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** and to ''Literature/ApprenticeAdept'' and other sci-fi works concerning passing between worlds.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: as the initial rush of events begins to slow and there is time to reflect, Philip Holtack worries that PTSD is beginning.
* SkepticNoLonger: Holtack on first meeting things of myth and legend in the flesh (or silicone) - and ''definitely'' after encountering Sally.
* SouthAfricansWithSurfaceToAirMissiles: What Vetinari fears will happen if "Rimwards Howondaland" gets the secret of the Gonne.
* ShellShockedVeteran: as the initial rush of events begins to slow and there is time to reflect, Philip Holtack worries that PTSD is beginning.
* SkepticNoLonger: Holtack on first meeting things of myth and legend in the flesh (or silicone) - and ''definitely'' after encountering Sally.
* SouthAfricansWithSurfaceToAirMissiles: What Vetinari fears will happen if "Rimwards Howondaland" gets the secret of the Gonne.
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* SouthAfricansWithSurfaceToAirMissiles: What Vetinari fears will happen if "Rimwards Howondaland" gets the secret of the Gonne.
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* [[NeverFoundTheBody Sandbag Funeral]]: The burial services on Roundworld.
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* CatharsisFactor: the Church Parade the morning after six soldiers are killed in action, which is deliberately steered into a memorial service for them. Written straight, with just a little dark humour.
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* TheApartheidEra: The story is set in 1985 when apartheid was still a going concern. It ''certainly'' is on the Discworld, in Rimwards Howondaland. Also Hans Ruijterman, the drifter from Rhodesia who ends up in the British Army because fighting for a living is all he knows. And he's good at it. Vetinari even calls him a mercenary...
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* TheApartheidEra: The story is set in 1985 when apartheid was still a going concern. It ''certainly'' is on the Discworld, in Rimwards Howondaland. Also Hans Ruijterman, the drifter from Rhodesia who ends up in the British Army because fighting for a living is all he knows. And he's good at it. Vetinari even calls him a mercenary... mercenary...
* AuthorAvatar: WordOfGod says this is Philip Holtack.
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* FatherToHisMen: certainly the Colonel. Lieutenant Philip Holtack aspires to this but most of the time considers it an achievement to be Big Brother to his men. Many of whom are older than he is.
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Hen wlad fy nhadfau
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* [[UsefulNotes/Wales [[UsefulNotes/{{Wales}} Land Of My Fathers And their Sheep: Their Sheep]]: the Welsh/Llamedosians]].Welsh/Llamedosians. Although the NationalStereotypes used for the Welsh are the ones they'd cheerfully admit to themselves, and the worst/ least supportable ethnic stereotypes are averted.
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* LandOfMyFathersAndSheep: [[UsefulNotes/Wales Land Of My Fathers And their Sheep: the Welsh/Llamedosians.Welsh/Llamedosians]]. Although the NationalStereotypes used for the Welsh are the ones they'd cheerfully admit to themselves, and the worst/ least supportable ethnic stereotypes are averted.
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* LandOfMyFathersAndSheep: the Welsh/Llamedosians. Although the NationalStereotypes used for the Welsh are the ones they'd cheerfully admit to themselves, and the worst/ least supportable ethnic stereotypes are averted.
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* OhCrap: the moment where Holtack finally realises that there ''are'' such things as vampires.
* SergeantRock: Principally Dafydd Williams, but also Detritus, Craig-Y-Don, Angua, A.E. Pessimal, Fred Colon, and other three-striped archetypes.
* SergeantRock: Principally Dafydd Williams, but also Detritus, Craig-Y-Don, Angua, A.E. Pessimal, Fred Colon, and other three-striped archetypes.
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* OhCrap: the moment where Holtack finally realises that there ''are'' such things as vampires.
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* RightHandCat: Guilty. Although Mrs Tachyon is more ChaoticNeutral than evil.
* [[NeverFoundTheBody Sandbag Funeral]]: The burial services on Roundworld.
* SergeantRock: Principally Dafydd Williams, but also Detritus, Craig-Y-Don, Angua, A.E. Pessimal, Willikins, Fred Colon, and other three-striped archetypes.
* RightHandCat: Guilty. Although Mrs Tachyon is more ChaoticNeutral than evil.
* [[NeverFoundTheBody Sandbag Funeral]]: The burial services on Roundworld.
