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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpinished: The reason Ratchet and Wheeljack are in exile is due to having grown outspoken about the Autobots' amoral actions.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpinished: NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The reason Ratchet and Wheeljack are in exile is due to having grown outspoken about the Autobots' amoral actions.
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** Prowl starts out somewhat nicer than he did at the start of the series.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Wheeljack's got the genius part down. Gadgets, on the other hand, are not really his strong suit, despite his insistence to the contrary.
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** Wheeljack is a good guy variant. He loves inventing and 97% or the time, his creations explode.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpinished: The reason Ratchet and Wheeljack are in exile is due to having grown outspoken about the Autobots' amoral actions.
--->'''Ratchet''': Sometimes standing up for what's right isn't taken to kindly.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpinished: The reason Ratchet and Wheeljack are in exile is due to having grown outspoken about the Autobots' amoral actions.
--->'''Ratchet''': Sometimes standing up for what's right isn't taken to kindly.
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* BattleCouple: Lugnut and Strika.
** Blackarachnia tends to be on the receiving end of this from fellow Decepticons due to her half-organic nature.
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** Blackarachnia tends to be on the receiving end of this from fellow Decepticons due to her half-organic nature.
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* PerpetualPoverty: Sari, in contrast to her [[Fiction500 canon counterpart]], pretty much lives off a measly income of "however much I can pickpocket off other people" and lives in an abandoned car factory.
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* PerpetualPoverty: Sari, in contrast to her [[Fiction500 canon counterpart]], pretty much lives off a measly income of "however much I can pickpocket off other people" and lives in an abandoned car factory. The only things she can afford amount to a TV and food.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Optimus took the Allspark from Cybertron to hide it from the warring factions, despite all the good it could do. His reasoning stems from how the Allsparks limitless power can corrupt those who use it and how said power can create innumerable Cybertronians, which turns them into expendable units.
* WhoWritesThisCrap: Sari's reaction to a ''very'' crappy tv show called "Beauty and the Bot".
* WhoWritesThisCrap: Sari's reaction to a ''very'' crappy tv show called "Beauty and the Bot".
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Optimus took the Allspark from Cybertron to hide it from the warring factions, despite all the good it could do. His reasoning stems from how the Allsparks Allspark's limitless power can corrupt those who use it and how said power can create innumerable Cybertronians, which turns them into expendable units.
* WhoWritesThisCrap: Sari's reaction to a ''very'' crappytv TV show called "Beauty and the Bot".Bot".
* TheXenophile: Prowl is fascinated by Earth, the life on the planet, and it's beauty. This causes no end to Ratchet's frustration, as he wants his team to avoid all contact with the humans.
* WhoWritesThisCrap: Sari's reaction to a ''very'' crappy
* TheXenophile: Prowl is fascinated by Earth, the life on the planet, and it's beauty. This causes no end to Ratchet's frustration, as he wants his team to avoid all contact with the humans.
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* AgeLift: Prowl is part of the post-war generation in comparison to his canon counterpart, who was brought online in the waning years of the war.
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* AgeLift: AgeLift:
** Prowl is part of the post-war generation in comparison to his canon counterpart, who was brought online in the waning years of thewar.war.
** Optimus is much older, having fought in the Great War for a long time before being discovered by the Autobots.
** Prowl is part of the post-war generation in comparison to his canon counterpart, who was brought online in the waning years of the
** Optimus is much older, having fought in the Great War for a long time before being discovered by the Autobots.
** Optimus despises inequality. He viewed the Allspark as the root of said inequality on Cybertron and hit his RageBreakingPoint when the Autobots kept arguing to bring it back to their home-world.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Optimus grew up on a pre-war Cybertron, which enforced a caste-system that deprived them of choice. Then he was forced to fight in the Great War, where he fought and killed countless bots in many battles. This rendered him a heavily traumatized war-veteran with a pretty large chip on his shoulder due to killing many for what he considers arbitrary reasoning.
