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* BadassPrincess: Luna. Luna Luna Luna. She is currently the most powerful warrior on the planet, and is ''still not at full power''.

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** Before that, Celestia states that Twilight is more powerful than other unicorns, by an order of magnitude.



* WorthyOpponent: Celestia sees Charlemane as this.
** [[spoiler: Subverted somewhat in Chapter 26, as Charlemane is revealed to be the only pony on the Council (other than Blueblood) that Celestia can actually implicitly trust.]]

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* WorthyOpponent: Celestia sees Charlemane as this.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39849/rites-of-ascension Rites of Ascension]]'' is an ongoing WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by [=CVBrony=].

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39849/rites-of-ascension Rites of Ascension]]'' is an ongoing WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by [=CVBrony=].

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''Rites of Ascension'' follows the adventures of Twilight Sparkle fifteen years after the events of the second season of Friendship is Magic, for the most part ignoring anything happening after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 A Canterlot Wedding]]. The story chronicles her ascension to alicornhood and the political turmoil that surrounds her, from coup attempts to scheming aristocrats, to the fallout of millenia-old mistakes.

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''Rites of Ascension'' follows the adventures of Twilight Sparkle fifteen years after the events of the second season of Friendship ''Friendship is Magic, Magic'', for the most part ignoring anything happening after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 A Canterlot Wedding]].Wedding]]". The story chronicles her ascension to alicornhood and the political turmoil that surrounds her, from coup attempts to scheming aristocrats, to the fallout of millenia-old mistakes.



* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/76892/love-and-barriers Love and Barriers]], a story of the first meeting and the romance of Shining Armor and Princess Cadence.
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/53321/designing-intrigue Designing Intrigue]] follows Rarity as she maneuvers the dark and glamorous underworld of Equestria as an [[TuxedoAndMartini agent of the Crown]].
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/153395/the-rites-encyclopedia The Rites Encyclopedia]] is an {{Infodump}} for large amount of information casually mentioned in the main story, sort of like an [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin encyclopedia]]. Only canon up until the point where it conflicts with the main story. Also features Twilight and others frequently [[BreakingTheFourthWall talking to the audience directly]] in lectures about their universe.
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/179251/rites-of-ascension-fireside-tales Fireside Tales]] is a collection of shorts that take place in the Rites EU, but have little bearing on the larger storyline.

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* [[http://www.''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/76892/love-and-barriers Love and Barriers]], Barriers]]'', a story of the first meeting and the romance of Shining Armor and Princess Cadence.
* [[http://www.''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/53321/designing-intrigue Designing Intrigue]] Intrigue]]'' follows Rarity as she maneuvers the dark and glamorous underworld of Equestria as an [[TuxedoAndMartini agent of the Crown]].
* [[http://www.''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/153395/the-rites-encyclopedia The Rites Encyclopedia]] Encyclopedia]]'' is an {{Infodump}} for large amount of information casually mentioned in the main story, sort of like an [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin encyclopedia]]. Only canon up until the point where it conflicts with the main story. Also features Twilight and others frequently [[BreakingTheFourthWall talking to the audience directly]] in lectures about their universe.
* [[http://www.''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/179251/rites-of-ascension-fireside-tales Fireside Tales]] Tales]]'' is a collection of shorts that take place in the Rites EU, but have little bearing on the larger storyline.



* TheChessmaster: Celestia. She does admit that due to working on her own for a millennium, it is hard to counsel with other ponies, even her own sister. She even considers the current head of the Council to be excellent at this.
** Comes back to bite her in the cutie mark in chapter 20; Twilight calls her out on it in their next scene in chapter 22.

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* TheChessmaster: Celestia. She does admit that due to working on her own for a millennium, it is hard to counsel with other ponies, even her own sister. She even considers the current head of the Council to be excellent at this.
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this. Thuis comes back to bite her in the cutie mark in chapter 20; Twilight calls her out on it in their next scene in chapter 22.



** MeaningfulName: Bellerophon in Myth/GreekMythology captured and rode a pegasus. The one here? Captured and ridden by pegasi.


