
* LamePunReaction: Down in the [[FootnoteFever footnotes]] the author commiserates about Mayor Mare using that treehouse library and branches pun in multiple speeches.

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* LabcoatOfScienceAndMedicine: Just before the second draconequus attack, a press conference happens, featuring Professor Cosmic Constant. The professor is described as wearing a white labcoat, and his looks seem to channel Albert Einstein.
* LamePun: Chapter 22 features the Ponyville Library getting an expansion. Mayor Mare supplies a pun about a library (built inside a tree) and branches.
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* LamePunReaction: Down in In the [[FootnoteFever footnotes]] {{footnote|Fever}}s of Chapter 22 the author commiserates about Mayor Mare using that a treehouse library and branches pun in multiple speeches. speeches.

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* DieLaughing: Art defies this for [[spoiler: Discord]] hard. [[spoiler: Discord was prepared to disappear into the aether satisfied that his death will open the way for Equestria to become the battleground for twelve worse Draconequii to battle over, [[LesserOfTwoEvils which could all have been avoided if the ponies hadn't rebelled against him]], but Art counters him by saying Chaos is neither inherently good nor evil, and declares him, as a being with free will, completely responsible for the bad choices that led to his demise. As a result, Discord disappears with rage on his face.]]

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* DieLaughing: Art defies this for [[spoiler: Discord]] hard. [[spoiler: Discord was prepared to disappear into the aether satisfied that his death will open the way for Equestria to become the battleground for twelve worse Draconequii to battle over, [[LesserOfTwoEvils which could all have been avoided if the ponies hadn't rebelled against him]], but Art [[ShutUpHannibal counters him him]] by saying Chaos is neither inherently good nor evil, and declares him, as a being with free will, completely responsible for the bad choices that led to his demise. As a result, Discord disappears with rage on his face.]]



** Chapter 29 gives us [[Series/LostInSpace Danger, Will Robinson,]] alien being is sending mixed signals.

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** Chapter 29 gives us [[Series/LostInSpace us, "[[Series/LostInSpace Danger, Will Robinson,]] alien being is sending mixed signals. signals."
* ShutUpHannibal: Arthur pulls this on [[spoiler: several villains, but most notably Discord, calling him out on how he's used Chaos as a flimsy excuse for being a {{jerkass}}, and Anarchy, exposing and destroying his attempt to con Rarity into [[SenselessSacrifice sacrificing her magic and very life]] and thus corrupt the Element of Generosity]].

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** Chapter 18 references ''Disney/AtlantisTheLostEmpire'':

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** Chapter 18 references ''Disney/AtlantisTheLostEmpire'': ''WesternAnimation/AtlantisTheLostEmpire'':


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* UndeadTaxExemption: Subverted. Chapter 17 is all about Arthur going through the paperwork to create an official identity for himself, since his advisory position to the Princesses makes him "a bit high profile for Royal Records to overlook, no matter how high their in box is filled". And it's even more difficult since they've fallen into the obsessive belief that if they don't already have a listing for a category, it doesn't exist. In the end, Arthur has to pull a lot of fake answers out of their existing categories for the sake of streamlining the process, including claiming to be a member of a subspecies of draconequus, just to get them to accept him.
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* CallingTheOldWomanOut: Art is enraged when he is informed of Celestia's actions towards Twilight when dealing with King Sombra, and calls her out for deliberately setting Twilight up to fail. When Celestia's answer fails to satisfy him, [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Arthur leaves in rage]].

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* CallingTheOldWomanOut: CallingTheOldManOut: Art is enraged when he is informed of Celestia's actions towards Twilight when dealing with King Sombra, and calls her out for deliberately setting Twilight up to fail. When Celestia's answer fails to satisfy him, [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Arthur leaves in rage]].



-->'''Guardspony''': "Well, your ladyship, I hope the rest of your group are doing a little better than this..."
--> There was an explosion somewhere in the city. Ponies screamed in alarm.
--> Pinkie Pie shook her head. "You shoulda known better than to say that," she scolded the guard.
* TenMinuteRetirement: Chapter 28 has Arthur temporarily leaving his advisory role to the Princesses after he and Celestia [[CallingTheOldWomanOut come to blows]] about how her "MyBelovedSmother" attitude is harming Twilight and Equestria as a whole. He and Celestia manage to reconcile after both of them had a chance to cool themselves off.

