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* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel...a description that Shinji doesn't do much to dispel since [[spoiler:he made his and Asuka's daughter's skull into an Angelic core inside his body]]. His AT Field mastery also gives him seemingly superhuman power (he can casually break stone with his bare hands and climb up solid rock walls), plus Halkegenian magic doesn't affect him. That said, he is very reluctant to actually use the Well of Souls to its full potential, for various reasons.
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* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: HumanoidAbomination: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': [[MindHive the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact.Impact]]. In other words, he's an Angel...a description that Shinji doesn't do much to dispel since [[spoiler:he made his and Asuka's daughter's skull into an Angelic core inside his body]]. His AT Field mastery also gives him seemingly superhuman power (he can casually break stone with his bare hands and climb up solid rock walls), plus Halkegenian magic doesn't affect him. That said, he is very reluctant to actually use the Well of Souls to its full potential, for various reasons.
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* AnimalEyeSpy: Shinji discovers that the familiar/master bond allows he and Louise to see through each others' eyes. They use this in ch. 7 to discuss [[spoiler:Siesta's odd behavior and what would have caused it]] via written notes.
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* BadassBookworm: Due to being the container of the [[{{Instrumentality}} Well of Souls]] [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Shinji]] has the sum of human knowledge stored in his head.
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* BadassBookworm: Due to being the container of the [[{{Instrumentality}} [[AssimilationPlot Well of Souls]] [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Shinji]] Souls]], Shinji has the sum of human knowledge stored in his head.
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* BodySurf: [[spoiler:Rei]] emerges through Shinji and comes close to [[spoiler:"tanging" Siesta before she's stopped by Asuka]].
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* BodySurf: [[spoiler:Rei]] emerges through Shinji and comes [[spoiler:comes close to [[spoiler:"tanging" "tanging" Siesta before she's stopped by Asuka]].
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* ComicRolePlay: Well, not actually comedic. After failing to get Louise to understand the implications of [[spoiler:Siesta suddenly becoming a mistress of Count Mott]] through discussion, Shinji roleplays the possible iterations with her. It's eerily effective; Asuka is especially impressed.
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* ComicRolePlay: Well, not actually comedic.A serious take. After failing to get Louise to understand the implications of [[spoiler:Siesta suddenly becoming a mistress of Count Mott]] through discussion, Shinji roleplays the possible iterations with her. It's eerily effective; Asuka is especially impressed.
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* {{Dramedy}} [=/=] LighterAndSofter: ''Surrogate'' is much more comedic in tone than ''Points'', although the fundamental seriousness is still present.
* ExpositionBeam: Shinji gives Louise, Colbert, Osmond, and Longueville an idea of his past and what he had to deal with by having them each relive [[spoiler:his experience of piloting Unit 01 against Sachiel]].
* EyeScream: The experience of [[spoiler:Sachiel impaling Unit 01's head through its eye]] is described in detail during the ExpositionBeam scene. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
* [[AnimalEyeSpy Familiar Eye Spy]]: Shinji discovers that the familiar/master bond allows he and Louise to see through each others' eyes. They use this in ch. 7 to discuss [[spoiler:Siesta's odd behavior and what would have caused it]] via written notes.
* ExpositionBeam: Shinji gives Louise, Colbert, Osmond, and Longueville an idea of his past and what he had to deal with by having them each relive [[spoiler:his experience of piloting Unit 01 against Sachiel]].
* EyeScream: The experience of [[spoiler:Sachiel impaling Unit 01's head through its eye]] is described in detail during the ExpositionBeam scene. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
* [[AnimalEyeSpy Familiar Eye Spy]]: Shinji discovers that the familiar/master bond allows he and Louise to see through each others' eyes. They use this in ch. 7 to discuss [[spoiler:Siesta's odd behavior and what would have caused it]] via written notes.
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* {{Dramedy}} [=/=] LighterAndSofter: {{Dramedy}}: ''Surrogate'' is [[LighterAndSofter much more comedic in tone tone]] than ''Points'', although the fundamental seriousness is still present.
