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** Also Pinkie, who apparently carries an UsefulNotes/Xbox360 around for "[=XBox360=] emergencies." The result of one such "emergency" is [[spoiler: an impromptu ''VideoGame/{{Skullgirls}}'' tournament.]]
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** Also Pinkie, who apparently carries an UsefulNotes/Xbox360 Platform/Xbox360 around for "[=XBox360=] emergencies." The result of one such "emergency" is [[spoiler: an impromptu ''VideoGame/{{Skullgirls}}'' tournament.]]
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* GamerGirl: Vice Principal Luna, judging by how good she is at ''{{Videogame/Titanfall}}''. Rarity also demonstrates competence at ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros''
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* GamerGirl: GamerChick: Vice Principal Luna, judging by how good she is at ''{{Videogame/Titanfall}}''. Rarity also demonstrates competence at ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros''
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* {{Expy}}: Almost all the AHP characters are expies of characters from ''Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl''.
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* {{Expy}}: Almost all the AHP characters are expies of characters from ''Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl''.''Fanfic/AllAmericanGirlShinzakura''.
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** There's also the case of Shining Armor's partner on the CPD [[spoiler:(and in later books the FBI)]] Sandalwood, who's based on the protagonist in Shinzakura's other series, Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl. Not to be confused with the male Sandalwood who goes to Canterlot High.
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** There's also the case of Shining Armor's partner on the CPD [[spoiler:(and in later books the FBI)]] Sandalwood, who's based on the protagonist in Shinzakura's other series, Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl.''Fanfic/AllAmericanGirlShinzakura''. Not to be confused with the male Sandalwood who goes to Canterlot High.
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** This is possibly also a ShoutOut to ''Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl'' and the fact that [[spoiler: Luna cannot see DJ in the dreamscape either due to the latter's human mindset.]]
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** This is possibly also a ShoutOut to ''Fanfic/AllAmericanGirl'' ''Fanfic/AllAmericanGirlShinzakura'' and the fact that [[spoiler: Luna cannot see DJ in the dreamscape either due to the latter's human mindset.]]
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Per TRS, Aluminum Christmas Trees is YMMV. Marked the main bullet point as In Universe because it's pointed out.
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* AluminumChristmasTrees: As Shinzakura pointed out, groups of cross-school criminal organizations like The Club actually do exist, complete with a couple of NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer examples.
** He does the same thing with [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chimera_(genetics) Octavia's genetic chimerism]].
** He does the same thing with [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chimera_(genetics) Octavia's genetic chimerism]].
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* AluminumChristmasTrees: [[invoked]] As Shinzakura pointed out, groups of cross-school criminal organizations like The Club actually do exist, complete with a couple of NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer examples.
**examples. He does the same thing with [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chimera_(genetics) Octavia's genetic chimerism]].
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Although Sunset's [[ABNegative ultra-rare blood type]] ''does'' exist, it is more commonly found in ungulates than in primates... though [[AluminumChristmasTrees the percentage of how few people in the US have it]] [[ShownTheirWork is true.]]
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Although Sunset's [[ABNegative ultra-rare blood type]] ''does'' exist, it is more commonly found in ungulates than in primates... though [[AluminumChristmasTrees the percentage of how few people in the US have it]] it [[ShownTheirWork is true.]]
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** ''[[UpToEleven Especially]]'' when any combination of the three [[spoiler: [[{{DiggingYourselfDeeper}} are sleeping together.]] Chastely, of course.]]
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** ''[[UpToEleven Especially]]'' ''Especially'' when any combination of the three [[spoiler: [[{{DiggingYourselfDeeper}} are sleeping together.]] Chastely, of course.]]
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* LivingWeapon: The narrative confirms that every SIREN is one, due to their training regimen. [=CSIS and Les SCARs=] wanted to take it [[UpToEleven even further]], but [[spoiler:Uncle Poutine put his foot down, and was killed for it]].
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* LivingWeapon: The narrative confirms that every SIREN is one, due to their training regimen. [=CSIS and Les SCARs=] wanted to take it [[UpToEleven even further]], further, but [[spoiler:Uncle Poutine put his foot down, and was killed for it]].
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* TeleportersAndTransporters: Sunset has to use teleportation to get out of the room the mirror is in in Equestria.
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* TeleportersAndTransporters: TeleportationWithDrawbacks: Sunset has to use tiring teleportation to get out of the room the mirror is in in Equestria.
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* AdaptationalExplaination: Minor issues from ''WesternAnimation/EquestriaGirls'' are given this treatment.