* SergeantRock: Principally Dafydd Williams, but also Detritus, Craig-Y-Don, Angua, A.E. Pessimal, Willikins, Fred Colon, and other three-striped archetypes.
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How the two sides come to an understanding is dealt with in the story. Meanwhile, the story continues at home, as Philip Holtack's sassy sister begins to realise everything is not as it seems and she tries to work out What The Hell Is Going On.
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* MenInBlack: Vetinari's Dark Clerks, Assassins in government service, sent out to assess rumours of an alien visitation and to monitor public unrest at this news.
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a cameo appearance by...
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* NewMeat: "Boy" Hughes, the youngest and newest member of Seven Platoon.
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* NewMeat: "Boy" Hughes, the youngest and newest member of Seven Platoon. Platoon.
* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed in the making of this fiction. Prince Charles and Princess Diana are referenced, mainly in the context of Philip Holtack being enormously relieved that in saluting Royalty with a ceremonial sword with which he had received minimal training, he did not inadvertently insert it into the royal nostril. Or indeed his own.
* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed in the making of this fiction. Prince Charles and Princess Diana are referenced, mainly in the context of Philip Holtack being enormously relieved that in saluting Royalty with a ceremonial sword with which he had received minimal training, he did not inadvertently insert it into the royal nostril. Or indeed his own.
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* LordErrorProne: Rust. Selachii. Venturi. Omnius.
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A Fan Work by author A.A. Pessimal in which two worlds collide - ours (the Roundworld) and the slightly bizarre flat earth called the ''{{Discworld}}''. Terry Pratchett's creation is used as the mirror to reflect concepts, issues and social unrest in the world we inhabit.
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A critically acclaimed Fan Work by author A.A. Pessimal in which two worlds collide - ours (the Roundworld) and the slightly bizarre flat earth called the ''{{Discworld}}''. Terry Pratchett's creation is used as the mirror to reflect concepts, issues and social unrest in the world we inhabit.
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Owing to misadventure and a series of close encounters with the mysterious Mrs Norah Tachyon (from Pratchett's ''[[JohnnyandTheBomb Johnny Maxwell]]'' stories), a patrol of British Army soldiers narrowly escapes death on the Roundworld only to be scattered all over the city of Ankh-Morpork. Other concepts from Roundworld piggy-back in with them and pose problems for Lord Vetinari, Sam Vimes, the wizards and the Assassins.
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Owing to misadventure and a series of close encounters with the mysterious Mrs Norah Tachyon (from Pratchett's ''[[JohnnyandTheBomb Johnny Maxwell]]'' stories), a patrol of British Army soldiers narrowly escapes death on the Roundworld only to be scattered all over the city of Ankh-Morpork. Other concepts from Roundworld piggy-back in with them and pose problems for Lord Vetinari, Sam Vimes, the wizards and the Assassins. \n There are several sub-plots, both on Earth and on the Discworld.
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* MistakenForAfterlife: All seven men transferred to the Discworld after the bomb explosion briefly consider this might be the case.
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* NotEnoughToBury: this is what Denise Holtack is initially told concerning her brother's apparent death. the Army explains the apparent absence of bodies by pointing to the bomb explosion being so incredibly large that six men were completely vaporised. She considers it to be the sort of huge black joke her brother would have been ''first'' to laugh at - that a coffin will be filled with sandbags containing dust and rubble from a Northern Irish street, that just ''might'' contain a few atoms of her poor dead brother.
** Later on a psychic with a finger on the pulse tells her that they NeverFoundTheBody. This is her first sign that things are not what they seem.
** Later on a psychic with a finger on the pulse tells her that they NeverFoundTheBody. This is her first sign that things are not what they seem.
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* NotEnoughToBury: this is what Denise Holtack is initially told concerning her brother's apparent death. the Army explains the apparent absence of bodies by pointing to the bomb explosion being so incredibly large that six men were completely vaporised. She considers it to be the sort of huge black joke her brother would have been ''first'' to laugh at at - that a coffin will be filled with sandbags containing dust and rubble from a Northern Irish street, that just ''might'' contain a few atoms of her poor dead brother.
dead brother.
** Later on a psychic with a finger on the pulse tells her that they NeverFoundTheBody. This is her firstsign sign that things are not what they seem. seem.