* ExpositionBeam: Shinji gives Louise, Colbert, Osmond, and Longueville an idea of his past and what he had to deal with by having themeach relive [[spoiler:his experience of piloting Unit 01 against Sachiel]].
* EyeScream: The experience of [[spoiler:Sachiel impaling Unit 01's head through its eye]] is described in detail during the ExpositionBeamscene. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
* [[AnimalEyeSpy Familiar Eye Spy]]: Shinji discovers that the familiar/master bond allows hescene, which causes Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Louise Longueville all to see through each others' eyes. They use this in ch. 7 to discuss [[spoiler:Siesta's odd behavior and what would have caused it]] via written notes.[[spoiler:bleed from their right eyes]] [[YourMindMakesItReal as a side effect]].
* ExpositionBeam: Shinji gives Louise, Colbert, Osmond, and Longueville an idea of his past and what he had to deal with by having them
* EyeScream: The experience of [[spoiler:Sachiel impaling Unit 01's head through its eye]] is described in detail during the ExpositionBeam
* [[AnimalEyeSpy Familiar Eye Spy]]: Shinji discovers that the familiar/master bond allows he
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* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel...a description that Shinji doesn't do much to dispel since [[spoiler:he made his and Asuka's daughter's skull into an Angelic core inside his body]]. His AT Field mastery also gives him seemingly superhuman power (he can causally break stone with his bare hands and climb up solid rock walls), plus Halkegenian magic doesn't affect him. That said, he is very reluctant to actually use the Well of Souls to its full potential, for various reasons.
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* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel...a description that Shinji doesn't do much to dispel since [[spoiler:he made his and Asuka's daughter's skull into an Angelic core inside his body]]. His AT Field mastery also gives him seemingly superhuman power (he can causally casually break stone with his bare hands and climb up solid rock walls), plus Halkegenian magic doesn't affect him. That said, he is very reluctant to actually use the Well of Souls to its full potential, for various reasons.
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* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel...a description that Shinji doesn't do much to dispel since [[spoiler:he made his and Asuka's daughter's skull into an Angelic core inside his body]]. His AT Field mastery also gives him seemingly superhuman power (he can he causally break stone with his bare hands and climb up solid rock walls), plus Halkegenian magic doesn't affect him. That said, he is very reluctant to actually use the Well of Souls to its full potential, for various reasons.
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* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel...a description that Shinji doesn't do much to dispel since [[spoiler:he made his and Asuka's daughter's skull into an Angelic core inside his body]]. His AT Field mastery also gives him seemingly superhuman power (he can he causally break stone with his bare hands and climb up solid rock walls), plus Halkegenian magic doesn't affect him. That said, he is very reluctant to actually use the Well of Souls to its full potential, for various reasons.
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** [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaClassic "By your command, Mistress."]]
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** [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaClassic [[Series/BattlestarGalactica1978 "By your command, Mistress."]]
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* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel.
** He's also very, ''VERY'' [[RealityWarper powerful]]. Or he could be if he allowed himself to access the Well of Souls; He's got... [[BrokenHero issues]], Ok? And he doesn't want to freak people out. Though even in his "normal" state (relatively speaking) The laws of Physics, or Magic, don't mean much to him; he can causally break stone with his bare hands, climb up solid rock walls, and most spells have little to no effect on him.
** He's also very, ''VERY'' [[RealityWarper powerful]]. Or he could be if he allowed himself to access the Well of Souls; He's got... [[BrokenHero issues]], Ok? And he doesn't want to freak people out. Though even in his "normal" state (relatively speaking) The laws of Physics, or Magic, don't mean much to him; he can causally break stone with his bare hands, climb up solid rock walls, and most spells have little to no effect on him.
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* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel.
