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* FaclessGoons: The vast majority of Taylor's forces are wearing helmets with opaque visors or googles, with balaclavas or fire hoods underneath them leaving only their eyes visible for most of them once the helmet comes off; while her helmetless units will often be wearing sunglasses or face masks.
* FaclessGoons: The vast majority of Taylor's forces are wearing helmets with opaque visors or googles, with balaclavas or fire hoods underneath them leaving only their eyes visible for most of them once the helmet comes off; while her helmetless units will often be wearing sunglasses or face masks.
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*FaclessGoons: FacelessGoons: The vast majority of Taylor's forces are wearing helmets with opaque visors or googles, with balaclavas or fire hoods underneath them leaving only their eyes visible for most of them once the helmet comes off; while her helmetless units will often be wearing sunglasses or face masks.
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* PoliceBrutality: Taylor's projections are anything but considerate, when it comes to apprehending criminals.Considering the [[VideoGame/{{PAYDAYTheHeist}} source material]], this is not surprising.
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* PoliceBrutality: Taylor's projections are anything but considerate, when it comes to apprehending criminals.Considering the [[VideoGame/{{PAYDAYTheHeist}} source material]], this is not surprising. \n Though given just who, and what, their foes are, there aren't that many complaints from the wider public.
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*{FaclessGoons}: The vast majority of Taylor's forces are wearing helmets with opaque visors or googles, with balaclavas or fire hoods underneath them leaving only their eyes visible for most of them once the helmet comes off; while her helmetless units will often be wearing sunglasses or face masks.
*FlashedBadgeHijack: Taylor's forces have violently highjacked Federal vehicles that were responding to the bank heist turned shootout they were leaving, in order for them to respond to a city-wide bombing spree.
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*{FaclessGoons}: The vast majority of Taylor's forces are wearing helmets with opaque visors or googles, with balaclavas or fire hoods underneath them leaving only their eyes visible for most of them once the helmet comes off; while her helmetless units will often be wearing sunglasses or face masks.
*FlashedBadgeHijack: Taylor's forces have violently highjacked Federal vehicles that were responding to the bank heist turned shootout they were leaving, in order for them to respond to a city-wide bombing spree.
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It is also an origin story titled ''[[ShapedLikeItself TOC Origins]]'', detailing Taylor's early missions, and how she became what she is by the time of the main story
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* EMP: Just like in canon, Bakuda built a large EMP bomb. However, she couldn't finish it in time, and decided to cut her losses and activate it early. Thankfully, this meant that instead of the East Coast, only Brockton Bay was affected by it.
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The story is written by Lord of Admirals, and it can be found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/toc-worm-au-payday-series.1062653/ Spacebattles]], and https://archiveofourown.org
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The story is written by Lord of Admirals, and it can be found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/toc-worm-au-payday-series.1062653/ Spacebattles]], and https://archiveofourown.org
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50375515/chapters/127272301/ Archive of Our Own]]
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This is a Crossover between ''Literature/Worm'' and ''VideoGame/PAYDAYTheHeist''.
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This is a Crossover between ''Literature/Worm'' ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''VideoGame/PAYDAYTheHeist''.
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This is a Crossover between ''https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/Worm'' and ''VideoGame/PAYDAYTheHeist''.
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This is a Crossover between ''https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/Worm'' ''Literature/Worm'' and ''VideoGame/PAYDAYTheHeist''.
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* HellishCopter: In 1.6, one of Taylor's choppers was buzzed by Glory Girl. Normally,this wouldn't be a problem. However, since the EMP has previously knocked out the stabilizer, the helicopter was barely floating, so insted it crashed into a building.
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* HellishCopter: In 1.6, one of Taylor's choppers was buzzed by Glory Girl.
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The story is written by Lord of Admirals, and it can be found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/toc-worm-au-payday-series.1062653/ Spacebattles]], and https://archiveofourown.org/works/50375515/chapters/127272301
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The story is written by Lord of Admirals, and it can be founs found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/toc-worm-au-payday-series.1062653/ Spacebattles]]
Spacebattles]], and https://archiveofourown.org/works/50375515/chapters/127272301
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Taylor holds a mission, one that every gang, crew, and organization opposes:
Maintain peace, restore order.
Pretty simple as far as goals go, right? Not so, watch as she face opposition at every turn; as enemies appear from all walks of life, as even those she trusts could be turned against her.
And watch, as she powers through it all, for she has had enough. It was time for the Civil Servants to serve the masses, instead of the politicians.
The story is written by Lord of Admirals, and it can be founs on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/toc-worm-au-payday-series.1062653/ Spacebattles]]
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!!This work contains examples of:
* AllThereInTheManual: The author has posted a lot of additional infomation regarding Taylor's forces, including things like how call signs and alert levels work.
* EMP: Just like in canon, Bakuda built a large EMP bomb. However, couldn't finish it in time, and decided to cut her lossess and activate it early. Thankfully, this ment that instead of the East Coast, only Brockton Bay was effected by it.
* HellishCopter: In 1.6, one of Taylor's choppers was buzzed by Glory Girl. Normally,this wouldn't be a problem. However, since the EMP has previously knocked out the stabilizer, the helicopter was barely floating, so insted it crashed into a building.
* PoliceBrutality:
Maintain peace, restore order.
Pretty simple as far as goals go, right? Not so, watch as she face opposition at every turn; as enemies appear from all walks of life, as even those she trusts could be turned against her.
And watch, as she powers through it all, for she has had enough. It was time for the Civil Servants to serve the masses, instead of the politicians.
The story is written by Lord of Admirals, and it can be founs on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/toc-worm-au-payday-series.1062653/ Spacebattles]]
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!!This work contains examples of:
* AllThereInTheManual: The author has posted a lot of additional infomation regarding Taylor's forces, including things like how call signs and alert levels work.
* EMP: Just like in canon, Bakuda built a large EMP bomb. However, couldn't finish it in time, and decided to cut her lossess and activate it early. Thankfully, this ment that instead of the East Coast, only Brockton Bay was effected by it.
* HellishCopter: In 1.6, one of Taylor's choppers was buzzed by Glory Girl. Normally,this wouldn't be a problem. However, since the EMP has previously knocked out the stabilizer, the helicopter was barely floating, so insted it crashed into a building.
* PoliceBrutality:
