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* BroadStrokes: WordOfGod says that the first part of the plot will very roughly follow ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]]'', with several major changes. For instance, the Dazzlings are pop stars that Sunset hears on the radio.
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* BroadStrokes: WordOfGod says that the first part of the plot will ''Volume I'' very roughly follow follows ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]]'', with several major changes. For instance, the Dazzlings are pop stars that Sunset hears on the radio.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Subverted by Moondancer. [[spoiler:She was in control of herself through the whole story, and passed her immunity to Twilight to help stop the Sirens. Despite this, she vows to break up Twilight and Sunset at the end of ''Volume I''.]]
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold:
** Sunset, again. Her FatalFlaw of not asking people for help gets exploited again when she refuses any and all help with the counterspell, because magic is the one thing she's supposed to be good at. And also, Sunset didn't want to burden her friends with any more issues.
** The final chapter of ''Volume I'' paints Moondancer this way. [[spoiler:It's revealed that Moondancer was actually immune to the Sirens MindControlMusic, but only pretended not to be in order to avoid suspicion. That said, Moondancer is ''not'' happy about driving Twilight back into Sunset's arms, vowing to break them up.]]
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold:
** Sunset, again. Her FatalFlaw of not asking people for help gets exploited again when she refuses any and all help with the counterspell, because magic is the one thing she's supposed to be good at. And also, Sunset didn't want to burden her friends with any more issues.
** The final chapter of ''Volume I'' paints Moondancer this way. [[spoiler:It's revealed that Moondancer was actually immune to the Sirens MindControlMusic, but only pretended not to be in order to avoid suspicion. That said, Moondancer is ''not'' happy about driving Twilight back into Sunset's arms, vowing to break them up.]]
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* MuggleBornOfMages: According to Trixie, Moondancer doesn't have the magic that typically comes with the Lulamoon bloodline. This also makes Moondancer susceptible to the Sirens' MindControlMusic, whereas the rest of the Lulamoons aren't.
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* MuggleBornOfMages: According to Trixie, Moondancer doesn't have the magic that typically comes with the Lulamoon bloodline. This also makes Moondancer susceptible to the Sirens' MindControlMusic, whereas the rest of the Lulamoons aren't. [[spoiler:This turns out to be incorrect when it's revealed that not only is Moondancer immune, she passed that immunity along to Twilight at the last concert.]]
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* ObliviousToLove: Despite knowing her since childhood, Twilight apparently can't see that Moondancer is head-over-heels in love with her. This is despite Twilight already being in a committed relationship with Sunset.
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* ObliviousToLove: Despite knowing her since childhood, Twilight apparently can't see that Moondancer is head-over-heels in love with her. This is despite Twilight already being in a committed relationship with Sunset. The final chapter of ''Volume I'' sees Twilight finally figure it out, with Sunset laying on thick levels of snark about how it took Twilight that long to notice.
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-->-- “Hey, that’s what your dad said!” Sonata chirped. A dark shadow crossed her face as she smiled. “And look where he is.”
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At the end of winter break, Sunset Shimmer returns to Canterlot High School with her new friends, having broken her curse. Her relationship with her new girlfriend, Twilight Sparkle, seems to be progressing nicely. While uncertain about the future, things seem to be going alright for Sunset...
Until Twilight's old friend Moondancer appears and enrolls at Canterlot High School.
Until Twilight's old friend Moondancer appears and enrolls at Canterlot High School.
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At the end of winter break, Sunset Shimmer returns to Canterlot High School with her new friends, having broken her curse. Her relationship with her new girlfriend, Twilight Sparkle, seems to be progressing nicely. While uncertain about the future, things seem to be going alright for Sunset...
UntilSunset, until Twilight's old friend Moondancer appears and enrolls at Canterlot High School.
School.
On top of all that, a new pop group called the Sirens has been taking over the airwaves, causing such passion in their new fans that they're causing riots wherever they go. And they're headed for Canterlot...
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On top of all that, a new pop group called the Sirens has been taking over the airwaves, causing such passion in their new fans that they're causing riots wherever they go. And they're headed for Canterlot...