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-->'''Guardspony''': "Well, your ladyship, I hope the rest of your group are doing a little better than this..."
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* TenMinuteRetirement: Chapter 28 has Arthur temporarily leaving his advisory role to the Princesses after he and Celestia [[CallingTheOldWomanOut [[CallingTheOldManOut come to blows]] about how her "MyBelovedSmother" attitude is harming Twilight and Equestria as a whole. He and Celestia manage to reconcile after both of them had a chance to cool themselves off.
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--> In vexation Luna had pulled out a copper bit, magically drilled a hole through it, and slapped it down between us. "There!" she'd said. "Wager made! And I shall spot thee the plugged copper bit as well! [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Now stop arguing and pass the boysenberry sauce!]]"

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--> In vexation Luna had pulled out a copper bit, magically drilled a hole through it, and slapped it down between us. "There!" she'd said. "Wager made! And I shall spot thee the plugged copper bit as well! [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Now stop arguing and pass the boysenberry sauce!]]"sauce!"



* IChooseToStay: Arthur decides that he has no choice (and to be frank, doesn't need one) but to stay in Equestria because of the potential damage he might cause to both himself and his family if he returns home after being given the chance in an early chapter. [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Not that anypony has a problem with that.]]

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* IChooseToStay: Arthur decides that he has no choice (and to be frank, doesn't need one) but to stay in Equestria because of the potential damage he might cause to both himself and his family if he returns home after being given the chance in an early chapter. [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Not that anypony has a problem with that.]]

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* CryForTheDevil: Chapter 39. [[spoiler: Fluttershy cries over the draconequus Clutter as he starves to death from lack of Potential.]]

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* CryForTheDevil: Chapter InUniverse, in chapter 39. [[spoiler: Fluttershy cries over the draconequus Clutter as he starves to death from lack of Potential.]]


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* DrunkOnMilk: After a thousand years of sensory deprivation on the moon, Luna is getting drunk on ''life'', with any kind of pleasant sight, sound, taste, smell or touch triggering an intoxication-like effect. Celestia's initially worried about her, wondering if her behavior is the result of a curse or brain tumor, until Arthur figures out the real cause and reassures her.
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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: The reaction of the initial group of ponies who find out about the show in chapter one... And then chapter 30, discussing clopfics, comes to light. [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgement May all those who read]] look at AuthorFilibuster.

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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: The reaction of the initial group of ponies who find out about the show in chapter one... And then chapter 30, discussing clopfics, comes to light. [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgement [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgement May all those who read]] look at AuthorFilibuster.
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--> In vexation Luna had pulled out a copper bit, magically drilled a hole through it, and slapped it down between us. "There!" she'd said. "Wager made! And I shall spot thee the plugged copper bit as well! [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Now stop arguing and pass the boysenberry sauce!]]"

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--> In vexation Luna had pulled out a copper bit, magically drilled a hole through it, and slapped it down between us. "There!" she'd said. "Wager made! And I shall spot thee the plugged copper bit as well! [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Now stop arguing and pass the boysenberry sauce!]]"



* IChooseToStay: Arthur decides that he has no choice (and to be frank, doesn't need one) but to stay in Equestria because of the potential damage he might cause to both himself and his family if he returns home after being given the chance in an early chapter. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Not that anypony has a problem with that.]]

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* IChooseToStay: Arthur decides that he has no choice (and to be frank, doesn't need one) but to stay in Equestria because of the potential damage he might cause to both himself and his family if he returns home after being given the chance in an early chapter. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Not that anypony has a problem with that.]]
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* ActionSurvivor: Arthur, four-hundred pound [[OneOfUs everyman brony]] with a heart condition. Changes Equestria just by being there to help the people. [[spoiler: Lays the smackdown on TWO draconequi.]]

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* ActionSurvivor: Arthur, four-hundred pound [[OneOfUs [[JustForFun/OneOfUs everyman brony]] with a heart condition. Changes Equestria just by being there to help the people. [[spoiler: Lays the smackdown on TWO draconequi.]]

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* AdamWesting: What Art suggests to Trixie to get her to fall back in love with performing again: play her LargeHam, showboating self to the hilt, play it all for laughs, and laugh along with the audience. He even uses Creator/WilliamShatner as an example.



* ATasteOfPower: During Anarchy's invasion attempt where he kidnaps the Princesses and most of the Bearers, the Elements of Harmony transfer to Rarity, the last free one, and transform her into an alicorn. After everyone is rescued and Anarchy beaten, she transforms back. [[spoiler: For about half an hour; then she ascends, this time permanently.]]



* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Fluttershy, AllLovingHero that she is, [[spoiler: [[AlasPoorVillain comforts the draconequus Clutter even in his final moments]] and despite the fact he came to invade. Clutter is so moved that he uses all his remaining power to ascend Fluttershy into an alicorn]].



* CallingTheOldWomanOut: Art is enraged when he is informed of Celestia's actions towards Twilight when dealing with King Sombra, and calls her out for deliberately setting Twilight up to fail. When Celestia's answer fails to satisfy him, [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Arthur leaves in rage]].



* CryForTheDevil: Chapter 39. [[spoiler: Fluttershy cries over the draconequus Clutter as he starves to death from lack of Potential.]]



* DieLaughing: Art defies this for [[spoiler: Discord]] hard. [[spoiler: Discord was prepared to disappear into the aether satisfied that his death will open the way for Equestria to become the battleground for twelve worse Draconequii to battle over, [[LesserOfTwoEvils which could all have been avoided if the ponies hadn't rebelled against him]], but Art counters him by saying Chaos is neither inherently good nor evil, and declares him, as a being with free will, completely responsible for the bad choices that led to his demise. As a result, Discord disappears with rage on his face.]]



* EvenMoreOmnipotent: [[spoiler: Despite all of them being [[RealityWarper Chaos entities]], not all the draconequui players in the chaos tournament for Equestria are of equal strength. The tournament's original plan was designed to give each of them an equal shot, with each invader restricted to altering one law of physics for their invasion attempt, and the weaker draconequui given a power boost to allow them to do so. Once Art deduced the pattern, though, that plan went out the window.]]



* GoodWithNumbers: ''Snails'' of all people: turns out his cutie mark came about when he was thinking about numbers, specifically the Fibonacci sequence and how it relates to spirals in nature, such as the spirals in snail shells. However, given that the colt gets his head stuck in a museum exhibit moment later, he's more of a DitzyGenius.



* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Sid: Apparently after fourteen clutches, his mother had run out of ideas for names.
* MyBelovedSmother: Chapter 28 sees Art [[AccusationFic accusing]] Celestia of being this. We also learn that he feels this way very strongly about his own parents.

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* ManipulativeBastard: Anarchy the draconequus, whose invasion attempt consists of manipulating Rarity into [[HeroicSacrifice giving her life for her friends and Equestria]], and thus perverting her element of Generosity into Self-Destruction. Lucky Art is around to poke some holes in his logic.
* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Sid: Sid the dragon: Apparently after fourteen clutches, his mother had run out of ideas for names.
* MyBelovedSmother: Chapter 28 sees Art [[AccusationFic accusing]] Celestia of being this. We also learn that he feels this way very strongly about his own parents. parents.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The draconequus Eris tells Art that [[spoiler: originally each invading draconequus was restricted to altering one law of physics and either buffed or nerfed to a level playing field, but because Art deduced the pattern and announced it to the ponies, that order is now broken and the stronger draconequui can go as hard as they want (if for only one thing).]]


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* ShutUpKirk: The start of Chapter 27 describes the Changeling wedding invasion, and despite Arthur spelling out how Chrysalis's invasion plan is doomed to failure from the start and how there's a better way, Chrysalis just knocks him out.
* SortingAlgorithmOfEvil: Averted. [[spoiler: Ataxia, the first draconequus invader, was stated to be stronger than Discord, but he was under the restrictions of "one alteration of the laws of physics" stated for their chaos tournament, and was only beaten because he was taken by surprise. Mayhem, the next invader, was under the same restrictions, but after those rules were removed, the subsequent draconequui invaders aren't as strong. Eris said that without that balancing, she wouldn't have a chance, and a later draconequus, Clutter, was downright puny.]]


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* TenMinuteRetirement: Chapter 28 has Arthur temporarily leaving his advisory role to the Princesses after he and Celestia [[CallingTheOldWomanOut come to blows]] about how her "MyBelovedSmother" attitude is harming Twilight and Equestria as a whole. He and Celestia manage to reconcile after both of them had a chance to cool themselves off.

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* AccusationFic: [[spoiler: Chapter 10 sees the return of Trixie. While RC subscribes to the [[TallPoppySyndrome 'AJ, Rarity and Rainbow Dash are at fault' camp]], Arthur also points out that Trixie's cutie mark symbolizing performing magic tricks in a world full of FunctionalMagic is the real cause behind Trixie being who she is.]]