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* NewMeat: "Boy" Hughes, the youngest and newest member of Seven Platoon.
* NotEnoughToBury: this is what Denise Holtack is initially told concerning her brother's apparent death. the Army explains the apparent absence of bodies by pointing to the bomb explosion being so incredibly large that six men were completely vaporised. She considers it to be the sort of huge black joke her brother would have been ''first'' to laughat at - that a coffin will be filled with sandbags containing dust and rubble from a Northern Irish street, that just ''might'' contain a few atoms of her poor dead brother.
dead brother.
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* NotEnoughToBury: this is what Denise Holtack is initially told concerning her brother's apparent death. the Army explains the apparent absence of bodies by pointing to the bomb explosion being so incredibly large that six men were completely vaporised. She considers it to be the sort of huge black joke her brother would have been ''first'' to laugh
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* OhCrap: the moment where Holtack finally realises that there ''are'' such things as vampires.
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* Shoutout: to ''Franchise/Alien''.''Franchise/{{Alien}}''.
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* UltimateJobSecurity: normally a tom with a disciplinary record as bads as Fusilier "Head-Butt" Powell would be out on his ear at the first available Dishonourable discharge. But since he is a mainstay of the batallion rugby side, the Colonel, Captain Endion-Williams, and Lieutenant Holtack, all collude to keep him in the unit. Despite eleven years' sxervice, Powell has not advanced beyond private soldier's rank.
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* UltimateJobSecurity: normally a tom Tom with a disciplinary record as bads bad as Fusilier "Head-Butt" Powell would be out on his ear at the first available Dishonourable discharge.Discharge. But since he is a mainstay of the batallion rugby side, the Colonel, Captain Endion-Williams, and Lieutenant Holtack, all collude to keep him in the unit. Despite eleven years' sxervice, service, Powell has not advanced beyond private soldier's rank.rank.
* VampiresAreSexGods: and at least minor goddesses. An unprepared Holtack, who starts of by not even believing vampires exist, is powerless to resist Sally von Humpeding.
* VampiresAreSexGods: and at least minor goddesses. An unprepared Holtack, who starts of by not even believing vampires exist, is powerless to resist Sally von Humpeding.
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* ButNotTooBi: Jocasta Wiggs used to think she was 100% gay. After interacting fairly intensively with Philip Holtack, she is troubled by feelings towards him. Is her gay status due merely to [[ExperimentedInCollege]], or is it a case of [[SituationSexuality]]?
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* ButNotTooBi: Jocasta Wiggs used to think she was 100% gay. After After interacting fairly intensively with Philip Holtack, she is troubled by feelings towards him. Is her gay status due merely to [[ExperimentedInCollege]], her having ExperimentedInCollege, or is it a case of [[SituationSexuality]]?SuddenlySexuality?
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* HaveIMentionedImGay: Denise Holtack is troubled that her brother appears to have simply not noticed, despite the fact she's dropped quite a few hints as to why she doesn't have a boyfriend. Indeed, Philip invites her to a Mess Ladies Night with the obvious intention of setting her up. she does in fact cop off. Only not with a ''male'' officer. Also, Discworld Alice Band finally comes out to Ponder Stibbons, who was also blissfully oblivious.
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* HaveIMentionedImGay: HaveIMentionedIAmGay: Denise Holtack is troubled that her brother appears to have simply not noticed, despite the fact she's dropped quite a few hints as to why she doesn't have a boyfriend. Indeed, Philip invites her to a Mess Ladies Night with the obvious intention of setting her up. she does in fact cop off. Only not with a ''male'' officer. Also, Discworld Alice Band finally finally comes out to Ponder Stibbons, who was also blissfully oblivious.
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* HaveIMentionedImGay: Denise Holtack is troubled that her brother appears to have simply not noticed, despite the fact she's dropped quite a few hints as to why she doesn't have a boyfriend. Indeed, Philip invites her to a Mess Ladies Night with the obvious intention of setting her up. she does in fact cop off. Only not with a ''male'' officer. Also, Discworld Alice Band finally comes out to Ponder Stibbons, who was also blissfully oblivious.
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* BoisterousBruiser: "Head-Butt" Powell.
* CulturedWarrior: how Holtack wings it with the Assassins, who like to see refinement in their trained killers.
* DoAnythingSoldier: the Welsh, especially Holtack.