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* MeaningfulName: The warship ''Bellerophon'' is named after the hero in Myth/GreekMythology who captured and rode Pegasus. The one here? Captured and ridden by pegasi.
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[[caption-width-right:350:One day, Twilight, all of this will be yours.]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:One [[caption-width-right:350:[[Disney/TheLionKing One day, Twilight, all of this will be yours.]] ]]]]

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** [[spoiler:Duke Esteem]] tries this with Celestia and Luna just before being sentenced for his crimes, asking why being immortal alicorns gives them the right to rule and why Luna hasn't been punished for her actions as Nightmare Moon. [[DoNotTauntCthulhu Then he gets his answers]].



* FromBadToWorse: Equestria's sociopolitical standing, and Twilight in particular, can't seem to catch a break. One of the first things Twilight learns after her ascension is that the country is slowly breaking apart due to outlying subjects being maltreated by their nobles and believing Celestia cannot secure them from threats such as those seen in canon. Then there's a coup attempt during which [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony are stolen]], and then- after Twilight begins to take a more active hand in dealing with international matters- two successive routine reconnaissance missions [[spoiler:pull Equestria into a war with Zebrica and retroactively invalidate the entire government of the griffon lands (to which the above malcontents were defecting)]].

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* FromBadToWorse: Equestria's sociopolitical standing, and Twilight in particular, can't seem to catch a break. One of the first things Twilight learns after her ascension is that the country is slowly breaking apart due to outlying subjects being maltreated by their nobles and believing Celestia cannot secure them from threats such as those seen in canon. Then there's a coup attempt during which [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony are stolen]], and then- after Twilight begins to take a more active hand in dealing with international matters- two successive routine reconnaissance missions [[spoiler:pull Equestria into a war with Zebrica and retroactively invalidate the entire government of the griffon lands (to which the above malcontents were defecting)]]. A criminal investigation leads to the [[spoiler:effective destruction of Cloudsdale and loss of most of the industrial production of that city]] as the wrongdoers try to cover their tracks and destroy the evidence.



* TheManBehindTheMan: For all the terror he inspires and all the irrevocable damage he's done, Discord accidentally lets slip that he may answer to an even ''higher'' power.
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:There are hints that Charlemane has ulterior plans for Equestria and the Crown, and has been subtly influencing political relations to achieve his goals]].

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* TheManBehindTheMan: For all the terror he inspires and all the irrevocable damage he's done, Discord accidentally lets slip that he may answer to an even ''higher'' power.
power. Meanwhile, the mortal conspiracies just keep going deeper and twisting in on themselves as Twilight investigates.
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:There are hints that Charlemane has ulterior plans for Equestria and the Crown, and has been subtly influencing political relations to achieve his goals]].

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** [[spoiler:Charlemane seems to be subtly manipulating things behind the scenes towards some ulterior goal, most likely involving the well-being of Equestria]].



* BadassBaritone: [[spoiler:Shining Armor, already a badass par none and the second most powerful unicorn after his sister Twilight, gains a deeper voice after he is made High Cardinal (i.e. leader) of Luna's Night Guard following his firing from the Day Guard]].

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* BadassBaritone: [[spoiler:Shining Armor, already a badass par none and the second most powerful unicorn after his sister Twilight, gains a deeper voice after he is made High Cardinal (i.e. leader) of Luna's Night Guard following his firing from the Day Royal Guard]].



* BarrierWarrior: Shining Armor, who possesses magic powerful enough to produce strong and durable force-fields. [[spoiler:He later passes onto Twilight his notes on how to make them, which saved her during a harrowing mission in Zebrica]].



* BigBrotherInstinct: Shining Armor will do anything to protect his little sister. [[spoiler:Even using the Day Guard to set up a spy system of sorts so he can keep tabs on Twilight during her stay in Ponyville. He's also aware that Twilight's status as an ascendant alicorn will make age a problem, so he makes Spike, whose species are longer-lived than ponies, promise to look after Twilight in his stead]].

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Shining Armor will do anything to protect his little sister. [[spoiler:Even using the Day Royal Guard to set up a spy system of sorts so he can keep tabs on Twilight during her stay in Ponyville. He's also aware that Twilight's status as an ascendant alicorn will make age a problem, so he makes Spike, whose species are longer-lived than ponies, promise to look after Twilight in his stead]].stead]].
* {{Blackmail}}: [[spoiler:Apparently the current gryphon King Morvana did something that would warrant shame on her family for generations to come. Charlemane uses it to his advantage by threatening to expose her secrets if she does not voice disapproval towards Equestria's impending war with Zebrica]].