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* AdaptationalExplaination: AdaptationalExplanation: Minor issues from ''WesternAnimation/EquestriaGirls'' are given this treatment.
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* AdaptationalExplaination: Minor issues from ''WesternAnimation/EquestriaGirls'' are given this treatment.
** (Princess) Twilight Sparkle was seen sleeping in the school library for the night. Where was Sunset Shimmer staying while she lived on Earth? An abandoned warehouse. Its demolition leads to the events of the story.
** How was Sunset Shimmer able to fit it so seamlessly? A runaway with the same name disappeared years earlier and so the unicorn was able to take over her identity. PlayedForDrama now, as Sunset now wonders what will happen if the true Human Sunset Shimmer finds out someone has been using her identity.
** After having a mysterious student briefly pop in and out of the school for three days, Principal Celestia had to backdate a lot of exchange student paperwork. This got exceptionally strange given that the "exchange student", an alien from another dimension, seemed to have taken the form of her best friend's daughter.
** What kind of person would Flash Sentry had to have been to date such an openly manipulative and mean person like pre-reform Sunset Shimmer? [[spoiler: We find out the bad way later.]]
** How did Sunset know about Vietnamese porn star Sweetie Drops and her likeness to Bon-Bon? Her ex-boyfriend Flash probably had some of SD's video "performances".
** (Princess) Twilight Sparkle was seen sleeping in the school library for the night. Where was Sunset Shimmer staying while she lived on Earth? An abandoned warehouse. Its demolition leads to the events of the story.
** How was Sunset Shimmer able to fit it so seamlessly? A runaway with the same name disappeared years earlier and so the unicorn was able to take over her identity. PlayedForDrama now, as Sunset now wonders what will happen if the true Human Sunset Shimmer finds out someone has been using her identity.
** After having a mysterious student briefly pop in and out of the school for three days, Principal Celestia had to backdate a lot of exchange student paperwork. This got exceptionally strange given that the "exchange student", an alien from another dimension, seemed to have taken the form of her best friend's daughter.
** What kind of person would Flash Sentry had to have been to date such an openly manipulative and mean person like pre-reform Sunset Shimmer? [[spoiler: We find out the bad way later.]]
** How did Sunset know about Vietnamese porn star Sweetie Drops and her likeness to Bon-Bon? Her ex-boyfriend Flash probably had some of SD's video "performances".
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* RealityEnsues: Minor issues from ''WesternAnimation/EquestriaGirls'' are given this treatment.
** (Princess) Twilight Sparkle was seen sleeping in the school library for the night. Where was Sunset Shimmer staying while she lived on Earth? An abandoned warehouse. Its demolition leads to the events of the story.
** How was Sunset Shimmer able to fit it so seamlessly? A runaway with the same name disappeared years earlier and so the unicorn was able to take over her identity. PlayedForDrama now, as Sunset now wonders what will happen if the true Human Sunset Shimmer finds out someone has been using her identity.
** After having a mysterious student briefly pop in and out of the school for three days, Principal Celestia had to backdate a lot of exchange student paperwork. This got exceptionally strange given that the "exchange student", an alien from another dimension, seemed to have taken the form of her best friend's daughter.
** What kind of person would Flash Sentry had to have been to date such an openly manipulative and mean person like pre-reform Sunset Shimmer? [[spoiler: We find out the bad way later.]]
** How did Sunset know about Vietnamese porn star Sweetie Drops and her likeness to Bon-Bon? Her ex-boyfriend Flash probably had some of SD's video "performances".
** (Princess) Twilight Sparkle was seen sleeping in the school library for the night. Where was Sunset Shimmer staying while she lived on Earth? An abandoned warehouse. Its demolition leads to the events of the story.
** How was Sunset Shimmer able to fit it so seamlessly? A runaway with the same name disappeared years earlier and so the unicorn was able to take over her identity. PlayedForDrama now, as Sunset now wonders what will happen if the true Human Sunset Shimmer finds out someone has been using her identity.
** After having a mysterious student briefly pop in and out of the school for three days, Principal Celestia had to backdate a lot of exchange student paperwork. This got exceptionally strange given that the "exchange student", an alien from another dimension, seemed to have taken the form of her best friend's daughter.
** What kind of person would Flash Sentry had to have been to date such an openly manipulative and mean person like pre-reform Sunset Shimmer? [[spoiler: We find out the bad way later.]]
** How did Sunset know about Vietnamese porn star Sweetie Drops and her likeness to Bon-Bon? Her ex-boyfriend Flash probably had some of SD's video "performances".
