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* BerserkButton: By insulting his dead family, Bitsy pressed Fisk's. [[ExtremeMeleeRevenge Hard]].
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* ImpliedDeathThreat: [[spoiler:Although by the time he asks the question Bitsy is already doomed, Fisk asks her whether she would rather have an open or closed casket funeral. Completely ignoring the implications of the question, Bitsy ultimately decides to go with closed casket. Fisk gives her a SlasherSmile and indulges her.]]

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* ImpliedDeathThreat: [[spoiler:Although by the time he asks the question Bitsy is already doomed, Fisk asks her whether she would rather have an open or closed casket funeral. Completely ignoring the implications of the question, Bitsy ultimately decides to go with closed casket. Fisk gives her a SlasherSmile and indulges obliges her.]]
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* UndignifiedDeath: While not particularly embarrassing, [[spoiler:getting beaten to death by the Kingpin]] certainly isn't a good way to go.

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* UndignifiedDeath: While not particularly embarrassing, it's only embarrassing because Bitsy brought it onto herself, [[spoiler:getting beaten to death by the Kingpin]] certainly nevertheless isn't a good way to go.
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* KickTheDog: Bitsy insults Fisk's dead wife and son after being told that Dimitry dropped out of the Central Park deal because his daughter is pregnant. [[spoiler:Fisk [[TooDumbToLive decides Bitsy deserves to die bloody]] right then and there.]]

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* KickTheDog: Bitsy insults Fisk's dead wife and son after being told that Dimitry dropped out of the Central Park deal because his daughter is pregnant. [[spoiler:Fisk [[spoiler:Fisk, understandably, doesn’t take kindly to this; and he [[TooDumbToLive decides Bitsy deserves to die bloody]] right then and there.]]



* SmallRoleBigImpact: Anya is only mentioned once near the end of the fic. That being said, she and her unborn child are largely the reason the Central Park deal falls through.

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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Anya is only mentioned brought up once near the end of the fic. That being said, she and her unborn child are largely the reason the Central Park deal falls through.
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* KickTheDog: Bitsy insults Fisk's dead wife and son after being told that Dimitry dropped out of the Central Park deal because his daughter is pregnant.

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* KickTheDog: Bitsy insults Fisk's dead wife and son after being told that Dimitry dropped out of the Central Park deal because his daughter is pregnant. [[spoiler:Fisk [[TooDumbToLive decides Bitsy deserves to die bloody]] right then and there.]]
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* KickTheDog: Bitsy insults Fisk's dead wife and son after being told that Dimitry dropped out of the Central Park deal because his daughter is pregnant. [[spoiler:Fisk, understandably, doesn't take kindly to this and proceeds to kill her in his office.]]

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* KickTheDog: Bitsy insults Fisk's dead wife and son after being told that Dimitry dropped out of the Central Park deal because his daughter is pregnant. [[spoiler:Fisk, understandably, doesn't take kindly to this and proceeds to kill her in his office.]]
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Helen asks who convinced Dimitry to drop out of the Central Park deal, Bitsy replies, "I don’t know—something ‘Fist’." This leaves Helen confused because as far as she's aware, the only Fist in New York is ComicBook/IronFist. She figures that Bitsy must have misheard the name and wonders what sounds like "Fist"... and that's when she realizes that Dimitry was referring to Wilson Fisk, aka The Kingpin.

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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Helen asks who convinced Dimitry to drop out of the Central Park deal, Bitsy replies, "I don’t know—something ‘Fist’." This leaves Helen confused because as far as she's aware, the only Fist in New York is ComicBook/IronFist. She figures that Bitsy must have misheard the name and wonders name, which then gets her to wonder what sounds could sound like "Fist"... and that's when [[OhCrap she realizes realizes]] that Dimitry was referring to Wilson Fisk, aka The Kingpin.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: When Helen asks who convinced Dimitry to drop out of the Central Park deal, Bitsy replies, "I don’t know—something ‘Fist’." This leaves Helen confused because as far as she's aware, the only Fist in New York is ComicBook/IronFist. She figures that Bitsy must have misheard the name and wonders what sounds like "Fist"... and that's when she realizes that Dimitry was referring to Wilson Fisk, aka The Kingpin.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Anya is only mentioned once near the end of the fic. That being said, she's largely the reason the Central Park deal falls through.