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* DrillSergeantNasty: According to members of the Royal Guard and anypony currently serving in the military, Shining Armor was this. Twilight, who knew Shining's softer side, is incredulous and horrified that her BBBFF could be so brutal, but everyone had high praises for him because his training methods turned them into efficient soldiers.
* EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Twilight doesn't think very highly of Prince Blueblood ([[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver with good reason]]), but both of them don't think very highly of the Inner Council and its political scheming, either. When suspicions of Cloudsdale's Duchess Artfeather's weapons smuggling arise, Blueblood proposes an alliance with Twilight to help expose her without the Council getting to Artfeather first. She accepts]].


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* HandshakeSubstitute: Frequently between Rainbow Dash and Spike, of the "Fist Bump" variety.
* HappilyMarried: Shining Armor and his wife Princess Cadence, 'nuff said.


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* ItsPersonal: [[spoiler:It's implied that Prince Blueblood chose to preside over Foible Plinth's trial because many of the extremely shoddy and hazardous buildings Foible Plinth built happened to be occupied by children, many of whom were orphans like Blueblood]].


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* LikeASonToMe: Celestia sees Twilight as her own daughter, as alicorns are biologically barren. In turn, Twilight treats her like a ParentalSubstitute.


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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: [[spoiler:Both Prince Blueblood and Princess Cadence's parents died in an airship accident when an engine exploded. Both of them believed the incident was produced by outside forces, but they don't have any evidence to prove it]].


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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:There are hints that Charlemane has ulterior plans for Equestria and the Crown, and has been subtly influencing political relations to achieve his goals]].


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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Both Prince Blueblood and Cadence's parents died in an airship accident when they were young. Both of them believe that the incident that claimed their parents' lives was planned, even though they don't have proof]].


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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The Princesses, obviously, but so are Shining Armor and his wife Princess Cadence. Twilight counts as she is elected Grand Mage, giving her authority and respect second only to the Princesses themselves, while learning the responsibilities of ruling and being an alicorn. [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood also counts; despite being a {{Jerkass}} in public, he deeply cares for the state of Canterlot and Equestria as a whole, and is one of the few nobles who has a strong moral compass in politics]].


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* SoProudOfYou: Shining Armor says this to Twilight [[spoiler:after she saved Zebrica from a black hole portal and narrowly survived severe injuries]].


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* ThirdPersonPerson: Trixie, like her canon self. She's trying to break the habit, though.

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** [[spoiler:It's revealed that several nobles are fearing Twilight's alicorn ascension because, on top of being a powerful pony magic-wise, is too smart to be influenced by their political schemes, so they plot to have her future authority undermined or physically eliminated from the game entirely. TheCoup General Towers pulled on Canterlot was supposed to be Twilight's assassination]].



* BadassBaritone: [[spoiler:Shining Armor, already a badass par none and the second most powerful unicorn after his sister Twilight, gains a deeper voice after he is made High Cardinal (i.e. leader) of Luna's Night Guard following his firing from the Day Guard]].



* BigBrotherInstinct: Shining Armor will do anything to protect his little sister. [[spoiler:Even using the Day Guard to set up a spy system of sorts so he can keep tabs on Twilight during her stay in Ponyville. He's also aware that Twilight's status as an ascendant alicorn will make age a problem, so he makes Spike, whose species are longer-lived than ponies, promise to look after Twilight in his stead]].



** Gustave, a grpyhon chef speaks with a Phrench accent.
* GossipyHens: Twilight's mother Velvet Sparkle is an infamous gossiper among the Canterlot nobility, so much that she makes Rarity, a gossiper herself, look like she took a vow of silence in comparison.
* GroinAttack: This happens to a poor guard in chapter 27 when he is sent to wake up a sleeping Rainbow Dash with a bucket of water.



* IronicHell: [[spoiler: Twilight's mother is exiled to Ponyville - or, as she calls it, a "po-dunk, backwater mud pony town".]]

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* IronicHell: [[spoiler: Twilight's mother is a social climber who looks down on "[[FantasticRacism mud ponies]]". She is later exiled by her own daughter to Ponyville - or, as she calls it, a "po-dunk, backwater mud pony town".]]