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* RealityEnsues: Sunset is LockedOutOfTheLoop about a ''lot'' of things in Equestria due to her absence, like Nightmare Moon's return, Princess Luna's redemption (and ''existence''), the Crystal Empire's return, and the events of ''FanFic/AHairyProblem'' and ''FanFic/AHairierProblemRiseOfTheFurball''.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent: Sunset compares her own experiences with Diamond Tiara's in order to reassure the filly.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Sunset compares her own experiences with Diamond Tiara's in order to reassure the filly.
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Pretty much ''everyone'' at CHS hates Noteworthy now. [[spoiler: Minuette's friends even try to frame him and beat him half to death to keep him away from her. Minuette herself is horrified when she sees what's going on and yells for them to stop.]]
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* HatedByAll: Pretty much ''everyone'' at CHS hates Noteworthy now. [[spoiler: Minuette's friends even try to frame him and beat him half to death to keep him away from her. Minuette herself is horrified when she sees what's going on and yells for them to stop.]]
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* AsTheGoodBookSays: an aversion from TitledAfterTheSong, where the title comes from a Literature/TheBible quote.
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* AsTheGoodBookSays: an aversion from TitledAfterTheSong, where the title comes from a Literature/TheBible ''Literature/TheBible'' quote.
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Latino Is Brown has been tightened to refer to when all Latinos are brown, or when someone thinks they are. Single-character examples fit in Phenotype Stereotype and Averted Trope examples should not be listed unless notable. I think this counts as the perception is talked about.
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* RaceLift: Twilight's family is revealed to be half-Hispanic, and she identifies as such. Also adds an inverted moment of LatinoIsBrown as the darker-skinned Rainbow Dash (also Hispanic) is surprised to find that Twilight's family is Hispanic as well.
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* RaceLift: Twilight's family is revealed to be half-Hispanic, and she identifies as such. Also adds an inverted moment of This allows the work to play with LatinoIsBrown as the darker-skinned Rainbow Dash (also Hispanic) is surprised to find that Twilight's family is Hispanic as well.
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* BadDreams: Golden Harvest (Carrot Top)
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* BadDreams: [[spoiler:Sweet Pea is having dreams of being sexually assaulted by her uncle]].
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[[AC:'''Note:''' As the FanFic this page is about is still in progress, this trope page is currently under construction. Anypony who has read it should feel free to add any tropes we seem to have missed.]]
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* MagicMirror: Unlike the CoolGate appearance of Cavalcanti's Mirror, the one on the pony side looks ''far more'' sinister, with images of Celestia, Luna, Nightmare Moon and Faust bound in chains held in the hooves of Sombra.
* MisplacedRetribution: Spike, blaming Sunset for being turned into a dog in the human world (something Sunset had no control over), [[spoiler: sends a letter to Princess Celestia, who immediately sends guards to arrest Sunset]].
* MisplacedRetribution: Spike, blaming Sunset for being turned into a dog in the human world (something Sunset had no control over), [[spoiler: sends a letter to Princess Celestia, who immediately sends guards to arrest Sunset]].
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* MagicMirror: Unlike the CoolGate appearance of Cavalcanti's Mirror, the one on the pony side looks ''far more'' sinister, with images of Celestia, Luna, Nightmare Moon and Faust bound in chains held in the hooves of Sombra.
* MisplacedRetribution: Spike, blaming Sunset for being turned into a dog in the human world (something Sunset had no control over), [[spoiler: sends a letter to Princess Celestia, who immediately sends guards to arrest Sunset]].
* MisplacedRetribution: Spike, blaming Sunset for being turned into a dog in the human world (something Sunset had no control over), [[spoiler: sends a letter to Princess Celestia, who immediately sends guards to arrest Sunset]].
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: Cloud Kicker.
** Also a case of ButNotTooBi as while she claims to have sex with both boys and girls, her only known relationships are Vinyl Scratch and a other few unnamed girls.
** Also a case of ButNotTooBi as while she claims to have sex with both boys and girls, her only known relationships are Vinyl Scratch and a other few unnamed girls.
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* BiTheWay: Jade's roommate Iris.
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Weeks after her [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013 defeat at the hands of the humanized Princess Twilight Sparkle]], the one-time pony Sunset Shimmer is working towards making herself a better life. But in an unexpected chain of events, she ends up in a situation that not even her new friends - Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow, Fluttershy, and Pinkie - can get her out of... nor really do they want to. As if that's not enough, Principal Celestia's firmly against the whole deal.
But maybe if Sunset Shimmer sticks around, she'll get more than she bargained for - for good and ill...