* FireForgedFriends: Downplayed. Optimus doesn't exactly become friends with the other Autobots after they finish dealing with Starscream, but they at least tolerate him and decide that the Allspark is safer in his hands than theirs.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Optimus does have good points on why the Allspark should remain hidden. It's telling that even ''Sentinal'', of all bots, agrees with this viewpoint.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Optimus does have good points on why the Allspark should remain hidden. It's telling that even ''Sentinal'', ''Sentinel'', of all bots, agrees with this viewpoint.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: The Autobots and Optimus didn't exactly work together on the best of terms.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Optimus took the Allspark from Cybertron to hide it from the warring factions, despite all the good it could do. His reasoning stems from how the Allsparks limitless power can corrupt those who use it and how said power can create innumerable Cybertronians, which turns them into expendable units.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Scalpel, the Decepticon's resident MadScientist, experiments and tortures his subordinates if they don't show up for work.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Scalpel, the Decepticon's resident MadScientist, experiments and tortures his subordinates if they don't show up for work.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Scalpel, the Decepticon's resident MadScientist, experiments and tortures his subordinates if they don't show up for work.
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* MadScientist:
** Scalpel is the main one for the Decepticons.
** Blackarachnia is implied to be one, though for more sympathetic reasons since she's trying to become a normal Cybertronian again.
** Scalpel is the main one for the Decepticons.
** Blackarachnia is implied to be one, though for more sympathetic reasons since she's trying to become a normal Cybertronian again.
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* FantasticRacism: Cybertronians in general have issues with organics.
** Ratchet tolerates them to a degree, but makes it a point to his crew that they need to maintain their distance from them at all times.
** Optimus, on the other hand, is okay with humans, but mentions having encountered other forms of organic life that were less than friendly.
** Blackarachnia tends to be on the receiving end of this from fellow Decepticons due to her half-organic nature.
** Ratchet tolerates them to a degree, but makes it a point to his crew that they need to maintain their distance from them at all times.
** Optimus, on the other hand, is okay with humans, but mentions having encountered other forms of organic life that were less than friendly.
** Blackarachnia tends to be on the receiving end of this from fellow Decepticons due to her half-organic nature.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: All the Autobots agree that the Decepticons should not have the Allspark. Optimus, however, believes that the Allspark should remain lost, while the rest want it back on Cybertron.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: WeAreStrugglingTogether:
** All the Autobots agree that the Decepticons should not have the Allspark. Optimus, however, believes that the Allspark should remain lost, while the rest want it back onCybertron.Cybertron.
** Following Megatron's "death", the Decepticons have been in a state of chaos due to the void in leadership.
** All the Autobots agree that the Decepticons should not have the Allspark. Optimus, however, believes that the Allspark should remain lost, while the rest want it back on
** Following Megatron's "death", the Decepticons have been in a state of chaos due to the void in leadership.
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* BodyHorror: Time has not been kind to Optimus while he was in stasis. Before his repairs, his body was heavily eroded over and rustic, with his face being almost completely gone and left in its place was a warped metal skull.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: All the Autobots agree that the Decepticons should not have the Allspark. Optimus, however, believes that the Allspark should remain lost, while the rest want it back on Cybertron.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: All the Autobots agree that the Decepticons should not have the Allspark. Optimus, however, believes that the Allspark should remain lost, while the rest want it back on Cybertron.Cybertron.
* WhoWritesThisCrap: Sari's reaction to a ''very'' crappy tv show called "Beauty and the Bot".
* WhoWritesThisCrap: Sari's reaction to a ''very'' crappy tv show called "Beauty and the Bot".
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* BerserkButton:
** Sari thoroughly hates it when it's brought up that she's an orphan or that she's alone. When Optimus brought this up, being InnocentlyInsensitive about it, she yelled at him to shut up.
** Sari thoroughly hates it when it's brought up that she's an orphan or that she's alone. When Optimus brought this up, being InnocentlyInsensitive about it, she yelled at him to shut up.
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* AdaptationalWimp: Kaleidoscope!Prowl is truly part of the post-war generation, playing the role of a middle child between Bulkhead and Bumblebee, unlike his canon counterpart who was brought online during the waning years of the Great War.