** He's also very, ''VERY'' [[RealityWarper powerful]]. Or he could be if he allowed himself to access the Well of Souls; He's got... [[BrokenHero issues]], Ok? And heAngel...a description that Shinji doesn't want to freak people out. Though even in his "normal" state (relatively speaking) The laws of Physics, or Magic, don't mean do much to him; he dispel since [[spoiler:he made his and Asuka's daughter's skull into an Angelic core inside his body]]. His AT Field mastery also gives him seemingly superhuman power (he can he causally break stone with his bare hands, hands and climb up solid rock walls, and most spells have little walls), plus Halkegenian magic doesn't affect him. That said, he is very reluctant to no effect on him.actually use the Well of Souls to its full potential, for various reasons.
** He's also very, ''VERY'' [[RealityWarper powerful]]. Or he could be if he allowed himself to access the Well of Souls; He's got... [[BrokenHero issues]], Ok? And he
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* LemonyNarrator: Asuka never holds back on snarking; snarking, mostly at Shinji.
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* PowerLimiter: Asuka herself acts as a Barrier between the Well of Souls and Shinji. For his sake, it should be mentioned, since he doesn't want the power it offers, and she protects (or merely blacks?) him from the other personalities within the Well [[spoiler: such as Rei]].
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* PowerLimiter: Asuka herself acts as a Barrier barrier between the Well of Souls and Shinji. For his sake, it should be mentioned, since he doesn't want the power it offers, and she protects (or merely blacks?) blocks?) him from the other personalities within the Well [[spoiler: such [[spoiler:such as Rei]].
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** He's also very, ''VERY'' [[RealityWarper powerful]]. Or he could be if he allowed himself to access the Well of Souls; He's got... [[BrokenHero issues]], Ok? And he doesn't want to freak people out. Though even in his "normal" state (relatively speaking) The laws of Physics, or Magic, don't mean much to him; he can causally break stone with his bare hands, climb up solid rock walls, and shrug off spells that would seriously wound (or even kill) an average person.
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** He's also very, ''VERY'' [[RealityWarper powerful]]. Or he could be if he allowed himself to access the Well of Souls; He's got... [[BrokenHero issues]], Ok? And he doesn't want to freak people out. Though even in his "normal" state (relatively speaking) The laws of Physics, or Magic, don't mean much to him; he can causally break stone with his bare hands, climb up solid rock walls, and shrug off most spells that would seriously wound (or even kill) an average person.have little to no effect on him.
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** He's also very, ''VERY'' [[RealityWarper powerful]]. Or at least he could be if he allowed himself to access the Well of Souls; He's got... [[BrokenHero issues]], Ok? A ''lot'' of them. Though even in his "normal" state (relatively speaking) The laws of Physics, or Magic, don't mean much to him.
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** He's also very, ''VERY'' [[RealityWarper powerful]]. Or at least he could be if he allowed himself to access the Well of Souls; He's got... [[BrokenHero issues]], Ok? A ''lot'' of them. And he doesn't want to freak people out. Though even in his "normal" state (relatively speaking) The laws of Physics, or Magic, don't mean much to him. him; he can causally break stone with his bare hands, climb up solid rock walls, and shrug off spells that would seriously wound (or even kill) an average person.
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** He's also very, ''VERY'' [[RealityWarper powerful]]. Or at least he could be if he allowed himself to access the Well of Souls; He's got... [[BrokenHero issues]], Ok? A ''lot'' of them. Though even in his "normal" state (relatively speaking) The laws of Physics, or Magic, don't mean much to him.
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* PowerLimiter: Asuka herself acts as a Barrier between the Well of Souls and Shinji. For his sake, it should be mentioned, since he doesn't want the power it offers, and she protects (or merely blacks?) him from the other personalities within the Well [[spoiler: such as Rei]].
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* BadassBookworm: Due to be the container of the [[{{Instrumentality}} Well of the Souls]] [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Shinji]] has the sum of the human knowledge stored in his head.
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* BadassBookworm: Due to be being the container of the [[{{Instrumentality}} Well of the Souls]] [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Shinji]] has the sum of the human knowledge stored in his head.
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* ComicRolePlay: Well, not actually comedic. After failing to get Louise to understand the implications of [[spoiler:Siesta suddenly becoming a mistress of Count Mott]] through discussion, Shinji roleplays the possible iterations with Louise. It's eerily effective; Asuka is especially impressed.