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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Anya is only mentioned once near the end of the fic. That being said, she's she and her unborn child are largely the reason the Central Park deal falls through.
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* GilliganCut: When Helen starts grating on Bitsy, the hag sends her out with Shampagne while she sets up a meeting with Fisk. Helen relaxes, telling herself there is no way Fisk will deign himself to talk to Bitsy. The next scene, Helen, Bitsy and Shampagne are being escorted to the Kingpin's office by two massive bodyguards.

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* GilliganCut: When Helen starts grating on Bitsy, the hag sends her out with Shampagne while she sets up a meeting with Fisk. Helen relaxes, telling herself there is no way Fisk will deign himself to talk to Bitsy. The Cut to the next scene, where Helen, Bitsy and Shampagne are being escorted to the Kingpin's office by two massive bodyguards.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Anya is only mentioned once near the end of the fic. That being said, she's largely the reason the Central Park deal falls through.
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* KickTheDog: Bitsy insults Fisk's dead wife and son after being told that Dimitry dropped out of the Central Park deal because his daughter is pregnant. [[spoiler:Fisk, understandably, doesn't take kindly to this and proceeds to kill her in his office.]]
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Bitsy all the way to the [[spoiler:bitter end]], beginning with the annoyance of having to talk to someone who refers to himself as the Kingpin of Crime (a nickname Bitsy [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint doesn't understand is well deserved]]) to going on a diatribe about [[spoiler:how she wishes to have a closed casket funeral so nobody will ruin her day (although she wondered about it being open so people would bask in the glory of seeing her one last time) without thinking [[ImpliedDeathThreat why someone would ask such a thing suddenly]]]].

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* ItsAllAboutMe: Bitsy all the way to the [[spoiler:bitter end]], beginning with the [[spoiler:the annoyance of having to talk to someone who refers to himself as the Kingpin of Crime (a nickname Bitsy [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint doesn't understand is well deserved]]) deserved]])]] to going [[spoiler:going on a diatribe about [[spoiler:how how she wishes to have a closed casket funeral so nobody will ruin her day (although she wondered about it being open so people would bask in the glory of seeing her one last time) without thinking [[ImpliedDeathThreat why someone would ask such a thing suddenly]]]].
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* AtrociousAlias: Bitsy is under the mistaken impression that "the Kingpin" refers to bowling, and that "the Kingpin of Crime" is a ridiculous and undeserved alias. Fisk corrects her.

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* AtrociousAlias: Bitsy is under the mistaken impression that "the Kingpin" refers to bowling, and that "the Kingpin of Crime" is a ridiculous and undeserved alias. Fisk corrects her.[[spoiler:She finds out the hard way that it's not.]]

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* ExactWords: PlayedForHorror. [[spoiler:After what Fisk did to her, Bitsy will definitely have to get the closed-casket funeral she envisioned, since otherwise all of the funeral-goers will be scarred for life.]]
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The fanfic seems to take place within the course of less than a day, starting with Bitsy getting a phone call from Dimitry regarding him pulling out of the Central Park deal and ending with [[spoiler:the Kingpin brutally killing her in his office]].


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* ExactWords: PlayedForHorror. [[spoiler:After what Fisk did to her, Bitsy will definitely have to get the closed-casket funeral she envisioned, since otherwise all of the funeral-goers will be scarred for life.]]
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The fanfic seems to take place within the course of less than a day, starting with Bitsy getting a phone call from Dimitry regarding him pulling out of the Central Park deal and ending with [[spoiler:the Kingpin brutally killing her in his office]].
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* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The fanfic seems to take place within the course of less than a day, starting with Bitsy getting a phone call from Dimitry regarding him pulling out of the Central Park deal and ending with [[spoiler:the Kingpin brutally killing her in his office]].
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler:Bitsy will get to have the closed-casket funeral she wanted, albeit after Fisk has already beaten her to a bloody pulp]].

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler:Bitsy will get to have the closed-casket funeral just like she wanted, albeit after Fisk has already beaten her to a bloody pulp]].
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler:Bitsy will get to have the closed-casket funeral she wanted, albeit after Fisk has already beaten her to a bloody pulp]].
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* ExactWords: Played for Horror. [[spoiler:After what Fisk did to her, Bitsy will definitely have to get the closed-casket funeral she envisioned, otherwise all of the funeral goers will freak.]]