* ParentalNeglect: Twilight Velvet frequently neglected her children Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle in favor of getting into the nobility's good graces and elevating her own social status, so much that Shining (and Celestia herself) did the raising for most of Twilight's life. [[spoiler:In chapter 25, Twilight calls out her mother for her poor treatment, and sentences her to learning friendship in Ponyville]].
* ParentalSubstitute: Twilight sees Celestia as a mother for raising her in place of her social-climbing birth mother Twilight Velvet neglecting her.



* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with every single Royal. Celestia is busy running the country, Luna is trying to get her political power ''back'', both Cadence and Shining have important duties to the Crown, and even ''Blueblood'' is shown to be an important politcal pawn for Celestia. Twilight is on her way to becoming this, but her "Royal" is still unofficial.

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* PromotionToParent: Shining Armor raised Twilight whenever their parents weren't available.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood angrily rips into the Inner Council for voting against Shining Armor during his trial despite the latter saving Equestria numerous times]].
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with every single Royal. Celestia is busy running the country, Luna is trying to get her political power ''back'', both Cadence and Shining have important duties to the Crown, and even ''Blueblood'' is shown to be an important politcal political pawn for Celestia. Twilight is on her way to becoming this, but her "Royal" is still unofficial.



* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:It's implied that a unicorn named "Ionos" set up a plan by allying with an evil dragon and giving him a geas that will grant control over the town Wintervale. Said plan relied on Luna's impulsiveness and willingness to kill, but it did not anticipate Twilight Sparkle banishing the dragon to the void for his evil deeds]].



* TakenForGranite: It's possible to be turned into a statue if you have done a very serious and strictly forbidden crime, such as [[spoiler:using a geas]].
* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. [[spoiler:Celestia and Luna are currently seeing a therapist for any issues that resulted from the Lunar Rebellions and Celestia's banishment of Luna to the moon]].



* TownWithADarkSecret: [[spoiler:The small mining town Wintervale is controlled by an evil dragon who put its residents under a geas and forced them to mine gems for him. Any outsiders who come to visit Wintervale are driven out, while those who show disobedience are eaten]].



* WillfullyWeak: Celestia keeps herself from fighting at full power because doing so means [[KillItWithFire everything will literally go up in flames]]. [[spoiler:Because of this, some ponies think she has become a weak and inefficient ruler and stage a coup so they can overthrow and replace her with someone "stronger"]].


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* WillfullyWeak: Celestia keeps herself from fighting at full power because doing so means [[KillItWithFire everything will literally go up in flames]]. [[spoiler:Because of this, some members of the Inner Council think she has become a weak and inefficient ruler and stage a coup so they can overthrow and replace her with someone "stronger"]].
** [[spoiler:Luna counts as well. The "Nightmare" form she took on in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon Mare in the Moon]]''? That was her ''true'' form. Her canon appearance from Season 2 onward was a glamour seal to keep her own power restrained and prevent ponies from freaking out and thus losing whatever little reputation she had since the Lunar Rebellion]].


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* {{Yakuza}}: Duchess Watercolor Suisaiga of Neighpon is implied to be part of this, but Suisaiga insists that her family broke away from them years ago. [[BerserkButton When another Duchess brings it up to prove a point, Suisaga is angered enough to point bladed wings at her]].

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* TheAgeless: Alicorns are immune to physical aging, but they are still susceptible to injuries and sicknesses like anypony.



* TheCoup: [[spoiler:A renegade faction led by General Towers is seeking to overthrow the Alicorn diarchy because they see its leadership - namely Celestia's - as weak and ineffectual. It's implied that someone from the Inner Council is behind this coup]].



* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:Shining Armor has his name changed to "Obsidian Armor" after he is fired and subsequently recruited into the Night Guard, and gets awesome armor to match his new name]].



* PersonOfMassDestruction : The reason Princess Celestia doesn't get into big fights. She has only two settings: Off, and Nuke. See the page image? That's what's left of the army she fought[[note]](along with her command at the time, who [[HeroicSacrifice knowingly urged her to strike]])[[/note]]. That's not water, it's ''glass''.

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* PersonOfMassDestruction : PersonOfMassDestruction: The reason Princess Celestia doesn't get into big fights. She has only two settings: Off, and Nuke. See the page image? That's what's left of the army she fought[[note]](along with her command at the time, who [[HeroicSacrifice knowingly urged her to strike]])[[/note]]. That's not water, it's ''glass''.


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* SuperSoldier: [[spoiler:One newspaper calls Twilight this after her brutal, magical takedown of General Towers]].