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* AdaptationalWimp: Kaleidoscope!Prowl AgeLift: Prowl is truly part of the post-war generation, playing the role of a middle child between Bulkhead and Bumblebee, unlike generation in comparison to his canon counterpart counterpart, who was brought online during in the waning years of the Great War.war.
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* CompositeCharacter:
** Ratchet has the role of canon!Optimus, while still maintaining his position as the team's medic.
* DeathByAdaptation: Issac Sumdac dies somewhere before the story begins.
** Ratchet has the role of canon!Optimus, while still maintaining his position as the team's medic.
* DeathByAdaptation: Issac Sumdac dies somewhere before the story begins.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Issac Sumdac dies somewhere before the story begins.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Issac Sumdac dies somewhere before the story begins.DecompositeCharacter:
** Longarm and Shockwave are split into separate characters rather than Longarm being an undercover identity for Shockwave.
** Longarm and Shockwave are split into separate characters rather than Longarm being an undercover identity for Shockwave.
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* Irony: You know how Optimus and Sentinel hate each other in the original series? Here, while their exact relationship is unknown, Sentinel ''agrees'' with the idea that the Allspark should remain lost since that is the reason the peace has lasted as long as it has.
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* Irony: {{Irony}}:
** You know how Optimus and Sentinel hate each other in the original series? Here, while their exact relationship is unknown, Sentinel ''agrees'' with the idea that the Allspark should remain lost since that is the reason the peace has lasted as long as ithas.has.
** Optimus and Ratchet are close friends across all incarnations of the series. Here, they don't know each other and pretty much hate each other on introduction.
** You know how Optimus and Sentinel hate each other in the original series? Here, while their exact relationship is unknown, Sentinel ''agrees'' with the idea that the Allspark should remain lost since that is the reason the peace has lasted as long as it
** Optimus and Ratchet are close friends across all incarnations of the series. Here, they don't know each other and pretty much hate each other on introduction.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: One of the reasons for Optimus's protectiveness of Sari is due to her showing him kindness even though he tried to kick her out of her only home.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Optimus does have good points on why the Allspark should remain hidden. It's telling that even ''Sentinal'' agrees with this viewpoint.
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* Irony: You know how Optimus and Sentinel hate each other in the original series? Here, while their exact relationship is unknown, Sentinel ''agrees'' with the idea that the Allspark should remain lost since that is the reason the peace has lasted as long as it has.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Optimus does have good points on why the Allspark should remain hidden. It's telling that even''Sentinal'' ''Sentinal'', of all bots, agrees with this viewpoint.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Optimus does have good points on why the Allspark should remain hidden. It's telling that even
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* PerpetualPoverty: Sari, in contrast to her [[Fiction500 canon counterpart]], pretty much lives off a measly income of "however much I can pickpocket off other people" and lives in an abandoned car factory.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Issac was shown to be a generous and benevolent businessman. When some members of his board suggested replacing the common factory workers with robots to improve efficiency, Issac shuts that idea down immediately. his mindset being that doing so would put several good people out of jobs and that the money they could save from doing so is inconsequential compared to the needs of others.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Issac was shown to be a generous and benevolent businessman. When some members of his board suggested replacing the common factory workers with robots to improve efficiency, Issac shuts that idea down immediately. his His mindset being that doing so would put several good people out of jobs and that the money they could save from doing so is inconsequential compared to the needs of others.
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The story begins almost the same way as it did in the show. A RagtagBunchOfMisfits finds the Allspark and are hunted down by the Decepticons because of it. However, they found something else along with it; The large nonfunctioning body of a fellow Cybertronian. After Megatron's assault on their ship, the Autobot group crash lands on Earth and remains trapped at the bottom of a lake for fifty years. Meanwhile, a scientist names Issac Sumdac finds Megatron's body and uses it to start his own Robotics company.