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* ExactWords: Played for Horror. PlayedForHorror. [[spoiler:After what Fisk did to her, Bitsy will definitely have to get the closed-casket funeral she envisioned, since otherwise all of the funeral goers funeral-goers will freak.be scarred for life.]]
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* ExactWords: Played for Horror. [[spoiler:After what Fisk did to her, Bitsy will definitely have to get the closed-casket funeral she envisioned, otherwise all of the funeral goers will freak.]]
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Due to the fic's "G" rating, the readers never get to see [[spoiler:[[CharlesAtlasSuperpower the Kingpin]] beating Bitsy to death]] after she makes the phenomenally boneheaded decision of telling him that [[spoiler:she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Instead, they're treated to Helen hearing [[spoiler:[[SoundOnlyDeath several thuds]] coming from the Kingpin's office]] and then [[spoiler:the Kingpin coming out while wiping blood off his hands with a handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].

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* GoryDiscretionShot: Due to the fic's "G" rating, the readers never get to see [[spoiler:[[CharlesAtlasSuperpower the Kingpin]] beating Bitsy to death]] after she [[spoiler:she makes the phenomenally boneheaded decision of telling him that [[spoiler:she she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Instead, they're treated to Helen hearing [[spoiler:[[SoundOnlyDeath several thuds]] coming from the Kingpin's office]] and then [[spoiler:the Kingpin coming out while wiping blood off his hands with a handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].
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* ShotgunWedding: It turns out Dimitry's daughter Anya was pregnant [[Recap/CentralParkS1E6RivalBusker during her wedding to Zach]], and this was why the Kingpin had him pull out of the Central Park deal. Upon learning this, Bitsy remarks that she knew Anya "looked a bit heavy in her dress."

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* ShotgunWedding: Implied. It turns out Dimitry's daughter Anya was pregnant that [[Recap/CentralParkS1E6RivalBusker during her wedding to Zach]], Dimitry's daughter Anya]] is pregnant, and this was is why the Kingpin had him pull out of the Central Park deal. Upon learning this, Bitsy remarks that she knew Anya "looked a bit heavy in her dress."
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Due to the fic's "G" rating, the readers never get to see [[spoiler:the Kingpin beating Bitsy to death]] after she makes the phenomenally boneheaded decision of telling him that [[spoiler:she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Instead, they're treated to Helen hearing [[spoiler:[[SoundOnlyDeath several thuds]] coming from the Kingpin's office]] and then [[spoiler:the Kingpin coming out while wiping blood off his hands with a handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].

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* GoryDiscretionShot: Due to the fic's "G" rating, the readers never get to see [[spoiler:the Kingpin [[spoiler:[[CharlesAtlasSuperpower the Kingpin]] beating Bitsy to death]] after she makes the phenomenally boneheaded decision of telling him that [[spoiler:she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Instead, they're treated to Helen hearing [[spoiler:[[SoundOnlyDeath several thuds]] coming from the Kingpin's office]] and then [[spoiler:the Kingpin coming out while wiping blood off his hands with a handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Due to the fic's "G" rating, the readers never get to see [[spoiler:the Kingpin beating Bitsy to death]] after she makes the extremely stupid decision of telling him that [[spoiler:she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Instead, they're treated to Helen hearing [[spoiler:[[SoundOnlyDeath several thuds]] coming from the Kingpin's office]] and then [[spoiler:the Kingpin coming out while wiping blood off his hands with a handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].

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* GoryDiscretionShot: Due to the fic's "G" rating, the readers never get to see [[spoiler:the Kingpin beating Bitsy to death]] after she makes the extremely stupid phenomenally boneheaded decision of telling him that [[spoiler:she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Instead, they're treated to Helen hearing [[spoiler:[[SoundOnlyDeath several thuds]] coming from the Kingpin's office]] and then [[spoiler:the Kingpin coming out while wiping blood off his hands with a handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Bitsy all the way to the [[spoiler:bitter end]], beginning with the annoyance of having to talk to the Kingpin of Crime (a nickname Bitsy [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint doesn't understand is well deserved]]) to going on a diatribe about [[spoiler:how she wishes to have a closed casket funeral so nobody will ruin her day (although she wondered about it being open so people would bask in the glory of seeing her one last time) without thinking [[ImpliedDeathThreat why someone would ask such a thing suddenly]].]]

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* ItsAllAboutMe: Bitsy all the way to the [[spoiler:bitter end]], beginning with the annoyance of having to talk to someone who refers to himself as the Kingpin of Crime (a nickname Bitsy [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint doesn't understand is well deserved]]) to going on a diatribe about [[spoiler:how she wishes to have a closed casket funeral so nobody will ruin her day (although she wondered about it being open so people would bask in the glory of seeing her one last time) without thinking [[ImpliedDeathThreat why someone would ask such a thing suddenly]].]]suddenly]]]].
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Bitsy all the way to the [[spoiler:bitter end, beginning with the annoyance of having to talk to the Kingpin of Crime (a nickname Bitsy [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint doesn't understand is well deserved]]) to going on a diatribe about how she wishes to have a closed casket funeral so nobody will ruin her day (although she wondered about it being open so people would bask in the glory of seeing her one last time) without thinking [[ImpliedDeathThreat why someone would ask such a thing suddenly]].]]