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* UnskilledButStrong: Celestia is more powerful than Luna in regards to magic, but she doesn't have anything in her arsenal other than "[[KillItWithFire burn everything in sight]]". Case in point - a powerful sun spell she used against Discord turned an entire area (ponies and all) into ''shiny glass''.


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* WeakButSkilled: While Luna is far from weak herself, she doesn't have the raw power that her sister Celestia possesses, and instead has actual combat experience and lots of ways to use her own magic to fight her foes without causing collateral damage.
* WillfullyWeak: Celestia keeps herself from fighting at full power because doing so means [[KillItWithFire everything will literally go up in flames]]. [[spoiler:Because of this, some ponies think she has become a weak and inefficient ruler and stage a coup so they can overthrow and replace her with someone "stronger"]].

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* {{Doorstopper}}: As of December 2015, the main story alone is over 300K words long- and WordOfGod is that it is not even halfway through the second of five projected books.

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* {{Doorstopper}}: As of December 2015, July 2016, the main story alone is over 300K nearly 380K words long- and WordOfGod is that it is not even perhaps halfway through the second of five projected books.



* FirstNameBasis: Celestia and Luna are trying to get Twilight here.

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* FirstNameBasis: Celestia and Luna are trying to get Twilight here. [[spoiler:It appears that, behind closed doors, Charlemane is already there with "Tia".]]


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* FromBadToWorse: Equestria's sociopolitical standing, and Twilight in particular, can't seem to catch a break. One of the first things Twilight learns after her ascension is that the country is slowly breaking apart due to outlying subjects being maltreated by their nobles and believing Celestia cannot secure them from threats such as those seen in canon. Then there's a coup attempt during which [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony are stolen]], and then- after Twilight begins to take a more active hand in dealing with international matters- two successive routine reconnaissance missions [[spoiler:pull Equestria into a war with Zebrica and retroactively invalidate the entire government of the griffon lands (to which the above malcontents were defecting)]].
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* InformedAbility: One of the story's few recurring criticisms is that [[BadassBookworm Twilight]], despite having supposedly expanded her magical knowledge even beyond that from canon and in fact pushed the boundaries of magical theory, is only briefly shown as such in-story by her channeling magic through her hooves at the beginning (only possible because she has unknowingly become an alicorn) and developing a new method for producing solidified magic (which is suppressed by Celestia in order not to cause upheaval, thanks to unpleasant past experience). Otherwise she seems to mostly react to others' feats and knowledge, frequently being blindsided by the techniques of both antagonists and supporting characters. Even one of her most awesome feats ([[spoiler:entrapping a volatile portal and preventing worldwide damage]]) is dependent on a shield spell which [[spoiler:Shining Armor]] had shared with her. The author has stated an intent to correct this in later arcs.
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* HealingFactor: All alicorns have it, but Luna's seems especially potent. [[spoiler:So much that she cuts off her own tongue after her and Celestia's tongues touches because she couldn't clean it off.]]
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** [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood does this to Foible Plinth (the mobster that made shoddy schools and orphanages). The whole trial lasts for five minutes, if that.]]
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-> ''''Luna:''' ''Twilight Sparkle, the Rites of Ascension are yours and yours alone to endure. Anypony else that tries will be ground to dust by the gears of fate.''

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* KangarooCourt: In the wake of the attack on Canterlot, [[spoiler:Shining Armor is subject to one by the Council and removed from command of the Guard, despite demonstrating that he and the Guard could not have been better prepared (and if anything the Council themselves were more to blame for the state of things)]].

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* KangarooCourt: In the wake of the attack on Canterlot, [[spoiler:Shining Shining Armor is subject to one by the Council and [[spoiler:and removed from command of the Guard, Guard]], despite demonstrating that he and the Guard could not have been better prepared (and if anything the Council themselves were more to blame for the state of things)]].things).



** Luna pulls this on Celestia after [[spoiler:Shining Armor is fired from command of the Royal Guard by inducting him as the leader of her Night Guard, to allow him to secretly continue investigating the conspiracies. Celestia had seen the attack on Shining coming and had been grooming him as a populist voice in the courts, which was central to most of her near future plans, but she didn't tell Luna because they always ended up butting heads over long-term strategy and she didn't tell Shining so he, and their enemies, would believe he was no longer a threat. Not only does Celestia's plan go up in smoke, but she worries that the relatively unsubtle Shining will be caught doing more than is strictly legal for the Night Guard, at which point Luna's crown and authority (and Celestia's own, if she steps in) would be pretty much fucked]]. Celestia's setup of all this also means that she played this trope on herself, but since Luna acknowledged Celestia might well have a plan but was tired of being left waiting in the dark, she really has no excuse.