* DoAnythingSoldier: the Welsh, especially Holtack.
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* HeelFaceTurn: what Holtack hopes to be able to persuade IRA gunman MacElroy to do, as it looks as if his co-operation will be needed to return ''all'' the Visitors to Earth. But will he listen? And he has to be found first...
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* UltimateJobSecurity: normally a tom with a disciplinary record as bads as Fusilier "Head-Butt" Powell would be out on his ear at the first available Dishonourable discharge. But since he is a mainstay of the batallion rugby side, the Colonel, Captain Endion-Williams, and Lieutenant Holtack, all collude to keep him in the unit. Despite eleven years' sxervice, Powell has not advanced beyond private soldier's rank.
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
Owing to misadventure and a series of close encounters with the mysterious Mrs Norah Tachyon (from Pratchett's ''JohnnyMaxwell'' stories), a patrol of British Army soldiers narrowly escapes death on the Roundworld only to be scattered all over the city of Ankh-Morpork. Other concepts from Roundworld piggy-back in with them and pose problems for Lord Vetinari, Sam Vimes, the wizards and the Assassins.
Owing to misadventure and a series of close encounters with the mysterious Mrs Norah Tachyon (from Pratchett's ''JohnnyMaxwell'' stories), a patrol of British Army soldiers narrowly escapes death on the Roundworld only to be scattered all over the city of Ankh-Morpork. Other concepts from Roundworld piggy-back in with them and pose problems for Lord Vetinari, Sam Vimes, the wizards and the Assassins.
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty [[StrokeCountry Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
Owing to misadventure and a series of close encounters with the mysterious Mrs Norah Tachyon (from Pratchett's''JohnnyMaxwell'' ''[[JohnnyandTheBomb Johnny Maxwell]]'' stories), a patrol of British Army soldiers narrowly escapes death on the Roundworld only to be scattered all over the city of Ankh-Morpork. Other concepts from Roundworld piggy-back in with them and pose problems for Lord Vetinari, Sam Vimes, the wizards and the Assassins.
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** and to ''Literature/ApprenticeAdept'' and other sci-fi works concerning passing between worlds.
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* the WildCard. Ruijterman's special loyalties and sympathies. And the Provisional IRA gunman MacElroy, who slips between worlds with a ''gonne'' and ammo which is outside Holtack's control, and a burning desire to kill Brits. He's already had Holtack in his sights once.
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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* TheApartheidEra: The story is set in 1985 when apartheid was still a going concern. It ''certainly'' is on the Discworld, in Rimwards Howondaland. Also Hans Ruijterman, the drifter from Rhodesia who ends up in the British Army because fighting for a living is all he knows. And he's good at it. Vetinari even calls him a mercenary...
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
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* TheApartheidEra: The story is set in 1985 when apartheid was still a going concern. It ''certainly'' is on the Discworld, in Rimwards Howondaland. Also Hans Ruijterman, the drifter from Rhodesia who ends up in the British Army because fighting for a living is all he knows. And he's good at it. Vetinari even calls him a mercenary...
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very closeand and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: seven very confused Roundworlders who end up on the Discworld. Plus the even more confused, and confusing, Norah Tachyon, who is probably the best placed of them all.
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* YouHaveToHaveJews: Corporal Greenberg and Fusiler Cohen, whose JewishMother gives Holtack an administrative issue to deal with. Also CSM Weissmann, the Army Rabbi who helps resolve things to Mrs Cohen's satisfaction.
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* YouHaveToHaveJews: Corporal Greenberg and Fusiler Cohen, whose JewishMother JewishMother gives Holtack an administrative issue to deal with. Also CSM Weissmann, the Army Rabbi who helps resolve things to Mrs Cohen's satisfaction.
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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* TheApartheidEra: The story is set in 1985 when apartheid was still a going concern. It ''certainly'' is on the Discworld, in Rimwards Howondaland. Also Hans Ruijterman, the drifter from Rhodesia who ends up in the British Army because fighting for a living is all he knows. And he's good at it. Vetinari even calls him a mercenary...
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
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* TheApartheidEra: The story is set in 1985 when apartheid was still a going concern. It ''certainly'' is on the Discworld, in Rimwards Howondaland. Also Hans Ruijterman, the drifter from Rhodesia who ends up in the British Army because fighting for a living is all he knows. And he's good at it. Vetinari even calls him a mercenary...