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* AlternateSelf: Sunset's human counterpart eventually makes an appearance. As noted by Sunset herself, while Human Sunset is a little taller, a little older, and wears her hair differently, the two are virtually identical.
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* AlternateSelf: Sunset's human counterpart (whom the Rainbooms refer to as "Shimmer") eventually makes an appearance. As noted by Sunset herself, while Human Sunset Shimmer is a little taller, a little older, and wears her hair differently, the two are virtually identical.
* AttackReflector: Trixie's cape is capable of reflecting her own magic spells.
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** The picture on the Lulamoons' mantlepiece is referenced here. In Chapter 2, it's revealed that Moondancer was the girl that Sunset couldn't identify in the family photo.
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** The picture on the Lulamoons' mantlepiece mantelpiece is referenced here. In Chapter 2, it's revealed that Moondancer was the girl that Sunset couldn't identify in the family photo.
* ForcedIntoEvil: The Sirens agree to release Artemis if Trixie sabotages the other bands somehow.
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* NeverTheSelvesShallMeet: Zigzagged. Human Sunset sees her counterpart from another world on TV, and the two eventually come face to face. When they do, Sunset tries not to touch Human Sunset out of fear that the universe might explode.
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* NamesTheSame: Discussed in-universe by the Rainbooms. In order to avoid mixing up the two Sunset Shimmers, they refer to their friend as "Sunset" and her human counterpart as "Shimmer."
* NeverTheSelvesShallMeet:Zigzagged. Human Sunset Discussed. Shimmer sees her counterpart from another world on TV, and the two eventually come face to face. When they do, Sunset tries not to touch Human Sunset Shimmer out of fear that the universe might explode.explode.
** They do end up making physical contact in chapter 15. When they do, Shimmer sees a vision of Sunset's parents, and Sunset sees Shimmer getting bullied on the playground as a child.
* NeverTheSelvesShallMeet:
** They do end up making physical contact in chapter 15. When they do, Shimmer sees a vision of Sunset's parents, and Sunset sees Shimmer getting bullied on the playground as a child.
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* ObliviousToLove: Despite knowing her since childhood, Twilight apparently can't see that Moondancer is head-over-heels in love with her. This is despite Twilight already being in a committed relationship with Sunset Shimmer.
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* ObliviousToLove: Despite knowing her since childhood, Twilight apparently can't see that Moondancer is head-over-heels in love with her. This is despite Twilight already being in a committed relationship with Sunset Shimmer.Sunset.
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* ShowingOffTheNewBody: In chapter nine, Adagio says “Honestly, I’ve grown to like this body," while running a hand down the curve of her hips.
* SirSwearsALot: Human Sunset is particularly foul-mouthed, using the word "shit" quite often. Rarity even notes that she finds it hard to believe that Human Sunset is even more crass than Pony Sunset.
* SirSwearsALot: Human Sunset is particularly foul-mouthed, using the word "shit" quite often. Rarity even notes that she finds it hard to believe that Human Sunset is even more crass than Pony Sunset.
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* ShowingOffTheNewBody: In chapter nine, Adagio says “Honestly, "Honestly, I’ve grown to like this body," while running a hand down the curve of her hips.
* SirSwearsALot:Human Sunset Shimmer is particularly foul-mouthed, using the word "shit" quite often. Rarity even notes that she finds it hard to believe that Human Sunset Shimmer is even more crass than Pony Sunset.
* SirSwearsALot:
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* SpannerInTheWorks: The thief Snake Queen Lamia shows up to the Canterlot Museum to steal the Crystal Heart the same night that the Sirens do. [[spoiler:After a brief struggle between Lamia, the Sirens, and the police, Lamia gets away with the Heart.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: The thief Snake Queen Lamia shows up to the Canterlot Museum to steal the Crystal Heart the same night that the Sirens do. [[spoiler:After After a brief struggle between Lamia, the Sirens, and the police, Lamia gets away with the Heart.]]
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* TemptingFate: After being interviewed for a TV spot during the Battle of the Bands, Sunset is sure it's going to come back to haunt her. [[spoiler:She turns out to be right when Lamia, aka Human Sunset, sees the interview on TV.]]