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** Luna pulls this on Celestia after [[spoiler:Shining Armor is fired from command of the Royal Guard by inducting him as the leader of her Night Guard, to allow him to secretly continue investigating the conspiracies. Celestia had seen the attack on Shining coming and had been grooming him as a populist voice in the courts, which was central to most of her near future plans, but she didn't tell Luna because they always ended up butting heads over long-term strategy and she didn't tell Shining so he, and their enemies, would believe he was no longer a threat. Not only does Celestia's plan go up in smoke, but she worries that the relatively unsubtle Shining will be caught doing more than is strictly legal for the Night Guard, at which point Luna's crown and authority (and Celestia's own, if she steps in) would be pretty much fucked]].bucked]]. Celestia's setup of all this also means that she played this trope on herself, but since Luna acknowledged Celestia might well have a plan but was tired of being left waiting in the dark, she really has no excuse.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Luna pulls this on Celestia after [[spoiler:Shining Armor is fired from command of the Royal Guard by inducting him as the leader of her Night Guard, to allow him to secretly continue investigating the conspiracies. Celestia had seen the attack on Shining coming and had been grooming him as a populist voice in the courts, which was central to most of her near future plans, but she didn't tell Luna because they always ended up butting heads over long-term strategy and she didn't tell Shining so he, and their enemies, would believe he was no longer a threat. Not only does Celestia's plan go up in smoke, but she worries that the relatively unsubtle Shining will be caught doing more than is strictly legal for the Night Guard, at which point Luna's crown and authority (and Celestia's own, if she steps in) would be pretty much fucked]]. Celestia's setup of all this also means that she played this trope on herself, but since Luna acknowledged Celestia might well have a plan but was tired of being left waiting in the dark, she really has no excuse.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: NiceJobBreakingItHero:
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Luna pulls this on Celestia after [[spoiler:Shining Armor is fired from command of the Royal Guard by inducting him as the leader of her Night Guard, to allow him to secretly continue investigating the conspiracies. Celestia had seen the attack on Shining coming and had been grooming him as a populist voice in the courts, which was central to most of her near future plans, but she didn't tell Luna because they always ended up butting heads over long-term strategy and she didn't tell Shining so he, and their enemies, would believe he was no longer a threat. Not only does Celestia's plan go up in smoke, but she worries that the relatively unsubtle Shining will be caught doing more than is strictly legal for the Night Guard, at which point Luna's crown and authority (and Celestia's own, if she steps in) would be pretty much fucked]]. Celestia's setup of all this also means that she played this trope on herself, but since Luna acknowledged Celestia might well have a plan but was tired of being left waiting in the dark, she really has no excuse.excuse.
** Twilight thinks this of herself after her espionage mission [[spoiler:triggers a war between Zebrica, Saddle Arabia and Equestria]]. Considering things had been volatile for a while, and she stopped [[spoiler:a cult leader from wiping out the whole Zebrican continent and triggering worldwide damage]], no one else agrees.

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* KangarooCourt: In the wake of the attack on Canterlot, [[spoiler:Shining Armor is subject to one by the Council and removed from command of the Guard, despite demonstrating that he and the Guard could not have been better prepared (and if anything the Council themselves were more to blame for the state of things)]].



* KangarooCourt: In the wake of the attack on Canterlot, [[spoiler:Shining Armor is subject to one by the Council and removed from command of the Guard, despite demonstrating that he and the Guard could not have been better prepared (and if anything the Council themselves were more to blame for the state of things)]].
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* KangarooCourt: In the wake of the attack on Canterlot, [[spoiler:Shining Armor is subject to one by the Council and removed from command of the Guard, despite demonstrating that he and the Guard could not have been better prepared (and if anything the Council themselves were more to blame for the state of things)]].