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* ComicRolePlay: Well, not actually comedic. After failing to get Louise to understand the implications of [[spoiler:Siesta suddenly becoming a mistress of Count Mott]] through discussion, Shinji roleplays the possible iterations with Louise.her. It's eerily effective; Asuka is especially impressed.
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Discussion threads for ''Surrogate'' at {{Spacebattles}}.com can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 here]] and [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=212364 here]]. Note that the second thread includes a snippet of chapter 8 yet unpublished in ff.net.
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Discussion threads for ''Surrogate'' at {{Spacebattles}}.com Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 here]] and [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=212364 here]]. Note that the second thread includes a snippet of chapter 8 yet unpublished in ff.net.
Website/FanFictionDotNet.
See ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' for the tropes of those respective universes.
See ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' for the tropes of those respective universes.
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** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head.
*** For a bit of extra screwiness, he's also aware that she's an UnreliableNarrator, so It's hard to tell when he's "listening" to the narration or tuning it out.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] also tries to join the fun this but Asuka blocks any attempts at doing so. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
*** For a bit of extra screwiness, he's also aware that she's an UnreliableNarrator, so It's hard to tell when he's "listening" to the narration or tuning it out.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] also tries to join the fun this but Asuka blocks any attempts at doing so. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
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** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head. \n*** For a bit of extra screwiness, he's also aware that she's an UnreliableNarrator, so It's hard to tell when he's "listening" to the narration or tuning it out.\n
** [[spoiler:Rei]] also tries to join the funthis but Asuka blocks any attempts at doing so. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] also tries to join the fun
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Discussion threads for ''Surrogate'' at {{Spacebattles}}.com can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 here]] and [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=212364 here]].
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Discussion threads for ''Surrogate'' at {{Spacebattles}}.com can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 here]] and [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=212364 here]].
here]]. Note that the second thread includes a snippet of chapter 8 yet unpublished in ff.net.
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'''Shinji''': "What."What.
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* FlatWhat: Chapter 1 gives us this gem:
-->'''Asuka''': The waters are red, not like blood, but the broken dreams of Communism.\\
'''Shinji''': "What."
-->'''Asuka''': The waters are red, not like blood, but the broken dreams of Communism.\\
'''Shinji''': "What."
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* InteractiveNarrator:
** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
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** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head. \n
*** For a bit of extra screwiness, he's also aware that she's an UnreliableNarrator, so It's hard to tell when he's "listening" to the narration or tuning it out.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] also triesto be join the fun this but is rebuffed by Asuka.Asuka blocks any attempts at doing so. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head.
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** [[Franchise/StarWars Peace is a lie. There is only passion.]]
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** Count Mott is strongly implied to be a piece of work; Guiche all but says outright that he's got a taste for rape, and throws orgies for other nobles as a way of securing influence.
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:Shinji and Asuka's baby was a girl]]. Also, [[spoiler:the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage]].
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:Shinji and Asuka's Asuka's]] baby was a girl]]. girl. Also, [[spoiler:the the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka [[spoiler:Asuka]] calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka she may have died from a miscarriage]].miscarriage.
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* [[AnimalEyeSpy Familiar Eye Spy]]: Shinji discovers that the familiar/master bond allows he and Louise to see through each others' eyes. They use this in ch. 7 to discuss [[spoiler:Siesta's odd behavior and what would have caused it]] via notes written on paper.
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* [[AnimalEyeSpy Familiar Eye Spy]]: Shinji discovers that the familiar/master bond allows he and Louise to see through each others' eyes. They use this in ch. 7 to discuss [[spoiler:Siesta's odd behavior and what would have caused it]] via notes written on paper.notes.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The start of ch. 7, when [[spoiler:Siesta]] interrupts one of Louise's classes to tell Shinji goodbye, and slightly drunk as well, signals to him that something is very wrong.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The start of ch. 7, when a slightly-drunk [[spoiler:Siesta]] interrupts one of Louise's classes to tell Shinji goodbye, and slightly drunk as well, signals to him that something is very wrong.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7620797/1/Surrogate_of_Zero Surrogate of Zero]]'', by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1211674/Charles_Bhepin Charles Bhepin]], is a crossover fic between ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'', wherein Louise summons a [[HumanoidAbomination post-Third-Impact]] Shinji Ikari as her familiar. It's a rewrite of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6038980/1/ Points of Familiarity]]'', promising "[[WordOfGod A smaller scope, a tighter narrative, less innuendo.]]"
