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* MegatonPunch: Whitebeard lands a punch that uses his Fruit, Armament Haki '''and''' Advanced Conqueror's Haki on an enemy. [[spoiler:It's enough to break the teeth of his target, even though it's Shepherd Ju Peter.]]

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* MegatonPunch: Whitebeard lands a punch that uses his Fruit, Armament Haki '''and''' Advanced Conqueror's Haki on an enemy. [[spoiler:It's enough to break the teeth of his target, even though it's Shepherd Ju Peter.Peter, one of the Five Elders, who was ''on guard''.]]



* NotMeThisTime: Ivankov is initially blamed for Luffy turning into a girl until they learn he changes genders with water.

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* NotMeThisTime: Ivankov is initially blamed for Luffy turning into a girl until they learn he changes genders with water.water due to also being Ranma.



* TookALevelInBadass: Besides the Straw Hats growing stronger, Hina's subordinates also become tougher during the Skypiea arc with a note during their fight against the Foxy Pirate that they were all more than twice as strong as before.

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* TookALevelInBadass: Besides the Straw Hats growing stronger, Hina's subordinates also become tougher during the Skypiea arc with a note during their fight against the Foxy Pirate Pirates that they were all more than twice as strong as before.before. It's shown by their good performance during said fight.



* VillainForgotToLevelGrind: Smoker can't beat Luffy when they first meet but his powers are unusual enough that Luffy has to work for his victory if he doesn't want to use haki. However, despite Luffy warning him to, Smoker doesn't pick up any new tricks and uses the same tactics in subsequent encounters, causing Luffy to defeat him with ease each time. Contrast Hina who changes her tactics since not only do her normal ones not work, but Luffy's already seen them and would have counters prepared. Luffy at one point asks if he can have Hina chasing him instead since she keeps things interesting.

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* VillainForgotToLevelGrind: Smoker can't beat Luffy when they first meet but his powers are unusual enough that Luffy has to work for his victory if he doesn't want to use haki.Haki. However, despite Luffy warning him to, Smoker doesn't pick up any new tricks and uses the same tactics in subsequent encounters, causing Luffy to defeat him with ease each time. Contrast Hina who changes her tactics since not only do her normal ones not work, but Luffy's already seen them and would have counters prepared. Luffy at one point asks if he can have Hina chasing him instead since she keeps things interesting.



** A past user of Robin's fruit was the strongest rokushiki user to ever live, as he could grow countless extra limbs to launch multiple Rokushiki attacks simultaneously.
** Whitebeard naturally.

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** A past user of Robin's fruit was the strongest rokushiki Rokushiki user to ever live, as he could grow countless extra limbs to launch multiple Rokushiki attacks simultaneously.
** Whitebeard naturally.naturally, just like in canon.
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* MegatonPunch: Whitebeard lands a punch that uses his Fruit, Armament Haki '''and''' Advanced Conqueror's Haki on an enemy. [[spoiler:It's enough to break the teeth of his target, even though it's Shepherd Ju Peter.]]
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* NoSell: Sanji negates Blueno's attempts to disable his limbs via turning them into doors with his Devil Fruit by pulsing armament haki through the affected limbs.

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* NoSell: Sanji negates Blueno's attempts to disable his limbs via turning them into doors with his Devil Fruit by pulsing armament haki Armament Haki through the affected limbs.limbs. Similarly, Gion uses Armament Haki on her sword so Kid won't steal it.



* StrongAndSkilled: Luffy is a sorta reincarnation of Ranma Saotome with all his memories and skills on top of knowing Rokushiki and having some skill with Haki. Unlike canon Luffy who is forced to flee from Smoker until after the timeskip, here Luffy only has trouble the first time they fight because he doesn't want to resort to haki. By the end of Alabasta, Luffy takes down a Vice Admiral with only moderate trouble.

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* StrongAndSkilled: Luffy is a sorta reincarnation of Ranma Saotome with all his memories and skills on top of knowing Rokushiki and having some skill with Haki. Unlike canon Luffy who is forced to flee from Smoker until after the timeskip, here Luffy only has trouble the first time they fight because he doesn't want to resort to haki.Haki. By the end of Alabasta, Luffy takes down a Vice Admiral with only moderate trouble.
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* CurbStompBattle:
** Buggy can't take damage from Kuro, so he destroys him.
** Sanji, when he gets mad, destroys Absalom with ease.
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** Vice Admiral Gion, while a background character in canon, is a prominent antagonist in the Sabaody arc of this story.

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* NormalFishInATinyPond: Luffy and Makino end up this way to varying degrees. Both have some level of skill in the main variations of haki along with rokushiki while still sailing in the East Blue. Even though Makino only has enough Haki to coat her hands and only for a few seconds, and is nowhere near as skilled with Rokushiki as Luffy (or any of [=CP9=]), she's still pretty much unstoppable in the East Blue while being a decent fighter in Paradise. Luffy on the other hand is far more skilled with armaments haki (though he has little skill with observation) and Conqueror's Haki on top of using all of the Rokushiki with ease. All of that on top of being a sorta reincarnation of [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf Ranma Saotome]] (and thus knowing all his techniques) puts makes Luffy incredibly dangerous even in Paradise, though he has to actually work for his victories.