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The story begins almost the same way as it did in the show. A RagtagBunchOfMisfits finds the Allspark and are hunted down by the Decepticons because of it. However, they found something else along with it; The large nonfunctioning body of a fellow Cybertronian. After Megatron's assault on their ship, the Autobot group crash lands on Earth and remains trapped at the bottom of a lake for fifty years. Meanwhile, a scientist names named Issac Sumdac finds Megatron's body and uses it to start his own Robotics company.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Issac was shown to be a generous and benevolent businessman. When some members of his board suggested replacing the common factory workers with robots to improve efficiency, Issac shuts that idea down immediately. his mindset being that doing so would put several good people out of jobs and that the money they could save from doing so is inconsequential compared to the needs of others.
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** Optimus himself was able to take on three of the Autobots by himself with only minor damage.
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** Optimus himself was able to take on three of the Autobots by himself with only minor damage.damage.
* WeAreStrugglingTogether: All the Autobots agree that the Decepticons should not have the Allspark. Optimus, however, believes that the Allspark should remain lost, while the rest want it back on Cybertron.
* WeAreStrugglingTogether: All the Autobots agree that the Decepticons should not have the Allspark. Optimus, however, believes that the Allspark should remain lost, while the rest want it back on Cybertron.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Optimus isn't the IdealHero he normally is, nor is he the NiceGuy he was in the original series. He's now a traumatized warrior who took the all spark away from Cybertron, though not without [[WellIntentionedExtremist good reason]]. He also starts out as kind of a jerk toward Sari, but he grows out of this and it's replaced with BigBrotherInstinct.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Optimus isn't the IdealHero he normally is, nor is he the NiceGuy he was in the original series. He's now a traumatized warrior who took the all spark Allspark away from Cybertron, though not without [[WellIntentionedExtremist good reason]]. He also starts out as kind of a jerk toward Sari, but he grows out of this and it's replaced with BigBrotherInstinct.BigBrotherInstinct.
* AdaptationalWimp: Kaleidoscope!Prowl is truly part of the post-war generation, playing the role of a middle child between Bulkhead and Bumblebee, unlike his canon counterpart who was brought online during the waning years of the Great War.
* AdaptationalWimp: Kaleidoscope!Prowl is truly part of the post-war generation, playing the role of a middle child between Bulkhead and Bumblebee, unlike his canon counterpart who was brought online during the waning years of the Great War.
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** Megatron, like canon, can easily take on the entire team of Autobot by himself.
** Starscream spends most of his fight against the other Autobot rag dolling them. Optimus was the only one who could match him.
** Optimus himself was able to take on three of the Autobot by himself with only minor damage.
** Starscream spends most of his fight against the other Autobot rag dolling them. Optimus was the only one who could match him.
** Optimus himself was able to take on three of the Autobot by himself with only minor damage.
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** Megatron, like canon, can easily take on the entire team of Autobot Autobots by himself.
** Starscream spends most of his fight against the otherAutobot rag dolling Autobots rag-dolling them. Optimus was the only one who could match him.
** Optimus himself was able to take on three of theAutobot Autobots by himself with only minor damage.
** Starscream spends most of his fight against the other
** Optimus himself was able to take on three of the
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** Starscream, like canon, is much more of a threat than he usually is. The Author has gone on to state that this was his intent, as Starscream is the Decepticon 2nd-in-command for a reason.
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** Starscream, like canon, is much more of a threat than he usually is. The Author has gone on to state that this was his the intent, as Starscream is the Decepticon 2nd-in-command for a reason.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Optimus develops one toward Sari, even scolding her like you'd expect an elder brother or parent would after he finds out she was in danger.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Subverted. Wheeljack accuses Optimus of being this, stating that despite his distaste for anyone using the Allspark's power for selfish reasons, he did use it to heal himself. However, Optimus didn't use it to heal himself, Sari did by complete accident against his will.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Subverted. Wheeljack accuses Optimus of being this, stating that despite his distaste for anyone using the Allspark's power for selfish reasons, he did use it to heal himself. However, Optimus didn't use it to heal himself, Sari did by complete accident against his will.will.
* OneManArmy:
** Megatron, like canon, can easily take on the entire team of Autobot by himself.
** Starscream spends most of his fight against the other Autobot rag dolling them. Optimus was the only one who could match him.