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7620797/1/Surrogate_of_Zero Surrogate of Zero]]'', by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1211674/Charles_Bhepin Charles Bhepin]], is a crossover fic between ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'', wherein Louise summons a [[HumanoidAbomination post-Third-Impact]] post-Third Impact]] Shinji Ikari as her familiar. It's a rewrite of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6038980/1/ Points of Familiarity]]'', promising "[[WordOfGod A smaller scope, a tighter narrative, less innuendo.]]"
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* ColonCancer: Comes up when [[spoiler:Rei]] chides Asuka at the start of ch. 6.
-->Sohryu, we are concerned about how you're treating your task as if it is Shinji Ikari: The Spin-off Game: Divinity Maker: The RPG.
* ComicRolePlay: Well, not actually comedic. After failing to get Louise to understand the implications of [[spoiler:Siesta suddenly becoming a mistress of Count Mott]] through discussion, Shinji roleplays the possible iterations with Louise. It's eerily effective; Asuka is especially impressed.
-->Sohryu, we are concerned about how you're treating your task as if it is Shinji Ikari: The Spin-off Game: Divinity Maker: The RPG.
* ComicRolePlay: Well, not actually comedic. After failing to get Louise to understand the implications of [[spoiler:Siesta suddenly becoming a mistress of Count Mott]] through discussion, Shinji roleplays the possible iterations with Louise. It's eerily effective; Asuka is especially impressed.
* [[AnimalEyeSpy Familiar Eye Spy]]: Shinji discovers that the familiar/master bond allows he and Louise to see through each others' eyes. They use this in ch. 7 to discuss [[spoiler:Siesta's odd behavior and what would have caused it]] via notes written on paper.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The start of ch. 7, when [[spoiler:Siesta]] interrupts one of Louise's classes to tell Shinji goodbye, and slightly drunk as well, signals to him that something is very wrong.
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* TragicKeepsake: When Shinji goes to Halkegenia, he takes two of these with him: [[spoiler:the skulls of Asuka and their baby, the former of which Shinji transforms into an Angelic core in his body]].
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* TragicKeepsake: When Shinji goes to Halkegenia, he takes two of these with him: [[spoiler:the skulls of Asuka and their baby, the former latter of which Shinji transforms into an Angelic core in his body]].
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-->There are so many ways of resolving this, and ''still'' you chose the one that leads to violence. Oh you sweet thing. I so want to give you a biiig hug right now.
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* AristocratsAreEvil: The commoners generally see the nobles as this, especially when they think that Louise stole Shinji away from his prior life to be her familiar.
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** The commoners generally see the nobles as this, especially when they think that Louise stole Shinji away from his prior life to be herfamiliar.familiar.
** Count Mott is strongly implied to be a piece of work; Guiche all but says outright that he's got a taste for rape, and throws orgies for other nobles as a way of securing influence.
** The commoners generally see the nobles as this, especially when they think that Louise stole Shinji away from his prior life to be her
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:their baby was a girl. Also, the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage]].
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:their [[spoiler:Shinji and Asuka's baby was a girl. girl]]. Also, the [[spoiler:the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7620797/1/Surrogate_of_Zero Surrogate of Zero]]'', by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1211674/Charles_Bhepin Charles Bhepin]], is a crossover fic between ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/ZeroNoTsukaima'', wherein Louise summons a [[HumanoidAbomination post-Third-Impact]] Shinji Ikari as her familiar. It's a rewrite of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6038980/1/ Points of Familiarity]]'', promising "[[WordOfGod A smaller scope, a tighter narrative, less innuendo.]]"