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* NormalFishInATinyPond: Luffy and Makino end up this way to varying degrees. Both have some level of skill in the main variations of haki along with rokushiki while still sailing in the East Blue. Even though Makino only has enough Haki to coat her hands and only for a few seconds, and is nowhere near as skilled with Rokushiki as Luffy (or any of [=CP9=]), she's still pretty much unstoppable in the East Blue while being a decent fighter in Paradise. Luffy on the other hand is far more skilled with armaments haki Armament Haki (though he has little skill with observation) Observation) and Conqueror's Haki on top of using all of the Rokushiki with ease. All of that on top of being a sorta reincarnation of [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf Ranma Saotome]] (and thus knowing all his techniques) puts makes Luffy incredibly dangerous even in Paradise, though he has to actually work for his victories.victories, especially since some matchups are actually harder than in canon.


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* OutOfTheFryingPan: [[spoiler:Grap has quit the Marines]], so the War of the Best seems to be much easier for the pirates, right? '''Wrong.''' With such a big gap in the forces of the Marines, [[spoiler:one of the [[VillainNoLongerIdle Five Elder Stars]], Shepherd Ju Peter, joins the fight personally.]]
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** Bellamy. While he is still treated as a joke, and Luffy is stronger than in canon physically, this time Bellamy doesn't go down in one hit, requiring a second one from Chopper.

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** After Buggy kills X Drake, the Ryu Ryu no Mi, Model: Allosaurus goes to [[spoiler: Usopp who consumes it and gain the power to transform into a dinosaur in battle.]]

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** A similar example is Perona and her Negative Hollows. Without Usopp, the Straw Hats need their Haki to save their skins from her.
** After Buggy kills X Drake, the Ryu Ryu no Mi, Model: Allosaurus goes to [[spoiler: Usopp who consumes it and gain the power to transform into a dinosaur in battle. While he ends up defeated, he still stands up to Akainu of all people for a moment afterwards.]]
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* TheScapegoat: Capone Bege and his crew are blamed for the attack on Iceburg and the Straw Hats due to being a pirate crew that wears suits, like the CP9 (the actual culprits), and having been in the area just a couple weeks prior. This upsets Bege when he reads the newspaper about it.

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* TheScapegoat: Capone Bege and his crew are blamed for the attack on Iceburg and the Straw Hats due to being a pirate crew that wears suits, like the CP9 [=CP9=] (the actual culprits), and having been in the area just a couple weeks prior. This upsets Bege when he reads the newspaper about it.



* StrongAndSkilled: Luffy is a sorta reincarnation of Ranma Saotome with all his memories and skills on top of knowing rokushiki and having some skill with haki. Unlike canon Luffy who is forced to flee from Smoker until after the timeskip, here Luffy only has trouble the first time they fight because he doesn't want to resort to haki. By the end of Alabasta, Luffy takes down a Vice Admiral with only moderate trouble.

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* StrongAndSkilled: Luffy is a sorta reincarnation of Ranma Saotome with all his memories and skills on top of knowing rokushiki Rokushiki and having some skill with haki.Haki. Unlike canon Luffy who is forced to flee from Smoker until after the timeskip, here Luffy only has trouble the first time they fight because he doesn't want to resort to haki. By the end of Alabasta, Luffy takes down a Vice Admiral with only moderate trouble.
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* ElementalRockPaperScissors: The story exploits the trope in several occasions, even showing what happens when it's averted.
** Due to the new version of Luffy no longer being a Rubber Human, even with ''all'' the improvements he has otherwise, including Haki, he still has a much harder time against [[ShockAndAwe Enel]].
** The story also shows that a well-prepared [[PlayingWithFire Ace]], when fighting with strategy, can fight [[AnIcePerson Aokiji]] and have a chance of winning due to the elemental advantage, even though Aokiji is still stronger and more experienced.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Nami always was a kleptomaniac, but here she wants to steal even people from relationships.


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* GrewASpine: Luffy here has about as much tolerance of Nami's antics as she has of his in canon. (Which translates to next to none)

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** Makino joins Luffy on his journey and due to training with both Luffy and Garp, knows Armament Haki and Rokushiki. She's traveling with Luffy to find Shanks and fulfill some unspecified goal, lampshaded by Nami.

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** Makino Makino, a civilian in canon, joins Luffy on his journey and due to training with both Luffy and Garp, knows Armament Haki and Rokushiki. She's traveling with Luffy to find Shanks and fulfill some unspecified goal, lampshaded by Nami.



** Red-Hair Shanks now has both arms and the Gum-Gum Fruit, and knowing his canon skills, he could probably use the latter [[MagikarpPower to its full potential]].



* TheScapegoat: Capone Bege and his crew are blamed for the attack on Iceburg and the Straw Hats due to being a pirate crew that wears suits and having been in the area just a couple weeks prior. This upsets Bege when he reads the newspaper about it.

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* TheScapegoat: Capone Bege and his crew are blamed for the attack on Iceburg and the Straw Hats due to being a pirate crew that wears suits suits, like the CP9 (the actual culprits), and having been in the area just a couple weeks prior. This upsets Bege when he reads the newspaper about it.