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* TemptingFate: After being interviewed for a TV spot during the Battle of the Bands, Sunset is sure it's going to come back to haunt her. [[spoiler:She turns out to be right when Lamia, aka Human Sunset, aka Shimmer, sees the interview on TV.]]]]
* TouchTelepathy: Sunset and Shimmer are able to see each other's memories when they make physical contact with each other's bare skin.
* TouchTelepathy: Sunset and Shimmer are able to see each other's memories when they make physical contact with each other's bare skin.
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** Chapter 14. [[spoiler:Sunset meets Human Sunset, aka Lamia, when the Rainbooms have to practice in the abandoned factory where Pony Sunset used to live. On top of that, Sunset realizes that she was the cause of the Sirens escaping when Selena explains the magical leylines.]]
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** Chapter 14. [[spoiler:Sunset meets Human Sunset, aka Lamia, her human counterpart when the Rainbooms have to practice in the abandoned factory where Pony Sunset used to live. On top of that, Sunset realizes that she was the cause of the Sirens escaping when Selena explains the magical leylines.]]
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** Sonata Dusk, who is most certainly NOT misguided or misunderstood.
-->-- “Hey, that’s what your dad said!” Sonata chirped. A dark shadow crossed her face as she smiled. “And look where he is.”
-->-- “Hey, that’s what your dad said!” Sonata chirped. A dark shadow crossed her face as she smiled. “And look where he is.”
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* NeverTheSelvesShallMeet: Zigzagged. Human Sunset sees her counterpart from another world on TV, and the two eventually come face to face. When they do, Sunset tries not to touch HUman Sunset out of fear that the universe might explode.
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* NeverTheSelvesShallMeet: Zigzagged. Human Sunset sees her counterpart from another world on TV, and the two eventually come face to face. When they do, Sunset tries not to touch HUman Human Sunset out of fear that the universe might explode.
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* AlternateSelf: Sunset's human counterpart eventually makes an appearance. As noted by Sunset herself, while Human Sunset is a little taller, a little older, and wears her hair differently, the two are virtually identical.
* NeverTheSelvesShallMeet: Zigzagged. Human Sunset sees her counterpart from another world on TV, and the two eventually come face to face. When they do, Sunset tries not to touch HUman Sunset out of fear that the universe might explode.
* SirSwearsALot: Human Sunset is particularly foul-mouthed, using the word "shit" quite often. Rarity even notes that she finds it hard to believe that Human Sunset is even more crass than Pony Sunset.
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* TemptingFate: After being interviewed for a TV spot during the Battle of the Bands, Sunset is sure it's going to come back to haunt her. [[spoiler:She turns out to be right when Lamia, aka Human Sunset Shimmer, sees the interview on TV.]]
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* TemptingFate: After being interviewed for a TV spot during the Battle of the Bands, Sunset is sure it's going to come back to haunt her. [[spoiler:She turns out to be right when Lamia, aka Human Sunset Shimmer, Sunset, sees the interview on TV.]]
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** Humorously, Twilight keeps trying to come up with one for Sunset, but all of her names are shot down.
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** Humorously, Twilight keeps trying to come up with one for Sunset, but all of her names are shot down. Sunset eventually settles on "Shim" after being too tired to argue any more.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Sunset keeps quiet after [[spoiler:Artemis apparently dies as a result of fighting the Sirens]], feeling like it's not her place to address the Lulamoons. Sunset's guilt gets even worse when she sneaks out without telling the Lulamoons where she's going.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: HeroicBSOD: After learning that she may have [[spoiler:accidentally helped the Sirens escape captivity]], Sunset just slinks up to her room and lies down without a word.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation:
** Sunset keeps quiet after [[spoiler:Artemis apparently dies as a result of fighting the Sirens]], feeling like it's not her place to address the Lulamoons. Sunset's guilt gets even worse when she sneaks out without telling the Lulamoons where she'sgoing.going.
** It gets worse for Sunset when she realizes that [[spoiler:being blasted with the Elements of Harmony created a leyline that allowed the Sirens to escape their prison]], effectively causing all of the problems with the Sirens.