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7620797/1/Surrogate_of_Zero Surrogate of Zero]]'', by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1211674/Charles_Bhepin Charles Bhepin]], is a crossover fic between ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/ZeroNoTsukaima'', ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'', wherein Louise summons a [[HumanoidAbomination post-Third-Impact]] Shinji Ikari as her familiar. It's a rewrite of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6038980/1/ Points of Familiarity]]'', promising "[[WordOfGod A smaller scope, a tighter narrative, less innuendo.]]"
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:it was a girl. Also, the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage]].
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* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:it [[spoiler:their baby was a girl. Also, the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage]].miscarriage]].
* {{Dramedy}} [=/=] LighterAndSofter: ''Surrogate'' is much more comedic in tone than ''Points'', although the fundamental seriousness is still present.
* {{Dramedy}} [=/=] LighterAndSofter: ''Surrogate'' is much more comedic in tone than ''Points'', although the fundamental seriousness is still present.
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* LemonyNarrator: Asuka never holds back on snarking Shinji.
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** "This is Sohryu, Langley Asuka.” He pronounces it ''Sohhr-yu, L’anglih Azukah''. Hey, you bitches. [[TabletopGame/CallOfCthulhu Roll for SAN loss already]].
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* MisterSeahorse: A ''very'' odd take. Some of Shinji's behaviors lead Asuka to note that by [[spoiler:taking their unborn daughter's soul into himself]], he's made himself metaphysically pregnant.
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* BeefBandage: Used by Shinji after Louise gets mad and blows him up in ch. 7.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7620797/1/Surrogate_of_Zero Surrogate of Zero]]'', by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1211674/Charles_Bhepin Charles Bhepin]], is a crossover fic between ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/ZeroNoTsukaima'', wherein Louise summons a [[HumanoidAbomination post-Third-Impact]] Shinji Ikari as her familiar. It's a rewrite of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6038980/1/ Points of Familiarity]]'', promising "[[WordOfGod A smaller scope, a tighter narrative, less innuendo.]]"
Discussion threads for ''Surrogate'' at {{Spacebattles}}.com can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 here]] and [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=212364 here]].
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!!See ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/ZeroNoTsukaima'' for the tropes of those respective universes.
!!''Surrogate of Zero'' provides examples of the following:
* AlienNonInterferenceClause: It's first {{defied|Trope}} when Asuka tells Shinji to ask Louise for details about Halkeginian magic, and then {{discussed|Trope}} later in dialogue between Asuka and Shinji, and [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei]].
* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard is afraid of Shinji, but Tabitha's dragon just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
* AristocratsAreEvil: The commoners generally see the nobles as this, especially when they think that Louise stole Shinji away from his prior life to be her familiar.
* BodySurf: [[spoiler:Rei]] emerges through Shinji and comes close to [[spoiler:"tanging" Siesta before she's stopped by Asuka]].
* CanisLatinicus: Asuka refers to Shinji as ''Shinjicus Ikaricus Inepticus'', Louise as ''Louise-la-Vallieries Tsunderis Jailbaitus'', and Tabitha as ''Tabithas Neotenus Badasseri''.
* CurbStompBattle: Shinji utterly dominates [[spoiler:Guiche]] in their duel.
* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:it was a girl. Also, the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage]].
* ExpositionBeam: Shinji gives Louise, Colbert, Osmond, and Longueville an idea of his past and what he had to deal with by having them each relive [[spoiler:his experience of piloting Unit 01 against Sachiel]].
* EyeScream: The experience of [[spoiler:Sachiel impaling Unit 01's head through its eye]] is described in detail during the ExpositionBeam scene. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
* FirstPersonSmartass: Asuka's narration frequently drifts into this, especially when she and Shinji are "talking" directly to each other. That said, no one is safe from her snark (except Tabitha, to some extent).
* GodGuise: In order to cover up his AT-field tricks, Shinji sets up Asuka as a goddess of war, [[spoiler:her skull]] being a holy relic that gives its wielder power. The intro to ch. 6 is a discussion between [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei]] about expanding the "pantheon."