But maybe if Sunset Shimmer sticks around, she'll get more than she bargained for - for good and ill...
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Weeks after her [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013 [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1 defeat at the hands of the humanized Princess Twilight Sparkle]], the one-time pony Sunset Shimmer is working towards making herself a better life. But in an unexpected chain of events, she ends up in a situation that not even her new friends - Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow, Fluttershy, and Pinkie - can get her out of... nor really do they want to. As if that's not enough, Principal Celestia's firmly against the whole deal.
But maybe if Sunset Shimmer sticks around, she'll get more than she bargained for- -- for good and ill...
But maybe if Sunset Shimmer sticks around, she'll get more than she bargained for
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* {{Prequel}}: The story is set the weekend after the original ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013 Equestria Girls]]'' and ends at the beginning of 7DSJ Book I.
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* {{Prequel}}: The story is set the weekend after the original ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013 ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1 Equestria Girls]]'' and ends at the beginning of 7DSJ Book I.
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* CerebusRollercoaster: The story starts out with Sunset Shimmer trying to fit into her new home following ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013'', goes though an arc concerning [[spoiler: a mind control date rape drug]], then moves onto a He vs. She game videogame tournament that interrupts the girls' slumber party to Sunset wondering [[spoiler: there were other Equestrians that appeared on EQG Earth]] and end with Twilight [[spoiler: suffering nightmares which seem like ''Franchise/ANightmareOnElmStreet'']].
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* CerebusRollercoaster: The story starts out with Sunset Shimmer trying to fit into her new home following ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013'', ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1'', goes though an arc concerning [[spoiler: a mind control date rape drug]], then moves onto a He vs. She game videogame tournament that interrupts the girls' slumber party to Sunset wondering [[spoiler: there were other Equestrians that appeared on EQG Earth]] and end with Twilight [[spoiler: suffering nightmares which seem like ''Franchise/ANightmareOnElmStreet'']].
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* ShapeshiftingLover: Sunset Shimmer to Flash Sentry as was told in ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013''. [[spoiler: PlayedForDrama since Sunset only thought the change was cosmetic, and later is horrified to realize that she could have gotten pregnant.]]
** Given that the change wasn't entirely complete (her blood type as a human is one that is eerily similar to that of equines, her hearing remains in the upper range of equines, etc.) it could also be a light case of BodyHorror as well.
** Given that the change wasn't entirely complete (her blood type as a human is one that is eerily similar to that of equines, her hearing remains in the upper range of equines, etc.) it could also be a light case of BodyHorror as well.
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* ShapeshiftingLover: ShapeshiftingLover:
** Sunset Shimmer to Flash Sentry as was told in''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013''.''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1''. [[spoiler: PlayedForDrama since Sunset only thought the change was cosmetic, and later is horrified to realize that she could have gotten pregnant.]]
**]] Given that the change wasn't entirely complete (her blood type as a human is one that is eerily similar to that of equines, her hearing remains in the upper range of equines, etc.) it could also be a light case of BodyHorror as well.
** Sunset Shimmer to Flash Sentry as was told in
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* [[spoiler:BaitAndSwitchBoss: Divine Right messes up his plan to summon Grogar, and gets Chernabog instead; the very demon that possessed Sunset in ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013''.]]
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* [[spoiler:BaitAndSwitchBoss: Divine Right messes up his plan to summon Grogar, and gets Chernabog instead; the very demon that possessed Sunset in ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013''.''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1''.]]
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* NecessaryEvil: The CSIS agent Changeling (that's his name, not his species) considers Blackthorn's ALICORN group to be this in dealing with the [=SIRENs=], especially as their leader makes no effort to disguise his intents to kidnap Sable Loam and Celestia, kill the former, and rape the latter.
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* NecessaryEvil: NecessarilyEvil: The CSIS agent Changeling (that's his name, not his species) considers Blackthorn's ALICORN group to be this in dealing with the [=SIRENs=], especially as their leader makes no effort to disguise his intents to kidnap Sable Loam and Celestia, kill the former, and rape the latter.
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/409925/seven-days-in-sunny-june-broken-down-in-sunny-town Broken Down in Sunny Town]]'' by The Quiet Party (in progress) - follows the story in the wake of the Vibe incident. [[labelnote:Note]]Released May 2018[[/labelnote]]
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/409925/seven-days-in-sunny-june-broken-down-in-sunny-town Broken Down in Sunny Town]]'' by Deverer and The Quiet Party (in progress) - follows the story in the wake of the Vibe incident. [[labelnote:Note]]Released May 2018[[/labelnote]]