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:After being told about the concept of leylines and leygates, Sunset realizes that a leygate was created when a large concentration of magic -- her being blasted with the Elements of Harmony -- was blasted into the world. Effectively, Sunset's selfishness caused the Sirens to become a worldwide threat again. Sunset does not take the information well.]]
* HeroicSelfDeprecation:
** Sunset keeps quiet after [[spoiler:Artemis apparently dies as a result of fighting the Sirens]], feeling like it's not her place to address the Lulamoons. Sunset's guilt gets even worse when she sneaks out without telling the Lulamoons where she's
** It gets worse for Sunset when she realizes that [[spoiler:being blasted with the Elements of Harmony created a leyline that allowed the Sirens to escape their prison]], effectively causing all of the problems with the Sirens.
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:After being told about the concept of leylines and leygates, Sunset realizes that a leygate was created when a large concentration of magic -- her being blasted with the Elements of Harmony -- was blasted into the world. Effectively, Sunset's selfishness caused the Sirens to become a worldwide threat again. Sunset does not take the information well.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:As Selena explains, a leyline is a magical current that people can used to teleport long-range to leygates, places of high concentrations of magic power. Sunset inadvertently helped create one when Princess Twilight and the Humane Six blasted her with the Elements of Harmony. Effectively, Sunset aided the Sirens in their escape, putting the world in danger. As Sunset herself notes, she can't go a single day without being reminded of how horrible her selfish past self truly was.]]
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** Chapter 14. [[spoiler:Sunset meets Human Sunset, aka Lamia, when the Rainbooms have to practice in the abandoned factory where Pony Sunset used to live. On top of that, Sunset realizes that she was the cause of the Sirens escaping when Selena explains the magical leylines.]]
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* ShowingOffTheNewBody: In chapter nine, Adagio says “Honestly, I’ve grown to like this body," while running a hand down the curve of her hips.
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* AdmiringTheNewBody: In chapter nine, Adagio says “Honestly, I’ve grown to like this body," while running a hand down the curve of her hips.
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* TemptingFate: After being interviewed for a TV spot during the Battle of the Bands, Sunset is sure it's going to come back to haunt her. [[spoiler:She turns out to be right when Lamia, aka Human Sunset Shimmer, sees the interview on TV.]]
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** Humorously, Twilight keeps trying to come up with one for Sunset, but all of her names are shot down.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Sunset gets jealous almost immediately of the very touchy-feely relationship between Twilight and Moondancer. Likewise, a small tic from Moondancer shows she's jealous of Sunset's relationship with Twilight.
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* GreenEyedMonster: GreenEyedMonster:
** Sunset gets jealous almost immediately of the very touchy-feely relationship between Twilight and Moondancer. Likewise, a small tic from Moondancer shows she's jealous of Sunset's relationship withTwilight.Twilight.
** While trying out for the Battle of the Bands, Trixie insists on trying to defeat the Dazzlings and save the world by herself, refusing the help of Sunset or the Humane Six. Selena suspects it's wanting to prove herself over Sunset.
** Sunset gets jealous almost immediately of the very touchy-feely relationship between Twilight and Moondancer. Likewise, a small tic from Moondancer shows she's jealous of Sunset's relationship with
** While trying out for the Battle of the Bands, Trixie insists on trying to defeat the Dazzlings and save the world by herself, refusing the help of Sunset or the Humane Six. Selena suspects it's wanting to prove herself over Sunset.
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** Chapter 13 reveals that master thief Lamia the Snake Queen is [[spoiler:the human world's Sunset Shimmer, after she sees Equestria's Sunset on TV during the Battle of the Bands tryouts]].
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* ClassyCatBurglar: Snake Queen Lamia, who uses a long snake named Jörmungandr to assist her in thievery.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: The thief Snake Queen Lamia shows up to the Canterlot Museum to steal the Crystal Heart the same night that the Sirens do. [[spoiler:After a brief struggle between Lamia, the Sirens, and the police, Lamia gets away with the Heart.]]
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* TheDitz: Sonata Dusk, who spills the plans of the Sirens to [[spoiler:break into a museum and steal the Crystal Heart]] to Artemis.
* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: Sunset distracts several of the arena security guards in Chapter 9 by pretending to be a screeching fan. It works, allowing Trixie to sneak past them.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Sunset keeps quiet after [[spoiler:Artemis apparently dies as a result of fighting the Sirens]], feeling like it's not her place to address the Lulamoons. Sunset's guilt gets even worse when she sneaks out without telling the Lulamoons where she's going.
* KeepingSecretsSucks: In addition to having to keep quiet about magic popping up, Sunset has to get Twilight and the rest of her friends to lie to people in order to procure tickets to the Sirens' concert. Twilight is especially angry at Sunset for making her lie to Moondancer.
* KeepingSecretsSucks: In addition to having to keep quiet about magic popping up, Sunset has to get Twilight and the rest of her friends to lie to people in order to procure tickets to the Sirens' concert. Twilight is especially angry at Sunset for making her lie to Moondancer.
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* WhamLine: Chapter 2 reveals that Moondancer is Trixie's cousin.
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* WhamLine: WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 2 reveals that Moondancer is Trixie'scousin.cousin. This means that Sunset knows she'll have to deal with her more frequently.
** Chapter 8. [[spoiler:Artemis get attacked by the Sirens in their hotel. As his vision fades out from [[PipePain a hit to the head with a pipe]], it's left unclear [[UncertainDoom if Artemis died]].]]
** Chapter 2 reveals that Moondancer is Trixie's
** Chapter 8. [[spoiler:Artemis get attacked by the Sirens in their hotel. As his vision fades out from [[PipePain a hit to the head with a pipe]], it's left unclear [[UncertainDoom if Artemis died]].]]
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* BeneathTheMask: Moondancer does this to Sunset to get under her skin. Sunset does it right back, despite Moondancer making every effort to hide her emotion.
-->'''Sunset:''' ''(thinking about Moondancer)'' Rich girl. Busy dad, absent mom. Comes from a family with unusual abilities and inherited none of it. That’s right, two can play at this game. You’re not as great an actress as you think.
-->'''Sunset:''' ''(thinking about Moondancer)'' Rich girl. Busy dad, absent mom. Comes from a family with unusual abilities and inherited none of it. That’s right, two can play at this game. You’re not as great an actress as you think.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Despite being outwardly sweet and friendly, Moondancer has a very spiteful mean streak to her. She verbally deconstructs Sunset, and intentionally does things on their time at the mall to antagonize her once Twilight is out of earshot.
** Sunset plays chess with someone in Chapter 7, and once again wins after her opponent concedes.
* HannibalLecture: In Chapter 7, Moondancer reads Sunset's past so eerily well that Sunset is thoroughly unnerved.
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* MuggleBornOfMages: According to Trixie, Moondancer doesn't have the magic that typically comes with the Lulamoon bloodline.
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* MuggleBornOfMages: According to Trixie, Moondancer doesn't have the magic that typically comes with the Lulamoon bloodline. This also makes Moondancer susceptible to the Sirens' MindControlMusic, whereas the rest of the Lulamoons aren't.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Moondancer can play chess just as well as Twilight. And just like Twilight, she forfeits when she's going to lose, though Sunset suspects it's to intentionally deny Sunset the satisfaction of winning decisively.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Artemis goes from his LargeHam jovial personality to serious and stoic when he tells Twilight that some things about magic just have to be accepted, even if they can't be intrinsically measured. Later, when Sunset returns home, he's almost panicking when he hears the Sirens escaped, which everyone in the whole family sees as a big cause for alarm.
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* AmplifierArtifact: The Crystal Heart, much like its canon counterpart, enhances the emotions around an area. The Sirens, who feed off of negative emotions, want it in order to have a feast of hate.
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* HatePlague: The Sirens' music once again causes people to feel hatred and irrational anger at people. At their concerts, this ends up causing several people to start rioting.
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* SealedEvilInACan: The Sirens were imprisoned on an island by Artemis and the other Lulamoons. They broke out some time before the fic started, turning into pop stars to spread their HatePlague.
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* ButtMonkey: Chapter 5 sees Twilight and Sunset getting pummeled while trying to measure magic readings. It's a retelling of the ''Rainbow Rocks'' short "The Science of Magic."
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: The first chapter spoils the ending of ''Long Road to Friendship'', namely that Sunset breaks the curse and that she hooks up with Twilight.