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* AccusationFic: [[spoiler: Chapter 10 sees the return of Trixie. While RC subscribes to the [[TallPoppySyndrome 'AJ, Rarity and Rainbow Dash are at fault' camp]], Arthur also points out that Trixie's cutie mark symbolizing performing magic tricks and stage magic in a world full of FunctionalMagic is the real cause behind Trixie being who she is.]]


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* GodzillaThreshold: In chapter 41, Art [[LampshadeHanging mentions this trope by name]] in reference to the Mane Six and the use of the Elements. He must then give a brief, summarized description to Fluttershy.
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* ActionSurvivor: Arthur, four-hundred pound [[OneOfUs everyman brony]] with a heart condition. Changes Equestria just by being there to help the people. [[spoiler: Lays the smackdown on TWO draconequii.]]

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* ActionSurvivor: Arthur, four-hundred pound [[OneOfUs everyman brony]] with a heart condition. Changes Equestria just by being there to help the people. [[spoiler: Lays the smackdown on TWO draconequii.draconequi.]]



-->'''Art, on Dusty Tomes and his mustache''': a white on grey earth pony in a formal jacket and tie with a cutie mark of two greek pillars and what had to be the most epic mustache in Equestria. I exaggerate not; he had a huge, swooping handlebar mustache of snowy white, waxed and groomed to perfection, that covered almost his entire face. It surely entered rooms before him to announce his presence. His snowy eyebrows were only barely second-place in their epicness, a pair of eaglet's wings, vying for dominance on his somber brow.

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-->'''Art, on Dusty Tomes and his mustache''': mustache:''' a white on grey earth pony in a formal jacket and tie with a cutie mark of two greek pillars and what had to be the most epic mustache in Equestria. I exaggerate not; he had a huge, swooping handlebar mustache of snowy white, waxed and groomed to perfection, that covered almost his entire face. It surely entered rooms before him to announce his presence. His snowy eyebrows were only barely second-place in their epicness, a pair of eaglet's wings, vying for dominance on his somber brow.



--> "Lesson one, [[spoiler: you pretentious jigsaw puzzle]]; you want to go around pushing other people's buttons, you'd better remember that some of those buttons go BOOM."
* TheBet: Arthur, Celestia and Luna bet plugged copper bits on whether certain things will happen with political issues. It all started when Arthur and Celestia were debating while they were eating, with Celestia disagreeing so much that she wouldn't even bet said bits. Luna, hungry and annoyed...
--> "In vexation Luna had pulled out a copper bit, magically drilled a hole through it, and slapped it down between us. "There!" she'd said. "Wager made! And I shall spot thee the plugged copper bit as well! [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Now stop arguing and pass the boysenberry sauce!]]"
** Arthur won the first bet, by the way. This started the little game, and the record is now five wins for Arthur, three for Celestia and two for Luna.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Arthur. Nice, friendly, loves kids. But he has issues. Do not discuss them, unless you want to find a four-hundred pound raging fat man screaming bloody murder at you.

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--> "Lesson one, [[spoiler: you pretentious jigsaw puzzle]]; you want to go around pushing other people's buttons, you'd better remember that some ''some'' of those buttons go BOOM.'''BOOM'''."
* TheBet: Arthur, Celestia Celestia, and Luna bet plugged copper bits on whether certain things will happen with political issues. It all started when Arthur and Celestia were debating while they were eating, with Celestia disagreeing so much that she wouldn't even bet said bits. Luna, hungry and annoyed...
--> "In In vexation Luna had pulled out a copper bit, magically drilled a hole through it, and slapped it down between us. "There!" she'd said. "Wager made! And I shall spot thee the plugged copper bit as well! [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Now stop arguing and pass the boysenberry sauce!]]"
** Arthur won the first bet, by the way. This started the little game, and the record is now five wins for Arthur, three for Celestia Celestia, and two for Luna.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Arthur. Nice, friendly, loves kids. But he has issues. Do not discuss them, unless you want to find a four-hundred pound four-hundred-pound raging fat man bearing down on you while screaming bloody murder at you. murder.



* CerebusSyndrome: Mostly lighthearted. [[spoiler: [[WhamEpisode Chapter 19]], here comes a new [[KnightOfCerebus draconequs]]... And then we learn a bastard tournament with TWELVE of them is coming.]] Still manages to be light and soft though.