** Optimus himself was able to take on three of the Autobot by himself with only minor damage.
* OneManArmy:
** Megatron, like canon, can easily take on the entire team of Autobot by himself.
** Starscream spends most of his fight against the other Autobot rag dolling them. Optimus was the only one who could match him.
** Optimus himself was able to take on three of the Autobot by himself with only minor damage.
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* FredianExcuse: Optimus's reason for taking the Allspark away from Cybertron was that he felt [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity nobody should have that kind of power]]. He also felt that with the Allspark's ability to create an immeasurable number of Cybertronians, it would render them expendable units that nobody cares about.
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* FredianExcuse: FreudianExcuse: Optimus's reason for taking the Allspark away from Cybertron was that he felt [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity nobody should have that kind of power]]. He also felt that with the Allspark's ability to create an immeasurable number of Cybertronians, it would render them expendable units that nobody cares about.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262370/1/TFA-Kaleidoscope TFA Kaleidoscope]]'' is a fanfic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1230397/Emotwo Emotwo]]''. It is an AU retelling of ''{{Transformers Animated}}'' with different characters in different positions. Some {{Composite Characters}}, some {{Decomposite Characters}}, but a {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}} still winds up on Earth. As one reviewer put it, it's the world of Transformers Animated viewed through a kaleidoscope.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262370/1/TFA-Kaleidoscope TFA Kaleidoscope]]'' is a fanfic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1230397/Emotwo Emotwo]]''. It is an AU retelling of ''{{Transformers Animated}}'' ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'' with different characters in different positions. Some {{Composite Characters}}, some {{Decomposite Characters}}, but a {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}} still winds up on Earth. As one reviewer put it, it's the world of Transformers Animated viewed through a kaleidoscope.
kaleidoscope.
The story begins almost the same way as it did in the show. A RagtagBunchOfMisfits finds the Allspark and are hunted down by the Decepticons because of it. However, they found something else along with it; The large nonfunctioning body of a fellow Cybertronian. After Megatron's assault on their ship, the Autobot group crash lands on Earth and remains trapped at the bottom of a lake for fifty years. Meanwhile, a scientist names Issac Sumdac finds Megatron's body and uses it to start his own Robotics company.
And that's where the similarities end.
The story begins almost the same way as it did in the show. A RagtagBunchOfMisfits finds the Allspark and are hunted down by the Decepticons because of it. However, they found something else along with it; The large nonfunctioning body of a fellow Cybertronian. After Megatron's assault on their ship, the Autobot group crash lands on Earth and remains trapped at the bottom of a lake for fifty years. Meanwhile, a scientist names Issac Sumdac finds Megatron's body and uses it to start his own Robotics company.
And that's where the similarities end.
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** Optimus is no longer the Idealistic young bot he was in Canon. Here, he's a much older {{Shell Shocked Veteran}}, and the Great War has caused him quite a bit of trauma.
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** Optimus is no longer the Idealistic young bot he was in Canon. Here, he's a much older {{Shell Shocked Veteran}}, ShellShockedVeteran, and the Great War has caused him quite a bit of trauma.
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* {{Adaptational Heroism}}:
** Thanks to being a {{Decomposite Character}} with Shockwave, Longarm isn't the mole and is genuinely on the side of good.
** Thanks to being a {{Decomposite Character}} with Shockwave, Longarm isn't the mole and is genuinely on the side of good.
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* {{Adaptational Heroism}}:
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** Thanks to being a{{Decomposite Character}} DecompositeCharacter with Shockwave, Longarm isn't the mole and is genuinely on the side of good.
** Thanks to being a
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* {{Adaptational Jerkass}}: Optimus isn't the {{Ideal Hero}} he normally is, nor is he the {{nice guy}} he was in the original series. He's now a traumatized warrior who took the all spark away from Cybertron for well-intentioned reasons. He also starts out as kind of a jerk toward Sari, but he grows out of this and it's replaced with {{Big Brother Instinct}}.