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* PassionateSportsGirl: Rainbow Dash, who plays on the soccer team, but also Sunset and Fluttershy, the latter of whom gets a sore throat from how loud she ends up screaming.
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** Sunset's motorcycle still has a few scratches and spots of pink paint from being vandalized.
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* SupremeChef: Pinkie Pie is quite the cook, as the rest of her friends keep complimenting her. (She admits though, that even she can't make haggis appealing.) The rest of the Pie family, on the other hand, are [[LethalChef so bad at cooking]] that the Spectacular Seven make excuses to leave if they find out that anyone other than Pinkie is making dinner.
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* SupremeChef: Pinkie Pie is quite the cook, as the rest of her friends keep complimenting her. (She admits admits, though, that even she can't make haggis appealing.) The rest of the Pie family, on the other hand, are [[LethalChef so bad at cooking]] that the Spectacular Seven make excuses to leave if they find out that anyone other than Pinkie is making dinner.
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* BroadStrokes: WordOfGod says that the plot will very roughly follow ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]]'', with several major changes. For instance, the Dazzlings are pop stars that Sunset hears on the radio.
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* BroadStrokes: WordOfGod says that the first part of the plot will very roughly follow ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]]'', with several major changes. For instance, the Dazzlings are pop stars that Sunset hears on the radio.
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* ObliviousToLove: Despite knowing her since childhood, Twilight apparently can't see that Moondancer is in love with her. This is despite Twilight already being in a committed relationship with Sunset Shimmer.
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* ObliviousToLove: Despite knowing her since childhood, Twilight apparently can't see that Moondancer is head-over-heels in love with her. This is despite Twilight already being in a committed relationship with Sunset Shimmer.
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* MuggleBornOfMages: According to Trixie, Moondancer doesn't have the magic that typically comes with the Lulamoon bloodline.
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* BigFancyHouse: Moondancer lives in one. Her father is the head of a mutli-billion dollar conglomerate, hence how she's able to afford it.
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* BigFancyHouse: Moondancer lives in one. Her father is can afford it because he's the head of a mutli-billion mutli-million dollar conglomerate, hence how she's able to afford it.conglomerate.
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* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Sunset and Trixie are still practically at each other's throats. Now that they live together, they're getting into frequent arguments over things like dishes and use of the bathroom.
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* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Sunset and Trixie are still practically at each other's throats. Now that they live together, they're don't get along very well, and they've started getting into frequent arguments over things like dishes and who gets to use of the bathroom.bathroom first in the morning. However, Sunset knows that Trixie has at least accepted her into the family.
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* SupremeChef: Pinkie Pie is quite the cook, as the rest of her friends keep complimenting her. (She admits though, that even she can't make haggis appealing.) The rest of the Pie family, on the other hand, are [[LethalChef so bad at cooking]] that the Spectacular Seven make excuses to leave if they find out someone except that anyone other than Pinkie is cooking.making dinner.
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* AffectionateNickname: Sunset usually refers to Twilight as "Sparky." Likewise, Moondancer calls her "Twily" and "my little star."
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** "Sparky" (Twilight, used by Sunset)
** "Twily," "my littlestar."star" (Twilight, used by Moondancer)
** "Moony" (Moondancer, used by Twilight)
** "Sparky" (Twilight, used by Sunset)
** "Twily," "my little
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''Spectacular Seven'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic, written by The Albinocorn. It's a sequel to ''FanFic/LongRoadToFriendship''.
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[[caption-width-right:350:"Congrats, Princess. You have competition."]]
[[caption-width-right:350:"Congrats, Princess. You have competition."]]
* {{Adorkable}}: Twilight isn't any better at flirting with Sunset than she was in ''Long Road to Friendship'', prone to making {{Incredibly Lame Pun}}s at very inappropriate moments. However, just like before, Sunset finds her nerdy awkwardness endearing.
-->'''Twilight:''' So, uh, Sunset... do you like science? Because I've got my ion you.
-->'''Twilight:''' So, uh, Sunset... do you like science? Because I've got my ion you.
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* BroadStrokes: WordOfGod says that the plot will very roughly follow ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]]'', with several major changes.