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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Luna pulls this on Celestia after [[spoiler:Shining Armor is fired from command of the Royal Guard by inducting him as the leader of her Night Guard, to allow him to secretly continue investigating the conspiracies. Celestia had seen the attack on Shining coming and had been grooming him as a populist voice in the courts, which was central to most of her near future plans, but she didn't tell Luna because they always ended up butting heads over long-term strategy and she didn't tell Shining so he, and their enemies, would believe he was no longer a threat. Not only does Celestia's plan go up in smoke, but she worries that the relatively unsubtle Shining will be caught doing more than is strictly legal for the Night Guard, at which point Luna's crown and authority (and Celestia's own, if she steps in) would be pretty much fucked]]. Celestia's setup of all this also means that she played this trope on herself, but since Luna acknowledged Celestia might well have a plan but was tired of being left waiting in the dark, she really has no excuse.


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* TitleDrop: In Chapter 20:
-> ''''Luna:''' ''Twilight Sparkle, the Rites of Ascension are yours and yours alone to endure. Anypony else that tries will be ground to dust by the gears of fate.''
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* NebulousCriminalConspiracy: So nebulous that it's not even clear how many there actually are or how much they may or may not be connected. There's the well-hidden group of apparent corporations and nobles of which General Towers's coup attempt was an offshoot, referred to as the Robber Barons. There's the Equestrian Inner Council, each of whom has his/her own schemes and syndicates going (just one appears to be linked to [[spoiler:a Cloudsdale arms manufacturer, a Zebrican smuggling organization and a substandard housing developer]]) while working in concert to grab power from Princess Celestia, [[spoiler:at least one of whom is allegedly involved with the Robber Barons]]. Then there's the group of [[spoiler:illusionists who imprisoned and tortured Trixie]]. The myriad missions Twilight ends up on may or may not tie back to any of these.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: The Inner Council. [[spoiler: At least one of them is involved with the people behind General Towers]].

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* AmbiguouslyEvil: The Inner Council. [[spoiler: At least one of them is involved with the people behind General Towers]].Towers.]]



* AristocratsAreEvil: Celestia's been trying a long game to work against this, as part of being TheChessmaster.
* ArousedByTheirVoice: Cadence is apparently turned on by Shining's new and deeper voice.

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* AristocratsAreEvil: Celestia's Several nobles are contributing to the breakdown of Equestria by both overtaxing their own citizens and taking more power from Celestia, who in turn has been trying a long game to work against this, as part of being TheChessmaster.
* ArousedByTheirVoice: Cadence is apparently turned on by Shining's new and deeper voice.voice after [[spoiler:Luna inducts him into her Night Guard]].
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* {{Doorstopper}}: As of December 2015, the main story alone is over 300K words long- and WordOfGod is that it is not even halfway through the second of five projected books.
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* SheIsTheKing: The current King of Gryphonia is a gryphoness named Morvana.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Just before [[spoiler:banishing her to Ponyville]], Twilight calls her mother out on never being there for her and using her as a stepping stone for social climber, including making it perfectly clear she would rather have had Celestia as her mother.

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* CallingTheOldManOut: Just before [[spoiler:banishing her to Ponyville]], Twilight calls her mother out on never being there for her and using her as a stepping stone for social climber, climbing, including making it perfectly clear she would rather have had Celestia as her mother.

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* FantasticRacism and FantasticSlurs: The unicorn nobility tend to have this view towards earth ponies, thinking of them as "mud ponies". And at least one [[NoodleIncident assassination attempt]] involved an earth-pony supremacy outfit.

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* FantasticRacism and FantasticSlurs: FantasticRacism: The unicorn nobility tend to have this view towards earth ponies, thinking of them as "mud ponies"."[[FantasticSlurs mud ponies]]". And at least one [[NoodleIncident assassination attempt]] involved an earth-pony supremacy outfit.



* [[LostTechnology Lost Magic]]: Sums up what Discord did to the world. It's unknown to anypony but Celestia and Luna how much they lost, exactly.



* LostTechnology: Sums up what Discord did to the world. It's unknown to anypony but Celestia and Luna how much they lost, exactly.



* [[TheManBehindTheMan The Man In Front Of The Man]]: For all the terror he inspires and all the irrevocable damage he's done, Discord accidentally lets slip that he may answer to an even ''higher'' power.

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* [[TheManBehindTheMan The Man In Front Of The Man]]: TheManBehindTheMan: For all the terror he inspires and all the irrevocable damage he's done, Discord accidentally lets slip that he may answer to an even ''higher'' power.