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* ItsAllAboutMe: Bitsy all the way to the [[spoiler:bitter end, end]], beginning with the annoyance of having to talk to the Kingpin of Crime (a nickname Bitsy [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint doesn't understand is well deserved]]) to going on a diatribe about how [[spoiler:how she wishes to have a closed casket funeral so nobody will ruin her day (although she wondered about it being open so people would bask in the glory of seeing her one last time) without thinking [[ImpliedDeathThreat why someone would ask such a thing suddenly]].]]
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* ShotgunWedding: It turns out Dimitry's daughter Anya was pregnant [[Recap/CentralParkS1E6RivalBusker during her wedding to Zach]], and this was why the Kingpin had him pull out of the Central Park deal. Bitsy even remarks on how Anya "looked a bit heavy in her dress."

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* ShotgunWedding: It turns out Dimitry's daughter Anya was pregnant [[Recap/CentralParkS1E6RivalBusker during her wedding to Zach]], and this was why the Kingpin had him pull out of the Central Park deal. Upon learning this, Bitsy even remarks on how that she knew Anya "looked a bit heavy in her dress."

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* {{Gorn}}: Extremely heavily implied. For one, Bitsy makes the extremely stupid decision of telling [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower Wilson Fisk]] that [[spoiler:she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Then when he comes out of the office [[spoiler:after having beaten Bitsy to death]], Helen notices that [[spoiler:Fisk is wiping blood off his hands with a very big handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].
* GoryDiscretionShot: Due to the fic's "G" rating, the readers never get to see [[spoiler:the Kingpin beating Bitsy to death]]. Instead, they're treated to Helen hearing [[spoiler:[[SoundOnlyDeath several thuds]] coming from the Kingpin's office]] and then [[spoiler:the Kingpin coming out while wiping blood off his hands with a handkerchief]].

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* {{Gorn}}: Extremely heavily implied. For one, Bitsy makes the extremely stupid decision of telling [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower Wilson Fisk]] that [[spoiler:she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Then when he comes out of the office [[spoiler:after having beaten Bitsy to death]], Helen notices that [[spoiler:Fisk is wiping blood off his hands with a very big handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].
* GoryDiscretionShot: Due to the fic's "G" rating, the readers never get to see [[spoiler:the Kingpin beating Bitsy to death]]. death]] after she makes the extremely stupid decision of telling him that [[spoiler:she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Instead, they're treated to Helen hearing [[spoiler:[[SoundOnlyDeath several thuds]] coming from the Kingpin's office]] and then [[spoiler:the Kingpin coming out while wiping blood off his hands with a handkerchief]].handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].
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* {{Gorn}}: Extremely heavily implied. For one, Bitsy makes the extremely stupid decision of [[spoiler:telling [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower Wilson Fisk]] that she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Then when he comes out of the office [[spoiler:after having beaten Bitsy to death]], Helen notices that [[spoiler:Fisk is wiping blood off his hands with a very big handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].

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* {{Gorn}}: Extremely heavily implied. For one, Bitsy makes the extremely stupid decision of [[spoiler:telling telling [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower Wilson Fisk]] that she [[spoiler:she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]]. Then when he comes out of the office [[spoiler:after having beaten Bitsy to death]], Helen notices that [[spoiler:Fisk is wiping blood off his hands with a very big handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].
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* {{Gorn}}: Extremely heavily implied. For one, Bitsy makes the extremely stupid decision of [[spoiler:telling [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower Wilson Fisk]] that she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]] and then when he comes out of the office [[spoiler:after beating Bitsy to death]], Helen notices that [[spoiler:Fisk is wiping blood off his hands with a very big handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].

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* {{Gorn}}: Extremely heavily implied. For one, Bitsy makes the extremely stupid decision of [[spoiler:telling [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower Wilson Fisk]] that she wishes to have a closed casket funeral]] and then funeral]]. Then when he comes out of the office [[spoiler:after beating having beaten Bitsy to death]], Helen notices that [[spoiler:Fisk is wiping blood off his hands with a very big handkerchief that she really hopes was ''that'' red to begin with]].

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