* CallBack: The picture on the Lulamoons' mantlepiece is referenced here. In Chapter 2, it's revealed that Moondancer was the girl that Sunset couldn't identify in the family photo.
* CallBack: The picture on the Lulamoons' mantlepiece is referenced here. In Chapter 2, it's revealed that Moondancer was the girl that Sunset couldn't identify in the family photo.
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* BigFancyHouse: Moondancer lives in one. Her father is the head of a mutli-billion dollar conglomerate, hence how she's able to afford it.
* BroadStrokes: WordOfGod says that the plot will very roughly follow ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]]'', with several majorchanges.
changes. For instance, the Dazzlings are pop stars that Sunset hears on the radio.
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** The picture on the Lulamoons' mantlepiece is referenced here. In Chapter 2, it's revealed that Moondancer was the girl that Sunset couldn't identify in the familyphoto.photo.
** The time Twilight "fondled" Sunset by spilling a milkshake on her in the previous fanfic is referenced.
* BroadStrokes: WordOfGod says that the plot will very roughly follow ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]]'', with several major
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** The picture on the Lulamoons' mantlepiece is referenced here. In Chapter 2, it's revealed that Moondancer was the girl that Sunset couldn't identify in the family
** The time Twilight "fondled" Sunset by spilling a milkshake on her in the previous fanfic is referenced.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Sunset and Moondancer voice their dislike for each other, but try to look past it for Twilight's sake.
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* AdaptationalAttractiveness: In canon, Moondancer is a ShrinkingViolet with rather disheveled, unkempt appearances. In this fic, she's described as almost ethereally beautiful, wearing large dresses and backflipping in pumps.
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* AdaptationalAttractiveness: In canon, Moondancer is a ShrinkingViolet with rather disheveled, unkempt appearances. In this fic, she's described as almost ethereally beautiful, wearing large dresses and backflipping in pumps."ethereally beautiful" the moment Sunset sees her.
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* AlmostKiss: Sunset and Twilight have tried several times to kiss on their front porch. Something's interrupted it every single time. The example the reader first gets to see is Twilight's father Night Light accidentally eavesdropping on them.
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* AdaptationalAttractiveness: In canon, Moondancer is a ShrinkingViolet with rather disheveled, unkempt appearances. In this fic, she's described as almost ethereally beautiful.
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* AdaptationalAttractiveness: In canon, Moondancer is a ShrinkingViolet with rather disheveled, unkempt appearances. In this fic, she's described as almost ethereally beautiful.
beautiful, wearing large dresses and backflipping in pumps.
* AffectionateNickname: Sunset usually refers to Twilight as "Sparky." Likewise, Moondancer calls her "Twily" and "my little star."
* BroadStrokes: WordOfGod says that the plot will very roughly follow ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]]'', with several major changes.
* CallBack: The picture on the Lulamoons' mantlepiece is referenced here. In Chapter 2, it's revealed that Moondancer was the girl that Sunset couldn't identify in the family photo.
* AffectionateNickname: Sunset usually refers to Twilight as "Sparky." Likewise, Moondancer calls her "Twily" and "my little star."
* BroadStrokes: WordOfGod says that the plot will very roughly follow ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks Rainbow Rocks]]'', with several major changes.
* CallBack: The picture on the Lulamoons' mantlepiece is referenced here. In Chapter 2, it's revealed that Moondancer was the girl that Sunset couldn't identify in the family photo.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Sunset gets jealous almost immediately of the very touchy-feely relationship between Twilight and Moondancer.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Sunset gets jealous almost immediately of the very touchy-feely relationship between Twilight and Moondancer. Likewise, a small tic from Moondancer shows she's jealous of Sunset's relationship with Twilight.
* NewOldFlame: Moondancer was Twilight's best friend growing up, and the two had to part ways after a while. Upon returning, Moondancer is still clearly carrying a torch for Twilight.
* ObliviousToLove: Despite knowing her since childhood, Twilight apparently can't see that Moondancer is in love with her. This is despite Twilight already being in a committed relationship with Sunset Shimmer.
