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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: In chapter 37, [[spoiler: when Lincoln decides to stay in dimension 63 as Linka, he sends the real Linka to dimension 11B (the One Of The Boys-universe) as a punishment]].
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* SweetTooth: Lincoln finds that she's become as big a chocoholic as his sisters. The family had to stop buying chocolate during trips to the store due to Linka eating it all herself before they got home.
** Chapter 36 takes it a step further by pointing out that without them to space their chocoholic nature out, he now has the collective addictiion of all of them, which he then proves in a contest by eating more chocolate than all of then put together.
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* ShotgunWedding: After Lincoln show preparations he made for his sisters during their ''time of the month''[[note]] calling on his own experiences as a girl for six months[[/note]], Lori is so impressed with it that she claims she will ''force'' Ronnie Anne to marry him if it comes to that.
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** [spoiler: Subverted in the end. In chapter 36, it's revealed she's still alive, and Rita reveals thay've send her to Dakota to live with her aunts and uncles to teach her some discipline.]]
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* MassOhCrap: Lynn Sr and the sisters all have a silent one when Lincoln tells them he knows the reason why he's never been allowed to his dads office[[note]] The girls left such a bad impression on Lynn Sr's boss, that the man thought that any son he had would be even worse than them and had Lincoln pre-emptivly banned from 'take your son to work day'.[[/note]], in front of Rita, who had no idea either.
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* BiTheWay: In chapter 19, Claudia admits that she likes both boys and girls, hence why she has feelings for both Linka and Cristopher.
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** Linka-in-Lincoln's body overpowers Lincoln-in-Linka's in every point where they get into fisticuffs. An unathletic little girl just can't win with brute force against a boy who recently went through a rigorous training regiment courtesy of Pop Pop.
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** Luke speculates that since Lincoln was attracted to girls and is now attracted to boys while in Linka's body, then the real Linka might have been a lesbian before and thus is now attracted to girls as a guy.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Episode 34, William tries to vaporize Lincoln with the Macguffin, but nothing happens. Turns out William modified the Macguffin so it coul never be used against him, bus since [[spoiler:William is in fact an alternate version of Lincoln, this means the Macguffin can't hurt Lincoln either]].
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** Lincoln finally gets to go to 'Take your daughter to work day', only to find out that it's only a boring lecture by her mothers boss, and that the girls have only been having fun by running riot in the office.
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* PerfectionIsImpossible: Lincoln points out that the 'perfect world' that Cryptos is trying to create is impossible, since he's trying to create a universe that is perfect for 'everyone', forgetting that everyone has a different definition of perfect. For example his world will be one were everyone wins and that everything there is to learn has been learned. When Lincoln points out that is not part of Lynn and Lisa's definition of perfect, he backpedals on those aspects, only for Lincoln to point out that a universe where people have to struggle to suceed and there are things left to learn isn't perfect by 'his own' definition.
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*ItsQuietTooQuiet: When infiltrating Williams dimension in chapter 33, Linka is suspicious about the lack of traps or alarms. Naturally, they immediately run into some traps set by William.
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** Chapter 32 adds to the Loud Parents from Dimension 63 realizing how their parenting turned Linka into the spoiled brat she is, when their C-137 counterparts call them out on it.
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