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very closeand and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close
* FieryRedhead: Johanna Smith-Rhodes.
* GirlyBruiser: Just about ''any'' young female character who appears. Pratchett does not write weak and wimpy women. Special kudos to Johanna Smith-Rhodes, Jocasta Wiggs, and Sian Nash.
* GirlyBruiser: Just about ''any'' young female character who appears. Pratchett does not write weak and wimpy women. Special kudos to Johanna Smith-Rhodes, Jocasta Wiggs, and Sian Nash.
* HighlyVisibleNinja: Jocasta Wiggs, after she first reveals herself to Holtack.
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* SharedFamilyQuirks: the Holtack siblings. Both are independently minded and tend not to take things at face value.
* Shoutout: to ''Film/Alien'' and ''Film/Aliens''.
* Shoutout: to ''Film/Alien'' and ''Film/Aliens''.
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* SharedFamilyQuirks: the Holtack siblings. Both are independently minded minded, recognise and laugh at the absurd, and tend not to take things at face value.
* Shoutout: to''Film/Alien'' ''Alien'' and ''Film/Aliens''.''Aliens''.
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* SouthAfricansWithSurfaceToAirMissiles: What Vetinari fears will happen if "Rimwards Howondaland" gets the secret of the Gonne.
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* SouthAfricansWithSurfaceToAirMissiles: What Vetinari fears will happen if "Rimwards Howondaland" gets the secret of the Gonne.
* StaringDownCthulhu: Olga Romanoff (witch and Air Policewoman), Joan Sanderson-Reeves (Assassin) and finally Susan StoHelit (acting DEATH) when they confront the Alien Queen.
* TransparentCloset: Denise Holtack. Also, to varying degrees of opacity, both Alice Bands and Jocasta Wiggs.
* StaringDownCthulhu: Olga Romanoff (witch and Air Policewoman), Joan Sanderson-Reeves (Assassin) and finally Susan StoHelit (acting DEATH) when they confront the Alien Queen.
* TransparentCloset: Denise Holtack. Also, to varying degrees of opacity, both Alice Bands and Jocasta Wiggs.
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* YouHaveToHaveJews: Corporal Greenberg and Fusiler Cohen, whose JewishMother gives Holtack an administrative issue to deal with. Also CSM Weissmann, the Army Rabbi who helps resolve things to Mrs Cohen's satisfaction.
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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On the Discworld, Holtack is defending himself at a trial, fighting off Thieves, angry seamstresses and irritated Clowns, making friends with a sympathetic Assassin or two, preyed upon by a vampire, and finding out about Trolls and Dwarfs. He is in a strange and dangerous place and needs to find out all he can about it. Fast.
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* TheApartheidEra: The story is set in 1985 when apartheid was still a going concern. It ''certainly'' is on the Discworld, in Rimwards Howondaland. Also Hans Ruijterman, the drifter from Rhodesia who ends up in the British Army because fighting for a living is all he knows. And he's good at it. Vetinari even calls him a mercenary...
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
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* TheApartheidEra: The story is set in 1985 when apartheid was still a going concern. It ''certainly'' is on the Discworld, in Rimwards Howondaland. Also Hans Ruijterman, the drifter from Rhodesia who ends up in the British Army because fighting for a living is all he knows. And he's good at it. Vetinari even calls him a mercenary...
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very closeand and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.needed.
* [[ChekhovsGun Chekhov's Gonne]]: the weaponry the British soldiers carry over to the Discworld with them. Vetinari is not best pleased about the arrival of more ''gonnes'' on his world. Not after ''last'' time.
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close
* [[ChekhovsGun Chekhov's Gonne]]: the weaponry the British soldiers carry over to the Discworld with them. Vetinari is not best pleased about the arrival of more ''gonnes'' on his world. Not after ''last'' time.
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* SouthAfricansWithSurfaceToAirMissiles: What Vetinari fears will happen if "Rimwards Howondaland" gets the secret of the Gonne.
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Philip Holtack
* TheApartheidEra: The story is set in 1985 when apartheid was still a going concern. It ''certainly'' is on the Discworld, in Rimwards Howondaland. Also Hans Ruijterman, the drifter from Rhodesia who ends up in the British Army because fighting for a living is all he knows. And he's good at it. Vetinari even calls him a mercenary...