* GrievousHarmWithABody [=/=] OneHitKO: Shinji and [[spoiler:Guiche]]'s duel ends with Shinji [[spoiler:beaning Guiche with Asuka's skull]].
* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Asuka describes [[spoiler:her skull]] as this during Shinji's duel.
* InteractiveNarrator:
** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
* LighterAndSofter: ''Surrogate'' is much more comedic in tone than ''Points'', although the fundamental seriousness is still present.
* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's lost, a sentimental token of their relationship, and a potent weapon. [[spoiler:It later becomes a way for Longueville to get access to the school's Vault once Shinji turns it over to the school.]]
* MindlinkMates: Shinji and Asuka, as a result of [[spoiler:her soul having rejoined the Well of Souls after her second death]].
* MisterSeahorse: A ''very'' odd take. Some of Shinji's behaviors lead Asuka to note that by [[spoiler:taking their unborn daughter's soul into himself]], he's made himself metaphysically pregnant.
* NoSell: Neither Shinji nor [[spoiler:Asuka's skull]] are affected by Halkegenian magic in the slightest, aside from Shinji acquiring the runes on his hand as part of the familiar binding spell.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Guiche has no love lost for Count Mott, primarily because of his predatory ways.
-->[...] don't you dare compare a Gramont to a Mott! Someone who forces himself onto a woman is scum! Though there are those who despise the well-earned reputation of the Gramont, never have we taken liberties with a woman without her willing consent! To us, the face of Mott is the face of the enemy!
* ShoutOut: Bpen continues his penchant for them, but he takes it a step further by having Shinji {{lampshade|Hanging}} their use in Asuka's narration, which she [[JustifiedTrope defends]] as a means of helping make sense of their circumstances.
** [[Series/{{Batman}} nananananana Asukaaah!]]
** [[Franchise/StarTrek He is off to explore new worlds, new civilizations, [...]]]
** [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaClassic "By your command, Mistress."]]
** A familiar in one of Louise's classes is described by Asuka as a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons Beholderkin]].
** Asuka compares a possibility of Shinji going to rescue Siesta to [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]].
* TragicKeepsake: When Shinji goes to Halkegenia, he takes two of these with him: [[spoiler:the skulls of Asuka and their baby, the former of which Shinji transforms into an Angelic core in his body]].
* YourMindMakesItReal: Because of the ExpositionBeam[=/=]EyeScream above, Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Longueville all bleed from their right eyes as a side effect.
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Discussion threads for ''Surrogate'' at {{Spacebattles}}.com can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=209481 here]] and [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=212364 here]].
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!!See ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' and ''LightNovel/ZeroNoTsukaima'' for the tropes of those respective universes.
!!''Surrogate of Zero'' provides examples of the following:
* AlienNonInterferenceClause: It's first {{defied|Trope}} when Asuka tells Shinji to ask Louise for details about Halkeginian magic, and then {{discussed|Trope}} later in dialogue between Asuka and Shinji, and [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei]].
* AnimalsHateHim: {{ZigZagg|ingTrope}}ed. Kirche's fire lizard is afraid of Shinji, but Tabitha's dragon just bites his head and slobbers on him in nothing more than apparent curiosity.
* AristocratsAreEvil: The commoners generally see the nobles as this, especially when they think that Louise stole Shinji away from his prior life to be her familiar.
* BodySurf: [[spoiler:Rei]] emerges through Shinji and comes close to [[spoiler:"tanging" Siesta before she's stopped by Asuka]].
* CanisLatinicus: Asuka refers to Shinji as ''Shinjicus Ikaricus Inepticus'', Louise as ''Louise-la-Vallieries Tsunderis Jailbaitus'', and Tabitha as ''Tabithas Neotenus Badasseri''.
* CurbStompBattle: Shinji utterly dominates [[spoiler:Guiche]] in their duel.
* DeathByChildbirth: Just as in ''Points'', although the details are still unknown. What's established is that [[spoiler:it was a girl. Also, the baby's skeleton is referred to as "hand-sized", and Asuka calls her "aborted" at one point, hinting that Asuka may have died from a miscarriage]].