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* {{Adaptational Jerkass}}: AdaptationalJerkass: Optimus isn't the {{Ideal Hero}} IdealHero he normally is, nor is he the {{nice guy}} NiceGuy he was in the original series. He's now a traumatized warrior who took the all spark away from Cybertron for well-intentioned reasons. Cybertron, though not without [[WellIntentionedExtremist good reason]]. He also starts out as kind of a jerk toward Sari, but he grows out of this and it's replaced with {{Big Brother Instinct}}.BigBrotherInstinct.
* DeclarationOfProtection: Optimus makes it clear to the Autobot that he's not just the Allspark's protector anymore, he's now Sari's protector to.
* FredianExcuse: Optimus's reason for taking the Allspark away from Cybertron was that he felt [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity nobody should have that kind of power]]. He also felt that with the Allspark's ability to create an immeasurable number of Cybertronians, it would render them expendable units that nobody cares about.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Subverted. Wheeljack accuses Optimus of being this, stating that despite his distaste for anyone using the Allspark's power for selfish reasons, he did use it to heal himself. However, Optimus didn't use it to heal himself, Sari did by complete accident against his will.
* DeclarationOfProtection: Optimus makes it clear to the Autobot that he's not just the Allspark's protector anymore, he's now Sari's protector to.
* FredianExcuse: Optimus's reason for taking the Allspark away from Cybertron was that he felt [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity nobody should have that kind of power]]. He also felt that with the Allspark's ability to create an immeasurable number of Cybertronians, it would render them expendable units that nobody cares about.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Subverted. Wheeljack accuses Optimus of being this, stating that despite his distaste for anyone using the Allspark's power for selfish reasons, he did use it to heal himself. However, Optimus didn't use it to heal himself, Sari did by complete accident against his will.
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** Optimus is no longer the Idealistic young bot he was in Canon. Here, he's a much older {{Shell-Shocked Veteran}}, and the Great War has caused him quite a bit of trauma.
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** Optimus is no longer the Idealistic young bot he was in Canon. Here, he's a much older {{Shell-Shocked {{Shell Shocked Veteran}}, and the Great War has caused him quite a bit of trauma.
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** Optimus is now a veteran of the Great War, being able to fight against Starscream on even footing. Not to mention that he doesn't die like he does in Canon.
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** Optimus is now a veteran warrior of the Great War, being able to fight against Starscream on even footing. Not to mention that he doesn't die like he does in Canon.
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* {{Adaptational Jerkass}}: Optimus isn't the {{Ideal Hero}} he normally is, nor is he the {{nice guy}} he was in the original series. He's now a traumatized warrior who took the all spark away from Cybertron for well-intentioned reasons. He also starts out as kind of a jerk.
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* {{Adaptational Jerkass}}: Optimus isn't the {{Ideal Hero}} he normally is, nor is he the {{nice guy}} he was in the original series. He's now a traumatized warrior who took the all spark away from Cybertron for well-intentioned reasons. He also starts out as kind of a jerk.jerk toward Sari, but he grows out of this and it's replaced with {{Big Brother Instinct}}.
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** Thanks to being a {{Decomposite Character}} with Shockwave, Longer isn't the mole and is genuinely on the side of good.
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** Thanks to being a {{Decomposite Character}} with Shockwave, Longer Longarm isn't the mole and is genuinely on the side of good.
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*{{Adaptational Badass}}:
**Optimus is now a veteran of the Great War, being able to fight against Starscream on even footing. Not to mention that he doesn't die like he does in Canon.
**Starscream, like canon, is much more of a threat than he usually is. The Author has gone on to state that this was his intent, as Starscream is the Decepticon 2nd-in-command for a reason.
**Thanks to growing up on the streets, Sari is more hardened and less spoiled than she was at the start of the series.
**Optimus is now a veteran of the Great War, being able to fight against Starscream on even footing. Not to mention that he doesn't die like he does in Canon.
**Starscream, like canon, is much more of a threat than he usually is. The Author has gone on to state that this was his intent, as Starscream is the Decepticon 2nd-in-command for a reason.