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* CerebusSyndrome: Mostly lighthearted. [[spoiler: [[WhamEpisode Chapter 19]], here comes a new [[KnightOfCerebus draconequs]]...draconequus]]... And then we learn a bastard tournament with TWELVE of them is coming.]] Still manages to be light and soft though.



* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:The Draconequii are indeed beings in between universes, with a twelve-draco themed chaos tournament held whenever they find a universe to settle down. This happened when Discord first came in, and now we know that the next tournament is coming.]]

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* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:The Draconequii Draconequi are indeed beings in between universes, with a twelve-draco themed chaos tournament held whenever they find a universe to settle down. This happened when Discord first came in, and now we know that the next tournament is coming.]]



* HandicappedBadass: Arthur suffers from a heart condition and is rather overweight. Simply due to his knowledge of the myriad artifacts from his world, he's managed to advance Equestria in technology and thinking far more than it would have without him. [[spoiler: And then he beats a Draconequs by stabbing its eye with his cane, and manages to unleash a very [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown frightening]] beatdown on Discord.]]

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* HandicappedBadass: Arthur suffers from a heart condition and is rather overweight. Simply due to his knowledge of the myriad artifacts from his world, he's managed to advance Equestria in technology and thinking far more than it would have without him. [[spoiler: And then he beats a Draconequs Draconequus by stabbing its eye with his cane, and manages to unleash a very [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown frightening]] beatdown on Discord.]]



* InterspeciesRomance: Just like so many other things, deconstructed, and yet here it's also reconstructed. Biological and psychological inhibitions really prevent Arthur from being really attracted to Violette, and really, human-on-pony is weird. It's not just a "minor thing". But companionship, somebody to listen to? Who cares about species when the loneliness hurts? [[spoiler: Rather ironically, ShipTease pops up showing that he really might be attracted to her.]]

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* InterspeciesRomance: Just Deconstructed just like so many other things, deconstructed, and yet here it's also reconstructed. Biological and psychological inhibitions really prevent Arthur from being really attracted to Violette, and really, human-on-pony is weird. It's not just a "minor thing". But companionship, somebody to listen to? Who cares about species when the loneliness hurts? [[spoiler: Rather ironically, ShipTease pops up showing that he really might be attracted to her.]]



* ManChild: Arthur calls himself this when he feels like he's done something childish. [[spoiler: He had good parents who told him what not to do, but not what to actually do, so he was helpless throughout his life. Arthur even becomes a PsychopathicManchild when his BerserkButton is pressed.]]

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* ManChild: Arthur calls himself this when he feels like he's done something childish. [[spoiler: He had good parents who told him what not NOT to do, but not didn't teach him what to actually TO do, so he was thereby leaving him helpless throughout his life. Arthur even becomes a PsychopathicManchild when his BerserkButton is pressed.]]
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* TemptingFate: [[LampshadeHanging Lapshaded]] by Pinkie Pie at the end of Chapter 23.

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* TemptingFate: [[LampshadeHanging Lapshaded]] Lampshaded]] by Pinkie Pie at the end of Chapter 23.

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Chapter 22 gives us this cloudy gem: ...I felt the mane six to be more than a match for the modular Mayhem.

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Chapter 22 gives us this cloudy gem: ...gem:
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I felt the mane six to be more than a match for the modular Mayhem.
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** Chapter 18 references ''Disney/AtlantisTheLostEmpire'':
--->Cresting Wave nodded. "Just as the whole world started to tip sideways." She gave Celestia a sidelong glance. "Just be thankful it wasn't Air Strike's version of Chocolate Rain instead...."
--->"What--" Celestia started.
--->I held up a hand. "[[YouDoNotWantToKnow You don't wanna know,]]" I said. "Trust me on this one, Princess. I wanted to know. He told me, and now I'm telling you, you don't wanna know."
--->Celestia held up a hoof. "...I don't want to know."
--->"Good to know."
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* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Sid: Apparently after fourteen clutches, his mother had run out of ideas for names.
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** Chapter 26 shows Art making the comment that .. dying would be the last thing he did... Everypony groaned.
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-->'''Rarity:''' Oh. You. Are. [=DEAD=].

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-->'''Rarity:''' Oh. You.Oh, you. Are. [=DEAD=].

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** SeriousBusiness: Arthur is genuinely afraid for a while that Equestria might ''declare war'' on Earth for allowing such filth to be printed about their rulers and national heroes.