* SimpleYetAwesome: Nico Robin at one point uses her power to load and fire all of the Straw Hat cannons at once, by herself being far more efficient than the rest of the crew combined. She later uses it to spam [[RazorWind Rankyaku]] against Fukuro
* SpannerInTheWorks: The Straw Hats ruin Kuro's plans without ever encountering him because they got into a fight with the Black Cat pirates at sea and captured them.

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* SimpleYetAwesome: Nico Robin at one point uses her power to load and fire all of the Straw Hat cannons at once, by herself being far more efficient than the rest of the crew combined. She later uses it to spam [[RazorWind Rankyaku]] against Fukuro
Fukuro.
* SpannerInTheWorks: The Straw Hats ruin Kuro's plans without ever encountering him because they got into a fight with the Black Cat pirates at sea and captured them. As a result, Kuro himself is easily beaten by Buggy.
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** [[spoiler:The entirety of the [=CP9=], minus [[ArmchairGeneral Spandam]], are killed while fighting the Straw Hat crew]]. Some are outright killed while others are knocked (or dumped) into the ocean while unconscious and heavily injured.

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** [[spoiler:The entirety of the [=CP9=], minus [[ArmchairGeneral [[ArmchairMilitary Spandam]], are killed while fighting the Straw Hat crew]]. Some are outright killed while others are knocked (or dumped) into the ocean while unconscious and heavily injured.



** When the marines attack Water 7 with a Buster Call, Iceburg threatens to seek out the protection of an Emperor if Sengoku doesn't call them off.

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** When the marines attack Water 7 with a Buster Call, Iceburg threatens to seek out the protection of an Emperor if Sengoku doesn't call them off. That's what persuades Sengoku to stop.



* IOweYouMyLife: Invoked by Donquixote Doflamingo who saves [[spoiler:Blackbeard]] but demands their service in return.

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* IOweYouMyLife: Invoked by Donquixote Doflamingo who saves [[spoiler:Blackbeard]] [[spoiler:Blackbeard from Ace]] but demands their service in return.



** Despite Shanks didn't lose his arm, Mihawk refuses to duel with him as he see it as a disgrace to swordsmanship and that Shanks now uses his fists. [[spoiler: Because he ate the Gum-Gum Fruit and became a Rubber Man.]]

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** Despite Even though Shanks didn't lose his arm, arm this time, Mihawk refuses to duel with him as he see it as a disgrace to swordsmanship and that Shanks now uses his fists. [[spoiler: Because he ate the Gum-Gum Fruit and became a Rubber Man.]]
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** Speaking of Buggy, he is this as well compared to his canon self being a BoisterousWeakling.

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** Speaking of Buggy, he is this as well compared to his canon self being a BoisterousWeakling. He takes on Kuro and X Drake successfully.



** [[spoiler:The entirety of the [=CP9=] are killed while fighting the Straw Hat crew]]. Some are outright killed while others are knocked (or dumped) into the ocean while unconscious and heavily injured.

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** [[spoiler:The entirety of the [=CP9=] [=CP9=], minus [[ArmchairGeneral Spandam]], are killed while fighting the Straw Hat crew]]. Some are outright killed while others are knocked (or dumped) into the ocean while unconscious and heavily injured.



* DemotedToExtra: Usopp is not a crew member in this telling. While he was not AdaptedOut and [[InSpiteOfANail IS still sailing on the Grand Line]], he has much less focus than in the canon material.

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* DemotedToExtra: Usopp is not a crew member in this telling. While he was not AdaptedOut and [[InSpiteOfANail IS still sailing on the Grand Line]], he has much less focus than in the canon material.material, [[spoiler:because he is Buggy's sniper instead]].



* EvenEvilHasStandards: Buggy the Clown is disgusted with Kuro for not only running away from the pirate life like a coward, but also slaughtering his own crew. Buggy even states that Usopp is more of a man than him for willingly facing a pirate with nothing but a slingshot.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Buggy the Clown is disgusted with Kuro for not only running away from the pirate life like a coward, but also slaughtering his own crew. Buggy even states that Usopp is more of a man than him for willingly facing a pirate with nothing but a slingshot.slingshot, just like Luffy in canon.
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* BoobsOfSteel: Inverted. Barring Nico Robin, the women of the Straw Hat crew are less busty the stronger they are. Nami is the second bustiest after Robin but the weakest fighter, Vivi is better and less busty, Makino is smaller and a much better fighter, and lastly Ranko has the smallest bust and is the strongest fighter of the entire crew.
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** Speaking of Buggy, he is this as well compared to his canon self being a BoisterousWeakling.
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* AdaptationalCurves: When the female Straw Hats decided to sunbathe in their bikinis, it is revealed that Makino has six pack rock hard abs due to the result of undergoing physical training with Luffy and Garp.

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* AdaptationalCurves: When the female Straw Hats decided to sunbathe in their bikinis, it is revealed that Makino has a toned body with six pack rock hard abs due to the result of undergoing physical training with Luffy and Garp.

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