**Thanks to growing up on the streets, Sari is more hardened and less spoiled than she was at the start of the series.
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** Sentinel Prime is described as being moderately less of a dick than he was in Canon.
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** Sentinel Prime is described as being moderately less of a dick than he was in Canon.Canon.
*{{Adaptational Jerkass}}: Optimus isn't the {{Ideal Hero}} he normally is, nor is he the {{nice guy}} he was in the original series. He's now a traumatized warrior who took the all spark away from Cybertron for well-intentioned reasons. He also starts out as kind of a jerk.
*{{Adaptational Jerkass}}: Optimus isn't the {{Ideal Hero}} he normally is, nor is he the {{nice guy}} he was in the original series. He's now a traumatized warrior who took the all spark away from Cybertron for well-intentioned reasons. He also starts out as kind of a jerk.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262370/1/TFA-Kaleidoscope TFA Kaleidoscope]]'' is a fanfic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1230397/Emotwo Emotwo]]''. It is an AU retelling of ''Western Animation/{{Transformers Animated}}'' with different characters in different positions. Some {{Composite Characters}}, some {{Decomposite Characters}}, but a {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}} still winds up on Earth. As one reviewer put it, it's the world of Transformers Animated viewed through a kaleidoscope.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262370/1/TFA-Kaleidoscope TFA Kaleidoscope]]'' is a fanfic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1230397/Emotwo Emotwo]]''. It is an AU retelling of ''Western Animation/{{Transformers ''{{Transformers Animated}}'' with different characters in different positions. Some {{Composite Characters}}, some {{Decomposite Characters}}, but a {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}} still winds up on Earth. As one reviewer put it, it's the world of Transformers Animated viewed through a kaleidoscope.
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** Optimus is no longer the Idealistic young bot he was in Canon. Here, he's a much older {{Shell-Shocked Veteran}}, and the Great War has caused him quite a bit of trauma.
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** Optimus is no longer the Idealistic young bot he was in Canon. Here, he's a much older {{Shell-Shocked Veteran}}, and the Great War has caused him quite a bit of trauma.trauma.
** Inverted with Arcee, who is a main character this time around and not trapped in a series-long coma.
* {{Adaptational Heroism}}:
** Thanks to being a {{Decomposite Character}} with Shockwave, Longer isn't the mole and is genuinely on the side of good.
** Sentinel Prime is described as being moderately less of a dick than he was in Canon.
** Inverted with Arcee, who is a main character this time around and not trapped in a series-long coma.
* {{Adaptational Heroism}}:
** Thanks to being a {{Decomposite Character}} with Shockwave, Longer isn't the mole and is genuinely on the side of good.
** Sentinel Prime is described as being moderately less of a dick than he was in Canon.
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!!Tropes Describing TFA Kaleidoscope
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!!Tropes Describing TFA KaleidoscopeKaleidoscope
* {{Adaptational Angst Upgrade}}:
**Sari was forced to live on the streets after her father died, due to not having any legal documentation to confirm her existence.
**Optimus is no longer the Idealistic young bot he was in Canon. Here, he's a much older {{Shell-Shocked Veteran}}, and the Great War has caused him quite a bit of trauma.
* {{Adaptational Angst Upgrade}}:
**Sari was forced to live on the streets after her father died, due to not having any legal documentation to confirm her existence.
**Optimus is no longer the Idealistic young bot he was in Canon. Here, he's a much older {{Shell-Shocked Veteran}}, and the Great War has caused him quite a bit of trauma.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262370/1/TFA-Kaleidoscope TFA Kaleidoscope]]'' is a fanfic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1230397/Emotwo Emotwo]]''. It is an AU retelling of ''Western Animation/{{Transformers Animated}}'' with different characters in different positions. Some {{Composite Characters}}, some {{Decomposite Characters}}, but a {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}} still winds up on Earth. As one reviewer put it, it's the world of Transformers Animated viewed through a kaleidoscope.
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!!Tropes Describing TFA Kaleidoscope
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!!Tropes Describing TFA Kaleidoscope