** SeriousBusiness: Arthur is genuinely afraid for a while that Equestria might ''declare war'' on Earth for allowing such filth to be printed about their rulers and national heroes.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: In Chapter 23, Mayhem has just hit Rarity with some rotten footstuffs. Rarity goes incandescent with rage.
-->'''Rarity:''' Oh. You. Are. [=DEAD=].
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* LamePun: Chapter 22 features the Ponyville Library getting an expansion. Mayor Mare supplies a pun about a library (built inside a tree) and branches.
* LamePunReaction: Down in the [[FootnoteFever footnotes]] the author commiserates about Mayor Mare using that treehouse library and branches pun in multiple speeches.
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* GratuitousFrench: Chapter 18 gives us Violette. An earth pony chambermaid from Prance.
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* TallPoppySyndrome: Art accuses the Mane Six of suffering this in chapter 10.
--> '''Art:''' "Trixie has her own problems, but I swear you lot seem to have a terminal case of Tall Poppy Syndrome."

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-->'''Art, on Dusty Tomes and his mustache''': a white on grey earth pony in a formal jacket and tie with a cutie mark of two greek pillars and what had to be the most epic mustache in Equestria. I exaggerate not; he had a huge, swooping handlebar mustache of snowy white, waxed and groomed to perfection, that covered almost his entire face. It surely entered rooms before him to announce his presence. His snowy eyebrows were only barely second-place in their epicness, a pair of eaglet's wings, vying for dominance on his somber brow. A gleaming monocle was wedged in place over his nearly invisible eye. He was carefully coiffed and groomed from mane to hooves, and stood with stiff formality, as unwavering as Gibralter.

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-->'''Art, on Dusty Tomes and his mustache''': a white on grey earth pony in a formal jacket and tie with a cutie mark of two greek pillars and what had to be the most epic mustache in Equestria. I exaggerate not; he had a huge, swooping handlebar mustache of snowy white, waxed and groomed to perfection, that covered almost his entire face. It surely entered rooms before him to announce his presence. His snowy eyebrows were only barely second-place in their epicness, a pair of eaglet's wings, vying for dominance on his somber brow. A gleaming monocle was wedged in place over his nearly invisible eye. He was carefully coiffed and groomed from mane to hooves, and stood with stiff formality, as unwavering as Gibralter.



* BigBrotherIsWatchingYou: To cover for Arthur being knowledgeable about pony society, instead of saying "Somebody made a TV show of us!", Arthur and the rest of the bronies are declared watchers of the ponyverse from another world.

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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Arthur. Nice, friendly, loves kids. But he has issues. Do not discuss them, unless you want to find a four-hundred pound raging fat man screaming bloody murder at you.
* BigBrotherIsWatchingYou: To cover for Arthur being knowledgeable about pony society, instead of saying "Somebody made a TV show of us!", Arthur and the rest of the bronies are declared watchers of the ponyverse from another world.
* BigOlEyebrows: See Badass Mustache, above.



* BewareTheNiceOnes: Arthur. Nice, friendly, loves kids. But he has issues. Do not discuss them, lest you want to find a four-hundred pound raging fat man screaming bloody murder for you.
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* BlackHoleSue: {{Discussed}} in-universe: Arthur has noticed that ever since his arrival in Equestria, circumstances have consistently fallen out in just such a way as to bring him influence and prestige. Over and over again he just happens to be in the right place at the right time to save the world, or happen to know just the right bit of trivia or philosophical argument. He finds this incredibly creepy, especially since he has no clue what is causing it or whether it will persist.

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* {{Badass}}: As usual, the Mane Six, Celestia, Luna etc.
** HandicappedBadass: Arthur suffers from a heart condition and is rather overweight. Simply due to his knowledge of the myriad artifacts from his world, he's managed to advance Equestria in technology and thinking far more than it would have without him. [[spoiler: And then he beats a Draconequs by stabbing its eye with his cane, and manages to unleash a very [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown frightening]] beatdown on Discord.]]


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* HandicappedBadass: Arthur suffers from a heart condition and is rather overweight. Simply due to his knowledge of the myriad artifacts from his world, he's managed to advance Equestria in technology and thinking far more than it would have without him. [[spoiler: And then he beats a Draconequs by stabbing its eye with his cane, and manages to unleash a very [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown frightening]] beatdown on Discord.]]

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