* ObliviousToLove: Despite knowing her since childhood, Twilight apparently can't see that Moondancer is in love with her. This is despite Twilight already being in a committed relationship with Sunset Shimmer.
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* WhamLine: Chapter 2 reveals that Moondancer is Trixie's cousin.
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* SupremeChef: Pinkie Pie is quite the cook, as the rest of her friends keep complimenting her. The rest of the Pie family, on the other hand, are [[LethalChef so bad at cooking]] that the Spectacular Seven make excuses to leave if they find out someone except Pinkie is cooking.
* WhamLine: Chapter 2 reveals that Moondancer is Trixie'scousin.cousin.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: It's still about two years away from Sunset being able to go back to Equestria through the portal. The dream she has at the beginning of the fic shows that, while Sunset wants to go back, she's having second thoughts over leaving her friends behind.
* WhamLine: Chapter 2 reveals that Moondancer is Trixie's
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: It's still about two years away from Sunset being able to go back to Equestria through the portal. The dream she has at the beginning of the fic shows that, while Sunset wants to go back, she's having second thoughts over leaving her friends behind.
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''Spectacular Seven'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic, written by The Albinocorn. It's a sequel to ''FanFic/LongRoadToFriendship''.
At the end of winter break, Sunset Shimmer returns to Canterlot High School with her new friends, having broken her curse. Her relationship with her new girlfriend, Twilight Sparkle, seems to be progressing nicely. While uncertain about the future, things seem to be going alright for Sunset...
Until Twilight's old friend Moondancer appears and enrolls at Canterlot High School.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AdaptationalAttractiveness: In canon, Moondancer is a ShrinkingViolet with rather disheveled, unkempt appearances. In this fic, she's described as almost ethereally beautiful.
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* CatapultNightmare: Defied. The fic opens with Sunset having yet another nightmare involving her "raging she-demon" side, but upon jolting awake, Sunset makes it a point to lie still.
* TheFellowshipHasEnded: Discussed by Sunset, if only in her own mind. Sunset doesn't want to address that she and her friends (and, in all likelihood, her girlfriend) will be going off on separate paths as soon as they graduate at the end of the year.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Sunset and Trixie are still practically at each other's throats. Now that they live together, they're getting into frequent arguments over things like dishes and use of the bathroom.
* GreenEyedMonster: Sunset gets jealous almost immediately of the very touchy-feely relationship between Twilight and Moondancer.
* LargeHam: Moondancer, who frequently dances while introducing herself (even backflipping), and uses PurpleProse for just about everything.
* SnowballFight: The first chapter opens with one between the Spectacular Seven, and it's stated they've been having them throughout Winter Break.
* WhamLine: Chapter 2 reveals that Moondancer is Trixie's cousin.
At the end of winter break, Sunset Shimmer returns to Canterlot High School with her new friends, having broken her curse. Her relationship with her new girlfriend, Twilight Sparkle, seems to be progressing nicely. While uncertain about the future, things seem to be going alright for Sunset...
Until Twilight's old friend Moondancer appears and enrolls at Canterlot High School.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AdaptationalAttractiveness: In canon, Moondancer is a ShrinkingViolet with rather disheveled, unkempt appearances. In this fic, she's described as almost ethereally beautiful.
* CallBack:
* CatapultNightmare: Defied. The fic opens with Sunset having yet another nightmare involving her "raging she-demon" side, but upon jolting awake, Sunset makes it a point to lie still.
* TheFellowshipHasEnded: Discussed by Sunset, if only in her own mind. Sunset doesn't want to address that she and her friends (and, in all likelihood, her girlfriend) will be going off on separate paths as soon as they graduate at the end of the year.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Sunset and Trixie are still practically at each other's throats. Now that they live together, they're getting into frequent arguments over things like dishes and use of the bathroom.
* GreenEyedMonster: Sunset gets jealous almost immediately of the very touchy-feely relationship between Twilight and Moondancer.
* LargeHam: Moondancer, who frequently dances while introducing herself (even backflipping), and uses PurpleProse for just about everything.
* SnowballFight: The first chapter opens with one between the Spectacular Seven, and it's stated they've been having them throughout Winter Break.
* WhamLine: Chapter 2 reveals that Moondancer is Trixie's cousin.