* ExpositionBeam: Shinji gives Louise, Colbert, Osmond, and Longueville an idea of his past and what he had to deal with by having them each relive [[spoiler:his experience of piloting Unit 01 against Sachiel]].
* EyeScream: The experience of [[spoiler:Sachiel impaling Unit 01's head through its eye]] is described in detail during the ExpositionBeam scene. Also, see YourMindMakesItReal below.
* FirstPersonSmartass: Asuka's narration frequently drifts into this, especially when she and Shinji are "talking" directly to each other. That said, no one is safe from her snark (except Tabitha, to some extent).
* GodGuise: In order to cover up his AT-field tricks, Shinji sets up Asuka as a goddess of war, [[spoiler:her skull]] being a holy relic that gives its wielder power. The intro to ch. 6 is a discussion between [[spoiler:Asuka and Rei]] about expanding the "pantheon."
* GrievousHarmWithABody [=/=] OneHitKO: Shinji and [[spoiler:Guiche]]'s duel ends with Shinji [[spoiler:beaning Guiche with Asuka's skull]].
* HumanoidAbomination [=/=] MindHive: Shinji is, as labeled by Asuka, ''Homo Apotheosis'': the embodiment of the Well of Souls created in Third Impact. In other words, he's an Angel.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Asuka describes [[spoiler:her skull]] as this during Shinji's duel.
* InteractiveNarrator:
** Asuka's narration sits on both sides of the fourth wall--it's not only a foundation of the story, Shinji hears most (if not all) of it in his head.
** [[spoiler:Rei]] tries to be this but is rebuffed by Asuka. However, the two of them do converse "behind the scenes" about certain issues.
* LighterAndSofter: ''Surrogate'' is much more comedic in tone than ''Points'', although the fundamental seriousness is still present.
* MementoMacguffin: [[spoiler:Asuka's skull.]] For Shinji, it's a reminder of what he's lost, a sentimental token of their relationship, and a potent weapon. [[spoiler:It later becomes a way for Longueville to get access to the school's Vault once Shinji turns it over to the school.]]
* MindlinkMates: Shinji and Asuka, as a result of [[spoiler:her soul having rejoined the Well of Souls after her second death]].
* MisterSeahorse: A ''very'' odd take. Some of Shinji's behaviors lead Asuka to note that by [[spoiler:taking their unborn daughter's soul into himself]], he's made himself metaphysically pregnant.
* NoSell: Neither Shinji nor [[spoiler:Asuka's skull]] are affected by Halkegenian magic in the slightest, aside from Shinji acquiring the runes on his hand as part of the familiar binding spell.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Guiche has no love lost for Count Mott, primarily because of his predatory ways.
-->[...] don't you dare compare a Gramont to a Mott! Someone who forces himself onto a woman is scum! Though there are those who despise the well-earned reputation of the Gramont, never have we taken liberties with a woman without her willing consent! To us, the face of Mott is the face of the enemy!
* ShoutOut: Bpen continues his penchant for them, but he takes it a step further by having Shinji {{lampshade|Hanging}} their use in Asuka's narration, which she [[JustifiedTrope defends]] as a means of helping make sense of their circumstances.
** [[Series/{{Batman}} nananananana Asukaaah!]]
** [[Franchise/StarTrek He is off to explore new worlds, new civilizations, [...]]]
** [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaClassic "By your command, Mistress."]]
** A familiar in one of Louise's classes is described by Asuka as a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons Beholderkin]].
** Asuka compares a possibility of Shinji going to rescue Siesta to [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]].
* TragicKeepsake: When Shinji goes to Halkegenia, he takes two of these with him: [[spoiler:the skulls of Asuka and their baby, the former of which Shinji transforms into an Angelic core in his body]].
* YourMindMakesItReal: Because of the ExpositionBeam[=/=]EyeScream above, Louise, Osmond, Colbert, and Longueville all bleed from their right eyes as a side effect.
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