* [[PersonOfMassDestruction Pony of Mass Destruction]]: The reason Princess Celestia doesn't get into big fights. She has only two settings: Off, and Nuke. See the page image? That's what's left of the army she fought[[note]](along with her command at the time, who [[HeroicSacrifice knowingly urged her to strike]])[[/note]]. That's not water, it's ''glass''.

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* [[PersonOfMassDestruction Pony of Mass Destruction]]: PersonOfMassDestruction : The reason Princess Celestia doesn't get into big fights. She has only two settings: Off, and Nuke. See the page image? That's what's left of the army she fought[[note]](along with her command at the time, who [[HeroicSacrifice knowingly urged her to strike]])[[/note]]. That's not water, it's ''glass''.



* [[YouKnowImBlackRight You Know I'm an Earth Pony, Right?]]: The reason why Celestia is unhappy with the term 'mud-pony'. Alicorns embody all three tribes. It's not really played for laughs either time that BerserkButton has been hit (aside from the audience laughing at an idiot getting her comeuppance).

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* [[YouKnowImBlackRight You Know I'm an Earth Pony, Right?]]: YouKnowImBlackRight: The reason why Celestia is unhappy with the term 'mud-pony'. Alicorns embody all three tribes. It's not really played for laughs either time that BerserkButton has been hit (aside from the audience laughing at an idiot getting her comeuppance).
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Just before [[spoiler:banishing her to Ponyville]], Twilight calls her mother out on never being there for her and using her as a stepping stone for social climber, including making it perfectly clear she would rather have had Celestia as her mother.
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* AppliedPhlebtonium: Solidified magic, used as a general fuel source for machines. It's also rather volatile[[spoiler: , as Applejack and Spike find out]].

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* AppliedPhlebtonium: AppliedPhlebotinum: Solidified magic, used as a general fuel source for machines. It's also rather volatile[[spoiler: , volatile[[spoiler:, as Applejack and Spike find out]].
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* AppliedPhlebtonium: Solidified magic, used as a general fuel source for machines. It's also rather volatile[[spoiler: , as Applejack and Spike find out]].
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** MeaningfulName: Bellerophon in GreekMythology captured and rode a pegasus. The one here? Captured and ridden by pegasi.

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** MeaningfulName: Bellerophon in GreekMythology Myth/GreekMythology captured and rode a pegasus. The one here? Captured and ridden by pegasi.
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''Rites of Ascension'' follows the adventures of Twilight Sparkle fifteen years after the events of the second season of Friendship is Magic, for the most part ignoring anything happening after [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 A Canterlot Wedding]]. The story chronicles her ascension to alicornhood and the political turmoil that surrounds her, from coup attempts to scheming aristocrats, to the fallout of millenia-old mistakes.

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''Rites of Ascension'' follows the adventures of Twilight Sparkle fifteen years after the events of the second season of Friendship is Magic, for the most part ignoring anything happening after [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 A Canterlot Wedding]]. The story chronicles her ascension to alicornhood and the political turmoil that surrounds her, from coup attempts to scheming aristocrats, to the fallout of millenia-old mistakes.

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* FantasticRacism: The unicorn nobility tend to have this view towards earth ponies, thinking of them as "mud ponies".

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* FantasticRacism: FantasticRacism and FantasticSlurs: The unicorn nobility tend to have this view towards earth ponies, thinking of them as "mud ponies".ponies". And at least one [[NoodleIncident assassination attempt]] involved an earth-pony supremacy outfit.



* PoweredArmor: Given to Twilight during the invasion, it normally looks like a simple torc, but activates into full-body armor with dozens of enchantments.

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* PoweredArmor: Given to Twilight during the invasion, it normally looks like a simple torc, but activates into full-body armor with dozens of enchantments. The princesses have their own versions.


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* YouFool: Twilight Sparkle in response to her mother squarely striking Princess Celestia's earlier-mentioned BerserkButton. 'You damn fool.' And a follow-up of 'Are you really that stupid?' Deserved, thoroughly.
* [[YouKnowImBlackRight You Know I'm an Earth Pony, Right?]]: The reason why Celestia is unhappy with the term 'mud-pony'. Alicorns embody all three tribes. It's not really played for laughs either time that BerserkButton has been hit (aside from the audience laughing at an idiot getting her comeuppance).

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