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
* CoolBigSis: Denise Holtack.
* BrotherSisterTeam: Philip and Denise, who despite having completely opposite opinions and outlooks, remain very close and tend to fall back on a joint position where needed.
* CoolBigSis: Denise Holtack.
* MySiblingWillLiveThroughMe: HEX reveals that Denise Holtack, in one possible timeline, may have a son who she will call Philip in memory of her apparently dead brother.
* SharedFamilyQuirks: the Holtack siblings. Both are independently minded and tend not to take things at face value.
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* StrokeCountry: the initial setting in London/Derry.
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* StrokeCountry: the initial setting in London/Derry. London/Derry.
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* SouthAfricansWithSurfaceToAirMissiles: What Vetinari fears will happen if "Rimwards Howondaland" gets the secret of the Gonne.
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
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* HideYourLesbians: Alice Band. ''Both'' of her.
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* HideYourLesbians: Alice Band. ''Both'' of her.
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* StrokeCountry: the initial setting in London/Derry.
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* AnOfficerAndAGentleman: Philip Holtack.
* HideYourLesbians: Alice Band. ''Both'' of her.
* SergeantRock: Principally Dafydd Williams, but also Detritus, Craig-Y-Don, Angua, A.E. Pessimal, Fred Colon, and other three-striped archetypes.
* Shoutout: to ''Film/Alien'' and ''Film/Aliens''.
** Also to ''Literature/TheWarOfTheWorlds''
* TheTroubles: the chapters set in Northern Ireland.
* HideYourLesbians: Alice Band. ''Both'' of her.
* SergeantRock: Principally Dafydd Williams, but also Detritus, Craig-Y-Don, Angua, A.E. Pessimal, Fred Colon, and other three-striped archetypes.
* Shoutout: to ''Film/Alien'' and ''Film/Aliens''.
** Also to ''Literature/TheWarOfTheWorlds''
* TheTroubles: the chapters set in Northern Ireland.
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A Fan Work by author A.A. Pessimal in which two worlds collide - ours (the Roundworld) and the slightly bizarre flat earth called the ''{{Discworld}}''. Terry Pratchett's creation is used as the mirror to reflect concepts, issues and social unrest in the world we inhabit.
Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
Owing to misadventure and a series of close encounters with the mysterious Mrs Norah Tachyon (from Pratchett's ''JohnnyMaxwell'' stories), a patrol of British Army soldiers narrowly escapes death on the Roundworld only to be scattered all over the city of Ankh-Morpork. Other concepts from Roundworld piggy-back in with them and pose problems for Lord Vetinari, Sam Vimes, the wizards and the Assassins.
How the two sides come to an understanding is dealt with in the story. Meanwhile, the story continues at home, as Philip Holtack's sassy sister begins to realise everything is not as it seems and she tries to work out What The Hell Is Going On.
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Pessimal, who in a previous life served in the British Army, started the tale by writing slightly embellished SliceOfLife fiction, based partly on his own experiences and on the related experiences of others. He viewed this work as partly an attempt to break out of merely pastiching Pratchett and writing something original to himself in his own voice. Another spur was to get some of his own experiences of [[StrokeCounty Northern Ireland]] down on paper, or at least as a digital file, before they're lost. He also asked the question - what would you see if you were suddenly catapulted into the Discworld and fiction became reality? How would an average British person cope in a strange new place? Which occupational group in British society might assimilate and blend in best, and make the most of the situation? What would you do, what would you see, how would you know you weren't on Earth any more? How would different people rationalise it to themselves? How would this hypothetical person cope with a world where there is more than one sentient species - several of whom hate each other as deeply and abidingly as Irish Catholics and Protestants appear to?
Owing to misadventure and a series of close encounters with the mysterious Mrs Norah Tachyon (from Pratchett's ''JohnnyMaxwell'' stories), a patrol of British Army soldiers narrowly escapes death on the Roundworld only to be scattered all over the city of Ankh-Morpork. Other concepts from Roundworld piggy-back in with them and pose problems for Lord Vetinari, Sam Vimes, the wizards and the Assassins.
How the two sides come to an understanding is dealt with in the story. Meanwhile, the story continues at home, as Philip Holtack's sassy sister begins to realise everything is not as it seems and she tries to work out What The Hell Is Going On.
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